yanaginagi - Haru Modoki [Osu|Taiko] · forum

Nardoxyribonucleic

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Nardoxyribonucleic 2015-05-10T08:50:30+00:00

Hi Kyle, the taiko diffs are finished~ (no kd)

Good luck with your public exams btw :3

http://puu.sh/hHZyf.rar

Kyle Y

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Kyle Y 2015-05-10T11:25:59+00:00

UltraRik wrote:
hi from #modreqs

Hard
00:44:733 (3,4) - No need for this to be 2 seperate objects fix when mention again
00:59:733 (7,8,9,1) - Don't stack notes on sliders if theres a pause after them, everyone will break combo fixed
01:22:664 (2,3) - reposition these to fit the flow um... I will try
01:23:871 (1) - slider, 01:24:043 (2) - click fixed
01:25:767 (4,5,6) - If you really wanna do that, spread them out a littlespread by 0.3x
01:26:802 (1) - put somewhere at the end of the previous slider, slider is suddenly slow and 1 makes people jump off of it too soon fixed I think
Easy and Normal are fine, tho I'd try reducing the stars on Easy.

Nardoxyribonucleic

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Nardoxyribonucleic 2015-05-10T12:51:07+00:00

Just a reminder here. Would you mind adding my name in tags as well?

BOUYAAA

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BOUYAAA 2015-05-13T13:09:29+00:00

Hey I looked into your set really quick and it seems like easy has some rhythm issues. I feel like it would be awkward to play for new players.

Easy :

00:07:664 (2) - This starts at a weird spot (Probably because of the red tick). Add a note or a 1/2 beat long slider here 00:07:146 maybe? Something like this : http://puu.sh/hLHIG/85b7138b27.jpg (green is where you started mapping )
00:09:905 (2,1) - This is probably fine as it is but it would be WAY more natural to play it like this http://puu.sh/hLHRH/803a2f6971.jpg. You'd have some polarity switch issues but you could fix it by doing something like this : http://puu.sh/hLI2y/02313fddd2.jpg. This would also prevent 00:09:905 (2) - from ending on a really strong beat
00:12:664 (2,1) - Same here
00:19:043 (1,2,2) - These are super awkward. There is no reason to make the reverse happen on a blue tick. This is probably way too complex and almost impossible to anticipate for a new player

00:29:215 (2,1) - Same issue as 00:09:905 (2,1)
00:31:629 (3,1) - This is probably fine but try this anyways : http://puu.sh/hLICY/75b359c151.jpg

00:34:733 (4,1) - Same issue as 00:09:905 (2,1)
00:37:491 (3,1) - ^
01:10:077 (4,5) - This could blanket a little better

Hard

00:44:905 (4) - since you're following the vocals here you might wanna make this slide start at 00:45:077
From 01:00:250 (1) - to 01:11:284 (1) - there are way to many snare hitsounds compared to the song. The hitsound you did in that part only fit the chorus after 01:11:284 (1) (and you should probably consider the variations of them too). After 01:21:974 (5) - the hitsound pattern changes again so you might wanna change your hitsound too.
01:06:974 (5) - New combo ? It woudl make this a bit easier to read.
01:09:560 (5) - It would probably be better if you would follow the percussions here (shorten the slider, use circles...)

I hope this will help.I'm kinda bad at explaining things sometimes so if you have any questions feel free to catch me ingame.
GL with your map.

ZinaMarina

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ZinaMarina 2015-05-19T10:16:06+00:00

Well met, comrade! (From m4m)

Easy

01:14:388 (1,2,3) maybe try to make smth like that? http://puu.sh/hSNoN/5cb7e5418a.jpg
00:47:491 (2,3) it is differ from other sliders. It's possible to remake it http://puu.sh/hSNNR/490ff8a5df.jpg
00:53:008 (3) it looks easier i think http://puu.sh/hSO4W/73d69d41d6.jpg
01:15:077 (2) same
01:29:215 finish is very loud. Try to make it on 15-20% volume

Normal

00:27:146 is it really needed? Break is too short and hp drain isn't so big
01:00:595 (3) it sounds like that http://puu.sh/hSOE3/8607a52afc.jpg
01:02:319 (2,3,5,6) http://puu.sh/hSOJ7/d4a5bf03b7.jpg looks and plays better
01:23:181 (2,5) http://puu.sh/hSOQz/cfae0819f7.jpg mm?
01:29:215 here is a finish on easy

All in all looks good.
Удачи тебе с этим // Good luck

Kyle Y

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Topic Starter

Kyle Y 2015-05-19T11:19:36+00:00

ZinaMarina wrote:
Well met, comrade! (From m4m)

Easy
01:14:388 (1,2,3) maybe try to make smth like that? http://puu.sh/hSNoN/5cb7e5418a.jpg remain
00:47:491 (2,3) it is differ from other sliders. It's possible to remake it http://puu.sh/hSNNR/490ff8a5df.jpg fixed
00:53:008 (3) it looks easier i think http://puu.sh/hSO4W/73d69d41d6.jpg remain
01:15:077 (2) same same
01:29:215 finish is very loud. Try to make it on 15-20% volumefixed

Surono

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Surono 2015-05-19T18:42:42+00:00

<(``) hi Nardoh..

[Nardo's Muzukashii]
00:40:940 (85) - hmmm maybe kat is for high.. that sound guitar or voice is high.. well forget xD

[Nardo's Oni]
00:40:940 (201) - k.. ~~hmm high~~
00:54:560 (256) - k?
01:20:250 (447,448,449,450,451) - kkdkk or ddkdd, ~ try xD

well, hope helpful~

Nardoxyribonucleic

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Nardoxyribonucleic 2015-05-20T08:20:51+00:00

Surono wrote:
<(``) hi Nardoh.. hi~

[Nardo's Muzukashii]
00:40:940 (85) - hmmm maybe kat is for high.. that sound guitar or voice is high.. well forget xD I followed the decreased vocal pitch there.

[Nardo's Oni]
00:40:940 (201) - k.. ~~hmm high~~ same as Muzukashii
00:54:560 (256) - k? d would be fine as there is no high-pitched sound to map with.
01:20:250 (447,448,449,450,451) - kkdkk or ddkdd, ~ try xD Umm... I think dkdkd would result in a smoother flow.

well, hope helpful~

Thanks for your mod~

Del05

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Del05 2015-05-20T09:36:55+00:00

Hi ZinaMarina !
Thanks for the mod

ZinaMarina wrote:
Normal
00:27:146 is it really needed? Break is too short and hp drain isn't so big I think so too. but many people ask break so will consider it first
01:00:595 (3) it sounds like that http://puu.sh/hSOE3/8607a52afc.jpg I think nope cause the drum is at 01:01:112
01:02:319 (2,3,5,6) http://puu.sh/hSOJ7/d4a5bf03b7.jpg looks and plays better Will consider it
01:23:181 (2,5) http://puu.sh/hSOQz/cfae0819f7.jpg mm? Fixed
01:29:215 here is a finish on easy Nope

My update

Renka

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Renka 2015-05-21T07:36:28+00:00

Hi,from forum. Modded the Taiko.

