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Valentrixe
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Sunday, August 30, 2015 at 9:37:14 PM

Artist: MIssionary
Title: Nameless Missionary
Source: Dynamix
Tags: c4cat mimiproduction huwatcoolhensem
BPM: 195
Filesize: 2479kb
Play Time: 02:01
Difficulties Available:
  1. HCH's Hard - 4Key (3.21 stars, 1007 notes)
  2. Insane - 4Key (3.85 stars, 1048 notes)
  3. Normal - 4Key (1.94 stars, 418 notes)
Download: MIssionary - Nameless Missionary
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pls re-download if you already downloaded before 03/08/2015
changed hitsound & background

my other Dynamix mapset : http://osu.ppy.sh/s/350852
Spy
Poke me again when you're online.
-[ AmiShici ]-
Hii valen 46 o/

Here my mod

little mod from me
[MX]00:22:423 - 00:31:653 - keknya banyak ghost dah
00:22:499 (22499|3,22576|2) - ini ghost?
00:22:499 (22499|3,22576|2) - ^
00:23:269 (23269|2) - ^
00:23:499 (23499|3) - ^
00:25:730 (25730|1,25807|0) - ^
dll

00:32:423 (32423|0,32423|2,32730|3,32730|1,33038|0,33038|2) - sebenernya ane bingung ini dkk ngikut apa dan kenapa double
dkk

00:52:269 (52269|0,52576|1) - ctrl +G buat balance (ga ngejack gini 00:52:576 (52576|1,52730|1) - )
01:07:807 - missing note?
01:08:269 - ^
01:08:730 - ^
01:09:499 - ^
dkk

01:21:192 - 01:31:038 - banyak ghost seperti yg udah saya katakan sebelumnya
contoh : 01:21:269 (81269|1,81576|2,81884|1,82192|3,82499|2,82807|2,83115|0,83423|0) -

01:38:499 (98499|2,98807|1,99115|3) - ghost?

01:44:884 (104884|1,104884|3) - ctrl + H
01:45:653 (105653|3) - move ke 3?

Maaf ane ga jago ngemod >,<
Kalo kurang jelas bisa chat di game aja ;)

GL =w=)b
Topic Starter
Valentrixe

-[ AmiShici ]- wrote:

Hii valen 46 o/ | 46 itu ape? :'v

Here my mod

little mod from me
[MX]00:22:423 - 00:31:653 - keknya banyak ghost dah | map gw angker nih banyak hantu nya wkwkwk
00:22:499 (22499|3,22576|2) - ini ghost?
00:22:499 (22499|3,22576|2) - ^
00:23:269 (23269|2) - ^
00:23:499 (23499|3) - ^
00:25:730 (25730|1,25807|0) - ^
dll | gw ngikutin suara yang agak samar, mungkin inaudible, coba gw tanya pendapat lagi dari yang lain, untuk sementara ini dikeep

00:32:423 (32423|0,32423|2,32730|3,32730|1,33038|0,33038|2) - sebenernya ane bingung ini dkk ngikut apa dan kenapa double
dkk | piano

00:52:269 (52269|0,52576|1) - ctrl +G buat balance (ga ngejack gini 00:52:576 (52576|1,52730|1) - ) | okay
01:07:807 - missing note?
01:08:269 - ^
01:08:730 - ^
01:09:499 - ^
dkk | sengaja gw cuma ngikutin suara utamanya aja, yang ini gw keep juga

01:21:192 - 01:31:038 - banyak ghost seperti yg udah saya katakan sebelumnya
contoh : 01:21:269 (81269|1,81576|2,81884|1,82192|3,82499|2,82807|2,83115|0,83423|0) - | sama juga kaya sebelum nya

01:38:499 (98499|2,98807|1,99115|3) - ghost? | nope

01:44:884 (104884|1,104884|3) - ctrl + H | sengaja digituin pattern nya
01:45:653 (105653|3) - move ke 3? | done


Maaf ane ga jago ngemod >,<
Kalo kurang jelas bisa chat di game aja ;)

GL =w=)b | tenkyu amis muah ;) *slapped
updated
schwarzvgrune
Hi ~\(≧▽≦)/~
Mod as requested from Astral Horizon
Feel free to implement or reject if you think this is useless ~~o(>_<)o ~~


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In general, I will mod based on these considerations ♪(^∇^*)
( X ) I will not take this into consideration when modding
( ) I will take this into consideration when modding
( ? ) I might unconsciously take this into consideration when modding
Pitch Agreement / Relevancy : ( )
Hand Balancing : ( )
(Consistent) Patterning : ( )
Possibility of Long Notes Abuse : ( )
Ghost Note : ( )
Suggestions / Opinion only : ( )



NM+
move to 1 3 00:04:884 (4884|3,4884|1) -
no reason to keep it the same, pitch of the chord is different.
00:11:038 (11038|1,11038|3,11653|3,11653|0) - change to 1 3, 2 4. for PR and hand balance, current arrangement unreasonable.
00:11:038 (11038|1,11038|3,11653|3,11653|0) - << no reason to put it the same place here, since pitch is different.

00:12:730 - add a note, beat emphasis.
00:15:192 - ^^^
00:14:730 - add for every 4/4 red lines there you can recognise the beat difference. i tried and your diff becomes 1.91 which is still below the 2.00 limit set for RC.

00:17:692 - same reaeson
00:31:961 (31961|0,34423|3) - LN should be snapped until the end, they do not end there.
00:38:115 (38115|2,40576|3) - same
00:41:807 - until 01:01:499 - arrangement is illogical, revamp the whole pattern. you need to take PR into consideration to make it more logical and readable since this is normal and there are not a lot of notes there to be pressed at the same time, which imo, should not be a problem for you to follow PR accurately.
so rearrange.
i'll give you some example.
00:42:730 (42730|0,42884|1,43038|2,43653|1) - should be 2 4 3 2
00:48:576 (48576|0) - should be 4, etc.
00:49:192 (49192|1,50423|3) - should be 3, then 2
01:35:346 (95346|3) - mvoe to 3 for hand balance, unreasonable jack at 4
01:40:576 (100576|0,100730|1) - move to 2 3 no reason to jack
HCH's Hard
your beginning is great, you take into account the difference in chord pitch and differentiate your 2 notes chord placement. :)
00:12:269 - how about utilising 3 notes? this is a new phase with emphasised beat. much more appropriate imo.
00:17:192 - ^same reason
00:21:346 (21346|0,21499|1) - wrong snap. should be 3/4 x 2. not 2/4 and 4/4. rearrrange.
00:20:884 (20884|1,21115|2,21346|0,21499|1,21730|2,21961|3,22115|0) - there are only LNs here, so take PR into consideration. current arrangement only takes care of hand balancing which is, illogical.
00:20:884 (20884|1,21115|2,21346|0,21499|1,21730|2,21961|3) - so change this to,
3 2 4 1 2 3
00:22:423 - new phase with emphasised beat, use 3 notes to signify. be careful with your emphasise, please take note of that.

00:31:961 - new phase, add to 4, should have 3 notes here to signify
00:41:807 - same reason
00:43:961 (43961|2) - move to 1, no reason to jack at 3 for 3times
00:48:269 (48269|0) - move to 4, same reason
00:51:653 - add a note to 1, phase change with emphasised beat.

00:54:423 (54423|2,54730|2,55346|2,55653|2,56269|2,56576|2) - pattern very heavy on 3 and 4, rearrange to make them more balanced.
00:58:115 (58115|2,58423|2,58730|2,59038|2) - rearrange, no reason to do this. hand balancing is not very well spread in this phase.
00:59:192 (59192|1,59346|1,59499|1,59807|1,59961|1,60115|1) - this is also unreasonable, rearrange your pattern.
01:00:653 (60653|1,60807|1,60961|1,61115|1,61269|1,61423|1) - this too, you leave 4 column blank, rearrange for balance.
01:01:499 - phase change, ought to have 3 notes to denote and signify
01:25:499 (85499|3,85653|2,85807|1,85961|2,86115|1,86115|3,86269|2,86423|1) - 1 is empty, rearrange, not very balanced.

01:31:038 - phase change with emphasised beat, 3 notes ought to be here.
01:35:961 - ^^^
01:38:423 - ^^
01:42:115 - should be 3 notes here same reason
01:43:807 (103807|3,103807|0,103807|1) - unreasonable, should be 2, you've been using two for the whole phase. the emphasis is the same, either use 3 for everything or use 2, and only use 3 for the place where i mentioned (more emphasised because of 4 x 4/4 beat signifier)
01:53:653 (113653|0,113653|3,113653|2) - ^

01:47:038 - add to 3 notes here
01:48:115 (108115|2) - move to 2 for hand balance
01:49:499 - add to 1, phase change, should be emphasised with 3 notes.
01:50:115 - add a note, inconsistnet with the rest of the pattern.

