囍,又被射Regraz wrote:
SPOILERHi. From my queue.
[Rain]
00:34:263 (6,7) - Since the DS you used for 1/4 is similar with here (1/2). I'd suggest moving 7 to further position (1.2x) from 6 to avoid misunderstanding. √
00:38:830 (6) - Keep the DS around 1.2x here. Or at least make the DS consistent. √
01:02:321 (1,2,3) - You can stack better. Same at 01:04:931 (1,2,3) - . √
01:06:237 (5,6,7,8) - Make DS consistent among these 4 notes. Maybe you can make a jump at 01:06:563 (6,7) - to emphasize the background music. √
01:23:202 (8,1) - Swap NC. Same at 01:37:558 (1,4) - √
01:53:871 (9,1) - It indicates that it is better to place a jump here. Or at least the weighted-DS between 01:53:545 (8,9) - should be smaller than 01:53:871 (9,1) - . done
02:03:007 (1,2,3) – This pattern is quite questionable with the DS difference. Strongly recommend making the DS between 1 and 2, 2 and 3 the same. √
02:08:879 (8,1,2) – Also a DS issue. The time gap between 8 and 1, 1 and 2 are quite different with each other. It can be easily read as same ones. done
03:21:962 (1,2) – Using larger DS here done
03:57:036 (9) – The DS here is a little off. http://puu.sh/g7EYj/07cd3f1175.jpg √
05:08:651 (10,1) – You can put 10 at the place where the slider curves. √
05:20:723 (4) – Slightly touches the HP bar, consider adjusting the place. √
05:25:617 (2,3) – Make a blanket here? √
I am worrying the DS between 1/3 notes. Besides, the map is great! And also the song is great!
Good Luck!
谢啦,