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xi - Mirage Garden

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P o M u T a
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P o M u T a
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2015年10月22日 at 18:30:01

Artist: xi
Title: Mirage Garden
Source: BMS
Tags: BOF2009 Parousia MELODIOUS Long Version pomuta PROGRESSIVE FUSION the of fighters revolutionary battles ROCK fen Tiyes Sink 100sec Records piano Charles445
BPM: 97.5
Filesize: 8940kb
Play Time: 03:49
Difficulties Available:
  1. Another445 (5.52 stars, 1350 notes)
  2. Beginner (1.79 stars, 239 notes)
  3. Exitra (6.33 stars, 1399 notes)
  4. Hard (3.45 stars, 587 notes)
  5. Hyper (4.45 stars, 920 notes)
  6. Standard (2.43 stars, 405 notes)
Download: xi - Mirage Garden
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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For Rank

Exitra:100% by:me
Another445:100% by Charles445
Hyper:100% by:me
Hard:100% by:me
Standard:100% by:me
Beginner:100% by:me
Last edited by P o M u T a , edited 66 times in total.
murasaki_sk
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murasaki_sk
最強
P o M u T a
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P o M u T a
やったぜ(震え声)
Akiyama Mizuki
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Joined March 2009
Akiyama Mizuki
Support. <3
P o M u T a
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P o M u T a
thnaks bbj :)
kunka
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Joined July 2012
kunka
From m4m～

Beginner
03:46:956 (5,1) - blanketずれてます
Standard
00:15:648 (2) - ctrl+Hの方が流れよくないですか？

00:29:665 (1) - こっからのパートがむずいです。まずコレ00:30:050 (2) - 1circleにしませんか？
次コレ00:30:819 (5) - 尻尾にfinishあるのでこっからstartしたいです。ですので1/2sliderにして次の00:31:396 (6) - をremove.で、さっきの尻尾のとこの00:31:204 - から00:31:396 - まで同じく1/2sliderとかどうですか？
次コレ00:31:589 (7) - 上記と同じく1circle.
次コレ00:32:262 (9,1) - これも上記同様、finishスタートの1/2slider.
と、そんな感じがしばらく同じ内容が続きます→00:33:030 (2) - 00:35:242 (8,1) - 00:36:010 (2) - 多分、大分スッキリすると思います。
後に同じフレーズのとこあるので検討してみてください。ここからとか00:41:683 (1) -

00:37:645 (6) - 何の音取ってるかちょっとわからなかった、、removeしてその前の00:37:164 (5) - をreverseにしませんか？同じような感じが数か所あるので検討してみてください。ココとか00:49:181 (5,6) - 03:27:729 (5,6) - 03:39:745 (5,6) -

03:12:923 (5) - 細かいかもしれませんがもう１マス下げませんか？x:36 y:136 03:12:539 (4) - との微妙な重なりが気になります。

03:16:193 (3) - 配置が03:16:289 - の感じします
Hard
00:21:195 (1,2) - ちょと重なりすぎません？

01:18:694 (1,3) - blanketずれてます

02:32:539 (4,5) - ^
Hyper
※これだけWidescreen付いてますん

01:15:236 (1,1) - blanket気になります。01:15:618 (1) - x:32 y:348でしょうか

02:38:693 (1,2,3) - ここのリズムが少しわかりずらいです、、こんな感じはどうですか？[jpg]http://puu.sh/iymcU.jpg[/jpg]

02:51:000 (1,2,3) - ^
Exitra
※英語が苦手です。「Exitra」（エキストラ）で良かったんだろうか、、「Extra」??（エクストラ） 発音の違い？僕は日本人である

00:01:942 (3,4,5) - (3)だけstackずらしてるのは意図的？

01:33:213 (4,5) - おもしろいけどやっぱちと困惑気味ｗ綺麗にしません？

01:46:867 (8) - これは罠ですか？そうですか。せめて01:46:963 (9,10) - を少し下にずらしませんか？ｗ


奥井雅美がjamメンバーというmodが嬉しかったです。ありがとうございますた。GL～
P o M u T a
2,284 posts
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Topic Starter
P o M u T a

kunkakunkakunkakunka wrote:

From m4m～

Beginner
03:46:956 (5,1) - blanketずれてます
Standard
00:15:648 (2) - ctrl+Hの方が流れよくないですか？ おｋです

00:29:665 (1) - こっからのパートがむずいです。まずコレ00:30:050 (2) - 1circleにしませんか？白線→青線というリズムをNormal難易度でやる方がリズムが難しいと判断してますのでkeepします。
次コレ00:30:819 (5) - 尻尾にfinishあるのでこっからstartしたいです。ですので1/2sliderにして次の00:31:396 (6) - をremove.で、さっきの尻尾のとこの00:31:204 - から00:31:396 - まで同じく1/2sliderとかどうですか？ この系統のパート全てfixします。
次コレ00:31:589 (7) - 上記と同じく1circle.
次コレ00:32:262 (9,1) - これも上記同様、finishスタートの1/2slider.
と、そんな感じがしばらく同じ内容が続きます→00:33:030 (2) - 00:35:242 (8,1) - 00:36:010 (2) - 多分、大分スッキリすると思います。
後に同じフレーズのとこあるので検討してみてください。ここからとか00:41:683 (1) -

00:37:645 (6) - 何の音取ってるかちょっとわからなかった、、removeしてその前の00:37:164 (5) - をreverseにしませんか？同じような感じが数か所あるので検討してみてください。ココとか00:49:181 (5,6) - 03:27:729 (5,6) - 03:39:745 (5,6) - drumの音ちゃんとあるんで問題ないと思われます。

03:12:923 (5) - 細かいかもしれませんがもう１マス下げませんか？x:36 y:136 03:12:539 (4) - との微妙な重なりが気になります。 自分の画面だと重なって居ないんですが、恐らく解像度の問題でしょうかね。。1だけ下げました。

03:16:193 (3) - 配置が03:16:289 - の感じします nice発見です。
Hard
00:21:195 (1,2) - ちょと重なりすぎません？ こだわりなんです。

01:18:694 (1,3) - blanketずれてます あんまりよく分からなかったのでこのままで。

02:32:539 (4,5) - ^ あんまり変わってないかもですが修正しました。
Hyper
※これだけWidescreen付いてますん

01:15:236 (1,1) - blanket気になります。01:15:618 (1) - x:32 y:348でしょうか おｋです。

02:38:693 (1,2,3) - ここのリズムが少しわかりずらいです、、こんな感じはどうですか？[jpg]http://puu.sh/iymcU.jpg[/jpg] う～んこのままで！

02:51:000 (1,2,3) - ^
Exitra
※英語が苦手です。「Exitra」（エキストラ）で良かったんだろうか、、「Extra」??（エクストラ） 発音の違い？僕は日本人である

00:01:942 (3,4,5) - (3)だけstackずらしてるのは意図的？なんでだろうねｗ　fixed.

01:33:213 (4,5) - おもしろいけどやっぱちと困惑気味ｗ綺麗にしません？ ピアノに合わせてスペーシング変えたんでこのままで！

01:46:867 (8) - これは罠ですか？そうですか。せめて01:46:963 (9,10) - を少し下にずらしませんか？ｗ 連打間隔で叩けるので問題無しです！


奥井雅美がjamメンバーというmodが嬉しかったです。ありがとうございますた。GL～
jam projectは永遠ですよ!ww
Backstep
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Joined September 2009
Backstep
Hi from Terra's modding queue~

General
- I worry about diff spread specifically Beginner and Standard have 1/4, 1/6 rhythm beat It's hard for newbie player when playing I think... (sign..)
- Some part it's 6/4 rhythm pattern (if you listen carefully) :/

Beginner
01:42:925 (1) - End slider use sampleset Normal to make like same previous rhythm?
01:45:233 (4) - Start slider use sampleset Normal same above reason.
02:32:539 (4) - Start slider add whistle.

Standard
03:03:308 (3) - At reverse I suggest use sampleset Normal here.
03:15:231 (1) - Too hard I suggest remove repeat...

Hard
01:29:271 (2) - Change direction of tail slider like this? http://puu.sh/iCniw/648d1eb26f.jpg
01:44:463 (1) - Move this end slider cover with (5) ?

