Leorda wrote:

Hi, random mod for m4m stuff

[General]
* Remove "yamato" in tags. There's nothing to do with her fixed
* I don't think putting SB in last break would be good idea. I think would be better if you put them at intro because it shows the music info No. That part, where I have break, fits perfectly for info SB, even it's at end of the song.

[Normal]
* AR +1? Your current one seems slow fixed

00:39:893 (3,1,3) - Clap at start doesn't fit because you basically add them in upbeat (2nd and 4th white) fixed
00:52:955 (1,2) - I don't like when the circle is near the tail slider and it's 1/2 difference. It may ruins the rhythms. How about remove (2) and extend this slider to make it better? fixed
00:54:179 (3,4) - ^ fixed
02:17:853 - Please insert any hitsounds in this part. Having empty hitsounds is completely monotonus fixed
02:59:485 (4,5) - I don't think 2 slider would fit to the vocal... how about replace this two into one slider? original sounds better
03:05:608 (1) - Remove new combo fixed

[Hard]
00:20:506 (2) - Spacing error fixed
00:33:159 (4,5) - Is there any points why there's a mini jump here? I don't see point why, or why not?
01:05:608 (6,7) - ^ ^
01:30:506 (1) - I was expecting that the head slider is below (6)... how about reverse it to make a better flow? It makes triangle form there, and I want to follow singer, I'll consider
02:07:853 (5) - Spacing error fixed
02:17:853 - Please insert clap hitsounds in this part. Having empty hitsounds is completely monotonus fixed
02:31:322 (3,4) - If you want to fit the guitar sound, snap the repeating slider to red tick for each slider. And I don't think purple tick is a correct spot...?? gotta ask you
02:33:363 (3,4) - Is there any points why there's a mini jump here? fixed
02:38:669 (5) - Add clap at start wow, how can you hear something like that little thing x), fixed

[Catharsis]
* Adding break space would be better instead making player's hand felt tired or hurt considering, I just don't want to delete any part of my catharsis, gotta take my time for thinking.

00:33:363 (1) - Add finish at start fixed
00:42:342 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Any reason why you add streams? I don't think streams would be fit in here singer holds her voice, if slider fits here better, I can change it.
01:03:159 (3) - Reverse this slider to make a better flow? fixed
01:06:016 (1) - Add finish fixed
01:14:179 (1) - Add finish at start fixed
01:34:995 (5) - Add clap at start fixed
01:54:995 (1) - Shorten it to red tick because players will confuse to understand the timing of next note if you didn't change this fixed
02:17:853 - Please insert clap hitsounds in this part. Having empty hitsounds is completely monotonus like i said
02:31:322 (3,4) - If you want to fit the guitar sound, snap the repeating slider to red tick for each slider. And I don't think purple tick is a correct spot... ?? gotta ask you
02:46:832 (5) - Add clap fixed
02:59:485 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1) - Any reason why you add streams? I guess there's no drum/guitar roll here Im following singer there
03:26:016 (6) - Move closer to previous one. Having like this could be miss the repeating slider for previous one for players I shortened prev slider so there should not be problem to hit the circle, fixed
04:03:159 (6,7) - This pattern doesn't fit to the calm part. Replace it circles? fixed

That's all... and please mod my map in signature.... and good luck /run

VRainbow wrote:

hi,this is from #Modreqs
Hard
HP 7.0 -> 5.5? fixed
perfect.

Catharsis
wonderful,here is my suggestions.
* AR 9.1 -> 9.0 , HP may be a bit high 7.0->6.0? considering

00:24:587 (2,3,4) - the jump here doesn't suit the rhythm, change it into small junp? fixed a bit
00:43:567 (2,3,4,5) - may be more suitable with same distance? fixed a bit
01:15:812 (1,2,3) - this rhythm repeat it again(00:17:036 (1,2,3) - ) , set the objects the same rather than a bit differences. I like how it is now
01:23:975 (1,2) - same with the first fixed
01:29:893 (5,6,7) - move these objects a bit down ^
01:32:138 (8) - NC? It isn't good idea to put nc just before spinner
01:59:689 (6) - NC for a pause? someway agree, but maybe not :<
02:26:016 (1,2,3) - may be more suitable with same distance? fixed
02:31:322 (3,4) - 1/3 not suit the rhythm? use 1/4 slider 1/3 is right rhythm there
02:32:750 (2) - why there comes a note ??
02:43:975 (5) - NC? same reason as before ^
03:24:791 (1,2,3,4,5) - u'd better put a stream rather than 1/1 good idea :O
03:26:016 (6) - NC? fixed
03:35:404 (3) - move a bit closer to the 03:33:975 (7) -? changed own way
03:54:995 (4,5,6) - the distance seems strange, move 03:55:199 (5) - a bit close to 03:55:404 (6) - it's fine
04:03:975 (9) - NC? as before ^

At Last
Wonderful map, good luck

-TakoYaki- wrote:

Hi, M4M from my queue
I like senya and I love kancolle XD
btw start

[Normal]
00:54:179 (2) - this sounds weird since 00:54:587 is a downbeat, try the replace it with a note then move the slider to 00:54:587 and shorten it? like this fixed
01:51:730 (1,2,3) - Suddenly follow the vocal then changed back to drums? I'll consider
02:36:628 (4) - blanket a bit here? fixed

[Hard]
Nice one :)

[Catharsis]
01:02:750 (1,2,3) - the distance can be improved fixed
01:06:016 (1,2,3) - ^^^ fixed
01:44:383 (5,6,7) - ^^^ fixed
02:03:261 (2) - not necessary balancing other triples
03:08:465 - the stream should end here, since I can still hear drums here Well yea, but singer doesn't anymore hold her voice... I'll change it if someone also mention this!

Not a long mod, your map is really good, hope you can get your map ranked soon Good Luck

Aerous wrote:

m4m

Insane
00:01:730 (5) - end add whistle for what reason?
00:03:159 (5,6) - Something like this would be nice http://puu.sh/hiyR5/f983aa03ff.jpg fixed
00:06:832 (7) - More distance please fixed
00:08:669 (6,2) - Too close fixed
00:13:363 (5) - Why did you suddenly CTRL + G ? Don't see point why not to.
00:14:383 (4,5,6,7) - Kinda hard to play with the flow fixed
00:17:036 (1) - Whistle on repeat reason?
00:24:791 (3,1) - Fix this stack please fixed
00:32:546 (3) - Should map the vocal out fixed
00:34:179 (4,1) - Make the repeat slider like the one you curved fixed
00:47:444 (5) - I dont like this shape that much with the red anchor fixed
00:51:934 (3,4,5,6,7,1) - Should make a shape out of this or something fixed
00:53:975 (6,2) - Why change the shape fixed
00:55:812 (6,5) - Stack ? Take off grid snap to do it fixed
00:57:240 (8) - tail add whistle please maybe not
00:59:893 (3) - CTRL + G nope
01:00:710 - Map this one out , you can do this by removing 01:00:506 (5) - and replacing it with a slider fixed
01:03:771 (5) - Shape should fix a bit fixed
01:06:832 (6) - CTRL + F you mean G? 'cause there is not such a shortcut
01:27:853 (2,5) - The stacks man fixed
01:38:465 (6,7,1,2) - This flow can be improved fixed
01:52:955 - Map it out http://puu.sh/hizmJ/3fc8fbe240.jpg fixed
02:11:118 (4,1) - Place 1 under four fixed
02:14:587 (1,2,3) - Should just use a repeat slider like you did here 02:13:771 (3) - http://puu.sh/hizrE/fd696753ab.jpg well it gives little challenge to player, I'll consider
02:21:730 (4) - The end should be a clickable object fixed
02:25:812 (8) - CTRL + G http://puu.sh/hizu5/65a0d05aad.jpg
02:56:220 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - Please use CTRL + F to fix this streeam ... The shape is weird you mean G? fixed
03:01:322 (5,1) - Too close fixed
03:31:934 (3,6) - ^ fixed
03:33:159 (2,7) - improve the blanket and its too close ... fixed
03:33:771 (6,7) - Recommend to remap this fixed
03:36:220 (1,8) - Blanket + too close ..fixed
03:40:301 (5) - CTRL + G fixed
03:48:057 (1,2) - Improve flow please fixed
03:50:301 (7) - CTRL +J fixed somehow

This diff needs a lot of mods before getting it ranked

Narcissu wrote:

offest earlier

[Catharsis]

02:31:322 (3,4) - 1/2 - 1/4 it's fine

03:36:832 (5) - this is a mistake , 2.8 ds in stream omg, how....did that happen xD

[Hard]

00:16:220 (4) - 1/3 fixed

02:13:771 (4,5) - 1/3 fixed

02:31:322 (3,4) - 1/2 - 1/4 It's fine

-------------------------------------

Normal: plain 1/1 without 1/2 note
Hard: 1/2 all the way, minor/moderate jumps ,1/4th notes with successive 1/2 note

maybe …… you have to add a nice difficulty inbetween

Hollow Wings wrote:

m4m

General

1. for you mapped all of diffs in the set, i recommend you set same combo color in every diff, because i see no reason to use different ones there.

Catharsis

1. 00:07:653 (3) - highly recommend you add one time repeating. there actually has a bell's beat at that red tick as well. same to 00:10:919 (3) - as well. your hard diff did that as well.
2. 00:12:143 (1) - this anti-flow's not necessary imo, just do ctrl+g here.
3. 00:21:939 (1,2,3) - for following the vocal track, i think do ctrl+g to them one by one can be better, try it.
4. 00:24:592 (2,3,4) - change order to 4,2,3 can fit the vocal better imo, currently big jump at 00:23:572 (1,2) - is really unnecessary.
5. 00:27:245 (2,3) - do ctrl+g here to follow that really special vocal beat.
6. 00:32:858 add note to follow vocal?
7. 01:06:939 (7) - seems like this note follows nothing but... other triplets are follow obvious vocals... maybe avoid this?
8. 01:14:184 (1,3) - i highly recommend you avoid overlapping the arrow, it's nearly unrankble.
9. 02:31:327 (3,4) - i think these two sliders are snapped at nothing, please change to another rhythm style.
10. 03:36:225 (1,2) - this jump can be larger as previous ones, with similar patterns in the song.
11. some jumps like 01:24:184 (2,3) - can really be designed with sense from the music imo.
12. 03:40:306 (5,1) - wow, so sudden to have a blank tick here, maybe just fill in a note there.
13. to me this diff's jumps are a bit too random to me orz.

Hard

1. 01:43:572 (1,2,3,4) - these jumps can be shorter since that part's pretty quiet.
2. 02:31:327 (3,4) - same issue as the one in top diff.
3. i prefer this diff's style than the top one.

Normal

1. 00:17:858 (1) - don't give sudden ds change here as a lowest diff in mapset, please arrange them into same ones.
2. 02:37:449 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - don't put too much notes at same time, that'll be too difficult to noobs.
3. 03:45:204 (6,7) - ctrl+g fit the vocal track better.

hmm i think your top diff still need a bit work to do, but this map can get ranked eventually i think.

good luck.

Chatlog

2015-04-25 15:05 -Mo-: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/630685 senya - Shuuen no Kagayaki [Hard]]
2015-04-25 15:05 -Mo-: 00:03:368 (4,5) - The stack doesn't seem necessary
2015-04-25 15:06 -Mo-: 00:03:980 (1) - 1/1 slider misses the beat on the red tick
2015-04-25 15:06 smsh150: I think it's fine
2015-04-25 15:07 -Mo-: 00:05:613 (1) - Would be nice to have this end at 00:06:837
2015-04-25 15:07 -Mo-: It matches the guitar then and you can put something on the downbeat
2015-04-25 15:08 smsh150: I see
2015-04-25 15:08 -Mo-: 00:14:490 - Note here, I think a triple matches the guitar
2015-04-25 15:10 -Mo-: 00:55:409 (3) - MIssing a whistle
2015-04-25 15:10 smsh150: k
2015-04-25 15:11 -Mo-: 01:05:613 (6) - Slightly inconsistent spacing
2015-04-25 15:12 -Mo-: 01:25:613 (1) - Slight blanket issue [01:25:204 -]
2015-04-25 15:14 -Mo-: 02:25:409 (5,6) - Skipping the white tick doesn't fit with the music in my opinion
2015-04-25 15:15 -Mo-: 02:28:674 (5,6) - Again; you can use a slider for a more passive beat, but missing it completely feels out of place
2015-04-25 15:16 smsh150: okay
2015-04-25 15:17 smsh150: btw
2015-04-25 15:17 smsh150: What do you think if I put NC at 02:43:980 (7) -
2015-04-25 15:17 -Mo-: I think it works
2015-04-25 15:17 -Mo-: Since the vocals are re-introduced here too
2015-04-25 15:17 smsh150: good
2015-04-25 15:19 -Mo-: 03:10:102 (1) - Shift the text in the storyboard over to the left a bit if you can
2015-04-25 15:19 -Mo-: If someone was to play in 4:3 ratio, the Album line would be cut off
2015-04-25 15:20 smsh150: Oh I see
2015-04-25 15:20 -Mo-: If you want, I could also get you some text with shadow effects, just so it looks smoother ontop of the background
2015-04-25 15:21 smsh150: hmm
2015-04-25 15:23 smsh150: If you are able to, It would be really nice
2015-04-25 15:23 smsh150: ^^
2015-04-25 15:23 -Mo-: I'll do it after I'm done here
2015-04-25 15:23 smsh150: Yes
2015-04-25 15:24 -Mo-: 03:41:123 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - [http://i.imgur.com/p7rdbPr.png Maybe something like this?] Not a major issue, just a suggestion
2015-04-25 15:26 -Mo-: 03:50:919 (1) - Shorten to 03:52:143, it matches the vocals then
2015-04-25 15:28 smsh150: Those works well!
2015-04-25 15:28 smsh150: Changed
2015-04-25 15:31 smsh150: Did you find anything else?
2015-04-25 15:31 -Mo-: That seems to be all I can spot

 S,0,190094,,0.1272728

kalandrawow wrote:

normal
00:50:511 (3) - make the sharp turn on the slidertick? Such as http://puu.sh/hsS7Q/e8076c124f.jpg fixed


hard
00:24:388 (2) - this is pretty annoyingly close to the hp bar fixed

catharsis
i don't like the trend of making the hardest difficulty have a custom difficulty name but it's not my place to judge I'll keep Catharsis
the spacing on this difficulty is totally out of sync with the song, it's ridiculously jumpy just so it can claim to be difficult. The erratic, unpredictable spacing of the notes, and how there's zero organization or pattern to most of them, leads this to be extremely unfun. okay

Try not to make something hard just to be hard. That's a slippery slope you're standing on the edge of, and there is beauty in a map that stays true to the difficulty you'd expect from the song.

