Sawai Miku - Colorful. (Asterisk DnB Remix) [OsuMania] · forum

Hanabira-

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Hanabira- 2015-07-09T08:22:06+00:00

Hello!

Very good song and very good pattern!

But, one Thing, I think the title is wrong...
The ED title is カラフル。, so the title must have '.'

(https://osu.ppy.sh/s/299454)

so the perfect title is ' sawai miku - colorful. (Asterisk DnB Remix)'

Frim4503

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Frim4503 2015-07-09T10:23:06+00:00

ok
will mod your map soon

JamesHappy

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JamesHappy 2015-07-10T10:44:03+00:00

Sorry for the late mod. I was supposed to post this last week, but got busy because exams so i didn't make it.

anyway this is some little mods for this map

column |1|2|3|4|5

00:54:717 (54717|2,54888|3,54888|1,55060|2,55060|0,55231|4,55231|1,55403|2) - try this (easier imo)

01:17:346 (77346|1) - what is this ln for?

01:32:603 (92603|1) - prefer to move this to 5 for balance

01:56:774 (116774|0) - if not intended, make the start of ln move to 01:57:117 and add some (2) 1/2 lns starting here 01:56:774

03:47:517 - missing note (?)

04:09:117 (249117|1) - prefer to move this to 5 for pattern and balance

04:30:717 (270717|4) - cut this ln up to 04:31:060 and add another ln starting 04:31:060 up to 04:31:574

04:35:860 (275860|1) - cut this too up to 04:36:203 and add another ln starting 04:36:203 up to 04:37:403

no kds for this

that's all. GL

Frim4503

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Frim4503 2015-07-11T14:53:55+00:00

JamesHappy15 wrote:
Sorry for the late mod. I was supposed to post this last week, but got busy because exams so i didn't make it.

anyway this is some little mods for this map

column |1|2|3|4|5

00:54:717 (54717|2,54888|3,54888|1,55060|2,55060|0,55231|4,55231|1,55403|2) - try this (easier imo) idk what you mean

01:17:346 (77346|1) - what is this ln for? hard to explain but it's follow some sound >.<

01:32:603 (92603|1) - prefer to move this to 5 for balance ok

01:56:774 (116774|0) - if not intended, make the start of ln move to 01:57:117 and add some (2) 1/2 lns starting here 01:56:774 keep

03:47:517 - missing note (?) forgot

04:09:117 (249117|1) - prefer to move this to 5 for pattern and balance ok

04:30:717 (270717|4) - cut this ln up to 04:31:060 and add another ln starting 04:31:060 up to 04:31:574 keep

04:35:860 (275860|1) - cut this too up to 04:36:203 and add another ln starting 04:36:203 up to 04:37:403 ^

no kds for this sorry but i can't. i'm always respect other mod by giving kudosu

that's all. GL

JamesHappy

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JamesHappy 2015-07-12T04:09:02+00:00

00:54:717 (54717|2,54888|3,54888|1,55060|2,55060|0,55231|4,55231|1,55403|2) - try this (easier imo) idk what you mean

i forgot to put the screenshot

or just ignore this if you don't want.

DJ Profetti

DJ Profetti 2015-07-12T06:48:33+00:00

m4m

column:0~4

mod

00:01:574 (1574|0) - move to 4
00:02:603 http://i.imgur.com/lYeFiFU.jpg?1 column 2 for heavy sound
00:03:974 http://i.imgur.com/EpfifAa.jpg?1
00:06:717 http://i.imgur.com/isXfaLe.jpg?1 heavy sound in 2
00:15:974 (15974|0) - move to 2
00:18:546 http://i.imgur.com/rvVeykj.jpg?1
00:34:317 (34317|3) - move to 0 and 00:34:488 (34488|0) - move to 3
00:53:860 http://i.imgur.com/ThqjcQo.jpg?1
01:00:888 (60888|4) - move to 1
01:02:946 http://i.imgur.com/nyXt4aJ.jpg?1
01:03:803 (63803|3,63803|1,63974|3,63974|1,64146|4,64146|2,64146|0,64317|1,64317|3) - ctrl+J
01:24:203 http://i.imgur.com/LEmBUoT.jpg?1
01:37:746 (97746|1) - move to 3
01:39:288 http://i.imgur.com/aD6qk4A.jpg?1
01:43:746 http://i.imgur.com/yBwRlJa.jpg?1
02:04:317 (124317|2) - move to 1 to make some change
02:08:088 http://i.imgur.com/StzOHO8.jpg?1
02:42:546 add note to make some tricks?
02:57:288 (177288|3,177374|4) - ctrl+J make some change in the end?
03:01:231 (181231|0) - move to 3
03:18:717 http://i.imgur.com/Fust59o.jpg?1
03:47:003 (227003|3,227174|2) - ctrl+J
03:57:803 (237803|3) - move to 0

