Thanks Alacat :3~ fixed
Riven wrote:
Hi, M4M from your queue.
00:01:877 (2,3) - This flows poorly, the transition from 2 to 3 is harsh considering the pattern before it. Moving 00:02:052 (3) - down seems to play better. (00:02:313 (4,5) - will need some readjustments if you do change 00:02:052 (3) - ) its a lineal pattern, idk why you think it flow poorly, since when playing you just move you cursor in a liner way.
00:12:865 (1) - Piano notes come in here, I suggest you space out those 00:12:691 (5,1) - just like you have done here 00:04:319 (5,1) - I'll think about this, keeped for now, sicne I can't figure how to make this work and keep a cool pattern
00:43:738 (2) - The kick drums come in here, and many sliders along this part end with a very strong beat. I realize that that you are mapping to the vocals mostly, however, I tried changing your slider starts to where the strong beat is, and it feels a lot better to play. It's actually possible with a lot effort you can achieve mapping to the vocals while starting the sliders on the strong beats. No, you can't map both vocals and drums, well basically yes, but that will end in you mapping alot of random, 1/2 circles that will make the game play confused, also I love map to vocals that's why I do mapping xD, so yeah basically I prefer to keep this like it is, and yes not changing them under any case, cuz it will break my mapping logic orz
00:46:877 (3) - I'm just pointing out the sliders that end on a strong beat so you don't have to look for them if you decide to change it.
00:47:575 (6) - This.
00:47:924 (7) - This.
00:53:156 (1) - This.
00:53:505 (2) - This.
01:19:668 (5) - The movement the player has to make from (5) to (6) is actually very steep, since the slidertail is so small, almost no one will follow that slider to the end, and it might cause some sliderbreaks or 100s. yeah, you don't need to end the sliders to the end to do a 300 hit, if you actually test the map you will notice that there is no way to break combo or hit 100 there, that's how sliders works
01:32:401 (3) - I am personally fine with this kind of slider, but it could cause some confusion among players because of its movement, especially if you're playing it for the first time. shape is really clear, I don't know what you find confused about this
02:54:203 (3) - Some of your sliders in the kiai time also end in strong beats. It's very few though, you could keep it. I did explain those in previous mod
02:56:296 (4) - Likewise. cause of vocals
03:34:842 (1) - Because the slider is very short, it could confuse and make movement harsh. Unlike 03:36:412 (1) - this. This is fine. both are fine, already did use them in other maps, even in a normal diff, also already test them by myself and I personally don't find issue with it
03:43:912 (2) - Please do change this. why?
The rest is fine, I didn't find anything else to point out.
sorry for deny alot, but actually the slider shapes are all fine, there are any issue with them orz, and slider ending on drums is on purpose, since I'm basically mapping only to the vocals like I do in all my maps, changing one will mean changing everything in the map (remap)
Good luck with ranking!
Leader wrote:
Hello
[Alice]Really impressed by this map, awesome flow and fun to play too, good luck!
- You should try finding a new diff name, maybe looking for an adjective/noun that ressembles or describes the character would be better than using the name of the character itself mmm ya tbh I feel it weird as well, I did change to something else
- 00:02:052 (3,4) - I'd reduce the spacing between these two sliders in order to make the 1/4 distance more clear for everyone, it comes a bit too sudden as it is now ya other people did point this as well, did overlap them a bit
- 00:39:203 (7) - It's technically fine, but the clap on the slider's tail sounds a bit too loud for my ears... did reduce volume a bit
- 01:04:668 (4,5) - The whole pattern would play definitely better if you don't stack these two notes. As it is now, the stack actually ruins the nice flow that these two triplets produce fixed
- 01:06:412 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - By looking at the whole map, I would totally stack this kind of pattern in order to make the map look more structured and cleaner (there are a few others, don't forget to fix them as well if you are going to accept my suggestion) yeah, but still want to keep this, since those rotate triangles do a kind of fun movement when playing, keeping this one for now
- 01:24:203 (2,3,4,5) - Althought the pattern plays totally fine, I'd prefer to see simple curved sliders, would flow and look better as the song is calm and paced ya you are the second person who told me this, so I did them curved instead
- 01:36:935 (2) - This could be better if the slider is inclined by 90° compared to the previous one sure
- 02:23:156 (2) - How about moving this a bit up? Better flow there k
- 02:32:575 (4,5) - Same as 01:04:668 (4,5) - yup
- 03:53:331 (5) - Aw man, this slider looks a bit too crumpled ah I did move and add some control point hope is better now
- 04:10:424 (3,4) - You could also fix these as I pointed out in the first suggestion ya
- 04:25:249 (1,2,3,4) - Such a lazy pattern, it could be emphasized much better as the voice is going to be shriller... mmm keeped for now, I think its fine, but if I think in a better pattern I'll do for sure
- 04:44:087 (4) - Not so relevant, but that's not perfectly stacked to the stream! done
- 04:50:889 (2) - I wouldn't incline this, just a simple mirrored version of the previous slider would be better I'll keep this too, I think is kind of funny when playing
aww it's already bubbled XD, and I think will take really long to get modders for mania :L. maybe in another of my maps, but thanks for offering <3Marirose wrote:
omg its this song!! would u mind me join as mania guest natsu san XD??
lol all right bro,i really love this song ,it was my first time hear it half 1 year ago,i nevery forget dat epic arrange and vocal wwwNatsu wrote:
aww it's already bubbled XD, and I think will take really long to get modders for mania :L. maybe in another of my maps, but thanks for offering <3Marirose wrote:
omg its this song!! would u mind me join as mania guest natsu san XD??
lol grats baka natsu10nya wrote:
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wew thanks again for mp3 10gatos10nya wrote:
lol grats baka natsu10nya wrote:
credit mp3 to tennya thanks REAL