This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Monday, February 11, 2013 at 9:52:24 PM

Artist: Vertical Horizon
Title: Everything You Want
Tags: alternative rock 90s
BPM: 93.93
Filesize: 19400kb
Play Time: 03:37
Difficulties Available:

1. Easy (1.73 stars, 187 notes)
2. Hard (4.81 stars, 419 notes)
3. Normal (3.31 stars, 264 notes)

Download: Vertical Horizon - Everything You Want
Download: Vertical Horizon - Everything You Want (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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My first beatmap submission for Pending in a loooong time. Took a while to make this too because of timing issues and multiple difficulties, but I love this song, so...
10/2: FINALLY got off my ass and replaced the audio with a smaller file, resnapped the notes and checked for proper placement, and also deleted the .osb file. Will check again soon to make suggested changes from earlier.
10/8: Made wmfchris's fix and adjusted a screwed-up slider length in Hard.
10/10: Made The 08 team_Bourdon's changes.
11/2: Improved the timing, fixed a symmetry issue in Easy, made Normal's difficulty settings a little easier, and made Charles445's recommended changes.
12/10: Made lepidopodus's changes, tweaked some sounds, and added stuff to shorten the last break by half.
1/1: Made changes suggested by Mok and IceBeam.
2/10: Made dkun's changes.
3/20: Made Neko_Ray's changes.
4/10: Made changes suggested by narakucrimson and OzzyOzrock.
8/31: Made karenying's changes.
10/7: Made most of artpiggo's changes.
3/5: Back from the dead! Let's get this ranked.
5/28: Made many changes suggested by gyt and replaced video with a better-quality one he found. Thanks!
6/18: Made some changes suggested by Doodley.
8/12: Made changes suggested by HanzeR.
11/17: After a looooong break, I redid the timing and addressed many critiques left by Lizsig, Leorda, & Gens. My quest to get this map ranked begins anew!
12/8: Made changes suggested by Static Noise Bird and TheVileOne.
1/12: Made some changes suggested by Nickname128.
1/14: Made some changes to Easy suggested by Natsu.
1/25: Made some changes suggested by Kodora and replaced everything in Hard due to new timing changing the spacing.
2/11: Added some tags and slightly changed the offset per ztrot's recommendations.

[osz File Scan!]
Empty .osb file detected, please remove and full submit.
You should probably remove the audio from the video to reduce filesize
320 bit rate mp3, please re-encode to a lower bitrate.

[General]
No Tags?

[Timing]
I'm not sure about the timing, dont know if it needs 4 red lines or not since i'm not good at multi-BPM
Why do you have so much kiai? X_X you should probably end the kiai section where the map ends.

[Hard]
01:01:483 - This break is too long.
01:20:646 (1) - This slider could use some more work, i dont like how the curve is barely a curve...
02:51:736 - This break is too long.

[Normal]
Didn't find anything here

[Easy]
00:21:240 (1) - No new combo?

[Overall]
Really amazing beatmap, they weren't kidding when they told me you are a very skilled mapper, you can have this star~

[hard]
1:22:598 (2) down 2 grids

I only find one spacing mistake and everything is fine. star~

Hi~
i only give some suggestion~

General
BPM:93.87
maybe better than 187.96??

Normal
01:20:683 (6) - this slider is ugly

Hard
01:18:449 (4) - right 1 grid?
01:18:768 (5) - ^
01:19:087 (6) - ^
01:19:406 (7) - ^
01:37:034 (5) - up 1 grid?
01:37:353 (6) - right 1 grid?
01:37:673 (7) - ^
01:37:992 (8) - ^
01:38:312 (1,2) - ^
01:56:835 (8,9) - right 1 grid?
01:57:794 (1) - ^
03:02:035 (8,9) - ^
03:02:995 (1) - ^
03:33:850 (8) - up 1 grid?

Nice song~
Star~~~~~~

This map is everything I want.

Normal:
I think the approach rate is too high for a Normal.
01:20:683: Remove this slider and put a spinner?
01:22:662: Finish KIAI here.

Hard:
Nice job.

Firo Prochainezo wrote:

This map is everything I want.

Normal:
I think the approach rate is too high for a Normal.
01:20:683: Remove this slider and put a spinner?
01:22:662: Finish KIAI here.

Hard:
Nice job.

