yanaginagi - Haru Modoki [Osu|Taiko] · forum

Kyle Y

Joined November 2013

Topic Starter

Kyle Y 2015-04-22T15:48:44+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2015年10月22日 at 22:09:47

Artist: yanaginagi
Title: Haru Modoki
Source: やはり俺の青春ラブコメはまちがっている。続
Tags: yahari ore no seishun love comedy wa machigatteiru zoku Oregairu my teen romantic snafu opening 2nd season StarForYou walaowey Del05 TV Size Nardoxyribonucleic
BPM: 174
Filesize: 18152kb
Play Time: 01:29
Difficulties Available:

Del's Normal (2.03 stars, 163 notes)
Easy (1.53 stars, 102 notes)
Hard (3.3 stars, 251 notes)
Nardo's Muzukashii (2.77 stars, 318 notes)
Nardo's Oni (4.16 stars, 509 notes)
Starfy's Insane (4.47 stars, 340 notes)
Walao's Insane (4.72 stars, 361 notes)

Download: yanaginagi - Haru Modoki
Download: yanaginagi - Haru Modoki (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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やはり俺の青春ラブコメはまちがっている。続
(Opening)

1st Ranked。

←2nd mapset | This mapset | 4th mapset→

Enjoy the song~

Easy by Kyle Y

Normal by Del05

Hard by Kyle Y

Insane by StarForYou

Insane by walaowey

Muzukashii by Nardoxyribonucleic

Oni by Nardoxyribonucleic

Thanks for all guest diff mapper

9 Aug

by OzzyOzrock
7 Oct

by Mako Sakata
17 Oct Thanks sheela901 for fixing audio stream problem.
18 Oct

by HappyRocket88
22 Oct

by alacat
22 Oct

by HappyRocket88

Thanks for checking my map.

ED:

created by Del05 (Ranked)
included my guest diff, Ky's Insane

Last edited by Kyle Y 2015-11-15T02:54:50+00:00, edited 82 times in total.

Kawashiro

1,525 posts

Joined April 2012

Kawashiro 2015-04-24T02:56:13+00:00

Yo guy, Good Luck! I will mod and finish my hard this weekend

Kawashiro

1,525 posts

Joined April 2012

Kawashiro 2015-04-24T09:33:06+00:00

My Hard is finish~ (not hitsound)

Hard

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: yanaginagi - Harumodoki.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 58899
Countdown: 1
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 796,7693,18727,40796,58899
DistanceSpacing: 0.5
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 2.1

[Metadata]
Title:Harumodoki
TitleUnicode:春擬き
Artist:yanaginagi
ArtistUnicode:yanaginagi
Creator:Kyle Y
Version:UnLock's Hard
Source:やはり俺の青春ラブコメはまちがっている。 続
Tags:yahari ore no seishun love comedy wa machigatteiru zoku Oregairu my teen romantic snafu opening 2nd season
BeatmapID:684591
BeatmapSetID:305737

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:7.5
SliderMultiplier:1.4
SliderTickRate:1

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Startrick

361 posts

Joined June 2013

Startrick 2015-04-25T11:03:46+00:00

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Last edited by Startrick 2017-12-27T03:44:40+00:00, edited 2 times in total.

Mikii

393 posts

Joined August 2013

Mikii 2015-04-25T17:03:52+00:00

Hey M4M request

[General]

Hitsounding is essential. A basic drum beat to add on to your notes would be great
I think the rhythm is too inconsistent in the lower difficulties and you need to work on making them easier to read
Ctrl + Shift + a and fix your issues. Distance snap everything in easy and normal

[Easy]

00:07:670 (1) The pre verse is pretty much impossible to read for a beginner because most notes are snapped to red ticks. Try your best to snap them onto white ticks as it is easier for beginners to click to the rhythm.
00:20:946 (4) You see how this note was much easier to play? Its because everything else is on red ticks. Just showing you an example
I check the whole map. It feels like you changed the offset but you didn't put the notes back. If you think this is fine, please pm me and I can show you in more depth. Every part of the map feels inconsistent, is mapped to red ticks and basically, its unplayable
00:44:308 (1) Random spinner

I've checked the rest of your map and it would look like it would be much better to do and irc mod with you

SPOILER

17:18 Mikii: Hey man you there? I need to do and irc mod with ya :D
17:18 Mikii: an*
17:19 Mikii: hello?
17:19 Kyle Y: irc...?
17:19 Kyle Y: um..
17:19 Mikii: just a chat mod
17:20 Kyle Y: I know, I am concerning how long do it spend
17:20 Kyle Y: since it is 00:19 here
17:20 Mikii: how long will it take? well how long do you have?
17:21 Kyle Y: I know I need to get up at 7:00am
17:21 Kyle Y: half an hour I think is okay (?
17:21 Mikii: thats fine
17:21 Mikii: alright lets make this quick, have you tested your maps?
17:22 Kyle Y: I have played for several times
17:22 Mikii: can i spectate you playing easy?
17:22 Kyle Y: not played by you?
17:22 Mikii: i want you to play the map
17:22 Kyle Y: I think is okay
17:22 Kyle Y: okay
17:23 Kyle Y: without mods right?
17:23 Mikii: yes
17:24 Kyle Y: then maybe you update the map first
17:24 Mikii: ???
17:24 Mikii: i mean, can you play the easy song of your map?
17:24 Mikii: right now
17:25 Kyle Y: becasue I have updated my date once
17:25 Mikii: okay im redownloading
17:25 Kyle Y: okay
17:25 Mikii: okay you can start :)
17:27 Kyle Y: yep, sth like that
17:27 Mikii: okay we're just going onto editor to make a few changes
17:27 Kyle Y: okay
17:28 *Mikii is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/684589 yanaginagi - Harumodoki [Easy]]
17:28 Mikii: 00:70:670 (1)- start the slider here
17:28 Kyle Y: yep
17:28 Kyle Y: okay
17:28 Mikii: 00:08:187 (1)- end it here
17:28 Mikii: 00:08:532 (2)- place the hitcircle here
17:29 Mikii: 00:08:877 (1)- shift the slider to the left here
17:29 Mikii: 00:09:566 (2)- place the hitcircle here
17:29 Mikii: how does the this part sound now
17:30 Mikii: how do those 4 notes we change sound compared to the rest
17:30 Kyle Y: I can follow
17:30 Mikii: much better?
17:31 Kyle Y: but I don't want to use 1/2 beat in fact
17:31 Mikii: placing your notes on red ticks makes the easy map extremely hard for beginners
17:31 Kyle Y: okay...
17:32 Kyle Y: maybe 1.5 beat slider?
17:32 Mikii: i just wouldnt place your notes starting on a red tick
17:32 Mikii: do you know what i mean by a red tick?
17:32 Kyle Y: yep, I know it
17:32 Kyle Y: 0.5 beat
17:32 Mikii: right now the notes dont feel snapped to the song
17:33 Mikii: its because they arent placed on the drum beats which you are completely missing out on the white ticks
17:34 Kyle Y: okay
17:34 Mikii: you can't follow the map by the music but you have to do it by reading the approach circles
17:35 Mikii: thats what i felt when i played the easy map
17:35 Mikii: did that help?
17:35 Kyle Y: yup, maybe
17:35 Mikii: have you look at another easy map? do those feel easier to play
17:36 Kyle Y: I seldom play EZ
17:37 Mikii: i guess ill have to show you this
17:37 *Mikii is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/673198 yanaginagi - Harumodoki [Easy]]
17:37 Kyle Y: oh... the same map
17:37 Mikii: its my map
17:38 Kyle Y: yep, same song
17:38 Mikii:  can you compare the differences the my easy and your easy?
17:38 Kyle Y: of course
17:38 Kyle Y: wait for dning
17:40 Mikii: are you done?
17:41 Kyle Y: use a lot of 1/2 beat
17:41 Kyle Y: that's what I am avoiding in EZ
17:41 Mikii: uhhh
17:41 Mikii: 00:22:152 (2) you use quite a few here
17:41 Mikii: 00:22:152 (2)-
17:42 Mikii: 00:39:394 (3,4)-
17:42 Mikii: but thats not the point
17:42 Kyle Y: just a little
17:42 Mikii: i dont think thats the problem
17:42 Kyle Y: okay...
17:43 Mikii:  what are most of my notes snapped to
17:43 Mikii: white ticks right?
17:43 Mikii: does that play better than snapping your notes onto red ticks?
17:43 Kyle Y: yep, maybe
17:44 Mikii: so you're going to have to fix that, because i've never seen an easy map that has 90% of the notes snapped to red ticks
17:45 Mikii: okay?
17:45 Kyle Y: 00:19:049 (1,2,3,4) - is this red tick okay?
17:46 Mikii: you have to say to yourself, does it play better if it were on white ticks
17:47 Kyle Y: becasue I just map basic on the music
17:47 Mikii: what do you mean
17:47 Mikii: the notes are basic, they are spaced, but they're spaced on red ticks
17:47 Kyle Y: I know it is on red tick
17:48 Mikii: and its a huge issue
17:48 Kyle Y: okay then
17:48 Mikii: If you don't agree on me with that, then I'll have to end the mod :( because thats the main issue right now, rhythm
17:49 Mikii: okay?
17:49 Kyle Y: I agree then
17:50 Mikii: okay, if you can fix the red tick rhythm issues, that'll be great. because then the notes would be mapped to the drums
17:52 Mikii: but still i think we should leave it here, since need to sleep
17:52 Mikii: you*
17:55 Mikii: i hope this suggestion helped you, if you do disagree, feel free to say so

The same rhythm issues can be applied onto hard and it isn't just simple modding that can fix that when the whole map needs fixing.

Enjoy the mod!

Kawashiro

1,525 posts

Joined April 2012

Kawashiro 2015-04-26T05:51:20+00:00

Startrick wrote:
request by UnLock-

UnLock's Hard
AR 8이 더 좋아 보이는 것 같네요 - 수정
00:03:704 (7,1) - 두 개 뉴 콤보 바꿔주시는 건 어떨까요? - 수정
00:46:463 (1) - 여기만 슬라이더 느려서 100점 뜨고 리딩 문제 있을 수도 있을 거 같은데 사실 큰 차이도 안 보여서 빼거나 아니면 더 느리게 하는 건 어떠신지? - 오오, 수정!
제가 하드를 안 한 지 오래돼서 잘 모르겠는데 00:56:118 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 8연타는 그렇다 쳐도 시작은 00:55:773 (4) - 이거랑 붙여두심이? - 난이도 표기 오류입니다... 라이트 인세인으로는 적당하다고 생각함
01:05:081 (8) - 바로 전에 3연타 나왔는데 이건 좀 거리가 먼 것 같네요 - 난이도 표기 오류입니다... 라이트 인세인으로는 적당하다고 생각함
01:21:633 (6) - 이것도 5번 슬라이더랑 붙이는 게 좋을 것 같네요 - 난이도 표기 오류입니다... 라이트 인세인으로는 적당하다고 생각함
01:10:943 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2) - 제가 하드를 너무 쉬운 난이도로 보는가 싶기도 한데 이거 괜찮은 지 모르겠네요... - 난이도 표기 오류입니다... 라이트 인세인으로는 적당하다고 생각함

good luck

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Source:やはり俺の青春ラブコメはまちがっている。 続
Tags:yahari ore no seishun love comedy wa machigatteiru zoku Oregairu my teen romantic snafu opening 2nd season
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walaowey

952 posts

Joined March 2012

walaowey 2015-04-28T15:55:23+00:00

Hi Kyle >w</

My Insane GD is done

Walao's Insane

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Source:やはり俺の青春ラブコメはまちがっている。 続
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243,232,61457,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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194,137,84905,1,8,0:0:0:0:
292,224,85077,5,4,0:0:0:0:
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346,171,85595,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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320,303,86284,2,0,P|316:254|277:215,1,90,12|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
121,61,86802,5,2,0:0:0:0:
193,282,87146,1,2,0:0:0:0:
366,124,87491,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,192,87577,12,2,89215,0:0:0:0:

Good luck with it

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Starfy

1,046 posts

Joined November 2012

Starfy 2015-04-30T12:50:57+00:00

walaowey wrote:
Shoot a for you

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walaowey

952 posts

Joined March 2012

walaowey 2015-05-01T07:26:56+00:00

StarForYou wrote:
walaowey wrote:
Shoot a for you
~~Call me? lol~~
留個名sin ~

Loll..

