1. A Mystery's Insane (3.99 stars, 655 notes)
2. Easy (1.59 stars, 225 notes)
3. Insane (4.46 stars, 655 notes)
4. Normal (1.95 stars, 271 notes)
5. Nya's Hard (3.25 stars, 488 notes)

1. Change offset to 247, so the music and vocals will start correctly on the white big tick.
2. Where are the hitsounds? They're a must. For starters, put a clap on every second beat, with the rhythm of the song, hence at 00:13:417, 00:14:215 and so on.
3. Use DS almost all the time! In Easy and Normal difficulty they must be equal DS all the time, and in the higher diffs it is good to use it to keep the map neat

1. 00:13:018 (1,2,3) - This feels really weird / bad to play because the triplet is not strong beats, the slider starts in the middle of the beat and ends on a strong beat, which you'll fell like you want to press. Also, just before this pattern there are 2 strong beats which will make a better pattern like this:
   SPOILER

   
   I should add and say that the slider feels too random, and maybe the SV is too low?
2. 00:13:616 - Add a note here, it follows beat and vocals.
3. 00:14:814 (1,2,1) - As I mentioned about the DS, 1.14x to 0.54x if you look at slider 2, it looks really weird and I thought 00:15:612 (1,2,3) - was right after slider 2.
4. 00:14:814 (1,2) - If you want to make a pattern with similar sliders, then use CTRL+ C and CTRL + V, if they're not the same it ruins the pattern and it looks ugly, I should mention that those are too curvy in my opinion, also the flow is not that good here.
5. 00:16:410 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - The DS in those is not fully equal and the shape looks really irregular and weird, which makes it ugly, create a slider shape that you want the stream to look like, choose it and press ctrl+shift+f and play with the settings, should make your streams look a bit better.
6. 00:18:406 (2,3) - Same like in the previous pattern.
7. 00:20:401 (1,2) - Where is the consistency with 00:19:603 (1,2,3) - ?
8. 00:21:200 (1) - Starts on a red tick, which makes it odd, you skip a vocal and beat triplet and the distance until the next note is tooo big and it doesn't play that well.
9. 00:22:796 (5,1,2) - Try this pattern instead
   SPOILER

   
10. 00:28:184 (8) - Vocals start on the end-slider, which makes it awkward, make it pressable there (slider start or a circle). This also makes 00:29:182 (1,2,1) - feel odd because they start on red ticks.
11. 00:31:776 (1) - Not done well at all, shape is bad and you should follow the vocals properly.
12. 00:35:567 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - DS and placing is random, try to improve it, look at other maps with similar patterns.
13. 00:44:946 (1) - You shouldn't skip the beat changes starting from here, previously there were single beats and now it changes, map accordingly.
14. 00:50:540 - Snap uninherited timing point and preview point.
15. 00:53:726 (1,2) - When placing sliders try to not start in the middle of vocals or where there is not beat, it will feel weird, so take a note and change this pattern to make a circle and a reverse slider to follow the vocals properly.
16. 00:54:524 (1,2) - They're so random, the look weird together, flow not that good and if you tried to make a blanket, do it again!
17. 00:57:717 (1) - If you wanted to make a wave, this is how you do it
    SPOILER

    
    If you want to rotate it use Ctrl+Shift+R
18. 00:58:116 (2) - Doesn't follow vocals properly, and looks a weird and not fitting imo.
19. 00:59:713 (2) - ^ If you want to make complex sliders, look at some other maps too, the curves are weird and they need more work.
20. 01:01:508 - Add a note here to start break after vocal end.
    
    Overall notes after looking at the diff:
21. Use DS most of the time! Unless you want to make a certain pattern that requires something else, it will make everything much better for starters.
22. Try to start using hitsounds, makes everything sound better.
23. Rework slider shapes, if you can't make complex then go for simple ones.
24. Avoid randomness! Before you place an object, think where would you want to place it and why, where will you mouse want to go and will the player enjoy it?
25. Flow, you lack it. Start with reading this guide by Charles445 t/86329, now combined with the previous note, place objects where the mouse will flow into them! No randomness, the map will be much more enjoyable like that.

Avishay wrote:

As promised.

[General]

1. Change offset to 247, so the music and vocals will start correctly on the white big tick.
2. Where are the hitsounds? They're a must. For starters, put a clap on every second beat, with the rhythm of the song, hence at 00:13:417, 00:14:215 and so on.
3. Use DS almost all the time! In Easy and Normal difficulty they must be equal DS all the time, and in the higher diffs it is good to use it to keep the map neat

[Insane]

1. 00:13:018 (1,2,3) - This feels really weird / bad to play because the triplet is not strong beats, the slider starts in the middle of the beat and ends on a strong beat, which you'll fell like you want to press. Also, just before this pattern there are 2 strong beats which will make a better pattern like this:
   SPOILER

   
   I should add and say that the slider feels too random, and maybe the SV is too low?fixed
2. 00:13:616 - Add a note here, it follows beat and vocals.fixed
3. 00:14:814 (1,2,1) - As I mentioned about the DS, 1.14x to 0.54x if you look at slider 2, it looks really weird and I thought 00:15:612 (1,2,3) - was right after slider 2.fixed
4. 00:14:814 (1,2) - If you want to make a pattern with similar sliders, then use CTRL+ C and CTRL + V, if they're not the same it ruins the pattern and it looks ugly, I should mention that those are too curvy in my opinion, also the flow is not that good here.fixed
5. 00:16:410 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - The DS in those is not fully equal and the shape looks really irregular and weird, which makes it ugly, create a slider shape that you want the stream to look like, choose it and press ctrl+shift+f and play with the settings, should make your streams look a bit better.didnt change
6. 00:18:406 (2,3) - Same like in the previous pattern.didnt change
7. 00:20:401 (1,2) - Where is the consistency with 00:19:603 (1,2,3) - ?didnt change
8. 00:21:200 (1) - Starts on a red tick, which makes it odd, you skip a vocal and beat triplet and the distance until the next note is tooo big and it doesn't play that well.changed
9. 00:22:796 (5,1,2) - Try this pattern instead
   SPOILER

   
   changed
10. 00:28:184 (8) - Vocals start on the end-slider, which makes it awkward, make it pressable there (slider start or a circle). This also makes 00:29:182 (1,2,1) - feel odd because they start on red ticks.changed
11. 00:31:776 (1) - Not done well at all, shape is bad and you should follow the vocals properly.changed
12. 00:35:567 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - DS and placing is random, try to improve it, look at other maps with similar patterns.changged
13. 00:44:946 (1) - You shouldn't skip the beat changes starting from here, previously there were single beats and now it changes, map accordingly.didnt change
14. 00:50:540 - Snap uninherited timing point and preview point.changed
15. 00:53:726 (1,2) - When placing sliders try to not start in the middle of vocals or where there is not beat, it will feel weird, so take a note and change this pattern to make a circle and a reverse slider to follow the vocals properly.changed
16. 00:54:524 (1,2) - They're so random, the look weird together, flow not that good and if you tried to make a blanket, do it again!changed
17. 00:57:717 (1) - If you wanted to make a wave, this is how you do it
    SPOILER

    
    If you want to rotate it use Ctrl+Shift+R.changed
18. 00:58:116 (2) - Doesn't follow vocals properly, and looks a weird and not fitting imo. didnt change
19. 00:59:713 (2) - ^ If you want to make complex sliders, look at some other maps too, the curves are weird and they need more work.
20. 01:01:508 - Add a note here to start break after vocal end.didnt change
    
    Overall notes after looking at the diff:
21. Use DS most of the time! Unless you want to make a certain pattern that requires something else, it will make everything much better for starters.
22. Try to start using hitsounds, makes everything sound better.
23. Rework slider shapes, if you can't make complex then go for simple ones.
24. Avoid randomness! Before you place an object, think where would you want to place it and why, where will you mouse want to go and will the player enjoy it?
25. Flow, you lack it. Start with reading this guide by Charles445 t/86329, now combined with the previous note, place objects where the mouse will flow into them! No randomness, the map will be much more enjoyable like that.

The same mistakes repeat over and over, and I gave you some general points to improve your set. Go over all of your set with the comments I made, you can ask me whatever you need and maybe in a later time I'll check the map again.

Good luck.

1. You should change metadata:
2. Artist: Flo Rida ft. LMFAO
3. Title: Run (with capital "R")
4. If you really want the nightcore to be there you should add it in the title like "Run (Nightcore)", but idk if they still allow it
5. Add some tags, like album, source, etc
6. The background is low quality, I play 1080p and it gets really blurry, imo you should replace it by a higher quality one
7. Your spread isn't the best but I think it's acceptable, I would still try to make sure though (+ then 1 star rating difference between Normal/Hard and Hard/Insane)

1. 00:19:218 (6) - move to 00:19:418 - , you should avoid 1/2 spacings in easy diffs
2. 00:31:989 (3) - ^ and all of these throughout the diff (this is unrankable asaik)
3. Avoid stacks in Easy, except for rare exceptions, but you do have a lot of them, take a look at this page to see what's acceptable and what isn't. Use this page for all diffs.
4. 00:33:386 (2) - kicksliders need to be avoided as well
5. 00:51:346 (2) - SV change too sudden and a pretty big one too
6. These are the major problems, the rest is aesthetics or repetitions of the same problems, imo you need to rework this diff if you want it ranked, if you need a recheck for the other stuff, if you do the rework, send me a message.

1. The spacing in this diff is inconsistent and the SV changes are quite high too, I think you need to "rework" this diff, at least go note by note with a consistent DS spacing trying to keep patterns the same
2. I would advise using a 1.00 or 1.20 SV and then put x1.1 or x1.2 in the chorus, not more than that, for DS it's up to you
3. 00:15:413 (5,6) - center better
4. 00:26:587 (2) - this slider should end at 00:27:386 - , so you should remove 00:27:386 (3) -
5. 00:51:332 - this Slider velocity change is unrankable (too sudden and the SV itself is too fast for a normal)
6. You also shouldn't stack this many notes, 1 or 2 stacks are ok for a normal, but too many might be a problem
7. Like the easy feel free to ask for a recheck if you rework this.