Nardo's Muzukashii

00:02:664 - delete? - A little break.
00:22:146 - ^
00:23:526 - ^
00:34:560 - ^
00:35:767 - change d? - I think here is a good sound is heard

Nardo's Oni

00:10:164 - delete? - I feel that you do not need.
00:12:922 - ^
00:59:302 - ^

Very good map! Good Luck!

Nardoxyribonucleic

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Nardoxyribonucleic 2015-05-21T09:00:18+00:00

chaica wrote:
Hi,from forum. Modded the Taiko.

Nardo's Muzukashii
00:02:664 - delete? - A little break.Remain unchanged to consistently follow the vocal.
00:22:146 - ^ I would like to keep the note to emphasize the vocal there.
00:23:526 - ^ fixed
00:34:560 - ^ no change since the song becomes denser.
00:35:767 - change d? - I think here is a good sound is heard As the vocal pitch is constant among 00:35:594 (63,64,65,66) - , k would be fine imo.

Nardo's Oni
00:10:164 - delete? - I feel that you do not need. Retained to make it coherent with 00:15:681 -
00:12:922 - ^ ^
00:59:302 - ^ A noticeable sound is present, so keeping the note would be better.

Very good map! Good Luck!

Thanks for your mod and comment~

Update: http://puu.sh/hV5SC.rar

[-FlyingRUPig-]

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[-FlyingRUPig-] 2015-05-21T14:08:35+00:00

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Last edited by [-FlyingRUPig-] 2018-01-10T22:28:52+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Starfy

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Starfy 2015-05-21T14:26:54+00:00

FlyingRUPig wrote:
Starfy's Insane
00:26:974 (1) - Is this slider necessary? It doesn't seemed map to anything, and makes the break start at a later time than the other diffs. A smaller slider like in Hard can work here No change
01:21:888 (6,7) - It's a bit hard to see 7 under that stream Fine I change it

Tks for mod
http://puu.sh/hViYG/9460d37d6e.zip

walaowey

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walaowey 2015-05-22T04:23:38+00:00

FlyingRUPig wrote:
Thanks for modding my map, here's my return mod Hi theere o/

Walao's Insane
Different colors than the rest? Fixed colour >w<

01:20:250 - nc?
Nope..I think its ok

Fun map set.
Thank you for using my queue!

Thanks for the mod

Update

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Source:やはり俺の青春ラブコメはまちがっている。 続
Tags:yahari ore no seishun love comedy wa machigatteiru zoku Oregairu my teen romantic snafu opening 2nd season StarForYou UnLock walaowey Del05 TV Size Nardoxyribonucleic
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WoahE

41 posts

Joined September 2013

WoahE 2015-05-23T07:32:16+00:00

sorry for late mod

Nardo's Oni

00:09:129 (17) - delete ,too dense
00:09:905 (24) - change to k
00:11:888 (40) - delete ,too dense
00:15:422 (68,69,70,71,72) - change to ddkkk
00:15:940 (73) - change to D <^work together
00:31:112 (140) - change to d
00:50:767 (236) - delete
00:58:440 (286) - delete ,plus 00:58:526 (287) - change to K
01:04:646 (332) - delete

(really picking bone from an egg lol

yeah
good luck

Nardoxyribonucleic

osu! Alumni

3,008 posts

Joined May 2011

Nardoxyribonucleic 2015-05-23T09:21:15+00:00

WoahE wrote:
sorry for late mod

Nardo's Oni
00:09:129 (17) - delete ,too dense This is intended to follow the background drums.
00:09:905 (24) - change to k The music has the same pitch as 00:10:077 (26) -
00:11:888 (40) - delete ,too dense same as 00:09:129 (17) -
00:15:422 (68,69,70,71,72) - change to ddkkk kkddd would result in a better flow since the snares are more prominent.
00:15:940 (73) - change to D <^work together The music is really high-pitched here.
00:31:112 (140) - change to d The vocal has the same pitch as 00:30:594 (137) -
00:50:767 (236) - delete Retained for the sake of a similar pattern structure as 00:45:940 -
00:58:440 (286) - delete ,plus 00:58:526 (287) - change to K Remain unchanged for pattern consistency as 00:07:405 -
01:04:646 (332) - delete Similar to 00:50:767 (236) - , keeping the note would result in a better coherence with 01:01:888 (312) -

(really picking bone from an egg lol

yeah
good luck

Thanks for your mod~

Kyle Y

1,204 posts

Joined November 2013

Topic Starter

Kyle Y 2015-05-23T17:19:41+00:00

FlyingRUPig wrote:
Thanks for modding my map, here's my return mod

General
Hard and Unlock's Light Insane seem too close to each other in regards to star diff. Also, AR goes from 7 in Hard, to 7.5 in UnLock's, suddenly to 9 in Starfy's.

00:27:491 - This area is inconsistent between the maps. Half of the maps have a break, half of them don't. I think it should be consistent throughout all the diffs.
Not a must, just a mapping style
Hard
00:13:526 (2,3) - I'm not completely against, but think it should be separated like the rest of the combo.esit when mention again
00:29:215 - nc after a long gap? It'd stay consistent with the other diffsfixed
00:42:664 (3) - I think this combo might look a bit nicer with a curve here fixed
00:45:767 - Maybe a smaller angle for the turn in the slider here? do not understand
00:48:353 (4,1) - A tad confusing for the gap between the two. Minor issue though and mistake can be corrected in a second playthrough. fixed
00:58:353 (4,5) - Separate to flow better? I'm fine with 01:00:250 (1,2,3,4,5,6) as the combo does the same thing both times. fixed
00:59:646 - nc after gap? it should not be a gap? maybe I add nc at 00:58:698 (1) -
01:11:026 (4,5,6,1) Stream of four seems a bit out of place, especially for Hard. However, it does go with the song. Maybe try something with a repeat slider here? I tend to keep
01:11:802 (3,4) - 4 would look nicer blanketing that 3 remain
01:15:077 (3) - 1/2 sliderfixed

Arcubin

689 posts

Joined September 2013

Arcubin 2015-05-31T09:52:12+00:00

hi from m4m

[General]

custom hitsound 2 is unused.. please remove it
there's some issues mentioned by AiMod. fix them

[Easy]
OD = 3 current OD is too low compared to your density, also the hitsound is bad

00:09:905 (4) - move the tail downward. it's offmap
00:14:043 (4) - decrease the angle. current angle quite hurting for easy
verse part quite odd imo cause the heavy downbeat should drop at previous 1/2 beat like 00:18:871 (1) - 00:21:629 (1) - 00:24:388 (1) - maybe change them since the downbeat wasn't following anything but beat
00:30:077 (2) - make a full slider instead start from 00:30:250 -
00:32:491 (1) - slider body kinda off map...
00:35:595 (1) - same as 00:32:491 (1) -
00:38:353 (1) - ^
i suggest to make the bridge part more relaxed since the song is rather slower than the whole song
00:43:698 (1,1) - player maybe doesn't anticipate this well.. i suggest to change the slider into circle like this
00:49:215 (1,2) - http://puu.sh/i6Wf1.jpg
00:54:043 (4) - suggestion to make this two circle cause it was emphasized better
00:54:733 (1) - better to extend this to 00:58:698 - and remove the circle
01:25:077 (1,2,3) - some suggestion cause i think it's not emphasized well http://puu.sh/i6Wsf.jpg