Korey

141 posts

Joined August 2013

Korey 2015-05-04T10:48:20+00:00

Yo from #modreqs, sorry if my mod was bad i'm still learning and if you can could you explain why i was wrong so I learn for future mods thank you

General

the largest resolution allowed in osu for 16:9 is 1366x768 your background isn't and i assume you want the best quality so i suggest you fix that

Easy

00:03:698 (1,2) - i think what you've done in the last combo 00:02:319 (1,2) - fits better here because 00:04:043 - is a vocal and i think that's more important to start a note on in my opinion
00:12:664 (4) - not sure how retarded new players are but this changes back and forth fast and they might not expect it to do it an extra time? you could replace with a slider without repeats might be hard to put in though and redo blanket
00:23:181 (2,1) - i don't think it's good to overlap these on an easy i'd recommend spreading them out
00:27:491 - insert break?
00:38:353 (2,3,1) - hard to read?
01:06:112 (2,3) - arrow could be aiming to the middle of the bow? looks a bit crooked

Del's Normal

00:02:319 (3) - i think this should of been a 1/1 slider repeated once because your missing the vocal at 00:02:664 - should be fine though
00:03:353 (4,1) - put a slider here because i think that whatever you call the sound at 00:03:698 - isn't significant enough to have a note start on it
00:08:526 (4) - this is such a small blanket is looks unnecessary and would look neater in my opinion if you just made it straight or 3 point curved?
00:27:491 - insert break?
00:31:284 (5) - this slider longer and delete 00:31:629 (1) - and put a note at 00:31:974 - ?
01:00:595 (3,4) - i think this should just be one slider because the end of 01:00:595 (3) - isn't landing on any vocals

Hard

00:07:491 (2) - I ain't feeling this i think you should curve it
00:18:698 - I honestly don't think the slider velocity should slow down here it makes some of the sharp angled sliders look weird and i don't understand why you're changing between them and the curved sliders
00:23:440 - i think a note should be here?
00:27:491 - insert break?
00:34:733 (3) - should be curved in my opinion
00:51:284 (4,5,6,7) - just a suggestion i think it'd be better if two of them were stacked and then the next two were stacked? hope that made sense
01:03:181 (1,2,3) - 1 is closer to 2 looks uneven fix that

UnLock's Light Insane

00:02:146 - what's this here for unless my ears are dead there's no sound there
00:15:940 - how about getting rid of the break here and putting a 1/2 slider at 00:16:284 - and then a circle every beat from 00:16:802 - ?
00:18:181 (1) - i think it'd be better with two circles
00:23:181 (5,6,7) - the spacing shouldn't change here? it would just confuse and be harder to read in my opinion?
00:27:491 - insert break?
00:30:767 (4,7) - snap on perfectly by putting 7 right in front of 4 on the timeline i think this can apply to some other section of the map
00:36:284 (3) - slider shape feels out of place
00:43:353 (1) - ^
00:46:457 - slow down feels random
00:52:664 (3) - slider shape feels out of place
01:01:629 (1) - curving this more looks neater in my opinion
01:02:664 (4,5,6) - feels random you haven't had any triples the whole map and there are only two so i think you should remove them or make triples more frequent
01:23:698 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - feels weird kinda and doesn't really fit in my opinion try fitting some sliders or something there because i don't think that's working.

Starfy's Insane

00:03:008 (6) - I think you should ctr g this and repeat it once and delete 00:03:698 (1) -
00:59:560 (3) - this isn't necessary unless i'm retarded just repeat 00:59:215 (2) - if you don't want it too slow down
01:05:767 (1,2) - these are too spaced
01:21:629 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - keep in mind this is a bit hard to read i don't think it's much of a problem though
01:25:767 (3,4,5,6) - it'd be more appropriate if this was a repeated short slider

Walao's Insane

00:00:940 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - not the funnest/creative thing ever
00:26:112 (7,8,9,10,11,1) - i don't like this because it makes 00:26:457 (9,10,1) - feel less special
00:27:491 - insert break?
00:59:733 (2) - i don't think this is important enough to map and in my opinion the vocals should come first in the kiai section
01:20:767 (1) - personally think this would be cooler as a wavy or simply curved slider

Starfy

1,046 posts

Joined November 2012

Starfy 2015-05-04T11:06:41+00:00

ikorza wrote:
Starfy's Insane
00:03:008 (6) - I think you should ctr g this and repeat it once and delete 00:03:698 (1) - Humm seems not good because it broke the flow of 00:02:319 (5,6) -
00:59:560 (3) - this isn't necessary unless i'm retarded just repeat 00:59:215 (2) - if you don't want it too slow down I don't know why i can't put the note here, sorry for no change this
01:05:767 (1,2) - these are too spaced I think not really
01:21:629 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - keep in mind this is a bit hard to read i don't think it's much of a problem though I testplay-ed this a lot of time before and i found that this is not really hard to read imo
01:25:767 (3,4,5,6) - it'd be more appropriate if this was a repeated short slider Repeated slider is so weird when putting here

Tks for mod
No change

Korey

141 posts

Joined August 2013

Korey 2015-05-04T13:09:47+00:00

went through my mod together

IRC

20:49 ikorza: just wanted to let you know i've left a mod on your Map p/4121818#p4121818
22:20 Kyle Y: thx
22:20 Kyle Y: sorry that I saw it so late
22:21 ikorza: doesnt matter hope my mod helps
22:21 Kyle Y: are you free now? maybe I can edit my map now and talk about your modding also
22:22 ikorza: yeah im free
22:22 ikorza: i dont mind looking at it with you
22:22 Kyle Y: I only mapped EZ and HD
22:22 ikorza: ok
22:23 Kyle Y: and sfy's insane... I think he said sth about it on forum
22:23 ikorza: yeah i looked he had no changed
22:23 Kyle Y: He also keeps his mind
22:23 ikorza: which one you looking at firsT?
22:23 Kyle Y: but he is an one-ranked-map mapper
22:24 Kyle Y: EZ first? maybe
22:24 ikorza: ok
22:25 Kyle Y: for the slider 00:03:698 (1) -
22:25 Kyle Y: I think both are okay, as better to start slider on the white tick
22:25 ikorza: wait um
22:26 ikorza: 00:03:698 (1) -
22:26 Kyle Y: I think your modding also correct, maybe sth about mapping style
22:26 ikorza: this is white tick i think its better to have a repeated slider for the vocals
22:26 Kyle Y: 00:03:698 - there is a sound from gackground music
22:26 Kyle Y: background*
22:27 ikorza: i still think there should be a note there but not a slider
22:27 ikorza: because the sound doesnt really last long
22:28 ikorza: like same rhythm you got at 00:02:319 (1,2) - and put it At 00:02:319 (1,2) -
22:29 Kyle Y: maybe your are better
22:29 ikorza: you gonna do mine?
22:29 Kyle Y: I think it can be
22:29 Kyle Y: Then I just follow
22:30 ikorza: ok
22:30 Kyle Y: For 00:12:664 (4) - do you mean replace by 1.5 beat slider
22:30 ikorza: yeah
22:30 Kyle Y: In fact, I think simply words is okay for modding
22:31 Kyle Y: just like 00:12:664 (4) - change to 1.5 beat slider
22:31 Kyle Y: simple and easy to read
22:31 ikorza: yeah its an easy diff afterall
22:32 Kyle Y: This part I will change it later on
22:32 ikorza: ok
22:32 Kyle Y: In fact I am not familar with mapping EZ
22:33 Kyle Y: you said 00:23:181 (2,1) - seperate them
22:33 ikorza: yeah
22:33 ikorza: should be easy since you got space
22:33 ikorza: in the top left
22:34 Kyle Y: okay, and the pattern of slider 2 need to be change also
22:35 Kyle Y: btw do you think 00:26:974 (1) - a circle or a slider is better?
22:36 ikorza: another sound doesnt start at the end of the slider so i think a circle would be simplier
22:36 Kyle Y: For the break, I just try to not to use it. Since the whole mapset is mapped without break, and the HP is not quite high
22:36 Kyle Y: okay
22:36 ikorza: i think that because stars diff has a break there all should or he should nto so its all the same
22:36 Kyle Y: 00:38:353 (2,3,1) - this I will consider it
22:37 ikorza: ok
22:37 Kyle Y: I will ask he to remove it
22:38 Kyle Y: try to
22:38 ikorza: lol
22:38 Kyle Y: 01:06:112 (2,3) - what do you mean here?
22:39 ikorza: um
22:39 ikorza: its blanketed fine but
22:39 Kyle Y: oh.... you said blanketed and I know it
22:39 Kyle Y: fixed
22:39 ikorza: if you were to look at it straight 3 would be pointing to the right
22:40 ikorza: when it could be straight not really an issue but could be considered to perfect the map i guess
22:41 Kyle Y: yup, but no need to descript is too detail, as all mapper know what blanket is
22:41 ikorza: 01:11:629 (2,1) - this blanket could be better
22:41 Kyle Y: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3089118
22:42 Kyle Y: fixed
22:44 ikorza: i dont see much else wrong
22:44 ikorza: do hard now?
22:44 Kyle Y: any other modding in EZ?
22:44 Kyle Y: ookay
22:44 Kyle Y: 00:07:491 (2) - fixed
22:45 ikorza: 00:07:491 (2,2,3) - blanket \
22:45 ikorza: is this a blanket 00:14:733 (1,2) - ?
22:47 ikorza: 00:19:043 (2) - i dont like how you're changing slider style often just my opinion though but i think the map would be a lot neater if you kept consistancy
22:47 Kyle Y: oh yeah..
22:48 ikorza: 00:43:353 - i think a slider should start here and also slow down start here aswell
22:48 Kyle Y: I just want a little bit lower down and later on seems more fast only
22:49 ikorza: ok
22:50 ikorza: 00:58:698 (6) - how about a jump here?
22:50 Kyle Y: 00:43:181 (5,6) - I accept this
22:51 Kyle Y: I hate using jump in hard as I do want this hard be too hard
22:52 ikorza: maybe stack 00:58:353 (4,5) - those two instead too make 00:58:698 (6) - more emphasised
22:54 Kyle Y: then I stack it
22:55 ikorza: 01:22:664 (2,3,4) - distance these off the start so it looks more even by ctrl g temporarily
22:55 Kyle Y: I don't think a circle here 00:23:440 -
22:55 Kyle Y: 01:22:491 (1,2,3,4) - it is a kind of pattern?
22:56 Kyle Y: when you play it, you main draw half of it and then go to next slider
22:56 ikorza: wait what distance snap is it here ? 01:21:974 (5,1) - between those two notes
22:56 ikorza: wait let me see in play mode
22:57 Kyle Y: oh I know what you mean
22:57 ikorza: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3089182 like this
22:58 Kyle Y: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3089183
22:58 ikorza: yeah
22:58 ikorza: that looks better imo
22:58 Kyle Y: yeah, get it
22:59 ikorza: and about the bg
22:59 ikorza: according too some guys thread osu allows up to 1366x768 16:9 for your image
22:59 ikorza: you should get the right size
23:00 Kyle Y: I think this size is still okay, and it is still rankable
23:00 ikorza: ok well i dont see anything else
23:00 ikorza: do you have any other question bout my mod?
23:02 Kyle Y: btw, it is nothing about modding, but the modding style
23:03 Kyle Y: I think better to type [Hard] instead of Hard
23:03 Kyle Y: and adding spoilerbox for each diff becasue it is clearer for different diff
23:03 ikorza: ill try formatting my mods better
23:04 ikorza: ill just copy someone else lol
23:04 Kyle Y: and another problem, description is too long, some of them can be simply to said by few words
23:04 Kyle Y: maybe it is my modding style
23:04 ikorza: well
23:04 ikorza: i find it hard to like explain what i mean
23:05 ikorza: so i tend to write too much i guess
23:05 Kyle Y: I think reasons no need to be mention for some case
23:06 ikorza: do you want me to post chat log in beatmap thread?
23:06 Kyle Y: provides reasons only when you think his/her pattern is okay, but giving suggestion
23:06 Kyle Y: I don't know how to do that in fact
23:06 ikorza: i got it dw

no kds

Kyle Y

1,210 posts

Joined November 2013

Topic Starter

Kyle Y 2015-05-04T13:11:55+00:00

ikorza wrote:
Yo from #modreqs, sorry if my mod was bad i'm still learning and if you can could you explain why i was wrong so I learn for future mods thank you

SPOILER
General

the largest resolution allowed in osu for 16:9 is 1366x768 your background isn't and i assume you want the best quality so i suggest you fix that I think is okay

Easy

00:03:698 (1,2) - i think what you've done in the last combo 00:02:319 (1,2) - fits better here because 00:04:043 - is a vocal and i think that's more important to start a note on in my opinion fixed
00:12:664 (4) - not sure how retarded new players are but this changes back and forth fast and they might not expect it to do it an extra time? you could replace with a slider without repeats might be hard to put in though and redo blanket
00:23:181 (2,1) - i don't think it's good to overlap these on an easy i'd recommend spreading them out
00:27:491 - insert break? no change
00:38:353 (2,3,1) - hard to read? change if mentioned again
01:06:112 (2,3) - arrow could be aiming to the middle of the bow? looks a bit crooked fixed

Hard

00:07:491 (2) - I ain't feeling this i think you should curve it changed
00:18:698 - I honestly don't think the slider velocity should slow down here it makes some of the sharp angled sliders look weird and i don't understand why you're changing between them and the curved sliders just style?
00:23:440 - i think a note should be here? no change
00:27:491 - insert break? no change
00:34:733 (3) - should be curved in my opinion fixed
00:51:284 (4,5,6,7) - just a suggestion i think it'd be better if two of them were stacked and then the next two were stacked? hope that made sense fixed
01:03:181 (1,2,3) - 1 is closer to 2 looks uneven fix that fixed