If you like it, can you give it a star?

Sorry, forgot about that.

General
The timing is way off, but I can't find a good number for it.
The breaks are way too long.

Easy
01:15:895 New Combo?
02:07:056 ^^?
02:14:388 Remove New Combo
02:15:028 New Combo
02:16:629 Remove New Combo
02:17:270 New Combo
02:19:191 Remove New Combo
02:20:152 New Combo
03:12:267 ^^?

Normal
00:29:453 New Combo
01:35:437 Remove New Combo
01:35:916 New Combo

Hard
00:28:975 New Combo?
01:40:547 New Combo
01:50:768 ^^
02:11:208 ^^
02:11:847 Remove New Combo

Good luck!

Overall
- Delete .osb file and full-submit.

Easy
00:21:793 (1) - Remove new combo?
00:29:937 (4) - How about moving 2nd middle point of the slider some grids down, to make this more symmetric?

Normal
01:41:481 (4) - I just felt return point is somewhat strange to hear, how about something like a slider from 01:41:481 to 01:42:119 & a circle in 01:42:439 & a circle in 01:43:078?
02:26:240 (5) - How about moving a grid left?
02:31:033 (4,5,6) - ^

Hard
01:07:625 (4,5) - a grid up?
01:56:829 (8,9) - a grid right?
02:59:487 (8,9) - a grid left?
01:58:747 (4,5) - a grid up?
03:03:961 (4,5) - a grid down?

Kinda failed modding, I assume. Maybe I can find several issues with that 'move-1-or-2-grid-modding', but some mappers hate that...

Hiiiii :3

[Easy]
Why do not use Biggest Circle Size?
01:15:610 - Add a hitcircle with New Combo.
01:15:929 (1) - Remoe New combo if you do ^.

For the rest is okay for me. Good Job

[Easy]
01:07:945 (2) - 1 grid left to make it more symmetrical?
01:15:610 - Add a note?
01:34:294 (2) - Beginners may click too early,move it back to 01:34:135 / Add a note to 01:33:975.
02:06:742 - Sounds much better with this note.
03:11:951 - ^

[Normal]
As long you have another easier difficulty,you may improve your Normal,making it a little more interesting.I'd add next notes:
00:24:188 - Add a note?
00:24:668 - ^
01:43:397 - ^
01:46:431 - ^
02:38:873 - ^
02:41:430 - ^
02:44:147 - ^
02:45:585 - ^

Fine otherwise~

[Hard]
01:34:135 - Add a note here and move 01:34:294 (5) to 01:34:454?
02:14:898 - Add a note?
02:20:968 - ^

Nice map~
Star!

Star

Hey, an English map! o/

Hard
00:25:785 (6) - The slider isn't symmetrical, maybe it'd look better if you re-did it?
01:58:747 (4,5) - Are these two supposed to be a grid lower from 3?
02:46:703 (8) - What is this I don't even...

Normal
01:21:628 (6) - This slider could be constructed better.
02:22:406 (7) - I'd say move this one grid to the left to make it even along Y, but it'd mess up the prior combo. :/

Easy
Nothing to report.

Overall
I couldn't really find anything wrong with the map, and the Hard is pretty fun to play!
Have a star.

Everything seems fine to me. Only few nazi placing issues... I won't point them though. All I can do is leave a star.

aaaa... neko-mod! :3

Easy
01:39:405 (2): to 01:39:245
01:44:515 (2): to 01:44:355 - 01:44:994

Normal
02:19:850 (X): Circle ?
02:38:554 (1): If you change by Slider? (02:38:554 - 02:38:714)

its all, good song~

Hi~

[General]

1. I must say that at some points, the objects felt a little off in time. But it must be just my imagination lol~
2. Good, good. The mapping is very intuitive. I like it. Nothing to say here.

