[General] (issue for all difficulties)
* Song file is somewhat quiet... Either find or make a louder one or reduce the volume of the hitsounds (they're louder than the song, which is SO wrong
).
* Wrong offset; please change it to
11,840.
* Make all Kiai Time sections start and end on a white tick instead (on the top timeline).
Note: The following is according to your current offset; please don't change it yet to prevent confusion.
[Easy]00:16:120 (2) - Get rid of this note then make (1)'s slider's end extend to where this note was, like this:
00:20:750 (3) - Bad idea to have this stacked underneath a note, especially for an
Easy.
00:23:343 (5,1) - Same case as before
00:45:194 (1) - ^
00:48:157 (2,3) - ^
00:50:380 (1) - ^
01:02:231 (1,2) - Make these into a slider.
01:05:194 (1,2,3,4) - I doubt beginners will be able to hit these in succession; consider making (1) and (2) as well as (3) and (4) into a slider OR making all four notes into a single slider.
01:12:231 (2,3) - Make these into a slider.
01:17:046 (3,4,5) - Make these into a single OR repeating slider instead; the spacing of these make them confusing to hit.
01:47:787 (4) - Bad idea to have this stacked underneath a note, especially for an
Easy.
02:05:565 (2,3) - Make these into a slider instead.
02:14:083 (3) - Bad idea to have this stacked underneath a note, especially for an
Easy.
02:17:787 (3,4) - Same case as before
02:32:972 (5) - ^
02:35:194 (2,3) - Make these into a slider instead.
02:40:009 (3,4) - Remember what I said back at
00:16:120? Do it here, too.
02:42:602 (1,2,3) - Make these into a single OR repeating slider instead.
02:45:750 (6) - Better if you made this start on a white tick to prevent confusion (make sure it still ends on a white tick, too).
Err... Why does the second Kiai Time keep going even during the break? At least split it in two, making sure there isn't any in the break.
03:15:565 (1,2) - Make these into a slider instead OR just move (2) to a white tick.
03:20:380 (4) - Bad idea to have this stacked underneath a note, especially for an
Easy.
03:27:417 (1,2,3) - Make these into a single OR repeating slider instead.
[Relaxing]Consider adding a third Kiai Time section here. Also, it feels like you half-completed adding hitsounds...
00:42:787 (2) - Make this end on a red tick.
00:42:602 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Inconsistent spacing; please don't change the spacing multiplier during the middle of a combo.
01:02:787 (3) - Make this end on a white tick.
01:14:639 (3) - ^
01:18:157 (5) - Make this end on a red OR white tick.
01:38:157 (1) - Too close to the previous combo; consider moving this or the previous combo's (6) OR add a note in-between them (according to the top timeline).
02:25:750 (3) - Make this end on a white tick.
02:37:602 (3) - ^
02:41:120 (5) - Make this end on a red OR white tick.
02:45:750 (6) - This would sound better if you made it end on a white tick.
03:25:009 (3) - Make this end on a red tick.
03:26:306 (2,3) - Too close to (1)
03:28:528 (5) - Make this end on a red OR white tick.
03:33:250 (6) - Please don't place notes on yellow ticks (1/8 timing) unless you REALLY need to (like for streams or a repeating slider). I know this follows the vocals, but then this makes it somewhat confusing to hit. Move it to a blue or white tick instead. Also, make sure it ends on a red OR white tick.
[Hard]Again, it feels like you didn't completely finish placing hitsounds... Some notes that I thought would have soft whistles don't. Also, again, please consider adding a third Kiai Time section.
00:32:231 (3) - Move this one grid space up?
00:35:194 (5) - Move this one grid space left?
03:18:713 (1,2) - What are these notes following?
03:33:157 (9,10) - Move these one grid space either up OR right.
Whew... Well that's it for now. If you have any questions, either contact me in-game (I'm usually on) or send me a forum PM.
Well anyway, I await the changes before I give you your well-deserved reward~
it'd be better if it was more curved but oh well