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DJ Dain - Never Die

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crazymario
10 posts
Joined April 2010
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crazymario
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Friday, July 09, 2010 at 3:52:10 PM

Artist: DJ Dain
Title: Never Die
Source: Cave Story Remix Project
Tags: cave story final boss theme remix project never die
BPM: 190
Filesize: 2998kb
Play Time: 02:41
Difficulties Available:
  1. Beginner (1.55 stars, 81 notes)
  2. Crazy! (4.96 stars, 197 notes)
  3. Hard (4.77 stars, 170 notes)
  4. Normal (4.42 stars, 152 notes)
Download: DJ Dain - Never Die
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Ok, this is my first beatmap!

The song is a remix of the final boss theme from the game Cave Story.


Enjoy! :)
Real1
968 posts
Joined September 2008
Real1
Hi there! Grats on getting in the top of my newly opened queue. :P

Praise
  1. For a first map, this isn't so bad. You have some interesting patterns here, I must say. But there are quite a bit of things that need fixing. Are you ready?
General
  1. Large chunk of unmapped space. You need to cut the mp3. Do you want me to do that for you?
  2. Timing seems a bit off, but I'm not in mood of timing mod right now. Let's first get rid of the bigger faults in this map.
  3. Remove Cave Story, Never Die, and Remix from the tags since they are already in other places in the source or title
Beginner
  1. Lower the slidertick rate to make it easier for beginners.
  2. Repetetive!
  3. 01:00:631 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - You repeat this pattern for 21 seconds, twice may be alright... but it sure gets boring.
  4. This whole map contains like 3 different patterns. Variety is the key.
Normal
  1. Also repetetive, but at least with varied hitsounds.
  2. More variety!
  3. 02:07:421 (1) - All repeating sliders like this one should start on the next White tick instead of red. It makes it easier to read the notes, and it sounds better.
Hard
  1. Too repetetive, at least in that part with all the repeating sliders...
  2. 02:41:684 (1) - Using all kinds of hitsounds on this spinner just sounds weird.
Crazy
  1. 01:00:631 (1,2,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3) - 21 seconds with repeating sliders. Variety!!
  2. 02:41:684 (1) - Still, strange using all hitsounds on spinner

It's not BAD, but it needs to be less repetetive. Come back to me when you have worked more on this or if you have more questions!
Then, you will get star.
wmfchris
osu! Alumni
5,072 posts
Joined March 2008
wmfchris
[general]
~40 seconds before the opening, consider to cut some of the intro?
~Obvious spacing error. Use grid level 3 to re-snap all notes
~Don't repeatedly use the same patterns.
~Cut the later part of unmapped song.

[Crazy]
0:40~0:58 (1,2,3,4,...) Don't repeat this pattern too many times.
1:00~1:20 (1,2,1,2...) ^
2:06:631 (2) spacing
2:11:684 (2) ^
2:16:736 (2) ^
2:21:789 (2) ^

A nice try but needs more variation. Remap this one and good luck~ This is the star for encouragement~
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