[Del's]
ARnya diturunin ke 4, imo current AR terlalu cepet dibandingin SV

00:01:629 (2) - slider head dikasih whistle rasanya bagus
00:10:250 (6,1) - ini kayaknya buat normal susah deh.. apalagi bpmnya tinggi. menurutku mending dibuat gini
00:13:008 (6,1) - ^
00:31:284 (5,1) - pattern ini kayaknya agak nyusahin buat normal... mungkin dibuat agak circular dikit boleh

well, sebenarnya bagus. tapi sayang beberapa pattern kayak dipaksain

rasanya gak enak dimainin imo

[Hard]
same problem like easy diff... it's hitsounding is bad

00:07:146 (1,2) - i think it's better to emphasize it like this
00:20:422 (1) - space this like what you do in this part
00:20:940 (3) - ^
00:26:974 (5) - why slider? there's no particular sound at 00:27:060 - change this to circle instead
00:44:905 (4,1) - better to change this like http://puu.sh/i6XBr.jpg
00:49:043 (3) - this overlap is bad... try to move them to (288,352)
00:58:698 (1) - same problem as 00:26:974 (5) -

honestly, this diff is so dense judging from the song. it's rather like insane density but with DS... i'm not sure but i think you need a lot of work this diff

[Starfy's]
i think AR = 8 fit better

00:18:008 (9) - wow this troll slider... change to circle?
00:20:336 (2) - slider tail is unreadable.. try to lift it up
00:27:319 - why break? it's only a little gap.. it doesn't make sense imo
00:32:836 (2) - do you think this pattern is readable? it's blocked by combo burst... please change it
00:49:043 (7) - i'd rather make this stack with (7) tail instead

so many overdone slider. i admit this map is neat.. but i don't like your forced slider pattern and overlap

Starfy

1,046 posts

Joined November 2012

Starfy 2015-05-31T12:25:23+00:00

Arcubin wrote:
[Starfy's]
i think AR = 8 fit better It makes a lot of pattern become unreadable

00:18:008 (9) - wow this troll slider... change to circle? Nope, this is not troll. And there is a heavy 1/8 sound here
00:20:336 (2) - slider tail is unreadable.. try to lift it up I think the tail is obvious enough for player to play
00:27:319 - why break? it's only a little gap.. it doesn't make sense imo I can't see any reason that this isn't make sense
00:32:836 (2) - do you think this pattern is readable? it's blocked by combo burst... please change it Yes, absolutely readable, I Promise
00:49:043 (7) - i'd rather make this stack with (7) tail instead Weird imo
so many overdone slider. i admit this map is neat.. but i don't like your forced slider pattern and overlap Just because I like mapping slider more instead of mapping circle only lol

Tks for mod
And no change~

Kyle Y

1,204 posts

Joined November 2013

Topic Starter

Kyle Y 2015-06-03T12:11:22+00:00

Arcubin wrote:
hi from m4m
SPOILER
[General]
custom hitsound 2 is unused.. please remove it okay, I will do that
there's some issues mentioned by AiMod. fix them it is just becasue taiko mode do not support countdown and letterbox, it is not a problem in fact

[Easy]
OD = 3 current OD is too low compared to your density, also the hitsound is bad

00:09:905 (4) - move the tail downward. it's offmapfixed
00:14:043 (4) - decrease the angle. current angle quite hurting for easyfixed
verse part quite odd imo cause the heavy downbeat should drop at previous 1/2 beat like 00:18:871 (1) - 00:21:629 (1) - 00:24:388 (1) - maybe change them since the downbeat wasn't following anything but beat follow the vocal
00:30:077 (2) - make a full slider instead start from 00:30:250 - fix if mention again
00:32:491 (1) - slider body kinda off map...fixed
00:35:595 (1) - same as 00:32:491 (1) -^
00:38:353 (1) - ^^
i suggest to make the bridge part more relaxed since the song is rather slower than the whole songI will consider it, fix when mention again
00:43:698 (1,1) - player maybe doesn't anticipate this well.. i suggest to change the slider into circle like thisI think this is okay
00:49:215 (1,2) - http://puu.sh/i6Wf1.jpgum.....
00:54:043 (4) - suggestion to make this two circle cause it was emphasized better remain
00:54:733 (1) - better to extend this to 00:58:698 - and remove the circle fixed
01:25:077 (1,2,3) - some suggestion cause i think it's not emphasized well http://puu.sh/i6Wsf.jpg

[Hard]
same problem like easy diff... it's hitsounding is bad
Hard I change a lot on it, so I am not going to give feedback
00:07:146 (1,2) - i think it's better to emphasize it like this
00:20:422 (1) - space this like what you do in this part
00:20:940 (3) - ^
00:26:974 (5) - why slider? there's no particular sound at 00:27:060 - change this to circle instead
00:44:905 (4,1) - better to change this like http://puu.sh/i6XBr.jpg
00:49:043 (3) - this overlap is bad... try to move them to (288,352)
00:58:698 (1) - same problem as 00:26:974 (5) -
honestly, this diff is so dense judging from the song. it's rather like insane density but with DS... i'm not sure but i think you need a lot of work this diff

Del05

482 posts

Joined May 2014

Del05 2015-06-05T13:28:57+00:00

Hi
Thanks for give me some mods

Arcubin wrote:
[Del's]
ARnya diturunin ke 4, imo current AR terlalu cepet dibandingin SV Fixed

00:01:629 (2) - slider head dikasih whistle rasanya bagus Fixed
00:10:250 (6,1) - ini kayaknya buat normal susah deh.. apalagi bpmnya tinggi. menurutku mending dibuat gini Fixed
00:13:008 (6,1) - ^ Fixed
00:31:284 (5,1) - pattern ini kayaknya agak nyusahin buat normal... mungkin dibuat agak circular dikit boleh Will consider it

My update

[R]

1,050 posts

Joined November 2013

[R] 2015-06-06T18:30:01+00:00

from queue
Suggestion

[General]

check AiMod (ctrl+shift+A)

[Muzukashi]

00:35:940 - d
00:40:250 - delete ? if applied 00:40:595 - move 00:40:422-
00:52:836 - move 00:52:491 -
01:17:836 (218,219,220) - ctrl+G
01:18:871 - i hear d sound here

[Oni]

00:08:267 - delete ? also 00:11:026 -
00:32:233 - move 00:32:060 -
00:34:991 - ^
00:35:595 - d ?
00:37:836 - delete
00:37:405 - move 00:37:577 -
00:58:267 (284,285,286,287) - ctrl+G ?
01:16:802 - 01:19:215 - try delete some note for rest
01:20:250 (447,448,449,450,451) - ddkdd