good luck

Frim4503

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Frim4503 2015-07-12T07:18:58+00:00

Taiwan_CDZ wrote:
m4m

column:0~4

mod

00:01:574 (1574|0) - move to 4
00:02:603 http://i.imgur.com/lYeFiFU.jpg?1 column 2 for heavy sound
00:03:974 http://i.imgur.com/EpfifAa.jpg?1
00:06:717 http://i.imgur.com/isXfaLe.jpg?1 heavy sound in 2
00:15:974 (15974|0) - move to 2
00:18:546 http://i.imgur.com/rvVeykj.jpg?1
00:34:317 (34317|3) - move to 0 and 00:34:488 (34488|0) - move to 3
00:53:860 http://i.imgur.com/ThqjcQo.jpg?1
01:00:888 (60888|4) - move to 1
01:02:946 http://i.imgur.com/nyXt4aJ.jpg?1 already fixed in prev mod
01:03:803 (63803|3,63803|1,63974|3,63974|1,64146|4,64146|2,64146|0,64317|1,64317|3) - ctrl+J no. if you hear again there was an cymbal sound for tripple notes
01:24:203 http://i.imgur.com/LEmBUoT.jpg?1
01:37:746 (97746|1) - move to 3
01:39:288 http://i.imgur.com/aD6qk4A.jpg?1
01:43:746 http://i.imgur.com/yBwRlJa.jpg?1 i didn't follow drum in here
02:04:317 (124317|2) - move to 1 to make some change
02:08:088 http://i.imgur.com/StzOHO8.jpg?1 keep for now
02:42:546 add note to make some tricks? just follow drum
02:57:288 (177288|3,177374|4) - ctrl+J make some change in the end? keep
03:01:231 (181231|0) - move to 3 no. for balance
03:18:717 http://i.imgur.com/Fust59o.jpg?1
03:47:003 (227003|3,227174|2) - ctrl+J for balance
03:57:803 (237803|3) - move to 0

good luck

thank you for mod
will mod your map soon
other is ok

Adtw_

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Adtw_ 2015-07-13T04:59:22+00:00

Hai mz ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)

|1|2|3|4|5|

kotak

01:33:288 - add note 4, ada kick sound, reference 03:58:660 -
01:44:260 - add note 1, ada kick saran k sih kyk gini http://puu.sh/iXdmS.png
02:05:346 - delete salah 1 note? , soalnya ditempat lain cmn 3 buat sound itu, contoh 02:02:603 - 02:08:088 -
02:49:574 (169574|0,169746|1) - ctrl+h for balance
02:56:174 - smpai 02:57:374 - coba pke pattern ini http://puu.sh/iXcR8.png
03:00:888 (180888|3,181060|2) - http://puu.sh/iXer0.png
03:02:431 - add note 4, ada kick
03:13:403 - add note 4, ada kick
03:47:688 - add note 5, ada kick, lalu 03:47:860 (227860|4) - pindah ke 4
04:06:546 (246546|3,246717|1) - ctrl+h for balance
04:09:631 - add note 1, ada kick
04:20:603 - add note 5, ada kick
04:38:260 (278260|2) - move ke 1

Overall, well mapped

Lagunya enak :3
Good luck mz ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)

Frim4503

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Frim4503 2015-07-13T06:38:44+00:00

fix all

thank you for mod dk (>.<)

SpectorDG

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SpectorDG 2015-07-14T08:15:48+00:00