1. 00:16:011 (1) - would stack with 00:16:410 (2) - instead
2. 00:18:705 (4) - no need for this note imo
3. 00:22:197 (2,3) - ctrl+g
4. 00:28:882 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - this stream is fishy for a Hard diff, I would keep it unless more people complain though
5. 00:37:164 (1,2) - try to center better
6. 00:41:953 (3,1) - stack
7. 01:00:112 (3,4,5) - rotate them so 3 doesn't overlap with 00:59:314 (1) -
8. 01:23:060 (4) - imperfect stack
9. 02:19:134 (1,2,3,4) - the overlaps are quite messy, they're not parallel, they don't stack, they'rjust all over the place D:
10. 02:22:326 (2) - NC instead of 02:22:127 (1) -
11. 02:23:923 (6) - imperfect stack
12. 02:27:714 (3,4) - blanket better
13. 02:46:272 (2,3) - quite the big jump for a hard diff
14. 02:55:252 (1) - Move down to lessen the overlap

1. 00:20:401 (1) - replace by triple?
2. 00:22:796 (5) - NC
3. 00:24:392 (4,5,6,7) - imo plays better if they are more far apart, spacing is too close now, but leave 7 in the same place
4. 00:26:587 (9,8) - Try to center the slider nodes:
   SPOILER

   
5. 00:32:374 - missing note, when he says "com..", should stack with 00:32:574 (2,3) -
6. 00:33:173 (1,2) - would make flow better like:
7. 00:35:168 (7,1) - Too close, either stack or make spacing bigger
8. 00:54:524 (1,2) - try to center 1's slider end within 2
9. 01:07:296 (1,2) - center
10. 01:14:479 (7) - same as before
11. 01:20:466 (5) - imo should be replaced by slider to follow vocals, until th 7th note
12. 01:24:058 (10) - could be centered better
13. 01:24:657 - vocals start here, so stream should start here, in this case, the slider wouldn't need to be centered
14. 01:25:355 (5) - remove this note, it's not following anything
15. 01:27:450 (2) - use a double anchor point (red node), instead of the first two notes (not needed) and the slider will look "cleaner"
16. 01:32:040 (4,5) - this overlap doesn't look that good, but I'll leave it up to you
17. 01:55:387 (5) - new combo as the music changes
18. 01:55:387 (5,6,7,8) - try to make this flow better, 7 and 8 are good, but 5/6 don't flow well, you could also make bigger jumps between them, not make them so close
19. 02:03:968 (1,1) - blanket better
20. 02:12:748 (6) - NC, and remove NC from 02:12:948 (1) -
21. 02:27:714 (3) - ctrl+g
22. 02:28:513 (5) - imperfect stack
23. 02:36:694 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,1) - this stream is badly positioned, it's better to put a stream starting from 02:38:290 - until 02:39:887 - because it follows the build up and finishes in a bang, feels a lot better while playing
24. 02:42:082 (5,1) - should be further apart
25. 03:05:230 - add a triple, it's hearable and would be great to finish
26. You should also add louder hitsounds to the kiai times, it's too low currently

Milhofo wrote:

Hi, from your reverse M4M queue

[General]

1. You should change metadata:
2. Artist: Flo Rida ft. LMFAO-changed
3. Title: Run (with capital "R")-changed
4. If you really want the nightcore to be there you should add it in the title like "Run (Nightcore)", but idk if they still allow it-changed
5. Add some tags, like album, source, etc-didn't change
6. The background is low quality, I play 1080p and it gets really blurry, imo you should replace it by a higher quality one-ill change it later
7. Your spread isn't the best but I think it's acceptable, I would still try to make sure though (+ then 1 star rating difference between Normal/Hard and Hard/Insane)

[Easy]

1. 00:19:218 (6) - move to 00:19:418 - , you should avoid 1/2 spacings in easy diffs
2. 00:31:989 (3) - ^ and all of these throughout the diff (this is unrankable asaik)
3. Avoid stacks in Easy, except for rare exceptions, but you do have a lot of them, take a look at this page to see what's acceptable and what isn't. Use this page for all diffs.
4. 00:33:386 (2) - kicksliders need to be avoided as well
5. 00:51:346 (2) - SV change too sudden and a pretty big one too
6. These are the major problems, the rest is aesthetics or repetitions of the same problems, imo you need to rework this diff if you want it ranked, if you need a recheck for the other stuff, if you do the rework, send me a message.

I WILL REWORK THE DIFF
[Normal]

1. The spacing in this diff is inconsistent and the SV changes are quite high too, I think you need to "rework" this diff, at least go note by note with a consistent DS spacing trying to keep patterns the same
2. I would advise using a 1.00 or 1.20 SV and then put x1.1 or x1.2 in the chorus, not more than that, for DS it's up to you
3. 00:15:413 (5,6) - center better
4. 00:26:587 (2) - this slider should end at 00:27:386 - , so you should remove 00:27:386 (3) -
5. 00:51:332 - this Slider velocity change is unrankable (too sudden and the SV itself is too fast for a normal)
6. You also shouldn't stack this many notes, 1 or 2 stacks are ok for a normal, but too many might be a problem
7. Like the easy feel free to ask for a recheck if you rework this.

I WILL REWORK THE DIFF
[Hard]

1. 00:16:011 (1) - would stack with 00:16:410 (2) - instead-changed
2. 00:18:705 (4) - no need for this note imo-changed
3. 00:22:197 (2,3) - ctrl+g-changed
4. 00:28:882 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - this stream is fishy for a Hard diff, I would keep it unless more people complain though-DIDNT CHANGE
5. 00:37:164 (1,2) - try to center better-changed
6. 00:41:953 (3,1) - stack-changed
7. 01:00:112 (3,4,5) - rotate them so 3 doesn't overlap with 00:59:314 (1) - -changed
8. 01:23:060 (4) - imperfect stack-changed
9. 02:19:134 (1,2,3,4) - the overlaps are quite messy, they're not parallel, they don't stack, they'rjust all over the place D:-changed
10. 02:22:326 (2) - NC instead of 02:22:127 (1) - -changed
11. 02:23:923 (6) - imperfect stack-changed
12. 02:27:714 (3,4) - blanket better-changed
13. 02:46:272 (2,3) - quite the big jump for a hard diff-DIDNT CHANGE
14. 02:55:252 (1) - Move down to lessen the overlap

-changed

[Insane]

1. 00:20:401 (1) - replace by triple?-changed
2. 00:22:796 (5) - NC-changed
3. 00:24:392 (4,5,6,7) - imo plays better if they are more far apart, spacing is too close now, but leave 7 in the same place
4. 00:26:587 (9,8) - Try to center the slider nodes:
   SPOILER

   -changed
   -changed
5. 00:32:374 - missing note, when he says "com..", should stack with 00:32:574 (2,3) - -changed
6. 00:33:173 (1,2) - would make flow better like: -changed
7. 00:35:168 (7,1) - Too close, either stack or make spacing bigger-changed
8. 00:54:524 (1,2) - try to center 1's slider end within 2-changed
9. 01:07:296 (1,2) - center-changed
10. 01:14:479 (7) - same as before-changed
11. 01:20:466 (5) - imo should be replaced by slider to follow vocals, until th 7th note
12. 01:24:058 (10) - could be centered better-changed
13. 01:24:657 - vocals start here, so stream should start here, in this case, the slider wouldn't need to be centered-changed
14. 01:25:355 (5) - remove this note, it's not following anything-changed
15. 01:27:450 (2) - use a double anchor point (red node), instead of the first two notes (not needed) and the slider will look "cleaner"-I CHANGED ALL THE PATTERN
16. 01:32:040 (4,5) - this overlap doesn't look that good, but I'll leave it up to you-DIDN'T CHANGE
17. 01:55:387 (5) - new combo as the music changes-changed
18. 01:55:387 (5,6,7,8) - try to make this flow better, 7 and 8 are good, but 5/6 don't flow well, you could also make bigger jumps between them, not make them so close
19. 02:03:968 (1,1) - blanket better-changed
20. 02:12:748 (6) - NC, and remove NC from 02:12:948 (1) - -changed
21. 02:27:714 (3) - ctrl+g-changed
22. 02:28:513 (5) - imperfect stack-changed
23. 02:36:694 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,1) - this stream is badly positioned, it's better to put a stream starting from 02:38:290 - until 02:39:887 - because it follows the build up and finishes in a bang, feels a lot better while playing-DIDN'T CHANGE
24. 02:42:082 (5,1) - should be further apart-changed
25. 03:05:230 - add a triple, it's hearable and would be great to finish-changed
26. You should also add louder hitsounds to the kiai times, it's too low currently

-ILL CHANGE LATER

Insane is almost good to go, hard needs some fixes, but normal and easy need a rework to be rankable. Take a look at the link I gave you and read the diff specific parts, they're really important. https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Difficulty_appropriate_gameplay_elements

Fun map but still needs some fixes, gl!

• Easy

1. its clear that this map will need some major reworking. use distance snap everywhere on easy and normal difficulties.
2. avoid stacking 2 consecutive notes on an easy diff. like these. 02:13:161 (5,6,7)
3. avoid 1/2 beat circles on easy diffs. if you're going to have to put a 1/2 beat, use a slider preferably.
4. after you re-work this map, let me know and i will take another look at it.

• Normal

1. 00:52:130 (1,2,3,4) all of your circles and sliders should be this kind of distance from each other. easy and normal diffs need to use a distance snap.
2. the slider velocity feels really fast for a normal. please consider something like 1 or 1.1
3. the circles and sliders you have right now seem reasonable with the beat of the song. you will have to move around everything to apply the distance snap and if you decide to, the slider velocity. once you re-work this map, let me know and i will be glad to take another look at it.

• Hard

1. 00:15:612 (3,4,5) - this is supposed to be a hard diff. distance snap these to something smaller.
2. 00:21:200 (1,2,3) - ^
3. 00:21:599 (1,2,3) - ^ (you can keep the space between these two combos).
4. 01:18:670 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - ^
5. 00:47:141 (1,2,3,4,5) - match the X coordinates for (1) and (5), (2) and (4).
6. 02:07:959 (5,1) - remove (5) and make (1) start where (5) was. extend (1) to where it is at currently.
7. 02:14:344 (5,1) - ^
8. 02:17:537 (6,1) - ^ but this one is (6), not (5).
9. 02:28:513 (5,1) - blanket these.
10. 01:07:894 (2,3) - ^

• Insane

1. 01:57:383 (3,4) - give these the same X coordinate.
2. 02:59:842 (1,2,3) - line these up more evenly
3. 00:15:612 (3,4,5) - space these the same as these 00:16:410 (1,2,3,4,5)
4. 01:12:284 (2,3,4,5) - give these the same X coordinate.
5. 01:57:782 (1,3) - ^

[Dominic] wrote:

Hello! M4M request from your queue!
please remember that any mods i make are nothing more than suggestions. do not feel the need to change anything/everything!

your song background was the wrong size. here is your background of the correct size. http://puu.sh/gb9KP/04d327a95b.jpg

• Easy

1. its clear that this map will need some major reworking. use distance snap everywhere on easy and normal difficulties.
2. avoid stacking 2 consecutive notes on an easy diff. like these. 02:13:161 (5,6,7)
3. avoid 1/2 beat circles on easy diffs. if you're going to have to put a 1/2 beat, use a slider preferably.
4. after you re-work this map, let me know and i will take another look at it.

• Normal

1. 00:52:130 (1,2,3,4) all of your circles and sliders should be this kind of distance from each other. easy and normal diffs need to use a distance snap.
2. the slider velocity feels really fast for a normal. please consider something like 1 or 1.1
3. the circles and sliders you have right now seem reasonable with the beat of the song. you will have to move around everything to apply the distance snap and if you decide to, the slider velocity. once you re-work this map, let me know and i will be glad to take another look at it.

• Hard

1. 00:15:612 (3,4,5) - this is supposed to be a hard diff. distance snap these to something smaller .changed
2. 00:21:200 (1,2,3) - ^changed
3. 00:21:599 (1,2,3) - ^ (you can keep the space between these two combos).changed
4. 01:18:670 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - ^changed
5. 00:47:141 (1,2,3,4,5) - match the X coordinates for (1) and (5), (2) and (4).didnt change
6. 02:07:959 (5,1) - remove (5) and make (1) start where (5) was. extend (1) to where it is at currently.didnt change
7. 02:14:344 (5,1) - ^-didnt change
8. 02:17:537 (6,1) - ^ but this one is (6), not (5).didnt change
9. 02:28:513 (5,1) - blanket these.didnt change
10. 01:07:894 (2,3) - ^

changed

• Insane

1. 01:57:383 (3,4) - give these the same X coordinate.changed
2. 02:59:842 (1,2,3) - line these up more evenlychanged
3. 00:15:612 (3,4,5) - space these the same as these 00:16:410 (1,2,3,4,5) changed
4. 01:12:284 (2,3,4,5) - give these the same X coordinatechanged
5. 01:57:782 (1,3) - ^

changed

That's it for my mods. good luck getting this ranked!

