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Yellow Zebra - Believe Heart!

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Frill
514 posts
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Frill
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2010年6月18日 at 19:32:08

Artist: Yellow Zebra
Title: Believe Heart!
Source: Touhou
Tags: suwako yuki fujimiya suireika orbit of diffusion
BPM: 170
Filesize: 3767kb
Play Time: 03:27
Difficulties Available:
  1. Hard (4.59 stars, 391 notes)
  2. Insane (4.93 stars, 542 notes)
  3. Normal (2.8 stars, 218 notes)
Download: Yellow Zebra - Believe Heart!
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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my 4th map

i love yellow zebra !!

dif..Hard is low speed
Last edited by Frill , edited 45 times in total.
Cyril Scarlet
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Cyril Scarlet
藤宮さんですね！

ぜぶらですね！！！

正しい選択ですね！！！！

ｷｬｰｰｰｰ


追伸：Hujimiya は日本語書きで 英語では Fujimiya だそうです、あぃ。

Frill wrote:

i love yellow zebra !!
+1000000
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PSPDS Eddie
457 posts
Joined November 2009
PSPDS Eddie
☆⌒ ヽ(´ー^ ) star
あのジャンプが楽しかった譜面ですね。
頑張ってください。
dvorak_old
294 posts
Joined February 2010
dvorak_old
go
Frill
514 posts
Joined March 2010
Topic Starter
Frill
all >


thx star~
ReimuSS
56 posts
Joined November 2009
ReimuSS
hosi
Nakagawa-Kanon
Featured Artist
1,893 posts
Joined March 2009
Nakagawa-Kanon
[General]
disable countdown

[Normal]
cricle szie +1

[Hard]
umm.... slider velocity too slow....

00:47:127 (1) - how about use straight slider?
01:40:774 (2) - remove clap
01:40:774 (2) - remove clap and add clap at retrun arrow
03:24:539 (1) - remove clap and add clap at the end

[Lunatic]
00:02:646 (5) - add new combo
00:53:999 (4) - remove clap
00:54:176 (6) - add clap at start

+star

good luck!
Frill
514 posts
Joined March 2010
Topic Starter
Frill
thanks mod.


fixed.



dksslqj wrote:

[Hard]
01:40:774 (2) - remove clap
01:40:774 (2) - remove clap and add clap at retrun arrow
I think that the mistake found it by the sentence.



Perhaps, the place where you say will be here.

01:43:597 (4) -

suitable here?
Nakagawa-Kanon
Featured Artist
1,893 posts
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Nakagawa-Kanon

Frill wrote:

thanks mod.


fixed.



dksslqj wrote:

[Hard]
01:40:774 (2) - remove clap
01:40:774 (2) - remove clap and add clap at retrun arrow
I think that the mistake found it by the sentence.



Perhaps, the place where you say will be here.

01:43:597 (4) -

suitable here?
oh! I got a mistakes....

sorry

01:40:774 (2) - remove clap
01:43:597 (4) - remove clap and add clap at retrun arrow
Aenna
724 posts
Joined March 2009
Aenna
-_☆
frost-b-spec
783 posts
Joined February 2009
frost-b-spec
;)
Frill
514 posts
Joined March 2010
Topic Starter
Frill
all >

thx star :)



dksslqj >

okay.
fixed.
orioncomet
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2,684 posts
Joined May 2009
orioncomet
それは豚です！！

[Normal]
- Resnap all note
00:30:715 (5) - new combo?

[Lunatic]
- Resnap all note

☆(*^^*)☆
Frill
514 posts
Joined March 2010
Topic Starter
Frill
太ってる猫です！

it's cute!!



fixed~
Leorda
4,416 posts
Joined June 2009
Leorda
KONNICHIWA!!!

[General]
1) Disable the countdown, since the countdown is not appear
2) You have the cut the mp3


[Normal]
I think the soft sound (I mean the Soft Sample Set) is not fit to the song. Here the object are not fit to the song using a Soft sound

00:30:705 (5) - New combo
00:50:646 (1) - The soft sound is not fit to the song
00:56:293 (1) - ^
01:01:940 (1) - ^
01:59:823 (1) - ^
02:05:470 (1) - ^
02:16:058 (7) - New combo

[Hard]
Hm..... Some the combo are not fit to the lyric/vocal. Try fix this

00:47:656 (9) - New combo
00:56:303 (4) - ^
01:31:421 (7) - ^
01:36:539 (1) - Remove new combo
01:37:068 (2) - New combo
01:35:656 (1) - Remove new combo
01:39:892 (8) - New combo
01:40:597 (1) - Remove new combo
01:42:009 (1) - ^
01:42:892 (2) - New combo
01:43:245 (1) - Remove new combo
02:58:068 (1) - ^
02:59:127 (2) - New combo
03:16:245 (7) - ^