~~nope~~
Good Luck

Last edited by [R] 2015-06-10T09:38:39+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Nardoxyribonucleic

osu! Alumni

3,008 posts

Joined May 2011

Nardoxyribonucleic 2015-06-06T19:02:08+00:00

[R] wrote:
from queue
Suggestion

[General]
check AiMod (ctrl+shift+A) Countdown and letterbox are not recommended in Taiko diffs.
[Muzukashi]
00:35:940 - d The pitch of 00:35:594 (62,63,64,65) - is the same.
00:40:250 - delete ? if applied 00:40:595 - move 00:40:422- The current pattern would be easier to follow.
00:52:836 - move 00:52:491 - Retained to fit the drum.
01:17:836 (218,219,220) - ctrl+G k k d would be better for the vocal.
01:18:871 - i hear d sound here The 2/1 break is intentional due to the previous dense patterns.
[Oni]
00:08:267 - delete ? also 00:11:026 - I would prefer following the drums there.
00:32:233 - move 00:32:060 - The current position would result in a better flow imo.
00:34:991 - ^ ^
00:35:595 - d ? k would be better since the vocal pitch is relatively high.
00:37:836 - delete Drums again.
00:37:405 - move 00:37:577 - Remain unchanged for pattern consistency as 00:33:267 -
00:58:267 (284,285,286,287) - ctrl+G ? same as 00:37:836 -
01:16:802 - 01:19:215 - try delete some note for rest The higher note density would bring a greater impact for the kiai.
01:20:250 (447,448,449,450,451) - ddkdd I think both of them are fine. Keeping mine atm.
also help my beatmap with your ~~bubble~~ moding
Good Luck

Thanks for your mod~

Yohanes

1,283 posts

Joined February 2014

Yohanes 2015-06-08T17:35:47+00:00

As requested, here's my mod...
Prepare yourself

[General]

Don't forget about your diff spread :3

[Easy]

00:11:974 - This part have a strong beat. I'd suggest you to map this part as 1/1, 1/1 instead of 2/1, circle. This serves the rythym better http://puu.sh/ih53P/3224e45196.jpg
00:16:112 - You can map this part to make this diff more "alive" here is my suggestion how I map it, start from 00:15:077 (1) - http://puu.sh/ih5HV/6ae346c361.jpg
00:18:871 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - you made pretty poor rythym choice here. I higly suggest you to remap this part. Suggestion below :
00:18:871 (1,2) - you can make something like this http://puu.sh/ih6pj/6426fdd1d7.jpg, since the music vocal I mean start from 00:19:043 -
00:21:629 (1,2,1,2) - Pretty much same reason with 00:18:871 (1,2) you can use this pattern, or be creative and make one your own http://puu.sh/ih6Ci/a6c99c16ad.jpg and again, my pattern starts from 00:21:802 -
00:44:215 (1) - Spinner doesn't fit here in easy diff since it'll make the spinner too short or makes player doesn't have enough recovery after spinning to hit the notes t/241019&start=0. Change this into slider instead, start from 00:44:388 - and ends at 00:46:457 -
01:06:112 (2,3) - you can't use 1/2 slider in the easiest difficulty, separate them at least 1/1 measure away http://puu.sh/ih7vw/fa701488f1.jpg
01:15:077 (2,3) - This sounds weird, try using 1/1, 1/1, cicrle instead http://puu.sh/ih7bz/5bbe40f592.jpg
01:25:767 (3) - Remove repeat. 01:27:146 (4) - Move to 01:26:802 - . Start spinner at 01:27:491 - ends at 01:27:491 (1) -
So, yeah. Most of the problems related to the rythym that you choose as a baseline to map. In the very beginning on this diff, you made a pretty good job on choosing the right rythym. But, going onward especially starts from 00:18:871 I can't feel the base rythym on your map. It makes difficult for players to play your diff. Firstly, sorry if I'm a bit to harsh. But, I still remember when I mod your first map 6 months ago, and problems on your maps still remains pretty much the same. Remember, this is a rythym game. We maps to the song. So, my suggestion is listen carefully to the song, determined every beat as baseline, and map it. And you'll get better in no time. I know that I'm not the one who talk, but at least let me help you by this way

[Del's Normal]

00:04:043 (2) - Minor, make this slides downward. Since the music has downbeat uwu, CMIIW example: http://puu.sh/ih7Hn/0bc7bc8caf.jpg
Pretty good actually I can't find major problems in this diff and I'm too lazy to any find minor problems don't kill me
And your diff has a lot of 1/2 which worries me a bit

[Hard]

Yeah, the problems still remains the same

00:10:940 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - This pattern seems forced and doesn't play that well
00:18:181 (3,4,5) - Please don't do this. this is unpleasant to play and watch
00:18:698 (5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - Simply sayin, this is overmapping. You should change this into pattern that suitale to the song and diff, remember this is hard diff
00:21:802 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - same^ even though this one is not as bizzare as before
Actually those two problems mentioned above goes on and on in this entire diff, so I wont bother mention all of it.
Alright, you should improve your hitsounding as well. Most majority of maps guarantee a clap in every 2nd and 4th beat each measurement http://puu.sh/ih9HK/87d3e1115c.jpg, so put clap in every single one of it. When you hear cymbal clash, put finish. And place whistle wherever it fits.

[Starfy's Insane]

seems nice :3

[Walao's Insane]

00:09:905 (5) - I'd rather have circles instead of 1/2 repeat slider here, Inconsistencies between these notes also takes a part of it being quite unpleasant to play 00:09:560 (3,4,5) -
00:10:422 (1,2,3,4,1) - Inconsistent spacing, which is not a good thing to have. Consider to rearrange this pattern to make it a bit more consistent
00:30:940 (6) - ctrl+G?
00:34:388 (3,4,5) - Delete triplets, it maps to nothing
00:35:250 (1,2) - Way too close, separate them more
00:44:215 (2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - I really don't see the point the way you map this part. The music have nothing to requires you to put such a continuous huge jumps here. Please, I higly recommend you to remap this part.
00:54:388 (5,6,1) - Delete triplets 00:54:560 (1) - remove finish on tail
00:55:422 (8,9,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - poor hitsounding
00:59:733 - make something like this? http://puu.sh/ihbSV/e054562327.jpg
01:09:733 (1,2,3) - This triplets at the end speaks nothing about the song
Overall, quite alright, but you have to refined your hitsounding

Thats all I guess

Once again, I'm sorry if I'm being to harsh. I hope this helps.
Catch me in-game if you have further questions
Good luck with this set~

walaowey

952 posts

Joined March 2012

walaowey 2015-06-08T21:56:57+00:00

yaldo_27 wrote:
As requested, here's my mod...
Prepare yourself

[General]

[Walao's Insane]
00:09:905 (5) - I'd rather have circles instead of 1/2 repeat slider here, Inconsistencies between these notes also takes a part of it being quite unpleasant to play 00:09:560 (3,4,5) - mm, i dont think its not that inconsistent here.. everybody testing it seems fine playing it lol..but if more modder talk about this..I'll consider change it
00:10:422 (1,2,3,4,1) - Inconsistent spacing, which is not a good thing to have. Consider to rearrange this pattern to make it a bit more consistent Its a little jump there lol
00:30:940 (6) - ctrl+G? nope..I think its ok here
00:34:388 (3,4,5) - Delete triplets, it maps to nothing fixed
00:35:250 (1,2) - Way too close, separate them more its good to play..so y not xD
00:44:215 (2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - I really don't see the point the way you map this part. The music have nothing to requires you to put such a continuous huge jumps here. Please, I higly recommend you to remap this part. lol, if u listen carefully, the music is getting high here. its starting to get slow around 00:45:767 (5) - so i decrease the jump again
00:54:388 (5,6,1) - Delete triplets 00:54:560 (1) - remove finish on tail fixed both of it
00:55:422 (8,9,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - poor hitsounding fixed
00:59:733 - make something like this? http://puu.sh/ihbSV/e054562327.jpg nope i like the way it is now
01:09:733 (1,2,3) - This triplets at the end speaks nothing about the song nope..I'll remain this.it feels comfortable to play..but if more modder tell me to remove it..then yeah
Overall, quite alright, but you have to refined your hitsounding yeah, I've change the hitsound a bit.. xD