1. Do not use 1/2 beats in easy e.g：00:18:220 (3,4) - 00:30:592 (1,2) - 00:43:763 (1,2) -
2. Do not use stacks in easy e.g:00:38:175 (5,1,2) - 00:43:763 (1,2) -
3. sliders can't reverse 2 times in easy and normal 01:38:639 (2) -
4. tell me why slow down in kial not speed up and no speed changes in easy and normal
   Plz read the ranking rules first then make your map

• same question with easy but you can sometimes use stack in normal

• too many problems

1. sliders are too fast
2. patterns are boring too play so can you give me sth good pattern except star?
3. meaningless sliders:03:00:041 (1) - 01:49:401 (5,6,7,8,9) - 02:01:773 (2,3) -
4. boring stacks 01:46:407 (6,7,8,9,10) - change it to sliders?
5. 01:48:004 -no note on the white line?

• same to the hard,and I think you should improve your mapping skill before making insane diff

1. disable countdown

1. 00:15:712 (4) - move to x:470 y:167 for more rounder shape overall
2. 00:18:805 (3) - ctrl + g better flow
3. 00:20:401 (1) - replace with 1/4
4. 00:22:796 (5) - nc
5. 00:23:395 (7) - ctrl +shift + f
6. 00:29:581 (2) - ctrl + g
7. 00:33:971 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - use ctrl + d to assist you in making a perfect hexagon
8. 00:54:524 (1,2) - bad flow. dont overlap it, just place 00:54:924 (2) - on the side
   picture

   http://puu.sh/gcTLo/4b11158c58.jpg
9. 01:01:409 - why didnt you map from here to 01:04:302 - ?? stop being lazy, there are actually real beats here
10. 01:07:296 (1,2) - why are you ignoring vocals. use 1/4 here 01:07:994 - and then a 1/2 slider here 01:08:094 -
11. 01:12:284 (2,3,4,5) - dont overlap slider head and slider body, it looks really unclean
12. 01:42:217 - dont ignore beat
13. 01:42:416 (1) - space this out
14. 01:43:614 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - i like this pattern
15. 01:45:011 (1) - ctrl+g and move 01:45:609 (2) - to slider tail after ctrl +g
16. 01:44:986 - why do you have a green tick here snapped to 1/16?
17. 01:54:789 (4,1) - this structure can be improved..
18. 01:55:387 (1,2,3,4) - ^
19. 02:03:968 (1,2,3) - blanket these
20. 02:05:564 (4) - space out. if you want to stack, stack it perfectly by moving 02:05:564 (4) - to x:172 y:112

zj0924 wrote:

its clear that this map will need some major reworking. use distance snap everywhere on easy and normal difficulties.
[Easy]

1. Do not use 1/2 beats in easy e.g：00:18:220 (3,4) - 00:30:592 (1,2) - 00:43:763 (1,2) -
2. Do not use stacks in easy e.g:00:38:175 (5,1,2) - 00:43:763 (1,2) -
3. sliders can't reverse 2 times in easy and normal 01:38:639 (2) -
4. tell me why slow down in kial not speed up and no speed changes in easy and normal
   Plz read the ranking rules first then make your map

[Normal]

• same question with easy but you can sometimes use stack in normal

[hard]

• too many problems

1. sliders are too fast-why is that?
2. patterns are boring too play so can you give me sth good pattern except star?in hard there is no much stars
3. meaningless sliders:03:00:041 (1) - 01:49:401 (5,6,7,8,9) - 02:01:773 (2,3) - changed 1
4. boring stacks 01:46:407 (6,7,8,9,10) - change it to sliders?
5. 01:48:004 -no note on the white line?

it dont sound good but ok
[insane]

• same to the hard,and I think you should improve your mapping skill before making insane diff

Sorry,that's really hard to mod your map,gl

byfar wrote:

from m4m

[General]

1. disable countdown

DONE

[insane]

1. 00:15:712 (4) - move to x:470 y:167 for more rounder shape overallDONE
2. 00:18:805 (3) - ctrl + g better flowDONE
3. 00:20:401 (1) - replace with 1/4DONE
4. 00:22:796 (5) - nc DONE
5. 00:23:395 (7) - ctrl +shift + fDONE
6. 00:29:581 (2) - ctrl + gDONE
7. 00:33:971 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - use ctrl + d to assist you in making a perfect hexagon-[/color]
8. 00:54:524 (1,2) - bad flow. dont overlap it, just place 00:54:924 (2) - on the side
   picture

   http://puu.sh/gcTLo/4b11158c58.jpg
9. 01:01:409 - why didnt you map from here to 01:04:302 - ?? stop being lazy, there are actually real beats here-sry
10. 01:07:296 (1,2) - why are you ignoring vocals. use 1/4 here 01:07:994 - and then a 1/2 slider here 01:08:094 - changed kinda
11. 01:12:284 (2,3,4,5) - dont overlap slider head and slider body, it looks really unclean
12. 01:42:217 - dont ignore beat-DONE
13. 01:42:416 (1) - space this out-DONE
14. 01:43:614 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - i like this pattern TY
15. 01:45:011 (1) - ctrl+g and move 01:45:609 (2) - to slider tail after ctrl +g-DONE
16. 01:44:986 - why do you have a green tick here snapped to 1/16?-DONE
17. 01:54:789 (4,1) - this structure can be improved..DONE
18. 01:55:387 (1,2,3,4) - ^DONE
19. 02:03:968 (1,2,3) - blanket theseDONE
20. 02:05:564 (4) - space out. if you want to stack, stack it perfectly by moving 02:05:564 (4) - to x:172 y:112

DONE

overall you seem to have to right idea. mod more and look at other better mapper's maps since your overall structure seems to be lacking.

unfinished~

1. Try to use the tiny grid in every difficulty. It'll look much better afterwards and you won't get any DS problems. (Use g in editor to change the grid size)
2. 00:13:032 (1,1) - That blanket could be improved with tiny grid.
3. 00:18:220 (3,2) - These are overlapping.
4. 00:25:005 (4,5) - These are too far from each other.
5. 00:31:790 (2) - Y154 for perfect stack.
6. 00:35:182 (2) - X144 ^
7. 00:41:568 (6) - That slider looks boring.
8. 00:43:364 (7) - Y92 for perfect stack.
9. 00:54:538 (4,5,6) - That overlap looks bad.
10. 01:14:094 (2) - X288 Y112 for perfect stack.
11. 01:18:884 (1) - That slider looks ugly. Try something else please.
12. 01:20:879 (2,3,4,5) - There's absolutely no pattern. I think that's making the part weird.
13. 01:35:247 (4,5) - These are too close.
14. 01:52:009 (2,3,4) - If that's supposed to be a blanket try to improve it.
15. 02:27:130 (1,2,1) - ^
16. 02:43:094 (2,3,4) - ^

1. Try to use the tiny grid in every difficulty. It'll look much better afterwards and you won't get any DS problems like I said in Easy.
2. Small triple streams like this - 00:19:603 (1,2) - are too hard for an normal difficulty. I suggest to pull down the BSD to 1/2.
3. 00:30:578 (1,2,3) - Improve that blanket.
4. 00:35:567 (1) - That slider's a bit too hard for an Easy difficulty.
5. 00:51:332 (2,4) - These are overlapping.
6. 00:54:524 (2,4) - Improve that blanket.
7. Why isn't normal finished? If it's a WIP post it there and not in pending.

1. Tiny grid still.
2. 00:16:410 (2,3) - Improve that blanket.
3. 00:26:388 (5,6) - ^
4. 01:07:296 (1,2,3) - ^
5. 02:45:674 (1,2,3,1) - ^
6. 02:55:252 (1,2) - ^
7. 00:24:592 (1) - X306 Y248 for perfect stack.
8. 00:33:372 (3,4) - X377 Y96 ^
9. 01:01:309 (4) - Y88 ^
10. 01:15:278 (4) - X117 Y91 ^
11. 01:21:264 (3,4) - X75 ^
12. 01:22:262 (2) - Y171 ^
13. 01:27:051 (4) - Y262 ^
14. 02:30:508 (2) - X175 Y295 ^
15. 00:28:882 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - These'd look better if they were forming a better circle.
16. 00:35:567 (1,2) - Use copy and paste them instead of these - 00:35:966 (3,4) - it'd be more symmetrical.
17. 00:51:332 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - You could try to make these symmetrical.
18. 01:24:856 (5) - That slider looks weird.
19. 02:31:306 (4) - Why isn't that one stacked?
20. 02:32:104 (1,2,3,4,5) - Try to improve that star jump.
21. 02:38:290 (1,2,3,4,5) - That looks too squeezed.

1. Since this is an Insane level, you can basically to everything you like and I'm not gonna check the NC's 'cuz I don't mod these. But you should definitely recheck every pattern with tiny grid on and try to make things more symmetrical.

G3m4sSt4ffLP wrote:

M4M here~
These are all suggestions so ignore them if you don't like to change something I suggested.

[Easy]

1. Try to use the tiny grid in every difficulty. It'll look much better afterwards and you won't get any DS problems. (Use g in editor to change the grid size)
2. 00:13:032 (1,1) - That blanket could be improved with tiny grid.
3. 00:18:220 (3,2) - These are overlapping.
4. 00:25:005 (4,5) - These are too far from each other.
5. 00:31:790 (2) - Y154 for perfect stack.
6. 00:35:182 (2) - X144 ^
7. 00:41:568 (6) - That slider looks boring.
8. 00:43:364 (7) - Y92 for perfect stack.
9. 00:54:538 (4,5,6) - That overlap looks bad.
10. 01:14:094 (2) - X288 Y112 for perfect stack.
11. 01:18:884 (1) - That slider looks ugly. Try something else please.
12. 01:20:879 (2,3,4,5) - There's absolutely no pattern. I think that's making the part weird.
13. 01:35:247 (4,5) - These are too close.
14. 01:52:009 (2,3,4) - If that's supposed to be a blanket try to improve it.
15. 02:27:130 (1,2,1) - ^
16. 02:43:094 (2,3,4) - ^

[Normal]

1. Try to use the tiny grid in every difficulty. It'll look much better afterwards and you won't get any DS problems like I said in Easy.
2. Small triple streams like this - 00:19:603 (1,2) - are too hard for an normal difficulty. I suggest to pull down the BSD to 1/2.
3. 00:30:578 (1,2,3) - Improve that blanket.
4. 00:35:567 (1) - That slider's a bit too hard for an Easy difficulty.
5. 00:51:332 (2,4) - These are overlapping.
6. 00:54:524 (2,4) - Improve that blanket.
7. Why isn't normal finished? If it's a WIP post it there and not in pending.

[Hard]

1. Tiny grid still.
2. 00:16:410 (2,3) - Improve that blanket.
3. 00:26:388 (5,6) - ^
4. 01:07:296 (1,2,3) - ^
5. 02:45:674 (1,2,3,1) - ^
6. 02:55:252 (1,2) - ^
7. 00:24:592 (1) - X306 Y248 for perfect stack.
8. 00:33:372 (3,4) - X377 Y96 ^
9. 01:01:309 (4) - Y88 ^
10. 01:15:278 (4) - X117 Y91 ^
11. 01:21:264 (3,4) - X75 ^
12. 01:22:262 (2) - Y171 ^
13. 01:27:051 (4) - Y262 ^
14. 02:30:508 (2) - X175 Y295 ^
15. 00:28:882 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - These'd look better if they were forming a better circle.
16. 00:35:567 (1,2) - Use copy and paste them instead of these - 00:35:966 (3,4) - it'd be more symmetrical.
17. 00:51:332 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - You could try to make these symmetrical.
18. 01:24:856 (5) - That slider looks weird.
19. 02:31:306 (4) - Why isn't that one stacked?
20. 02:32:104 (1,2,3,4,5) - Try to improve that star jump.
21. 02:38:290 (1,2,3,4,5) - That looks too squeezed.