00:28:266 (5,6,1) - This is better off spaced closer together, imo. maybe 0.5x. fixed to 0.7x, 'cause 0.5x feel too close.
00:31:531 (8,9,1) - ^ fixed
00:32:551 (3,4,5) - ^ fixed
00:33:980 (2,3,4) - You get it. fixed

01:18:266 (1,2,3) - this kind of spacing is completely unnecessary Then how should I change it?
01:34:592 (1,2,3,4,5) - don't need a stream here I like it
02:17:449 (2) - unnecessary 1/8 slider considering, if someone else mentions this same thing, i'll change it to 1/4
02:33:368 (4) - are these allowed anymore? Yes, I think
03:25:817 (3,4,1) - (1) suddenly being out of place makes it look rather ugly fixed
04:09:694 (1) - might want to make the volume here lower so the slider ticks aren't overriding the music changing volume doesn't effect to sliderticks, I should try to find somewhere mp3 for it if I wanted to change it

your normal and hard are very well done and are very solid, but you seem to choke on making the hardest difficulty. This isn't uncommon, as it's quite difficult to find a balance between making it harder and making it more fun. Relatively easy maps can be very fun. Sure, you won't get a reputation for having "challenging maps", but you shouldn't want a reputation for making "maps harder than they should be" either. okay

Hi Im Nathan wrote:

From my modding queue. Sorry for being so late
Nothing to worry!
[Hard]
00:50:715 - I think the pause makes the flow feel weird. Maybe rework the timeline

Just a suggestion

That works!
02:13:776 (4,5) - I dont think these sliders should be timed as 1/3's.

Like this instead

Listen carefully, 1/3 is right

[Insane]
00:10:919 (3) - I think this should be timed to 1/8's and end at 00:11:072

Like this

Listen^
02:33:368 (4) -

Just a suggestion

hmmm. I'll consider

small mod but couldnt find any real problems.
Hope this mod was helpful and GL getting ranked.

Peachtrees wrote:

M4M for your queue o/~

Normal

00:09:694 (5,6,1) - tidy up the spacing a little Itss good?

00:24:388 (2) - why not make this a 1/1 and use a circle instead on the red tick? feels like that would more accurately represent the vocals fixed

00:30:102 (1) - could shorten this by 1/2 fixed

00:36:633 (2,1) - sloppy blanket fixed

00:41:531 (1,3) - ^ 3 looks kinda odd. like the blanket looks reaaallly forced it's fine

00:52:960 (1) - shorten this to a 1/1 and then add a 1/2 slider? feels like the vocals really pick up towards the end of the slider, so using 1/2 feels appropriate fixed

00:57:858 (4) - shorten by 1/2 I like how it is now

01:10:511 (3,4) - blanket ?

01:21:123 (3,4,5) - tidy up the spacing a bit it's good

01:56:633 (4) - shorten by 1/2 ^

02:00:715 (6) - shorten by 1/2 to add another circle? fixed

02:36:633 (4,5,1) - finishes feel a bit overdone and noisy here Imo it fits

02:49:694 (6) - mapping on 1/2 here doesn't feel neccessary to me k

02:58:674 (3) - shorten by 1/2? fixed

03:03:572 (1) - reaaaaallly feels like this downbeat needs more emphasize. having it one a sliderend sounds weird fixed

03:17:858 (3) - not to sure about having the slider cover the downbeat fixed

03:33:572 (3) - add a circle? maybe not

03:37:858 (5) - shorten by 1/2 fixed bit own way

Hard

00:03:980 (1,2) - blanket looks kinda sloppy fixed

00:04:592 (2,3,4) - might just be me, but I don't see why these would be spaced out while the previous ones weren't fixed

00:08:062 (2,3) - REALLY sloppy blanket >< fixed

00:11:531 (5) - try putting something clickable on this downbeat, it feels to strong to put it on a slidertail fixed

00:39:898 (1) - why not try and make this symmetric? it's good

01:03:776 (5) - looks pretty sloopy imo. try something cleaner? fixed

01:07:041 (7) - hmm doesn't really feel like this properly emphasizes the vocals fixed

01:08:062 (8,1) - any reason for the spacing? fixed

01:17:041 (3,4,1) - ^just feels/looks messy fixed

01:29:694 (2,1) - nazi stack fixed

01:45:613 (3,4,5) - flow between these feels a tad bit off fixed

01:59:694 (6,1,2) - tidy up the spacing I don't see anything wrong?

02:26:225 (1,2,3,4,5) - again, why are these spaced out when previous patterns mapped to the same thing in the music werent? feekls a bit inconsistent fixed

02:31:327 (3,4) - is 1/4 really neccessary here? why not?

02:43:164 (3,4,5,6,1) - probably just me, but finishes feel a bit too noisy as before

02:57:041 (1,2,3,4) - again, tidy up the spacing a bit fixed I think

02:59:490 (3,4,1) - emphasize between these feels off. 3 and 4 are more spaced out so the jump puts more emphasize on those, while the downbeat has little to no pressure on it

03:17:041 (1) - remove NC? I'll keep it

04:03:368 (4,1) - reaaallly sloppy blanket fixed

Catharsis

00:03:980 (1,2) - these feel to close fixed

00:08:266 (5,6,1) - flow feels weird imo fixed

00:20:102 (4,1) - too close. I feel as though this needs to be a little jump fixed

00:35:613 (2,3) - feels a bit overdone. try nerfing to 2.4-5~? fixed

00:41:327 (8,1) - would probably felt nicer to continue the triangle movement here, just my two cents though fixed

00:43:164 (1,2) - 1/4 really neccessary here? fixed

00:46:837 (3,4,5) - weird flow imo not

00:56:225 (1,2,3) - would try spacing this out a little more fixed

01:26:429 (4,5) - again, 1/4 doesn't really feel neccessary I like it

01:28:674 (5,1) - feels too close. I'll consider this

02:00:715 (4,5,6) - I'd probably nerf these a little, they feel a bit too harsh fixed

02:05:817 (7) - looks pretty sloppy :/ fixed

02:14:592 (1,2,3) - feels a bit overdone since the song feels rather slow paced fixed

02:25:613 (7,8,1) - not too sure, but I'm afraid this might play a little weird It's fine

02:54:388 (3,4) - should probably make this bigger fixed

03:03:572 (1) - feels like this needs more emphaszie If I do that, Imo it ruins the flow :/

03:28:878 (5,6) - feels a tad bit close fixed

03:42:143 (6,7) - ^ It's fine

04:05:613 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,1,2,1,1) - why didnt you map this for the other Diffs? I don't feel like that part fits to normal/hard diffs

Mio_chan wrote:

Black mods are suggestions only
Blue mods are recommended to fix, or places need to pay attention to
Red mods are unrankable
Green mods are comments only.

