1. Rain (3.54 stars, 919 notes)

1. tags suggetion:
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   ファイナルファンタジー 零式
2. Romanised title: Zero
   I cannot find all capitalization "ZERO" from official source. so I recommend not to use it

1. 00:27:737 (8) - I prefer Ctrl+G
2. 01:06:237 (5) - why not symmetric slider about 01:06:563 (6) -
3. 02:10:511 (2,3,4) - I suggest to follow vocal like this
   
4. 02:21:930 (1,2,3) - hard to find rhythm. how about reverse sliders?
   
5. 02:40:201 (1,2,3,4,5) - in this part, I auggest to follow 1/8 dfum rhythm. just a suggetion
   
6. 03:18:047- I suggest to start kiai-time at this time
7. 03:22:615 (2) - I prefer to stack on the head of 03:22:778 (3) -
8. 03:55:241 (5) - why not divide into circle x2 for following vocal?
   
9. 04:31:131 (5) - NC
10. 04:42:876 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - if you make jump in the stream, I suggest to add NC at 5 and 9
11. 05:23:333 (5,6) - very hard to find rhythm due to 1/3. I recommend the pattern starting at white line like this
    
12. 05:40:788 (1,2) - swap NC
13. 05:42:909 (8,9) - make symmetrically
14. 06:08:684 (4) - I prefer Ctrl+G

BrosephStalin wrote:

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Hey there! Mod incoming from My Queue.

Major Issues
Overall Issues
Suggestions

• 
  Rain

1. 01:06:237 (5,6,7,8) - This part didn't really play poorly, however I feel like consistent sliders here would make this section look/read much better. humm, i'll try
2. 01:19:287 (7,8) - I feel like replacing these with a 3/4 slider would follow the music much better here. keep for better flow
   
3. 01:27:770 (8,9) - The antijump here felt awkward and out of place, especially considering the movement at 01:28:096 (9,1) - . I'd suggest either spacing these objects out more or completely stacking them to remove the slow movement √
4. 01:47:672 (10) - This slider didn't really flip my switch; I feel like because of the intensity of the vocals here you could have built up tension by slowing down the movement of 01:47:020 (9) - and releasing it on the high point by giving (10) the quick motion. keep
5. 01:51:914 (3,4) - I feel like pointing (3) more towards the start of (4) would provide a smoother motion and better flow. √
6. 02:02:354 (1,2) - The antijump here was rough, and I often found myself missing this during the first few testplays (No mods). I suggest you space this out enough to signify the 1/1 gap between notes. √
7. 02:03:007 (2,3,4) - Nothing too terribly wrong with this part, but I feel like keeping the spacing consistent here would add to the overall "polished" feel of the map √
8. 02:10:674 (3,4) - Given the lack of sound in the middle of (3) (Vocals) and awkward placement of (4), I suggest you go back and revise this part a bit. humm
9. 02:12:142 (1,2,3,4,5) - I'm not here to bash on your spaced streams; I'm here to point out that the held vocal should start on 02:12:631 (4) - and that ending a slider on the start of a vocal sequence doesn't always play out well, so I'd certainly suggest a revision here. keep
10. 02:22:800 (3,4) - Again, you're starting the vocal sliders a 1/4 beat or so late, so I would suggest you do something such as this:
    
11. 02:31:065 (1) - This circle is not needed at all. √
12. 02:55:861 (1,2,3,4) - As I said at the beginning of this mod, consistency in these 1/4 sliders is pretty important. I believe simply changing (1) to follow the pattern that (2,3,4) convey would be sufficient. keep;w;
13. 03:04:670 (7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6) - This part felt too square and blocky, purely my opinion though.
14. 04:42:876 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - This stream was pretty boring to look at and to play, maybe make it less straight and full of right angles? pretty boring;w;
15. 04:46:791 (1) - Again, completely pointless circle here.
16. 04:49:401 (1) - ^ I would suggest either not mapping this part or fully committing to mapping it, because right now it just is boring to play. keep

1. A lot of your longer sliders were pretty hard on the eyes compared to the rest of the map, sliders such as 00:53:186 (3) - and 06:12:925 (4) - give the map a rough feel, almost as if you sped through mapping it.
2. During your kiais, the difference in spacing between 1/4 and 1/3 was pretty hard to detect. I'd suggest trying to keep it consistent throughout.
3. There were a lot of improperly stacked items (Not talking about manual stack, but the 1-2 pixel off stacks) that could be fixed to give the map an even cleaner feel.
4. Every now and then in the map, you would have kicks and strong vocals on slider ends, giving them less emphasis than they deserve. Look out for this and try to change it where possible. wwww
   
   Other than that, the map looked and (more importantly) played really well! I look forward to seeing where this map goes~

ts8zs wrote:

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@air315 找到你本体了 诶嘿嘿
我推荐STR2
00:31:000 - 红线换长白线 然后把后面NC都check一遍 改，一句话半小时系列
01:25:649 (3) - del √
01:46:367 (1) - NC √
01:58:928 (3) - del √
02:02:191 (13) - del 好多这种overmap√
02:09:369 (9) - ...我可以专注找其他的东西么 这种自己check好了√
02:26:497 - break start here √
02:30:738 - 我认为换成一个1/2滑条会更fit√
02:31:717 - break start here√
02:34:980 - break end here√
02:36:938 (2) - ugly且没必要√
02:36:285 - 从这里开始的clap换成hitnormal怎么样√
02:46:726 (9) - 第2抖不需要√
04:11:554 - break start here√
04:31:131 (5) - NC√
05:00:984 (7) - ugly且没必要√
05:04:899 (8) - del√
05:47:476 - break start here√
05:57:264 (1) - blanket 2√
06:41:636 - remove red line ane 06:48:488 - Spinner end here 红线有点必要啊，怕被砍
除了NC和有些overmap和一点ugly的滑条别的都很棒:3

RandomEffect wrote:

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From my queue~

[General]

1. tags suggetion:
   ending
   ファイナルファンタジー 零式√
2. Romanised title: Zero√
   I cannot find all capitalization "ZERO" from official source. so I recommend not to use it

[Rain]

1. 00:27:737 (8) - I prefer Ctrl+G keep
2. 01:06:237 (5) - why not symmetric slider about 01:06:563 (6) - humm
3. 02:10:511 (2,3,4) - I suggest to follow vocal like this omit 02:10:673 - imo
   
4. 02:21:930 (1,2,3) - hard to find rhythm. how about reverse sliders? I like that, so keep ;w;
   
5. 02:40:201 (1,2,3,4,5) - in this part, I auggest to follow 1/8 dfum rhythm. just a suggetion a little difficult \o/
   
6. 03:18:047- I suggest to start kiai-time at this time √
7. 03:22:615 (2) - I prefer to stack on the head of 03:22:778 (3) - keep
8. 03:55:241 (5) - why not divide into circle x2 for following vocal? make more better flow;w;
   
9. 04:31:131 (5) - NC √
10. 04:42:876 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - if you make jump in the stream, I suggest to add NC at 5 and 9 √
11. 05:23:333 (5,6) - very hard to find rhythm due to 1/3. I recommend the pattern starting at white line like this keep
    
12. 05:40:788 (1,2) - swap NC √
13. 05:42:909 (8,9) - make symmetrically √
14. 06:08:684 (4) - I prefer Ctrl+Gkeep

if my mod is useful for you, I hope you to post reply~
good relax APP! support ~☆
~Good Luck~

ken2010123 wrote:

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For qq群;w;

Rain

1. 換成AR8會好點？還是說本來打算做來DT的？没错。。
   DT的話感覺切指有點多，部分可以換成滑條。
   滑條挺多變化的。水平不够，看情况改
   發現好多地方沒疊一起，應該是故意的吧？故意的
   
   
2. 01:42:778 (4,8) - 疊keep
   01:50:282 (6,1) - 疊keep
   01:51:587 (2,3) - 這兩個間距太大了，把3移到4的位置感覺會好點 改
   02:02:354 (12,1) - 這兩個不要碰到 改
   02:11:816 (6,7,1,2,3,4,5) - 這裡很難讀啊，所以說換成AR8會好點 那我就不能DT了！
   02:13:610 (6,7,8,1) - 前面太多單個按的手雷，這裡換成兩個滑條可以讓人休息一下 ‘是音乐让我这么下’
   02:18:341 (4,5,8) - 疊keep
   02:36:285 (1,2) - 不要碰到keep
   02:37:591 (3,4) - ^keep
   03:21:636 (10,3,9,2) - 這幾個都疊在一起keep
   04:32:436 (4,1) - 疊keep
   05:38:667 (7) - 這裡換新combo吧 √
   05:40:462 (12,13,14,15,16,17) - 這裡也換成滑條吧，按的手累 keep

美麗;w;

1. 00:19:907 (2) - I think This Flow is better because (2)'s tail flow with (1)'s tail and (2)'s head flow with (3)
2. 00:34:263 (6,7) - give them more distance. why this 1/2 part have same distance with other 1/4 ?
3. 00:36:057 (1,2) - switch NC
4. 00:56:449 (1,3) - seitch NC
5. 01:25:160 (2,3,4) - they are 1/2 but 01:24:507 (1,2) - are 1/4 and have look same distance.... suggest to give 01:25:160 (2,3,4) - more distance
6. 01:27:770 (7,8) - in this distance I better like if you make it look like 01:54:524 (1,2) -
7. 01:32:664 (12,13,14) - 1/2 but 01:31:033 (9,10,11) - 1/4 ? suggest to give 01:32:664 (12,13,14) - more distance or make a reminder on it like NC
8. 01:41:962 (2) - ctrl+g ?
9. 02:08:879 (11,12,13) - different snap but same distance ? it looks so weird than the other snap problem...
10. 02:45:747 (6) - not a good time to jump. Suggest to make it closer to 02:45:421 (5) -
11. 02:49:989 (6,7,8) - for this part I better like to make it like this way http://puu.sh/g1X3p/91740d2e17.jpg
12. 02:46:726 (9,1) - switch NC
13. 02:51:294 (1,2) - switch NC
14. 03:10:543 (2,3,4) - this same distance and different snap again. suggest to change 03:10:870 (3) - to 1/4 slider like 03:10:217 (1,2) -
15. 03:55:241 (5) - ctrl+g ? to give it more distance from 03:54:589 (4) -
16. 03:54:100 (1,4) - switch NC
17. 05:18:439 (8,9,10) - I better like this way http://puu.sh/g1Xyf/e7cafbea92.jpg
18. 05:19:254 (1,2) - switch NC
19. 05:22:680 (1,5) - switch NC
20. 05:33:773 (6) - NC ?
21. 05:42:909 (4,5,6,7) - how about make the slider click on every white tick ? change the pattern to http://puu.sh/g1XLd/067bdbe490.jpg
22. 06:06:400 (11,12) - give them more distance