[Insane]

1. Since this is an Insane level, you can basically to everything you like and I'm not gonna check the NC's 'cuz I don't mod these. But you should definitely recheck every pattern with tiny grid on and try to make things more symmetrical.

Good luck with your betmap! ^^

yugijedi wrote:

Heyho, from your M4M queue, sorry for being a bit late,

Ok, how should I begin. It's understandable that u get some feedbacks which are saying that you should remap nearly everthing and so on...
BUT I know this situation you really want to get your map ranked, but have not enough experience and after some bad feedbacks you give up the mapset (I did that some times) or start to repair all diffs.

To help u I consider to make a special mod, not placement-based or flow-based, just some general things you have to be familiar with. I think that will help you more than "Oh, yo, place this slider 5 to the right and rotate it by...... you know".

So let's start:

Insane

- This is probably the best diff of the set
- If you start a new combo you don't have to do this when the 10 appears in the last combo, or other specific numbers. The combo length goes with rhythm, or with the vocals and not everytime until it reaches 4 or so. (example NC shouldn't be here 00:46:942 (1) - more here 00:46:742 (10) -
- In the recent mapping style, a double repeated slider appearing in a part which should have flow (like here), is very rare. Here it just brakes the flow. (triple repeating slider are okay, but not double..) 00:59:513 (3) - here. slider should end at 00:59:912
- Also in insane, where you think you can do nearly everything is a spaced stack with 1/2 distance to a triplet very uncomfortable. 01:08:892 (6,1,2) -
- On the other side in insane diffs you should map really with the song so this ascending part from here 01:32:838 (1) - is not bad, but you should change it after 1:37:627 into the real rhythm (buddy, you're mapping insane, it can really go with the melody)
- Here is another one: 01:43:614 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - . the slider are cool but if you listen to the music u can hear that the 1/4 ascending begins later than the first 1/4 slider.. so split it into two patterns, one with 1/4 sliders and one for example 1/2 circles.
- Last, if the rhythm is a bit complicated and WANT to map this (no problem do it in insane) you must really let the player "see" the rhythm, know what I mean? Not just place the circles as some jumps.. like here 02:06:362 (1,2,1,2,3,4) -

Hard

- I know it's a bit nasty, but stay in beat distance at more than 80% of the map.. do just add some jumps and not too much (that's why I should remap my hard )
- Also triplets do not appear that much in hard, of course no streams! the longest stream of a hard ranked I've ever seen was 5 circles!! so please 00:28:882 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - xxxx
- When I was an hard player a wasn't able to read 1/4 sliders, they do not belong in here, thats very important (00:27:386 (1,2,3,4) - )
- Try to make the slider v. comfortable with the distance of circles... I can formulate it this way: low SV goes with big distance like high SV with big distance. Low SV with low distance (nice for calmy, slow music parts) are also cool, BUT high SV and low distance should be on of the biggest shits I've ever seen.
- nothing more to say you don't HAVE TO concern about much rules in hard mapping. you don't have to, but you can (like experienced mappers).

Normal and Easy

- The quality of mapping is really low here..sry,,
- LOWER SV (much!)
- don't change SV in the whole song more than 0,3 (with inherits)
- overlaps shouldn't be done at any time especially at easy
- Stay in Beat-distance!!! at normal it can be a bit bigger than easy but JUMPS are NO GO
- IF for example the voice sings faster and u think oh cool I can add 3 1/2 circles (with distance 1/2) you're right, but not in this diff (too fast for a easy player, at normal a 1/2 distance SOMETIMES appears). I also don't like the decision what to do then, there are a few options (there are more, but..yeah):
- make a repeating slider
- make redpoint slider to emphasize some beats/tones DURING a slider (nice for complex rhythms)
- or just ignore the voice and go with the beat

So, that was it hope I could help you to get better in mapping, don't ignore the tips some are worthy and important to get it done right.

greetings and good luck, yugi~

Hitorikko wrote:

yo~ reverse m4m !

Easy

First think AR and HP should be set to 2 only. And when mapping easy maps, it is much better to use only 1/1 beat snap divisor and put notes only on white ticks and slider should also end on white ticks. If i am not mistaken this kind of easy is unrankable. Easy diffs are for beginner players and they can't read notes well so avoid stacking notes on easy diffs.

as shown on the image above 00:13:032 (1,1,2,3,4) - Good and 00:15:826 (5,1,2) - Not Good for easy diffs.

overlaps should be avoided too in easy diffs
there are DS inconsistency on some notes like 00:14:628 (2,3,4,5) - try to fix this.
00:16:624 (1,2) - don't stack
00:18:220 (3,4) - ^
00:21:413 (3,4) - overlap
00:22:810 (1,2) - ^
00:25:404 (5,6,1) - don't stack and overlap
and lot more of stacks and overlaps. u should know by now what to fix so i will leave the fixing to you.
slider starts 01:00:924 - and ends 01:02:520 -
01:31:655 (1,2) - fix blanket
01:36:045 (5,1) - ^
02:27:130 (1,2,3) - ^

I AM REMAKING THIS DIFF

Normal

SV = 1.5 ? that's too fast for normal
00:13:018 (1,2) - fix blanket
00:19:603 (1,2,1) - not a good overlap
00:24:792 (2,3) - ^
00:29:780 (3,2) - stack this
00:44:347 (3) - i think it is much better to not stack this IMO
00:51:332 - in this part the SV is really fast. this is not for normal
01:09:491 (2,3) - overlap
01:30:443 (2) - remove note here and add note here 01:30:643 - and remove this note 01:31:242 (4) - IMO it is much better
01:48:802 - again SV's too fast
01:54:589 (1,2,3) - fix blanket
02:15:941 (1,2,3,4) - NG stacks
02:19:134 (3,4,5) - ^

I AM REMAKING THIS DIFF

Hard

AR - 7 maybe ?no sorry...you can even see that the most hard maps are AR 8
00:13:218 (3,4) - fix blanket
00:16:410 (2,3) - ^ and the slider sounds kinda wrong for me (or just me tho)
00:18:206 (3,4) - i think u don't need to stack this
00:23:395 (2,3) - fix blanket
00:29:780 (10) - this slider ends 00:29:980 (11) - and add another slider here 00:30:179 - ends 00:30:379
00:32:774 (2) - replace this slider with a slider from 00:32:774 - to 00:32:973 - and a note 00:33:173 -
00:35:567 (1,2,3,4,5,6) -not good
00:57:119 (1) - ctrl+H ?
01:49:600 (1,2) - NG overlap
01:54:589 (1,2) - ^
02:32:504 (2,4) - ^
02:55:252 (1,2) - ^
03:00:041 (1,2,3,4) - ^

Insane

00:18:805 (3,4) - fix blanket
00:33:372 (2,3) - don't stack ?
00:36:765 (6) - x:256 y:224
00:38:960 (1,2,3,4,5) - this part is kinda weird. why not change this into jumps
00:40:955 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
00:43:350 (2,3,4,5) - ^
00:58:416 (2,3) - remove this
01:03:704 (1,2) - fix blanket and bad flow
01:07:296 (1,2) - don't stack
01:15:477 (1,2,3) - bad flow
01:19:468 (4,5,6) - NG stack
01:31:441 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
01:33:237 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,1,2,1,2) - same here 00:38:960 (1,2,3,4,5)
02:04:766 (1,2) - overlap
02:17:138 (12) - ctrl + G ?
02:20:830 (1,2) - NG stack
02:28:113 (4,5) - overlap
02:28:912 (6,1) - don't stack

ty for modding <3

Good luck ! :3

1. your mp3 128kps. try find 192kps.
2. Remove Widescreen Support all diff.
3. 00:00:261 - move red line this timing. your wrong now.
4. Where is hitsound?
5. all hitsound volume 50% now. try kiaitime use 60% or 70%.

1. DS Should all unity!! it's easy diff.
2. 00:13:032 (1) - note start this time better. (4/4 sound)
3. 01:09:305 (4) - blanket really wrong.
4. 01:11:301 (2,3) - ^

1. It's Normal diff. why SV change. Don't change.

• 
  You use 1.5SV. but, really fast and hard for me.

1. 00:57:119 (1) - try this, seems better and blanket. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2855324
2. 02:11:950 (3,2) - bad overlaps.

1. It's Insane OD6 is really low. I suggest +1 or +2.
2. 00:26:587 (1,2) - overlaps. try far slider reverse.

P o M u T a wrote:

[General]

1. your mp3 128kps. try find 192kps.
2. Remove Widescreen Support all diff.
3. 00:00:261 - move red line this timing. your wrong now.
4. Where is hitsound?i will do it
5. all hitsound volume 50% now. try kiaitime use 60% or 70%.

mb

[Easy]

1. DS Should all unity!! it's easy diff.
2. 00:13:032 (1) - note start this time better. (4/4 sound)
3. 01:09:305 (4) - blanket really wrong.
4. 01:11:301 (2,3) - ^

[Normal]

1. It's Normal diff. why SV change. Don't change.

changed a little
[Hard]

• 
  You use 1.5SV. but, really fast and hard for me.nah

1. 00:57:119 (1) - try this, seems better and blanket. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2855324
2. 02:11:950 (3,2) - bad overlaps.

[Insane]

1. It's Insane OD6 is really low. I suggest +1 or +2.
2. 00:26:587 (1,2) - overlaps. try far slider reverse.

gl

m1223961117 wrote:

From your Queue~

[General]
1. Remove "Widescreen support" & "Letterbox during breaks"
http://puu.sh/goPdr/1e6dd045e3.png

[Easy]
Unrankable:
1. Offset wrong (from Ai mod)
2. Remove all slow down green line
No need 0.75x and 0.5x green line in Easy, it's too slow and can't understand why notes are close some part (this is for newbie)

>If you fix this, PM to me again, I'll mod this diff again[/color]fixed all

[Normal]
Unrankable:
1.
2. Green line problem (Same reason as Easy)
no need 1.5x and >1.0x green line (It can't give newbie to play), If you want to set speed up green line, 1.1x is good and no below 1.0x

>If you fix this, PM to me again, I'll mod this diff again[/color]all fixed

[Hard]
Suggestion:
1. no need 1.5x green line (It's not Hard), If you want to set speed up green line, 1.1x or 1.2x
2. reduce strange slider like: 03:01:239 (4) - 03:04:432 (1) -
3. reduce 1/4 slider in Hard, 01:23:260 (1,2,3)