IQR
20:24 Kyle Y: for the slider 00:03:698 (1) -
20:25 Kyle Y: I think both are okay, as better to start slider on the white tick
20:25 ikorza: wait um
20:26 ikorza: 00:03:698 (1) -
20:26 Kyle Y: I think your modding also correct, maybe sth about mapping style
20:26 Kyle Y: 00:03:698 - there is a sound from gackground music
20:26 ikorza: this is white tick i think its better to have a repeated slider for the vocals
20:26 Kyle Y: background*
20:27 ikorza: i still think there should be a note there but not a slider
20:27 ikorza: because the sound doesnt really last long
20:28 ikorza: like same rhythm you got at 00:02:319 (1,2) - and put it At 00:02:319 (1,2) -
20:29 Kyle Y: maybe your are better
20:29 ikorza: you gonna do mine?
20:29 Kyle Y: I think it can be
20:29 Kyle Y: Then I just follow
20:30 ikorza: ok
20:30 Kyle Y: For 00:12:664 (4) - do you mean replace by 1.5 beat slider
20:30 ikorza: yeah
20:30 Kyle Y: In fact, I think simply words is okay for modding
20:31 Kyle Y: just like 00:12:664 (4) - change to 1.5 beat slider
20:31 Kyle Y: simple and easy to read
20:31 ikorza: yeah its an easy diff afterall
20:32 Kyle Y: This part I will change it later on
20:32 ikorza: ok
20:32 Kyle Y: In fact I am not familar with mapping EZ
20:33 Kyle Y: you said 00:23:181 (2,1) - seperate them
20:33 ikorza: yeah
20:33 ikorza: should be easy since you got space
20:33 ikorza: in the top left
20:34 Kyle Y: okay, and the pattern of slider 2 need to be change also
20:35 Kyle Y: btw do you think 00:26:974 (1) - a circle or a slider is better?
20:35 ikorza: another sound doesnt start at the end of the slider so i think a circle would be simplier
20:36 Kyle Y: For the break, I just try to not to use it. Since the whole mapset is mapped without break, and the HP is not quite high
20:36 Kyle Y: okay
20:36 ikorza: i think that because stars diff has a break there all should or he should nto so its all the same
20:36 Kyle Y: 00:38:353 (2,3,1) - this I will consider it
20:37 ikorza: ok
20:37 Kyle Y: I will ask he to remove it
20:37 Kyle Y: try to
20:38 ikorza: lol
20:38 Kyle Y: 01:06:112 (2,3) - what do you mean here?
20:39 ikorza: um
20:39 ikorza: its blanketed fine but
20:39 Kyle Y: oh.... you said blanketed and I know it
20:39 Kyle Y: fixed
20:39 ikorza: if you were to look at it straight 3 would be pointing to the right
20:40 ikorza: when it could be straight not really an issue but could be considered to perfect the map i guess
20:40 Kyle Y: yup, but no need to descript is too detail, as all mapper know what blanket is
20:41 ikorza: 01:11:629 (2,1) - this blanket could be better
20:41 Kyle Y: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3089118
20:42 Kyle Y: fixed
20:44 ikorza: i dont see much else wrong
20:44 Kyle Y: any other modding in EZ?
20:44 ikorza: do hard now?
20:44 Kyle Y: ookay
20:44 Kyle Y: 00:07:491 (2) - fixed
20:45 ikorza: 00:07:491 (2,2,3) - blanket \
20:45 ikorza: is this a blanket 00:14:733 (1,2) - ?
20:47 Kyle Y: oh yeah..
20:47 ikorza: 00:19:043 (2) - i dont like how you're changing slider style often just my opinion though but i think the map would be a lot neater if you kept consistancy
20:48 ikorza: 00:43:353 - i think a slider should start here and also slow down start here aswell
20:48 Kyle Y: I just want a little bit lower down and later on seems more fast only
20:49 ikorza: ok
20:50 ikorza: 00:58:698 (6) - how about a jump here?
20:50 Kyle Y: 00:43:181 (5,6) - I accept this
20:51 Kyle Y: I hate using jump in hard as I do want this hard be too hard
20:52 ikorza: maybe stack 00:58:353 (4,5) - those two instead too make 00:58:698 (6) - more emphasised
20:54 Kyle Y: then I stack it
20:55 ikorza: 01:22:664 (2,3,4) - distance these off the start so it looks more even by ctrl g temporarily
20:55 Kyle Y: I don't think a circle here 00:23:440 -
20:55 Kyle Y: 01:22:491 (1,2,3,4) - it is a kind of pattern?
20:56 Kyle Y: when you play it, you main draw half of it and then go to next slider
20:56 ikorza: wait what distance snap is it here ? 01:21:974 (5,1) - between those two notes
20:56 ikorza: wait let me see in play mode
20:57 Kyle Y: oh I know what you mean
20:57 ikorza: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3089182 like this
20:57 Kyle Y: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3089183
20:58 ikorza: yeah
20:58 Kyle Y: yeah, get it
20:58 ikorza: that looks better imo
20:59 ikorza: and about the bg
20:59 ikorza: according too some guys thread osu allows up to 1366x768 16:9 for your image
20:59 ikorza: you should get the right size
21:00 Kyle Y: I think this size is still okay, and it is still rankable
21:00 ikorza: ok well i dont see anything else

Last edited by Kyle Y 2015-05-04T15:46:33+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Del05

482 posts

Joined May 2014

Del05 2015-05-04T13:47:58+00:00

Hi ikorza !
Thanks for give some mods.
And just for some information, in this diff i dont follow vocal but the drum sound, so maybe some slider aren't landing on vocal

ikorza wrote:
Del's Normal

00:02:319 (3) - i think this should of been a 1/1 slider repeated once because your missing the vocal at 00:02:664 - should be fine though Nope cause i dont follow the vocal
00:03:353 (4,1) - put a slider here because i think that whatever you call the sound at 00:03:698 - isn't significant enough to have a note start on it Nope i think it is fine because at 00:03:698 we can hear a piano sound and i think piano sound better using hit circle than using a slider
00:08:526 (4) - this is such a small blanket is looks unnecessary and would look neater in my opinion if you just made it straight or 3 point curved? Fixed
00:27:491 - insert break? Fixed
00:31:284 (5) - this slider longer and delete 00:31:629 (1) - and put a note at 00:31:974 - ? Nope cause if you do that you will skip the beat
01:00:595 (3,4) - i think this should just be one slider because the end of 01:00:595 (3) - isn't landing on any vocals Nope cause i map the rhythm not the vocal

My new code --> http://puu.sh/hB5EZ/98d0cfbe8d.osu

walaowey

952 posts

Joined March 2012

walaowey 2015-05-04T15:56:48+00:00

ikorza wrote:
Yo from #modreqs, sorry if my mod was bad i'm still learning and if you can could you explain why i was wrong so I learn for future mods thank you Hi there o/

Walao's Insane

00:00:940 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - not the funnest/creative thing ever nope I think its fine here, but if too many modders say about this..I will consider changing it
00:26:112 (7,8,9,10,11,1) - i don't like this because it makes 00:26:457 (9,10,1) - feel less special you mean i should emphasizes the (9,10) sound right.. Alright, I change something here.
00:27:491 - insert break? You're right
00:59:733 (2) - i don't think this is important enough to map and in my opinion the vocals should come first in the kiai section I think its fine here. If you listen closely, I'm trying to map the drum sound here. and during the kiai time I map base on drum sound not vocal.
01:20:767 (1) - personally think this would be cooler as a wavy or simply curved slider Yeah you're right, its definitely better now with curved slider

Thanks for the mod

Update is here Kyle

osu file format v14

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Mio_chan

172 posts

Joined July 2010

Mio_chan 2015-05-05T15:05:50+00:00

HK OSU!區求其搵野MOD~

Black mods are suggestions only
Blue mods are recommended to fix, or places need to pay attention to
Red mods are unrankable
Green mods are comments only.
黑色係建議
藍色係強烈建議改左佢，或者要留心
紅色係unrankable
綠色係純粹Comment

[General]
[Easy]
你成個正歌落紅線仲多過白線，其實對新手黎講好難玩…
00:04:819 (1) – 同下一個音太近，係00:06:457 –完?
00:07:664 (1,1) – 感樣對新手易D

00:15:767 (4) – overlap 左 (2)，唔好overlap
00:19:043 (1,2) – 我對呢個有D保留… 紅線既notes對新手黎講真係唔係咁易掌握，有心理準備其他人都會叫你改 (我都建議改)
00:24:215 (1) – 唔好overlap
00:44:215 (1) –我都係覺得同下個notes有D太近…
01:04:388 (1) – remove NC
01:19:905 (2) – 唔好 overlap
01:21:974 (1) – 你好多spinner都有呢個問題，同下個notes距離少個700ms，都未轉完下一set combo已經出曬黎

[Del’s Normal]
Plays quite nice for me, but idk whether the beat is too hard to catch for a normal
00:13:181 – I suggest changing 00:13:008 (3) – to circles and start (4) at here, because accent is located here.
01:09:388 (3) – change it to a 1/2 repeating slider? 01:09:560 – sounds missing sth imo

[Hard]
AR 7 HP5
00:07:146 (1) – 我建議呢個改左佢，少repeat一次啦，個light insane已經唔多1/4
00:18:698 (1,2,3) – 請參照[UnLock’s Light Insane] 00:18:698 (1,2,3)
00:21:457 (1,2,3) – 同上
00:35:250 (1) – 我覺得呢個anti-jump有D怪，你其他位都無落
00:40:365 (4,1) - – 呢個我好建議你改左佢，00:40:365 (4) –喺白線開始先易捉個感覺，另外個drum fill 本身係1/3，你00:40:767 (1) -落喺紅線到玩落好怪，同埋00:40:940 –應該係circle或然slider頭，fill in如之後音樂個beat唔同左好多，所以呢兩段應該分清楚，唔好用slider橫跨呢兩段
00:43:698 (1) – overlap得有D唔係咁好睇
00:50:250 (1) –blanket整得唔好
00:54:388 (4) – (nazi) 1 grid down
00:54:733 (1) – (nazi) x:196 y:284
00:59:733 (7,8,9) – 轉slider
01:06:802 (5) – delete, 重拍落左喺01:06:974 -，但係依家呢度係slider中間
01:09:560 (5) – 同上，重拍喺01:09:733 -，同埋呢個slider本身blanket都整得唔好
01:11:026 (4,5,6) – 對於你呢個mapset既hard黎講呢個真係有D難…
01:20:767 – 呢度唔應該係slider尾我覺得，都係重拍既問題
01:25:422 – 呢度vocal好出，無野有D怪
01:25:767 (3,4,5) – 轉slider

[Starfy’s Insane]
00:40:250 (3) – NC? 個1/3 fill in用NC會易睇D
00:45:853 (6) – 我覺得唔要呢個circle，整JUMP仲好
01:06:457 (3) –轉做兩個circles?
01:22:146 (8) – 睇死我www(我渣;_;)，OK既其實，唔係真係咁難
中文

[UnLock’s Light Insane]
HP – 1 or 0.5? I think light insane can be more lenient
00:18:698 (1,2,3) – this pattern suits better imo

00:21:974 – add a repeated arrows here? Since you following the vocal a lot
00:24:215 (3) – I think this flow better

SPOILER

00:45:767 to 00:46:284 – feels empty as there is drum fill in here
00:56:112 (8) – NC? The combo seems to be too long
01:10:940 (1,2) – I am wondering if this is too much for a light insane, since you have 2 harder insanes already, same goes for 01:21:284 (5,6)
01:18:871 to 01:19:388 – again feels empty due to drum fill in here

[Walao’s Insane]
OD + 1? Since there are 3 insanes and OD 7 is quite lenient in this BPM
00:00:000 to 00:06:457 – I think the finish hitsounds are too loud during this period.
00:19:991 – I think something is missing here. Since it’s very clear that there is a bass drum suound
00:26:629 (5) – add a 0.5x SV?
00:27:146 – why there isn’t break here but in starfy’s Insane does? This is even longer than that
00:29:129 – add note, due to drum sound
00:40:250 (4) – I suggest a NC here to indicate that you are following the 1/3 drum roll
00:40:940 to 00:51:974 – I personally dislike this part because the beat is halved but the intensity of your map has little change only, but that’s my personal preference only, just telling you what I think, you may just keep all of them if you think is fine.
01:00:250 (1) – the only 1/1 repeated slider in the whole map, remap this slider to something else?
01:20:767 (1) – This slider can be smoother

walaowey

952 posts

Joined March 2012

walaowey 2015-05-05T21:22:46+00:00

Mio_chan wrote:
HK OSU!區求其搵野MOD~

Black mods are suggestions only
Blue mods are recommended to fix, or places need to pay attention to
Red mods are unrankable
Green mods are comments only.
黑色係建議
藍色係強烈建議改左佢，或者要留心
紅色係unrankable
綠色係純粹Comment

[Walao’s Insane]
OD + 1? Since there are 3 insanes and OD 7 is quite lenient in this BPM Nope i think, I worry if somebody mess up during the stream part, It will cause them to fail. But if more modders suggest it, i will change it.
00:00:000 to 00:06:457 – I think the finish hitsounds are too loud during this period. Yes you're right. I have decrease the volume at this part.
00:19:991 – I think something is missing here. Since it’s very clear that there is a bass drum sound Fixed
00:26:629 (5) – add a 0.5x SV? I think 0.5x SV is too short, I try 0.75x
00:27:146 – why there isn’t break here but in starfy’s Insane does? This is even longer than that Sorry about that, last modder tell me to add it, maybe I forgot about it lol..sorry ..Anyway, fixed
00:29:129 – add note, due to drum sound Fixed
00:40:250 (4) – I suggest a NC here to indicate that you are following the 1/3 drum roll Nope, I think its ok here.
00:40:940 to 00:51:974 – I personally dislike this part because the beat is halved but the intensity of your map has little change only, but that’s my personal preference only, just telling you what I think, you may just keep all of them if you think is fine. I think its fine here though.
01:00:250 (1) – the only 1/1 repeated slider in the whole map, remap this slider to something else? Why not add some variance right, it will be too bold if its the same type of slider+circles only . But if other modders suggest to change that, I will consider about it.
01:20:767 (1) – This slider can be smootherImo, its quite smooth already, I'm trying the line up the slider body with the side stream circle.