Thats all I guess
Once again, I'm sorry if I'm being to harsh. I hope this helps.
Catch me in-game if you have further questions
Good luck with this set~

Thanks for the mod :3

Update

osu file format v14

[General]
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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 60250
Countdown: 1
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
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LetterboxInBreaks: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.3
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
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Title:Haru Modoki
TitleUnicode:春擬き
Artist:yanaginagi
ArtistUnicode:yanaginagi
Creator:Kyle Y
Version:Walao's Insane
Source:やはり俺の青春ラブコメはまちがっている。 続
Tags:yahari ore no seishun love comedy wa machigatteiru zoku Oregairu my teen romantic snafu opening 2nd season StarForYou UnLock walaowey Del05 TV Size Nardoxyribonucleic
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BeatmapSetID:305737

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OverallDifficulty:7
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339,318,81974,2,0,L|299:361,1,53.9999983520508,10|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
207,355,82146,2,0,L|247:312,1,53.9999983520508,10|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
219,242,82319,6,0,L|353:100,1,180,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
268,20,82836,1,0,0:0:0:0:
151,21,83008,1,2,0:0:0:0:
72,107,83181,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,183,83353,1,10,0:0:0:0:
277,181,83526,6,0,P|325:188|385:170,1,90,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
194,137,83871,2,0,P|187:185|205:245,1,90,0|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
238,56,84215,2,0,P|190:49|130:67,1,90,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,101,84560,2,0,P|327:53|309:-7,1,90,0|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
194,137,84905,1,0,0:0:0:0:
292,224,85077,5,4,0:0:0:0:
320,101,85250,1,0,0:0:0:0:
215,206,85422,1,10,0:0:0:0:
346,171,85595,1,0,0:0:0:0:
247,81,85767,1,2,0:0:0:0:
141,189,85940,2,0,P|146:238|186:276,1,90,0|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,303,86284,2,0,P|316:254|277:215,1,90,12|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
121,61,86802,5,2,0:0:0:0:
193,282,87146,1,2,0:0:0:0:
366,124,87491,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,192,87577,12,2,89215,0:0:0:0:

Kyle Y

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Topic Starter

Kyle Y 2015-06-09T02:53:59+00:00

yaldo_27 wrote:
As requested, here's my mod...
Prepare yourself

[General]
Don't forget about your diff spread :3

[Easy]
00:11:974 - This part have a strong beat. I'd suggest you to map this part as 1/1, 1/1 instead of 2/1, circle. This serves the rythym better http://puu.sh/ih53P/3224e45196.jpg fixed
00:16:112 - You can map this part to make this diff more "alive" here is my suggestion how I map it, start from 00:15:077 (1) - http://puu.sh/ih5HV/6ae346c361.jpg For this part, I decided not to map it
00:18:871 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - you made pretty poor rythym choice here. I higly suggest you to remap this part. Suggestion below : I just prevent use too much 1/2, and make this more relax
00:18:871 (1,2) - you can make something like this http://puu.sh/ih6pj/6426fdd1d7.jpg, since the music vocal I mean start from 00:19:043 -
00:21:629 (1,2,1,2) - Pretty much same reason with 00:18:871 (1,2) you can use this pattern, or be creative and make one your own http://puu.sh/ih6Ci/a6c99c16ad.jpg and again, my pattern starts from 00:21:802 -
00:44:215 (1) - Spinner doesn't fit here in easy diff since it'll make the spinner too short or makes player doesn't have enough recovery after spinning to hit the notes t/241019&start=0. Change this into slider instead, start from 00:44:388 - and ends at 00:46:457 - I surely give enough recovery after spinning, 1500ms only appear for 160bpm, and this song is 174bpm.
And then the length, it lasted for 4.5 beat and It is enough
01:06:112 (2,3) - you can't use 1/2 slider in the easiest difficulty, separate them at least 1/1 measure away http://puu.sh/ih7vw/fa701488f1.jpg it is suggested by another modder
01:15:077 (2,3) - This sounds weird, try using 1/1, 1/1, cicrle instead http://puu.sh/ih7bz/5bbe40f592.jpg it is mapped base on bg music
01:25:767 (3) - Remove repeat. 01:27:146 (4) - Move to 01:26:802 - . Start spinner at 01:27:491 - ends at 01:27:491 (1) - fixed
So, yeah. Most of the problems related to the rythym that you choose as a baseline to map. In the very beginning on this diff, you made a pretty good job on choosing the right rythym. But, going onward especially starts from 00:18:871 I can't feel the base rythym on your map. It makes difficult for players to play your diff. Firstly, sorry if I'm a bit to harsh. But, I still remember when I mod your first map 6 months ago, and problems on your maps still remains pretty much the same. Remember, this is a rythym game. We maps to the song. So, my suggestion is listen carefully to the song, determined every beat as baseline, and map it. And you'll get better in no time. I know that I'm not the one who talk, but at least let me help you by this way

[Hard]
Yeah, the problems still remains the same
00:10:940 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - This pattern seems forced and doesn't play that well 4 <-> 6
00:18:181 (3,4,5) - Please don't do this. this is unpleasant to play and watch fixed
00:18:698 (5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - Simply sayin, this is overmapping. You should change this into pattern that suitale to the song and diff, remember this is hard diff using 1/2 is common in hard right?
00:21:802 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - same^ even though this one is not as bizzare as before
Actually those two problems mentioned above goes on and on in this entire diff, so I wont bother mention all of it.
Alright, you should improve your hitsounding as well. Most majority of maps guarantee a clap in every 2nd and 4th beat each measurement http://puu.sh/ih9HK/87d3e1115c.jpg, so put clap in every single one of it. When you hear cymbal clash, put finish. And place whistle wherever it fits.