Fantastica wrote:

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Hi hi~~~~ from my queue :3

[Rain]

1. 00:19:907 (2) - I think This Flow is better because (2)'s tail flow with (1)'s tail and (2)'s head flow with (3) √
2. 00:34:263 (6,7) - give them more distance. why this 1/2 part have same distance with other 1/4 ? keep for better flow
3. 00:36:057 (1,2) - switch NC √
4. 00:56:449 (1,3) - seitch NC √
5. 01:25:160 (2,3,4) - they are 1/2 but 01:24:507 (1,2) - are 1/4 and have look same distance.... suggest to give 01:25:160 (2,3,4) - more distance keep for better flow
6. 01:27:770 (7,8) - in this distance I better like if you make it look like 01:54:524 (1,2) - humm
7. 01:32:664 (12,13,14) - 1/2 but 01:31:033 (9,10,11) - 1/4 ? suggest to give 01:32:664 (12,13,14) - more distance or make a reminder on it like NC NC√
8. 01:41:962 (2) - ctrl+g ? keep
9. 02:08:879 (11,12,13) - different snap but same distance ? it looks so weird than the other snap problem... √
10. 02:45:747 (6) - not a good time to jump. Suggest to make it closer to 02:45:421 (5) - keep
11. 02:49:989 (6,7,8) - for this part I better like to make it like this way http://puu.sh/g1X3p/91740d2e17.jpg
    
12. 02:46:726 (9,1) - switch NC√
13. 02:51:294 (1,2) - switch NC√
14. 03:10:543 (2,3,4) - this same distance and different snap again. suggest to change 03:10:870 (3) - to 1/4 slider like 03:10:217 (1,2) -
15. 03:55:241 (5) - ctrl+g ? to give it more distance from 03:54:589 (4) -
16. 03:54:100 (1,4) - switch NC
17. 05:18:439 (8,9,10) - I better like this way http://puu.sh/g1Xyf/e7cafbea92.jpg
18. 05:19:254 (1,2) - switch NC
19. 05:22:680 (1,5) - switch NC
20. 05:33:773 (6) - NC ? √
21. 05:42:909 (4,5,6,7) - how about make the slider click on every white tick ? change the pattern to http://puu.sh/g1XLd/067bdbe490.jpg
    keep
22. 06:06:400 (11,12) - give them more distancekeep

okay that's all I can find :3
what a nice feel song Take my star

i'll reply later

1. 00:25:127 (2,3,4) - 这种梗不美观而且很少合曲建议少放
2. 音效是不是没下
3. 02:09:531 (9,10) - 间距坑
4. 03:16:416 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,1) - 节奏没这个啊
5. 03:46:759 (7) - 这种长滑条感觉违和，我知道你在跟vocal但是就是违和idk why，总之你可以看看跟跟鼓（所有1/1）
6. 05:03:104 (7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 不要做这么长的连打啊，这是低bpm长连很痛苦的
7. 05:45:193 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - 略别扭

Alex Li wrote:

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from my q
[rain]

1. 00:25:127 (2,3,4) - 这种梗不美观而且很少合曲建议少放 改
2. 音效是不是没下 下少了
3. 02:09:531 (9,10) - 间距坑 改
4. 03:16:416 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,1) - 节奏没这个啊 爽就行
5. 03:46:759 (7) - 这种长滑条感觉违和，我知道你在跟vocal但是就是违和idk why，总之你可以看看跟跟鼓（所有1/1） humm
6. 05:03:104 (7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 不要做这么长的连打啊，这是低bpm长连很痛苦的 爽就行
7. 05:45:193 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - 略别扭 还行，晚点修修

排列很厉害，星星接好
gl ojn ranking

Gamu wrote:

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hello~ :3

[ General]

1. Source: Fantasy Type-0
   I think ":" is unnecessary.
   But i'd like to recommend that you add the Japanese to the source. If you do so, Source: ファイナルファンタジー 零式 Tags: Final Fantasy Type-0
2. BG size is strange, it is different from the recommended size (1366*768 or 1024*768). Please try to resize or look for other image.
3. Disable the "Widescreen Support" and "Letterbox during breaks". they don't work in this map.
4. PreviewTime is unsnapped. snap to 04:43:692.

