00:27:288 (27288|4) - i prefer make this left hand,try this
http://puu.sh/jcozt/b7c8804052.jpg00:29:517 - ,00:29:688 - ,00:29:860 - ,00:30:031 - ,00:30:203 - ,there's a same sound each line,here's my idea
http://puu.sh/jcoNh/c4c7480ea0.jpg00:35:517 (35517|2,35688|4) -
http://puu.sh/jcoRd/fc7c55ff1a.jpg ←better
00:40:831 -
http://puu.sh/jcoTE/1dd9af845d.jpg01:00:031 -
http://puu.sh/jcoZv/936ec43847.jpg01:17:346 (77346|1) - umm,i recommend delete this LN,the repattern this part,though if this LN followed with chord,its not a good for players
01:27:203 -
http://puu.sh/jcpdo/a572f23ab8.jpg01:40:660 (100660|4) - remove and repattern,sooooooo soft sound
02:08:260 (128260|0) - col4 better
02:29:174 -
http://puu.sh/jcpmk/a771dc8b65.jpg02:46:488 (166488|2) - remove then repattern
02:56:088 -
http://puu.sh/jcpqX/2b6b254b20.jpg, then 02:58:831 -
http://puu.sh/jcpuh/80e74c6fb5.jpg03:09:803 (189803|3) - remove and repattern
03:55:060 (235060|0) - ^
04:05:517 (245517|4,245603|3) - ctrl+g
04:17:003 (257003|4) - remove and repattern
04:55:060 (295060|1,295317|1) - according to the pitch,they should be col4
05:11:003 (311003|0) - LN started 05:11:088 - ,btw i recommend you make LN col2,better to play
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