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Yellow Zebra - Believe Heart!

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Cyril Scarlet
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Cyril Scarlet
藤宮さんですね！

ぜぶらですね！！！

正しい選択ですね！！！！

ｷｬｰｰｰｰ


追伸：Hujimiya は日本語書きで 英語では Fujimiya だそうです、あぃ。

Frill wrote:

i love yellow zebra !!
+1000000
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PSPDS Eddie
457 posts
Joined November 2009
PSPDS Eddie
☆⌒ ヽ(´ー^ ) star
あのジャンプが楽しかった譜面ですね。
頑張ってください。
dvorak_old
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dvorak_old
go
Frill
514 posts
Joined March 2010
Topic Starter
Frill
all >


thx star~
ReimuSS
56 posts
Joined November 2009
ReimuSS
hosi
Nakagawa-Kanon
Featured Artist
1,893 posts
Joined March 2009
Nakagawa-Kanon
[General]
disable countdown

[Normal]
cricle szie +1

[Hard]
umm.... slider velocity too slow....

00:47:127 (1) - how about use straight slider?
01:40:774 (2) - remove clap
01:40:774 (2) - remove clap and add clap at retrun arrow
03:24:539 (1) - remove clap and add clap at the end

[Lunatic]
00:02:646 (5) - add new combo
00:53:999 (4) - remove clap
00:54:176 (6) - add clap at start

+star

good luck!
Frill
514 posts
Joined March 2010
Topic Starter
Frill
thanks mod.


fixed.



dksslqj wrote:

[Hard]
01:40:774 (2) - remove clap
01:40:774 (2) - remove clap and add clap at retrun arrow
I think that the mistake found it by the sentence.



Perhaps, the place where you say will be here.

01:43:597 (4) -

suitable here?
Nakagawa-Kanon
Featured Artist
1,893 posts
Joined March 2009
Nakagawa-Kanon

Frill wrote:

thanks mod.


fixed.



dksslqj wrote:

[Hard]
01:40:774 (2) - remove clap
01:40:774 (2) - remove clap and add clap at retrun arrow
I think that the mistake found it by the sentence.



Perhaps, the place where you say will be here.

01:43:597 (4) -

suitable here?
oh! I got a mistakes....

sorry

01:40:774 (2) - remove clap
01:43:597 (4) - remove clap and add clap at retrun arrow
Aenna
724 posts
Joined March 2009
Aenna
-_☆
frost-b-spec
783 posts
Joined February 2009
frost-b-spec
;)
Frill
514 posts
Joined March 2010
Topic Starter
Frill
all >

thx star :)



dksslqj >

okay.
fixed.
orioncomet
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2,684 posts
Joined May 2009
orioncomet
それは豚です！！

[Normal]
- Resnap all note
00:30:715 (5) - new combo?

[Lunatic]
- Resnap all note

☆(*^^*)☆
Frill
514 posts
Joined March 2010
Topic Starter
Frill
太ってる猫です！

it's cute!!



fixed~
Leorda
4,416 posts
Joined June 2009
Leorda
KONNICHIWA!!!

[General]
1) Disable the countdown, since the countdown is not appear
2) You have the cut the mp3


[Normal]
I think the soft sound (I mean the Soft Sample Set) is not fit to the song. Here the object are not fit to the song using a Soft sound

00:30:705 (5) - New combo
00:50:646 (1) - The soft sound is not fit to the song
00:56:293 (1) - ^
01:01:940 (1) - ^
01:59:823 (1) - ^
02:05:470 (1) - ^
02:16:058 (7) - New combo

[Hard]
Hm..... Some the combo are not fit to the lyric/vocal. Try fix this

00:47:656 (9) - New combo
00:56:303 (4) - ^
01:31:421 (7) - ^
01:36:539 (1) - Remove new combo
01:37:068 (2) - New combo
01:35:656 (1) - Remove new combo
01:39:892 (8) - New combo
01:40:597 (1) - Remove new combo
01:42:009 (1) - ^
01:42:892 (2) - New combo
01:43:245 (1) - Remove new combo
02:58:068 (1) - ^
02:59:127 (2) - New combo
03:16:245 (7) - ^