[ Rain]

1. HP drain is toooo low lol. I think HP6 is better :3
2. Unsnapped green line: 00:31:001 - snap to 00:30:999.
3. 02:30:738 (1) - Maybe, this is unrankble slider. You should change the form.
4. 00:19:254~00:28:390 and 00:41:440~01:01:343 and 01:12:762~01:33:316 and 01:54:524~02:25:844 and 04:31:131~04:44:181. In these parts, hitsounds are very missing. Please try to add many hitsounds (whistle, finish and clap...etc)

Sorry, short modding.
Good luck

Regraz wrote:

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Hi. From my queue.

[Rain]
00:34:263 (6,7) - Since the DS you used for 1/4 is similar with here (1/2). I'd suggest moving 7 to further position (1.2x) from 6 to avoid misunderstanding. √

00:38:830 (6) - Keep the DS around 1.2x here. Or at least make the DS consistent. √

01:02:321 (1,2,3) - You can stack better. Same at 01:04:931 (1,2,3) - . √

01:06:237 (5,6,7,8) - Make DS consistent among these 4 notes. Maybe you can make a jump at 01:06:563 (6,7) - to emphasize the background music. √

01:23:202 (8,1) - Swap NC. Same at 01:37:558 (1,4) - √

01:53:871 (9,1) - It indicates that it is better to place a jump here. Or at least the weighted-DS between 01:53:545 (8,9) - should be smaller than 01:53:871 (9,1) - . done

02:03:007 (1,2,3) – This pattern is quite questionable with the DS difference. Strongly recommend making the DS between 1 and 2, 2 and 3 the same. √

02:08:879 (8,1,2) – Also a DS issue. The time gap between 8 and 1, 1 and 2 are quite different with each other. It can be easily read as same ones. done

03:21:962 (1,2) – Using larger DS here done

03:57:036 (9) – The DS here is a little off. http://puu.sh/g7EYj/07cd3f1175.jpg √

05:08:651 (10,1) – You can put 10 at the place where the slider curves. √

05:20:723 (4) – Slightly touches the HP bar, consider adjusting the place. √

05:25:617 (2,3) – Make a blanket here? √

I am worrying the DS between 1/3 notes. Besides, the map is great! And also the song is great!

Good Luck!

Hollow Wings wrote:

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m4m

Rain

1. 01:54:524 (1) - rearrange all nc settings from here: why not just follow the normal beats? the current nc setting version's not following both instrument and vocal track. check the whole diff by yourself with this suggestion, this is a highly recommended. done
2. 02:12:468 (3,4) - can give a larger jump here to follow the vocal, like the position from note2 to note4 here. rearrange these notes order here, and note4 should be at 1 or 3's position now. done
3. 02:49:989 (7,8) - too sudden this jump is. your patterns' already hard to read with all those ds shiftings, here comes the big jump from no where. it's not a heated part and it's unnecessary to give that large ds. do ctrl+g to slider7 and stack note8 at the head of it. del 8
4. 03:24:246 (7,8) - shorter this jump a bit. 03:23:268 (4,5) - has similar ds with different gap here as well, really confusing. (actually there're full of these in the whole diff... some of them are ok but when they appear in similar part, give differences with ds between them directly. scan over all of the map and fix some if you care. √
5. 03:55:241 (5) - ctrl+g, especially one as above.√
6. generally fine to me, except the ds and nc settings.

take seriously attention to my mod above about ds and nc if you wanna my bubble, otherwise then just do what you like.

poke me later when you are ready, i'll do a recheck.

1. 01:01:343 (9) - this slider follows nothing would suggest to remove
2. 01:11:457 (5,6,7,8) - would suggest a pattern like this here:
   
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3. 01:17:330 (2) - just a normal slider would be better here for the flow
4. 01:19:287 (7) - you can hear that the vocal ends here 01:19:612 - so finish the sslider at this point
5. 01:36:253 (6) - new combo is getting to long the comboing
6. 01:41:473 (7) - ctrl+g fits better
7. 01:47:672 (10) - personally looks ugly
8. 03:32:240 (10) - ctrl+g
9. 04:42:876 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - i'm not really a fan of separate mini stream jumps
10. 05:18:765 (3) - ctrl+j for a better flow
11. 05:45:193 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - looks really ugly
12. 06:22:060 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - same about here
    
    Hitsounds:
13. personally i'm really disapointed of the hitsounding in the first 40% of the map you could do it really better usig custom hitsounds and specially parts like 02:40:201 (1,2,3,4,5) - having no hitsounds that fits with the drum in the background sounds so empty,i would really recomend to re-do hitsounds

Lally wrote:

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#queue

[diffu]