Спе's MOD FOR MOD

Click Me >.<

00:13:746 (13746|1,13746|4,13917|3,13917|0) - FOCUS THIS
00:13:917 (13917|3,13917|0) - Add note 3 (More loud music)
00:15:288 (15288|4,15288|0) - ^ (Add Note 3)
00:15:974 (15974|4,15974|2) - ^ (Add Note 1)
Listen to More Loud Music, It's 5K Okay ?
00:43:231 (43231|3,43231|2) - Move to 1,2
00:43:403 (43403|1,43403|0) - Move to 2,3
01:00:374 (60374|3,60374|2) - Move to 4,5
01:00:546 (60546|1,60546|0,60717|3,60717|4) - and add notes 3

02:13:146 (133146|1,133231|2) - Ctrl + G
03:19:574 (199574|4,199574|2,199746|1,199746|3,199917|0,199917|2) - O.O Remember for Down

04:26:774 (266774|1,266774|3,266946|1,266946|3,267117|3,267117|1) - Again, but change this play style, Add notes for Column

MOD End, Again check for Strong Beats okay
GL ~ Go For RANKED ! :3

Frim4503

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Frim4503 2015-07-14T10:04:27+00:00

thank you for mod but i just fix this cuz your mod is not make any sense
02:13:146 (133146|1,133231|2) - Ctrl + G

cuz that's the style it use 2-1-2-1-1-2-2

Harbyter

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Harbyter 2015-07-15T09:53:12+00:00

http://puu.sh/iZU3E/2576605319.rar

swith those hitsound with your , cutted useless lenght that only increase the file size

no kudosu

[sv]

suggest to change the formula cause those are quite bad done x.x

i understand what you wanted to do with those sv but if you noticed for average player that use 23 24 scroll the first effect of the sv like here 01:28:660 - doesn't display on the screen lol and then the last one after a big jump of the 1.5 is unpredicable so if you wanna change try those

01:28:317 - change in 0.10

01:28:660 - change in 0.70

01:28:703 - add in 1/8 0.10

01:28:746 - remove

01:29:003 - change in 0.80

01:29:046 - add 0.10 always in 1/8

01:29:088 - remove

01:29:346 - change in 0.7

01:29:431 - remove

01:29:474 - dd 0.80 in 1/8

01:29:603 - add 0.90

those formula for the other 2 section like this too here 02:57:460 - here 03:31:746 -

here 03:42:717 - we should apply different formula due to this additional crash here 03:43:746 -

so 03:42:717 - 0.50

03:43:060 - change in 0.10

03:43:146 - change in 0.60

03:43:403 - change in 0.10

03:43:488 - change in 0.70

03:43:746 - change in 3.00

03:43:788 - add in 1/8 0.75

03:43:831 - remove

[modderino]

01:54:203 (114203|4) - move in 3 ,avoid the jack at this point that is unconfortable

01:54:717 (114717|3,114888|0) - switch column for a better transition

02:06:546 (126546|3) - col 1 ^

02:06:717 (126717|0) - col 2 ^

04:31:746 (271746|3,271917|4) - switch column

04:39:117 (279117|0) - col 5

04:41:517 (281517|2) - col 2

04:41:860 (281860|1) - col 5

04:42:203 (282203|4) - col 2

04:42:717 (282717|4,282888|3,283060|4) - switch column

04:55:317 (295317|3) - sound here seems like an eco from this 04:55:060 (295060|1) - so i think it feels better if you move in 2

05:06:288 (306288|1) - ^ move in 5 and 05:06:374 (306374|4) - this in 2

05:09:117 (309117|2,309374|3,309631|2) - same pitch so move the second note in 3?

05:09:888 (309888|1) - suggest to remove, this echo is really poor ,don't suggest to map it

05:10:317 (310317|0,310574|2,310831|4) - move all in col 2?

Frim4503

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Frim4503 2015-07-15T14:38:57+00:00

thank you for mod Harby

you ask me for not give kudos, but i cant do that. cuz that's the way i respect other people mod

Harbyter

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Harbyter 2015-07-15T16:49:17+00:00

Frim4503 wrote:
thank you for mod Harby

you ask me for not give kudos, but i cant do that. cuz that's the way i respect other people mod

don't worry for the kudo :>

EDIT>

after a testplay

SPOILER

dat random miss ;w;

i think is better reduce the formula here

03:32:774 - --> 0.60
03:32:903 - --> 0.70
03:33:031 - --> 0.80

this because we played this section with a low speed already so those low speed change suits better for this section

fix this and is oky xd

Frim4503

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Frim4503 2015-07-16T05:39:56+00:00

thank you for the fix and testplay

i hope i can rank this map one day

Harbyter

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Harbyter 2015-07-16T12:57:09+00:00