Thats all I guess
Once again, I'm sorry if I'm being to harsh. I hope this helps.
Catch me in-game if you have further questions
Good luck with this set~

Del05

482 posts

Joined May 2014

Del05 2015-06-12T09:37:37+00:00

Hi
Thanks for the mod

yaldo_27 wrote:
[Del's Normal]
00:04:043 (2) - Minor, make this slides downward. Since the music has downbeat uwu, CMIIW example: http://puu.sh/ih7Hn/0bc7bc8caf.jpg Fixed
Pretty good actually I can't find major problems in this diff and I'm too lazy to any find minor problems don't kill me
And your diff has a lot of 1/2 which worries me a bit I think it is okay

Rizia

3,114 posts

Joined January 2012

Rizia 2015-06-13T10:08:24+00:00

[SFY]

00:18:008 (9) - slide上的whistle放錯了?
00:40:595 (4) - ^
00:40:250 (1,2,3,4,5) - 這種地方我覺得snap成全部1/3 circle/slider 或者 1/3 slider -> circle - slider -> circle.
01:21:801 (5,6,7,8) - 有點難讀
有很多finish可以加, 例如 00:15:940 - 00:18:698 - 00:26:974 - 00:29:733 - , 剩下的自己發掘

[Hard]

00:07:146 (1) - 延長到00:07:664 - 直接做7連
00:09:560 (2,3) - stack在一起的話玩上去會感覺好一點
00:11:802 (6,1) - 這種突然的跳會很危險建議改一改
00:13:526 (1,2,3,4,5) - 這組circle有點多會很難打我個人會建議hard的circle不會連續超過4個
00:18:698 (5) - 1個1/1 slider 到00:19:043 - , 現在的節奏打上去和看上去也很怪
00:20:077 (5,1) - 改成slider
00:21:457 (5,1) - 這兩個距離可以近一點
00:22:319 (3,4) - ^
00:26:629 (3) - 可以不放這麼遠現在的距上跟00:25:595 (5,1) - 的1/1現覺上差不多
00:32:319 - 為何要ignore這個鼓
00:35:077 - ^
00:45:077 (1,2) - 背景還有聲音可以跟的不用長滑條帶過
00:59:733 (2,3,4) - hard不建議這樣獨立一組的circle 3連, 換成slider會好點
01:11:284 - ~ 01:12:836 - 這段的鼓應該在1/1(白線) 而不是1/2(紅線)
01:22:319 - ~ 01:25:077 - ^

good luck

Kyle Y

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Joined November 2013

Topic Starter

Kyle Y 2015-06-13T16:34:11+00:00

Kawaiwkyik wrote:
[SFY]
00:18:008 (9) - slide上的whistle放錯了?
00:40:595 (4) - ^
00:40:250 (1,2,3,4,5) - 這種地方我覺得snap成全部1/3 circle/slider 或者 1/3 slider -> circle - slider -> circle.
01:21:801 (5,6,7,8) - 有點難讀
有很多finish可以加, 例如 00:15:940 - 00:18:698 - 00:26:974 - 00:29:733 - , 剩下的自己發掘
starfy 有東西要改
就有種.... 他終於(強調)有東西要改的感覺
好像他被打敗的感覺

[Hard]
00:07:146 (1) - 延長到00:07:664 - 直接做7連改了
00:09:560 (2,3) - stack在一起的話玩上去會感覺好一點改了
00:11:802 (6,1) - 這種突然的跳會很危險建議改一改改了
00:13:526 (1,2,3,4,5) - 這組circle有點多會很難打我個人會建議hard的circle不會連續超過4個改了
00:18:698 (5) - 1個1/1 slider 到00:19:043 - , 現在的節奏打上去和看上去也很怪改了
00:20:077 (5,1) - 改成slider改了
00:21:457 (5,1) - 這兩個距離可以近一點改了
00:22:319 (3,4) - ^改了
00:26:629 (3) - 可以不放這麼遠現在的距上跟00:25:595 (5,1) - 的1/1現覺上差不多改了
00:32:319 - 為何要ignore這個鼓是說我沒發現有鼓(X) 加了圈圈了
00:35:077 - ^ ^
00:45:077 (1,2) - 背景還有聲音可以跟的不用長滑條帶過改了
00:59:733 (2,3,4) - hard不建議這樣獨立一組的circle 3連, 換成slider會好點改了
01:11:284 - ~ 01:12:836 - 這段的鼓應該在1/1(白線) 而不是1/2(紅線)改了
01:22:319 - ~ 01:25:077 - ^
good luck

Starfy

1,046 posts

Joined November 2012

Starfy 2015-06-14T04:38:08+00:00

Kawaiwkyik wrote:
[SFY]
00:18:008 (9) - slide上的whistle放錯了?
00:40:595 (4) - ^
00:40:250 (1,2,3,4,5) - 這種地方我覺得snap成全部1/3 circle/slider 或者 1/3 slider -> circle - slider -> circle.
01:21:801 (5,6,7,8) - 有點難讀
有很多finish可以加, 例如 00:15:940 - 00:18:698 - 00:26:974 - 00:29:733 - , 剩下的自己發掘

All fixed except: 00:18:008 (9) - whistle冇放錯imo
Thanks for mod http://puu.sh/io6ax/fe6d4ee137.zip

newyams99

694 posts

Joined December 2013

newyams99 2015-06-15T04:06:18+00:00

I love this song

The difficulties were really well mapped too, so not too many suggestions.

Nardo's Muzukashii

Suggestions:

00:38:008 (72) - This finisher isn't consistent with the previous two. I don't hear anything special, so I think you should remove the finisher. Might just be me. Same thing with the Oni too.

Optional:

00:00:940 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - This part is exactly the same as the Oni, so I thought instead you could remove hits 2-4, and 6-11. Then, add a d at 00:03:698. This is just to match the piano rather than the vocals. Honestly, this optional suggestion was to add some length to the mod

00:44:215 (92) - Maybe change this to a slider up to 00:46:112? idk.

00:58:871 - This section is rather empty compared to the Oni. I think you should add a bit more 1/2 hits.

01:27:491 (253) - I think you should change this to a spinner. Same with the Oni if you're going to do this.

Nardo's Oni

Optional:

00:19:991 - It's possible to add a d here. Same thing at 00:25:508.

00:59:129 - You could add a d here, but it might make it a bit too hard.

00:54:560 (256,257) - Rather than this, I think making hit 256 a k, removing the finisher on hit 257 and then adding another k between the two would sound nice.

01:05:422 (339) - I think you should change this to a d.

01:15:940 (415,416,417,418,419) - I don't think this five hit dkkkd pattern is the best. Maybe just try some other patterns and see if you can find a better one.

This anime and the song are both so good, and also love your maps Nardo. Good luck on rank

Nardoxyribonucleic

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Joined May 2011

Nardoxyribonucleic 2015-06-15T14:13:30+00:00

newyams99 wrote:
I love this song The difficulties were really well mapped too, so not too many suggestions.

Nardo's Muzukashii

Suggestions:

00:38:008 (72) - This finisher isn't consistent with the previous two. I don't hear anything special, so I think you should remove the finisher. Might just be me. Same thing with the Oni too. Added finish regarding the crash cymbal at 00:35:250 - in both diffs.

Optional:

00:00:940 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - This part is exactly the same as the Oni, so I thought instead you could remove hits 2-4, and 6-11. Then, add a d at 00:03:698. This is just to match the piano rather than the vocals. Honestly, this optional suggestion was to add some length to the mod Deleted 2 and 4 instead.

00:44:215 (92) - Maybe change this to a slider up to 00:46:112? idk. I would prefer keeping the note for the stretched vocal.

00:58:871 - This section is rather empty compared to the Oni. I think you should add a bit more 1/2 hits. The break is intentional because of the harder pattern at 00:59:733 (140,141,142) -

01:27:491 (253) - I think you should change this to a spinner. Same with the Oni if you're going to do this. As the music is rather weak, it would be better to use single note.