Thanks for the mod

Update

osu file format v14

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AudioLeadIn: 0
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Countdown: 1
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StackLeniency: 0.7
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Title:Harumodoki
TitleUnicode:春擬き
Artist:yanaginagi
ArtistUnicode:yanaginagi
Creator:Kyle Y
Version:Walao's Insane
Source:やはり俺の青春ラブコメはまちがっている。 続
Tags:yahari ore no seishun love comedy wa machigatteiru zoku Oregairu my teen romantic snafu opening 2nd season StarForYou UnLock walaowey Del05
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Starfy

1,046 posts

Joined November 2012

Starfy 2015-05-06T12:26:03+00:00

Mio_chan wrote:
[Starfy’s Insane]
00:40:250 (3) – NC? 個1/3 fill in用NC會易睇D Fixed
00:45:853 (6) – 我覺得唔要呢個circle，整JUMP仲好 Fixed
01:06:457 (3) –轉做兩個circles? 我覺得slider好睇d w
01:22:146 (8) – 睇死我www(我渣;_;)，OK既其實，唔係真係咁難 \:D/
中文

Tks for mod
http://puu.sh/hDr7G/cf3ff4b177.zip

Kyle Y

1,210 posts

Joined November 2013

Topic Starter

Kyle Y 2015-05-06T15:13:12+00:00

Mio_chan wrote:
HK OSU!區求其搵野MOD~

Black mods are suggestions only
Blue mods are recommended to fix, or places need to pay attention to
Red mods are unrankable
Green mods are comments only.
黑色係建議
藍色係強烈建議改左佢，或者要留心
紅色係unrankable
綠色係純粹Comment

[General]
[Easy]
你成個正歌落紅線仲多過白線，其實對新手黎講好難玩…okay....
00:04:819 (1) – 同下一個音太近，係00:06:457 –完?fixed
00:07:664 (1,1) – 感樣對新手易D fixed

00:15:767 (4) – overlap 左 (2)，唔好overlapfixed
00:19:043 (1,2) – 我對呢個有D保留… 紅線既notes對新手黎講真係唔係咁易掌握，有心理準備其他人都會叫你改 (我都建議改)fixed
00:24:215 (1) – 唔好overlapfixed
00:44:215 (1) –我都係覺得同下個notes有D太近…fixed
01:04:388 (1) – remove NC fixed
01:19:905 (2) – 唔好 overlapfixed
01:21:974 (1) – 你好多spinner都有呢個問題，同下個notes距離少個700ms，都未轉完下一set combo已經出曬黎fixed

[Hard]
AR 7 HP5
00:07:146 (1) – 我建議呢個改左佢，少repeat一次啦，個light insane已經唔多1/4
00:18:698 (1,2,3) – 請參照[UnLock’s Light Insane] 00:18:698 (1,2,3) fixed
00:21:457 (1,2,3) – 同上fixed
00:35:250 (1) – 我覺得呢個anti-jump有D怪，你其他位都無落fixed
00:40:365 (4,1) - – 呢個我好建議你改左佢，00:40:365 (4) –喺白線開始先易捉個感覺，另外個drum fill 本身係1/3，你00:40:767 (1) -落喺紅線到玩落好怪，同埋00:40:940 –應該係circle或然slider頭，fill in如之後音樂個beat唔同左好多，所以呢兩段應該分清楚，唔好用slider橫跨呢兩段fixed, I think
00:43:698 (1) – overlap得有D唔係咁好睇 fixed
00:50:250 (1) –blanket整得唔好 fixed
00:54:388 (4) – (nazi) 1 grid downfixed
00:54:733 (1) – (nazi) x:196 y:284fixed
00:59:733 (7,8,9) – 轉slider Fix when mentioned again
01:06:802 (5) – delete, 重拍落左喺01:06:974 -，但係依家呢度係slider中間fixed
01:09:560 (5) – 同上，重拍喺01:09:733 -，同埋呢個slider本身blanket都整得唔好Keep 1 beat slider, but fixed blanket
01:11:026 (4,5,6) – 對於你呢個mapset既hard黎講呢個真係有D難…Fix when mentioned again
01:20:767 – 呢度唔應該係slider尾我覺得，都係重拍既問題Fix when mentioned again
01:25:422 – 呢度vocal好出，無野有D怪 um...
01:25:767 (3,4,5) – 轉slider Fix when mentioned again

Kawashiro

1,525 posts

Joined April 2012

Kawashiro 2015-05-07T09:34:21+00:00

ikorza wrote:
Yo from #modreqs, sorry if my mod was bad i'm still learning and if you can could you explain why i was wrong so I learn for future mods thank you

UnLock's Light Insane

00:02:146 - what's this here for unless my ears are dead there's no sound there
00:15:940 - how about getting rid of the break here and putting a 1/2 slider at 00:16:284 - and then a circle every beat from 00:16:802 - ?
00:18:181 (1) - i think it'd be better with two circles
00:23:181 (5,6,7) - the spacing shouldn't change here? it would just confuse and be harder to read in my opinion?
00:27:491 - insert break? - Delete 00:15:940 this break, Thanks
00:30:767 (4,7) - snap on perfectly by putting 7 right in front of 4 on the timeline i think this can apply to some other section of the map - fix
00:36:284 (3) - slider shape feels out of place - fix
00:43:353 (1) - ^ - ^
00:46:457 - slow down feels random
00:52:664 (3) - slider shape feels out of place - ^
01:01:629 (1) - curving this more looks neater in my opinion
01:02:664 (4,5,6) - feels random you haven't had any triples the whole map and there are only two so i think you should remove them or make triples more frequent
01:23:698 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - feels weird kinda and doesn't really fit in my opinion try fitting some sliders or something there because i don't think that's working.

Thanks~

Mio_chan wrote:
[UnLock’s Light Insane]
HP – 1 or 0.5? I think light insane can be more lenient
00:18:698 (1,2,3) – this pattern suits better imo - fix

00:21:974 – add a repeated arrows here? Since you following the vocal a lot
00:24:215 (3) – I think this flow better - fix
SPOILER
00:45:767 to 00:46:284 – feels empty as there is drum fill in here
00:56:112 (8) – NC? The combo seems to be too long - fix
01:10:940 (1,2) – I am wondering if this is too much for a light insane, since you have 2 harder insanes already, same goes for 01:21:284 (5,6)
01:18:871 to 01:19:388 – again feels empty due to drum fill in here - fix

Thanks~ ><

osu file format v14

[General]
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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 60250
Countdown: 1
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
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LetterboxInBreaks: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 796,7693,18727,40796,58899
DistanceSpacing: 1.3
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 2.1

[Metadata]
Title:Harumodoki
TitleUnicode:春擬き
Artist:yanaginagi
ArtistUnicode:yanaginagi
Creator:Kyle Y
Version:UnLock's Light Insane
Source:やはり俺の青春ラブコメはまちがっている。 続
Tags:yahari ore no seishun love comedy wa machigatteiru zoku Oregairu my teen romantic snafu opening 2nd season StarForYou UnLock walaowey Del05
BeatmapID:684591
BeatmapSetID:305737

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SliderMultiplier:1.4
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[Events]
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//Break Periods
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//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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happy623

1,436 posts

Joined April 2010

happy623 2015-05-08T19:54:35+00:00

halooo

General

With reference to the ranked version, you should change the title to Haru Modoki
consider adding "TV Size" into tags?
hmm, I'd suggest adding customized colours to the mapset ;w;
remove widescreen support as u dont have any storyboard in the mapset

Easy

其實整體黎講個Easy有d太難, 減少d 1/2 notes同slider,因為新手好可能比呢d1/2野fake死, for example :
00:09:905 (2,3) - 可以將佢地變做一個slider 之後用紅點將放係個slidertick度配合音樂
好似咁
00:18:181 (2,1) - 呢個1/2可以試下略過
00:08:526 (2,3) - 其實呢2個可以換做1個slider, 比佢易d, 好似你係 00:11:629 (2) - 做咁
00:18:698 (1,2) - 可以試下同樣變做1個slider
00:21:457 (1,2) - ^, 打後差唔多個d都試下咁做
00:25:077 (3,4) - 呢度其實反而怪左 ;w; 因為個strong beat係 00:25:595 -, 冇左反而唔自在, 呢度你可以由00:24:560 (2) - 開始變成2個sliders, (2,3)可以變做1條slider ; 00:25:767 (4) - 放上前去到 00:25:595 - 因為佢個vocal係呢度開始, 再拉到 00:26:112 - 完 :
圖可能更加明d
00:30:077 (1) - 為左少d 1/2 slider, 你可以試下咁放 :
00:42:664 (3,4,1) - 其實可以考慮向第2邊走
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00:49:043 (1) - 其實呢度反而係大白線開始, 可以縮到去 00:49:215 -
00:49:905 (2) - 試下咁? (個1係假設你fix左上面)
00:54:560 (1) - 同樣地應該放係大白線先開始
01:06:112 (2,3) - 本身你一入kiai用1/4, 但呢度換左1/2會搞到佢怪左, 所以你可以考慮將 (2)拉到 01:06:802 - 先完, 基於你如果改易左個diff, 呢度難少少都冇問題
01:09:215 (3,1,2,1) - try this? , 之後 01:11:629 (6) - 再NC番
01:19:560 (1,2,3) - 跟番後面個鼓 :
01:27:146 (2,3) - 換做1個slider? 冇咁難
00:29:215 (2) - good
00:34:733 (4,1) - 同樣呢2個可以變1個slider
00:12:319 (3) - NC, 因為你 00:09:215 (1) - NC左
00:15:077 (3,1) - swap NC, same reason
00:37:491 (1,1) - 刪走 00:37:491 (1) 同 00:39:560 (1) - 既 NC
00:54:043 (1) - 感覺冇咩特別原因要NC ;w;, 可以刪左個NC佢
01:12:664 (1) - 如果你 01:11:629 - NC左, 呢個就唔係太需要NC
00:44:215 (1) - unrankable, 一定要係個spinner完左停4beat, 姐係 00:47:491 (2) - 個條尾既大白線開始
01:22:146 (1) - 大白線開始, 不過咁樣後面就map唔到了orz 不如試下 1/4咁map埋佢
01:02:664 (3,3) - 盡量少d overlap, 可以改善美觀
01:19:560 (1) - 放低1格咁(3)個尾就可以置中d
01:21:629 (4,1) - 建議可以唔用soft, 唔係會冇咩打擊感Dx

Del's Normal

00:48:698 (2) - start at 00:48:871 - maybe? seems more comfortable to me
01:08:526 (1,2,3) - I'd prefer this way since it would cover the drums hit, also to make everything starts at strong beat
01:10:077 (4,5,6) - ^
01:15:422 (4,5,6) - well, as I see you making nice pattern for the violin in 01:09:388 (3,4,5,6) - , what about doing the same here?
00:09:560 (1,3) - swap NC for more consistency to the music? It may ruins the pattern tho xD
00:12:319 (1,4) - ^
00:18:008 (1,3) - swap NC here, since 00:18:698 - was the starting point after the intro of the song
00:46:457 (2,5) - how about making the tail of 00:47:664 (5) - to a perfect blanket with (2)'s head too?!
00:51:112 (1,3) - swap NC tooo , same reason for the changing rhythm
00:55:767 (4,5,6,1,2,3) - improve the hexagon pattern maybe? 00:57:491 (3) - could be moved a bit to right