>If you fix this, PM to me again, I'll mod this diff again

[Insane]
You mainly follow lyric, so I think some drum you can ignore.
00:16:710 (4) - remove circle
00:17:508 (4) - ^
00:18:805 (3,4) - Try this: http://puu.sh/goPVa/ba6e74a93e.jpg
00:20:401 (1) - Same rhythm as 00:19:603 (1,2,3) -
00:22:098 (2) - remove circle
00:22:996 (2,1) - Combine a slider??
00:29:581 (2) - 4 word you can follow
00:31:776 (1) - http://puu.sh/goQf8/7e26ce8340.jpg
00:37:762 (1) - try: http://puu.sh/goQjd/d1af661efd.jpg
00:45:146 (2,4,6,8,1,3,5,7) - remove these circles
00:53:527 (1,2) - Suggestion: http://puu.sh/goQrJ/559f49f908.jpg, more fun to play
00:56:720 (1,1) - ^
01:02:606 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - what are these follow?? no idea
01:04:103 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - remove these part because no any rhythm to follow
01:03:704 (1) - 01:04:003 - and 01:04:103 - add circle
01:07:296 (1) - use http://puu.sh/goQf8/7e26ce8340.jpg set
01:12:684 (4) - change 3 circles
01:09:491 - don't ignore voice
01:15:876 (2) - change 3 circles
01:20:566 (6,8) - remove these??
01:20:865 (7) - copy this 01:24:457 (2,1,2) - to replace
01:26:652 (1,2) - what do these slider follow??
01:43:614 (1,2) - change 2 circle, not ready to put 1/4 sliders
01:45:210 - why ignore this voice??
01:47:904 (2,3) - remove circles, same first kiai
01:50:997 (2) - ^
01:54:389 (3) - remove this, 01:54:589 - add circle
02:07:061 - add circle??
02:11:850 - ^
02:17:038 - ^
02:18:335 (6) - don't ignore voice
02:19:932 (8) - try: http://puu.sh/goR8L/76ade809c4.jpg
02:22:825 (5,7) - remove these
02:27:415 - drum you lost
02:28:912 (6) - this rhythm same as first 2 notes (00:13:118 (1,2) - )
02:32:104 (4,5,6) - ^
02:33:202 (2) - remove this no sense circles, more fun
02:36:694 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,2) - Ctrl+G
02:42:281 (1) - remove, same above
02:45:275 (4) - ^ same rhythm
02:50:962 (2,4,8,10) - remove these circles
02:52:459 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6) - remove all finish, noisy
02:54:853 (6,1) - no explaining
02:58:245 (1) - ^
here i did whatever i thought was ok
ty for mod!
<3
UPDATED
Hope my mod can help you much

Faan wrote:

Sorry for l8 m4m

try to control your spread, the increase in the amount of stars are increasing in a super high rate
easy to normal is like barely any difference, then there is hard and insane

Easy:

Unrankable:there is a lot of DS inconsistency. for example: 00:22:211 (2) - has 1.4 prev and 1.3 next
00:27:001 (2) - this one is pretty obvious, that it is not in the center of 1 and 3
01:32:852 (3) - this is so
out of place

00:25:404 (3,1) - (1) can be rotated to line up with (3) better hence look better
00:40:171 (3,1,2,3,4) - this is basically a big circle-ok
00:46:956 (1,2) - ugly overlap
00:51:346 (6) - this is NCable
00:54:139 (1,3) - this is ugly
01:12:897 (4,2) - overlap
01:18:085 (2) - reduce each repeat by 1/2, this currently sounds ugly
02:01:986 (2,3) - move 3 more towards the end of 2, this is looking too close and hence ugly

remove gridsnap, look over the map again keeping in mind about the DS

Normal:
00:21:798 (4,5,6) - suggest something like a wide triangle, since linear flow doesn't feel fun
00:26:188 (1) - Don't change the DS in Normal difficulty! not in places like thisit is because of the green line.
00:40:157 (4,5) - doesn't go into each other nicely
00:50:134 (4) - [/color]
01:01:708 (4,5,1,2) - even square is better, this is kinda hard for normal
01:05:699 (8,9) - too close
01:07:695 (2) - 265,96 for better end stack with 4
01:10:488 (2,3) -
01:26:852 (1,2,1,2) - also no point NC
01:43:215 (1,2,3) - not sure why this part is so empty
01:52:793 (3,4) - either curve 4 more or change formation
02:23:125 (4,1) - random break
02:29:909 (1,3) - overlap
03:02:236 (1,2,3,4,5) - maybe pattern more

A few issues same as Easy, look for it yourself. it is mainly DS issue and can be found almost lots of places

Hard:

Consider drop AR a little

Ok I don't really know how to mod this because the quality, well....in harsh honest truth, is low, but not exactly terrible

First thing first
00:13:617 (4,1) -
00:26:587 (3,1) -
always keep in mind for overlaps like these, they're ugly

00:17:209 (3,4,5,6) - things like these flows terribly, it's like moving to ward the left then suddenly there is a triplet moving toward the left from the right

00:21:200 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - and things like these, I don't know why one is on the spot and one is moving
00:30:778 (6) - Ha! DS
00:30:978 (7,8,1) - I can see this is well made, but this is not good and not fun to play
00:38:560 (1,2,3) - random emptiness
00:40:356 (1,3) -
00:41:554 (4,5,6,7) - spacing between the notes and on the timeline is very comfusing
00:44:347 (3,4,5,6) - boring
00:48:738 (1,2,3,4,5) - super boring
the Kiai SV is kinda too sudden
00:59:912 (2,3,1) - anti jump though
01:09:092 (1,2,3) - WHY didn't you use more of this earlier
01:17:074 (1,2,3) - FINISH OVERLOAD reduce
01:24:657 (3,4,1) - hard to read
01:28:847 (5,6,7,8) -
01:33:636 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5) - :/
01:44:811 (2) - delete
02:01:773 (2,3) - don't
02:06:961 (2) - 1 is furthur from 2 in timeline and 3 is close, yet 1 is closer and 3 is so far away

erghhhhh
LOL-i am remaking hard diff
Insane:

basically look at what I pointed out in Hard and apply it on this, I will provide a few examples
00:22:397 (3) --ok
00:38:960 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6) - where is the sliders? why is it so hard to read!
00:56:720 (1) - random NC
01:06:697 (1) - sound bad, move1/2
01:12:085 (2) - 01:23:958 (9) -
01:32:838 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,1) -
01:44:612 (6) - this part is fun, however shrink the distance. also change this into a single note for pause effect
blah blah blah
blah blah blah

Meyrink wrote:

General

1. Check Letter boxing During Breaks in All Diffs
2. [color=#80BF00]Offset In Easy Is Different From Others ! ! Offset Is : 240 ! [/color]
3. MP3 File 128 KBPS ! Go Find 192 One ! wot
4. The kiai never start at small white tick ! ! that's why u need to change offset in all diffs to 240 For the red point
5. Hitsounding is missing- i will fix
6. Breaks Should be same in all the difficulties since it's not guest diff ! they are all made by same mapper
7. easy and normal remake them ! using only 1x Slider Velocity

mhm mb

Easy

1. SV Change is not acceptable in easy difficulty ! Change all Green points to 1x SV ! Can be unrankable-but i saw maps with changed
2. 00:17:422 (1,2) - Blanket Off ! Fix Other blankets in the diff ! There's a lot
3. 01:00:126 (5,6) - Don't Stack In Easy Diff ! Unrankable-really?
4. 01:44:426 (7,1) - Same
5. 01:44:825 (1,2) - Distance Snap ! Should be 1,3x ! you should check all the map to make sure Everything is snapped to 1,3x DS

Normal

1. Everything need to be 0,9x DS ! here 00:29:780 (2) - i see 0,8x
2. Why here Breaks ! 01:36:430 - 01:58:780 - 02:24:322 - Map Them Like Other diff !
3. same as easy you don't need slider velocity change
   [*]01:04:103 (4,5,6,7) - Overmapped ! Put Slider instead maybe or keep empty
4. 01:27:251 (8,9,10) - Pls No ! Unstack this !put 01:27:251 (8,10) - somewhere else
5. 01:29:246 (2,2) - overlap ! thhose 2 sliders touching
6. 01:55:587 (3,4) - This kind of blanket , i cri ! improve it !use the Approach circle to make better blanket
7. 02:37:492 (2,4) - So tricky for beginners[/*:m:1337]

Hard

1. 00:23:794 (3,2) - try stacking it
2. 00:26:188 (2) - CTRL + G
3. 00:26:587 (3) - Same
4. 00:26:987 (4) - put it in top of 00:27:186 (5) - ! i don't mean stack ! i mean placement
5. 00:45:146 (1,3) - overlap maby stack or separate them
6. 00:50:134 (5,6) - put 6 somwhere else don't stack ! it's so trickky
7. check all overlaps that's looks bad and fix them ! then stacks try to make them reasonable

Insane

1. same as hard juts improve it's quality with fixing bad overlaps

GL

1. Add some tags to make your mapset easier for people to find. As a minimum, I'd start with "WILD ONES" (the Flo Rida album this is from), "RedFoo" (the LMFAO member who helped create the song) and then some genres, like "electronic" or "dance". You could even include "Bryan Adams" if you wanted to (the creator of the original version of the song)
2. Currently, your mapset uses the default hitsounds and default combo colours. Whilst there's nothing wrong with this, I feel it makes the map a little plain. Have a look through song folders for songs you've downloaded and find some hitsounds you like that go with the music. I'd pick some soft cymbal sound, a kick drum sound (for the bass) and maybe a crash cymbal for when you want to add emphasis. For combo colours, try and pick something that compliments your background without blending in (making them hard to see). I'd choose something like red, pink, purple and maybe a brown or a blue if you feel you need an extra colour.
3. Ensure that "Widescreen support" and "Letterbox during breaks" are disabled for all difficulties, since this mapset doesn't use a storyboard. These also need to be consistent between difficulties.
4. As others have mentioned, the audio bitrate of your mp3 is 128kbps, which is the minimum allowed. Essentially, higher bitrate = better quality. Here is a 192kbps version, the maximum allowed bitrate, since no-one else seemed to want to actually help you
5. Change your offset to 240ms for all difficulties. This will help make your kiai/break sections consistent too, as these are throwing up errors in AImod
6. Hitsounds could do with being about 10% louder throughout - I found them very hard to hear at some points.
7. Your outro is unmapped, which is fine, but it's a little long and is taking up unnecessary file space. You could either map it, or cut it down with aan audio editor so it fades out earlier. If you need any help with this, let me know and I'll take a look at it for you.

Hard

1. Set HP = 5, AR = 6

00:15:712 (2) - I don't hear a sound in the bg music here (unless this is mapping the vocals?), and triples should be used sparingly in Hard to add a quick burst of difficulty. I think they're overused here.
00:16:510 (2) - ^
00:17:308 (2) - ^

00:19:404 - Strong beat here deserves a hitcircle

00:28:184 - The strong beat is here, not at 00:28:383 (4)

00:29:980 (4,5) - Make these two into a 1/2 slider repeating once for the strong beat at 00:30:179

00:31:377 - Strong beat here is on a slider end, reverse the order of 00:30:978 (2,3)

00:32:973 - Strong beat here, add hitcircle
00:35:368 - ^
00:36:964 - ^
00:44:148 - ^

00:44:447 (2) - Remove this note, there's no bg sound here so the triplet isn't justified

00:50:533 (6) - Remove this note, no bg sound and the brief pause is well-suited here

00:50:733 (1) - Make a jump to or from this note because of the drop

00:53:726 - Strong beat here, add hitcircle
00:56:919 - ^
01:00:112 - ^

01:01:708 - As in Easy, add a spinner here that lasts until 01:04:103

01:12:284 (1) - Make this a 1/2 slider with no repeats, the repeat note isn't justified in the bg music here

01:18:470 - Strong beat here, add hitcircle

01:19:169 (3) - Triplet pattern unnecessary here, remove this note

01:19:867 (6) - Here, there IS a triplet pattern, so make this a 1/4 slider repeating once

01:20:466 - The strong beat is on the slider end, so swap 01:20:266 (1,2)

01:23:459 (3) - Make this a 1/4 slider to include the vocal at 01:23:559 (I think a 4th single circle here is unnecessary)

01:24:257 (6) - Remove the repeat here and make this a 1/2 slider

01:27:450 - Place a 1/4 slider here to map the vocal start

01:28:348 (2) - Remove this note, triplet is unnecessary, or if you want to keep the triple, swap it with the slider at 01:28:648 (4) since the bg vocals here can justify it