[Lunatic]
00:06:882 (3) - New combo
00:23:823 (8) - ^
00:38:470 (10) - Can you make it curve?
03:17:127 (7) - Don't stack 5, I don't like that

Kawaii no kyoku
Su-ta
Frill
514 posts
Joined March 2010
Topic Starter
Frill
fixed.


umm... mp3 can't be cut by my skill :(

sorry><
Diasios
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Joined August 2008
Diasios
[Mod Infos]

Azure: Suggestions.
Blue: You should fix this.
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[General]

  • • Your difficulties are N I I (see beatmap listening): you MUST make an easier difficulty
    • I guess "Title" should be "Believe heart!"
[Lunatic]

  • • 02:33:715 (x) - Add a circle
Frill
514 posts
Joined March 2010
Topic Starter
Frill
fixed.
Sekuyi
181 posts
Joined December 2009
Sekuyi
Heya~!

Green: Suggestions
Blue: Should fix this

[Normal]
- 01:44:303 ~ (2) end at 01:44:833 and add a note at 01:45:186 . and this note as last for this combo
- 02:33:362 ~ (1) start should be 02:33:186

[Hard]
In this diff your note stacking may confuse players (confused me too while playing). Example: 01:39:539 (6,7,1) are stacked - placed in 1/2 beats. and then at 01:40:774 (3,4,5) are not stacked, but placed in 1/4 beats. What I mean is, you stack the notes in slow beats, but place them next to each other when the beat goes faster. In my opinion it should be the exact opposite.

- 00:48:539 ~ (5) end at 00:48:892. the spinner then should start at 00:49:068, end is ok as it is

[Lunatic]
With the stacking it is the same as in hard, but it's a bit better here. But here you also use the 1/4 beat for stacking, which is good!


<3 Yellow Zebra~ *
Frill
514 posts
Joined March 2010
Topic Starter
Frill
fixed.
Astom
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Joined October 2008
Astom
^^ Star
Cyril Scarlet
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3,877 posts
Joined May 2009
Cyril Scarlet
オフセットとか変更した後にグリーンライン全てまとめて移動はこんな感じに
移動させるポイント全部指定して 左の所に 移動させる数字をいれるとまとめて移動できますよ。

例えば １００ から １０５ にしたら 5 入れて apply ヾ(´￢｀)ﾉ
１００ から ９５ だったら -５入れて apply ~

まとめて移動した場合 スライダースピード 0.5 などがキャンセルされる場合もあるので再確認もお忘れなくｗ

SPOILER
Frill
514 posts
Joined March 2010
Topic Starter
Frill
今まで一つ一つ調整してた :o
Shulin
1,189 posts
Joined August 2009
Shulin
General:

-- Consider adding an Easy difficulty for new players.
-- Delete .osb from the song folder and full submit.

Normal:

00:56:303 (1) - Keep kiai active here?
01:11:833 (1) - Maybe extend this spinner to 01:13:244
01:25:950 (1) - Too loud at the start.
01:39:892 (4) - New combo?
02:11:127 (1) - Soft finish sounds odd here imo.
02:21:009 (1) - Reduce volume slightly?
02:33:186 (1,2) - Make this a returning slider, to make it easier?
03:15:362 -- Keep kiai active here?

Hard:

00:42:186 (3) - Add clap to the end.
00:42:892 (5) - Add clap on the return.
00:54:539 (1) - Keep kiai active?
01:10:421 (1) - Maybe extend this spinner to 01:13:244
01:37:068 (1) - Remove new combo?
02:05:303 (6) - Remove finish and add to 02:05:480 (1) -
02:19:597 (1) - Extend to 02:22:421?
03:15:362 (6) - Keep kiai active here?

Lunatic:

00:22:509 (4) - Delete?
00:34:333 (3) - ^ Sounds odd to me.
00:54:892 (1) - Keep kiai active?
01:00:539 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - I don't think this sounds good, maybe add some hitsounds or do something else?
01:13:244 (x) - Note?
02:09:715 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - I don't think this sounds good ;_;
02:10:597 (x) - Note?
03:06:186 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Sounds bad imo
03:16:068 (1) - Keep kiai active?

I live your maps :D
~ Star
Frill
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Frill
fixed~
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