01:56:884 - phase change, should be 3 notes, rearrange.

01:57:961 (117961|1) - mvoe to 3 for hand balance.
01:59:346 (119346|2,119499|2,119653|2,119807|2,119961|3,120115|3,120269|0,120269|3,120423|0,120576|0) - bad chord pattern, rearrange everything. very heavy on jack that is unneccessary.
Insane
00:06:115 (6115|0,6115|3,6730|3,6730|0,7346|0,7346|3) - there is only piano instrument and stream here, its illogical to not include pitch relevancy into consideration when mapping. your current arrangement only take hand balancing and patterning into consideration, please revamp these part to make it much more appropriate and logical.
00:03:653 (3653|2,3653|3,4884|2,4884|3) - this is also illogical, rearrange according to the pitch.
00:08:576 (8576|3,8576|0,9807|3,9807|2) - ^
00:10:038 (10038|3,10269|2) - move to 2 and 4, PR. current arrangement is not logical.
00:11:038 (11038|0,11038|3,11269|1,11499|2,11653|0) - should consistently utilise 2 notes here, same exact emphasis, there is piano chord AND melody here. so readjust.
00:11:653 (11653|0,11961|0,12115|1) - this as well.

00:12:269 (12269|2,12269|3,12730|1,12730|0) - there is that emphasised beat, illogical to only put 2 notes, especially since this is insane, add another note as well to give emphasis.
00:13:499 (13499|0,13807|2) - LN is consistently 2/4 here, follow only 1 sound,
00:13:499 (13499|0,13807|2,14115|3,14115|1,14269|2,14423|3,14423|0,14576|1) - this is 1 phase, follow them consistently, at the moment you're switching to that 2/4 sustained sound at the middle after those 2 4/4 lns. its inconsistent.

00:14:730 (14730|3,14730|2,15192|1,15192|2,15653|0,15653|1,16115|1,16115|2,16576|3,16576|2) - much better to utilise 2 notes here, the beat justify it. this is also to keep it consistent and reflects the song much more accurately.
00:17:192 (17192|0,17653|3,17961|0,18269|3) - same issue, you're not following the sound consistently,
there should be an LN here 00:17:499 - so add one.

00:17:192 (17192|0,17653|3,17961|0,18269|3) - this is not following anything, or you're mixing them up, revamp this LN, this is what i would define as LN abuse. please follow whatever it is that you're trying to follow accurately.

00:19:884 (19884|2) - inconsistent, change this into LN. unreasonable LN placement that you have now, why only 00:19:653 (19653|3,20115|0) - ? the sustained pitch continues.

00:21:423 (21423|2,21499|2) - 1/4 jack at 195? well this is 4star so i dont mind, but just ask others for clarification.

in which case if you decide to keep that jack, then
00:31:961 - use 3 nnotes here, obvious phase change and emphasised beat, no reason not to use 3 notes. this will make 1 note pattern into jack, but as you did that previously there is no reason for you not to do that as well here,
for example here, in which you follow the emphasise correctly 01:35:884 (95884|2,95961|1,95961|2,95961|0) -

00:32:115 (32115|1,32115|3,32269|0,32269|3,32423|0,32423|2,32576|0,32576|3,32730|1,32730|3,32884|0,32884|3,33038|0,33038|2) - bad mapping, there are 2 main sounds here, the 4/4 beat and the 2/4 pitch. why you use 2 notes for everything? obviously lines where the beat exist should have more notes. current arrangement only take into consideratioon pattern and hand balance, and the emphasise is completely ignored, revamp this.
00:34:730 (34730|0,34730|3,34884|2,34884|0,35038|1,35038|3,35192|0,35192|2,35346|1,35346|0,35499|1,35499|2) - same reason as above.
00:37:038 (37038|0,37038|3,37192|3,37192|1,37346|0,37346|2,37499|1,37499|3,37653|0,37653|2,37807|3,37807|0,37961|2,37961|1) - same reason as above.
00:39:423 (39423|1,39499|3,39499|2,39653|1,39653|3,39807|3,39807|0,39961|0,39961|2,40115|1,40115|0,40269|0,40269|2,40423|0,40423|3) - ^^^^


00:33:192 - should use 2 notes, just like 00:33:499 (33499|3,33499|1,33807|1,33807|2,34115|3,34115|2) -
that LN is following other sound, doesn't represent the beat, so keep it consistent.
00:35:653 - same reason as above.
00:38:115 - ^^^
00:40:576 - ^

00:41:807 - utilise 3 notes, you jack at earlier pattern, no reason not to jack here, this also gives emphasis. the phase change here with that emphasised beat.

00:42:423 - should be only 1 note, this beat is much fainter than 00:43:346 (43346|3,43346|1,43961|0,43961|3) -
keep your pattern consistent, this is still in one phase.
00:42:884 (42884|1) - wrong, delete. no pitch here. there is that faint BG instrument that you are NOT following. thus no reason to add this here, the one that you're following is the MAIN instrument.
00:47:807 (47807|1) - same reason as above.
00:52:730 (52730|1) - ^^ same reason.
or if you decide to follow it, then make it into 1/4 LN, it should be staccati there. not full 2/4 length.
for example, that pitch, is of different length with this one 00:54:423 (54423|1) - . so you shouldnt map both with 2/4 LNs.


00:42:730 (42730|3) - this is a 2/4 staccati, there should not be another 2/4 LN after this, check your LN carefully across the whole diffs, you abuse the LNs a lot.
furthermore since your LN follows that sustained instrument, you should have take PR into consideration. current arrangement ignored PR alltogether. it doesn't make much sense to me. and also there are not a lot of notes (i.e. note density is not high on this phase) so there is no reason for you not to follow the pitch accurately.

00:44:884 (44884|2,45192|1) - jack them for PR, make the lower LNs into 3/4 instead of 4/4. this is the correct snap. this is 4star+ insane, there should not be a reason to simplify the pitch snap for simplicity since 4star is not simple at all.

01:02:423 (62423|0) - what are you following? the BG piano chord? if yes then the end is wrong, should be 4/4 line longer, until the next chord spam.
at 01:06:423 - here
01:07:346 (67346|3) - same reason
01:12:269 (72269|0) - ^^^
01:17:192 (77192|3) - ^^

inappropriate overmap, there are a lot of ghost notes from this point onward
01:21:192 - until 01:28:576 - . i will point out to you SOME of them.
01:21:269 (81269|1) -
01:21:576 (81576|2) -
01:21:884 (81884|1) -
01:22:192 (82192|3) -
01:22:499 (82499|2) -
and so on. should be 3 notes stream. not full 1/4 stream.


01:31:038 - new phase, no reason not to use 3 notes, add to 1. (and also emphasised beat)
01:31:499 (91499|3,91499|0,91499|1) - << exactly the same with this here so keep it consistent.
01:42:115 - add a note to 1 for phase change and beat emphasis
01:42:423 (102423|0,102423|2,102576|2,102576|0) - should have 3 notes in total. same emphasis as
01:42:884 (102884|0,102884|1,102884|3) -
01:44:269 (104269|2,104269|1,104423|3,104423|0,104576|2,104576|1,104576|3) - 3 notes, beat emphasis.

01:47:038 - 3 notes, new phase and emphasised beat.
01:49:499 - ^^^^
01:50:730 - ^^^

01:51:961 (111961|0,111961|1,112269|2,112269|3,112423|3,112423|1,112730|1,112730|0) - should have 3 notes, beat emphsis.
01:53:653 (113653|3,113653|1,113961|0,113961|2,114115|2,114115|1,114269|0,114269|3) - 3 notes
01:54:423 (114423|2,114423|1,114423|0,114730|0,114730|2,114730|3,114884|3,114884|0,114884|2) - like this here

01:55:192 (115192|3,115192|0,115192|2,115192|1,115499|3,115499|1,115499|2,115499|0) - inconsistent and unreasonable, the pitch raise, but no increase in emphasis, no reason to utilise 4. 3 is enough just like the other nnotes before and after. revamp.
01:56:730 (116730|1,116730|3,116884|3,116884|0) - should be 3 notes, keep it consistent.