[General]
The SB of the break 03:10:306 – looks weird I think… the font does not suit the song and the bg, I expect something… more elegant? Or more artistic? I don’t know the words www okay

[Catharsis]
AR9.1 is a bit too high imo… since the map has BPM only 147, 8.5 suits better, but if you don’t change I think it is better to raise OD by 1 since it’s easier to get high ACC with higher AR. Okay so I dropped AR to 8.9 and rised OD by one.
00:00:715 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) – personally I think this need smaller spacing, making a contrast when full band enter the song Okay I'll consider this
00:46:225 (7,8) – use 1/4 slider instead fixed
01:21:531 (3) – ctrl+G? that works
01:22:347 (1,2) – flow can be improved here imo, fixed
02:31:327 (3,4) - –ctrl + G on either (3) or (4)? fixed
02:38:674 (5) – NC fixed
03:53:368 (5) - further away from (4)? fixed
03:55:409 (6) – the jump is unnecessary I think 0.0 fixed

[Hard]
I think AR should reduce be at least 0.5... fixed
00:04:592 (2,3,4) – I think jump is not needed here. fixed
00:11:939 – I think slider should end here, add circle at 00:12:143 – fixed
01:38:470 (5,6) – don’t need 1/4 fixed
02:25:817 (7) – ctrl + G? no need to 'cause I fixed it from prev mod.
02:26:633 (3,4,5) – I think this pattern is a bit too much for a hard, consider unstacking (5) and change the whole spatial pattern fixed
02:31:327 (3,4) – idk whether kick slider is appropriate in hard, you may keep in mind that this MAYBE too hard. maybe
03:36:735 (3) – delete I like it and there is at background (in music) triple.

[Normal]
I think you stack too much in this diff, I just point out a little, you may check all of them yourself
SV change is not encouraged in Normal, although it just the difference between 1.0 and 1.1
00:20:715 (2) – I suggest avoid stacking fixed
00:55:409 (4,5,1) – (4) at x:356 y:328, (5) at x:464 y:340 (1) at x:500 y:236 ? considering
01:21:531 (4) – avoid stacking I'll leave this one as it is
02:26:021 (2,1) – this two can convert to sliders hmm... maybe not
03:02:347 (5) – not fitting the music imo, change it to sth 1/1? Or make it a slider start at 03:01:939 – fixed

Mentional wrote:

Hey, you asked me to mod it so... here goes nothing. Hey!

• 
  

  General

1. Nothing :d

• 
  

  Normal

1. 00:01:531 (3) - Move this one a little bit so it stacks better with 00:00:715 (1) - It's already stack perfectly :d
2. 00:48:470 (4) - Not sure if this is a problem or not, but I would move it a bit higher so there is no risk of disqualification because of something small like this. fixed a bit own way
3. 01:04:796 (4) - Could stack this better with 01:03:164 (1) - Not a huge problem but I'm going to mention it anyways. fixed
4. 01:26:021 (2) - ^ with 01:24:592 (5) - fixed
5. 01:48:470 (1) - ^ with 01:47:245 (4) - fixed
6. 01:58:674 (2) - Same as in the second thing I mentioned. fixed
7. 02:18:674 (3) - Curve this a bit so it blankets better with 02:18:266 (2) - fixed
8. 03:32:960 (1) - Could stack this a bit better with 03:31:327 (5) - fixed
9. 03:43:164 (2) - ^ already stacked :~

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  Hard

1. 00:21:939 (1) - Move this to x:236 y:44 ? works
2. 00:47:041 (2) - Not stacked properly. fixed
3. 00:53:980 (6) - ^ fixed
4. 01:54:388 (3) - ^ fixed
5. 02:02:551 (3) - ^ fixed
6. 02:11:735 (1) - ^ fixed
7. 02:37:449 (1,2) - Add one more reverse to these sliders? Goes better with the music like this. okay
8. 02:54:592 (2) - Improve blanket with 02:53:776 (1) - fixed
9. 03:01:939 (1) - Not stacked properlyfixed
10. 03:16:837 - Add a note here? I'll keep as it is. Sorry, but Imo this is better :<
11. 03:22:347 (3) - Add one more reverse to this one? okay
12. 03:53:572 (5) - Improve blanket with 03:53:164 (4) -

• 
  

  Catharsis

1. 00:03:164 (5) - Not stacked properly.fixed
2. 00:04:184 (2) - ^fixed
3. 00:23:164 (4) - ^fixed
4. 00:25:204 (1) - ^fixed
5. 00:25:204 (1) - Swap this around so it looks like this?: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3150246 that works! :O
6. 01:04:592 (2) - Not stacked properly.fixed
7. 01:11:735 (1) - ^fixed
8. 01:13:776 (8) - Improve blanket by moving this to x:80 y:296 fixed
9. 01:20:306 (6) - Not stacked properly. fixed
10. 01:39:694 (5) - ^ fixed
11. 01:41:939 (1) - ^ fixed
12. 01:59:694 (6) - ^ fixed
13. 02:23:776 (6) - ^ fixed
14. 03:05:204 (1) - ^ fixed
15. 03:28:470 (3) - Move this so it's the same as with 03:28:674 (4) - and 03:28:878 (5) - fixed
16. 03:30:102 (3) - CTRL + G for flow fixed

And that's all I could find, I apologize if you didn't find my mod that useful.

Thank you for mod!