[Easy]

1. 24:348 (1) - I guess this could look more symmetrical:
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 29:937 (4) - I like how a finish sounds in the beginning of this Also, slider points can always be placed more symmetricaly an in a more tidy way. But oh well you're an Elite Mapper and the result is the same, so never mind xD
3. 01:06:667 (1) - Moving this one grid right would: 1) Make a perfect triangle with the two previous circles, 2) Make this symmetric on the y axis. Consider doing it.
4. 01:33:496 ~ The hitsounds seem a bit odd, or random at some places on this part (before the kiai. I'd use clap - whistle - clap - whistle most of the time, every 2 beats. Like, in (1), use a clap, then in (2), whistle in the beginning, and clap in the end. And just keep on going like that if you like this~
5. 02:09:301 (1) ~ I smell copy&paste here xD (Never mind this, just saying )

[Normal]

1. 02:00:986 (6) - :3?
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 03:06:199 (6) - ^ Heh

[Hard]

1. Good.

So have a star.

[Easy]
Hmm, copy pasting is generally looked down upon but it's fine.

If anything at least rotate the copy pasted parts to make it different.
[Normal]
Same as above.

Also, when making an arc-like slider, use five points rather than four. It looks better.
[Hard]
I see that here you copy pasted, but flipped horizontally. Heh.

Well, it's all fine. Starred.

Hi

Easy
01:36:690 (2) - I suggest remove whistle(end of slider
02:11:859 (1) - ^
03:37:359 (1) - start at 03:37:518 ?

Normal
02:21:448 (6) - New combo?

fine
don't kud

Hard
To tell you the truth, I think 20 second-long break is too much (for players who don't download video.) i don't know.
01:03:154 (8,9) - move left a little bit. I think
01:54:270 (8,9) - (right)
02:08:021 (8) - becuz at 02:08:661 (1) - use finish, so remove clap to reduce sound volume overload.
02:08:021 (8,9,10) - slope pattern (from left to right) is require here cuz the rhythm goes tense to the next combo.
02:39:353 (2) - don't think it should be straight slider here, maybe add some curve like (1) since the rhythm in this part goes very simple.
03:02:044 (8,9) - move left a little bit. I think
03:19:302 (1,2,3) - zigzag pattern here, it will make players get relaxed since they just pass line-up stream.

normal
add note at 00:24:668 (2) - since it has vocal, if there isn't this note, players may get confuse to click since there is vocal but no note to click. and put this note to same position as (3).
00:37:763 (3) - don't think straight-up slider is fit. since the sound used and rhythm goes soft here.
00:39:679 (5) - add some curve in it, same reason^
00:41:116 (1,2,3) - I think these three should arrange in goes-down pattern (but not straight just a little zigzag) since the rhythm goes a bit tense here.
01:03:473 (5) - try to move this to the same place as 01:04:112 (1) - since it's first kiai that makes me want to stop and listen what to listen next.
01:06:028 (5,1) - ^
01:36:690 (3) - add some curve
03:29:529 (4) - move it to same position as 03:29:848 (5)

easy
fine.

(lol thing) I think that you wanna map to be correspond with the name of artist, but I think you can map "Everything You Want".
or maybe this is the way you want to map most. i don't know.

8/10

You requested in my queue but I cant seem to find anything. :I
Its well mapped in my opinion.
Sorry I couldnt help ;/
But try to find a better quality video.

hi~

No tags? Consider adding the name of the album.

Timing
+10 to your second offset… try it and tell me what you think, I’m not really good at timing so maybe you should ask someone pro at timing to give it a look.

Hard
Found an unsnapped object… resnap all notes please..

Easy
01:49:306 (2,3,4) - Kinda hard to catch for newbies because you change from white tick to red tick, maybe if you use a slider for that transition would be easier to read, what about starting a slider at 01:48:827 till 01:49:306?
03:18:183 (1) - why not do this : 03:20:900 (1,2,3) - ? feels better while playing.

That’s all for now.

Hello.

Video is really bad and with sound. I tried to find a better one. If you will use it, set video offset to 11000 (or something around this).

[Hard]
01:10:500 (5) - remove claps - these double sounds aren't good for me.
02:01:626 (5) - ^
02:28:477 (4) - ^
03:06:838 (5) - ^
fun diff. It was a bit hard for me in the past, but now I really like it.