01:33:237 - Strong note here is unmapped. At the very least put a circle here, but you may want to map the surrounding notes too, in which case use a 1/2 slider repeating once starting at 01:33:038

01:33:636 (2,3) - Strong beat is on the slider end at 01:34:035, so switch these notes around

01:34:235 (4) - This 3/4 slider sounds really out of place, it should end at 01:34:434, but as above, there's a strong beat here, so switch 01:34:235 (4,5)

01:39:124 (8) - I haven't seen any triplets in a while so I'll let this one slide

01:42:217 (1) - There's a triplet sound here though, so make this a 1/4 slider repeating once

01:45:011 - Place some notes here to map the vocals, like you did at 00:50:733 (1)

01:45:609 (1,2) - Strong beat on slider end, switch these two notes

01:47:605 - Place a circle here for the strong beat

01:47:804 (7,8,9) - You really do like your triplets huh? ^^

01:49:201 (4,5) - Exchange these two

01:50:798 - Strong beat here, add circle

01:50:997 (9,10,11) - So many triplets >_>
01:52:594 (4) - ^

01:57:981 (2) - Remove the repeat here to leave a 1/2 slider ending at 01:58:181

02:01:972 (2) - The strong beat is at 02:02:172
02:03:569 (3) - As above, but at 02:03:768
02:04:567 (1,2) - ^ At 02:04:766 so switch these two

02:07:859 (6) - Remove this note

02:09:755 (2,3,4) - Swap (2,3) with (4), since the start and end of the slider (4) are both strong beats

02:13:746 (5) - Make this a 1/4 slider repeating once for the strong snare beat

02:17:338 - Whilst it's not strictly a strong beat, the gap here feels awkward, so I'd put a circle here
02:20:531 - ^ This is a strong beat

02:21:129 (2) - The strong beat is on the slider end at 02:21:329
02:22:526 (1,2) - ^ Switch these two
02:24:522 (2) - ^ strong beat is at 02:24:721
02:27:714 (3) - ^ strong beat is at 02:27:914

02:33:302 (5,6,7) - This triplet is unnecessary, and in fact I think it would sound better as a 1/2 slider to map the "ooh" of the vocals

02:33:701 (1) - Make this a repeating-once 1/2 slider for the kick drum

02:39:887 (1) - Make a jump here for the drop and also, the start of the kiai section

02:45:075 - The downbeat (long white tick) is unmapped, so place a circle here

02:45:274 (7,8,9) - These triplets will be the death of me ;_;
02:46:871 (4,5,6) - ^

02:50:064 (1,1,1,1) - These can all be the same combo, with a NC at 02:52:658 (3)

02:54:654 - Downbeats need to be mapped, so add a circle here

02:54:854 (9,10,11) - Triplet is not necessary here, make this a 1/2 slider

02:56:250 - There's a strong beat here, so make 02:55:851 (2) - a 1/1 slider repeating once

02:56:849 (3,4) - Strong beat is at 02:57:048 so switch these two

02:59:243 (4,5,6) - As at 02:54:854 (9,10,11)

JBHyperion wrote:

Here's your m4m, as promised!

General Comments:

1. Add some tags to make your mapset easier for people to find. As a minimum, I'd start with "WILD ONES" (the Flo Rida album this is from), "RedFoo" (the LMFAO member who helped create the song) and then some genres, like "electronic" or "dance". You could even include "Bryan Adams" if you wanted to (the creator of the original version of the song)
2. Currently, your mapset uses the default hitsounds and default combo colours. Whilst there's nothing wrong with this, I feel it makes the map a little plain. Have a look through song folders for songs you've downloaded and find some hitsounds you like that go with the music. I'd pick some soft cymbal sound, a kick drum sound (for the bass) and maybe a crash cymbal for when you want to add emphasis. For combo colours, try and pick something that compliments your background without blending in (making them hard to see). I'd choose something like red, pink, purple and maybe a brown or a blue if you feel you need an extra colour.
3. Ensure that "Widescreen support" and "Letterbox during breaks" are disabled for all difficulties, since this mapset doesn't use a storyboard. These also need to be consistent between difficulties.
4. As others have mentioned, the audio bitrate of your mp3 is 128kbps, which is the minimum allowed. Essentially, higher bitrate = better quality. Here is a 192kbps version, the maximum allowed bitrate, since no-one else seemed to want to actually help you
5. Change your offset to 240ms for all difficulties. This will help make your kiai/break sections consistent too, as these are throwing up errors in AImod
6. Hitsounds could do with being about 10% louder throughout - I found them very hard to hear at some points.
7. Your outro is unmapped, which is fine, but it's a little long and is taking up unnecessary file space. You could either map it, or cut it down with aan audio editor so it fades out earlier. If you need any help with this, let me know and I'll take a look at it for you.

Map-Specific Comments:

Easy

1. Slider velocities are much better, I think this diff is better suited to CS/HP/AR=2 however. CS and HP are personal preference, but since the BPM is 150, I think an AR spread of 2/4/6/8 across your difficulties would be much better here.

00:25:383 (3) - Overlapping sliders can be a bit intimidating to new players, so I'd just replace this slider with a single hitcircle.

00:32:567 (1,2,3) - The flow here is awkward, since you have to go back over the head of (2) to reach the start of (3). You could easily fix this by Ctrl+G (2), and it would look nicer imo anyway.

00:37:755 (4) - Hiding a slider start right under a previous note is likely going to confuse new players. Ctrl+H this, and then reflow the following notes so you don't get left with a huge jump.
00:51:325 (1) - As above, but here is more acceptable since the player isn't likely to be distracted as there is a small break, so this can stay as it is.

01:01:701 - Add a spinner here that lasts until 01:04:096, so you still get a little bit of a break.

01:20:060 - Add a circle here, since this is a strong beat.

02:01:965 (2) - The strong beat here should be "clickable" rather than on a slider end. You could fix this by swapping (1) and (2).

02:07:154 (4) - Make this a 1/1 slider repeating once to follow the kick drum.

02:11:943 - Another unmapped strong beat here, this time inside a slider. Either make 02:11:544 (5) a 1/1 slider repeating once, or rework the rest of the combo to make this a circle.

02:12:741 (6,7) - Make (6) a 1/1 slider (weaker beats) and (7) a 1/1 slider repeating once starting 1 beat later at 02:13:539 for the stronger beats

02:22:719 (4) - Make this a 1/1 slider repeating once for the strong beat.

02:25:911 (3) - It seems weird having this vocal mapped but nothing at 02:26:709 so either remove this slider and leave the gap for a quick breather, or put a circle at 02:26:709 to continue the vocals.

02:28:306 (1,2,3,4) - Stacked notes again.

02:49:059 (5) - Make this slider into a single circle at 02:49:059 and a 1/1 slider starting at 02:49:458, then make the new note a NC, since this combo is quite long (nearly 4 measures)

Normal

1. HP/AR/OD = 4, CS = 3

00:26:188 (1) - Distance snapping from here up until 00:50:134 seems to be lower than in the intro? The flow looked much nicer there where notes weren't overlapping, but ds seems to be set to 0.9x throughout. Could be a grid size issue? Make sure to ds these notes to the same grid spacing as you used in the intro

00:39:758 and 00:40:556 are strong beats that deserve to be mapped, so either add circles, or make 00:40:157 (4) a 1/1 once-repeating slider.

01:04:103 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - While there are technically notes here (the crowd "oh!"s), they're too weak to merit their own notes, so you should remove these and leave a small rest period like you have done at 01:58:780, or maybe make it a spinner?

01:22:861 (1) - Move the NC here to 01:23:260 (2) and make another NC at 01:26:852 (7) as this combo is too long.

01:32:040 (1) - Remove NC here.

01:35:233 (1) - Move the NC here to 01:36:430 (4)

01:38:825 - Strong beat here needs mapping, add a circle.

01:45:210 (4) - I like the small pause you had here in the easy diff as it helped build anticipation for the break, so I would remove this note

02:04:367 (6) - Is a strong beat mapped to a slider end, so swap (5) and (6) around

02:07:161 (4) - Make this a 1/1 slider repeating once and place a circle at 02:08:358

02:09:954 (3) - As 02:04:367 (6), change this so you can put a circle here for the strong beat

02:16:340 (4) - Strong beat in the middle of a slider, so make this a 1/1 slider repeating once

02:17:936 (2) - As 02:04:367 (6)
02:24:322 (1) - ^

Hard

1. Set HP = 5, AR = 6

00:15:712 (2) - I don't hear a sound in the bg music here (unless this is mapping the vocals?), and triples should be used sparingly in Hard to add a quick burst of difficulty. I think they're overused here.
00:16:510 (2) - ^
00:17:308 (2) - ^

00:19:404 - Strong beat here deserves a hitcircle

00:28:184 - The strong beat is here, not at 00:28:383 (4)

00:29:980 (4,5) - Make these two into a 1/2 slider repeating once for the strong beat at 00:30:179

00:31:377 - Strong beat here is on a slider end, reverse the order of 00:30:978 (2,3)

00:32:973 - Strong beat here, add hitcircle
00:35:368 - ^
00:36:964 - ^
00:44:148 - ^

00:44:447 (2) - Remove this note, there's no bg sound here so the triplet isn't justified

00:50:533 (6) - Remove this note, no bg sound and the brief pause is well-suited here

00:50:733 (1) - Make a jump to or from this note because of the drop

00:53:726 - Strong beat here, add hitcircle
00:56:919 - ^
01:00:112 - ^

01:01:708 - As in Easy, add a spinner here that lasts until 01:04:103

01:12:284 (1) - Make this a 1/2 slider with no repeats, the repeat note isn't justified in the bg music here

01:18:470 - Strong beat here, add hitcircle

01:19:169 (3) - Triplet pattern unnecessary here, remove this note

01:19:867 (6) - Here, there IS a triplet pattern, so make this a 1/4 slider repeating once

01:20:466 - The strong beat is on the slider end, so swap 01:20:266 (1,2)

01:23:459 (3) - Make this a 1/4 slider to include the vocal at 01:23:559 (I think a 4th single circle here is unnecessary)

01:24:257 (6) - Remove the repeat here and make this a 1/2 slider

01:27:450 - Place a 1/4 slider here to map the vocal start

01:28:348 (2) - Remove this note, triplet is unnecessary, or if you want to keep the triple, swap it with the slider at 01:28:648 (4) since the bg vocals here can justify it

01:33:237 - Strong note here is unmapped. At the very least put a circle here, but you may want to map the surrounding notes too, in which case use a 1/2 slider repeating once starting at 01:33:038

01:33:636 (2,3) - Strong beat is on the slider end at 01:34:035, so switch these notes around

01:34:235 (4) - This 3/4 slider sounds really out of place, it should end at 01:34:434, but as above, there's a strong beat here, so switch 01:34:235 (4,5)

01:39:124 (8) - I haven't seen any triplets in a while so I'll let this one slide

01:42:217 (1) - There's a triplet sound here though, so make this a 1/4 slider repeating once

01:45:011 - Place some notes here to map the vocals, like you did at 00:50:733 (1)

01:45:609 (1,2) - Strong beat on slider end, switch these two notes

01:47:605 - Place a circle here for the strong beat

01:47:804 (7,8,9) - You really do like your triplets huh? ^^

01:49:201 (4,5) - Exchange these two

01:50:798 - Strong beat here, add circle

01:50:997 (9,10,11) - So many triplets >_>
01:52:594 (4) - ^

01:57:981 (2) - Remove the repeat here to leave a 1/2 slider ending at 01:58:181

02:01:972 (2) - The strong beat is at 02:02:172
02:03:569 (3) - As above, but at 02:03:768
02:04:567 (1,2) - ^ At 02:04:766 so switch these two

