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Sawai Miku - Colorful. (Asterisk DnB Remix) [OsuMania]

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Frim4503
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Frim4503
ok
almost all applied and fixed. cuz is too many and make me confused

sorry for that bad note placement

also for schwarzvgrune i'm just mod your lower dif cuz i cant mod hard dif. it's always make me confused to see too many notes

schwarzvgrune
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Joined April 2014
schwarzvgrune
fair enough.
but your diff is already good. some people might argue that the pattern is not varied enough though (idk, who knows)
good luck :)
MEGAtive
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Joined August 2013
MEGAtive
Yo Juna~
Mod dri req PM (?)

Sawai Miku - Colorful (Asterisk DnB Remix)


Column
|1|2|3|4|5|

[Greget]
Mods
00:02:603 - Coba patternny jdiin kyk http://puu.sh/iFreS/c9cc67ed54.png . Lebih seimbang dan enak mencetnya.
00:04:317 - Coba pattern kyk http://puu.sh/iFrho/02d2f3f0dd.png . Lebih seimbang dan enak dibacanya.
00:10:488 - Coba repattern jdi kyk http://puu.sh/iFrlR/7ebef8cb34.png . Sama2 enak dibaca, tpi lebih seimbang.
00:26:603 - Coba pattern kyk http://puu.sh/iFrFi/b35aa7de7b.png . Lebih enak.
00:38:603 - D sini ad snare loh. Knp cuman 1 not? (1 LN kan buat String)
00:59:517 - Coba patternny jdiin kyk http://puu.sh/iFs0o/605c536465.png . Lebih relevan sm instrumen2nya.
01:02:431 (62431|4) - Delete. Sebelumny gk d map. Liat 01:01:060
01:56:431 (116431|1,116603|3) - Coba tuker kolom. Lebih pas sm instrumen dan pitchnya.
01:57:460 - Coba http://puu.sh/iFsaO/9b989e2c38.png . Lebih enak mencetnya.
02:03:460 (123460|2) - Coba pindah k 2. Lebih relevan sm instrumennya.
02:04:317 (124317|2) - Pindah k 2. Lebih relevan sm instrumennya.
02:05:346 - Tambah not lg. Kan 1 buat kick, 1 buat snare, 1 LN buat string, 1 lg buat tinggal Cymbal.
02:15:288 (135288|1) - Pindah k 1. Relevan sm instrumennya.
02:28:660 - Coba patternny jdi kyk http://puu.sh/iFsnK/06780e8ed8.png . Relevan sm model instrumennya.
02:33:288 - Gk triple? Kan d 01:04:146 Triple suarany sama.
02:36:031 - D sini kok ad not yg Jack, ad yg alternating dah? Model suarany sama padahal. Coba dibikin lebih konsisten.
03:35:517 (215517|1,215688|2,215860|3,216203|2,216374|3,216546|4) - Delete? Biar konsisten ngikutin suara pad doang.
04:28:831 - Model2 gini juga gk konsisten. Ad yg Jack, ad yg alternating. Coba dibikin konsisten.
04:59:860 (299860|4,300546|3) - Pianony gk bunyi. Delete aja.

Seenggakny ganti Diffnameny jdi "Colorful", "Vibrant", atau "Vivid" gitu.... Masa "Greget" :v
Anyway, Yay for an Asterisk DnB lel
Good Luck~
Frim4503
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Topic Starter
Frim4503
okay
fix all with some repairing with pattern

