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- 00:19:545 (4,5) - How about making something to emphasize the strong notes? this could work for example: http://puu.sh/lbo8R/19da958faa.jpg
- 00:24:945 (3) - Why did you start using whistles here? Seems pretty random.
- 00:27:345 (3,4) - Stacking those both together on 3 would be nice. It works out pretty nicely with the rhythm and the flow (You'd need to reduce the spacing between 4 and 5 as well)
- 00:30:345 (3,4) - Why? Cmon, you clearly hear the nice vocals with the fact that 00:30:645 (4) - is overmapped. You should use this: http://puu.sh/lboib/917dee6a96.jpg
- 00:46:545 (3) - The stack on 00:46:245 (1) - is kinda boring and removes most of the emphasiztion the note has, try moving it to x362 y280, it's really nice there.
- 00:51:945 (4,1) - Kinda misleading and doesn't look that well tbh. You should emphasize the strong vocal in some different way.
- 01:14:295 (6) - CTRL+G creates a nice movement here.