Sure why not lol 1#bubz

Frim4503

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Frim4503 2015-07-16T16:48:57+00:00

thank you for the bubble

let's rank this lmao

troke

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troke 2015-07-17T05:01:19+00:00

semangat mas frim

Frim4503

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Frim4503 2015-07-17T09:24:29+00:00

oke makasih

lagi nyri BN lain nih

Kamikaze

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Kamikaze 2015-07-17T21:56:20+00:00

5K marathon dude nice
that actually may be a first if I'm not mistaken, go go!

Rinzler

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Rinzler 2015-07-18T03:55:28+00:00

oh yesssss, a 5K Marathon, can't wait for this

Verniy_Chan

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Verniy_Chan 2015-07-18T23:00:47+00:00

Huehue
5K Marathon Nice Desu..

Ikke Ikke~

Deep Sea

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Deep Sea 2015-07-23T16:21:46+00:00

fine 2#

Frim4503

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Frim4503 2015-07-24T12:52:26+00:00

thank you

and sorry to rsuh you

let's find some flame

Marirose

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Marirose 2015-07-25T05:07:20+00:00

good song,asterisk always great

,lemme shoot star first

Marirose

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Marirose 2015-07-25T05:08:57+00:00

seems im late lol,okay i ll do the last BN chechk

Marirose

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Marirose 2015-07-25T05:43:20+00:00

req from PM

col = 1 - 5

BG size ok
mp3 format ok
but there're some issue about hitsounds : http://puu.sh/jbZFY/9e13604f65.png and http://puu.sh/jbZLm/bba06cd2ca.png
replace them by http://puu.sh/jc0kh/1f23a829f4.zip

then pattern check

fix tags as :drum and bass saenai heroine no sodatekata saekano 冴えカノ how to raise a boring girlfriend (same as https://osu.ppy.sh/s/299454)

Last edited by Marirose 2015-07-25T15:24:01+00:00, edited 2 times in total.

Frim4503

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Frim4503 2015-07-25T06:48:12+00:00

thank you
i will replace the hitsounds after you done doing mod.
also i will fix tags same with amamiya yuko version

Kyousuke-

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Kyousuke- 2015-07-25T15:36:08+00:00

wow hype!
go go 5K marathon xDD

Marirose

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Marirose 2015-07-25T15:55:28+00:00

sv fits the song well, ok
col= 1 - 5

mod

00:27:288 (27288|4) - i prefer make this left hand,try this http://puu.sh/jcozt/b7c8804052.jpg
00:29:517 - ,00:29:688 - ,00:29:860 - ,00:30:031 - ,00:30:203 - ,there's a same sound each line,here's my idea http://puu.sh/jcoNh/c4c7480ea0.jpg
00:35:517 (35517|2,35688|4) - http://puu.sh/jcoRd/fc7c55ff1a.jpg ←better
00:40:831 - http://puu.sh/jcoTE/1dd9af845d.jpg
01:00:031 - http://puu.sh/jcoZv/936ec43847.jpg
01:17:346 (77346|1) - umm,i recommend delete this LN,the repattern this part,though if this LN followed with chord,its not a good for players
01:27:203 - http://puu.sh/jcpdo/a572f23ab8.jpg
01:40:660 (100660|4) - remove and repattern,sooooooo soft sound

02:08:260 (128260|0) - col4 better

02:29:174 - http://puu.sh/jcpmk/a771dc8b65.jpg
02:46:488 (166488|2) - remove then repattern

02:56:088 - http://puu.sh/jcpqX/2b6b254b20.jpg, then 02:58:831 - http://puu.sh/jcpuh/80e74c6fb5.jpg

03:09:803 (189803|3) - remove and repattern
03:55:060 (235060|0) - ^

04:05:517 (245517|4,245603|3) - ctrl+g

04:17:003 (257003|4) - remove and repattern

04:55:060 (295060|1,295317|1) - according to the pitch,they should be col4

05:11:003 (311003|0) - LN started 05:11:088 - ,btw i recommend you make LN col2,better to play

end

hope i could help with ur 5k map