kagiii
720 posts
Joined June 2014
kagiii
here Mod Ready , M4M :3

Mods Greget Ver
[Gregets]
00:12:717 (12717|2,12888|1) - swap col? make it balance
00:20:946 (20946|2) - move ke col 1
00:27:460 - kek nya aku denger ny di sini deh ? buka di sini :3 00:27:631 (27631|0) - iykwim
00:38:603 (38603|2) - del , cukup 2 note kek ny lain
00:55:403 (55403|1) - del ^
01:00:031 (60031|2) - ke 4 balance ?
01:17:517 (77517|0) - ghost note
01:28:060 (88060|2,88146|3,88231|4) - swap col ? , agak bosen si stairs ny :'v , just opini
01:36:888 (96888|2) - move ke 2 balance
02:03:631 (123631|2,123631|4) - wut ?? del satu?
02:05:346 - same reason ama yg di atas"
02:06:203 - del 1 , gk keras
02:15:460 (135460|2,135631|1) - swap col?
03:43:746 - add note , clap?
03:48:888 (228888|0) - move ke 3
03:57:974 - how but dis ? http://puu.sh/iFScS/d3fc9e6de7.png lebih ke baca meybeh?
04:14:431 (254431|1) - move ke 4 , balance
04:27:974 (267974|3) - del ?
04:31:574 - dis??
04:55:317 (295317|3) - gagal paham ;w;
04:59:603 (299603|1,300288|4) - this too
05:05:260 (305260|1,305517|4,305774|2,306031|4,306288|1) - meybeh ?
05:09:117 - and all xD

ok done :3 , good luck Frim :)
Frim4503
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Frim4503

ExKagii- wrote:

here Mod Ready , M4M :3

Mods Greget Ver
[Gregets]
00:12:717 (12717|2,12888|1) - swap col? make it balance no. following prev. pattern 00:12:203 (12203|1,12374|2) -
00:20:946 (20946|2) - move ke col 1 nanti jdi mr. jack
00:27:460 - kek nya aku denger ny di sini deh ? buka di sini :3 00:27:631 (27631|0) - iykwim already fix from prev. mod
00:38:603 (38603|2) - del , cukup 2 note kek ny lain bukannya udh 2 ?
00:55:403 (55403|1) - del ^ for cymbal sound
01:00:031 (60031|2) - ke 4 balance ? keep for pitch and sound better
01:17:517 (77517|0) - ghost note ada suara hithat om. coba dengerin pake playback 50%
01:28:060 (88060|2,88146|3,88231|4) - swap col ? , agak bosen si stairs ny :'v , just opini keep for now
01:36:888 (96888|2) - move ke 2 balance ok
02:03:631 (123631|2,123631|4) - wut ?? del satu? why? it's same sound as 02:02:946 (122946|3,122946|1) -
02:05:346 - same reason ama yg di atas" cymbal
02:06:203 - del 1 , gk keras ^^
02:15:460 (135460|2,135631|1) - swap col? nice idea
03:43:746 - add note , clap? maksudnya 3 note ? no
03:48:888 (228888|0) - move ke 3 keep. to many note in 3 03:47:860 (227860|2,228203|2,228546|2) -
03:57:974 - how but dis ? http://puu.sh/iFScS/d3fc9e6de7.png lebih ke baca meybeh? ok
04:14:431 (254431|1) - move ke 4 , balance ok
04:27:974 (267974|3) - del ? cymbal
04:31:574 - dis?? dat whistle and clap (2-2)
04:55:317 (295317|3) - gagal paham ;w; coba dengerin lagi pake playback 50%. dijamin bakalan paham
04:59:603 (299603|1,300288|4) - this too dat tho
05:05:260 (305260|1,305517|4,305774|2,306031|4,306288|1) - meybeh ? absolutely
05:09:117 - and all xD learning again :v

ok done :3 , good luck Frim :) thank you
thank you for mod


AlisceaSparku
704 posts
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AlisceaSparku
Hiiii~ Frim!
Very sorry for late mod :(

mod
00:36:203 (36203|2) - move to 5, " blast " effect for cymbals
00:36:031 (36031|4) - move to 3, to avoid ^
00:38:603 (38603|1) - move to 1, for comfortable play
02:29:517 (149517|0) - move to 2, opposite pattern of 01:00:374
04:44:431 - add note at 3? reference 04:41:688

Only a few mod :))
Nice map :D Good luck with your map!
Hanabira-
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Joined August 2013
Hanabira-
Hello!

Very good song and very good pattern!

But, one Thing, I think the title is wrong...
The ED title is カラフル。, so the title must have '.'