Nardo's Oni

Optional:

00:19:991 - It's possible to add a d here. Same thing at 00:25:508. As the music in this part is relatively calm, 1/2 notes are preferred.

00:59:129 - You could add a d here, but it might make it a bit too hard. Yeah, that's why I did not connect them together.

00:54:560 (256,257) - Rather than this, I think making hit 256 a k, removing the finisher on hit 257 and then adding another k between the two would sound nice. I would like to emphasize the stressed sound using a finish there.

01:05:422 (339) - I think you should change this to a d. Retained for the high-pitched sound.

01:15:940 (415,416,417,418,419) - I don't think this five hit dkkkd pattern is the best. Maybe just try some other patterns and see if you can find a better one. same as ^

This anime and the song are both so good, and also love your maps Nardo. Good luck on rank That's nice to hear~ :3

Thanks for your mod~

Update: http://puu.sh/ipIsw.rar

h1b1k11

261 posts

Joined April 2014

h1b1k11 2015-06-21T20:10:04+00:00

Request for hard!

Hard

00:00:940 (1,2) - Fix blanket

00:12:664 (3) - Remove this reverse because you wouldn't know where to put 00:13:181 (4) anywhere
^^00:13:008 - Add another slider ending 00:13:181
00:32:491 (1) - Move this a little to the right for consistent flow

00:35:250 (1) - ^^
00:37:664 (5) - Curve this the other way

00:44:733 (3,4,1) - Ehm...She sings a long 'ro' right here so I would do something about this. What I would do is:
00:44:733 (3,4) - Remove these
^^00:44:733 (1) - Move this slider up here ending at 00:44:733 (1)

00:48:353 (2) - Slider ends here
01:02:319 (4,5) - Also here, she sings a long 'kara' here. Do this instead:
01:02:319 (4) - Remove
^^01:02:664 (5) - Move this slider up here instead
^^01:02:836 - Then add another slider at this point ending 01:03:008
01:14:043 - 01:15:077 - Map this whole thing except of leaving 01:14:388 (1,2) to take care of.

Looks good so far.

Kyle Y

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Joined November 2013

Topic Starter

Kyle Y 2015-06-23T11:30:32+00:00

imaikiseta wrote:

Request for hard!

Hard
00:00:940 (1,2) - Fix blanket um.... nothing about blanket

00:12:664 (3) - Remove this reverse because you wouldn't know where to put 00:13:181 (4) anywhere fixed
^^00:13:008 - Add another slider ending 00:13:181 fixed
00:32:491 (1) - Move this a little to the right for consistent flow I think it's okay now

00:35:250 (1) - ^^
00:37:664 (5) - Curve this the other wayremain

00:44:733 (3,4,1) - Ehm...She sings a long 'ro' right here so I would do something about this. What I would do is:
00:44:733 (3,4) - Remove these
^^00:44:733 (1) - Move this slider up here ending at 00:44:733 (1)
changed
00:48:353 (2) - Slider ends here
01:02:319 (4,5) - Also here, she sings a long 'kara' here. Do this instead:
01:02:319 (4) - Remove
^^01:02:664 (5) - Move this slider up here instead
^^01:02:836 - Then add another slider at this point ending 01:03:008 fixed, I think
01:14:043 - 01:15:077 - Map this whole thing except of leaving 01:14:388 (1,2) to take care of.remain

Looks good so far.

h1b1k11

261 posts

Joined April 2014

h1b1k11 2015-06-23T18:25:55+00:00

Kyle Y wrote:
imaikiseta wrote:

Request for hard!

Hard
00:00:940 (1,2) - Fix blanket um.... nothing about blanket

00:12:664 (3) - Remove this reverse because you wouldn't know where to put 00:13:181 (4) anywhere fixed
^^00:13:008 - Add another slider ending 00:13:181 fixed
00:32:491 (1) - Move this a little to the right for consistent flow I think it's okay now

00:35:250 (1) - ^^
00:37:664 (5) - Curve this the other wayremain

00:44:733 (3,4,1) - Ehm...She sings a long 'ro' right here so I would do something about this. What I would do is:
00:44:733 (3,4) - Remove these
^^00:44:733 (1) - Move this slider up here ending at 00:44:733 (1)
changed
00:48:353 (2) - Slider ends here
01:02:319 (4,5) - Also here, she sings a long 'kara' here. Do this instead:
01:02:319 (4) - Remove
^^01:02:664 (5) - Move this slider up here instead
^^01:02:836 - Then add another slider at this point ending 01:03:008 fixed, I think
01:14:043 - 01:15:077 - Map this whole thing except of leaving 01:14:388 (1,2) to take care of.remain

Looks good so far.

With all that red, I thought you were rejecting my whole mod for a sec. xDD Maybe use blue next time?

FaiVillager

268 posts

Joined October 2012

FaiVillager 2015-06-25T03:07:56+00:00

这两天有点。。。抱歉发现晚了
Mod送上.

[W's I]
Hitsound is weird for me specially during the first part of the track before 00:06:112 (4) -
Here I suggest remove all whistle at least cause this period make people feel gentle.
And this whistle does not suit the song, naybe try another one?
00:03:698 (1) - blanket better
00:06:112 (4) - fix flow like:

00:06:629 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - looks not good, could change shape or make it smoother
00:11:974 (1) - cancel NC 00:12:319 (2) - add NC will looks better
00:14:043 (3,4,5,6,1) - use ctrl+shift+D to make a perfect star.
00:15:422 (4,5,6,7,8) - fix to smoother,better close Grid
00:25:250 (5,1) - using this kind of sliders I suggest these two is in the same curvature and overlap more.
00:26:284 (3) - remove this and replace 2&4
00:27:146 Hmmm,,, why breaktime?
00:29:733 (1) - blanket better
00:34:560 (4) - ^
00:35:250 (1,2) - low DS make me feel strange here.
00:45:250 (2,3,4,5) - try make a square?
00:46:284 (9,1) - bad flow for me
00:47:836 (1,2,3,4) - ^
00:52:664 (3,5) - as wat I told and make these separate
00:58:698 (1) - about x156 y32
01:05:767 oops?
01:14:388 (2,3) - these two should be in the same curvature.
01:16:974 (2) - circles are better than a slider.01:17:319 (3,4) - the opposite
01:20:767 (1) - bad overlap
01:23:353 (5,1) - bad flow
As I played this diff I feel a little bit uncomfortable cause the flow..Maybe someone like it but I don't sry..

