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Yellow Zebra - Believe Heart!

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IceBeam
osu! Alumni
1,957 posts
Joined December 2009
IceBeam
Hello Frill.

[Normal]
01:34:068 (5) - New combo?
02:13:950 (5) - ^
02:16:068 (1) - Remove new combo?
02:17:127 (2) - New combo?
03:05:127 (6) - ^
03:21:715 (4) - ^

[Hard]
00:35:127 (6) - New combo?
00:52:774 (1) - Remove new combo?
00:53:656 (2) - New combo?
00:54:539 (1) - Remove new combo?
01:03:186 (6) - New combo?
01:07:597 (4) - ^
01:08:303 (1) - Remove new combo?
01:08:833 (2) - New combo?
01:51:186 (4) - ^
01:51:715 (1) - Remove new combo?

[Lunatic]
00:40:774 (6) - New combo?
00:41:127 (1) - Remove new combo?
01:44:480 (6) - New combo?


Good luck.Star~
Clare
530 posts
Joined October 2009
Clare
:3

sorry i don't find any problem OTL

star! XD
Sallad4ever
2,917 posts
Joined October 2009
Sallad4ever
Suwako :D

[General]
- 1.5 second audio lead in is too long. 1 second is enough

[Normal]
02:11:127 (1) ~ 02:20:303 (2) - hmm...the volume of this section is exceptionally high then other section, it's better if you lower the volume to 70% or 80%
Combo mod :
01:35:656 (6) - NC (new combo) this to make it consistent with 00:26:480 (1)
Timing section mod
SPOILER
Delete this unneeded timing section :
00:56:543 
01:59:833
02:05:558
03:15:352
00:50:631 - previous timing section still have soft hitsound setup, so it's better to move this timing section back to the previous red tick then add another timing section in it's place but with kiai time
00:50:719 - move this timing section to the next red tick
01:01:950 - if you want a kiai fountain to appear here, add a timing section in 01:01:421 but without kiai time
01:25:950 - move this back to the previous red tick (to avoid miss sound)
02:44:984 - move this back to the previous red tick
03:07:421 - add another timing section with soft hitsound but no kiai time
03:18:882 - another section where if you want the fountain to appear, you need to add a no kiai time timing section before it
[Hard]
Combo mod :
00:44:303 (1) - remove NC
00:44:656 (8) - add NC then remove NC on 00:44:833 (1)
Timing section mod:
SPOILER
Almost the same with normal, cause the timing section is very similar but you add some timing section in a certain point (beside if I write it down it'll be super duper long :o )
[Insane]
Timing section mod:
SPOILER
Yah same as above :o
Please be careful when adding timing section and always check them throughout all diff

Star
Real1
968 posts
Joined September 2008
Real1
Hi :)

These are suggestions, you dont have to change anything.

[Normal]
It feels slow. Make Overall Difficulty + 1 to make it feel better.
00:47:833 (1) - Maybe sounds better with "Finish" instead of "Whistle"
01:11:833 (1) - Maybe end at 01:12:715
01:28:774 (1) - Maybe start at 01:28:597 (red tick) and make it a new combo?
01:35:656 (6) - New combo?
02:10:774 (8) - New combo?

[Hard]
00:49:068 (1) - Maybe end at 00:49:950 (If you do, add some notes to fit the lyrics)

[Lunatic]
Good!
swish
1,194 posts
Joined February 2009
swish
star~!!
Garven
osu! Alumni
5,857 posts
Joined January 2010
Garven
[Normal]
00:18:186 (2) - Lower the middle anchor point on this slider so the reverse arrow isn't pointing in a weird direction.
00:25:597 (6) - Check your spacing here.
01:00:186 (1) - A little short...
03:19:244 (1) - That's really soon after a spinner for a normal. I'd end the spinner at 03:18:539.

[Hard]
01:01:950 - Set kiai on this timing point.
03:14:127 (2) - Lower one grid

[Lunatic]
00:04:774 (1) - Check your spacing here.

The maps are fine, though they felt really linear to me with the multitude of straight up/down/left/right combos.
Kecco
908 posts
Joined September 2009
Kecco
•Overall•
Resnap All Notes on all diffs, the notes are unsnapped.

•Lunatic•
01:03:539 (2) - 1 grid down?
02:10:421 (9) - 2 grids up?
02:48:186 (5) - New combo?
02:54:892 (1) - This spinner should start 1/2 later.
03:06:274 (2) - 1 grid left?
03:17:303 (1) - This spinner should start 1/2 later.

•Hard•
Hp Drain Rate + 2?

•Normal•
Circle Size Large? It's just a suggestion.

Star~
IceBeam
osu! Alumni
1,957 posts
Joined December 2009
IceBeam
Ah Frill.

You have requested my mod for this map 2nd time.
I was wondering where's the Star This Map option?

But,I've spotted something new,so here's another modding:

[Normal]
00:57:009 (2) - Oh well,better remove and change to something else.You will need a note at 00:57:715 and 00:58:421 as well.
01:31:245 (1,2) - Remove and follow the suggestion below:
01:31:244 (1) - Add a circle.
01:31:597 (2) - Start slider here and end it at 01:32:127.Also,you'll probably need a note at 01:32:656 (4),so you could make a reverse-slider.
03:22:421 (5) - Fix distance here.

[Hard]
01:57:539 - Add a note?
02:18:539 (2) - Fix spacing here.Use Distance snap,it will do.
03:14:127 (2) - 1 grid down?