Hard

00:04:733 (3) - 刪finish?因為呢part你都係起大白線放;w;
遲d同你irc左佢

UnLock's Light Insane

00:19:733 (4) - try to extend this slider until 00:19:991 -, if u listen the song with 25% playback rate, u will find that the drum is ended at here instead of 00:19:905 -
00:23:698 (1,2,3) - I'd prefer u place it like 00:20:940 (1,2,3) - , since (2) is placing on the strong beat at 00:21:112 -
00:34:733 (1,2,3) - ^
00:29:733 (1) - a finish missed here
00:40:077 (7,8,9) - I think you should try to map the drums behind as well since they are quite obvious
00:43:353 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - hmm, I guess u maybe following the vocal, but it will be a bit weird if u undermap those drums, just try to fill the undermapped parts, such as adding a slider at 00:44:388 -, add 4 notes from 00:45:767 - to 00:46:284 -
00:50:422 - ^
00:58:353 (6) - add a NC here ? For a better readability
01:00:250 (1) - start from here, the hitsounds are quite weird imo, I suggest u follow the music carefully, and add suitable hitsounds,
for example, u followed 2,4 white tick to add claps in 01:04:733 (5,9) - , so why not add 2,4 claps in other parts in this kiai as well? Besides, by listening the drum hit, there are many cymbals in each start of a stanza, so try to add some finishes to the big white tick when u notice
01:11:284 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - these jumps are not necessary, looking at this diff, these jumps were too sudden and didnt match the music at all, music didnt go to a sudden high or drop, soo just keep it as usual is enough imo
01:15:422 (5,6,7,8) - okay here, I am doubtful that these sliders are overmapped, when listening to the song, there are no drum hits in the blueticks, so adding drums here made it weird, you'd better remove them
01:22:664 (3,6) - ^
01:20:422 (3) - Oppositely, u undermapped here, try to change it into a reverse slider, and cover the triplets
01:21:198 - ^, add a note here too
01:21:629 (6) - ^, I believe u know what to map here to cover the drums

It needs more work imo, especially for the hitsounds, and the patterns in the last part, keep going @!@!@!@!

Starfy’s Insane

00:10:423 (1) - 唔add個finish?
00:13:181 (1) - ^, 類似既都考慮下
00:11:888 (6) - 會唔會overmap左 ;w;
00:18:181 (1) - 其實我揀會變2個notes跳可能仲好玩d
00:39:388 (7,8) - 兩個swap應該更加對個音
00:50:595 (1,2) - swap NC?
00:52:319 (2,4) - 試下唔好overlap x( 會好睇d
01:21:974 (7) - 呢個我唔太建議痴住, unreadable唔知rank唔rank到

Nice map, 不過kiai d 3/4唔太清楚比唔比, 最好問下駿媽

Walao's Insane

00:10:853 (2) - will this note be overmapped? I cant hear anything from behind
00:23:267 (2) - ^
00:35:508 (2) - ^ well I think u should better remove them, there should be more in this map
00:58:526 (7) - hmm, a Ctrl+G and drag 00:58:698 (1) - some grids up?, it flows better for me :
just in case if u dont understand what i mean
00:45:422 (3,4,5) - if you like, i suggest u increase the jump distance between 3 & 4, since 00:44:215 (2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - is a gradual jumps, so dont stop at 3,4 or it will make it not fun enough ><
01:10:940 (8,9,1) - let's make the jump larger, a sudden stop is quite sad xD, so make it more exciting

hope my mod did some help to ur mapset, good luck!@!@! feel free to find me if u have questions \o\

walaowey

952 posts

Joined March 2012

walaowey 2015-05-09T01:56:19+00:00

happy623 wrote:
halooo Halooo~ >w</

General
remove widescreen support as u dont have any storyboard in the mapset Ok

Walao's Insane
00:10:853 (2) - will this note be overmapped? I cant hear anything from behind Removed
00:23:267 (2) - ^ Removed
00:35:508 (2) - ^ well I think u should better remove them, there should be more in this map Yes, removed all of them
00:58:526 (7) - hmm, a Ctrl+G and drag 00:58:698 (1) - some grids up?, it flows better for me : Fixed
just in case if u dont understand what i mean
00:45:422 (3,4,5) - if you like, i suggest u increase the jump distance between 3 & 4, since 00:44:215 (2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - is a gradual jumps, so dont stop at 3,4 or it will make it not fun enough >< Ok, Add some jump xD
01:10:940 (8,9,1) - let's make the jump larger, a sudden stop is quite sad xD, so make it more exciting Lol, inb4 I have the short slider jump, but i thought its too hard so I make it closer lol..since u suggest it now, guess i will add that short slider jump again xD

hope my mod did some help to ur mapset, good luck!@!@! feel free to find me if u have questions \o\

Thanks for the mod >w</

Update

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Starfy

1,046 posts

Joined November 2012

Starfy 2015-05-09T03:44:08+00:00

happy623 wrote:
halooo waaaaaaa 6233333333333333333333333333333
Starfy’s Insane
00:10:423 (1) - 唔add個finish? Fixed \:D/
00:13:181 (1) - ^, 類似既都考慮下 Fixed \:D/
00:11:888 (6) - 會唔會overmap左 ;w; ok ;w;
00:18:181 (1) - 其實我揀會變2個notes跳可能仲好玩d 因為前面個note係1/8, note可能會有d難打
00:39:388 (7,8) - 兩個swap應該更加對個音 我覺得ok
00:50:595 (1,2) - swap NC? Fixed \:D/
00:52:319 (2,4) - 試下唔好overlap x( 會好睇d Fixed \:D/
01:21:974 (7) - 呢個我唔太建議痴住, unreadable唔知rank唔rank到

Nice map, 不過kiai d 3/4唔太清楚比唔比, 最好問下駿媽 Me think think sin ;w;

Thanksssssssssssssssssssssssss for moddddddddddddddddddddddd
http://puu.sh/hGE58/9dc8132e23.zip

Kawashiro

1,525 posts

Joined April 2012

Kawashiro 2015-05-09T05:42:41+00:00

happy623 wrote:
UnLock's Light Insane
00:19:733 (4) - try to extend this slider until 00:19:991 -, if u listen the song with 25% playback rate, u will find that the drum is ended at here instead of 00:19:905 -
00:23:698 (1,2,3) - I'd prefer u place it like 00:20:940 (1,2,3) - , since (2) is placing on the strong beat at 00:21:112 -
00:34:733 (1,2,3) - ^
00:29:733 (1) - a finish missed here - Fix
00:40:077 (7,8,9) - I think you should try to map the drums behind as well since they are quite obvious
00:43:353 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - hmm, I guess u maybe following the vocal, but it will be a bit weird if u undermap those drums, just try to fill the undermapped parts, such as adding a slider at 00:44:388 -, add 4 notes from 00:45:767 - to 00:46:284 -
00:50:422 - ^
00:58:353 (6) - add a NC here ? For a better readability - Fix
01:00:250 (1) - start from here, the hitsounds are quite weird imo, I suggest u follow the music carefully, and add suitable hitsounds,
for example, u followed 2,4 white tick to add claps in 01:04:733 (5,9) - , so why not add 2,4 claps in other parts in this kiai as well? Besides, by listening the drum hit, there are many cymbals in each start of a stanza, so try to add some finishes to the big white tick when u notice
01:11:284 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - these jumps are not necessary, looking at this diff, these jumps were too sudden and didnt match the music at all, music didnt go to a sudden high or drop, soo just keep it as usual is enough imo - Fix
01:15:422 (5,6,7,8) - okay here, I am doubtful that these sliders are overmapped, when listening to the song, there are no drum hits in the blueticks, so adding drums here made it weird, you'd better remove them - idk why it is a overmapping. actually, 3 circle stream is overmapping but its just 1/4 repeat slider. When play this map, it will never influence about difficulty and its not Unnatural
01:22:664 (3,6) - ^
01:20:422 (3) - Oppositely, u undermapped here, try to change it into a reverse slider, and cover the triplets
01:21:198 - ^, add a note here too
01:21:629 (6) - ^, I believe u know what to map here to cover the drums

It needs more work imo, especially for the hitsounds, and the patterns in the last part, keep going @!@!@!@!

I want to follow vocal's beat, so not changed all of beat
Thanks

Fixed

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: yanaginagi - Harumodoki.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 60250
Countdown: 1
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.5
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 2.1

[Metadata]
Title:Harumodoki
TitleUnicode:春擬き
Artist:yanaginagi
ArtistUnicode:yanaginagi
Creator:Kyle Y
Version:UnLock's Light Insane
Source:やはり俺の青春ラブコメはまちがっている。 続
Tags:yahari ore no seishun love comedy wa machigatteiru zoku Oregairu my teen romantic snafu opening 2nd season StarForYou UnLock walaowey Del05
BeatmapID:684591
BeatmapSetID:305737

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:7.5
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//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
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IamKwaN

osu! Alumni

3,905 posts

Joined August 2012

IamKwaN 2015-05-09T06:54:28+00:00

happy623 wrote:
UnLock's Light Insane
It needs more work imo, especially for the hitsounds, and the patterns in the last part, keep going @!@!@!@!

this is actually true C:

It is also highly appreciated if you can provide reasons for every single line you have rejected about 623's mod. C:

Starfy

1,046 posts

Joined November 2012

Starfy 2015-05-09T09:13:36+00:00

君媽媽媽媽媽媽媽媽

咁我張圖kiai d 3/4 o唔ok ;_;

Del05

482 posts

Joined May 2014

Del05 2015-05-09T09:19:23+00:00

Hi happ623 !
Thanks for the mod

happy623 wrote:
Del's Normal
00:48:698 (2) - start at 00:48:871 - maybe? seems more comfortable to me Fixed
01:08:526 (1,2,3) - I'd prefer this way since it would cover the drums hit, also to make everything starts at strong beat
Will consider it
01:10:077 (4,5,6) - ^
Will consider it
01:15:422 (4,5,6) - well, as I see you making nice pattern for the violin in 01:09:388 (3,4,5,6) - , what about doing the same here? Will consider it
00:09:560 (1,3) - swap NC for more consistency to the music? It may ruins the pattern tho xD Fixed
00:12:319 (1,4) - ^ Fixed
00:18:008 (1,3) - swap NC here, since 00:18:698 - was the starting point after the intro of the song Fixed
00:46:457 (2,5) - how about making the tail of 00:47:664 (5) - to a perfect blanket with (2)'s head too?! Fixed
00:51:112 (1,3) - swap NC tooo , same reason for the changing rhythm Fixed
00:55:767 (4,5,6,1,2,3) - improve the hexagon pattern maybe? 00:57:491 (3) - could be moved a bit to right Fixed

My update

UltraRik

202 posts

Joined June 2014

UltraRik 2015-05-09T15:40:59+00:00

hi from #modreqs

Walao's Insane

00:18:353 (7) - I would put this even further from 6
00:46:457 (1) - closer to the 9
01:16:802 (1) - closer to both 8 and 2
00:26:629 (5) - this slider has a silent end so you can either make it shorter or make it go more towards the next note because i keep getting 100 on it
00:49:819 (3,4) - this feels weird, I would change to jumps
01:12:664 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I would move this entire section a little to the right
01:20:767 (1) - straighten the beginning of this slider

Starfy's Insane

00:20:336 (2,3) - put close because 2 ends in the opposite way
00:21:802 (2) - The sudden changes of direction and slow down are very confusing, straighten this slider
00:49:560 (2) - I would reverse this slider's end and beginning
00:55:250 (6) - If you want to keep the sudden spike in difficulty at least put this closer
01:22:146 (8) - Pleae don't do that, and if you keep it at least make 01:21:974 (7) - a new combo

UnLock's Light Insane

00:00:940 (1) - Would look a lot nicer if you tilt it towards slider 2
00:23:181 (5,6,7) - Spread them out
00:30:250 (3) - I see you sharpened it to match voice, but it doesn't work. This should be slider and click or replace with jumps
00:31:112 (6) - this part feel like it pauses, make 5 a slider and this a click
00:55:077 (5,6,7) - This looks very ugly, spread the stream and consider making sliders into notes
01:05:077 (8) - closer to the next note

Hard

00:44:733 (3,4) - No need for this to be 2 seperate objects
00:59:733 (7,8,9,1) - Don't stack notes on sliders if theres a pause after them, everyone will break combo
01:22:664 (2,3) - reposition these to fit the flow
01:23:871 (1) - slider, 01:24:043 (2) - click
01:25:767 (4,5,6) - If you really wanna do that, spread them out a little
01:26:802 (1) - put somewhere at the end of the previous slider, slider is suddenly slow and 1 makes people jump off of it too soon

Easy and Normal are fine, tho I'd try reducing the stars on Easy.