1. Tbh, in this mapset not really need an epilesy warning imo, because there's no strobing or flash effect, just a running text right? so maybe you can consider to uncheck that
2. Preview time should be on here 00:45:817 - imo, the curent a bit off
3. I quoted this "Your difficulties should all end at the same spot. Having a fully-mapped Normal/Hard and a half-mapped Easy just looks sloppy/lazy. A full Easy may look boring to you, but not to a player that can't handle the harder difficulties.", I know that's just a guideline but there's no GD in this mapset, so I guess there's no reason to have diffrent ending point on your map, maybe you can reconsider that
4. I love your pink colour ❤️

1. 00:15:409 (4) - Forget finish on head? yet there's cymbal sound on the music
2. 01:17:449 (1) - Hearing a cymbal there, might be better if added finish there
3. 02:39:082 (5,6,7,1) - It feels too cramped when play imo, maybe a bit re-arrange might better, you can move this to x:472 y:236, then rotate this 02:40:715 (1) - -45degree then move to x:404 y:308, last move this to x:388 y:116 the whole example http://puu.sh/i79i3/9d2a9ef548.jpg
4. 02:55:409 (3) - Forget finish on head I guess
5. 02:58:674 (3) - Forget clap on tail?
6. 03:26:021 - Unused greenline, better delete I guess
7. 03:29:694 (1,2,3) - In my opinion the flow kinda odd, like you really push on them. Something like this might be better http://puu.sh/i78qM/96ea16c55c.jpg but it's up to you~
8. 03:39:082 (6) - Forget on clap on head? there's clap on it for the two previous kiai 01:57:858 (5) - and 00:59:082 (5) -
9. 03:44:184 (4) - You can move down a bit, it's almost touch hp bar
10. 04:03:980 (1) - Add finish? while on hard you have that

1. 00:02:755 (2) - Ctrl+g? the flow betwen 00:02:347 (1,2) - will be better imo and will make a bit jump with 00:03:164 (3) -
2. 00:46:429 (1) - How about to rotate that -60degree then move to x:144 y:216, the flow between 00:47:041 (2,3,4) - Might be better http://puu.sh/i7aIN/3df248b7a7.jpg
3. 01:21:531 (3,4) - Better not be spaced too far imo unless the spacing at least same on each like 01:25:000 (3,4,5) - , so how about moving 01:21:939 (4,5) - to x:140 y:380? http://puu.sh/i7aZe/54c78b2a52.jpg
4. 01:44:796 (4) - Forget clap on head? while you have that on normal

1. Just a minor, for a better star shape you can move this 00:37:449 (5) - to x:116 y:300, then move this 00:37:245 (4) - to x:72 y:180, last move this 00:37:653 (6) - to x:172 y:104 http://puu.sh/i7ctC/132090ee72.jpg
2. For a better flow, I guess you can move this 00:40:102 (2) - to x:260 y:48, then move this 00:40:306 (3) - to x:200 y:168, then move this 00:40:715 (5) - to x:307 y:44, then move this 00:40:919 (6) - to x:400 y:204, then move this 00:41:123 (7) - to x:228 y:204, last move this 00:41:327 (8) - to x:307 y:44, example: 1. http://puu.sh/i7cPS/54fad3e110.jpg next 2. http://puu.sh/i7cU9/e2cf4844d6.jpg. The point is you can make triangle pattern based on that
3. 00:46:021 (6) - Forget clap on head I guess, since on normal you have that
4. 02:21:531 (3,4,5) - Feels odd especially when move from (3) to (4), maybe you can change this 02:21:735 (4,5) - into a triplet instead?
5. 02:33:368 (4) - Better reduce the red nodes imo, because as RC said "Uninherited timing sections cannot be used to manipulate slider speeds. These can be very unexpected for the player while also disrupting the main menu pulse and slightly changing the overall timing of the map." so that kind of burai slider is not allowed anymore nowadays might become unrankable issue some people said
6. 02:57:858 (5,1) - Some blanket is off, check more by youself
7. Last the ending part is not consistent with two other diff http://puu.sh/i7bsr/5ae8039df2.png, I wonder why

Mako Sakata wrote:

Helloooo from my queue Hello!
Some small sugestion from me,

[General]

1. Tbh, in this mapset not really need an epilesy warning imo, because there's no strobing or flash effect, just a running text right? so maybe you can consider to uncheck that I'll see and hear what BN says about it.
2. Preview time should be on here 00:45:817 - imo, the curent a bit off It's fine
3. I quoted this "Your difficulties should all end at the same spot. Having a fully-mapped Normal/Hard and a half-mapped Easy just looks sloppy/lazy. A full Easy may look boring to you, but not to a player that can't handle the harder difficulties.", I know that's just a guideline but there's no GD in this mapset, so I guess there's no reason to have diffrent ending point on your map, maybe you can reconsider that I'll see and hear what BN says about this.
4. I love your pink colour ❤️

❤️

[Normal]

1. 00:15:409 (4) - Forget finish on head? yet there's cymbal sound on the music
2. 01:17:449 (1) - Hearing a cymbal there, might be better if added finish there
3. 02:39:082 (5,6,7,1) - It feels too cramped when play imo, maybe a bit re-arrange might better, you can move this to x:472 y:236, then rotate this 02:40:715 (1) - -45degree then move to x:404 y:308, last move this to x:388 y:116 the whole example http://puu.sh/i79i3/9d2a9ef548.jpg
4. 02:55:409 (3) - Forget finish on head I guess
5. 02:58:674 (3) - Forget clap on tail?
6. 03:26:021 - Unused greenline, better delete I guess
7. 03:29:694 (1,2,3) - In my opinion the flow kinda odd, like you really push on them. Something like this might be better http://puu.sh/i78qM/96ea16c55c.jpg but it's up to you~
8. 03:39:082 (6) - Forget on clap on head? there's clap on it for the two previous kiai 01:57:858 (5) - and 00:59:082 (5) -
9. 03:44:184 (4) - You can move down a bit, it's almost touch hp bar
10. 04:03:980 (1) - Add finish? while on hard you have that
    Fixed all here ^^

[Hard]

1. 00:02:755 (2) - Ctrl+g? the flow betwen 00:02:347 (1,2) - will be better imo and will make a bit jump with 00:03:164 (3) -
2. 00:46:429 (1) - How about to rotate that -60degree then move to x:144 y:216, the flow between 00:47:041 (2,3,4) - Might be better http://puu.sh/i7aIN/3df248b7a7.jpg
3. 01:21:531 (3,4) - Better not be spaced too far imo unless the spacing at least same on each like 01:25:000 (3,4,5) - , so how about moving 01:21:939 (4,5) - to x:140 y:380? http://puu.sh/i7aZe/54c78b2a52.jpg
4. 01:44:796 (4) - Forget clap on head? while you have that on normal
   Fixed all here too :O

[Catharsis]

1. Just a minor, for a better star shape you can move this 00:37:449 (5) - to x:116 y:300, then move this 00:37:245 (4) - to x:72 y:180, last move this 00:37:653 (6) - to x:172 y:104 http://puu.sh/i7ctC/132090ee72.jpg
2. For a better flow, I guess you can move this 00:40:102 (2) - to x:260 y:48, then move this 00:40:306 (3) - to x:200 y:168, then move this 00:40:715 (5) - to x:307 y:44, then move this 00:40:919 (6) - to x:400 y:204, then move this 00:41:123 (7) - to x:228 y:204, last move this 00:41:327 (8) - to x:307 y:44, example: 1. http://puu.sh/i7cPS/54fad3e110.jpg next 2. http://puu.sh/i7cU9/e2cf4844d6.jpg. The point is you can make triangle pattern based on that
3. 00:46:021 (6) - Forget clap on head I guess, since on normal you have that
4. 02:21:531 (3,4,5) - Feels odd especially when move from (3) to (4), maybe you can change this 02:21:735 (4,5) - into a triplet instead? I like it :<
5. 02:33:368 (4) - Better reduce the red nodes imo, because as RC said "Uninherited timing sections cannot be used to manipulate slider speeds. These can be very unexpected for the player while also disrupting the main menu pulse and slightly changing the overall timing of the map." so that kind of burai slider is not allowed anymore nowadays might become unrankable issue some people said I'll hear what BN is going to say in future
6. 02:57:858 (5,1) - Some blanket is off, check more by youself
7. Last the ending part is not consistent with two other diff http://puu.sh/i7bsr/5ae8039df2.png, I wonder why I felt mapping map till the end in Catharsis diff. I'll hear what BN will say.
   Fixed everything else

[]
Very good job, why nobody checking this ;( I'll try to get someone to check this
See you on qualified again smsh~ I hope so too!!!

