1. AngelHoney's Insane (4.57 stars, 520 notes)
2. Easy (1.59 stars, 142 notes)
3. EX (5.22 stars, 638 notes)
4. Hard (3.01 stars, 319 notes)
5. Light Insane (4.13 stars, 441 notes)
6. Normal (2.09 stars, 198 notes)

SPOILER

1. 01:25:207 - delete extra green line plz (i thought it was unsnapped first haha, ok)
2. 00:13:594 (10) - even on Normal you used 1/3. why 1/4 ,w;
3. 01:45:336 (6) - 01:57:723 (7) - 01:17:465 (8) - NC for new rhythm and stuff? 00:54:239 (12,1) - swap these NCs
4. 01:31:013 (13) - 01:37:207 (13) - whistle on tail?

1. 00:53:368 (3) - add clap? as you did here 00:59:562 (4) -
2. 01:15:916 - to 01:21:626 - why are hitsounds missing?
3. 01:23:078 (3) - i guess this should be addition>auto. Otherwise, there are spots with missing normal whistle lol
4. 01:30:820 (1) - whistle on tail
5. 01:41:271 (3) - nc, cuz constancy with the whole map heh

1. 00:19:787 (2) - I would make here a slow slider
2. 00:24:820 - It can be really cool circles combination, if you will try
3. 00:43:787 - Honestly, I hear more beats here, so make faster stream (not recommended) or try to make some sliderart (recommended)
4. 01:02:175 (2) - Increase slider velocity here maybe?
5. 01:22:691 - 01:44:755 - Very repetitive, maybe add sometimes something like...: short_slider-->short_slider-->short_slow_slider
6. 01:31:400 (1) - I would end this slider here: 01:31:787
7. 01:40:691 (1) - Same here

1. 00:10:884 (5) - I think that should be NC for consistency you make New Combo on every two downbeat
2. 00:22:497 (1,3) - Swap NC between them? for consistency New Combo
3. 00:54:239 (5) - Should be NC imo, same reason as above and to make the combo shorter
4. 01:59:271 (4) - Should be NC too same as this one 01:03:529 (1) -
5. 00:01:594 (1) - Maybe move up a bit to x:468 y:272, so it can have better flow between (1) and (2)
6. 00:20:175 (1,2) - Maybe you can move up (2) a bit, so it can produce a better zig zag patern http://puu.sh/gRLm8/d6fc9a6bd4.jpg instead to have a straight patern between (1) and (2)
7. 01:56:175 (1,2) - In my opinion for a better rhythm you can ctrl+g them so it can have rhythm like this http://puu.sh/gRLNh/e3c6e8072d.jpg, because it fit well if we click the slider on this 01:56:562 - because you can hear "hyuuuu" like siren sound on the bgm, hahaha god I'm bad at describing things XD
   
   Some circles can be changed into slider imo to lower the star rating, but as far as I can see thiss diff very nice and easy to play for beginner

1. 00:13:594 (5) - Maybe it's just me, but prety not comfortable when play on that one, since the end of that slider is on 1/6, so maybe in my opinion that (5) slider can be start here 00:13:400 - the start of the drum sound that you follow and maybe add more reverse so the end of the slider can be on red tick so the player less confused when playing, something like this maybe http://puu.sh/gROIe/76322ccfe2.jpg
2. 00:18:820 (6) - How about change that into 1/1 slider instead? because you miss important beat here 00:19:207 - so sugested rhythm: 1) http://puu.sh/gRPbv/1fc8d3e30a.jpg or 2) http://puu.sh/gRPf7/195af841a5.jpg
3. 01:03:529 (1) - Move that somewhere else maybe move to x:164 y:176? because flow kinda not good if you stacked that under (8) imo
4. 01:28:304 (1) - I think it's better if normal-finish on head is replace by normal-whistle instead because same as 01:34:497 (1) - and 01:40:691 (1) -

1. 00:09:916 (9,10,11) - Those rhythm really hard to follow imo, so maybe you can consider to make them a bit easier, a rhythm like this http://puu.sh/gRQPB/e2c93dc080.jpg might sound and play better
2. 00:25:691 (9,10) - It's more comfortable to play when those on triplet imo, because (10) is easily to miss click
3. 01:03:336 (5,6,7) - Make the jump on 2.00x? not sure but it's play well when it's a bit far from (4)
4. Some streams after break time is still too hard for me, maybe it's just mee hahaha XD
   
   Maybe you should shorter the combos, prety confused when the combo is up to 10 or 14

m1223961117 wrote:

Wow...very cool map

[Easy]

• 
  Fine.