Starfy

1,046 posts

Joined November 2012

Starfy 2015-05-10T00:56:43+00:00

UltraRik wrote:
Starfy's Insane
00:20:336 (2,3) - put close because 2 ends in the opposite way No change because i think the distance is reasonable
00:21:802 (2) - The sudden changes of direction and slow down are very confusing, straighten this slider Nope I can't see any reason that this is confusing
00:49:560 (2) - I would reverse this slider's end and beginning Reverse is so weird
00:55:250 (6) - If you want to keep the sudden spike in difficulty at least put this closer Not really, the difficulty had increased at 00:53:353
01:22:146 (8) - Pleae don't do that, and if you keep it at least make 01:21:974 (7) - a new combo I still think that this is not really hard to read, and add a new combo is not make sense in this case

Tks for mod
No change

walaowey

952 posts

Joined March 2012

walaowey 2015-05-10T03:28:05+00:00

UltraRik wrote:
hi from #modreqs Hi there o/

Walao's Insane
00:18:353 (7) - I would put this even further from 6 Nope. I'm trying to make this 2x distance from 6. so i think its ok now
00:46:457 (1) - closer to the 9 Nope, I want to make the spacing between (9,1) and (1,2) even..
01:16:802 (1) - closer to both 8 and 2 No too, the beats is higher here, I'm trying to place jump here.
00:26:629 (5) - this slider has a silent end so you can either make it shorter or make it go more towards the next note because i keep getting 100 on it If i make it shorter, its will be quite confusing because of the sudden slow in speed. But i did change the note after the slider .
00:49:819 (3,4) - this feels weird, I would change to jumps I think its ok here
01:12:664 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I would move this entire section a little to the right I think no, this position is good now
01:20:767 (1) - straighten the beginning of this slider I think no need to straighten this, its good now.

Thanks for the mod >w</

Update, apply 1 mod

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Nardoxyribonucleic

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Nardoxyribonucleic 2015-05-10T08:50:30+00:00

Hi Kyle, the taiko diffs are finished~ (no kd)

Good luck with your public exams btw :3

http://puu.sh/hHZyf.rar

Kyle Y

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Kyle Y 2015-05-10T11:25:59+00:00

UltraRik wrote:
hi from #modreqs

Hard
00:44:733 (3,4) - No need for this to be 2 seperate objects fix when mention again
00:59:733 (7,8,9,1) - Don't stack notes on sliders if theres a pause after them, everyone will break combo fixed
01:22:664 (2,3) - reposition these to fit the flow um... I will try
01:23:871 (1) - slider, 01:24:043 (2) - click fixed
01:25:767 (4,5,6) - If you really wanna do that, spread them out a littlespread by 0.3x
01:26:802 (1) - put somewhere at the end of the previous slider, slider is suddenly slow and 1 makes people jump off of it too soon fixed I think
Easy and Normal are fine, tho I'd try reducing the stars on Easy.

Nardoxyribonucleic

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Nardoxyribonucleic 2015-05-10T12:51:07+00:00

Just a reminder here. Would you mind adding my name in tags as well?

BOUYAAA

396 posts

Joined July 2010

BOUYAAA 2015-05-13T13:09:29+00:00

Hey I looked into your set really quick and it seems like easy has some rhythm issues. I feel like it would be awkward to play for new players.

Easy :

00:07:664 (2) - This starts at a weird spot (Probably because of the red tick). Add a note or a 1/2 beat long slider here 00:07:146 maybe? Something like this : http://puu.sh/hLHIG/85b7138b27.jpg (green is where you started mapping )
00:09:905 (2,1) - This is probably fine as it is but it would be WAY more natural to play it like this http://puu.sh/hLHRH/803a2f6971.jpg. You'd have some polarity switch issues but you could fix it by doing something like this : http://puu.sh/hLI2y/02313fddd2.jpg. This would also prevent 00:09:905 (2) - from ending on a really strong beat
00:12:664 (2,1) - Same here
00:19:043 (1,2,2) - These are super awkward. There is no reason to make the reverse happen on a blue tick. This is probably way too complex and almost impossible to anticipate for a new player

00:29:215 (2,1) - Same issue as 00:09:905 (2,1)
00:31:629 (3,1) - This is probably fine but try this anyways : http://puu.sh/hLICY/75b359c151.jpg

00:34:733 (4,1) - Same issue as 00:09:905 (2,1)
00:37:491 (3,1) - ^
01:10:077 (4,5) - This could blanket a little better

Hard

00:44:905 (4) - since you're following the vocals here you might wanna make this slide start at 00:45:077
From 01:00:250 (1) - to 01:11:284 (1) - there are way to many snare hitsounds compared to the song. The hitsound you did in that part only fit the chorus after 01:11:284 (1) (and you should probably consider the variations of them too). After 01:21:974 (5) - the hitsound pattern changes again so you might wanna change your hitsound too.
01:06:974 (5) - New combo ? It woudl make this a bit easier to read.
01:09:560 (5) - It would probably be better if you would follow the percussions here (shorten the slider, use circles...)

I hope this will help.I'm kinda bad at explaining things sometimes so if you have any questions feel free to catch me ingame.
GL with your map.

ZinaMarina

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ZinaMarina 2015-05-19T10:16:06+00:00

Well met, comrade! (From m4m)

Easy

01:14:388 (1,2,3) maybe try to make smth like that? http://puu.sh/hSNoN/5cb7e5418a.jpg
00:47:491 (2,3) it is differ from other sliders. It's possible to remake it http://puu.sh/hSNNR/490ff8a5df.jpg
00:53:008 (3) it looks easier i think http://puu.sh/hSO4W/73d69d41d6.jpg
01:15:077 (2) same
01:29:215 finish is very loud. Try to make it on 15-20% volume

Normal

00:27:146 is it really needed? Break is too short and hp drain isn't so big
01:00:595 (3) it sounds like that http://puu.sh/hSOE3/8607a52afc.jpg
01:02:319 (2,3,5,6) http://puu.sh/hSOJ7/d4a5bf03b7.jpg looks and plays better
01:23:181 (2,5) http://puu.sh/hSOQz/cfae0819f7.jpg mm?
01:29:215 here is a finish on easy

All in all looks good.
Удачи тебе с этим // Good luck

Kyle Y

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Topic Starter

Kyle Y 2015-05-19T11:19:36+00:00

ZinaMarina wrote:
Well met, comrade! (From m4m)

Easy
01:14:388 (1,2,3) maybe try to make smth like that? http://puu.sh/hSNoN/5cb7e5418a.jpg remain
00:47:491 (2,3) it is differ from other sliders. It's possible to remake it http://puu.sh/hSNNR/490ff8a5df.jpg fixed
00:53:008 (3) it looks easier i think http://puu.sh/hSO4W/73d69d41d6.jpg remain
01:15:077 (2) same same
01:29:215 finish is very loud. Try to make it on 15-20% volumefixed

Surono

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Joined November 2013

Surono 2015-05-19T18:42:42+00:00

<(``) hi Nardoh..

[Nardo's Muzukashii]
00:40:940 (85) - hmmm maybe kat is for high.. that sound guitar or voice is high.. well forget xD

[Nardo's Oni]
00:40:940 (201) - k.. ~~hmm high~~
00:54:560 (256) - k?
01:20:250 (447,448,449,450,451) - kkdkk or ddkdd, ~ try xD

well, hope helpful~

Nardoxyribonucleic

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Nardoxyribonucleic 2015-05-20T08:20:51+00:00

Surono wrote:
<(``) hi Nardoh.. hi~

[Nardo's Muzukashii]
00:40:940 (85) - hmmm maybe kat is for high.. that sound guitar or voice is high.. well forget xD I followed the decreased vocal pitch there.

[Nardo's Oni]
00:40:940 (201) - k.. ~~hmm high~~ same as Muzukashii
00:54:560 (256) - k? d would be fine as there is no high-pitched sound to map with.
01:20:250 (447,448,449,450,451) - kkdkk or ddkdd, ~ try xD Umm... I think dkdkd would result in a smoother flow.

well, hope helpful~

Thanks for your mod~

Del05

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Del05 2015-05-20T09:36:55+00:00

Hi ZinaMarina !
Thanks for the mod

ZinaMarina wrote:
Normal
00:27:146 is it really needed? Break is too short and hp drain isn't so big I think so too. but many people ask break so will consider it first
01:00:595 (3) it sounds like that http://puu.sh/hSOE3/8607a52afc.jpg I think nope cause the drum is at 01:01:112
01:02:319 (2,3,5,6) http://puu.sh/hSOJ7/d4a5bf03b7.jpg looks and plays better Will consider it
01:23:181 (2,5) http://puu.sh/hSOQz/cfae0819f7.jpg mm? Fixed
01:29:215 here is a finish on easy Nope

My update

Renka

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Renka 2015-05-21T07:36:28+00:00

Hi,from forum. Modded the Taiko.

Nardo's Muzukashii

00:02:664 - delete? - A little break.
00:22:146 - ^
00:23:526 - ^
00:34:560 - ^
00:35:767 - change d? - I think here is a good sound is heard

Nardo's Oni

00:10:164 - delete? - I feel that you do not need.
00:12:922 - ^
00:59:302 - ^

Very good map! Good Luck!

Nardoxyribonucleic

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Nardoxyribonucleic 2015-05-21T09:00:18+00:00

chaica wrote:
Hi,from forum. Modded the Taiko.

Nardo's Muzukashii
00:02:664 - delete? - A little break.Remain unchanged to consistently follow the vocal.
00:22:146 - ^ I would like to keep the note to emphasize the vocal there.
00:23:526 - ^ fixed
00:34:560 - ^ no change since the song becomes denser.
00:35:767 - change d? - I think here is a good sound is heard As the vocal pitch is constant among 00:35:594 (63,64,65,66) - , k would be fine imo.

Nardo's Oni
00:10:164 - delete? - I feel that you do not need. Retained to make it coherent with 00:15:681 -
00:12:922 - ^ ^
00:59:302 - ^ A noticeable sound is present, so keeping the note would be better.

Very good map! Good Luck!

Thanks for your mod and comment~

Update: http://puu.sh/hV5SC.rar

[-FlyingRUPig-]

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[-FlyingRUPig-] 2015-05-21T14:08:35+00:00

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Last edited by [-FlyingRUPig-] 2018-01-10T22:28:52+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Starfy

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Joined November 2012

Starfy 2015-05-21T14:26:54+00:00

FlyingRUPig wrote:
Starfy's Insane
00:26:974 (1) - Is this slider necessary? It doesn't seemed map to anything, and makes the break start at a later time than the other diffs. A smaller slider like in Hard can work here No change
01:21:888 (6,7) - It's a bit hard to see 7 under that stream Fine I change it

Tks for mod
http://puu.sh/hViYG/9460d37d6e.zip

walaowey

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walaowey 2015-05-22T04:23:38+00:00

FlyingRUPig wrote:
Thanks for modding my map, here's my return mod Hi theere o/

Walao's Insane
Different colors than the rest? Fixed colour >w<

01:20:250 - nc?
Nope..I think its ok

Fun map set.
Thank you for using my queue!

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Title:Haru Modoki
TitleUnicode:春擬き
Artist:yanaginagi
ArtistUnicode:yanaginagi
Creator:Kyle Y
Version:Walao's Insane
Source:やはり俺の青春ラブコメはまちがっている。 続
Tags:yahari ore no seishun love comedy wa machigatteiru zoku Oregairu my teen romantic snafu opening 2nd season StarForYou UnLock walaowey Del05 TV Size Nardoxyribonucleic
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WoahE

41 posts

Joined September 2013

WoahE 2015-05-23T07:32:16+00:00

sorry for late mod

Nardo's Oni

00:09:129 (17) - delete ,too dense
00:09:905 (24) - change to k
00:11:888 (40) - delete ,too dense
00:15:422 (68,69,70,71,72) - change to ddkkk
00:15:940 (73) - change to D <^work together
00:31:112 (140) - change to d
00:50:767 (236) - delete
00:58:440 (286) - delete ,plus 00:58:526 (287) - change to K
01:04:646 (332) - delete

(really picking bone from an egg lol

yeah
good luck

Nardoxyribonucleic

osu! Alumni

3,009 posts

Joined May 2011

Nardoxyribonucleic 2015-05-23T09:21:15+00:00

WoahE wrote:
sorry for late mod

Nardo's Oni
00:09:129 (17) - delete ,too dense This is intended to follow the background drums.
00:09:905 (24) - change to k The music has the same pitch as 00:10:077 (26) -
00:11:888 (40) - delete ,too dense same as 00:09:129 (17) -
00:15:422 (68,69,70,71,72) - change to ddkkk kkddd would result in a better flow since the snares are more prominent.
00:15:940 (73) - change to D <^work together The music is really high-pitched here.
00:31:112 (140) - change to d The vocal has the same pitch as 00:30:594 (137) -
00:50:767 (236) - delete Retained for the sake of a similar pattern structure as 00:45:940 -
00:58:440 (286) - delete ,plus 00:58:526 (287) - change to K Remain unchanged for pattern consistency as 00:07:405 -
01:04:646 (332) - delete Similar to 00:50:767 (236) - , keeping the note would result in a better coherence with 01:01:888 (312) -

(really picking bone from an egg lol

yeah
good luck

Thanks for your mod~

Kyle Y

1,210 posts

Joined November 2013

Topic Starter

Kyle Y 2015-05-23T17:19:41+00:00

FlyingRUPig wrote:
Thanks for modding my map, here's my return mod

General
Hard and Unlock's Light Insane seem too close to each other in regards to star diff. Also, AR goes from 7 in Hard, to 7.5 in UnLock's, suddenly to 9 in Starfy's.