02:07:859 (6) - Remove this note

02:09:755 (2,3,4) - Swap (2,3) with (4), since the start and end of the slider (4) are both strong beats

02:13:746 (5) - Make this a 1/4 slider repeating once for the strong snare beat

02:17:338 - Whilst it's not strictly a strong beat, the gap here feels awkward, so I'd put a circle here
02:20:531 - ^ This is a strong beat

02:21:129 (2) - The strong beat is on the slider end at 02:21:329
02:22:526 (1,2) - ^ Switch these two
02:24:522 (2) - ^ strong beat is at 02:24:721
02:27:714 (3) - ^ strong beat is at 02:27:914

02:33:302 (5,6,7) - This triplet is unnecessary, and in fact I think it would sound better as a 1/2 slider to map the "ooh" of the vocals

02:33:701 (1) - Make this a repeating-once 1/2 slider for the kick drum

02:39:887 (1) - Make a jump here for the drop and also, the start of the kiai section

02:45:075 - The downbeat (long white tick) is unmapped, so place a circle here

02:45:274 (7,8,9) - These triplets will be the death of me ;_;
02:46:871 (4,5,6) - ^

02:50:064 (1,1,1,1) - These can all be the same combo, with a NC at 02:52:658 (3)

02:54:654 - Downbeats need to be mapped, so add a circle here

02:54:854 (9,10,11) - Triplet is not necessary here, make this a 1/2 slider

02:56:250 - There's a strong beat here, so make 02:55:851 (2) - a 1/1 slider repeating once

02:56:849 (3,4) - Strong beat is at 02:57:048 so switch these two

02:59:243 (4,5,6) - As at 02:54:854 (9,10,11)

Insane

1. AR = 8 (I feel BPM below 180 or so should follow this rule to allow them to be played with DT),

00:38:960 (1) - This section until 00:44:547 (5) is far too easy for the Insane diff. If you want to keep it as single notes, put some jumps in to make it more interesting, varied, and also to maintain the intensity

00:44:946 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I think these notes would be better suited as 1/2 sliders than single notes

00:51:332 (1) - The drop here could really do with a jump, as I mentioned in the Hard diff

00:51:332 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - I like the idea you've got here of the hexagonal shape, but the notes aren't quite lined up properly so it looks a bit messy. You should move 00:51:332 (1) and 00:53:128 (4) to [x-352], and 00:51:731 (3) and 00:53:327 (5) to [x-152] to create a neater symmetry

00:56:720 (1) - This NC doesn't fit here, so I'd remove it, keeping the NC at 00:57:119 (1)
00:57:717 (1,1,2,3) - These don't need NC either

01:01:708 - As with the other diffs, you could really do with a spinner here until 01:04:103

01:07:296 (1) - This 3/4 slider is very awkward to play with the 1/4 circle under the slider tail. It would make more sense if this was changed for a 1/2 slider instead

01:07:695 (2,3) - Reverse these two notes, as the strong beat is on the slider end at 01:08:094

01:16:874 (1,2) - These would be more intuitive to read if they were spaced out like the following notes in the combo and not stacked on top of each other

01:32:838 (1) to 01:42:017 (2) - As for the similar section at 00:38:960 (1), this just feels a bit slow and uninteresting compared to the rest of the song, so I'd add some jumps to make it more engaging

01:45:609 (1) - Again, could do with a jump here for the beat drop

02:01:773 (2,3) - I think these are supposed to be mapping the "wub" for want of a better explanation. If so, you should add another 2 repeats to each so that it lands on a the red tick to produce 9 beats total [1,2,3,4 1,2,3,4, 1] as currently, the 7 beats you have sounds weird

02:06:163 - Strong beat here needs mapping

02:07:061 - Strong beat here, so add a circle and yes, for once I am actually telling you to GO FOR THE TRIPLET! ^^

02:07:360 and 02:07:360 - Strong beats here, so maybe to avoid repetition, make 02:07:560 (3) a 1/1 slider repeating once

02:08:558 (2) - Both slider start and end are strong beats, so make this two separate circles
02:10:154 (4) - ^

02:11:152 (1,2) - You could probably make these sliders to represent the held vocals

02:11:750 (3) - There's a weak beat at 02:11:850, so make this a 1/4 slider

02:12:349 (5) - The strong beat is at 02:12:549 instead of here

02:12:948 (2) - Make this a 1/4 slider repeating once and add a circle at 02:13:347 (where the slider end was) for the strong beat

02:13:746 (4,5) - Make these a 1/4 slider repeating once for the triplet

02:14:943 (2) - Strong beats on both slider head and tail, make two separate circles

02:15:741 (1) - The stream is matching the vocals, so should start at 02:15:841 (2) and 02:15:342 (3) should be extended by 1/2

02:20:531 - Add a circle here for the strong beat

02:25:719 - Remove 02:25:918 (1) and place a 1/4 slider repeating once here for the vocals

02:26:118 (2,3) - Switch these two, then make the slider a 1/4 slider repeating once, again for the vocals

02:28:912 (6) - Make this a 1/2 slider repeating once for the kick drum backbeat

02:37:293 (7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - The overlapping stream here may look cool in the editor, but it's very difficult to read, so I would swap it for a more normal, non-overlapping pattern

02:38:290 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - There's no reason why these need to be all NCs, although a NC at 02:39:089 (1) only would be okay

02:40:086 (1) - Remove NC here
02:42:281 (1) - ^

02:51:261 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - The overlapping stream here is okay for me since it's not so tightly packed and much easier to read

02:55:851 (2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - Your pentagon pattern is slightly out of shape and looks a bit messy. Try and line up all the notes using a smaller grid division

There might seem like a lot here, but some of it is just my personal preference, so don't feel like you have to change everything. If you'd like me to explain any of my comments in more detail or want to discuss anything else with me, please don't hesitate to get back in touch with me.

Best of luck! (:

Nozhomi wrote:

Hi~ answer to M4M
I'll be rude. All thing in bold are unrankable issues.

- General :

1. Offset MUST be the same for all diff ! 241 seems good.i did 240...
2. Previous point is different between diff. Fix it !
3. Title should be Run (Nightcore Mix).
4. Add "trance techno" to tag.
5. Pls start to map at 00:13:018 - . There is not point to start after the strong beat.
6. 01:04:096 - Why not end your kiai (and mapping) like at 01:55:579 - ? Keep consistency on yours diffs pls !
7. You need to work again on your hisound. There is a lot of inconsistancy and misplaced on it.
8. Remove OSB file because you don't use a storyboard.

how?

- Easy :

1. Spacing should be CONSTANT on easiest diff (in Easy and Normal). Fix all your bad spacing on the diff.
2. I would avoid SV change on an Easy diff. This is the lowest diff !
3. 00:25:383 (3) - Avoid 1/2 in Easy diff. Shoul be the easiest diff.
4. 00:32:567 (1,3) - Avoid overlap like this on an Easy diff, because this can disturb newbies. Also it just look ugly.
5. 00:35:759 (1,2,4) - Wow this blanket is bad. Improve it.
6. 00:43:343 (4,5,6) - ^
7. 00:54:517 (2,3,4) - ^ also place 00:56:114 (4) - on same y axe than 00:54:517 (2) - looks better.
8. 01:08:885 (3,4) - Blanket.
9. 01:30:836 (1,2) - ^
10. 01:44:405 (7) - What is the problem with this slider ? Really ugly.
11. 02:12:741 (6,7) - Blanket.
12. 02:28:306 (1) - Remove NC and place it to 02:28:705 - .
13. 02:33:095 (1) - Remove NC and place it to 02:33:494 - .
14. 02:50:855 (7) - Just no ! You follow drum all along and suddenly change for vocal and break polarity. That's not possible here ! Just follow drum all along and map on white tics !

- Normal :

1. [b]Spacing should be CONSTANT on easiest diff (in Easy and Normal). Fix all your bad spacing on the diff.[/b]
2. 00:55:323 (3,4,5,6) - Blanket pls.
3. 01:08:493 (3,4) - ^
4. 01:26:053 (5,2) - You can avoid this overlap.
5. 02:05:165 (1,2) - Blanket.
6. 02:11:950 (1,2) - ^
7. 02:24:322 (1,2) - ^
8. 02:25:120 (2,1) - Overlap move it to 248:112.
9. 02:34:699 (2,3) - ^
10. 02:49:066 (6) - Rotate by -20° to improve flow.

- Hard :

1. 00:58:316 (4,5,6) - Overmapping, there is no triplet here on music.
2. 01:21:663 (1,2,3) - This overlap make it just unreadable. Change this.
3. 01:34:634 (7) - What is this 1/4 ??? There is no point to use it right now, and more for a Hard diff. Remove it and extend 01:34:235 (6) - to 01:34:634 - .
4. 01:35:332 (3) - Overmap ! Remove this circle.
5. 01:47:804 (7,8,9) - Overmap remove 01:47:904 (8) - .
6. 01:50:997 (9,10,11) - ^ (do the other yourself pls).
7. 02:05:365 (4,5) - and similar on this part : Adapt spacing compared to SV change. This is too weird righ now. Also NC 02:05:564 (5) - to signal a SV change !
8. 02:29:510 (7) - CTRL+G pls you break flow hard here.
9. 03:04:432 (1) - If you want to blanket, move first anchor point to 230:253.

- Insane :

1. There is a lot of inconsistency with your NC. Try to keep a directive line when you do it.
2. 00:21:592 (1,2,3) - Use same spacing for your stream. There is no real reason than this one had a lowest than other after (should be the oposite imo because the part after is less strong than this one).
3. 00:49:735 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This stream could be a smoother and finish stacked with 00:48:937 (5) - .
4. 00:58:316 (1,2,3) - Same problem than Hard. This is overmapped. Remove central circle (same for other similar).
5. 01:40:022 (1,1,1) - These NC are useless.
6. 01:53:392 (9,2,3,4) - I guess you want to stack them right ?
7. 02:38:490 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - Useless NC.

This mapset still need a lot of work on aesthetic imo.
Mukyu~

[Rei-tan] wrote:

hello! modder from my queue! - t/309402&start=0

General : please check your AiMod

Easy

00:36:957 (2) - Move this after the slider in 00:35:759 - 00:36:558 (1) nah.
02:01:566 (1) - move this up to the north by a bit-looks cool
02:21:521 (2) - Align this slider with the circle in 02:20:723 (1)-this can be unranked!
01:52:387 (2) - move this to the southwest a little

ok!

IK i'm a crappy modder but yeah. I have no complaints with the other diffs >.< I need starzz <3 <3 thank you :3

N5U5M7R5 wrote:

BPM: 150.338
dude are you fine?

it's 150

DahplA wrote:

N5U5M7R5 wrote:

BPM: 150.338
dude are you fine?

it's 150

This is wrong.
Anyways.

