HCH's Hardyour beginning is great, you take into account the difference in chord pitch and differentiate your 2 notes chord placement.
00:12:269 - how about utilising 3 notes? this is a new phase with emphasised beat. much more appropriate imo.
00:17:192 - ^same reason
00:21:346 (21346|0,21499|1) - wrong snap. should be 3/4 x 2. not 2/4 and 4/4. rearrrange.
00:20:884 (20884|1,21115|2,21346|0,21499|1,21730|2,21961|3,22115|0) - there are only LNs here, so take PR into consideration. current arrangement only takes care of hand balancing which is, illogical.
00:20:884 (20884|1,21115|2,21346|0,21499|1,21730|2,21961|3) - so change this to,
3 2 4 1 2 3
00:22:423 - new phase with emphasised beat, use 3 notes to signify. be careful with your emphasise, please take note of that.
00:31:961 - new phase, add to 4, should have 3 notes here to signify
00:41:807 - same reason
00:43:961 (43961|2) - move to 1, no reason to jack at 3 for 3times
00:48:269 (48269|0) - move to 4, same reason
00:51:653 - add a note to 1, phase change with emphasised beat.
00:54:423 (54423|2,54730|2,55346|2,55653|2,56269|2,56576|2) - pattern very heavy on 3 and 4, rearrange to make them more balanced.
00:58:115 (58115|2,58423|2,58730|2,59038|2) - rearrange, no reason to do this. hand balancing is not very well spread in this phase.
00:59:192 (59192|1,59346|1,59499|1,59807|1,59961|1,60115|1) - this is also unreasonable, rearrange your pattern.
01:00:653 (60653|1,60807|1,60961|1,61115|1,61269|1,61423|1) - this too, you leave 4 column blank, rearrange for balance.
01:01:499 - phase change, ought to have 3 notes to denote and signify
01:25:499 (85499|3,85653|2,85807|1,85961|2,86115|1,86115|3,86269|2,86423|1) - 1 is empty, rearrange, not very balanced.
01:31:038 - phase change with emphasised beat, 3 notes ought to be here.
01:35:961 - ^^^
01:38:423 - ^^
01:42:115 - should be 3 notes here same reason
01:43:807 (103807|3,103807|0,103807|1) - unreasonable, should be 2, you've been using two for the whole phase. the emphasis is the same, either use 3 for everything or use 2, and only use 3 for the place where i mentioned (more emphasised because of 4 x 4/4 beat signifier)
01:53:653 (113653|0,113653|3,113653|2) - ^
01:47:038 - add to 3 notes here
01:48:115 (108115|2) - move to 2 for hand balance
01:49:499 - add to 1, phase change, should be emphasised with 3 notes.
01:50:115 - add a note, inconsistnet with the rest of the pattern.
01:56:884 - phase change, should be 3 notes, rearrange.
01:57:961 (117961|1) - mvoe to 3 for hand balance.
01:59:346 (119346|2,119499|2,119653|2,119807|2,119961|3,120115|3,120269|0,120269|3,120423|0,120576|0) - bad chord pattern, rearrange everything. very heavy on jack that is unneccessary.
Insane00:06:115 (6115|0,6115|3,6730|3,6730|0,7346|0,7346|3) - there is only piano instrument and stream here, its illogical to not include pitch relevancy into consideration when mapping. your current arrangement only take hand balancing and patterning into consideration, please revamp these part to make it much more appropriate and logical.
00:03:653 (3653|2,3653|3,4884|2,4884|3) - this is also illogical, rearrange according to the pitch.
00:08:576 (8576|3,8576|0,9807|3,9807|2) - ^
00:10:038 (10038|3,10269|2) - move to 2 and 4, PR. current arrangement is not logical.
00:11:038 (11038|0,11038|3,11269|1,11499|2,11653|0) - should consistently utilise 2 notes here, same exact emphasis, there is piano chord AND melody here. so readjust.
00:11:653 (11653|0,11961|0,12115|1) - this as well.
00:12:269 (12269|2,12269|3,12730|1,12730|0) - there is that emphasised beat, illogical to only put 2 notes, especially since this is insane, add another note as well to give emphasis.
00:13:499 (13499|0,13807|2) - LN is consistently 2/4 here, follow only 1 sound,
00:13:499 (13499|0,13807|2,14115|3,14115|1,14269|2,14423|3,14423|0,14576|1) - this is 1 phase, follow them consistently, at the moment you're switching to that 2/4 sustained sound at the middle after those 2 4/4 lns. its inconsistent.
00:14:730 (14730|3,14730|2,15192|1,15192|2,15653|0,15653|1,16115|1,16115|2,16576|3,16576|2) - much better to utilise 2 notes here, the beat justify it. this is also to keep it consistent and reflects the song much more accurately.
00:17:192 (17192|0,17653|3,17961|0,18269|3) - same issue, you're not following the sound consistently,
there should be an LN here 00:17:499 - so add one.
00:17:192 (17192|0,17653|3,17961|0,18269|3) - this is not following anything, or you're mixing them up, revamp this LN, this is what i would define as LN abuse. please follow whatever it is that you're trying to follow accurately.
00:19:884 (19884|2) - inconsistent, change this into LN. unreasonable LN placement that you have now, why only 00:19:653 (19653|3,20115|0) - ? the sustained pitch continues.