00:27:491 - This area is inconsistent between the maps. Half of the maps have a break, half of them don't. I think it should be consistent throughout all the diffs.
Not a must, just a mapping style
Hard
00:13:526 (2,3) - I'm not completely against, but think it should be separated like the rest of the combo.esit when mention again
00:29:215 - nc after a long gap? It'd stay consistent with the other diffsfixed
00:42:664 (3) - I think this combo might look a bit nicer with a curve here fixed
00:45:767 - Maybe a smaller angle for the turn in the slider here? do not understand
00:48:353 (4,1) - A tad confusing for the gap between the two. Minor issue though and mistake can be corrected in a second playthrough. fixed
00:58:353 (4,5) - Separate to flow better? I'm fine with 01:00:250 (1,2,3,4,5,6) as the combo does the same thing both times. fixed
00:59:646 - nc after gap? it should not be a gap? maybe I add nc at 00:58:698 (1) -
01:11:026 (4,5,6,1) Stream of four seems a bit out of place, especially for Hard. However, it does go with the song. Maybe try something with a repeat slider here? I tend to keep
01:11:802 (3,4) - 4 would look nicer blanketing that 3 remain
01:15:077 (3) - 1/2 sliderfixed

Arcubin

689 posts

Joined September 2013

Arcubin 2015-05-31T09:52:12+00:00

hi from m4m

[General]

custom hitsound 2 is unused.. please remove it
there's some issues mentioned by AiMod. fix them

[Easy]
OD = 3 current OD is too low compared to your density, also the hitsound is bad

00:09:905 (4) - move the tail downward. it's offmap
00:14:043 (4) - decrease the angle. current angle quite hurting for easy
verse part quite odd imo cause the heavy downbeat should drop at previous 1/2 beat like 00:18:871 (1) - 00:21:629 (1) - 00:24:388 (1) - maybe change them since the downbeat wasn't following anything but beat
00:30:077 (2) - make a full slider instead start from 00:30:250 -
00:32:491 (1) - slider body kinda off map...
00:35:595 (1) - same as 00:32:491 (1) -
00:38:353 (1) - ^
i suggest to make the bridge part more relaxed since the song is rather slower than the whole song
00:43:698 (1,1) - player maybe doesn't anticipate this well.. i suggest to change the slider into circle like this
00:49:215 (1,2) - http://puu.sh/i6Wf1.jpg
00:54:043 (4) - suggestion to make this two circle cause it was emphasized better
00:54:733 (1) - better to extend this to 00:58:698 - and remove the circle
01:25:077 (1,2,3) - some suggestion cause i think it's not emphasized well http://puu.sh/i6Wsf.jpg

[Del's]
ARnya diturunin ke 4, imo current AR terlalu cepet dibandingin SV

00:01:629 (2) - slider head dikasih whistle rasanya bagus
00:10:250 (6,1) - ini kayaknya buat normal susah deh.. apalagi bpmnya tinggi. menurutku mending dibuat gini
00:13:008 (6,1) - ^
00:31:284 (5,1) - pattern ini kayaknya agak nyusahin buat normal... mungkin dibuat agak circular dikit boleh

well, sebenarnya bagus. tapi sayang beberapa pattern kayak dipaksain

rasanya gak enak dimainin imo

[Hard]
same problem like easy diff... it's hitsounding is bad

00:07:146 (1,2) - i think it's better to emphasize it like this
00:20:422 (1) - space this like what you do in this part
00:20:940 (3) - ^
00:26:974 (5) - why slider? there's no particular sound at 00:27:060 - change this to circle instead
00:44:905 (4,1) - better to change this like http://puu.sh/i6XBr.jpg
00:49:043 (3) - this overlap is bad... try to move them to (288,352)
00:58:698 (1) - same problem as 00:26:974 (5) -

honestly, this diff is so dense judging from the song. it's rather like insane density but with DS... i'm not sure but i think you need a lot of work this diff

[Starfy's]
i think AR = 8 fit better

00:18:008 (9) - wow this troll slider... change to circle?
00:20:336 (2) - slider tail is unreadable.. try to lift it up
00:27:319 - why break? it's only a little gap.. it doesn't make sense imo
00:32:836 (2) - do you think this pattern is readable? it's blocked by combo burst... please change it
00:49:043 (7) - i'd rather make this stack with (7) tail instead

so many overdone slider. i admit this map is neat.. but i don't like your forced slider pattern and overlap

Starfy

1,046 posts

Joined November 2012

Starfy 2015-05-31T12:25:23+00:00

Arcubin wrote:
[Starfy's]
i think AR = 8 fit better It makes a lot of pattern become unreadable

00:18:008 (9) - wow this troll slider... change to circle? Nope, this is not troll. And there is a heavy 1/8 sound here
00:20:336 (2) - slider tail is unreadable.. try to lift it up I think the tail is obvious enough for player to play
00:27:319 - why break? it's only a little gap.. it doesn't make sense imo I can't see any reason that this isn't make sense
00:32:836 (2) - do you think this pattern is readable? it's blocked by combo burst... please change it Yes, absolutely readable, I Promise
00:49:043 (7) - i'd rather make this stack with (7) tail instead Weird imo
so many overdone slider. i admit this map is neat.. but i don't like your forced slider pattern and overlap Just because I like mapping slider more instead of mapping circle only lol

Tks for mod
And no change~

Kyle Y

1,210 posts

Joined November 2013

Topic Starter

Kyle Y 2015-06-03T12:11:22+00:00

Arcubin wrote:
hi from m4m
SPOILER
[General]
custom hitsound 2 is unused.. please remove it okay, I will do that
there's some issues mentioned by AiMod. fix them it is just becasue taiko mode do not support countdown and letterbox, it is not a problem in fact

[Easy]
OD = 3 current OD is too low compared to your density, also the hitsound is bad

00:09:905 (4) - move the tail downward. it's offmapfixed
00:14:043 (4) - decrease the angle. current angle quite hurting for easyfixed
verse part quite odd imo cause the heavy downbeat should drop at previous 1/2 beat like 00:18:871 (1) - 00:21:629 (1) - 00:24:388 (1) - maybe change them since the downbeat wasn't following anything but beat follow the vocal
00:30:077 (2) - make a full slider instead start from 00:30:250 - fix if mention again
00:32:491 (1) - slider body kinda off map...fixed
00:35:595 (1) - same as 00:32:491 (1) -^
00:38:353 (1) - ^^
i suggest to make the bridge part more relaxed since the song is rather slower than the whole songI will consider it, fix when mention again
00:43:698 (1,1) - player maybe doesn't anticipate this well.. i suggest to change the slider into circle like thisI think this is okay
00:49:215 (1,2) - http://puu.sh/i6Wf1.jpgum.....
00:54:043 (4) - suggestion to make this two circle cause it was emphasized better remain
00:54:733 (1) - better to extend this to 00:58:698 - and remove the circle fixed
01:25:077 (1,2,3) - some suggestion cause i think it's not emphasized well http://puu.sh/i6Wsf.jpg

[Hard]
same problem like easy diff... it's hitsounding is bad
Hard I change a lot on it, so I am not going to give feedback
00:07:146 (1,2) - i think it's better to emphasize it like this
00:20:422 (1) - space this like what you do in this part
00:20:940 (3) - ^
00:26:974 (5) - why slider? there's no particular sound at 00:27:060 - change this to circle instead
00:44:905 (4,1) - better to change this like http://puu.sh/i6XBr.jpg
00:49:043 (3) - this overlap is bad... try to move them to (288,352)
00:58:698 (1) - same problem as 00:26:974 (5) -
honestly, this diff is so dense judging from the song. it's rather like insane density but with DS... i'm not sure but i think you need a lot of work this diff

Del05

482 posts

Joined May 2014

Del05 2015-06-05T13:28:57+00:00

Hi
Thanks for give me some mods

Arcubin wrote:
[Del's]
ARnya diturunin ke 4, imo current AR terlalu cepet dibandingin SV Fixed

00:01:629 (2) - slider head dikasih whistle rasanya bagus Fixed
00:10:250 (6,1) - ini kayaknya buat normal susah deh.. apalagi bpmnya tinggi. menurutku mending dibuat gini Fixed
00:13:008 (6,1) - ^ Fixed
00:31:284 (5,1) - pattern ini kayaknya agak nyusahin buat normal... mungkin dibuat agak circular dikit boleh Will consider it

My update

[R]

1,058 posts

Joined November 2013

[R] 2015-06-06T18:30:01+00:00

from queue
Suggestion

[General]

check AiMod (ctrl+shift+A)

[Muzukashi]

00:35:940 - d
00:40:250 - delete ? if applied 00:40:595 - move 00:40:422-
00:52:836 - move 00:52:491 -
01:17:836 (218,219,220) - ctrl+G
01:18:871 - i hear d sound here

[Oni]

00:08:267 - delete ? also 00:11:026 -
00:32:233 - move 00:32:060 -
00:34:991 - ^
00:35:595 - d ?
00:37:836 - delete
00:37:405 - move 00:37:577 -
00:58:267 (284,285,286,287) - ctrl+G ?
01:16:802 - 01:19:215 - try delete some note for rest
01:20:250 (447,448,449,450,451) - ddkdd

~~nope~~
Good Luck

Last edited by [R] 2015-06-10T09:38:39+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Nardoxyribonucleic

osu! Alumni

3,009 posts

Joined May 2011

Nardoxyribonucleic 2015-06-06T19:02:08+00:00

[R] wrote:
from queue
Suggestion

[General]
check AiMod (ctrl+shift+A) Countdown and letterbox are not recommended in Taiko diffs.
[Muzukashi]
00:35:940 - d The pitch of 00:35:594 (62,63,64,65) - is the same.
00:40:250 - delete ? if applied 00:40:595 - move 00:40:422- The current pattern would be easier to follow.
00:52:836 - move 00:52:491 - Retained to fit the drum.
01:17:836 (218,219,220) - ctrl+G k k d would be better for the vocal.
01:18:871 - i hear d sound here The 2/1 break is intentional due to the previous dense patterns.
[Oni]
00:08:267 - delete ? also 00:11:026 - I would prefer following the drums there.
00:32:233 - move 00:32:060 - The current position would result in a better flow imo.
00:34:991 - ^ ^
00:35:595 - d ? k would be better since the vocal pitch is relatively high.
00:37:836 - delete Drums again.
00:37:405 - move 00:37:577 - Remain unchanged for pattern consistency as 00:33:267 -
00:58:267 (284,285,286,287) - ctrl+G ? same as 00:37:836 -
01:16:802 - 01:19:215 - try delete some note for rest The higher note density would bring a greater impact for the kiai.
01:20:250 (447,448,449,450,451) - ddkdd I think both of them are fine. Keeping mine atm.
also help my beatmap with your ~~bubble~~ moding
Good Luck

Thanks for your mod~

Yohanes

1,285 posts

Joined February 2014

Yohanes 2015-06-08T17:35:47+00:00

As requested, here's my mod...
Prepare yourself

[General]

Don't forget about your diff spread :3

[Easy]

00:11:974 - This part have a strong beat. I'd suggest you to map this part as 1/1, 1/1 instead of 2/1, circle. This serves the rythym better http://puu.sh/ih53P/3224e45196.jpg
00:16:112 - You can map this part to make this diff more "alive" here is my suggestion how I map it, start from 00:15:077 (1) - http://puu.sh/ih5HV/6ae346c361.jpg
00:18:871 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - you made pretty poor rythym choice here. I higly suggest you to remap this part. Suggestion below :
00:18:871 (1,2) - you can make something like this http://puu.sh/ih6pj/6426fdd1d7.jpg, since the music vocal I mean start from 00:19:043 -
00:21:629 (1,2,1,2) - Pretty much same reason with 00:18:871 (1,2) you can use this pattern, or be creative and make one your own http://puu.sh/ih6Ci/a6c99c16ad.jpg and again, my pattern starts from 00:21:802 -
00:44:215 (1) - Spinner doesn't fit here in easy diff since it'll make the spinner too short or makes player doesn't have enough recovery after spinning to hit the notes t/241019&start=0. Change this into slider instead, start from 00:44:388 - and ends at 00:46:457 -
01:06:112 (2,3) - you can't use 1/2 slider in the easiest difficulty, separate them at least 1/1 measure away http://puu.sh/ih7vw/fa701488f1.jpg
01:15:077 (2,3) - This sounds weird, try using 1/1, 1/1, cicrle instead http://puu.sh/ih7bz/5bbe40f592.jpg
01:25:767 (3) - Remove repeat. 01:27:146 (4) - Move to 01:26:802 - . Start spinner at 01:27:491 - ends at 01:27:491 (1) -
So, yeah. Most of the problems related to the rythym that you choose as a baseline to map. In the very beginning on this diff, you made a pretty good job on choosing the right rythym. But, going onward especially starts from 00:18:871 I can't feel the base rythym on your map. It makes difficult for players to play your diff. Firstly, sorry if I'm a bit to harsh. But, I still remember when I mod your first map 6 months ago, and problems on your maps still remains pretty much the same. Remember, this is a rythym game. We maps to the song. So, my suggestion is listen carefully to the song, determined every beat as baseline, and map it. And you'll get better in no time. I know that I'm not the one who talk, but at least let me help you by this way

[Del's Normal]

00:04:043 (2) - Minor, make this slides downward. Since the music has downbeat uwu, CMIIW example: http://puu.sh/ih7Hn/0bc7bc8caf.jpg
Pretty good actually I can't find major problems in this diff and I'm too lazy to any find minor problems don't kill me
And your diff has a lot of 1/2 which worries me a bit

[Hard]

Yeah, the problems still remains the same

00:10:940 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - This pattern seems forced and doesn't play that well
00:18:181 (3,4,5) - Please don't do this. this is unpleasant to play and watch
00:18:698 (5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - Simply sayin, this is overmapping. You should change this into pattern that suitale to the song and diff, remember this is hard diff
00:21:802 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - same^ even though this one is not as bizzare as before
Actually those two problems mentioned above goes on and on in this entire diff, so I wont bother mention all of it.
Alright, you should improve your hitsounding as well. Most majority of maps guarantee a clap in every 2nd and 4th beat each measurement http://puu.sh/ih9HK/87d3e1115c.jpg, so put clap in every single one of it. When you hear cymbal clash, put finish. And place whistle wherever it fits.