Excellent Beatmap!!! Nice Song!!! d(≧v≦)b~~
Good Luck for rank!! O(∩_∩)O

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23:56 *Valentrixe is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/719087 MIssionary - Nameless Missionary [Insane]]
00:07 Rido: e tai itu yg hard udah ada yg bikin
00:07 Rido: u scrub
00:08 Valentrixe: makanya tadi gw bilang ngga
00:08 Rido: LU MAIN OKE OKE AJA
00:08 Rido: *sigh
00:08 Valentrixe: tapi itu dah gw panggil buat update orang nya ga nongol" si
00:08 Valentrixe: kalo lu mau bikin ya uda tinggal gw apus Hard nya dia
00:09 Valentrixe: that's all
00:09 Rido: jangan la
00:09 Rido: kasian huwat
00:09 Rido: mod yok mod
00:09 Valentrixe: ih kamu
00:09 Valentrixe: pengertian banget
00:09 Valentrixe: :'
00:09 Valentrixe: mau mod? bntar
00:10 Valentrixe: gw update dulu
00:10 Rido: k
00:11 Rido: udah?
00:11 Valentrixe: da
00:12 Valentrixe: cuma belom reply mod nya si cina orz
00:12 Rido: schwarzuufnsekjfwngrune?
00:12 Valentrixe: belom nulis
00:12 Valentrixe: iye
00:12 Valentrixe: kalo mau
00:12 Valentrixe: bantuin di bagian sini a
00:12 Valentrixe: fokusin
00:12 Valentrixe: 00:41:807
00:12 Rido: mana linknya kampret
00:13 Rido: ah nvm otw sendiri
00:13 Valentrixe: bagian situ katanya mesti direvamp
00:13 Valentrixe: belom gw ubah
00:13 Valentrixe: katanya
00:14 Valentrixe: bagian staccato nya gausah
00:14 Valentrixe: 00:42:884 (42884|1,46576|2) - itu
00:14 Valentrixe: what should i do
00:14 Rido: siapa yg bilang gausah
00:14 Rido: itu udah bener niel
00:14 Rido: jgn dihapus
00:15 Valentrixe: oke
00:15 Valentrixe: terus katanya mesti direvamp
00:15 Valentrixe: because low density
00:15 Valentrixe: dan pattern sekarang ga ngikutin Pitch
00:16 Valentrixe: si cina minta diubah pattern nya gitu *sigh*
00:16 Rido: rido amat
00:16 Rido: jgn diturutin
00:17 Valentrixe: btw menurut lu gimana beb
00:17 Valentrixe: 00:11:038 (11038|0,11038|3,11269|1,11269|3,11499|2,11499|0,11653|1,11653|0,11730|3) -
00:17 Rido: udah bener
00:17 Rido: menurut gw ya dari sini harusnya lu ngikut main synth aja 00:12:269 -
00:18 Rido: jgn dimasukin semua instrumen2nya
00:18 Valentrixe: synth itu kek gimana
00:19 Rido: yg suaranya paling keras
00:19 Rido: 00:17:192 (17192|1,17346|2,17499|3,17653|1,17653|0,17807|2,17961|1,18115|0,18269|2,18423|0,18576|1) -
00:19 Valentrixe: kenapa LNs nya
00:20 Valentrixe: jelek?
00:20 Valentrixe: *sigh*
00:20 Rido: kalo ngemap jgn dimasukin semua elemen2nya
00:20 Rido: kadang2 itu bikin map bosenin
00:21 Rido: in this case, you mapping drum instead of main synth which is loudest sound in this part
00:21 Valentrixe: masalah nya gw buntu
00:21 Valentrixe: di bagian LNs tadi itu mau ngemap kek gimana
00:21 Rido: cari inspirasi di ginkiha - Starlight Express
00:21 Rido: (")>
00:22 Valentrixe: apa gw bikin sama kek gini
00:22 Valentrixe: 00:12:269 (12269|3,12269|0,12269|2,12346|1,12423|3,12499|2,12576|1,12653|2,12730|3,12730|1,12730|0,12807|2,12884|1,12961|0,13038|2,13115|1,13192|3,13269|2,13346|1,13423|0) -
00:22 Rido: -_-
00:22 Rido: gw bilang lu harusnya ngemap synth
00:22 Valentrixe: soalnya 00:12:269 (12269|3,12269|0,12269|2,12346|1,12423|3,12499|2,12576|1,12653|2,12730|3,12730|1,12730|0,12807|2,12884|1,12961|0,13038|2,13115|1,13192|3,13269|2,13346|1,13423|0) - punya suara yang sama
00:22 Rido: jgn drum dkk
00:22 Valentrixe: orz
00:23 Rido: ikr suaranya sama tapi menurut gw intronya gross
00:23 Rido: lu fokusin streams di 00:22:423 -
00:23 Rido: di awal lu fokus LN
00:24 Valentrixe: 00:22:423 - kalo gw fokus ke synth
00:24 Valentrixe: bakal jadi simple LN doang
00:24 Rido: dari sini 00:22:423 - gw bilang lu fokus streams monyet
00:24 Rido: itu udah bukan intro
00:24 Rido: u scrub
00:24 Rido: =A=
00:25 Valentrixe: ya kan emang anjer
00:25 Valentrixe: gw bales itu
00:25 Valentrixe: alasan kenapa gw fokus stream
00:26 Valentrixe: bagian awal nya dirombak ni?
00:26 Rido: maksud gw, bagian situ udah bener, lu fokus stream aja
00:26 Rido: iya awal dirombak
00:26 Valentrixe: 00:13:499 (13499|1,13807|2,14115|3) - ini gw bingung
00:27 Rido: hapus
00:27 Valentrixe: 00:13:576 (13576|2,13653|3,13730|0,13884|1,13961|0,14038|1,14192|2,14269|1,14346|0,14423|2,14499|1,14576|0,14653|2,14730|1,14730|0) - lot of ghost
00:27 Rido: inaudible synth
00:27 Rido: lu ngikut synth pelan di belakang kan?
00:27 Rido: eh piano deng
00:27 Valentrixe: ya kek di Hard
00:27 Rido: hapus aja
00:28 Valentrixe: uda
00:28 Valentrixe: terus diisi apa coba
00:28 Rido: dibilang lu fokus ke main synth
00:28 Rido: 1/2 LNs
00:29 Valentrixe: ...
00:29 Valentrixe: terus stream nya gimana
00:29 Rido: kek ini 00:17:192 (17192|1,17346|2,17499|3,17653|1,17653|0,17807|2,17961|1,18115|0,18269|2,18423|0,18576|1,18730|2,18884|3) -
00:29 Rido: astaga drtd udh gw singgung masalah "jgn masukin semua elemen"
00:29 Rido: ==a
00:30 Valentrixe: orz
00:30 Valentrixe: k k
00:30 Valentrixe: jadi yang di
00:30 Valentrixe: 00:17:192 - dah bener
00:30 Valentrixe: gitu?
00:30 Rido: udah
00:31 Valentrixe: hng
00:31 Valentrixe: terus
00:31 Valentrixe: 00:14:115 - gimana
00:31 Rido: zzz gw kasih contoh deh
00:31 Rido: bentar
00:31 Valentrixe: dari 00:14:730 - gw tetep ngikutin main synth?
00:32 Valentrixe: stream nya diilangin gitu?
00:32 Rido: bentarrr gw kasih contoh
00:32 Valentrixe: ya beb
00:39 Rido: http://puu.sh/iZ2G7/7104c916b0.rar
00:41 Valentrixe: 00:16:884 -
00:41 Valentrixe: how about
00:41 Valentrixe: make it like dis
00:42 Valentrixe: http://puu.sh/iZ2RI/bc5aa95541.jpg
00:42 Rido: it's too damn easy for [Insane] diff
00:42 Rido: lu udah liat contoh gw belum
00:43 Valentrixe: di sebelah kanan itu kan contoh lu dodol
00:43 Rido: eh masa
00:43 Rido: :V
00:43 Valentrixe: agak aneh
00:44 Rido: apanya yg aneh
00:44 Valentrixe: 00:17:192 (17192|2,17192|3,17346|1,17499|0,17653|2,17653|3,17807|1,17961|2,18115|0,18269|1,18423|0,18423|3,18576|2,18730|3,18730|1,18884|0,18884|2) - yang ini bagus
00:44 Valentrixe: ijin comot yak
00:44 Rido: ANJAY
00:44 Rido: COMOT SEMUA AJA GPP AKU IKHLAS
00:44 Rido: :*
00:44 Valentrixe: 00:13:499 - pitch nya rada ngawur
00:45 Rido: eh iya ada yg salah itu
00:45 Rido: 00:14:423 (14423|0) -
00:45 Rido: hapus aja
00:45 Valentrixe: 00:13:499 (13499|0,13499|2,13653|3,13807|2,13807|1,13961|0,14115|3,14115|1,14269|2,14423|1,14423|0,14576|2,14730|1) - these ngawur
00:45 Rido: 00:13:499 (13499|0,13807|2,14115|3) - ini gw ngikut yg lu map sebelumnya
00:45 Rido: yg kata gw "inaudible"
00:46 Valentrixe: yauda fix gw jadiin LNs diawal
00:46 Rido: coba ss bagian situ
00:46 Valentrixe: btw
00:46 Valentrixe: 01:00:269 (60269|0,60269|2,60346|1,60423|0,60499|1,60576|2,60576|0,60653|1,60730|2,60807|1,60884|2,60884|0,60961|1,61038|0,61115|1,61192|2,61192|0,61269|1,61346|2,61423|0,61499|1,61499|2) -