1. 01:01:343 (9) - this slider follows nothing would suggest to remove keep
2. 01:11:457 (5,6,7,8) - would suggest a pattern like this here:
   
   
3. 01:17:330 (2) - just a normal slider would be better here for the flow
4. 01:19:287 (7) - you can hear that the vocal ends here 01:19:612 - so finish the sslider at this point done
5. 01:36:253 (6) - new combo is getting to long the comboing √
6. 01:41:473 (7) - ctrl+g fits better done
7. 01:47:672 (10) - personally looks ugly
8. 03:32:240 (10) - ctrl+g keep
9. 04:42:876 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - i'm not really a fan of separate mini stream jumps fixed
10. 05:18:765 (3) - ctrl+j for a better flow done
11. 05:45:193 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - looks really ugly fixed
12. 06:22:060 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - same about here fixed
    
    Hitsounds:
13. personally i'm really disapointed of the hitsounding in the first 40% of the map you could do it really better usig custom hitsounds and specially parts like 02:40:201 (1,2,3,4,5) - having no hitsounds that fits with the drum in the background sounds so empty,i would really recomend to re-do hitsounds maybe i'll try, but i have no confidence ;w;

gl o3o

Hollow Wings wrote:

recheck

Rain

1. 01:41:473 (7) - add nc. no explanation. 01:46:693 (8) - , 02:13:610 (6) - , 01:51:914 (7) - ... check the whole diff, find all places combo count's over 10 and think if it's really necessary to give long combo count. to me, i say you can only keep the part at 03:15:437 (1) - .done
2. 02:07:411 (7,1) - swap nc setting.√
3. 03:35:992 (8,1) - ^√
4. the logic nc following the vocal track is not wrong, but i won't agree with those long combo counts when they can be set better.√√√

1. 00:53:186 (3) - 这个滑条有点别扭，用白点拉大一点吧
2. 00:58:406 (4) - ^
3. 02:12:141 (1,2,3,4,5) - 直接弄五角星好些吧
4. 03:45:454 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 用滑条的形式好一些，easy for player√
5. 05:45:193 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - 与其分两段不如渐渐缩小间距

[Teichan] wrote:

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Quick mod.

1. 00:53:186 (3) - 这个滑条有点别扭，用白点拉大一点吧 还行
2. 00:58:406 (4) - ^ 改
3. 02:12:141 (1,2,3,4,5) - 直接弄五角星好些吧 改了几遍，还是保持比较有人样
4. 03:45:454 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 用滑条的形式好一些，easy for player√ 不怕
5. 05:45:193 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - 与其分两段不如渐渐缩小间距缩小被说过难看了，keep

滑条有点乱，看着比较难受啊。。。

liangv587 wrote:

SPOILER

骗kd来了
弄这么多颜色不分段加颜色吗
02:21:930 (1,2,3,4,1) - 如果vocal的话试试这样http://puu.sh/giFIM.jpg，然后这个nc 漏了个白线，keep
02:30:738 (1) - 删了？没必要强调一下 凑凑内容
03:46:540 (6) - 跨白线没什么不好http://puu.sh/giG4V.jpg wu
05:19:091 (4,5) - 变成滑条 √
05:12:728 (9,10) - 这样，把重音放在滑条头http://puu.sh/giHu3.jpg 两个字分开好些
05:33:556 (5,1) - 05:43:996 (4,1) - 跨白线没什么不好。这种我打起来没那么顺
05:43:996 (4,1) - 跨白线没什么不好

lkx_Shore wrote:

General

1. Fine.

Rain

1. 01:01:343 (9) - 滑条尾巴+whistle？现在感觉有点单调。√
2. 01:12:761 (9) - 用1/2滑条好点，可以拖出长音。√
3. 01:12:762 - 到 01:33:316 -
   01:54:524 - 到 02:25:845 - 的音效太少了吧... 水平太次，加过感觉有点画蛇添足
4. 02:40:201 (1) - 02:40:201 (1) - 的尾巴和02:40:527 (2) - 头尾用Normal底音。
   02:40:853 (3,4,5) - 用Drum底音(加一个Drum不带音轨的绿线。) 神改;w;
5. 02:41:506 (1) - 这段多出来的鼓音可以用Normal底音加上去呀... 挺好的，我得再加个default音效进包。。
6. 03:18:047 (1) - 单用Drum的自定义Finish实在是太软了，有重音的地方就切成Normal底音.(或者只加在大白线)√
7. 04:09:923 (7,8,9) - Normal底音.√
8. 04:43:527 (5) - +Whistle,04:42:875 (1,3,4,6,7,8) - 切成Normal底音。√
9. 05:03:920 (2,5) - 不必要..√
   后面有鼓音的地方有加上Normal底音吧...感觉音效方面很偷懒

Hollow Wings wrote:

recheck

General

1. drum-hitwhistle.wav has 9ms delay, avoid that.