[Normal]
01:43:078 (5,1,2,3) - a bit tricky for normal, imo - maybe remove 01:43:397 (1)? - it's nicer after 01:32:857 (1,2,3) and 01:36:690 (3,1,2) - or remove stack at 01:41:481 (4,5) http://puu.sh/wX2E
03:29:209 (3,4) - not stack this too? http://puu.sh/wXiE

[Easy]
00:35:048 (2) - move to 00:34:888? (follow lyrics better)
01:33:496-01:52:020 - strange 1/1 mapping after 00:21:314-00:41:755 part, which is harder and follow lyrics. I think, you need to change something.
01:39:564 - add circle?
01:40:522 (1,2,3) - make it like 00:28:979 (2,3,4) or 02:45:745 (1,2,3)?
01:49:306 (2,3,4) - sudden red circles, especially if you don't change ^ (so if you don't want to add some red circles earlier, i suggest to replace this with repeat slider like Lizbeth said)
02:21:448 (3) - maybe remove one repeat and add a circle at 02:23:365?
02:38:714 (1) - remove this circle? (it's a bit fast after spinner for easy).
03:24:096 (3) - maybe remove one repeat and add a circle at 03:26:013?
03:27:292 (2,3,4) - remove claps?

Well, I hope you rank this. Good luck!

Modding as per request. All of these are suggestions unless otherwise noted, so you can change whatever you'd like.

• General

Try to avoid linear placement patterns with your notes, especially with streams. They're not very fun. Same goes for some of your straight sliders. (This is personal preference.)
Consider using combo colors. (Although your colors are a bit limited with the background, custom combo colors can be fun and I recommend it with everyone)
03:25:374 - This seems like a weird section to have a kaia fountain. Perhaps it would work better at 03:18:982 ?

Hard
I particularly like how the sections in kaia are mapped in this difficulty.
03:19:941 (4,5,6) - This pattern plays a little awkwardly. Perhaps copy 03:19:302 (1,2,3) and paste it here, and then flip it vertically?

Normal
00:35:367 (3) - Avoid repeating sliders over two. I suggest this timing pattern:

01:40:203 (1,2) - Don't stack these, maybe?
02:21:448 (1,2,3) - Don't stack these as well. They're particularly far apart on the timeline and play somewhat oddly.
02:57:889 - 03:13:869 and 01:01:557 - 01:22:637 - Sort of a weird comment here, but it's very easy to tell these are copied and mirrored sections, possibly because they're linear. Something went off in my mind when testing that said "oh, these are the same sections but mirrored." Could you change up the patterns a bit?
03:35:601 - Avoid repeating sliders over two...

Easy
02:38:714 - This might be too close to the spinner? Maybe?

Nothing unrankable or anything that particularly stands out as bad, but you really should avoid linear patterns. I mean, it's personal preference. But, overall, it looks fine. Just try to mix things up.

here my mod T_T

Normal
CS4 its ok but i suggest to CS3

all nothing LOL

We're coming up on this map's second anniversary. Can any MATs or BATs please take a look at this one?

Behonkiss wrote:

We're coming up on this map's second anniversary. Can any MATs or BATs please take a look at this one?

It really deserves it , cool map and I love the song. You dont see this style very much anymore

[Hard]
Disable countdown (across all diffs). It doesn't really fit in this map IMO.

Drain 7 might be a little harsh on this map.
Nazi changes - because I have too much time

00:25:785 (6) - move the endpoint to x400 y56

00:28:979 (5) - move the endpoint to x168 y80, then stack 00:29:458 (6) -

00:29:937 (7) - copy 00:25:785 (6), snap to spacing and ctrl+r

00:37:763 (3) - Make like this - http://puu.sh/QVmV you will need to reposition rest of the combo

00:40:158 (8) - should make this parallel with 4

01:13:694 (9) - move the endpoint to x232 y 40

01:44:515 (5) - You can make this look prettier like this http://puu.sh/QVq9

01:49:944 (6) - like this http://puu.sh/QVrs

02:04:823 (9) - copy 01:13:694 (9)

02:16:016 (7) - This looks prettier http://puu.sh/QVuj

Anyways, I'm sure you know what I'm getting at Since you reuse a lot of sliders just find the ones that dont look quite right and change them up a bit.

[Normal]
Looks great !
02:00:986 (6) - a little ugly

[Easy]
No changes that I can see.


Really fun, hopefully it gets some attention sooner rather than later

Hi ~ from M4M queue

Your Mod
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[General]

[Easy]

[Normal]



[Hard]

sorry,short mod.