00:21:423 (21423|2,21499|2) - 1/4 jack at 195? well this is 4star so i dont mind, but just ask others for clarification.
in which case if you decide to keep that jack, then
00:31:961 - use 3 nnotes here, obvious phase change and emphasised beat, no reason not to use 3 notes. this will make 1 note pattern into jack, but as you did that previously there is no reason for you not to do that as well here,
for example here, in which you follow the emphasise correctly 01:35:884 (95884|2,95961|1,95961|2,95961|0) -
00:32:115 (32115|1,32115|3,32269|0,32269|3,32423|0,32423|2,32576|0,32576|3,32730|1,32730|3,32884|0,32884|3,33038|0,33038|2) - bad mapping, there are 2 main sounds here, the 4/4 beat and the 2/4 pitch. why you use 2 notes for everything? obviously lines where the beat exist should have more notes. current arrangement only take into consideratioon pattern and hand balance, and the emphasise is completely ignored, revamp this.
00:34:730 (34730|0,34730|3,34884|2,34884|0,35038|1,35038|3,35192|0,35192|2,35346|1,35346|0,35499|1,35499|2) - same reason as above.
00:37:038 (37038|0,37038|3,37192|3,37192|1,37346|0,37346|2,37499|1,37499|3,37653|0,37653|2,37807|3,37807|0,37961|2,37961|1) - same reason as above.
00:39:423 (39423|1,39499|3,39499|2,39653|1,39653|3,39807|3,39807|0,39961|0,39961|2,40115|1,40115|0,40269|0,40269|2,40423|0,40423|3) - ^^^^
00:33:192 - should use 2 notes, just like 00:33:499 (33499|3,33499|1,33807|1,33807|2,34115|3,34115|2) -
that LN is following other sound, doesn't represent the beat, so keep it consistent.
00:35:653 - same reason as above.
00:38:115 - ^^^
00:40:576 - ^
00:41:807 - utilise 3 notes, you jack at earlier pattern, no reason not to jack here, this also gives emphasis. the phase change here with that emphasised beat.
00:42:423 - should be only 1 note, this beat is much fainter than 00:43:346 (43346|3,43346|1,43961|0,43961|3) -
keep your pattern consistent, this is still in one phase.
00:42:884 (42884|1) - wrong, delete. no pitch here. there is that faint BG instrument that you are NOT following. thus no reason to add this here, the one that you're following is the MAIN instrument.
00:47:807 (47807|1) - same reason as above.
00:52:730 (52730|1) - ^^ same reason.
or if you decide to follow it, then make it into 1/4 LN, it should be staccati there. not full 2/4 length.
for example, that pitch, is of different length with this one 00:54:423 (54423|1) - . so you shouldnt map both with 2/4 LNs.
00:42:730 (42730|3) - this is a 2/4 staccati, there should not be another 2/4 LN after this, check your LN carefully across the whole diffs, you abuse the LNs a lot.
furthermore since your LN follows that sustained instrument, you should have take PR into consideration. current arrangement ignored PR alltogether. it doesn't make much sense to me. and also there are not a lot of notes (i.e. note density is not high on this phase) so there is no reason for you not to follow the pitch accurately.
00:44:884 (44884|2,45192|1) - jack them for PR, make the lower LNs into 3/4 instead of 4/4. this is the correct snap. this is 4star+ insane, there should not be a reason to simplify the pitch snap for simplicity since 4star is not simple at all.
01:02:423 (62423|0) - what are you following? the BG piano chord? if yes then the end is wrong, should be 4/4 line longer, until the next chord spam.
at 01:06:423 - here
01:07:346 (67346|3) - same reason
01:12:269 (72269|0) - ^^^
01:17:192 (77192|3) - ^^
inappropriate overmap, there are a lot of ghost notes from this point onward
01:21:192 - until 01:28:576 - . i will point out to you SOME of them.
01:21:269 (81269|1) -
01:21:576 (81576|2) -
01:21:884 (81884|1) -
01:22:192 (82192|3) -
01:22:499 (82499|2) -
and so on. should be 3 notes stream. not full 1/4 stream.
01:31:038 - new phase, no reason not to use 3 notes, add to 1. (and also emphasised beat)
01:31:499 (91499|3,91499|0,91499|1) - << exactly the same with this here so keep it consistent.
01:42:115 - add a note to 1 for phase change and beat emphasis
01:42:423 (102423|0,102423|2,102576|2,102576|0) - should have 3 notes in total. same emphasis as
01:42:884 (102884|0,102884|1,102884|3) -
01:44:269 (104269|2,104269|1,104423|3,104423|0,104576|2,104576|1,104576|3) - 3 notes, beat emphasis.
01:47:038 - 3 notes, new phase and emphasised beat.
01:49:499 - ^^^^
01:50:730 - ^^^
01:51:961 (111961|0,111961|1,112269|2,112269|3,112423|3,112423|1,112730|1,112730|0) - should have 3 notes, beat emphsis.
01:53:653 (113653|3,113653|1,113961|0,113961|2,114115|2,114115|1,114269|0,114269|3) - 3 notes
01:54:423 (114423|2,114423|1,114423|0,114730|0,114730|2,114730|3,114884|3,114884|0,114884|2) - like this here
01:55:192 (115192|3,115192|0,115192|2,115192|1,115499|3,115499|1,115499|2,115499|0) - inconsistent and unreasonable, the pitch raise, but no increase in emphasis, no reason to utilise 4. 3 is enough just like the other nnotes before and after. revamp.
01:56:730 (116730|1,116730|3,116884|3,116884|0) - should be 3 notes, keep it consistent.