Hi, DahplA here posting from Jloughman14's and DahplA's Modding team. This is a response in regards to this request. Please be sure to vote here on how helpful our mod was.
Catharsis
- 00:35:809 (3,4,5,6,7,1) - This stream is a bit awkward because it ends on the other finger. Consider changing this.
- 01:33:972 I think you can add some circles here to improve flow
- 02:01:931 (2) - Ctrl+G?
- 02:14:584 (1,2,3) - It flows better if you have a slider here.
- 02:17:850 (1,1) - Why two separate NCs?
- 02:26:013 (1) - Move to x:112 y: 308 so it is same distance as previous two
- 02:30:911 (1) - Maybe move this down?
- 02:32:135 (5) - Move to x:180 y:194 to make a triangle
- 02:35:196 (3,4) - Make this a triple
- 03:22:849 (6,7,8,1) - Try and curve this part of the stream better
- 03:40:911 (6) - Stack this under the slider
- 03:52:543 (1) - Stack this
- 03:57:237 (6) - ^
- 04:03:564 (8) - Move to x:70 y:90
- 04:09:686 (1) - I like this slider, but try and work on making it more circular
- 00:01:727 (6) - Why not move this down to make a triangle
- 00:20:298 (1,2,3) - Fix up this triangle
- 00:57:850 (1) - Why not put 1/2 sliders here for better flow
- 01:10:911 (1) - ^
- 01:12:543 Shouldn't you put a break here.
- 01:47:645 (3) - Ctrl+G
- 01:58:666 (3) - ^
- 02:11:319 Why not add a break?
- 02:43:972 (7) - Why stack it? It ruins the flow
- 03:37:850 (1) - Break up this slider
- 03:50:911 (1) - ^
- 00:17:850 (1) - Too far away
- 00:43:156 (3) - Make this slider more circular
- 03:03:564 (1) - Curve this better
senya