[Timing]

1. Timing... for the most part is okay, but there's a few bits here and there [01:32:857] that sound off. I don't consider myself a timing expert, specially with multiple timing sections, so I probably wouldn't be of any help. Have you gotten someone to help you with it? From what I get, this map could use tons of new sections, but some timers prefer to keep it simple like this. I don't know if that's the case here.
2. ...are you sure the BPM should be that high? Halved should work much better. You can use half BPM and double slider velocity and it should work the same. If there isn't a good reason for it, having the BPM like this would be unrankable, I'd say.
3. For good measure, the first offset should start at 873.
4. The downbeat at 01:53:311 should be... there. In case the other section is unavoidable, add another red section there to keep the downbeat in its right place.

[Hard]
00:28:820 (4,5,6) - This part right here... doesn't stack well at all. I'd suggest using another pattern, or doing manual stacking (which is a bit more complicated).
00:33:451 (5,1) - I'd avoid this little bit of overlapping if possible. Everything else is so neatly placed it looks a bit out of place.

This map... is strangely fun. It has a very classic feeling to it, and even though there's those streams, it doesn't feel very overmapped; in fact, it makes the map more charming and memorable. Good job.

[Comment]
Speaking about it generally... the map isn't bad at all. You got most structure and timeline placement down, really loved how you used the sliders overall. You should work on your slider shapes - using more points in long sliders is best - and your patterns now; to give the map more creativity.

Well... then again, this map is 2 years old, so it probably isn't a good measure of recent mapping skills.

Well, I only took a look at Hard for now. Going to take a look at other difficulties and stuff later!

Hiiii

[Easy]
01:49:306 (2) - Remove clap at repeating slider. It's noisy
02:32:630 (1) - New combo for this spinenr? Is this intentional or something?
03:37:518 (1) - ^


[Normal]
01:09:861 (6) - New combo?
01:20:720 (6) - ^
01:46:910 (3) - Move 1 grid left for centered the pattern from (1) and (2)? (nazi)
02:00:986 (6) - New combo?
02:11:859 (6) - ^
02:22:406 (3) - This slider doesn't looks symmetric, make it symmetric?
03:06:199 (6) - New combo?


[Hard]
00:28:820 (4,5) - Not stack correctly with head slider (look at test mode). It could be having a bad pattern while gameplay
03:14:508 (3) - Move 1 grid left for centered the pattern from (1) and (2)? (nazi)


Good luck....

Silly me, I should have build further on my last comment - I promised myself I wouldn't be vague with my mods anymore.

So, on slider shapes... I said more points equals good, right? You can take a look at this to see more or less what I mean. In the case of this beatmap, notice how you do "bad" shapes a lot:



To make the beatmap look nicer, I suggest you try to make the following sliders more smooth.

00:25:785 (6)
00:29:937 (7)
00:33:451 (5) - This could be a perfect blanket. Disable grid snapping if you have to.
02:26:240 (7)
02:31:672 (6)
02:43:667 (2,3)
03:21:539 (5,7) - These sliders should be more round, fitting the circles better.
03:24:735 (6)

Some of these don't involve adding more anchor points, but rather, centering the one already in use:



Also, it doesn't exactly affect the slider shape, but it's a good habit to end the slider where the last anchor point is (notice where I placed the last anchor point):



That way, reverse slider doesn't get all messed up, and it's easier to get the shape you want.

On the point of creativity... I felt like in some parts of the beatmap you were just "freestyling" instead of thinking the patterns beforehand. This isn't exactly bad, but it'd be better if some structures were more solid.

For example:
http://puu.sh/YKGJ - This pattern... doesn't feel like it's going anywhere. There's no symmetry or anything, it doesn't feel solid.
http://puu.sh/YKH8 - If it were something like this though, it'd feel better. At least the beats are making a pretty shape up there.

On this aspect, I can't exactly tell you what patterns to change or how to change them, since I would be transforming this in my map. If you did change some patterns around, I'd suggest these (these are the ones who struck me as most "out of place"):

00:21:793 (1,2,3,4,5)
01:32:857 (1,2,3,4,5,6)
01:45:633 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9)
01:50:743 (1,2,3)
02:14:099 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7)
02:24:323 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7)

Keep in mind this doesn't involve deleting the whole pattern and redoing everything again, just placing the beats with a little more sense would be okay.
In any case, I'd understand if you didn't want to change any pattern; in that case, just keep it in mind for future maps. It can greatly increase the quality of them.

