Mako Sakata wrote:
[General][Easy]
- I think you need another diff to fill the gap on N->H. It doesn't right while Hard have complex 1/4 rhythm and Normal just plain 1/1 and 1/2 rhythm, furthermore the SV diffrent kinda too big imo. So maybe you should reconsider that
- normal-hitwhistle.wav is inaudible because below 100ms as stated on RC http://puu.sh/jwm8Z/7b2748d47a.png
[Normal]
- 00:01:931 - How about http://puu.sh/jwhHH/8c0e4617c1.png, so it'll same as 00:02:705 -?
- 00:03:479 - How about delete finish? as for me it's too loud and a bit conflict with whistle sound, and maybe you can set this http://puu.sh/jwhHH/8c0e4617c1.png also a bit same as above
- 00:22:641 - 00:23:221 - 00:24:189 - 00:24:770 - Rather than whistle, a clap is more fit with the music there because give us stronger feedback
- 00:25:157 (1) - How about use finish instead? kinda weird there since you useally use finish on the downbeat
- 00:25:157 (1,2,3) - How about flip ctrl+j then to x:180 y:216. Because a bit cramped there, furthermore at a quick try it's almost out of play field Moved it to somewhere else, while keeping the Ctrl J
- 00:29:439 - I guess that inherited point should be snap on 00:29:415 - Nope. I'm "silencing" the sencond slider, not the first one
[Hard]
- 00:03:092 (2) - Kinda too loud and a bit conflict with the finish. How about delete the whistle?
- 00:09:479 (3) - 00:11:028 (3) - Add finish?
- 00:12:770 (1) - I think just using clap is enough to emphsise the music, maybe delete that finish?
- 00:20:512 (1,2,3) - Imo, that one kinda hard to hit after this sequences pattern 00:17:415 (1,2,1,2,1) -, furthermore the rhythm on kiai 00:14:318 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4) - kinda too long for Normal, I believe you should considering to delete one or two circles to lower the density imo
- 00:24:770 (3) - Add clap? kinda too quite imo
- 00:29:439 - I guess that inherited point should be snap on 00:29:415 - See easy
[Insane]
- 00:01:931 (1) - I guess the finish sound used on that 1/4 reverse not fit imo. So maybe delete finish on here 00:03:286 - then replace finish on here 00:03:479 - with clap. I think it'll sound nicer imo Sounds kinda bad with the custom samples
- 00:11:221 (1,2,3,1) - Too crampped imo and hard to move there. So maybe you can change the rhythm on that into http://puu.sh/jwk2e/6accab5a74.jpg, the placement something like http://puu.sh/jwk5v/a58d59da28.jpg I personally really prefer this over your suggestion. The only thing I might consider here is splitting the kicksider into 2
- 00:22:834 (4) - That 1/4 slider with reverse kinda out of place imo, as you just usually use 1/4 slider without reverse make it awkward to play. How about change 00:22:834 (4) - into 1/2 rhythm instead? http://puu.sh/jwkzc/a4f5d66547.jpg
- 00:25:834 (5,1,1) - How about make (1,1) more visible? since they are on blue and red tick it's better to see them clearly to make player easier distinguish the rhythm
- 00:29:439 - I guess that inherited point should be snap on 00:29:415 - See easy
[Extreme]
- 00:01:931 (1) - I guess the finish sound used on that 1/4 reverse not fit imo. So maybe delete finish on here 00:03:286 - then replace finish on here 00:03:479 - with clap. I think it'll sound nicer imo See hard
- 00:12:770 (1,2) - Tbh those two doesn't interprete anything from the music, just because you want a symetry, doesn;t nean ignore the rhythm itself
- 00:25:157 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - The use of finish sound there somewhat not fit imo, just too loud and spamy Custom samples
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- 00:01:931 (1) - I guess the finish sound used on that 1/4 reverse not fit imo. So maybe delete finish on here 00:03:286 - then replace finish on here 00:03:479 - with clap. I think it'll sound nicer imo
- 00:25:253 (1,1,1,2,1) - The use of finish sound there somewhat not fit imo, just too loud and spamy See above
- 00:25:931 (1) - I don't hear any significant change on the music, why put slowdown there? Imo that kind of thing not good kinda ruin the whole flow The song gets quite calm here
I hope it help, good luck~
No reply means fixed w/o commentCherry Blossom wrote:
Hello, M4M from my queue.
Please, reply to this mod and tell me why you didn't change without saying "it's my style" or "there are already ranked maps with the same kind of pattern" or other reasons like this.
Note : things may have been already fixed with previous mods.Easy
- Don't use tickrate 2 unless there is a special purpose like using sliderticks with a custom clap for example. Use tickrate 1. Hmm, I thought it needed to be the same in all diffs O.o, but okay. It fits better
Normal
- Same as Easy about tickrate.
- The diff gap between this diff and Easy is too large. This current Normal diff contains a lot of 1/2 patterns whhen you can see on Easy, main patterns are 1/1 and when it's not, it's 2/1.
Hard
- 00:11:995 (2,3,1) - This pattern is really weird to play and looks ugly due to the overlap between those sliders. To make this pattern more comfortable to play, just increase the angle between those sliders in order to get rid of this overlap. And also, there should not be a larger distance between 00:12:383 (3,1) - than 00:11:995 (2,3) - because it looks misleading to players, and they can hit this circle 00:12:770 (1) - too early or late. Did something slightly different, as this imo makes it better readable
- 00:25:157 (1,2,3,4,5,1,1) - This pattern is unreadable. First, these circles 00:25:447 (2,3,4) - are too much spaced, and that makes this pattern really difficult to play and handle for a hard player. Plus, i don't really think that a simple hard player could read this slider 00:25:157 (1) - with the triple properly, it requires much technical skills and that's a little too much. And finally, how the player could be able to read this properly ? 00:25:834 (5,1,1) - . There is a polarity issues and that's not really easy to hit them with much accuracy, and a hard player doesn't have a lot of both accuracy and reading skills. It should be better if you unstack these circles froms the sliderend, or just find another solution. (5,1,1) was fixed with previous mod. The others are fine as this'll be the 4rth diff in the set
Insane
- 00:25:931 (1,1) - There should be more distance between them, because the current pattern could cause readability issues due to the previous patterns that are really much spaced. For the insane, I don't want the 1/16 slider to be spaced far, cause even if they are a tad late getting there+clicking the slider might have already started causing many combobreaks, and probably a fail too
Extreme
- 00:14:318 (1,2,3) - Why is there a jump here and not here 00:15:866 (1,2,3) - ? Imo, the jump you added looks out of place, because the next patterns are easier to handle and less spaced, and this long jump is like a spike, and that's not really appreciated. Just avoid this jump here : 00:14:318 (1,2,3) - Okay, made it a blanket
- 00:24:189 (1,1) - A little readability issue here, i don't really expected a long jump between the slider and this stream when i was testplaying, because the first circle of this stream is stacked with this slider 00:23:899 (1) - , and the Approach rate is not enough high to be able to avoid this weird stack. I highly recommend you to unstack 00:23:899 (1,1) - because as i said, it causes some readability issues. Don't touch the AR it looks fine.
I don't mod the Extra diff because patterns look so overdone compared to what the song can provide. Aiming 310 BPM is not easy at all and overkill, and only a few players can do it. Imo this diff is unnecessary.
Good luck ~
Thanks!!
I'll update after I mapped Advanced and SB'd it