(https://osu.ppy.sh/s/299454)

so the perfect title is ' sawai miku - colorful. (Asterisk DnB Remix)'
Frim4503
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Frim4503
ok
will mod your map soon :) :D

JamesHappy
678 posts
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JamesHappy
Sorry for the late mod. I was supposed to post this last week, but got busy because exams so i didn't make it.

anyway this is some little mods for this map

column |1|2|3|4|5

00:54:717 (54717|2,54888|3,54888|1,55060|2,55060|0,55231|4,55231|1,55403|2) - try this (easier imo)

01:17:346 (77346|1) - what is this ln for?

01:32:603 (92603|1) - prefer to move this to 5 for balance

01:56:774 (116774|0) - if not intended, make the start of ln move to 01:57:117 and add some (2) 1/2 lns starting here 01:56:774

03:47:517 - missing note (?)

04:09:117 (249117|1) - prefer to move this to 5 for pattern and balance

04:30:717 (270717|4) - cut this ln up to 04:31:060 and add another ln starting 04:31:060 up to 04:31:574

04:35:860 (275860|1) - cut this too up to 04:36:203 and add another ln starting 04:36:203 up to 04:37:403

no kds for this

that's all. GL
Frim4503
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Frim4503

JamesHappy15 wrote:

Sorry for the late mod. I was supposed to post this last week, but got busy because exams so i didn't make it.

anyway this is some little mods for this map

column |1|2|3|4|5

00:54:717 (54717|2,54888|3,54888|1,55060|2,55060|0,55231|4,55231|1,55403|2) - try this (easier imo) idk what you mean

01:17:346 (77346|1) - what is this ln for? hard to explain but it's follow some sound >.<

01:32:603 (92603|1) - prefer to move this to 5 for balance ok

01:56:774 (116774|0) - if not intended, make the start of ln move to 01:57:117 and add some (2) 1/2 lns starting here 01:56:774 keep

03:47:517 - missing note (?) forgot

04:09:117 (249117|1) - prefer to move this to 5 for pattern and balance ok

04:30:717 (270717|4) - cut this ln up to 04:31:060 and add another ln starting 04:31:060 up to 04:31:574 keep

04:35:860 (275860|1) - cut this too up to 04:36:203 and add another ln starting 04:36:203 up to 04:37:403 ^

no kds for this sorry but i can't. i'm always respect other mod by giving kudosu

that's all. GL

JamesHappy
678 posts
Joined January 2014
JamesHappy
00:54:717 (54717|2,54888|3,54888|1,55060|2,55060|0,55231|4,55231|1,55403|2) - try this (easier imo) idk what you mean

i forgot to put the screenshot



or just ignore this if you don't want.
DJ Profetti
DJ Profetti
m4m

column:0~4

mod

good luck ;)
Frim4503
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Frim4503

Taiwan_CDZ wrote:

m4m

column:0~4

mod

good luck ;)
thank you for mod
will mod your map soon
other is ok

Adtw_
149 posts
Joined April 2014
Adtw_
Hai mz ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)

|1|2|3|4|5|


kotak
01:33:288 - add note 4, ada kick sound, reference 03:58:660 -
01:44:260 - add note 1, ada kick saran k sih kyk gini http://puu.sh/iXdmS.png
02:05:346 - delete salah 1 note? , soalnya ditempat lain cmn 3 buat sound itu, contoh 02:02:603 - 02:08:088 -
02:49:574 (169574|0,169746|1) - ctrl+h for balance
02:56:174 - smpai 02:57:374 - coba pke pattern ini http://puu.sh/iXcR8.png
03:00:888 (180888|3,181060|2) - http://puu.sh/iXer0.png
03:02:431 - add note 4, ada kick
03:13:403 - add note 4, ada kick
03:47:688 - add note 5, ada kick, lalu 03:47:860 (227860|4) - pindah ke 4
04:06:546 (246546|3,246717|1) - ctrl+h for balance
04:09:631 - add note 1, ada kick
04:20:603 - add note 5, ada kick
04:38:260 (278260|2) - move ke 1

Overall, well mapped :D
Lagunya enak :3
Good luck mz ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)
Frim4503
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Frim4503
fix all

thank you for mod dk (>.<)