 S,0,5613,,0.625

Example

Example

Example

01:10:919 (1) - Not a suggsetion, but I think this stream is great

Example

-Mo- wrote:

Hey, fast check; no need to KD

It's been a while since I modded anything so apologies for any sloppiness.

Storyboard
I'll do this a bit later
- Not super important, but if you go through your .osb file and change all the scalings to be 0.625, then that can help with consistency through the SB.
eg: (look at the last number)

 S,0,5613,,0.625

- 00:07:245 - The transition from the brightness to normal isn't really smooth. Since the music also picks up at this point, I would also recommend using a flash here by having a white image fill the screen and fade out to about 00:07:653. This is the white.png that I use (right-click save).
- 00:46:429 - Your bg_in_red.png starts out smaller than the background. Go through your .osb file and change the last number of the scaling so that it matches the one you use for your background (should be 0.625) for a smoother pulse.
- 00:59:490 - Same thing here.
- 01:45:204 - And again.
- 01:58:266 - Yep.
- 02:17:858 - Perhaps a flash here similar to what I suggested before for a smoother transition.
- 03:16:633 - As before.
- 03:21:531 - As well as it being too small initially, I feel like the expansion rate is a bit too high, which gives it a bit more 'intense' feeling compared to how you did this pulse before, where the music wouldn't really suggest this at all. I would change it so there's more time before it fades out, preferably the same time as your previous pulses. That applies to the next three pulses too I suppose.
- 03:22:755 - I think it would be better if your bright.png starts at 03:23:164 instead, and have it continue fading in until 03:26:021 to match the cresendo in the music.
- 03:26:021 - I can't say I like how this switches back from bright into contrast and back into bright again really quickly; it feels pretty unnatural and doesn't really flow very well. I would rethink how you would do this part (perhaps make it fade into black and then pulse?). You can change my above suggestion too if that conflicts with this one.
- 03:39:490 - Pulse... you probably know what I'm going to say

Normal
- 00:46:021 (2) - Perhaps change this so you have a hard note at 00:46:429 since this is the start of kiai time. I personally wouldn't do that... but indeed, that would be better... so I won't change anything here.
- 01:44:796 (4) - As above. ^
- 03:16:633 (1) - Perhaps add a finish here? woops

Hard
- 00:51:327 (1) - Perhaps a Ctrl+G here so that it flows better?

Example

wow that works
- 01:37:041 (1) - Minor: This blanket could be improved [01:36:786]. kk
- 01:37:653 - Instead of having it blank here, maybe go with a rhythm like this? that works too

Example

- 01:43:572 (1,2,3,4) - The spacing increases here, but I don't believe there's anything in the music to justify this. It even decreases again once you go into Kiai. fixed
- 01:49:898 (6) - Ctrl+G this if you want. Personally I would.

Example

:O
- 02:26:021 - Personally I prefer finishes to be on hard notes where possible, but it's up to you. Eh... I like those, they fit to music
- 03:16:837 - I would put a note here to follow the vocals/piano. kk
- 03:19:490 (5,6) - Not sure about having a stack, but it's up to you. Keeping it, 'cause it fits

Catharsis
- 00:40:102 (2,6) - Put these claps on the white ticks instead of the red ticks. omg sorry about that! It was my mistake when I last time edited that part. Forgot to change those places ;~;
- 01:10:919 (1) - Not a suggsetion, but I think this stream is great :D
- 01:15:000 (3,1) - Looks like these became catmull sliders (drag the slider point around to see what I mean). I would replace them and make them the same shape. I'm not sure did I understand what you mean but I changed them a bit /:D/
- 01:20:715 (1,2) - Minor: These don't appear to be perfectly symmetrical with eachother. fixed
- 02:33:368 (4) - I don't like the slider itself in my opinion (too much wiggling), and I would use this sort of rhythm personally: So many people have mentioned about this is I think it's better to change

Example

- 02:38:266 (1,2,3,4) - I would keep the spacing consistent with the rest of the stream, since I don't believe the music calls for an increase like this. Hmm... I personally like that. I'll see what future mods bring up*
- 03:25:102 (4,1) - I would keep the spacing consistent here. many people said plaa plaa yes I'll change it
- 03:25:511 (4,1) - As above. As I said^
- 03:26:021 (1,2) - I would remove the hitsounds from these two personally since the music drops completely save for the vocals. That works :O


Call me back to check on the storyboard again.
Good luck thx

Momochikun wrote:

hmm

use 艦隊これくしょん -艦これ- instead as source ? you could add the romanized one on the tags instead imo
the soft claps were really poor and didn't fit the song tbh, i'd go for normal-hitnormal.. that's sounds more appropriate along with the drum on the song itself
also i think u could add some whistles at the first part of the maps, it'd sounds pretty plain without them
just some thought, that kind of weird to see the description SB that appears really late near the end of the song, but.. meh idk seems there're no other space that fit anyway xD

[Carthasis]
fixed all here ↓
well, overall this is pretty complicated to be considered as a regular Insane diff on NHI spread due to some long streams just as 00:18:674 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - 01:10:919 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - 01:17:449 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6) - , etc.
personally i dont think this spread is acceptable, i dont want to made myself sound rude but with that pretty high sv and speed up at kiai soo it can't be helped.

00:03:980 (1) - finish sounds too noisy, lower the volume or just change it to whistle
01:22:347 (1) - ^
00:12:143 (1) - this make nonsense with 00:12:960 (4,5) - as this one were just overmapped thing when the next slider kicks were representing the real drum stream, just change this into 1/2 patterns
00:47:449 (5) - it doesn't really justified to skip the drum to follow the vocal at this part, it makes the gameplay became weird imo
01:19:490 (3,4) - what's up with this part with suddenly many un-appropriate 3/4 sliders strike on ? i'd just go with 1/1 slider or 1/2 slider when the music didn't ask for it
02:58:470 (1) - the slider didn't follow anything at the music, should be changed with note and 1/2 sliders or something similiar with your own concern

i'd stop here, seems the overall maps also contains several same issues
this map still need a lot of work, i keep the nitpicky stuffs away so this post won't be a newspaper.. just poke me in-game if you need help or something, for now good luck :c
Okay... I'll try to fix all similar places.