There is one more point I want to bring... the little streams can look a little bit better. Now that we have the "Convert Slider to Stream" tool, it should be a cinch to make these streams more "round".

02:23:365 (1,2,3,4,5)
03:33:524 (6,7,8,9,10,11)

So, I guess that's it. It might look like a lot of work to do, but it's not that much. I haven't looked at Easy and Normal yet, so you could check them yourself to see if they have any of the things I pointed out above. In any case, I believe fixing the Hard difficulty is most important than fixing Easy or Normal.
Don't kudosu this post.

Took me forever, but I finally went and addressed most of the critiques people have left since the last update, as well as halved the timing and doubled the slider speeds to keep them the same as they were before. Time for another round of modding, methinks.

I can feel that this is 2 years old yeah. It's not a bad thing IMO, though.

[Easy]
00:29:939 (4) - Could be symmetrical and blanket the next circle better
00:37:765 (3) - Balance curve to center
00:39:682 (4,5) - Sudden turn, looks uncomfortable
01:20:729 (1) - Long straight line, please make something interesting here
01:36:701 (3) - Straight line again, more interesting things please
01:41:493 (3) - Make better curve with 2 sliderpoints
02:11:839 (1) - Straight line, make interesting stuffs
02:15:058 (1) - ^
02:17:294 (1) - ^
02:39:353 (2) - Try 2 points again
02:46:703 (3) - ^

[Normal]
00:25:785 (6) - Move the sliderpoint a bit left and down
00:35:367 (3) - Make slighter turn and more round
00:37:763 (3) - 2 sliderpoints and bigger curve please
01:01:557 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - Entire section of straight lines, rather boring
01:16:568 (6) - More round
01:44:515 (4) - Make it blanket the previous circle better
01:52:672 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - Lines
02:00:986 (6) - The slider on previous Kiai is better, copypaste please
02:07:702 (6) - More round
02:26:240 (5) - Balance the curve, maybe use two points again
02:57:889 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - Lines
03:12:910 (6) - More round
03:17:065 (6) - ^ (+ use two points)

[Hard]
00:25:785 (6) - More round (use two points)
00:29:937 (7) - ^
01:13:694 (9) - Make slighter or use two points to make prettier
01:21:519 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - I kinda want to make you keep these lines to bring back the old maps, but you may fix these too
01:34:773 (6) - Line, add interesting stuff
02:17:294 (1) - Move 2 or 3 squares right (grid lvl 4)
02:18:572 (5) - Make the curves more round (use four points)
02:31:672 (6) - Make prettier
02:43:667 (2,3) - Balance on center, and maybe use two points again
02:46:703 (8) - Make the curves more round again
03:22:178 (7) - Blanket the circle better
03:24:735 (6) - Make slighter

I'd like to see this ranked soon. /me hides

My mod

This song brings me back. I love it!

Easy

Unsnapped notes
Check your green lines, some of them are unsnapped.

00:35:369 (3) - It would be nice if you made the points in this slider more even. The curve is a little bit off. also perhaps it would be better if you made it flush or almost flush with 1,2.
00:37:765 (3) - I'm not sure about this. It doesn't look as clean as it could be. http://puu.sh/1sQjz Although my example doesn't perfectly line up with the notes after it, but it's an example that you could work with as you want. I think the positioning works with my pattern actually.
01:04:119 (1) - Move the center point up and right 1 unit?
01:10:827 (3) - Remove clap.
01:33:986 (2,3) - Slanted transition would be better if you could get it to work.
01:41:493 (3) - Finish sounds out of place. Replace with whistle?
01:51:395 (2) - Could you make this slider better? Maybe curve in the other direction as well as a small touchup to the curve. http://puu.sh/1sQFm
01:55:228 (1) - Same as 1:04?
02:01:937 (3) - Remove clap
02:27:838 (2) - Up and left 1 unit? It looks weird where it in comparison to 1. seems like it should be slightly higher.
02:38:714 (1) - Clap
02:46:703 (3) - Isn't as clean as it could be. http://puu.sh/1sQOJ
03:00:446 (1) - Same as 1:04
03:07:157 (3) - Remove clap.

Normal
Same snapping issues as Easy. Green lines too.