Hyper
00:13:499 (7,8) - Looking hard reading a bit for me maybe NC at (7) ?

Extra
I can't mod sorry.

Sorry I can't help you much in this map, your arrange notes very good to me.

Good luck~
P o M u T a
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P o M u T a
all fixed thanks Backstep!
Akiyama Mizuki
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Akiyama Mizuki
OHH MY GOD CHARLES :DDDD
ItsLucas
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Joined March 2015
ItsLucas
General:
The 6/8 beat is honestly hard for beginners to handle. I spent some time handling that too. But, since it's the song's issue, it's kinda.. ok. This still fits the rule
Beginner
01:21:771 - I suggest that you may add a note here
Normal:
It's all good c: I didn't see any problems from my side
Hard
Suggestions: Maybe lower the AR to 7.0?
01:51:579 (1)
01:54:175 (1)
00:24:585 (1)
00:26:685 (1) - Think about Double-spinners. Honestly I see few beatmaps with double-spinners around star 3.5. Use a long one instead? Some people can't react that fast, and maybe scoring some low score on the second one.
Hyper
02:19:206 (2) - Maybe move this slider close to "3" (Distance)
Another445
Seems it's not finished, so I will not mod it now.
Extria

Sorry, it's way too far from my ability. But I think AR9 should be enough... This is already some Expert playing

All in all, this is a well-mapped song. Wish you good luck!!!
Abraxos
855 posts
Joined October 2014
Abraxos
I'll try my hand on the Extra Diff; since it's xi and xi songs are always out of this world.

General

  1. BPM and Offset : ( ✓ ) Lots of BPM changes, and I feel you managed to catch them well.
  2. Aimod : ( ✓ )
  3. Kiai : ( ✓ )
  4. Metadata : ( ✓ )
  5. Hitsound : ( ✓ ) Really nice hitsounding; accentuated certain parts of this song perfectly.
  6. Video : ( ✓ )

Extra

  1. 00:08:877 (1,2,3) - The stream leading onto these three notes are fast; so fast that the player had to awkwardly slow down and move to the left. It could be just me, but I'd prefer a smoother flow. Something like this?
    SPOILER
  2. 00:29:089 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - A horrifying 1/6 stream. But it's extra, so I understand. It's fun to play too.
  3. 01:10:620 (1) - Is this OK? To have this note underneath this slider 01:10:332 (4)
  4. 01:31:194 (3) - The pointy bit of this slider isn't exactly centered. Is this intentional?
  5. 01:33:021 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Why are the notes clumped together here?
  6. 01:51:579 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15) - This is pure madness. 156 bpm with 1/6 streams roughly means that the player has to tap 936 notes per minute. Which on second thought seems OK to me.

Overall

  1. I love how you managed to bring out the essence of xi in this map; it's hard, fun to play and complements the song really well.
  2. The flow was smooth, the jumps were fun, and the streams really murder people unprepared. Which is what xi songs do.
  3. If this map is going for rank, then I wish you all the best; given how nicely done this was, I don't see how it would be hard to rank this. Well in my opinion though. :)
Fookiz
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Joined June 2014
Fookiz
:)
Charles445
Elite Mapper II: Aspirant / osu! Paragon
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Joined March 2009
Charles445
Diff's done -> http://puu.sh/j3Tek/f18ba8baf5.osu (Another445)

yay
P o M u T a
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P o M u T a
update your diff!
yay

add tag Charles445 and changed previewpoint. please update!
done Exitra timing.
other diffs wip.
Silent Spica
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Joined May 2014
Silent Spica
I really love this map! Perfect mapset
P o M u T a
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P o M u T a
thanks \:D/
Tshemmp
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Tshemmp
I assume the diff name of Exitra is a typo? One "i" too much?
Also 00:25:062 (1) - why is there a NC here? Every previous slider pair had the same colour, why would you change it here?

Really cool map.

(no kd)
P o M u T a
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P o M u T a
done NC. (i was change timing section, so, i forgot remove NC haha)

and Exitra is E'xi'tra. joke name :D
Tshemmp
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Tshemmp
Oh I see, that's creative. :D
Phana
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Phana
This beatmap background. So beautiful! :) :)
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