Inazuma wrote:

Hello! Thank for the mod, but I'm afraid I can't guarantee a recheck for your map, as it does not meet my criteria in four two ways: Random jumping in Insane, colour and effect selection in SB, Senya, using Yamato for KanColle song background. But I will try to help improving the map.


[SB]
03:10:102 - use more comfortable and less pure colour. http://www.weibo.com/1872762823/Bek5AoBJC This is a useful reference, and please ignore Chinese characters. Also, dim the background out to make player see the words better.
03:22:347 - remove the expansion effect here.
03:24:796 - 03:26:021 - making a graduate blackout is commonly used here, and you can try this solution.
03:26:225 - use an easing effect instead of a sudden stroke. (remember to change both "bright.png" and "bg in red.png")

[Insane]
I think the problem may be that you are to struggling to make up the difficulty as a 4.3 star. However, you don't really to make it this hard, since you haven't map much and the struggle leads to loss of control. This amplifies the breaking of flow in the patterns, and lets the player lose interest after the first chorus because of consistent jumping.

00:20:306 - 00:44:796 - using consistent huge spacing in verse part just isn't a good idea. For example, 00:28:470 (1,2,3) - what does this imply? It's just an enormous jump from nowhere, and the player will feel confused, what does the jump come from? I suggest using a smaller spacing and remap the part. Or the whole map just becomes competition for who pokes random bubbles better.
Also, 00:43:164 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - The 1/4 in background can be used.
The same applies to 01:19:082 - 01:45:204 - .

00:48:062 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - This series is just random jumping with no flow. Adding NC on 00:48:878 (1) - may help you decide how to place jump in a better way (you can remove NC later when you find a satisfied pattern).
00:51:939 (3,4,5,6,7) - make a parallelogram for better looking.

I think during kiai time, whistle can be placed better by following vocal.

Other diffs are pretty solid and I can't find a problem. Anyway, good luck!

nadapan wrote:

M4M from Chaos's modding team >w<

[Normal]

1. 00:17:858 (1) - remove NC I'm not sure should I remove it or remove NC from 00:18:674 (1) - ... Doing as you said!
2. 00:48:062 (3,4) - blanket is a bit off fixed
3. 00:23:164 (7,1) - how about a blanket?good
4. 01:44:796 (4) - Make it like This and NC on the first note of kiai. It gives a bad feeling when such a strong note is in the end of the slider okay
5. 03:55:000 (4) - the note is too low fixed
6. Nice diff you have intresting pattern and all kind of shapes in long sliders which are playable too (Mine ends always up being in really weird shapes ;-;) Oh no need to be too polite . But Thx!

[Hard]

1. 00:08:062 (2,3) - balnket fixed
2. 02:31:327 (3,4,5) - I think that the DS here is a bit too hard for this diff if you see the note spacing in the time line. For now, I won't change that yet. I think I'll ask about BN, when possible.
3. 02:37:449 (1,2,3) - ^ same as before ^
4. I love the patterns in this diff. There is balance in this map and you follow the background music and the vocals at the same time (according to what I saw) which makes it easy to play for people who usually follow the background music and for the players who usually follows the vocal. *_* heh no need to be so polite :>

This was all I could find. I hope this mod was helpful.
No need to worry, this mod was useful :3

Good luck with ranking

HolyNightmare wrote:

As requested via pm :3


first off,,, i personally dont like that setting,, ar 9 and od 7 pls ;w;
slow bpm and od 8 is cancer >//< okay .3

00:21:939 (1,2,3) - that sliders are a bit too curvy imo >< fixed to look better

00:49:592 (8) - i think you forget to add that to the next combo :3 I don't feel like doing NC there. but thx for suggest

00:53:368 (2,3,4) - overlaps with 00:53:980 (6) - but i think that is ok,fix it if you want or not Fixed


i really like it how you blanket 02:35:204 (3,4,5) - with 02:34:184 (1) - looks really nice :3 Oh thank you /^^/, tbh it is nice imo too :3


well....i dont really know what else to mod ><
everything already seems pretty well to me and there is no real problem
really like that mapping style,,its mapped really good :3 thx!!!

good luck with getting this ranked >w</

1. 00:30:102 (1) - this looks funny because of the way the combo is split.. but theres not much we can do about that lol. maybe we can make 00:30:511 (2) - using the same shape so it can match with something
2. 00:30:511 (2,3) - fix blanket if you didnt take the suggestion above
3. 00:42:347 (5,6) - this might get confused as 1/4 timing, maybe try putting them like this http://puu.sh/jKcx5/a40ca46332.jpg (you should also move the slider more to the right or the next stream more to the left!)
4. 00:45:613 (4,5,6) - fix the spacing/shape http://puu.sh/jKeqj/efd8a3992b.jpg
5. 01:53:164 (1) - maybe we should split this into two sliders like http://puu.sh/jKcSj/dafedb5b32.jpg because right now this makes the map lose a lot of intensity here. The player only needs to click once over 5 beats... feels weird when i was playing
6. 02:07:858 (6,1) - why is this so close? i cant hear any reason for this.. maybe we can try moving the next combo like this http://puu.sh/jKdo5/1800bdb36d.jpg wrong screenshot here is the right one lol http://puu.sh/jKfX2/fbcb327a70.jpg
7. 02:21:735 (4,5) - maybe put more space between these? remember that playing this is almost the same as playing two single taps so putting them too close feels weird. 03:39:286 (6,1) - like this is good
8. 02:34:184 (1) - maybe we can shorten this to be a 1/1 slider and then add a circle at 02:34:796 - http://puu.sh/jKdMU/c308907cfe.jpg I think it would fit the song better
9. 02:55:409 (1,1) - this spacing should be closer. since the player already has to change angle from the jump to the stream + the large spacing here I think the flow is not so good
10. 02:57:858 (5,6) - try ctrl+g on this, maybe you will like it
11. 03:03:164 (5) - missing a clap here

1. 00:00:715 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ooh this is really nice shape. but I don't recommend you start the song off with it. Lots of circles + nothing before it to show the beat of the song means many people will hit 100 or miss.
2. 00:24:388 (2,3) - check the spacing here since you were using DS in this section
3. 01:48:470 (1,2) - hmmm I think this might be a confusing pattern since everything else on the map is using small spacing. Sorry I can't think of a ez fix for this though, so just rearrange this section
4. 02:05:817 (6,1) - is the spacing here too small? you can just change the shape of 6 a little
5. 02:14:592 (5) - forgot NC here
6. 03:00:306 (5) - ^
7. 03:00:306 (5) - I think you are also missing some hitsounds here too
8. 04:05:715 - need to put some stuff here so the playtime is the same as insane

eeezzzeee wrote:

Hi, from your M4M request

[Catharisis]
Overall this map is good, its rare that I can enjoy low maps but this was fun