√

Rain

1. 节奏方面，其实没啥好说，注意跟vocal时之前也提到的nc问题即可。done
2. 排版方面，整张图ds控制依旧有待加强，bpm越低，这方面越是要注意。1/2和1/4混在一起尤其要好好思考到底是跳大还是跳小，某些跳感觉依旧莫名。过了一遍，又挪了几个地方
3. 音效方面，既然是选择了突出其中原有音轨的下法，那么尽量也要跟着曲子来。05:57:264 (1) - 开始这段贝斯的音轨依旧在，你这边的音效显然就下的略轻了点。以及，soft-hitclap.wav为什么没有回响的特效呢？

加了一拍底音，clap干脆点比较好，不加了吧

其实做的还行，改完戳我。

Hollow Wings wrote:

bubbled.

仔细看一下这段话

这图泡了并不代表你这图就完美了，如果说06:31:196 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 的ds变小是为了作梗，那么01:08:194 (3,4) - 或者06:19:450 (4,5) - 突然变小的ds又怎么解释呢？（同样的地方，这些和01:10:804 (3,4) - 与06:14:883 (5,6) - 对1/2跳的处理有着明显区别）也许你有你这么摆的理由，但我觉得更多的是你自己没发现这些细节的地方。
图目前的状态比我一开始看到这图要好了很多，而且大多数就是这种细节的地方。下次你给bn看自己的图的时候，务必先搞成这种级别的图再去，球mod的时候就把图修到最好。

ZZHBOY wrote:

hw

Hollow Wings wrote:

bubbled.

仔细看一下这段话]这图泡了并不代表你这图就完美了，如果说06:31:196 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 的ds变小是为了作梗，那么01:08:194 (3,4) - 或者06:19:450 (4,5) - 突然变小的ds又怎么解释呢？（同样的地方，这些和01:10:804 (3,4) - 与06:14:883 (5,6) - 对1/2跳的处理有着明显区别）也许你有你这么摆的理由，但我觉得更多的是你自己没发现这些细节的地方。
图目前的状态比我一开始看到这图要好了很多，而且大多数就是这种细节的地方。下次你给bn看自己的图的时候，务必先搞成这种级别的图再去，球mod的时候就把图修到最好。