[H]
Attention to blankets. So many blankets are not perfect.
00:00:940 (1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3) - somewhere could use a stop to make it more interesting
00:16:284 (1,2) - fix to a streight line.
00:27:146 diferent from Insane u can use a break but u need to add it..
00:43:181 (5,1) - maybe make a perfect overlap?
00:47:836 (1) - a broken line slider doesn't loonk nice
00:47:836 (1) -

01:17:319 (4,5) - place a slide better
01:19:560 (1,2,3,4,5) - use stops to suit the lyric.
01:21:802 (4) - remove it

[E]
00:02:319 (2) -

00:08:526 (2,3) - prefer same curvature
00:18:871 (1) - it isn't fit the song.
00:21:629 (1) - ^ and at least you should make it:

00:24:388 (1) - ^
00:34:733 (4,1) - same curvature
00:39:560 (3,4) - ^
00:49:215 (1) - bad overlap
01:02:664 (4,1) - bad flow.. my opinion:

and fix DS
01:06:112 (2,3) - others told me not to make two notes nearer than two white line in easy diff
01:15:077 (2,3) - I can't understand why this rhythm...
01:22:319 (1) - don't use renntry slider cause u got nothing at 01:23:181

[Del's N]
Almost perfect for me but need a little work on blankets
01:13:353 (4,5,1,2) - try another shape? looks weird compare to the other part of the mapset

[S's I]
音效跟另外一个insane一样怪怪的至少开头不要用whistle
00:03:698 (1,2,3,4,5) - 换个形状吧这个看着真的有点别扭
00:10:423 (1) - 这个遮盖玩起来有点难受
00:13:181 (1) - 不推荐3/4滑条音效听起来不舒服
00:20:336 (2) - 额。。。我真的被这个滑条坑了两次。。在没开编辑器h之前
00:34:043 (8,9) - 做个blanket或者让这俩弧度一样吧
01:17:146 (2) - 尽量把头部正好放到3里边♂
01:18:871 (3,4) - 3的尾部和4尽量弄成弧度一样的 3里边多放一个白点会更圆滑
01:27:491 (4,1) - 跟其他难度相比这个从节奏上就说不过去吧推荐还是把最后一个滑条换成点然后直接转盘
这个insane比之前那个好多了至少玩起来顺手

That's it . Hope it helpful ;w;
Waiting for your mod tho.

Starfy

1,046 posts

Joined November 2012

Starfy 2015-06-25T10:44:18+00:00

FaiVillager wrote:
[S's I]
音效跟另外一个insane一样怪怪的至少开头不要用whistle ?why
00:03:698 (1,2,3,4,5) - 换个形状吧这个看着真的有点别扭 There is no any problem imo
00:10:423 (1) - 这个遮盖玩起来有点难受 i think this is no problem
00:13:181 (1) - 不推荐3/4滑条音效听起来不舒服 I think 3/4 is better
00:20:336 (2) - 额。。。我真的被这个滑条坑了两次。。在没开编辑器h之前 ;w;
00:34:043 (8,9) - 做个blanket或者让这俩弧度一样吧 弧度一樣already
01:17:146 (2) - 尽量把头部正好放到3里边♂ quite weird♂
01:18:871 (3,4) - 3的尾部和4尽量弄成弧度一样的 3里边多放一个白点会更圆滑 Now is 圓滑 enough
01:27:491 (4,1) - 跟其他难度相比这个从节奏上就说不过去吧推荐还是把最后一个滑条换成点然后直接转盘 No
这个insane比之前那个好多了至少玩起来顺手

Tks for mod&No change

Kyle Y

1,204 posts

Joined November 2013

Topic Starter

Kyle Y 2015-06-26T14:36:10+00:00

FaiVillager wrote:
这两天有点。。。抱歉发现晚了
Mod送上.

[H]
Attention to blankets. So many blankets are not perfect. checked once
00:00:940 (1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3) - somewhere could use a stop to make it more interesting no idea on it
00:16:284 (1,2) - fix to a streight line. fixed
00:27:146 diferent from Insane u can use a break but u need to add it..added
00:43:181 (5,1) - maybe make a perfect overlap? fixed
00:47:836 (1) - a broken line slider doesn't loonk nice 00:47:836 (1) - do not understand

01:17:319 (4,5) - place a slide better I think notes still okay
01:19:560 (1,2,3,4,5) - use stops to suit the lyric. do not understand
01:21:802 (4) - remove it fixed

[E]
00:02:319 (2) -

00:08:526 (2,3) - prefer same curvature Why?
00:18:871 (1) - it isn't fit the song.
00:21:629 (1) - ^ and at least you should make it:

00:24:388 (1) - ^fixed
00:34:733 (4,1) - same curvature fixed
00:39:560 (3,4) - ^fixed
00:49:215 (1) - bad overlap I will leave it here, if mention again, I will edit on it
01:02:664 (4,1) - bad flow.. my opinion: fixed

and fix DS
01:06:112 (2,3) - others told me not to make two notes nearer than two white line in easy diff fixed
01:15:077 (2,3) - I can't understand why this rhythm... fixed
01:22:319 (1) - don't use renntry slider cause u got nothing at 01:23:181 a drum(?) sound here

That's it . Hope it helpful ;w;
Waiting for your mod tho.

Del05

482 posts

Joined May 2014

Del05 2015-06-26T14:41:13+00:00

Hi
Thanks for the mod

FaiVillager wrote:
[Del's N]
Almost perfect for me but need a little work on blankets
01:13:353 (4,5,1,2) - try another shape? looks weird compare to the other part of the mapset Hmm... i will consider it i think it is okay like now

walaowey

952 posts

Joined March 2012

walaowey 2015-06-29T14:02:15+00:00

FaiVillager wrote:
这两天有点。。。抱歉发现晚了
Mod送上.

[W's I]
Hitsound is weird for me specially during the first part of the track before 00:06:112 (4) -
Here I suggest remove all whistle at least cause this period make people feel gentle.
And this whistle does not suit the song, naybe try another one? fixed
00:03:698 (1) - blanket better fixed, a little bit off only though..lol
00:06:112 (4) - fix flow like: fixed

00:06:629 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - looks not good, could change shape or make it smoother fixed it my own way
00:11:974 (1) - cancel NC 00:12:319 (2) - add NC will looks better no, the beats is higher at (1)
00:14:043 (3,4,5,6,1) - use ctrl+shift+D to make a perfect star. the star looks fine to me
00:15:422 (4,5,6,7,8) - fix to smoother,better close Grid i blanket it according to 00:14:560 (6) -
00:25:250 (5,1) - using this kind of sliders I suggest these two is in the same curvature and overlap more. not that much of a problem though
00:26:284 (3) - remove this and replace 2&4 fixed it my own way
00:27:146 Hmmm,,, why breaktime? y not? :/
00:29:733 (1) - blanket better fixed
00:34:560 (4) - ^ fixed
00:35:250 (1,2) - low DS make me feel strange here. fixed
00:45:250 (2,3,4,5) - try make a square? I think its ok now
00:46:284 (9,1) - bad flow for me fixed
00:47:836 (1,2,3,4) - ^ fixed
00:52:664 (3,5) - as wat I told and make these separate fixed
00:58:698 (1) - about x156 y32 fixed
01:05:767 oops? fixed
01:14:388 (2,3) - these two should be in the same curvature. fixed it my own way
01:16:974 (2) - circles are better than a slider.01:17:319 (3,4) - the opposite fixed
01:20:767 (1) - bad overlap fixed
01:23:353 (5,1) - bad flow fixed
As I played this diff I feel a little bit uncomfortable cause the flow..Maybe someone like it but I don't sry .. Its ok, everybody have their own preferences xD

That's it . Hope it helpful ;w;
Waiting for your mod tho.

Thanks for the mod xD
Sorry for so slow kyle xD

Update

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Source:やはり俺の青春ラブコメはまちがっている。 続
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