[Normal]

• 
  00:06:820 (5) - I think remove circle is very good okay!
  00:11:271 (2,3,4) - Follow drum?? like this: http://puu.sh/gXrAi/f945bc65a1.jpg agreed
  00:42:433 (2) - move circle to 00:43:207 - ?? umm, keep this fine.
  00:46:304 (5) - del circle?? I think ignore this is fine sorry, i should keep this difficulty.
  00:58:691 (5) - ^
  01:49:013 (5) - ^
  01:57:723 (7) - NC okay.

1. Very hard Normal I think, but nice

[Hard]

• 
  00:03:142 (5) - NC
  00:09:336 (7) - ^
  00:12:433 (6) - ^
  00:24:820 (6) - ^
  00:27:916 (8) - ^
  00:31:013 (8) - ^
  00:34:110 (7) - ^
  00:37:400 (8) - ^
  00:40:304 (6) - ^
  00:43:400 (6) - ^
  00:46:497 (7) - ^
  00:49:981 (10) - ^
  00:52:304 (6) - ^
  00:56:175 (7) - ^
  00:58:884 (6) - ^
  01:03:336 (5,6,7) - Ctrl+G?? I think it is very hard, don't jump this flow is not bad and x2.00. not very hard imo.
  01:17:658 (3) - remove this?? no sound here i can here this.
  01:20:562 (7) - NC
  01:51:529 (5) - ^

1. I can't read NC from 01:22:110 - to 01:46:497 - lol it's speed change added NC also, your NC pettern bit weird this part haha. so keep
   NC all done and other some changed.

Sorry I can't mod over 5.5 star (Because I can't read anything )
Nice map^^
Give you a star

Midge wrote:

m4m dude nice. really hard map to read, lol

[EX]
00:13:594 (1,1,1) - i'm sure you've gotten this comment before, but this is fairly unreadable T~T yes,almost testplayer said hard. i changed this!
00:16:400 (5,6,7,8) - ki see what you wanted to do, but it's still ugly imo it's feel fine play.
00:19:594 (6) - remove 1 repeater and add a circle on the white tick okay.
00:38:110 (1) - remove nc it's 1/3 change rhythm part. no change.
00:57:142 (5,6) - ctrl+g? sorry, i like keep flow.
01:02:175 (1,2,3) - try this? https://a.pomf.se/foxtfw.png lol coockieizi. i'll consider this.
01:04:207 (8,1) - ds may be a bit too extream for a chiller part of the song such as this. (just my opinion, you can keep lol) I try hard map but flow is nice mapping. sorry, i want challenge.

everything else seems good to go imo. star'd.

chaee wrote:

Fromchaee mods things (❁´ο`❁)

[Easy]

00:07:023 (5) - Is whistle hitsound really necessary? In my opinion it sounds better without it's need imo.
00:51:926 (2,4) - I don't really like how these look with eachother. Maybe rotate 4 by 6? ok

[Normal]

01:24:055 (5,7) - Blanket looks weird to me.. It may just be my eyes playing tricks but curve 7's end a bit maybe? no change, i think fine imo.

[Hard]

00:52:701 (1) - Curve a bit more maybe? It looks better visually imo. Something like 00:53:862 (5) - would like nice bit changed.
01:34:507 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - Don't see why this combo is so long orz. NC at 01:35:668 (1) - Would be fine NC pettern fixed.
01:42:636 (1) - NC, too long imo ^
Comments: Lovely hitsounds thanks!

[EX]

00:29:862 (3,4) - Stack? done.
00:44:572 (6,1) - ^ no.

That's it for my mod. Good luck!