我觉得大概还要多看点图学点基本的排列和节奏知识 建议今后把图先做工整美观一些

irc

2015-03-05 00:56 ZZHBOY: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/630409 BUMP OF CHICKEN - Zero [Rain]]
2015-03-05 00:57 ZZHBOY: 00:31:325 - 我发现这里的音好像还挺明显
2015-03-05 00:57 ZZHBOY: 之前看的时候就觉得有点为何
2015-03-05 00:57 ZZHBOY: 违和*
2015-03-05 00:57 AIR: 剪短
2015-03-05 00:57 ZZHBOY: 但是我觉得貌似
2015-03-05 00:58 ZZHBOY: 不清楚...随便你吧 这里你自己取舍
2015-03-05 00:58 AIR: 行
2015-03-05 00:58 ZZHBOY: 00:59:385 (6) - 可以移远点?
2015-03-05 00:59 ZZHBOY: 255567 36
2015-03-05 00:59 ZZHBOY: 256 36
2015-03-05 00:59 ZZHBOY: 01:01:505 - 这里也许可以加个圈?
2015-03-05 00:59 AIR: √
2015-03-05 01:00 AIR: 加了
2015-03-05 01:00 ZZHBOY: 01:11:131 (4,5) - 距离
2015-03-05 01:00 AIR: √
2015-03-05 01:00 ZZHBOY: 话说
2015-03-05 01:01 ZZHBOY: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2848822 你看看这样是否好点
2015-03-05 01:01 ZZHBOY: 01:13:741 (4) - 前后间距也有点不太好
2015-03-05 01:01 ZZHBOY: 建议弄明显点
2015-03-05 01:02 ZZHBOY: 01:23:855 (2) - 这个没ctrl+g吗
2015-03-05 01:02 ZZHBOY: 01:25:812 (1,2) - 这个遮挡也不是很好看..
2015-03-05 01:02 ZZHBOY: 我去隔壁寝室偷点水 渴死了
2015-03-05 01:02 AIR: 慢点。。
2015-03-05 01:05 AIR: 妥了https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2848834
2015-03-05 01:06 ZZHBOY: 我的意思是四个滑条的视觉整齐 不过也没啥
2015-03-05 01:07 ZZHBOY: 01:23:855 (2) - 这个建议还是ctrl+g
2015-03-05 01:07 AIR: 已改
2015-03-05 01:07 ZZHBOY: 01:31:522 (2,4,5,6) -  这里也是有点乱
2015-03-05 01:07 ZZHBOY: 1/2和1/4距离一样
2015-03-05 01:08 AIR: √
2015-03-05 01:08 AIR: 45换了位置
2015-03-05 01:08 ZZHBOY: 不过我觉得可以考虑01:32:663 - 这里空出来?
2015-03-05 01:10 AIR: 想留着，缺了总觉得少点
2015-03-05 01:12 ZZHBOY: hao 
2015-03-05 01:12 ZZHBOY: 01:52:892 (3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3) - 
2015-03-05 01:12 ZZHBOY: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2848854 try this?
2015-03-05 01:13 AIR: √
2015-03-05 01:13 ZZHBOY: 02:38:243 (4) -  这个你试试向右上凸起 感觉flow好点
2015-03-05 01:14 ZZHBOY: 02:45:747 (6) - 适当往下移一点?
2015-03-05 01:14 ZZHBOY: 02:55:861 (3,4,5,6) - 没有放风车嘛.-.
2015-03-05 01:15 AIR: 我懒勒
2015-03-05 01:16 ZZHBOY: 其实不需要多久而且能美观的多
2015-03-05 01:16 AIR: 好好好
2015-03-05 01:17 AIR: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2848868
2015-03-05 01:17 AIR: 还行
2015-03-05 01:18 ZZHBOY: nice
2015-03-05 01:18 AIR: ;w;
2015-03-05 01:18 ZZHBOY: 03:05:159 - 这音挺明显
2015-03-05 01:19 ZZHBOY: 考虑拆滑条去map吗
2015-03-05 01:19 ZZHBOY: 03:07:281 (8) - 移到216 256
2015-03-05 01:19 AIR: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2848875
2015-03-05 01:19 ZZHBOY: 03:08:912 (5) - 120 2556
2015-03-05 01:20 AIR: 拆了
2015-03-05 01:20 ZZHBOY: 256&
2015-03-05 01:21 AIR: √
2015-03-05 01:22 ZZHBOY: 后面明显好多了
2015-03-05 01:23 ZZHBOY: 03:50:021 (1) - 移开点 大概1/7ds左右吧
2015-03-05 01:23 ZZHBOY: 1.7
2015-03-05 01:23 AIR: 唉
2015-03-05 01:23 AIR: √
2015-03-05 01:24 ZZHBOY: 03:59:157 (7) - 
2015-03-05 01:24 ZZHBOY: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2848892
2015-03-05 01:24 ZZHBOY: 04:00:950 - louyin
2015-03-05 01:24 ZZHBOY: 漏音
2015-03-05 01:26 ZZHBOY: 05:09:793 (8,1) - blanket
2015-03-05 01:27 AIR: √
2015-03-05 01:27 ZZHBOY: 05:16:481 (4) - 建议拆了这个 漏音
2015-03-05 01:28 AIR: 圈加条了
2015-03-05 01:28 ZZHBOY: 05:26:922 (3,4) - 这两个放近点?
2015-03-05 01:29 ZZHBOY: 05:25:943 (1,2) - 或者这两个王座放点
2015-03-05 01:29 ZZHBOY: 往左
2015-03-05 01:30 ZZHBOY:  其实我认为05:26:922 (3,4) - 1.6ds就可以了..
2015-03-05 01:31 AIR: 好了
2015-03-05 01:32 ZZHBOY: 05:45:193 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - 其实感觉这串真没必要➹减ds...
2015-03-05 01:33 ZZHBOY: 06:20:103 (5,6) - 距离
2015-03-05 01:33 ZZHBOY: 06:32:501 (5,6,7,8) - 为啥不向左凸起啊
2015-03-05 01:33 AIR: √
2015-03-05 01:36 AIR: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2848931 1.4咋样呢
2015-03-05 01:37 ZZHBOY: 行吧
2015-03-05 01:37 AIR: 完了，我dt不能pass了
2015-03-05 01:37 ZZHBOY: ..
2015-03-05 01:37 ZZHBOY: 06:41:635 (1) - 话说为啥转盘停蓝线啊啊
2015-03-05 01:38 AIR: 忘了谁让我改的了
2015-03-05 01:39 ZZHBOY: 原因?
2015-03-05 01:40 AIR: 没原因，不行白线
2015-03-05 01:40 AIR: 白线吧
2015-03-05 01:41 ZZHBOY: 06:49:751 - 我觉得拉倒这里都ok =.=
2015-03-05 01:41 AIR: 妥
2015-03-05 01:42 ZZHBOY: 宽屏支持点了
2015-03-05 01:43 AIR: 没关系吗，这没装进包
2015-03-05 01:44 ZZHBOY: 我说点掉
2015-03-05 01:44 ZZHBOY: 就是去掉
2015-03-05 01:44 AIR: 哦对
2015-03-05 01:44 ZZHBOY: 没关系是指?
2015-03-05 01:44 AIR: orz
2015-03-05 01:44 AIR: cw里有storyboard
2015-03-05 01:45 ZZHBOY: 那种应该那里面应该放osz
2015-03-05 01:45 ZZHBOY: 然后那里面勾上 这个里面不能勾
2015-03-05 01:45 ZZHBOY: 另外
2015-03-05 01:46 AIR: hao
2015-03-05 01:46 ZZHBOY: 48285353_p0.jpg删了
2015-03-05 01:47 ZZHBOY: 既然你把sb放cw 那有关的东西在for rank的文件夹 set里就不要有
2015-03-05 01:48 ZZHBOY: 传好了和我说
2015-03-05 01:48 AIR: 稍等
2015-03-05 01:51 AIR: 48285353_p0.jpg没这个，传了
2015-03-05 02:28 ZZHBOY: hihi
2015-03-05 02:28 AIR: ~~
2015-03-05 02:28 ZZHBOY: 00:31:000 (1) - 这个是不是有点太近了 而且本意是00:31:488 - 这里也许可以加个圈
2015-03-05 02:29 ZZHBOY: 不加也可以把滑条网左移一点
2015-03-05 02:29 ZZHBOY: 02:38:243 (4) - 
2015-03-05 02:29 ZZHBOY: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2849091
2015-03-05 02:30 ZZHBOY: 可以的话把颜色调浅一点
2015-03-05 02:30 AIR: √
2015-03-05 02:31 ZZHBOY: 传吧

