Hello! From my queue![General]You are using WAY too many soft finishes, that shouldn't even be there. 01:02:202 (1,2,3,4,5) - This section here on normal difficulty is an example. 01:21:967 (1,2,3,4) - Here aswell on normal, seriously, you don't need all these finishes, maybe like one at the beginning or end.
Your hitsounds like claps should be on the 2nd and 4th beat in a measure. Go through your difficulties and fix this
[Easy]HP 2.5
Don't be afraid to use a spacing like 1.3 or 1.4 instead of 0.9. It's a really nice easy, but imo it looks a bit cluttered
00:55:849 (1,2) - I think a slider is better
01:12:790 (2,3) - Slider is probably better
02:13:143 (4,5,1) - Doesn't look pretty
02:31:849 (3,4) - Curve these less
[Normal]Ok, first off, HP6 is way too high for a normal, especially like this. I suggest 3.5 or 4. Also OD could be 4.5.
Tons of blanket issues. Fix.00:19:143 (5,1) -
00:21:967 (5,1) -
00:39:614 (1,2,3) -
00:42:084 (5,1) -
01:01:849 (3,1) -
01:59:026 (2,4) -
02:00:790 (2,3) -
02:12:084 (3,4) -
02:15:613 (4) -
00:22:673 (1,2) - This looks really messy. I suggest you move these away from each other and not overlapping.
00:43:320 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - You could rework this. Something that flows, or maybe a pattern, right now it's clonky
00:49:496 (1) - move this slider back to 00:48:261 -
01:02:202 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - You know, generally, this is a nice pattern, but overusing this pattern 4 times in just a 10 seconds is really bad.
01:23:379 (1) - Why didn't you map after this spinner? I mean, you did put a spinner here on normal, so why not some notes here?
01:36:084 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - Once again, this pattern is nice an' all, but don't overuse it. And you are missing ALOT of notes here and there between these notes. I can hear a beat at 01:36:437 -, and at 01:37:496 -
01:53:026 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - rework these two combos. I hear beats in between those sliders.
02:05:731 (1,2) - Remove clap sounds at the ends of these sliders
02:11:379 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - This entire chorus section feels really offbeat, and it's just the same pattern and flow over and over again. Don't be afraid to try something new after every combo, pattern, flow, or jump. Because the more flow a map has, the more enjoyable it will be. Also, you're missing a lot of notes in between some notes here, example 02:24:437 - and 02:27:261 - .
[Hard]HP5
More blanket issues00:20:378 (3,4) -
00:21:790 (2,3) -
00:23:202 (3,4,5) -
00:23:731 (5,1) -
00:24:084 (1,2) -
01:00:967 (3,4,5) -
01:07:849 (1,2) -
01:11:731 (3,4) -
01:36:084 (1,2,3) -
01:37:673 (1,2) -
01:43:320 (1,2) -
01:55:496 (2,3) -
02:13:496 (3,4) -
02:17:555 (2,3) -
02:19:496 (5,1) -
02:20:379 (2,3) -
02:21:790 (3,4) -
02:23:025 (2,3) -
02:24:790 (3,4) -
02:27:614 (3,4) -
02:30:261 (3,4) -
02:30:790 (5,1) -
02:33:261 (5,6) -
02:38:379 (4,5,6) -
02:49:673 (4,5) -
02:50:379 (6,7) -
00:05:732 (1) - okay, so after this slider, there is clearly a lot of notes that can be heard
00:25:496 (1,2,3,4,1) - Few notes are missing inbetween this circles
00:28:320 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Overused pattern.
00:39:614 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - ^
00:55:849 (1,2,3,4) - Maybe a small mini jump from 2 to 3?
01:07:143 (1,2,3,4,1) - space the pentagon out just a bit
01:13:496 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - You don't need to have a straight line for those triplets. And get creative! Right here is a good part for those 1/1 jumps!
01:21:967 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Remove all but 1 or 8's finish
01:24:790 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - This looks like it should've been done on easy. On hard? No. How about some notes with patterns here and there, like a square, and maybe a couple jumps.
01:35:379 (1,2,3,4) - Same as 00:55:849 (1,2,3,4) -
01:36:084 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - Overused pattern
02:09:967 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5) - Overused pattern, and you're missing a few notes in the beat
02:22:319 (5) - ctrl + g
02:22:673 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5) - ^
imo the ending could have some jumps here and there
[Insane]HP6 or 6.5
Blanket issues00:18:437 (1,2,3) -
00:19:320 (4,5) -
00:20:026 (2,3,4) -
00:20:908 (5,6) -
00:20:908 (5,6,8,1,2) -
00:27:261 (2,4) -
00:28:320 (3,4,5,6) -
00:35:731 (3,4) -
00:38:026 (6,1) -
00:48:437 (2,4,5,6,7) -
00:51:437 (2,3) -
00:53:555 (1,2,3,4) -
00:59:908 (5,6) -
00:59:908 (5,7) -
01:01:496 (4,5) -
01:15:790 (4,5) -
01:21:614 (1,2) -
01:28:673 (4,1) -
01:31:143 (3,4,1) -
01:37:673 (2,3,4) -
01:38:908 (1,2) -
01:44:908 (2,3) -
01:45:084 (3,4) -
01:45:614 (4,5) -
01:46:496 (6,7,9) -
01:51:262 (4,1) -
01:51:790 (1,2,3) -
01:53:026 (1,2,3) -
01:54:084 (5,1,2) -
01:55:144 (3,4) -
01:57:967 (5,6) -
02:11:908 (3,4) -
02:12:968 (2,3) -
02:13:496 (3,4,1) -
02:14:203 (1,2) -
02:14:732 (3,4) -
02:15:262 (4,5) -
02:16:143 (6,7) - ?
02:17:026 (1,2,3) -
02:18:084 (5,1,2) -
02:19:497 (4,1) -
02:19:849 (1,3) -
02:21:437 (1,3) -
02:22:674 (1,2,3) -
02:23:202 (3,4,5,1,2) -
02:24:261 (2,3) -
02:24:790 (3,4) -
02:27:614 (1,2) -
02:28:320 (1,2,3) -
02:29:202 (4,5,1,2) -
02:32:202 (3,4) -
02:33:261 (2,3) -
02:36:967 (1,2,3) -
02:38:379 (4,5) -
02:42:614 (1,2) -
02:42:967 (2,3,4) -
02:50:555 (2,3) -
00:23:731 (3,4,5,6,7) - not a star shape
00:36:437 (5,1,2,3) - Looks clunky
00:38:908 (1,2,3,4) - remove whistles
00:51:437 (2) - Fix shape
00:58:143 (6,8) - This looks very, very clunky
01:09:437 (9) - ctrl + g
01:12:790 (1,2,3,4,1) - not a star shape
01:19:143 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
01:21:614 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - again, remove finishes
01:26:026 (1) - this shape feels off, the curves look messed up
01:33:437 - add note
01:36:084 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Overused pattern, but there is also some triplets of 1/4ths in here every now and then, and they would've fit great
01:58:673 (8) - stack on 01:56:908 (3) - 's slider begin
02:31:673 (2,3) - doesn't look right, why not blanket?
02:33:084 (1,2) - There's a triplet of 1/4th somewhere here...
02:36:084 (1,2,3,4,5) - not a star shape
02:41:731 (1,2,3,4,5) - almost perfect, but still off
02:45:261 (1,2,3,4) - I suggest a square shape
02:47:378 (1,2,3,4,5) - little bit off
Honestly, it's not the worst map I've ever modded. There were just some flaws here and there that just needed to get fix, and nothing unrankable under my eyes. If you get some more modders, they might help you out!