Hiya! m4m
[Red Night]
Good luck! o/
[Red Night]
- 00:05:445 (1,3) - This doesn't look all that good imo
- 00:06:945 (2,3) - I'd recommend making these the same shape
- 00:09:945 (8) - Looks kinda weird
- 00:34:545 (2,3) - Make sure the distance betwen these and 00:32:295 (3,4) - is the same (blanket wise)
- 00:37:845 (1) - Should be facing more towards 00:37:545 (5) - or the other way around imo
- 00:48:345 (5,6,7,8) - I think this stream should be a bit more curved
- 01:51:195 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - This stream could look way better
- 01:56:745 (2,3) - This isn't blanketed perfectly
- 02:15:345 (6,7,8,9) - Should be more curved again
- 02:18:195 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - Positioning changes of this looks very ugly
- 02:41:895 (3,1) - These overlap a little bit, avoid it
- 03:58:545 (3) - Looks kinda ugly
- 04:40:395 (4,5) - Tripple is not stacked in a straight direction but in a slight curve which makes it look bad
Good luck! o/