1. 00:30:102 (1) - this looks funny because of the way the combo is split.. but theres not much we can do about that lol. maybe we can make 00:30:511 (2) - using the same shape so it can match with something sorry I didn't now really understand
2. 00:30:511 (2,3) - fix blanket if you didnt take the suggestion above fixed i think
3. 00:42:347 (5,6) - this might get confused as 1/4 timing, maybe try putting them like this http://puu.sh/jKcx5/a40ca46332.jpg (you should also move the slider more to the right or the next stream more to the left!) yea sorry about that, fixed
4. 00:45:613 (4,5,6) - fix the spacing/shape http://puu.sh/jKeqj/efd8a3992b.jpg fixed i think
5. 01:53:164 (1) - maybe we should split this into two sliders like http://puu.sh/jKcSj/dafedb5b32.jpg because right now this makes the map lose a lot of intensity here. The player only needs to click once over 5 beats... feels weird when i was playing yea I have thought same thing, but never wanted to change it... so well I think I'll change it
6. 02:07:858 (6,1) - why is this so close? i cant hear any reason for this.. maybe we can try moving the next combo like this http://puu.sh/jKdo5/1800bdb36d.jpg wrong screenshot here is the right one lol http://puu.sh/jKfX2/fbcb327a70.jpg stacked them
7. 02:21:735 (4,5) - maybe put more space between these? remember that playing this is almost the same as playing two single taps so putting them too close feels weird. 03:39:286 (6,1) - like this is good Oh, fixed
8. 02:34:184 (1) - maybe we can shorten this to be a 1/1 slider and then add a circle at 02:34:796 - http://puu.sh/jKdMU/c308907cfe.jpg I think it would fit the song better I like how it is now, imo it fits, but ofc this is only my opinion so I'll remember your idea
9. 02:55:409 (1,1) - this spacing should be closer. since the player already has to change angle from the jump to the stream + the large spacing here I think the flow is not so good yes you are right
10. 02:57:858 (5,6) - try ctrl+g on this, maybe you will like it k, nice nice, changed
11. 03:03:164 (5) - missing a clap here ehhhheehhe x), "mistake were made"

[Hard]

1. 00:00:715 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ooh this is really nice shape. but I don't recommend you start the song off with it. Lots of circles + nothing before it to show the beat of the song means many people will hit 100 or miss. Oh haven't thing about that... changed
2. 00:24:388 (2,3) - check the spacing here since you were using DS in this section yes
3. 01:48:470 (1,2) - hmmm I think this might be a confusing pattern since everything else on the map is using small spacing. Sorry I can't think of a ez fix for this though, so just rearrange this section changed somehow xD
4. 02:05:817 (6,1) - is the spacing here too small? you can just change the shape of 6 a little fixed
5. 02:14:592 (5) - forgot NC here oh f*** x)
6. 03:00:306 (5) - ^ eya
7. 03:00:306 (5) - I think you are also missing some hitsounds here too woops
8. 04:05:715 - need to put some stuff here so the playtime is the same as insane eeh... I don't want to map that part of song in hard diff...

That's all from me.

/me gives star owwow thanks <3

(but theres so many SP already! rank pls)

1. 00:01:735 (5,1) - Weird that you don't put a jump here even tho its both a start of a new measure, and emphasized.
2. 00:02:755 (3,4,5) - I don't like this kind of flow . Slider 5 doesn't follow the flow fro 3>4 very well.
3. 00:29:082 (2,3,4) - Yea this flow doesn't look nice either.
   
   Visual flow

   Black = the visual flow of this pattern, its weird because you have a curve on slider 4 that doesn't reflect the flow of the previous two patterns. Red = the idea angle where the flow would fit.
   
4. 00:40:715 (5) - Should NC this for better readability.
5. 00:52:143 (4,5,6) - Larger spacing from 5>6 imo. cuz 6 is a stronger note. Generally white-tick notes are stronger than red ticks anyways.
6. 01:11:327 (5,6,1) - Think of kick-sliders as just circles with a tail. You should have a larger jump from 6>1 for emphasis here, but in stead its a smaller jump than the jump from 5>6 (based on slider-head location).
7. 01:30:102 (7,8,1) - Improper emphasis use here too. 7>8 shouldn't contain a jump when the music is putting emphasis onto 1.
8. 01:44:592 (6,7,8,1) - 8>1 should be give a jump. Like I said earlier, its best to only consider the slider-head when thinking about kicksliders, and 8>1 isn't very impactful like the jump from 6>7
9. 02:14:592 (1,2,3) - Following the drums and 3/4 rhythm would be more straightforward imo but 1/3 snapping also works here. I think the drums are more significant and straightforward tho. Like, players are morelikely to follow the drums than the piano.
10. 02:32:551 (1,2,3) - Again, emphasis is wrong. 1>2 isn't emphasized in the music so the jump feels random and not mapped to the music (or not mapped as well as it could be).

monstrata wrote:

[Catharsis]

1. 00:01:735 (5,1) - Weird that you don't put a jump here even tho its both a start of a new measure, and emphasized. made the jump smaller than
2. 00:02:755 (3,4,5) - I don't like this kind of flow . Slider 5 doesn't follow the flow fro 3>4 very well. fixed
3. 00:29:082 (2,3,4) - Yea this flow doesn't look nice either. I myself like it, so nothing will be changed, thought other BN will come same thing, then I'll change it
   
   Visual flow

   Black = the visual flow of this pattern, its weird because you have a curve on slider 4 that doesn't reflect the flow of the previous two patterns. Red = the idea angle where the flow would fit.
   
4. 00:40:715 (5) - Should NC this for better readability. okay
5. 00:52:143 (4,5,6) - Larger spacing from 5>6 imo. cuz 6 is a stronger note. Generally white-tick notes are stronger than red ticks anyways.
6. 01:11:327 (5,6,1) - Think of kick-sliders as just circles with a tail. You should have a larger jump from 6>1 for emphasis here, but in stead its a smaller jump than the jump from 5>6 (based on slider-head location). fixed
7. 01:30:102 (7,8,1) - Improper emphasis use here too. 7>8 shouldn't contain a jump when the music is putting emphasis onto 1. ah...
8. 01:44:592 (6,7,8,1) - 8>1 should be give a jump. Like I said earlier, its best to only consider the slider-head when thinking about kicksliders, and 8>1 isn't very impactful like the jump from 6>7 I hope i understood what you meant D:
9. 02:14:592 (1,2,3) - Following the drums and 3/4 rhythm would be more straightforward imo but 1/3 snapping also works here. I think the drums are more significant and straightforward tho. Like, players are morelikely to follow the drums than the piano. yes
10. 02:32:551 (1,2,3) - Again, emphasis is wrong. 1>2 isn't emphasized in the music so the jump feels random and not mapped to the music (or not mapped as well as it could be). :<<< im bad at mapping T_T

I feel like i'm repeating myself. Hate to be that guy, but I think i covered a relevant number of issues in your map. Hopefully i explained them well enough that you can apply them to other places in this difficulty.