00:46 Valentrixe: itu rasa nya ga enak dimainin
00:46 Valentrixe: tapi gada yang protes
00:46 Rido: EMANG GAENAK
00:46 Rido: 00:59:038 (59038|1,59499|3) - remobe
00:46 Rido: remove
00:47 Valentrixe: gw dah minta testplay 3 orang rank 3 digit
00:47 Rido: fokus ke trill
00:47 Valentrixe: dan mereka semua pass
00:47 Valentrixe: mereka gada masalah di situ
00:47 Valentrixe: enak" aja katanya
00:47 Rido: mereka itu siapa aka
00:47 Rido: aja
00:47 Valentrixe: kagii poxbat ama perles
00:47 Valentrixe: lol :v
00:47 Rido: -_-
00:47 Valentrixe: fokus ke trill ya
00:48 Valentrixe: oke beb ku sayang you help me a lot
00:48 Valentrixe: :*
00:48 Rido: masih banyak yg harus lu benerin
00:48 Rido: i'd rate this difficulty 7/10
00:48 Valentrixe: di bagian belakang
00:48 Valentrixe: belom gw benerin
00:48 Valentrixe: bagian ghost nya
00:48 Valentrixe: orz
00:48 Rido: tengah juga banyak yg kurang enak
00:49 Valentrixe: btw di map ini pertama kali nya
00:49 Valentrixe: SV gw dibilang poor
00:49 Valentrixe: padahal biasa nya pada suka ;-;
00:49 Rido: EMANG POOR
00:50 Valentrixe: 00:22:115 - gagal
00:50 Valentrixe: gagal bikin SV di sono
00:50 Rido: comot punya gw
00:51 Valentrixe: punya lu ga enak
00:51 Rido: rude
00:51 Rido: k
00:51 *Valentrixe ditabok
00:52 Valentrixe: it's good to being honest sometime isn't it
00:52 Rido: at least don't make someone feeling hurt
00:52 Rido: *someone's
00:52 *Valentrixe kiss Rido
00:53 Rido: jijay
00:54 Rido: 00:22:115 - kasih 2x
00:54 Rido: 00:22:192 - kasih 1x
00:54 Rido: 00:22:269 - kasih 0,5
00:55 Rido: coba
00:55 Rido: jgn pake LN
00:56 Valentrixe: how
00:56 Valentrixe: 00:22:269 - x0.75
00:56 Rido: terlalu cepet
00:56 Valentrixe: 00:22:346 - x0.5
00:56 Valentrixe: 00:22:423 - x1
00:56 Valentrixe: coba
00:56 Rido: kalo lu kasih gitu, gak ada kesan burstnya
00:57 Rido: cuma memperlambat
00:57 Valentrixe: hm
00:57 Valentrixe: jadi
00:57 Valentrixe: gimenong
00:58 Rido: terserah elu mau pake yg mana
00:59 Valentrixe: btw
00:59 Valentrixe: ada batas max ga untuk SV
00:59 Valentrixe: kaya ga boleh lebih dari x99 gitu
00:59 Rido: ada yg pasang SV 4 kena DQ
01:00 Rido: Rumia's Magnolia
01:00 Valentrixe: maksud gw speed nya
01:00 Rido: iya maksud gw speednya x4
01:00 *Rido runs
01:00 *Valentrixe tabok Rido
01:01 Rido: eh btw SV yg lu saranin bagus juga
01:02 Valentrixe: ih
01:02 Valentrixe: akhirnya
01:02 Valentrixe: ada yang bilang bagus
01:02 Valentrixe: ;-;)9
01:02 Rido: SOALNYA GW KASIH PENCERAHAN
01:02 Rido: hm
01:04 Valentrixe: 00:13:499 - gw ikutin background piano nya ga?
01:04 Rido: kalo lu comot semua punya gw, 00:14:115 (14115|3) - ini panjangin sampe 00:14:730 -
01:04 Rido: terus ini 00:14:423 (14423|0) - hapus
01:04 Rido: itu di diff gw tadi timingnya
01:05 Valentrixe: oh ngikutin piano terakhir nya itu?
01:05 Rido: iya, kan ada tiga nada di sana
01:05 Rido: yg terakhir agak panjang nadanya
01:06 Valentrixe: sekilas salah baca 'kan ada tiga naga di sana'
01:06 Valentrixe: lol'd
01:06 Rido: indosiar
01:06 Rido: :V
01:07 Valentrixe: tapi ga enak
01:07 Valentrixe: gw bikin pattern lain soalnya
01:07 Valentrixe: bntar ya
01:07 Valentrixe: tar gw upload lagi
01:07 Valentrixe: lu cobain
01:07 Rido: per testplay ceban ya
01:07 *Rido slapped
01:10 Valentrixe: apasih yang ngga buat kamu
01:10 Rido: jijay
Frostcage
IRC :)
15:54 Frostcage: 00:11:499 - shouldn't be double
15:54 Valentrixe: nice catch btw
15:55 Valentrixe: my friend says it fine lol
15:55 Valentrixe: kay i'm delete those 2
15:55 Frostcage: not a ghost note but 00:22:115 - I'd make one of those notes an ln :3
15:55 Frostcage: a short one tho
15:56 Valentrixe: i already did before
15:56 Valentrixe: it's not compatible with the SV
15:56 Valentrixe: unreadable release
15:56 Frostcage: 00:34:269 (34269|1,34346|2,34423|0,34423|3,34499|1,34576|2,34576|3) - what is this mess
15:57 Valentrixe: probably unaudible
15:57 Valentrixe: but there's still sound there
15:57 Frostcage: unaudible?
15:58 Valentrixe: inaudible*
15:58 Frostcage: that's not what I meant
15:58 Valentrixe: then?
15:58 Frostcage: it doesn't sound like THAT many notes are there..
15:58 Frostcage: I dunno maybe I'm deaf lol
15:58 Frostcage: or really tired.. like usual
15:58 Valentrixe: actually
15:59 Valentrixe: i'm thinking there's 1/6 here
15:59 Valentrixe: 00:34:423 -
15:59 Valentrixe: for piano?
15:59 Valentrixe: dunno
16:00 Frostcage: I hear a note here 00:34:192 - and here 00:34:269 -
16:01 Valentrixe: 00:34:346 - here too
16:02 Frostcage: 01:01:499 (61499|1,61499|3) - make this triplet OR 01:01:961 (61961|3,61961|1) - remove on one note from this
16:02 Valentrixe: still good if i get rid the notes in 00:34:269 - and 00:34:346
16:02 Valentrixe: what do you think?
16:03 Valentrixe: 01:01:961 (61961|3,61961|1) - why should i remove one note in this point?
16:04 Frostcage: I said "OR"
16:04 Frostcage: it's because both of those are different sounds and have the same notes
16:04 Valentrixe: hmm kay
16:05 Valentrixe: changed to triplets then
16:05 Valentrixe: oh wait
16:05 Valentrixe: i'm trying to avoiding any 1/4 jack in this map
16:05 Valentrixe: so..
16:06 Frostcage: it's not really too hard though
16:06 Frostcage: and only one note of jack
16:06 Valentrixe: 01:01:961 (61961|3,61961|1) - i think this one is louder than 01:01:499 (61499|3,61499|1)
16:06 Frostcage: but the finish hitsound changes everything
16:07 Valentrixe: so one note for finish you'd say?
16:07 Frostcage: huh
16:08 Frostcage: no I'm saying 3 notes for finish
16:08 Frostcage: like a triple
16:08 Valentrixe: i mean adding one note for finish
16:08 Valentrixe: x'D
16:08 Frostcage: oh >< yeah
16:08 *Valentrixe slap Frosty with a slice of bacon
16:09 Frostcage: I think it should be on 1 though
16:09 Frostcage: and thanks for yummy snack
16:09 Frostcage: 01:09:499 (69499|0) - remove that
16:09 Frostcage: little ghost
16:10 Valentrixe: uhh
16:10 Frostcage: 01:19:346 (79346|2) - same here
16:10 Valentrixe: okay
16:11 Frostcage: 01:32:730 (92730|2,92807|0,92884|2,92961|0,93038|3,93115|0,93192|3,93269|0,93346|2,93423|0) - what is this
16:12 Valentrixe: i'm trying to suit it with synth
16:12 Frostcage: 01:38:499 (98499|2,98576|1,98653|3,98730|2,98807|1) - and this 01:38:961 (98961|1,99038|2,99115|3,99192|1,99269|2) - and this
16:13 Valentrixe: okay orz
16:13 Valentrixe: so what should i do with them?
16:13 Valentrixe: leave that part empty?
16:14 Frostcage: map them how you mapped everything else
16:15 Valentrixe: LNs ?
16:15 Frostcage: remove all of these, move notes to make patterns, make doubles/trples as necessary
16:15 Frostcage: 01:32:807 (92807|0,92961|0,93115|0,93269|0,93423|0) -
16:17 Frostcage: yeah everything is else good. I suck with SV changes so :x
Topic Starter
Valentrixe