did irc mod again, looks fine now.
bubble #2

Estellia- wrote:

SPOILER

还不起火？难道这幅图不够完美？:o

00:20:559 (3,4) - You can align them better keep
00:27:085 (1) - curve this less for a better peeling effect with slider after done
00:33:610 (1,2) - You can blanket better
00:42:746 (3) - Beginning of this slider shape is too squashed, suggest changing slider shape keep
00:44:703 (2) - ^(middle) done
00:49:271 (1,2) - fix blanket
00:50:249 (3,4) - ^
00:51:228 (5,1) - ^
00:53:186 (3) - Middle of this slider shape is too squashed, suggest changing slider shape keep
00:58:406 (4) - ^
01:02:321 (1) - ^(end)
01:04:931 (1) - ^(middle)
01:13:741 (4,5) - fix blanket how o.o?
01:24:180 (3,4) - ^
01:24:507 (4,5) - Don't really like the slider shapes keep
01:38:863 (1) - Not sure if rankable, the end looks too crushed together
01:47:672 (3) - Looks like its too close to the HP bar(?)keep
01:56:318 (6,1) - fix blanket
02:12:141 (1,2,3,4,5) - Rearrange on timeline to be 1,3,4,2,5 instead, it plays better (like a star)
02:12:794 (5) - Maybe end the slider earlier and add a note on whiteline, because it is a strong vocal
02:18:504 (3,4) - blanket
02:18:993 (4,5) - Can be aligned better done
02:18:504 (3,6) - stack? keep
02:21:930 (1,2,3) - Why not make 120 deg rotations of each other? keep
02:23:235 (1) - Weird slider shape, it doesn't seem to fit the song
02:30:738 (1) - This by its own is very awkward, I highly suggest you map the break keep
02:46:073 (7,1) - fix blanket done
02:49:336 (1) - Not a nice shape Not a nice shape
02:53:251 (4) - ^
03:21:310 (3) - ctrl g? sorry but keep
03:25:551 (8,3) - stack?
03:30:282 (7,1) - fix blanket
03:33:219 (7) - Ugly shape done
03:45:454 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - suggest change to sliders so players can follow easier keep
03:50:511 (2) - ugly shape
03:55:241 (2,3) - fix blanket
(I'll stop talking about slider shapes and blankets here, you get my point)
04:38:635 (9,1,2) - Will stacking 9 and 2 be hard to read? keep
04:46:791 (1,1) - I think you can remove the breaks(?) why?
05:32:903 (2,3,4,5) - change to sliders for easier reading keep
05:42:908 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^

That's it! You have a very basic map which is structured very well in terms of patterns and flow. The only problems I have with it are basically nazi problems, so it shouldn't be a big fuss. Apart from blankets and slider shapes, this map is really good! BNs approve plz.

ZZHBOY wrote:

why post mod after bubble x.x
if you want to fix the mod, you can finish it then call me back to rebub

Desperate-kun wrote:

ZZHBOY wrote:

why post mod after bubble x.x
if you want to fix the mod, you can finish it then call me back to rebub

Why shouldn't someone post a mod after a bubble? It can only help the mapper to improve the map before ranking.

1. 01:17:982 (1) - 我觉得头上这个finish有点突兀啊
2. 03:31:587 (3,4,5) - 这个flow不好啊
3. 03:55:241 (2,3) - 摆开点啊？
4. 05:42:255 (3) - 尾巴加个clap
5. 06:41:310 (8) - 放远点？
6. 06:41:636 (1) - 我觉得结束在06:48:751 - 就可以了

Minakami Yuki wrote:

Rain

1. 01:17:982 (1) - 我觉得头上这个finish有点突兀啊 改了
2. 03:31:587 (3,4,5) - 这个flow不好啊 改向上
3. 03:55:241 (2,3) - 摆开点啊？改了，顺便略弯
4. 05:42:255 (3) - 尾巴加个clap √
5. 06:41:310 (8) - 放远点？ 改4.0了
6. 06:41:636 (1) - 我觉得结束在06:48:751 - 就可以了 改了，顺便去掉5%线