Sorry I took so long to get to this. >>
As per your request:
[General]
Half of the MP3 is unused. Consider cropping it.
That roar sound kind of cuts out abruptly. Maybe try to fade it out a bit?
[Blangonga Training]
Kinda hard for the easiest of the set, but oh well. Works well as a normal.
In general, there were a few slight uglies about such as:
00:42:689 (1) - Just looks kinda of bad. Maybe try to line up the end points?
00:57:466 (1,2) - The way these are aligned looks a bit off. Maybe have 2 lined up directly under the 1 or make it more obvious that you weren't trying for that sort of alignment by moving it a bit further left?
01:04:631 (2) - Try to make this more symmetrical?
01:27:916 (3,4) - Same thing as 00:57:466 (1,2)
[The Ruler of the Snow]
00:15:374 (2,3) - This jump intentional?
00:44:480 (1) - Kinda ugly, and is' kind of covering up the 3 later. Maybe move the 3 or readjust this slider a bit.
00:53:884 (2) - Move down one grid (level 3) or raise 3 up one grid (level 2)
01:04:631 (2,3,4) - Align these three up please.
01:15:154 (1) - Raise up a grid to reduce overlap?
01:22:991 (4,5,6,1) - Even out the spacing amongst these.
[Two Roars in the Snow]
00:03:731 (6) - May as well stack this under the 4.
00:28:360 (1) - That last bump at the end of this slider kinds odd.
00:31:942 (1,2,3) - These look kinda weird too with the very slight tilde. Make it a bit more pronounced.
00:45:600 (2,3,4,1,2,3) - Maybe space these like 00:46:943 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - these?
01:04:631 (3,4) - Maybe reform 4 so it doesn't slightly overlap on the 3?
01:06:870 (7) - Same with the 6?
And there you go. Mostly just complaints about slider neatness. :P