schwarzvgrune wrote:

NM+
move to 1 3 00:04:884 (4884|3,4884|1) -
no reason to keep it the same, pitch of the chord is different.
00:11:038 (11038|1,11038|3,11653|3,11653|0) - change to 1 3, 2 4. for PR and hand balance, current arrangement unreasonable.
00:11:038 (11038|1,11038|3,11653|3,11653|0) - << no reason to put it the same place here, since pitch is different.

00:12:730 - add a note, beat emphasis.
00:15:192 - ^^^
00:14:730 - add for every 4/4 red lines there you can recognise the beat difference. i tried and your diff becomes 1.91 which is still below the 2.00 limit set for RC.

00:17:692 - same reaeson
00:31:961 (31961|0,34423|3) - LN should be snapped until the end, they do not end there.
00:38:115 (38115|2,40576|3) - same
00:41:807 - until 01:01:499 - arrangement is illogical, revamp the whole pattern. you need to take PR into consideration to make it more logical and readable since this is normal and there are not a lot of notes there to be pressed at the same time, which imo, should not be a problem for you to follow PR accurately.
so rearrange.
i'll give you some example.
00:42:730 (42730|0,42884|1,43038|2,43653|1) - should be 2 4 3 2
00:48:576 (48576|0) - should be 4, etc.
00:49:192 (49192|1,50423|3) - should be 3, then 2
01:35:346 (95346|3) - mvoe to 3 for hand balance, unreasonable jack at 4
01:40:576 (100576|0,100730|1) - move to 2 3 no reason to jack
Insane
00:06:115 (6115|0,6115|3,6730|3,6730|0,7346|0,7346|3) - there is only piano instrument and stream here, its illogical to not include pitch relevancy into consideration when mapping. your current arrangement only take hand balancing and patterning into consideration, please revamp these part to make it much more appropriate and logical.
00:03:653 (3653|2,3653|3,4884|2,4884|3) - this is also illogical, rearrange according to the pitch.
00:08:576 (8576|3,8576|0,9807|3,9807|2) - ^
00:10:038 (10038|3,10269|2) - move to 2 and 4, PR. current arrangement is not logical.
00:11:038 (11038|0,11038|3,11269|1,11499|2,11653|0) - should consistently utilise 2 notes here, same exact emphasis, there is piano chord AND melody here. so readjust.
00:11:653 (11653|0,11961|0,12115|1) - this as well.

00:12:269 (12269|2,12269|3,12730|1,12730|0) - there is that emphasised beat, illogical to only put 2 notes, especially since this is insane, add another note as well to give emphasis.
00:13:499 (13499|0,13807|2) - LN is consistently 2/4 here, follow only 1 sound,
00:13:499 (13499|0,13807|2,14115|3,14115|1,14269|2,14423|3,14423|0,14576|1) - this is 1 phase, follow them consistently, at the moment you're switching to that 2/4 sustained sound at the middle after those 2 4/4 lns. its inconsistent.

00:14:730 (14730|3,14730|2,15192|1,15192|2,15653|0,15653|1,16115|1,16115|2,16576|3,16576|2) - much better to utilise 2 notes here, the beat justify it. this is also to keep it consistent and reflects the song much more accurately.
00:17:192 (17192|0,17653|3,17961|0,18269|3) - same issue, you're not following the sound consistently,
there should be an LN here 00:17:499 - so add one.

00:17:192 (17192|0,17653|3,17961|0,18269|3) - this is not following anything, or you're mixing them up, revamp this LN, this is what i would define as LN abuse. please follow whatever it is that you're trying to follow accurately.

00:19:884 (19884|2) - inconsistent, change this into LN. unreasonable LN placement that you have now, why only 00:19:653 (19653|3,20115|0) - ? the sustained pitch continues.

00:21:423 (21423|2,21499|2) - 1/4 jack at 195? well this is 4star so i dont mind, but just ask others for clarification.

in which case if you decide to keep that jack, then
00:31:961 - use 3 nnotes here, obvious phase change and emphasised beat, no reason not to use 3 notes. this will make 1 note pattern into jack, but as you did that previously there is no reason for you not to do that as well here,
for example here, in which you follow the emphasise correctly 01:35:884 (95884|2,95961|1,95961|2,95961|0) -

00:32:115 (32115|1,32115|3,32269|0,32269|3,32423|0,32423|2,32576|0,32576|3,32730|1,32730|3,32884|0,32884|3,33038|0,33038|2) - bad mapping, there are 2 main sounds here, the 4/4 beat and the 2/4 pitch. why you use 2 notes for everything? obviously lines where the beat exist should have more notes. current arrangement only take into consideratioon pattern and hand balance, and the emphasise is completely ignored, revamp this.
00:34:730 (34730|0,34730|3,34884|2,34884|0,35038|1,35038|3,35192|0,35192|2,35346|1,35346|0,35499|1,35499|2) - same reason as above.
00:37:038 (37038|0,37038|3,37192|3,37192|1,37346|0,37346|2,37499|1,37499|3,37653|0,37653|2,37807|3,37807|0,37961|2,37961|1) - same reason as above.
00:39:423 (39423|1,39499|3,39499|2,39653|1,39653|3,39807|3,39807|0,39961|0,39961|2,40115|1,40115|0,40269|0,40269|2,40423|0,40423|3) - ^^^^


00:33:192 - should use 2 notes, just like 00:33:499 (33499|3,33499|1,33807|1,33807|2,34115|3,34115|2) -
that LN is following other sound, doesn't represent the beat, so keep it consistent.
00:35:653 - same reason as above.
00:38:115 - ^^^
00:40:576 - ^

00:41:807 - utilise 3 notes, you jack at earlier pattern, no reason not to jack here, this also gives emphasis. the phase change here with that emphasised beat.

00:42:423 - should be only 1 note, this beat is much fainter than 00:43:346 (43346|3,43346|1,43961|0,43961|3) -
keep your pattern consistent, this is still in one phase.
00:42:884 (42884|1) - wrong, delete. no pitch here. there is that faint BG instrument that you are NOT following. thus no reason to add this here, the one that you're following is the MAIN instrument.
00:47:807 (47807|1) - same reason as above.
00:52:730 (52730|1) - ^^ same reason.
or if you decide to follow it, then make it into 1/4 LN, it should be staccati there. not full 2/4 length.
for example, that pitch, is of different length with this one 00:54:423 (54423|1) - . so you shouldnt map both with 2/4 LNs.


00:42:730 (42730|3) - this is a 2/4 staccati, there should not be another 2/4 LN after this, check your LN carefully across the whole diffs, you abuse the LNs a lot.
furthermore since your LN follows that sustained instrument, you should have take PR into consideration. current arrangement ignored PR alltogether. it doesn't make much sense to me. and also there are not a lot of notes (i.e. note density is not high on this phase) so there is no reason for you not to follow the pitch accurately.

00:44:884 (44884|2,45192|1) - jack them for PR, make the lower LNs into 3/4 instead of 4/4. this is the correct snap. this is 4star+ insane, there should not be a reason to simplify the pitch snap for simplicity since 4star is not simple at all.

01:02:423 (62423|0) - what are you following? the BG piano chord? if yes then the end is wrong, should be 4/4 line longer, until the next chord spam.
at 01:06:423 - here
01:07:346 (67346|3) - same reason
01:12:269 (72269|0) - ^^^
01:17:192 (77192|3) - ^^

inappropriate overmap, there are a lot of ghost notes from this point onward
01:21:192 - until 01:28:576 - . i will point out to you SOME of them.
01:21:269 (81269|1) -
01:21:576 (81576|2) -
01:21:884 (81884|1) -
01:22:192 (82192|3) -
01:22:499 (82499|2) -
and so on. should be 3 notes stream. not full 1/4 stream.


01:31:038 - new phase, no reason not to use 3 notes, add to 1. (and also emphasised beat)
01:31:499 (91499|3,91499|0,91499|1) - << exactly the same with this here so keep it consistent.
01:42:115 - add a note to 1 for phase change and beat emphasis
01:42:423 (102423|0,102423|2,102576|2,102576|0) - should have 3 notes in total. same emphasis as
01:42:884 (102884|0,102884|1,102884|3) -
01:44:269 (104269|2,104269|1,104423|3,104423|0,104576|2,104576|1,104576|3) - 3 notes, beat emphasis.