[Lunatic]
00:06:882 (3) - New combo
00:23:823 (8) - ^
00:38:470 (10) - Can you make it curve?
03:17:127 (7) - Don't stack 5, I don't like that

Kawaii no kyoku
Su-ta
Frill
514 posts
Joined March 2010
Topic Starter
Frill
fixed.


umm... mp3 can't be cut by my skill :(

sorry><
Diasios
3,966 posts
Joined August 2008
Diasios
[Mod Infos]

Azure: Suggestions.
Blue: You should fix this.
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[General]

  • • Your difficulties are N I I (see beatmap listening): you MUST make an easier difficulty
    • I guess "Title" should be "Believe heart!"
[Lunatic]

  • • 02:33:715 (x) - Add a circle
Frill
514 posts
Joined March 2010
Topic Starter
Frill
fixed.
Sekuyi
181 posts
Joined December 2009
Sekuyi
Heya~!

Green: Suggestions
Blue: Should fix this

[Normal]
- 01:44:303 ~ (2) end at 01:44:833 and add a note at 01:45:186 . and this note as last for this combo
- 02:33:362 ~ (1) start should be 02:33:186

[Hard]
In this diff your note stacking may confuse players (confused me too while playing). Example: 01:39:539 (6,7,1) are stacked - placed in 1/2 beats. and then at 01:40:774 (3,4,5) are not stacked, but placed in 1/4 beats. What I mean is, you stack the notes in slow beats, but place them next to each other when the beat goes faster. In my opinion it should be the exact opposite.

- 00:48:539 ~ (5) end at 00:48:892. the spinner then should start at 00:49:068, end is ok as it is

[Lunatic]
With the stacking it is the same as in hard, but it's a bit better here. But here you also use the 1/4 beat for stacking, which is good!


<3 Yellow Zebra~ *
Frill
514 posts
Joined March 2010
Topic Starter
Frill
fixed.
Astom
1,588 posts
Joined October 2008
Astom
^^ Star
Cyril Scarlet
osu! Alumni
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Joined May 2009
Cyril Scarlet
オフセットとか変更した後にグリーンライン全てまとめて移動はこんな感じに
移動させるポイント全部指定して 左の所に 移動させる数字をいれるとまとめて移動できますよ。

例えば １００ から １０５ にしたら 5 入れて apply ヾ(´￢｀)ﾉ
１００ から ９５ だったら -５入れて apply ~

まとめて移動した場合 スライダースピード 0.5 などがキャンセルされる場合もあるので再確認もお忘れなくｗ

SPOILER
Frill
514 posts
Joined March 2010
Topic Starter
Frill
今まで一つ一つ調整してた :o
Shulin
1,189 posts
Joined August 2009
Shulin
General:

-- Consider adding an Easy difficulty for new players.
-- Delete .osb from the song folder and full submit.

Normal:

00:56:303 (1) - Keep kiai active here?
01:11:833 (1) - Maybe extend this spinner to 01:13:244
01:25:950 (1) - Too loud at the start.
01:39:892 (4) - New combo?
02:11:127 (1) - Soft finish sounds odd here imo.
02:21:009 (1) - Reduce volume slightly?
02:33:186 (1,2) - Make this a returning slider, to make it easier?
03:15:362 -- Keep kiai active here?

Hard:

00:42:186 (3) - Add clap to the end.
00:42:892 (5) - Add clap on the return.
00:54:539 (1) - Keep kiai active?
01:10:421 (1) - Maybe extend this spinner to 01:13:244
01:37:068 (1) - Remove new combo?
02:05:303 (6) - Remove finish and add to 02:05:480 (1) -
02:19:597 (1) - Extend to 02:22:421?
03:15:362 (6) - Keep kiai active here?

Lunatic:

00:22:509 (4) - Delete?
00:34:333 (3) - ^ Sounds odd to me.
00:54:892 (1) - Keep kiai active?
01:00:539 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - I don't think this sounds good, maybe add some hitsounds or do something else?
01:13:244 (x) - Note?
02:09:715 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - I don't think this sounds good ;_;
02:10:597 (x) - Note?
03:06:186 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Sounds bad imo
03:16:068 (1) - Keep kiai active?

