[Red Night]
00:04:245 (1,2,3,4) - Kinda odd you continue to use 0.80 SV for kick sliders. You can increase the SV imo.
00:15:045 (1,2) - Better to stack them, and have the jump from 2>3 instead of 1>2.
00:28:545 (2,3,4,5) - I would ctrl+g this rhythm. right now slider 5 is really awkward imo cuz its starting on a red tick, and ending when a stream is beginning xP.
00:39:945 (5,6) - Ctrl+G'ing them plays really well.
00:45:870 (5) - Sounds overmapped imo...
00:50:745 (5) - I would make this 2 circles instead of a slider, so players can hit a triplet on 00:50:895 - instead of slider-end >1/4 xP
00:51:945 (4,1) - Kinda expecting a jump here.
01:16:845 (1,2,3) - xPP This really doesn't play well imo because first of all the spacing is reduced from 1>2 kinda randomly, and the flow is very linear so its hard to snap.
01:17:145 (3,4) - Also, i wouldn't stack circles during jump sequences because it breaks momentum forcing players to freeze and wait on 3 to hit 4.
01:24:120 (8,9) - I don't hear 1/4's here xPP. How about making 7 a 1/2 slider instead?.
01:39:045 (1,2,3,4) - This rhythm works, but it's really simple and doesn't really reflect the drum beats very well here D:.
01:40:545 (5,1) - These should be part of one NC, 01:40:845 (2,1) - Another NC set, 01:41:145 (2,3) - Another NC set. Right now you have the NC on a red tick which is weird.
02:16:545 (4,1) - Expecting a jump here too D:.
02:18:195 (1,2,1,2,1,2,3) - Weird rhythm choice here... feels really odd because you aren't really following anything... i mean the instruments are playing a particular triplet rhythm here which you arent following so idk :S
02:33:795 (2,3,4) - What i mentioned about linear flow... It plays really awkwardly here because yea, its weird to snap to these really obtuse angles. go for something sharper because those jumps are more enjoyable. 02:34:395 (6,7,8) - same here.
03:12:045 (1) - I would remove 1 repeat and add a circle on the white tick. at 03:12:345 -
04:30:945 (4,1) - No jump here? a jump here would fit better than 3>4 imo.
04:43:845 (5,6) - 1/2 slider fits better imo, since music is slowing down.
04:44:295 (1,1) - They aren't stacked perfectly.
04:50:745 (3,4) - This is unnecessarily confusing xP.
04:58:845 (1,2) - This is actually 1/3 snapping, not 1/4 stuff xP. (technically its 1/6 with that early triplet, but you might want to use repeat sliders)
Good luck!