[Lunatic]
Haven't spotted something wrong with it,I think it's fine.
Frill
514 posts
Joined March 2010
Topic Starter
Frill
sorry..

viewtopic.php?t=29931

this map is suitable.
IceBeam
osu! Alumni
1,957 posts
Joined December 2009
IceBeam
Better make a request in my queue,I may forget about it.
Beuchi
osu! Alumni
2,288 posts
Joined February 2009
Beuchi
Hi hi!! :)

Here are some suggestions for your map, you don't have to change them if you don't agree with me :P
Let's go!!

~Normal~
02:33:186 (1) - Fix Spacing, this jump is so unintuitive and sudden T.T

~Hard~
- Decrease Overall Difficulty by 1 tick?

~Lunatic~
02:54:892 (1) - Too short spinner imo...
03:17:480 (1) - ^

Suwako is <3 Nice map~ *star*
Frill
514 posts
Joined March 2010
Topic Starter
Frill

Beuchi-chan wrote:

Hi hi!! :)

Here are some suggestions for your map, you don't have to change them if you don't agree with me :P
Let's go!!

~Normal~
02:33:186 (1) - Fix Spacing, this jump is so unintuitive and sudden T.T oh! sorry>.< Fixed~

~Hard~
- Decrease Overall Difficulty by 1 tick? okay~ move down.

~Lunatic~
02:54:892 (1) - Too short spinner imo... this is spinner a start.. 02:54:715 -
03:17:480 (1) - ^ this is spinner a start.. 03:17:303-

The end has not changed.

Suwako is <3 Nice map~ *star*

Thank you Mod and Star^_^
Derekku
COOL DUDE
7,270 posts
Joined March 2009
Derekku
[General]
*Would it be possible to find a higher quality mp3? The current one is decent, but not the greatest...
*It irks me that "heart" isn't capitalized. fffff japanese songs
*Offset feels perfect to 1-2ms in test mode~

[Normal]
03:19:245 (1) - perhaps delete this since it's only one beat after the spinner (instead of two beats after like all previous spinners) which makes it a bit hard to hit..
*Otherwise, a nice easy-ish diff :>

[Hard]
02:19:597 (1) - why not end this on the same tick as the other diffs? o:

[Lunatic]
*Compared to other "Lunatic" difficulties, I think that this should just be named "Insane", but that's just me. :V
00:42:715 (6) - sounded a bit awkward. How about ending this on the white tick and adding a circle on the (now empty) red tick instead?
00:50:656 (3) - new measure; kiai; I'd like to see this as a new combo XP
00:54:186 (6) - same as 00:42, but shorten to the red and add a beat on the white.
01:01:950 (3) - same new combo suggestion
01:13:245 (5) - (nazi) End kiai here like in the other diffs please
01:59:833 (3) - new combo? :p (no kiai here?)
02:11:127 (4) - new combo~
02:30:892 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - I was hoping that these would've been bigger jumps ):
02:56:303 (3) - combo? :v
03:07:597 (3) - ^
03:18:892 (3) - ^ (I modded this diff first, so the same new combo suggestions can go for the other diffs too if you want)

A very fun map <3
Frill
514 posts
Joined March 2010
Topic Starter
Frill

Derekku Chan wrote:

[General]
*Would it be possible to find a higher quality mp3? The current one is decent, but not the greatest... It was not possible to find..
*It irks me that "heart" isn't capitalized. fffff japanese songs oh sorry >.<; Changed~
*Offset feels perfect to 1-2ms in test mode~

[Normal]
03:19:245 (1) - perhaps delete this since it's only one beat after the spinner (instead of two beats after like all previous spinners) which makes it a bit hard to hit..
*Otherwise, a nice easy-ish diff :>

[Hard]
02:19:597 (1) - why not end this on the same tick as the other diffs? o:

[Lunatic]
*Compared to other "Lunatic" difficulties, I think that this should just be named "Insane", but that's just me. :V Okay,Changed
00:42:715 (6) - sounded a bit awkward. How about ending this on the white tick and adding a circle on the (now empty) red tick instead?
00:50:656 (3) - new measure; kiai; I'd like to see this as a new combo XP
00:54:186 (6) - same as 00:42, but shorten to the red and add a beat on the white.
01:01:950 (3) - same new combo suggestion
01:13:245 (5) - (nazi) End kiai here like in the other diffs please
01:59:833 (3) - new combo? :p (no kiai here?)
02:11:127 (4) - new combo~
02:30:892 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - I was hoping that these would've been bigger jumps ):
02:56:303 (3) - combo? :v
03:07:597 (3) - ^
03:18:892 (3) - ^ (I modded this diff first, so the same new combo suggestions can go for the other diffs too if you want)

A very fun map <3
Another..Fixed~
Thank you Star and mod >,<
abalee
osu! Alumni
1,994 posts
Joined June 2008
abalee
Hard:
02:08:305 (1,2,3,4) - , 02:59:129 (1,2,3,4) - : IMO it is better if the notes place like this.


Others' are fine.
Frill
514 posts
Joined March 2010
Topic Starter
Frill

abalee wrote:

Hard:
02:08:305 (1,2,3,4) - , 02:59:129 (1,2,3,4) - : IMO it is better if the notes place like this.
[attachment=0:bb5f3]beats.jpg[/attachment:bb5f3]

Others' are fine.
oh! It's a good idea.
Fixed~

Star and mod thank you >.<
abalee
osu! Alumni
1,994 posts
Joined June 2008
abalee
Should be fine now.
Shinxyn
osu! Alumni
1,179 posts
Joined June 2008
Shinxyn
I see nazi not worth popping >-<~

Ranked~
Sallad4ever
2,917 posts
Joined October 2009
Sallad4ever
It's Ranked :)

Congratz Frill ;)
Kecco
908 posts
Joined September 2009
Kecco
I modded this map :P
Congratz :3
Frill
514 posts
Joined March 2010
Topic Starter
Frill
Thank you~ :)
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