SpectorDG
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SpectorDG
Спе's MOD FOR MOD
Click Me >.<
00:13:746 (13746|1,13746|4,13917|3,13917|0) - FOCUS THIS
00:13:917 (13917|3,13917|0) - Add note 3 (More loud music)
00:15:288 (15288|4,15288|0) - ^ (Add Note 3)
00:15:974 (15974|4,15974|2) - ^ (Add Note 1)
Listen to More Loud Music, It's 5K Okay ?
00:43:231 (43231|3,43231|2) - Move to 1,2
00:43:403 (43403|1,43403|0) - Move to 2,3
01:00:374 (60374|3,60374|2) - Move to 4,5
01:00:546 (60546|1,60546|0,60717|3,60717|4) - and add notes 3

02:13:146 (133146|1,133231|2) - Ctrl + G
03:19:574 (199574|4,199574|2,199746|1,199746|3,199917|0,199917|2) - O.O Remember for Down

04:26:774 (266774|1,266774|3,266946|1,266946|3,267117|3,267117|1) - Again, but change this play style, Add notes for Column
MOD End, Again check for Strong Beats okay
GL ~ Go For RANKED ! :3 :)
Frim4503
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Frim4503
thank you for mod but i just fix this cuz your mod is not make any sense
02:13:146 (133146|1,133231|2) - Ctrl + G

cuz that's the style it use 2-1-2-1-1-2-2

Harbyter
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Harbyter
http://puu.sh/iZU3E/2576605319.rar

swith those hitsound with your , cutted useless lenght that only increase the file size


no kudosu

[sv]

suggest to change the formula cause those are quite bad done x.x

i understand what you wanted to do with those sv but if you noticed for average player that use 23 24 scroll the first effect of the sv like here 01:28:660 - doesn't display on the screen lol and then the last one after a big jump of the 1.5 is unpredicable so if you wanna change try those

01:28:317 - change in 0.10

01:28:660 - change in 0.70

01:28:703 - add in 1/8 0.10

01:28:746 - remove

01:29:003 - change in 0.80

01:29:046 - add 0.10 always in 1/8

01:29:088 - remove

01:29:346 - change in 0.7

01:29:431 - remove

01:29:474 - dd 0.80 in 1/8

01:29:603 - add 0.90

those formula for the other 2 section like this too here 02:57:460 - here 03:31:746 -

here 03:42:717 - we should apply different formula due to this additional crash here 03:43:746 -

so 03:42:717 - 0.50

03:43:060 - change in 0.10

03:43:146 - change in 0.60

03:43:403 - change in 0.10

03:43:488 - change in 0.70

03:43:746 - change in 3.00

03:43:788 - add in 1/8 0.75

03:43:831 - remove




[modderino]

01:54:203 (114203|4) - move in 3 ,avoid the jack at this point that is unconfortable

01:54:717 (114717|3,114888|0) - switch column for a better transition

02:06:546 (126546|3) - col 1 ^

02:06:717 (126717|0) - col 2 ^

04:31:746 (271746|3,271917|4) - switch column

04:39:117 (279117|0) - col 5

04:41:517 (281517|2) - col 2

04:41:860 (281860|1) - col 5

04:42:203 (282203|4) - col 2

04:42:717 (282717|4,282888|3,283060|4) - switch column

04:55:317 (295317|3) - sound here seems like an eco from this 04:55:060 (295060|1) - so i think it feels better if you move in 2

05:06:288 (306288|1) - ^ move in 5 and 05:06:374 (306374|4) - this in 2

05:09:117 (309117|2,309374|3,309631|2) - same pitch so move the second note in 3?