I live your maps :D
~ Star
Frill
514 posts
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Topic Starter
Frill
fixed~
YGOkid8
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YGOkid8
Normal:

Combo Mod~
00:26:480 (7) - New Combo.
Frill
514 posts
Joined March 2010
Topic Starter
Frill
fixed~
DJPop
osu! Alumni
3,549 posts
Here since the beginning
DJPop
Bad claps using >__>"


~Normal~
Fine.

~Hard~
03:03:715 (6) - move down 1 grid (Lv3)

~Lunatic~
00:06:186 (1) - add clap at the end
00:10:068 (3,7) - add clap
00:22:421 (3) - remove clap
00:23:303 (6) - add clap at middle
00:23:833 (1) - add clap at the end
00:24:892 (1,3,6) - add clap
00:34:421 (4) - add clap at middle
00:36:186 (1) - add clap, remove new combo
00:36:539 (3) - new combo
00:42:539 (4) - add clap
00:43:597 (9) - add clap at the end
00:48:186 (4,8) - add clap
01:04:068 (5) - add clap at middle
02:01:245 (2) - remove clap
02:01:597 (4) - add clap at first and last note
02:03:009 (3) - add clap
02:03:715 (1) - add clap at start
02:16:421 (11) - ^
02:17:127 (3) - add clap at first and last note
02:18:539 (6) - add clap at start
02:18:892 (7) - add clap at middle
02:19:950 (2) - add clap
02:20:656 (1) - add clap at start


+Star
Frill
514 posts
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Topic Starter
Frill
ah.. sorry :o

fixed~
Cyril Scarlet
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Cyril Scarlet
FC してきたじょーｗ

ぜぶら～～～
Randy96
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Randy96
+1
Muya
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Muya
;)
banvi
1,793 posts
Joined June 2009
banvi
Hello.
Thismap is very nice~ :)
下はグリッド以外は私の意見です。違うと思ったらスルーしてください。 ;)
SPOILER
General
緑のタイミング線がずれてますがこれはいいのでしょうか？
また不要な線があったら外してください
Normal
00:33:362 (1,2,3,4,5) 1 grid up?
00:35:127 (5) 1 grid left?
01:06:186 (1,2,3) 1 grid left?
02:12:892 (4) ^
02:45:009 (1) 1 grid down?
Hard
01:42:009 (1) remove new combo?
03:19:597 (5) 1 grid left?
Lunatic
00:09:186 (2) I think ,suddenly jump. it is comfused...
00:22:421 (3,4) 1 grid down?
00:23:303 (6,1) 1 grid up?
00:30:362 (8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) 1 grid left?
00:38:127 (6) 1 grid up?
01:11:833 (9,1) 01:11:127 (5)と重ねるとどうでしょうか？
03:01:597 (8,9,1) 03:00:892 (6) と対称横軸にすると綺麗に見えると思います

ジャンプが爽快です！star~
お互い日本人（かな？）同士がんばりましょう！
Frill
514 posts
Joined March 2010
Topic Starter
Frill

banvi wrote:

SPOILER
General
緑のタイミング線がずれてますがこれはいいのでしょうか？
また不要な線があったら外してください

miccoliasms wrote:

Timing Points(緑の線)は基本的に変えたいところの1tick前に置いた方がいいみたいです。
例えば白からの音を変えたかったら直前の青に引くとか。
>_<

Is it safe?_?

Fixed~
banvi
1,793 posts
Joined June 2009
banvi
あれ、そうですか… :(
I'm sorry.
NatsumeRin
osu! Alumni
4,032 posts
Joined August 2009
NatsumeRin
Red: You must fix this.
Blue: You'd better do sth with this imo.
Green: Just suggestions.

[General]
when you want to add hitsounds on slider's beats, don't want to save time, just choose the slider and press W or E or R... this will change the sound of sliderslider, add hitsounds on every beats plz.

emm... you need a spacing expert to help you find all the small spacing problems. i'm not sure if i can make it. or you can use AIMod to help.

