- Very important - you should pay attention.
- Not so important, but I can help you.
(?) - Just a suggestion or in doubt.
(♥) - Not a problem, but something it liked me ^^
[General]
(♥) - Good skin!!
(*) On "song setup", storyboard tab, select "default" as preferred skin to avoid problems with non-skinned elements.
(*) 02:13:024 (-) - You could add a note here with finish and whistle sound...
(*) 02:25:022 (-) - And add here another volume section add turn up volume half a tick...
(*) 02:27:548 (-) - ^
(*) 02:30:548 (-) - ^
[Bronze]
(*) 01:05:767 (3) - Add whistle sound
(*) 01:07:030 (3) - ^
(*) 01:37:659 (-) - You can add a inherit timing section here and turn up the volume 1 or two ticks to give contrast to the notes along with the piano...
(*) 01:38:290 (-) - ... and return the volume back to the normal here.
(*) 02:12:708 (5) - Remove finish sound.
(*) 02:12:866 (6) - You should put a timing section and reduce the volume 2 tick...
(*) 02:28:180 (1) - New combo here.
(*) 03:09:544 (3) - Add whistle sound.
(*) 03:10:807 (6) - ^
(*) 03:29:752 (3) - ^
(*) 03:31:015 (5) - ^
(*) 03:31:331 (1) - Add finish sound.
[Silver]
(*) 00:40:349 (3) - You should move this slider 3 grids to the right to follow spacing rule...
(*) 00:43:349 (4) - And this circle 1 grid to the left.
(*) 00:47:138 (5,6,7) - And this pieces 1 grid to the right.
(*) 01:01:663 (2) - Sorry if I'm too strict, but move this circle 4 grids to the left and 2 grids down.
(*) 01:07:346 (1) - Move this circle 2 grids to the left...
(*) 01:07:978 (2,3,4) - ...along with this...
(*) 01:09:872 (1,2,3) - ...and trying to keep the same distance between these pieces.
As I'm seeing, from this part, you're using distance snapping, something you didn't do before. I'd recommended that you use custom or fixed snap on all the song, but not mixing these. Well... I won't spoil your mapping, because that isn't too bad at all (at least in this case).
(*) 01:13:030 (6,7,8) - The spacing is different here: you're using more spacing. At least try to use "distance snap" with these objects.
(*) 01:33:870 (2) - Use distance snap or, if you're using again custom spacing, move this object 1 grid to the left.
(?) 01:35:449 (4) - New combo (?)
(?) 01:40:343 (4) - ^
(?) 01:55:657 (4) - ^
(?) 02:00:709 (3) - ^
(*) 02:10:497 (4) - Again (Ctrl+V): Use distance snap or, if you're using again custom spacing, move this object 1 grid to the left.
(?) 02:52:177 (4) - Why don't you add another repetition to the slider with a finish sound?
(!) 03:54:934 (1) - To be extra-precisous, the object should be on 03:54:980 or 03:54:990. Move it by replacing the last line of the .osu file with 256,192,234980,5,2 or adding a non-inherited timing section (73.840 BPM, but it really doesn't matter this) on 234980 and putting there the note.
[Gold]
Again custom spacing (excluding the jumps)... I can't mod this...
(*) 01:02:294 (3) - Add a new combo... the draining should be stopped!
(!) 03:52:803 (-) - Add here a new timing section, 85 BPM, and snap the
(!) 03:54:934 (1) - As same as the [Silver] diff, the object should be on 03:54:980 or 03:54:990.
I "luv" the song! Star!