Yo [nuff said]
Normal00:08:264 (1) - maybe new combo here?
01:19:490 (3) - i'm not sure but maybe you can change this slider to smth like this
with whistle hitsound on the beginning of the slider, clap on the ending with reverse arrow, and finnish on the folowing note, but your slider is good too
02:43:103 - 03:00:135 - how about kiai here?
03:12:136 (4,1) - better make a double here, and why 03:12:522 (1) is new combo?
03:41:942 (1) - why new combo? 03:43:490 (1) - same
03:46:587 (1) - and why here new combo, better make all three notes one combo, or every single note a new combo
good diff btw
Advanced00:08:264 (2) - better make new combo
01:21:039 (1) - maybe remove new combo? and can you please explain such selection of new combos, because maybe i'm noob and understand nothing
01:31:877 (1) - same, remove new combo
01:54:909 (8,1,2,3) - looks a little bit strange, maybe you should move 01:54:909 (8) and 01:55:684 (2) to the beginning of the folowing sliders
02:43:103 - 03:00:135 - how about kiai here?
03:12:522 (1) - why new combo?
03:43:490 (1) - same
03:45:039 (1,2,1) - same as i wrote on normal diff, now i see that this is done on purpose, but still...
also maybe ar6 will fit better instead of 6.5?
great diff though, the flow is reaaly well mapped
Hard00:02:071 (1) - unnecessary new combo, better start with folowing note
00:04:974 (3) - new combo here
00:08:264 (2) - new combo here
00:20:458 (5) - new combo here, not on slider
00:22:006 (5) - same 00:25:103 (6,7,1) - same
00:36:135 (1) - maybe move this note to (x:452,y:152) so the 00:36:135 (1,2,3) triangle will be more equilateral
actually i hear triples here 00:35:168 and here 00:35:942 but you map folowing the voice, so its fine
00:37:684 (1) - remove new combo
00:51:619 (1) - same, i'm not a picky person, and this doesnt look ugly or smth, i just dont understand the idea of making combos of 3 notes instead of atleast 5
01:05:555 (1) - unnecessary new combo 01:07:103 (1) - same
01:19:877 (3,1,2) - all sliders one combo would be better
01:25:684 - 01:26:845 - how about spinner here with clap hitsound?
01:31:877 (1) - unnecessary new combo
01:34:006 (2) - not good flow, maybe move it to the end of previous slider?
01:37:877 (4) - same, maybe move it to the left a bit
01:40:974 (5) - new combo here
01:42:522 (5) - same 01:45:619 (6) - same
01:54:909 (4,1,2) - this and this 01:55:684 (3,1,2) - is too hard, better place 01:54:909 (4) and 01:55:684 (3) more closely to doubles *
01:56:458 (3) - new combo here and make 01:56:458 (3,1) a double on the spot where 01:56:651 (1) is placed *
01:58:200 (1) - remove new combo
02:12:135 (1) - same 02:26:071 (1) - same 02:27:619 (1) - same 02:43:103 (1) - same
02:43:103 - 03:00:135 - kiai?
02:59:942 (4) - new combo here
03:09:426 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - this needs to be changed like i said on lines with *
03:24:910 (1) - remove new combo
03:40:393 (1) - same
03:41:748 (5) - new combo here
03:45:039 (2) - new combo or smth as i told above also maybe you should increase space between rhese three notes 03:45:039 (2,3,1)
but still good job
Catharsis00:08:264 (2) - new combo here, also i see that 00:06:716 (1,2,1) is not at the same spot but how about increasing space between them, fe like this
00:25:297 (1) - remove new combo
00:50:071 (1) - same 00:55:877 (1) - same 01:05:555 (1) - same
01:06:910 (7) - start new combo here
01:21:039 (1) - remove new combo
01:25:684 - 01:26:845 - how about spinner here with clap hitsound?
01:31:877 (1) - remove new combo 01:45:813 (1) - same
01:55:684 (1,1,2) - make one combo 01:56:458 (1,1,2,3) - same
02:10:587 (1) - remove new combo 02:16:393 (1) - same 02:26:071 (1) - same
02:27:426 (7) - new combo here
02:41:555 (1) - remove new combo
02:43:103 - 03:00:135 - how about kiai?
02:46:200 (1) - remove new combo 02:59:748 (1) - same
03:10:007 (1,1,2) - make one combo 03:10:781 (1,1,2,3) - same
03:21:813 (1) - remove new combo 03:24:910 (1) - same 03:40:394 (1) - same
03:41:749 (7) - start new combo here and remove here 03:43:103 (1)
03:45:039 (2,3,1) - all notes one combo or, every single new combo
03:47:942 - maybe end spinner here?
in general have mercy and low hp drain to 6.5, but you can increase ar to 9
really nice diff btw
storyboard is great too
good luck and peace