[Starfy's Insane]

seems nice :3

[Walao's Insane]

00:09:905 (5) - I'd rather have circles instead of 1/2 repeat slider here, Inconsistencies between these notes also takes a part of it being quite unpleasant to play 00:09:560 (3,4,5) -
00:10:422 (1,2,3,4,1) - Inconsistent spacing, which is not a good thing to have. Consider to rearrange this pattern to make it a bit more consistent
00:30:940 (6) - ctrl+G?
00:34:388 (3,4,5) - Delete triplets, it maps to nothing
00:35:250 (1,2) - Way too close, separate them more
00:44:215 (2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - I really don't see the point the way you map this part. The music have nothing to requires you to put such a continuous huge jumps here. Please, I higly recommend you to remap this part.
00:54:388 (5,6,1) - Delete triplets 00:54:560 (1) - remove finish on tail
00:55:422 (8,9,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - poor hitsounding
00:59:733 - make something like this? http://puu.sh/ihbSV/e054562327.jpg
01:09:733 (1,2,3) - This triplets at the end speaks nothing about the song
Overall, quite alright, but you have to refined your hitsounding

Thats all I guess

Once again, I'm sorry if I'm being to harsh. I hope this helps.
Catch me in-game if you have further questions
Good luck with this set~

walaowey

952 posts

Joined March 2012

walaowey 2015-06-08T21:56:57+00:00

yaldo_27 wrote:
As requested, here's my mod...
Prepare yourself

[General]

[Walao's Insane]
00:09:905 (5) - I'd rather have circles instead of 1/2 repeat slider here, Inconsistencies between these notes also takes a part of it being quite unpleasant to play 00:09:560 (3,4,5) - mm, i dont think its not that inconsistent here.. everybody testing it seems fine playing it lol..but if more modder talk about this..I'll consider change it
00:10:422 (1,2,3,4,1) - Inconsistent spacing, which is not a good thing to have. Consider to rearrange this pattern to make it a bit more consistent Its a little jump there lol
00:30:940 (6) - ctrl+G? nope..I think its ok here
00:34:388 (3,4,5) - Delete triplets, it maps to nothing fixed
00:35:250 (1,2) - Way too close, separate them more its good to play..so y not xD
00:44:215 (2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - I really don't see the point the way you map this part. The music have nothing to requires you to put such a continuous huge jumps here. Please, I higly recommend you to remap this part. lol, if u listen carefully, the music is getting high here. its starting to get slow around 00:45:767 (5) - so i decrease the jump again
00:54:388 (5,6,1) - Delete triplets 00:54:560 (1) - remove finish on tail fixed both of it
00:55:422 (8,9,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - poor hitsounding fixed
00:59:733 - make something like this? http://puu.sh/ihbSV/e054562327.jpg nope i like the way it is now
01:09:733 (1,2,3) - This triplets at the end speaks nothing about the song nope..I'll remain this.it feels comfortable to play..but if more modder tell me to remove it..then yeah
Overall, quite alright, but you have to refined your hitsounding yeah, I've change the hitsound a bit.. xD

Thats all I guess
Once again, I'm sorry if I'm being to harsh. I hope this helps.
Catch me in-game if you have further questions
Good luck with this set~

Thanks for the mod :3

Update

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Source:やはり俺の青春ラブコメはまちがっている。 続
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Kyle Y

1,210 posts

Joined November 2013

Topic Starter

Kyle Y 2015-06-09T02:53:59+00:00

yaldo_27 wrote:
As requested, here's my mod...
Prepare yourself

[General]
Don't forget about your diff spread :3

[Easy]
00:11:974 - This part have a strong beat. I'd suggest you to map this part as 1/1, 1/1 instead of 2/1, circle. This serves the rythym better http://puu.sh/ih53P/3224e45196.jpg fixed
00:16:112 - You can map this part to make this diff more "alive" here is my suggestion how I map it, start from 00:15:077 (1) - http://puu.sh/ih5HV/6ae346c361.jpg For this part, I decided not to map it
00:18:871 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - you made pretty poor rythym choice here. I higly suggest you to remap this part. Suggestion below : I just prevent use too much 1/2, and make this more relax
00:18:871 (1,2) - you can make something like this http://puu.sh/ih6pj/6426fdd1d7.jpg, since the music vocal I mean start from 00:19:043 -
00:21:629 (1,2,1,2) - Pretty much same reason with 00:18:871 (1,2) you can use this pattern, or be creative and make one your own http://puu.sh/ih6Ci/a6c99c16ad.jpg and again, my pattern starts from 00:21:802 -
00:44:215 (1) - Spinner doesn't fit here in easy diff since it'll make the spinner too short or makes player doesn't have enough recovery after spinning to hit the notes t/241019&start=0. Change this into slider instead, start from 00:44:388 - and ends at 00:46:457 - I surely give enough recovery after spinning, 1500ms only appear for 160bpm, and this song is 174bpm.
And then the length, it lasted for 4.5 beat and It is enough
01:06:112 (2,3) - you can't use 1/2 slider in the easiest difficulty, separate them at least 1/1 measure away http://puu.sh/ih7vw/fa701488f1.jpg it is suggested by another modder
01:15:077 (2,3) - This sounds weird, try using 1/1, 1/1, cicrle instead http://puu.sh/ih7bz/5bbe40f592.jpg it is mapped base on bg music
01:25:767 (3) - Remove repeat. 01:27:146 (4) - Move to 01:26:802 - . Start spinner at 01:27:491 - ends at 01:27:491 (1) - fixed
So, yeah. Most of the problems related to the rythym that you choose as a baseline to map. In the very beginning on this diff, you made a pretty good job on choosing the right rythym. But, going onward especially starts from 00:18:871 I can't feel the base rythym on your map. It makes difficult for players to play your diff. Firstly, sorry if I'm a bit to harsh. But, I still remember when I mod your first map 6 months ago, and problems on your maps still remains pretty much the same. Remember, this is a rythym game. We maps to the song. So, my suggestion is listen carefully to the song, determined every beat as baseline, and map it. And you'll get better in no time. I know that I'm not the one who talk, but at least let me help you by this way

[Hard]
Yeah, the problems still remains the same
00:10:940 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - This pattern seems forced and doesn't play that well 4 <-> 6
00:18:181 (3,4,5) - Please don't do this. this is unpleasant to play and watch fixed
00:18:698 (5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - Simply sayin, this is overmapping. You should change this into pattern that suitale to the song and diff, remember this is hard diff using 1/2 is common in hard right?
00:21:802 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - same^ even though this one is not as bizzare as before
Actually those two problems mentioned above goes on and on in this entire diff, so I wont bother mention all of it.
Alright, you should improve your hitsounding as well. Most majority of maps guarantee a clap in every 2nd and 4th beat each measurement http://puu.sh/ih9HK/87d3e1115c.jpg, so put clap in every single one of it. When you hear cymbal clash, put finish. And place whistle wherever it fits.

Thats all I guess
Once again, I'm sorry if I'm being to harsh. I hope this helps.
Catch me in-game if you have further questions
Good luck with this set~

Del05

482 posts

Joined May 2014

Del05 2015-06-12T09:37:37+00:00

Hi
Thanks for the mod

yaldo_27 wrote:
[Del's Normal]
00:04:043 (2) - Minor, make this slides downward. Since the music has downbeat uwu, CMIIW example: http://puu.sh/ih7Hn/0bc7bc8caf.jpg Fixed
Pretty good actually I can't find major problems in this diff and I'm too lazy to any find minor problems don't kill me
And your diff has a lot of 1/2 which worries me a bit I think it is okay

Rizia

3,114 posts

Joined January 2012

Rizia 2015-06-13T10:08:24+00:00

[SFY]

00:18:008 (9) - slide上的whistle放錯了?
00:40:595 (4) - ^
00:40:250 (1,2,3,4,5) - 這種地方我覺得snap成全部1/3 circle/slider 或者 1/3 slider -> circle - slider -> circle.
01:21:801 (5,6,7,8) - 有點難讀
有很多finish可以加, 例如 00:15:940 - 00:18:698 - 00:26:974 - 00:29:733 - , 剩下的自己發掘

[Hard]

00:07:146 (1) - 延長到00:07:664 - 直接做7連
00:09:560 (2,3) - stack在一起的話玩上去會感覺好一點
00:11:802 (6,1) - 這種突然的跳會很危險建議改一改
00:13:526 (1,2,3,4,5) - 這組circle有點多會很難打我個人會建議hard的circle不會連續超過4個
00:18:698 (5) - 1個1/1 slider 到00:19:043 - , 現在的節奏打上去和看上去也很怪
00:20:077 (5,1) - 改成slider
00:21:457 (5,1) - 這兩個距離可以近一點
00:22:319 (3,4) - ^
00:26:629 (3) - 可以不放這麼遠現在的距上跟00:25:595 (5,1) - 的1/1現覺上差不多
00:32:319 - 為何要ignore這個鼓
00:35:077 - ^
00:45:077 (1,2) - 背景還有聲音可以跟的不用長滑條帶過
00:59:733 (2,3,4) - hard不建議這樣獨立一組的circle 3連, 換成slider會好點
01:11:284 - ~ 01:12:836 - 這段的鼓應該在1/1(白線) 而不是1/2(紅線)
01:22:319 - ~ 01:25:077 - ^

good luck

Kyle Y

1,210 posts

Joined November 2013

Topic Starter

Kyle Y 2015-06-13T16:34:11+00:00

Kawaiwkyik wrote:
[SFY]
00:18:008 (9) - slide上的whistle放錯了?
00:40:595 (4) - ^
00:40:250 (1,2,3,4,5) - 這種地方我覺得snap成全部1/3 circle/slider 或者 1/3 slider -> circle - slider -> circle.
01:21:801 (5,6,7,8) - 有點難讀
有很多finish可以加, 例如 00:15:940 - 00:18:698 - 00:26:974 - 00:29:733 - , 剩下的自己發掘
starfy 有東西要改
就有種.... 他終於(強調)有東西要改的感覺
好像他被打敗的感覺

[Hard]
00:07:146 (1) - 延長到00:07:664 - 直接做7連改了
00:09:560 (2,3) - stack在一起的話玩上去會感覺好一點改了
00:11:802 (6,1) - 這種突然的跳會很危險建議改一改改了
00:13:526 (1,2,3,4,5) - 這組circle有點多會很難打我個人會建議hard的circle不會連續超過4個改了
00:18:698 (5) - 1個1/1 slider 到00:19:043 - , 現在的節奏打上去和看上去也很怪改了
00:20:077 (5,1) - 改成slider改了
00:21:457 (5,1) - 這兩個距離可以近一點改了
00:22:319 (3,4) - ^改了
00:26:629 (3) - 可以不放這麼遠現在的距上跟00:25:595 (5,1) - 的1/1現覺上差不多改了
00:32:319 - 為何要ignore這個鼓是說我沒發現有鼓(X) 加了圈圈了
00:35:077 - ^ ^
00:45:077 (1,2) - 背景還有聲音可以跟的不用長滑條帶過改了
00:59:733 (2,3,4) - hard不建議這樣獨立一組的circle 3連, 換成slider會好點改了
01:11:284 - ~ 01:12:836 - 這段的鼓應該在1/1(白線) 而不是1/2(紅線)改了
01:22:319 - ~ 01:25:077 - ^
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