General

1. Change title name to add spacing
   

   Run (Nightcore)

2. Add tags
3. Some of your bookmarks aren't snapped to the timeline. Clean this up please.

Easy

1. Major problems with the combos. They need to be placed on the note that is on or after every 8th beat.
2. 00:18:199 (2) - Fix blanket
3. 00:24:585 (2) - ^
4. 00:28:975 (1) - ^
5. 00:37:755 (4) - Remove red tick on slider.
6. 00:43:343 (4) - Fix blanket
7. 00:44:939 (6) - ^
8. 01:20:858 (3) - ^
9. 01:27:243 (2) - ^
10. 02:11:544 (5) - Inconsistent distance spacing. Fix this.
11. 02:13:140 (7) - Fix blanket
12. 02:57:041 (1) - ^

Normal

1. 00:27:378 (1) - New combo issue. Same as on Easy, they need to be consistently on every 8th beat (for Easy/Normal).
2. 00:28:576 (3) - Move this so it doesn't touch 00:27:378 (1) -
3. 00:36:558 (2) - Fix blanket
4. 01:48:795 (1) - ^
5. 01:55:979 (3) - ^
6. 02:07:153 (4) - ^
7. 02:13:538 (4) - ^
8. 02:34:691 (2) - ^

Hard

1. Same New Combo inconsistency.
2. 00:16:403 (1,2,3) - Move down 1
3. 00:18:399 (2) - Move this so it doesn't touch 00:17:401 (3) -
4. 01:13:874 (1,2) - This pattern may be too hard for new players. Change this.
5. 01:47:996 (8) - Remove.
6. 01:51:190 (10) - Remove. (Scroll down for hitsound mod)
7. 02:55:844 (2) - Change this.

Insane

1. 00:17:800 (1) - Can be stacked on 00:17:002 (1) -
2. 00:25:782 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - Fix curve
3. 00:28:177 (1) - ^
4. 00:44:939 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - No...
5. 00:50:327 (7) - Change this so it's a 1/4 slider rather than 2 1/4 circles (so you end on your primary finger)
6. 01:14:472 (1) - Fix curve.
7. 01:26:645 (1) - Change this.
8. 01:27:443 (2) - Fix blanet
9. From 02:31:498 (1) - to 02:36:487 (9) - Isn't really well mapped. Fix.
10. 02:46:265 (2) - Inconsistent distance spacing.
11. 02:52:452 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5) - I would explain what's wrong, but I'm pretty sure you can hear it. (Scroll down for hitsound mod)

Hitsounds

1. Firstly, you might want to remove all current hitsounds as they are inconsistent or poorly placed. Second change all green ticks using F6 to Audio: Soft Custom 1. Also another general tip, when applying hitsounds to one part of a slide, not the slider as a whole, shift+click it on timeline.
2. This is how to get rid of all hitsounds.
3. Please use these hitsounds I've provided: https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/911 ... sounds.rar
4. Use Audio: 85%
5. 00:13:011 (1) - From here, every white tick add clap. Stop at 00:25:782 (1) -
6. 00:25:782 (1) - Add finish
7. 00:38:553 (2) - Add finish and clap
8. From 00:38:553 (2) - to 00:50:127 (5) - add clap every white tick.
9. 00:51:324 (1) - Add finish and clap
10. From 00:51:324 (1) - to 01:01:301 (6) - add clap every white tick.
11. 01:20:060 (1) - Add finish
12. From 01:07:289 (1) - to 01:20:060 (1) - add clap every white tick.
13. 01:32:831 (1) - Add finish and clap.
14. From 01:32:831 (1) - to 01:44:405 (5) - add clap every white tick.
15. 01:45:602 (1) - Add finish and clap.
16. From 01:45:602 (1) - to 01:58:373 (4) - add clap every white tick.
17. From 02:01:565 (1) - to 02:27:108 (1) - add clap every second white tick
18. 02:27:108 (1) - Add finish
19. From 02:27:108 (1) - to 03:05:422 (3) - add clap every white tick.
20. 02:39:880 (1) - Add finish
21. 02:52:651 (2) - Add finish
22. 03:05:422 (3) - Add finish

N5U5M7R5 wrote:

Whoops I just checked the BPM and it's 150.70/150.40 not sure
Get someone good at timing and no kd pls

[AppLoad] wrote:

M4M from my queue. Go~

Easy
00:13:410 (1) - move it on 00:13:011 and make slider.
00:25:782 (1,2,3) - How about this?
00:22:988 (1) - I think, so it should be better.
01:31:235 (2,3,1) - Make it so.
01:39:615 (1,2,3) - ^
02:40:678 (2,3,4) - ^
01:55:181 (1,3) - Stack.
02:25:113 (2,3) - Dont like this, maybe make so?
03:04:225 (5) - How about this? Put it on x:400 y: 121

Normal
00:24:984 (4) - Make it like this 00:23:787 (2)
00:31:768 (5) - Correct this a bit.
00:40:150 (2) - Maybe move it on x: 304 y: 96?
00:44:141 (8) - Make this slider so.
00:59:307 (1,2,3) - Maybe try something like this (V1, V2)?02:57:041 (3) - Try to put it on x: 336 y: 32
03:01:431 (6) - Maybe remake this slider?
03:02:229 (1,2,3,4,5) - Add slider instead of something. This 03:03:028 (3,4) - for example.

Im so busy, sorry for this small mod. Maybe I'm return later for check [Hard] and [Insane] diff's. Good Luck)

- G I D Z - wrote:

From my M4M queue

General:
NC placing needs to be consistent.
Make a consistent pattern for ur slider shapes, dun put weird shapes out of nowhere @_@


Easy:
Please keep DS consistent in Easy diffs.
I dun get ur NC patterns lel. Put a NC in downbeats or if u are starting some new pattern.
00:13:011 - Nothing here? o.o Downbeat start is better for Easy diff.
00:52:921 (3) - Curve it the other way? flows better imo. http://puu.sh/gGKfM/2935d1223b.jpg
01:01:501 - Add stuff here feels weird. Break can be here 01:04:096-sorryyy but i need some break-and of course its no for the other diffs
01:43:606 - The left side of the map seems empty try http://puu.sh/gGKpR/1246aa3c51.jpg ?DS?
02:08:351 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I dun recommend 7 note combos in easy diff. Keep combos consistent pls.
02:28:705 (1,3) - Dun stack it like that in Easy. It's hard to read for beginners imo.its not visible so its ok
02:50:855 (7) - Following vocals here is not a good idea as beginners cannot read the sudden change of rhythm flow. Neither is this good to suddenly change pattern out of nowhere as the music was continuous.
02:52:052 (1) - 1/2 beat starts mmmmm.. No good for Easy diff
02:55:444 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - Pattern things again. Dun 1,2 it pls its unnecessary as HP drain is low.
03:03:028 (4) - Its overlapping with 03:01:431 (2) which looks untidy.idk what i did -_-xD
03:04:225 (5) - What's this shape? o.o I dun think u need that shape at the end. its ok!!!!!!!stooooooop!

Normal:
DS them notes pls.
00:36:558 (2) - Make same shape as 00:35:759 (1) .
01:01:501 - Same as Easy.
01:44:405 (3) - Make same shape as 01:43:607 (2) .
02:44:669 (5) - The 'S' is too fat, make it like http://puu.sh/gGLki/0cb504857f.jpg .
03:04:225 (6) - Again same as Easy. Dun need this fancy slider in Normal diff either

Hard:
This looks more like insane. Too many triplets and SV can be slower for Hard.ill lower the triples
00:13:011 - Start here like u did with Normal. Keep consistency.
00:50:725 (1) - Put this further away to emphasis the change in flow and pattern. Unnecessary SV change lel, dun feel the difference.
01:01:501 - Yea u know
01:16:668 (1,1) - why 1, 1 combos? Second 1 should be 2.nah
01:51:988 (3,1) - Stacking sliders is unrankable separate pls-wot ok
02:05:557 (1) - Too close therefore it cannot emphasis the SV change although I think its not necessary Place it further.
02:11:144 (2) - ^
02:48:260 (4) - Overlapping with 02:47:861 (3) looks untidy.nah
02:50:655 (1,1,1) - Remove NCs pls dun need so many.
02:55:843 (2) - Overlapping with 02:54:845 (9,10,11) .unseen-able
03:00:632 (6,7) - Pattern doesn't flow too well here. mb
03:04:424 (1) - It just gets worse doesn't it? XD

Insane:
00:13:011 - Start here plsssssssss. D:-in this diff i want it from this time-sorry!
00:15:804 (5,6) - Hard to read and cant flow well.
00:42:943 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - The music is still building up. The double time is too early and besides u have the triplets 00:44:739 (1,2,3) to emphasis the contrast in the music.
01:00:105 - Add note.but there is nothing here
01:01:501 - lel
01:09:085 (1,2,3) - Place it further from 01:08:286 (4) cant read it.
01:09:284 (3) - What exactly is this slider following? o.o I got confused when I played till this part.mb
01:42:010 (6,1,2,3) - It was jumpy until this showed up D: Keep patterns consistent >_>
01:45:602 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - Jump practice lol. I suggest putting in jump patterns like before.changed it a little
03:05:223 (1,2,3) - Yay no weird slider \o/ hype!

Overall I cab see that you are still new to mapping and therefore map more maps and get more mods to improve. I went through the same process :p You'll get there! GL!

Keada wrote:

My mod from the M4M :>

• 
  

  Insane

1. 00:23:388 (1,2,3,4) - try to use the same DS through the whole stream. Use slider convert (Ctrl+Shift+D)
2. 00:25:183 (3) - looks cluttered, try placing it on x:168 y:128
3. 00:25:782 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - same as I said above
4. 00:37:157 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^
5. 00:50:227 (6) - move to x:336 y:168-nice1
6. 00:50:327 (7) - move to x:388 y:146-nice1
7. 00:50:427 (8) - move to x:404 y:92-nice1
8. 01:10:681 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - same as I said above, Try checking all your streams for this. http://puu.sh/gI0xW/5528d0beef.jpg Next and prev should be close to equal
9. 01:14:472 (7) - place this on x:398 y:240 (looks way better)

Rest of the diffs looks good for me so :>ty!

Good luck! I love the song <3

-Nanaka- wrote:

From M4M


red: unrankable issue.
blue: maybe unrankable issue,Highly recommended.
bold: should fix.

Insane

1. 00:15:605 (3,4,5) - overlap-wtf m8?
2. 00:15:804 (5,6,1) - Bad flow,If the indications above was Keep 00:16:204 (6) - x280 y312-ok nice1
3. 00:18:399 (2,3,4) - Distance gap between 00:18:399 (2,3) - & 00:18:798 (3,4) - fixed
4. 00:47:134 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - Why are you using such big jumps here? It's a calm section-nah
5. 00:59:306 (4) - Remove Finish-
6. 00:59:905 (6,1) - Hmm stack fully or space apart, since this can be confused for 1/4.
7. 01:01:302 (6) - Why do end up here? 01:03:896 - There is a need to make up here-if one more tell me o do that ill do
8. 01:08:885 (7,1) - Sense of distance of mystery-xDD oki doki
9. 01:39:416 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5) - Why are you using such big jumps here? 01:42:010 - And from here to make jump
10. 01:53:983 - Remove Finish
11. 01:58:373 (4) - Remove Note
12. 02:01:765 (2,3) - try rhythm-niet no nada
    
    SPOILER

    
13. 02:07:054 - could add a note here to fit the drum
14. 02:07:353 - 02:07:453 - 02:07:752 - ^well i added some things
15. 02:11:443 (2) - Vocal follow?02:11:443 (2,3) - change to slider
16. 02:12:741 (1,2) - Ctrl+G rhythm fit-nice
17. 02:27:308 - Remove finish
18. 02:52:851 (4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - Cymbals has not been-do they
    
    Placement, NC, sound.There is no all in consistency
    NC in the basic downbeat
    There is a need to review the hit sound
    for example
    
    SPOILER

    
    -no wtf
    Try to check other maps, try improving yourself-ok
    
    Sorry Your proposal was not fit to me-:(
    That's it.

gl

lit120 wrote:

seems ok for me, but in Insane, i'm having something in 02:24:115 (1,2,3,4,5) - since it's not even in right space