05:09:888 (309888|1) - suggest to remove, this echo is really poor ,don't suggest to map it

05:10:317 (310317|0,310574|2,310831|4) - move all in col 2?
Frim4503
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Frim4503
thank you for mod Harby

you ask me for not give kudos, but i cant do that. cuz that's the way i respect other people mod

Harbyter
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Harbyter

Frim4503 wrote:

thank you for mod Harby

you ask me for not give kudos, but i cant do that. cuz that's the way i respect other people mod


don't worry for the kudo :>



EDIT>


after a testplay

SPOILER

dat random miss ;w;


i think is better reduce the formula here

03:32:774 - --> 0.60
03:32:903 - --> 0.70
03:33:031 - --> 0.80

this because we played this section with a low speed already so those low speed change suits better for this section

fix this and is oky xd
Frim4503
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Frim4503
thank you for the fix and testplay :)

i hope i can rank this map one day


Harbyter
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Harbyter
Sure why not lol 1#bubz
Frim4503
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Frim4503
thank you for the bubble :)

let's rank this lmao
troke
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troke
semangat mas frim :)
Frim4503
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Frim4503
oke makasih :)
lagi nyri BN lain nih
Kamikaze
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Kamikaze
5K marathon dude nice
that actually may be a first if I'm not mistaken, go go!
Rinzler
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Rinzler
oh yesssss, a 5K Marathon, can't wait for this
Verniy_Chan
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Verniy_Chan
Huehue
5K Marathon Nice Desu..

Ikke Ikke~
Deep Sea
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Deep Sea
fine 2#
Frim4503
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Frim4503
thank you :)
and sorry to rsuh you

let's find some flame
Marirose
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Marirose
good song,asterisk always great ;) ,lemme shoot star first
Marirose
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Marirose
seems im late lol,okay i ll do the last BN chechk
Marirose
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Marirose
req from PM

col = 1 - 5

BG size ok
mp3 format ok
but there're some issue about hitsounds : http://puu.sh/jbZFY/9e13604f65.png and http://puu.sh/jbZLm/bba06cd2ca.png
replace them by http://puu.sh/jc0kh/1f23a829f4.zip

then pattern check

fix tags as :drum and bass saenai heroine no sodatekata saekano 冴えカノ how to raise a boring girlfriend (same as https://osu.ppy.sh/s/299454)
Last edited by Marirose , edited 2 times in total.
Frim4503
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Frim4503
thank you
i will replace the hitsounds after you done doing mod.
also i will fix tags same with amamiya yuko version :)
Kyousuke-
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Kyousuke-
wow hype!
go go 5K marathon xDD
Marirose
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Marirose
sv fits the song well, ok
col= 1 - 5
mod
00:27:288 (27288|4) - i prefer make this left hand,try this http://puu.sh/jcozt/b7c8804052.jpg
00:29:517 - ,00:29:688 - ,00:29:860 - ,00:30:031 - ,00:30:203 - ,there's a same sound each line,here's my idea http://puu.sh/jcoNh/c4c7480ea0.jpg
00:35:517 (35517|2,35688|4) - http://puu.sh/jcoRd/fc7c55ff1a.jpg ←better
00:40:831 - http://puu.sh/jcoTE/1dd9af845d.jpg
01:00:031 - http://puu.sh/jcoZv/936ec43847.jpg
01:17:346 (77346|1) - umm,i recommend delete this LN,the repattern this part,though if this LN followed with chord,its not a good for players
01:27:203 - http://puu.sh/jcpdo/a572f23ab8.jpg
01:40:660 (100660|4) - remove and repattern,sooooooo soft sound

02:08:260 (128260|0) - col4 better

02:29:174 - http://puu.sh/jcpmk/a771dc8b65.jpg
02:46:488 (166488|2) - remove then repattern

02:56:088 - http://puu.sh/jcpqX/2b6b254b20.jpg, then 02:58:831 - http://puu.sh/jcpuh/80e74c6fb5.jpg

03:09:803 (189803|3) - remove and repattern
03:55:060 (235060|0) - ^

04:05:517 (245517|4,245603|3) - ctrl+g

04:17:003 (257003|4) - remove and repattern

04:55:060 (295060|1,295317|1) - according to the pitch,they should be col4

05:11:003 (311003|0) - LN started 05:11:088 - ,btw i recommend you make LN col2,better to play



end
hope i could help with ur 5k map :P

call me after fixed

btw,OD8.5 plz
Frim4503
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Frim4503
fix all


Marirose
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Marirose
good,ready to fire
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Frim4503
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thank you :)

but wait...not a fire ?
i thought this approved map :/
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