01:47:038 - 3 notes, new phase and emphasised beat.
01:49:499 - ^^^^
01:50:730 - ^^^

01:51:961 (111961|0,111961|1,112269|2,112269|3,112423|3,112423|1,112730|1,112730|0) - should have 3 notes, beat emphsis.
01:53:653 (113653|3,113653|1,113961|0,113961|2,114115|2,114115|1,114269|0,114269|3) - 3 notes
01:54:423 (114423|2,114423|1,114423|0,114730|0,114730|2,114730|3,114884|3,114884|0,114884|2) - like this here

01:55:192 (115192|3,115192|0,115192|2,115192|1,115499|3,115499|1,115499|2,115499|0) - inconsistent and unreasonable, the pitch raise, but no increase in emphasis, no reason to utilise 4. 3 is enough just like the other nnotes before and after. revamp.
01:56:730 (116730|1,116730|3,116884|3,116884|0) - should be 3 notes, keep it consistent.
accepted all your mods, thank you
my map improved a lot
updated
HuwatCoolHensem

schwarzvgrune wrote:

HCH's Hard
your beginning is great, you take into account the difference in chord pitch and differentiate your 2 notes chord placement. :)
00:12:269 - how about utilising 3 notes? this is a new phase with emphasised beat. much more appropriate imo.
00:17:192 - ^same reason
00:21:346 (21346|0,21499|1) - wrong snap. should be 3/4 x 2. not 2/4 and 4/4. rearrrange.
00:20:884 (20884|1,21115|2,21346|0,21499|1,21730|2,21961|3,22115|0) - there are only LNs here, so take PR into consideration. current arrangement only takes care of hand balancing which is, illogical.
00:20:884 (20884|1,21115|2,21346|0,21499|1,21730|2,21961|3) - so change this to,
3 2 4 1 2 3
00:22:423 - new phase with emphasised beat, use 3 notes to signify. be careful with your emphasise, please take note of that.

00:31:961 - new phase, add to 4, should have 3 notes here to signify
00:41:807 - same reason
00:43:961 (43961|2) - move to 1, no reason to jack at 3 for 3times
00:48:269 (48269|0) - move to 4, same reason
00:51:653 - add a note to 1, phase change with emphasised beat.

00:54:423 (54423|2,54730|2,55346|2,55653|2,56269|2,56576|2) - pattern very heavy on 3 and 4, rearrange to make them more balanced.
00:58:115 (58115|2,58423|2,58730|2,59038|2) - rearrange, no reason to do this. hand balancing is not very well spread in this phase.
00:59:192 (59192|1,59346|1,59499|1,59807|1,59961|1,60115|1) - this is also unreasonable, rearrange your pattern.
01:00:653 (60653|1,60807|1,60961|1,61115|1,61269|1,61423|1) - this too, you leave 4 column blank, rearrange for balance.
01:01:499 - phase change, ought to have 3 notes to denote and signify
01:25:499 (85499|3,85653|2,85807|1,85961|2,86115|1,86115|3,86269|2,86423|1) - 1 is empty, rearrange, not very balanced.

01:31:038 - phase change with emphasised beat, 3 notes ought to be here.
01:35:961 - ^^^
01:38:423 - ^^
01:42:115 - should be 3 notes here same reason
01:43:807 (103807|3,103807|0,103807|1) - unreasonable, should be 2, you've been using two for the whole phase. the emphasis is the same, either use 3 for everything or use 2, and only use 3 for the place where i mentioned (more emphasised because of 4 x 4/4 beat signifier)
01:53:653 (113653|0,113653|3,113653|2) - ^

01:47:038 - add to 3 notes here
01:48:115 (108115|2) - move to 2 for hand balance
01:49:499 - add to 1, phase change, should be emphasised with 3 notes.
01:50:115 - add a note, inconsistnet with the rest of the pattern.

01:56:884 - phase change, should be 3 notes, rearrange.

01:57:961 (117961|1) - mvoe to 3 for hand balance.
01:59:346 (119346|2,119499|2,119653|2,119807|2,119961|3,120115|3,120269|0,120269|3,120423|0,120576|0) - bad chord pattern, rearrange everything. very heavy on jack that is unneccessary.


accepted all your mods, thank youuu ;w; <3
Aruel


Hi! Mod from M4M request!!

|1|2|3|4|5|6|7|

[General]
BG: 1366x768 No problem
MP3: 128kbps No problem
Spread: Fine
AI mod: Seems No problem
Audio and Hitsound: Just "Hit" sound haven't anything sound. It can be unrankable issue. Hitsound should can listen.
Timing: Seems good
Etc: Please turn off Widescreen support If you don't use SB
HCH's Hard has problem about HP and OD. Hp lower than Normal. I suggest make this OD:7.5 HP:7.5 or OD:7 HP:8 remember. It can be unrankable issue too.

[Normal]
00:14:730 ~ 00:16:884 - It's too hard in Normal. too heavy in 2.3 column.

00:19:423 - You can add note in here. has a sound.

00:31:961 ~ 00:36:884 - This part is too boring. you can add notes in white line.

00:44:730 (44730|1,45269|1) - Please don't think only pitch. It's kinda hard.

01:41:653 (101653|3) - How about change to LN? And finish that 01:41:807 - Here.

01:45:346 ~ 01:47:961 - 4 column seems lonely.

[HCH's Hard]

Patterns are repeat periodically. It will make players boring. ;w; Please consider it

00:16:884 - How about this? It's more be unaffected. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3419629

00:31:038 (31038|1) - Move to 4 for balance.

01:01:192 - It's more be unaffected. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3419636

01:50:730 - 2 notes pattern should be start in here. 01:49:499 -

01:50:730 - 01:51:346 - Why just used only two note? Same pitch with 01:49:499

[Insane]
This diff has some unnecessary LNs. Please becareful Some peoples think this overmapping ;w; Please consider it
00:19:346 (19346|3,19423|2,19499|1,19576|0) - It don't have to LN. Please change to just NM notes.

00:20:884 ~ 00:22:115 - About this pattern. 1.4 ->23 pattern should be start in here 00:21:499 (21499|0,21499|1) - It's very awkward If you play this. So... 00:21:499 (21499|1) - How about move to 4?

01:27:346 - This timing has some change the flow.

01:51:346 - Add one has finish sound.

02:01:192 (121192|3,121269|0,121346|3,121423|0,121499|2,121576|1,121653|2,121730|0) - It seems unnecessary LN.

It seems Nice map :3

Good luck
Another Lie
random mod from new owner
Rejected mod
Topic Starter
Valentrixe

_FrEsH_ChICkEn_ wrote:



Hi! Mod from M4M request!!

|1|2|3|4|5|6|7|

[General]
BG: 1366x768 No problem
MP3: 128kbps No problem
Spread: Fine
AI mod: Seems No problem
Audio and Hitsound: Just "Hit" sound haven't anything sound. It can be unrankable issue. Hitsound should can listen. | we already discuss this in IRC
Timing: Seems good
Etc: Please turn off Widescreen support If you don't use SB | okay
HCH's Hard has problem about HP and OD. Hp lower than Normal. I suggest make this OD:7.5 HP:7.5 or OD:7 HP:8 remember. It can be unrankable issue too. | okay

[Normal]
00:14:730 ~ 00:16:884 - It's too hard in Normal. too heavy in 2.3 column. | revamp this part

00:19:423 - You can add note in here. has a sound. | i think it's too hard for NM, so i'll keep this for now

00:31:961 ~ 00:36:884 - This part is too boring. you can add notes in white line. | added

00:44:730 (44730|1,45269|1) - Please don't think only pitch. It's kinda hard. | it's not that hard, i'll keep this

01:41:653 (101653|3) - How about change to LN? And finish that 01:41:807 - Here. | changed

01:45:346 ~ 01:47:961 - 4 column seems lonely. | it's not lonely anymore ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)

[Insane]
This diff has some unnecessary LNs. Please becareful Some peoples think this overmapping ;w; Please consider it | okay probably you right
00:19:346 (19346|3,19423|2,19499|1,19576|0) - It don't have to LN. Please change to just NM notes. | changed

00:20:884 ~ 00:22:115 - About this pattern. 1.4 ->23 pattern should be start in here 00:21:499 (21499|0,21499|1) - It's very awkward If you play this. So... 00:21:499 (21499|1) - How about move to 4? | great! changed

01:27:346 - This timing has some change the flow. | ohh you right

01:51:346 - Add one has finish sound. | added

02:01:192 (121192|3,121269|0,121346|3,121423|0,121499|2,121576|1,121653|2,121730|0) - It seems unnecessary LN. | deleted