[Normal]
00:25:597 (6) - 1 grid down
00:32:303 (4,1,2,3) - 1 grid up= =, yay this is nazi.
00:41:127 (3) - 1 grid right= =
02:05:127 (4,5,1) - another nazi.. 1 grid right.
02:12:892 (4) - 1 grid left..
03:06:186 (1) - remove new combo

[Hard]
slider tick rate: 0.5
00:15:186 -00:16:774 remove this break, too short.
00:44:303 (1) - remove new combo here, i just think this is a jump orz...
00:44:656 (2,1) - switch new combo
00:46:245 (6) - make it at the same place as (4)?
00:59:303 (1) - 1 grid right= =
01:05:303 (4) - emm.. 1 grid left+ 2 grid up?
02:13:950 (1) - remove new combo?
02:30:892 (1) - ...is there some way can instead of it? break-spinner-break...it's...bad.

[Insane]
HP Drain rate -1/-2.
00:15:186 -00:16:774 remove this break, too short.
00:25:774 (4,5,6) - nazi spacing here. you can turn off grid snap.
00:34:244 (2,3,4) - 1 grid right.
00:36:186 (1) - remove new combo?
01:54:892 (5) - 1 grid down.
03:16:068 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - need a better shape...
IceBeam
osu! Alumni
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Joined December 2009
IceBeam
Hello Frill.

[Normal]
01:34:068 (5) - New combo?
02:13:950 (5) - ^
02:16:068 (1) - Remove new combo?
02:17:127 (2) - New combo?
03:05:127 (6) - ^
03:21:715 (4) - ^

[Hard]
00:35:127 (6) - New combo?
00:52:774 (1) - Remove new combo?
00:53:656 (2) - New combo?
00:54:539 (1) - Remove new combo?
01:03:186 (6) - New combo?
01:07:597 (4) - ^
01:08:303 (1) - Remove new combo?
01:08:833 (2) - New combo?
01:51:186 (4) - ^
01:51:715 (1) - Remove new combo?

[Lunatic]
00:40:774 (6) - New combo?
00:41:127 (1) - Remove new combo?
01:44:480 (6) - New combo?


Good luck.Star~
Clare
530 posts
Joined October 2009
Clare
:3

sorry i don't find any problem OTL

star! XD
Sallad4ever
2,917 posts
Joined October 2009
Sallad4ever
Suwako :D

[General]
- 1.5 second audio lead in is too long. 1 second is enough

[Normal]
02:11:127 (1) ~ 02:20:303 (2) - hmm...the volume of this section is exceptionally high then other section, it's better if you lower the volume to 70% or 80%
Combo mod :
01:35:656 (6) - NC (new combo) this to make it consistent with 00:26:480 (1)
Timing section mod
SPOILER
Delete this unneeded timing section :
00:56:543 
01:59:833
02:05:558
03:15:352
00:50:631 - previous timing section still have soft hitsound setup, so it's better to move this timing section back to the previous red tick then add another timing section in it's place but with kiai time
00:50:719 - move this timing section to the next red tick
01:01:950 - if you want a kiai fountain to appear here, add a timing section in 01:01:421 but without kiai time
01:25:950 - move this back to the previous red tick (to avoid miss sound)
02:44:984 - move this back to the previous red tick
03:07:421 - add another timing section with soft hitsound but no kiai time
03:18:882 - another section where if you want the fountain to appear, you need to add a no kiai time timing section before it
[Hard]
Combo mod :
00:44:303 (1) - remove NC
00:44:656 (8) - add NC then remove NC on 00:44:833 (1)
Timing section mod:
SPOILER
Almost the same with normal, cause the timing section is very similar but you add some timing section in a certain point (beside if I write it down it'll be super duper long :o )
[Insane]
Timing section mod:
SPOILER
Yah same as above :o
Please be careful when adding timing section and always check them throughout all diff

Star
Real1
968 posts
Joined September 2008
Real1
Hi :)

These are suggestions, you dont have to change anything.

[Normal]
It feels slow. Make Overall Difficulty + 1 to make it feel better.
00:47:833 (1) - Maybe sounds better with "Finish" instead of "Whistle"
01:11:833 (1) - Maybe end at 01:12:715
01:28:774 (1) - Maybe start at 01:28:597 (red tick) and make it a new combo?
01:35:656 (6) - New combo?
02:10:774 (8) - New combo?

[Hard]
00:49:068 (1) - Maybe end at 00:49:950 (If you do, add some notes to fit the lyrics)

[Lunatic]
Good!
swish
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Joined February 2009
swish
star~!!
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