00:25:785 (6) - end of this looks flat. Maybe add a couple more slider points.
00:31:534 (5,1) - This is awkward without a note on that red tick. I suggest adding one.
00:35:367 (3) - Slider needs to be better. Use symmetry. also perhaps add a hitsound on it somewhere.
00:37:124 (1) - Move left 1 unit.
00:39:679 (5) - You should line this up better with 4. It can even be lined up with the large slider. http://puu.sh/1sR4X Make sure you keep the combo after in mind too. Reposition it to also go with the new angles.
01:34:294 (5) - Curve looks slightly flat. Maybe move the center point more to the right?
01:41:481 (4) - Lowering the end would look better.
01:49:306 (3) - Remove whistle from the repeat?

Hard

Same snapping issues

00:27:702 (3,4,5) - Stacking improperly. Manual stack
00:38:880 (4,5,6,7,8) - Move down 1 unit.
01:33:176 - Note here?
01:34:773 (7,1) - Plays a lot better if the slider were reduced to the long white tick and a note replaced its end.
02:07:702 (7,8,9,10) - Spacing is weird here. Make it consistent.
02:23:365 (1,2,3) - Spacing.
02:31:672 (6) - Reduce the curve some?
02:42:549 (9) - Maybe add whistle to the end?


General

I'm a major old school fan. I love your style of mapping. There's just not that many linear mappers anymore. There were flaws of course, but those flaws brought back nostalgia, so please for the sake of nostalgia, don't consider remapping these maps. It's really good.

Easy

Well,fine

Normal

00:27:223 add a cirlce
01:09:541 add a circle
02:00:666 ^
03:05:879 ^

Hard

00:37:603 add a circle
01:10:500 delete slider and do this http://puu.sh/1MZP0
02:01:626 ^
03:06:838 ^

General:


Easy:


Hard:


Normal was good nice wirk that are just suggestions

Another round of mods done. Would anyone be willing to look at this for a potential bubble?

oh great

[General]
Maybe i mistakes, but i feel offset wrong in some parts. Please, recheck timing.
Alternative rock, post-grunge - add to tags

[Easy]
00:37:124 (1,2) - sure about claps? And maybe add more space?
01:06:667 (1) - maybe bend this slider a little? because in next part it looks like annoying copypasta /me runs
01:33:495 (1,2,3) - confusing spacing for beginners imo :\ Maybe remake this part?
01:48:826 (1) - add clap
02:11:859 (1) - dont like long sliders like this :\ Maybe spinner here?
03:06:838 (2,3,4) - copypasta third time :\ Maybe remake?

[Normal]
Very strange first and third breaks :S

00:28:979 (5) - new combo begins here?

[Hard]

again this first third breaks
AR+1 maybe?

00:23:230 (5) - bend this slider?
00:24:348 (2) - ^
00:28:820 (4) - unstack? maybe something like this?
00:28:820 (4,5,6,7) - claps?
01:21:518 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - looks annoying :\ Maybe place it in other way?
01:42:917 (5,6) - add claps?
01:50:742 (1,2,3) - ^
01:50:742 (1,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - place in other way too?
03:33:524 (6,7,8,9,10,11) - ^

Star! I miss old mapset like this <3
Good luck with rank!

Bumping again. Can a MAT or BAT take a few minutes to look at this? I've been working on it for literally years, I've put dozens of mods and kudosu stars into it, and my patience is running thin.

Bumping again. Can someone please look at this?

your pms have been heard I'm on the case will reply and update this post with a mod in a bit.

[Overall]
I have no idea why no one has bothered to tell you to add some tags because there aren't any.

The timing seems fine but I do more than often hit about 7ms early if you know how to change all the offsets at once I would suggest doing that in the timing panel you canCtrl click multi timing sections to move them by a ms value other than being simplistic this map is fine get this stuff taken care of and I will start you on your way.

Edit: shazam!

ztrot wrote:

I have no idea why no one has bothered to tell you to add some tags because there aren't any.

I already told about it, and about timing too.
Anyway, waiting for rank it. Good luck!

Great song, great map.
Ranked!

ps I'm silly.

he's everything you wanttttttt
he's everything you neeeeeeed

you
are
amazing

congrats on the ranked map!

Finally! Congratz, Behon! <3

Holy crap Behonkiss

Old School! <3333333333
Congratz man!

You have some perseverance there. ^^