It seems Nice map :3 thank you :P

Good luck

Another Lie wrote:

random mod from new owner

Insane
00:41:961 - add note to 3 | why? no
00:42:576 - add note to 2 and 4 | ^
00:43:192 - add note to 3 | ^
00:43:499 - add note to 3 | ^
00:43:807 - add note to 2 | ^
00:44:115 - add note to 2 | ^
00:44:423 - add note to 2 | ^
00:44:730 (44730|1) - kalau bisa end nya di 00:45:192 tapi sebelum itu pindahin 00:45:269 (45269|1) - startnya ke 00:45:346 | itu udah bener tempat nya, coba aku tanya pendapat dari modder lain
00:45:038 - add note to 3 | no
00:45:653 - add note to 3 | ^
00:45:961 - add note to 4 | ^
00:46:269 - add note to 3 | ^
00:46:884 - add note to 3 | ^
00:47:192 - add note to 1 | ^
00:47:499 - add note to 1 | ^
00:48:115 - add note to 2 | ^
00:48:423 - add note to 4 | ^
00:48:730 - add note to 4 | ^
00:49:038 - add note to 4 | ^
00:49:346 - add note to 3 | ^
00:49:653 - add note to 1 | ^
00:49:961 - add note to 1 | ^
00:50:269 - add note to 3 | ^
00:50:576 - add note to 3 | ^
00:50:884 - add note to 4 | ^
00:51:423 - remove | why?
00:51:576 - remove | ^
00:51:807 - add note to 2 | no
00:52:115 - add note to 2 | ^
00:52:423 - add note to 2 | ^
00:53:038 - add note to 3 | ^
00:52:884 (52884|0) - pindahin end nya ke 00:53:346 | ^
00:53:384 (53384|1) - pindahin startnya ke - 00:53:346 | ^
00:53:653 - add note to 3 | ^
00:53:961 - add note to 4 | ^
00:54:269 - add note to 4 | ^
00:54:884 - add note to 4 | ^
00:55:192 - add note to 4 | ^
00:55:499 - add note to 4 | ^
00:55:807 - add note to 3 | ^
00:56:115 - add note to 2 | ^
00:56:423 - add note to 1 | ^
00:56:730 - add note to 2 | ^
00:57:038 - add note to 4 | ^
00:57:346 - add note to 4 | ^
00:57:653 - add note to 3 | ^
00:57:961 - add note to 3 | ^
00:58:269 - add note to 2 | ^
00:58:576 - add note to 1 | ^
as mastah said:
00:20 Rido: kalo ngemap jgn dimasukin semua elemen2nya
00:20 Rido: kadang2 itu bikin map bosenin
thank you for the mod, but at least give the proper reason with your mod kay ;)
waiting huwat for update :|
Rido
mastah dengkulmu
YatsuKaori
Hi, Dari Queueku ;)

4K Key : |1|2|3|4|


just little mod NM, plus HD dan Insane belum bisa aku mod (masih belajar kaka :) )

NM
00:37:038 (37038|0) - hapus, ngga ada suara sama sekali disini
00:39:499 (39499|3) - ^
00:44:730 (44730|1) - move to 1
00:48:576 (48576|2) - move to 4
01:44:884 (104884|1,105038|2) - ctrl+J

semoga membantu dan GL~~
Topic Starter
Valentrixe

Lina Sintyadewi wrote:

Hi, Dari Queueku ;)

4K Key : |1|2|3|4|


just little mod NM, plus HD dan Insane belum bisa aku mod (masih belajar kaka :) ) | okay

NM
00:37:038 (37038|0) - hapus, ngga ada suara sama sekali disini | synth nya jelas di sana
00:39:499 (39499|3) - ^ | ^
00:44:730 (44730|1) - move to 1 | uhh sebener nya ini buat pitch, tapi yasudahlah, banyak yang protes. moved
00:48:576 (48576|2) - move to 4 | okay
01:44:884 (104884|1,105038|2) - ctrl+J | kay

semoga membantu dan GL~~ | makasi
updated
HuwatCoolHensem

_FrEsH_ChICkEn_ wrote:



Hi! Mod from M4M request!!

|1|2|3|4|5|6|7|

[General]
BG: 1366x768 No problem
MP3: 128kbps No problem
Spread: Fine
AI mod: Seems No problem
Audio and Hitsound: Just "Hit" sound haven't anything sound. It can be unrankable issue. Hitsound should can listen.
Timing: Seems good
Etc: Please turn off Widescreen support If you don't use SB
HCH's Hard has problem about HP and OD. Hp lower than Normal. I suggest make this OD:7.5 HP:7.5 or OD:7 HP:8 remember. It can be unrankable issue too.

[Normal]
00:14:730 ~ 00:16:884 - It's too hard in Normal. too heavy in 2.3 column.

00:19:423 - You can add note in here. has a sound.

00:31:961 ~ 00:36:884 - This part is too boring. you can add notes in white line.

00:44:730 (44730|1,45269|1) - Please don't think only pitch. It's kinda hard.

01:41:653 (101653|3) - How about change to LN? And finish that 01:41:807 - Here.

01:45:346 ~ 01:47:961 - 4 column seems lonely.

[HCH's Hard]

Patterns are repeat periodically. It will make players boring. ;w; Please consider it

00:16:884 - How about this? It's more be unaffected. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3419629

00:31:038 (31038|1) - Move to 4 for balance.

01:01:192 - It's more be unaffected. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3419636

01:50:730 - 2 notes pattern should be start in here. 01:49:499 -

01:50:730 - 01:51:346 - Why just used only two note? Same pitch with 01:49:499

[Insane]
This diff has some unnecessary LNs. Please becareful Some peoples think this overmapping ;w; Please consider it
00:19:346 (19346|3,19423|2,19499|1,19576|0) - It don't have to LN. Please change to just NM notes.

00:20:884 ~ 00:22:115 - About this pattern. 1.4 ->23 pattern should be start in here 00:21:499 (21499|0,21499|1) - It's very awkward If you play this. So... 00:21:499 (21499|1) - How about move to 4?

01:27:346 - This timing has some change the flow.

01:51:346 - Add one has finish sound.

02:01:192 (121192|3,121269|0,121346|3,121423|0,121499|2,121576|1,121653|2,121730|0) - It seems unnecessary LN.

It seems Nice map :3

Good luck

thank youuu ;w; <3
Adtw_
hai mz m4m nyaa~

1|2|3|4


Normal
Ranked

HCH's Hard
00:17:192 - why there's 3 note?
00:12:269 - ^
00:04:884 - http://puu.sh/jiAJB.png better flow
00:25:807 - try this http://puu.sh/jiACm.png better flow
01:00:115 (60115|3) - move to 3
01:00:269 - http://puu.sh/jiAXz.png
01:21:653 (81653|2,81807|3) - ctrl+g
01:23:653 - http://puu.sh/jiB2O.png
01:41:807 (101807|0) - change LN with circle
01:44:884 (104884|1) - move to 1
01:54:730 (114730|2) - move to 4
02:00:576 - http://puu.sh/jiBe6.png

Insane
00:22:423 - http://puu.sh/jiC8a.png
00:40:576 (40576|0) - remove
00:51:576 (51576|2,51653|1) - ctrl + g
01:27:346 - http://puu.sh/jiBGZ.png
01:31:653 (91653|2,91807|1) - ctrl + g
01:41:807 (101807|2) - move to 1
01:44:576 (104576|2) - remove?
01:44:884 (104884|1,104884|3) - move 1 column left

Udah segitu :P
Maaf modnya sedikit :(
Bingung gw, map nya udah bagus >,<
Goodluck :D
HuwatCoolHensem

Adtw_ wrote:

HCH's Hard
00:17:192 - why there's 3 note? | karena disuruh /? :'v ok deh diganti~
00:12:269 - ^ | ^
00:04:884 - http://puu.sh/jiAJB.png better flow
00:25:807 - try this http://puu.sh/jiACm.png better flow
01:00:115 (60115|3) - move to 3
01:00:269 - http://puu.sh/jiAXz.png
01:21:653 (81653|2,81807|3) - ctrl+g
01:23:653 - http://puu.sh/jiB2O.png
01:41:807 (101807|0) - change LN with circle
01:44:884 (104884|1) - move to 1
01:54:730 (114730|2) - move to 4
02:00:576 - http://puu.sh/jiBe6.png

MAKASEHH MZZ :**************
Satoshi Kazuki
i saw ur mod got rejected by Another Lie
but dont worry i take this map

Mod Requested From:

Normal
00:06:115 (6115|0) - move to 2
01:24:115 (84115|3,84269|2,84423|1) - move one column to the left <--
01:25:807 (85807|2,85807|2,85961|3) - ctrl + G
02:00:730 (120730|0,120884|2,121038|0,121192|2,121346|0,121499|2,121653|0) - remove all of this and replace with LN at - 02:00:576 (120576|2) - del and add LN at 1 - 02:01:807 - LN end here

i recommend to you to add some note at LN like
00:49:192 (49192|1) - this part

HCH's Hard
00:13:807 (13807|3) - what this LN for? it seems ghost to me
00:36:269 (36269|2) - to 1..try to balance it
00:59:653 (59653|3) - to 3
01:00:576 (60576|2,60653|1,60730|0,60807|3,60884|2,60961|1,61038|0) - ctrl + G then 01:01:192 (61192|2) - to 1
02:00:653 (120653|2,120730|1,120807|2,120884|3,120961|2,121038|1,121115|0,121192|1,121269|0,121346|1,121423|2,121499|3,121499|1,121576|2,121576|0,121653|1,121653|3,121730|0,121730|2,121807|1,121807|3) - pattern inconsistent..please rearrange

Insane
00:42:730 (42730|3) - true end are 00:42:884 - here
00:42:884 (42884|2) - ^ - 00:43:038 - ^
00:46:423 (46423|3,46576|2) - follow above
00:47:653 (47653|3,47807|2) - ^
etc...
01:21:192 - to - 01:31:038 - please rearrange...pattern out of flow

Good Luck :D
HuwatCoolHensem
Mod Requested From:


HCH's Hard
00:13:807 (13807|3) - what this LN for? it seems ghost to me | nope, thats not a ghost
00:36:269 (36269|2) - to 1..try to balance it | ~
00:59:653 (59653|3) - to 3 | ~
01:00:576 (60576|2,60653|1,60730|0,60807|3,60884|2,60961|1,61038|0) - ctrl + G then 01:01:192 (61192|2) - to 1 | ~
02:00:653 (120653|2,120730|1,120807|2,120884|3,120961|2,121038|1,121115|0,121192|1,121269|0,121346|1,121423|2,121499|3,121499|1,121576|2,121576|0,121653|1,121653|3,121730|0,121730|2,121807|1,121807|3) - pattern inconsistent..please rearrange | ~


Thank youuu ;w;
Topic Starter
Valentrixe

Satoshi Kazuki wrote:

i saw ur mod got rejected by Another Lie
but dont worry i take this map

Mod Requested From:

Insane
00:42:730 (42730|3) - true end are 00:42:884 - here
00:42:884 (42884|2) - ^ - 00:43:038 - ^
00:46:423 (46423|3,46576|2) - follow above
00:47:653 (47653|3,47807|2) - ^
etc... | they're called staccati, already explained in schwarzvgrune mod
01:21:192 - to - 01:31:038 - please rearrange...pattern out of flow | rearranged
everything else were accepted

Good Luck :D
phew, 1 month delay..
updated with some remaked pattern, hitsounds & background
Janko
hi
mod
|1|2|3|4|

[HCH's Hard]
OD=8 (AiMod suggestion)

00:22:423 - add note in column 2 (for beat) and:
* 00:22:576 (22576|1) - move to column 3

00:23:192 (23192|2) - move to column 2

00:24:576 (24576|0) - move to column 2 and:
* 00:24:884 (24884|3) - move to first column
* 00:25:038 (25038|0) - move to column 4

00:26:115 - add note (for beat)
00:26:730 - ^

00:28:576 (28576|3) - move to column 1 and:
* 00:28:730 (28730|2,28884|3) - ctrl+G (only change of position)

00:30:115 (30115|1) - move to colum 4
00:33:807 (33807|1) - ^
00:57:192 (57192|2) - move to column 1

01:31:499 - add note because in this part 01:31:038 - are 3 notes
01:33:499 - ^
01:33:961 - ^
01:34:423 - ^
01:34:884 - ^
01:35:346 - ^
01:36:423 - ^
01:38:884 - ^
01:39:346 - ^

01:46:961 (106961|2) - delete this note (ghost note?)
01:53:499 (113499|1) - ^
01:58:269 (118269|1) - ^
GL :D
-SoraGami-
Hi Val!~

here's my mod, sorry for delay xD
1|2|3|4

[Normal]
- 00:19:884 - add? cuz you followed this sounds 00:18:576 - etc.
- 00:41:499 - add note, same sound with 00:40:884 - and
- also add here 00:41:807 - cymbals
- 01:22:423 (82423|3,82576|1) - move to left for balance and better flow and also to follow some pitch
- 01:27:807 (87807|0) - move to 2, not same sound with 01:27:499 (87499|0) -
- 01:42:423 (102423|2,102576|2) - move to 4 for balance
- 01:46:576 (106576|1) - move to 1 for balance and pitch
[Hard]
- 00:19:653 (19653|2) - move to 4 for more comfortable flow
- 00:37:346 (37346|2) - move to 2 for balance
- 00:41:807 (41807|2) - move to 4 for comfortability also
- 00:45:807 (45807|2) - move to 4 to reduce the weight in the left side
- 00:52:269 (52269|2) - ^
- 01:30:038 (90038|0,90269|1) - ctrl + h suits better with the pitch
- 01:43:499 (103499|1) - remove, not that loud
- 01:53:346 (113346|2) - ^
[Insane]
- 00:52:576 - 00:47:653 - why this has 2 notes while 00:42:730 - 00:46:423 - has 3 notes? wats the correct one?
- 01:30:038 (90038|0) - move to 3 for pitch
- 01:40:730 (100730|3) - remove not that loud
- 01:48:576 (108576|3) - move to 1 for balance
- 01:50:576 (110576|3) - ^ (jacks at col 4 makes it imbalance
- 01:51:499 (111499|3,111499|0) - make it [23]?
- 01:54:115 (114115|3) - move to 2, different pitch
- 02:01:499 (121499|1) - you can remove this, causing imbalance pattern and too crowded on the left side

Nice Map ^^
Good Luck!
HuwatCoolHensem

Janko wrote:

hi
mod
|1|2|3|4|

[HCH's Hard]
OD=8 (AiMod suggestion) | how about 7.5?

00:22:423 - add note in column 2 (for beat) and:
* 00:22:576 (22576|1) - move to column 3

00:23:192 (23192|2) - move to column 2

00:24:576 (24576|0) - move to column 2 and:
* 00:24:884 (24884|3) - move to first column
* 00:25:038 (25038|0) - move to column 4

00:26:115 - add note (for beat)
00:26:730 - ^

00:28:576 (28576|3) - move to column 1 and:
* 00:28:730 (28730|2,28884|3) - ctrl+G (only change of position)

00:30:115 (30115|1) - move to colum 4
00:33:807 (33807|1) - ^
00:57:192 (57192|2) - move to column 1

01:31:499 - add note because in this part 01:31:038 - are 3 notes
01:33:499 - ^
01:33:961 - ^
01:34:423 - ^
01:34:884 - ^
01:35:346 - ^
01:36:423 - ^
01:38:884 - ^
01:39:346 - ^

01:46:961 (106961|2) - delete this note (ghost note?)
01:53:499 (113499|1) - ^
01:58:269 (118269|1) - ^
GL :D



Thank youuuuu ;w;
HuwatCoolHensem

-SoraGami- wrote:

Hi Val!~

here's my mod, sorry for delay xD
1|2|3|4

[Normal]
- 00:19:884 - add? cuz you followed this sounds 00:18:576 - etc.
- 00:41:499 - add note, same sound with 00:40:884 - and
- also add here 00:41:807 - cymbals
- 01:22:423 (82423|3,82576|1) - move to left for balance and better flow and also to follow some pitch
- 01:27:807 (87807|0) - move to 2, not same sound with 01:27:499 (87499|0) -
- 01:42:423 (102423|2,102576|2) - move to 4 for balance
- 01:46:576 (106576|1) - move to 1 for balance and pitch
[Hard]
- 00:19:653 (19653|2) - move to 4 for more comfortable flow
- 00:37:346 (37346|2) - move to 2 for balance
- 00:41:807 (41807|2) - move to 4 for comfortability also
- 00:45:807 (45807|2) - move to 4 to reduce the weight in the left side
- 00:52:269 (52269|2) - ^
- 01:30:038 (90038|0,90269|1) - ctrl + h suits better with the pitch
- 01:43:499 (103499|1) - remove, not that loud
- 01:53:346 (113346|2) - ^
[Insane]
- 00:52:576 - 00:47:653 - why this has 2 notes while 00:42:730 - 00:46:423 - has 3 notes? wats the correct one?
- 01:30:038 (90038|0) - move to 3 for pitch
- 01:40:730 (100730|3) - remove not that loud
- 01:48:576 (108576|3) - move to 1 for balance
- 01:50:576 (110576|3) - ^ (jacks at col 4 makes it imbalance
- 01:51:499 (111499|3,111499|0) - make it [23]?
- 01:54:115 (114115|3) - move to 2, different pitch
- 02:01:499 (121499|1) - you can remove this, causing imbalance pattern and too crowded on the left side

Nice Map ^^
Good Luck!

thank youuuuuuuuu
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