1. Liselsia (1.56 stars, 139 notes)
2. Phorni (4.89 stars, 369 notes)
3. Tortinita (3.84 stars, 236 notes)

Sakura301 wrote:

[Liselsia]
02:52:795 (1) - Awkward spinner but i haven't thought a better idea T T

[Phorni]
02:35:222 (1,2,3,4,5) - This section feels like it would be better with a spinner waiting for samipale's decision.
02:39:936 (6) - Try to move exactly below (2), as it's right now like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8315 fixed.
02:41:651 (8) - ^ http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8316 fixed.
02:46:794 (6) - ^ http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8319 fixed.

Ok that's all, really just nazi stuff that i just randomly saw while pointing 1 thing out hehe, nice map! +Star

wmfchris wrote:

Aimed for spacing

[Phorni]
0:07:580 (4,5) (4) right 1 grid, (5) right 3 grid (5) 1 grid right.
0:09:509 (7) stack with (6) or put it away? no.
0:54:508 (5) up 1 grid fixed.
1:49:579 (6) suggestion: up 1/2 (This is 0.5) grid? (Fit into the grid) fixed.
2:29:436 (3) spacing nothing wrong.

[Tort]
0:50:009 (4) spacing, right 1 grid nothing wrong according to distance spacing.
0:51:295 (6,7,8) spacing reduce 1 grid? no.

nice, star~

LKs wrote:

Liselsia

[00:43:366] whistle不好 哎。。？没改= =
[01:03:938] 停在 [01:05:223] 这个是为了压钢琴的最后一下。Tortinita难度同。
[01:09:080] 向下一格 fixed.
[01:11:866] whistle? good.
[01:13:366] 去掉whistle no.
[01:15:938] whistle ，和前面呼应 fixed.
[01:45:509] 去掉whistle fixed.
[02:26:733] 去掉whistle fixed.

Tortinita

[01:03:938] 停在 [01:05:223]
[01:11:866] whistle? good.
[02:06:080] 去掉whistle fixed.

Phorni

np

然后建议用无声的sliderslide.wav 好主意。

star

1. 紅線前貌似不能有note. 可以在design里移到0秒前 然後在那根長白線那裡狠狠地按下use current time.

1. 00:29:438 (4) - 這裡的slidertick很違和
2. 01:03:938 (2) - 加一個back
3. 01:26:223 (2) - back一次 然後把綠線移到01:26:652
4. 01:34:795 (2) - 加一個back

1. 01:26:223 (2) - back一下 然後把綠線移到01:26:652
2. 01:37:366 (2) - 這個關了Grid Snap放一下
3. 01:50:009 (8) - 移到01:50:009感覺更好點
4. 01:53:438 (4) - ^ 移到白線上

1. 00:23:009 (T) - 加一個circle
2. 00:58:258 (T) - 這裡可以考慮把音量的跨度弄再大點

Colin Hou wrote:

[General]:

1. 紅線前貌似不能有note. 可以在design里移到0秒前 然後在那根長白線那裡狠狠地按下use current time.

唔，这个不是很清楚，但是我按照你说的方法试了后出了个巨大问题就是每音乐声了T T……所以先等待进一步确认吧orz

[Liselsia]:

1. 00:29:438 (4) - 這裡的slidertick很違和 试过调音量改不理想，而custom位置又被占据了……所以搁置在那里的。我也觉得别扭，但是有点不知所措。
2. 01:03:938 (2) - 加一個back no.这里是对钢琴音。
3. 01:26:223 (2) - back一次 然後把綠線移到01:26:652 back感觉无意义（歌词到even in the rain结束），kiai问题fixed。
4. 01:34:795 (2) - 加一個back 对准钢琴声，未改。

[Tortinita]:

1. 01:26:223 (2) - back一下 然後把綠線移到01:26:652 back感觉无意义（歌词到even in the rain结束），kiai问题fixed。
2. 01:37:366 (2) - 這個關了Grid Snap放一下 fixed.
3. 01:50:009 (8) - 移到01:50:009感覺更好點 。。。？
4. 01:53:438 (4) - ^ 移到白線上 good.

[Phorni]:

1. 00:23:009 (T) - 加一個circle
2. 00:58:258 (T) - 這裡可以考慮把音量的跨度弄再大點

waiting for samipale= =

好歌好譜 Star~

Colin Hou wrote:

[Tortinita]的01:50:009 (8)就是让它和上一个note间距变成1/4拍 :3 应该是我复制那个circle时 手抖没复制成功 Orz

H-boy wrote:

Liselsia
00:01:580(2) - whistle no.
00:50:438(2) - 开始处whistle no.
00:59:223(1) - finish(减20%音量)或clap no.
01:06:080(1) - whistle开始处 good.
01:39:938(4) - clap no.
01:52:795(3) - ^ no.
02:21:509(1) - finish(减20%音量)或clap no.

Tortinita
01:00:509(5) - 开始处whistle good.

Phorni
00:59:222(1) - 开始处finish no.

Starrrr~

impossiblexu wrote:

[General]
前几个转盘还是静音比较好（spinnerbonus音效有点不和谐）
改了。

[Liselsia]
感觉有的地方比较空旷 因为一定程度上参照了游戏= =……
00:22:795(5):Whistle good
01:23:223(1):转盘01:22:795开始？可以。
01:35:652:加一Circle 加了，但我保留意见。
01:51:938(2):从slider底下移开 why?
01:52:795:感觉换成一个slider返回一次到01:53:652比较好 不。
01:56:438(1,2):连续两个红线上的Circle？感觉不太容易理解 可能是这样，但觉得用slider更别扭，为保持节奏就如此了。
02:02:223:加一Circle no.
02:53:366(5):移到1的位置 no.

[Tortinita]
间距有点小 其他的就没什么了 可能是我note密度下大了。

[Phorni]
01:53:651(10):移到01:53:865然后在这里加个Circle
02:06:508(1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8):听起来不太好
02:34:044(5):移到02:33:829

由samipale来决定.
Great map!!~STAR~

soulfear wrote:

不错的图,其他难度都没啥问题.
[Phorni]
为什么要用8OA,这歌不快,8OA打起来很不舒服,建议减1OA.

Leorda wrote:

NI HAO SEXY!

[Liselsia]
01:22:795 (x) - Add note? ok.
01:42:509 (4) - Add 1 repeating slider? no.
01:53:652 (x) - Add note? no.
02:52:366 (5) - Please don't stack with 5 ...why?

[Tortinita]
Fine~

[Phorni]
Fine~

I can't find something wrong
Nice song
STAR

Sakura301 wrote:

02:35:222 (1,2,3,4,5) - This section feels like it would be better with a spinner

Colin Hou wrote:

00:23:009 (T) - 加一個circle
00:58:258 (T) - 這裡可以考慮把音量的跨度弄再大點

H-boy wrote:

00:59:222(1) - 开始处finish

impossiblexu wrote:

01:53:651(10):移到01:53:865然后在这里加个Circle 节奏变古怪了..
02:06:508(1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8):听起来不太好 我听起来还行...
02:34:044(5):移到02:33:829 yay,fixed

soulfear wrote:

为什么要用8OA,这歌不快,8OA打起来很不舒服,建议减1OA.

Sallad4ever wrote:

Halo Rin
Calming song

[General]
- I think that you could use some more finish hitsound, it'll good if you use it at some heavy beat part in the chorus, like in 00:59:223 (1)

[Liselsia]
01:26:223 (2) - extend this to next white tick? no.
01:41:866 (3) - better unstack this, because of the stack it can be too hard for novice to different it with 1/1 beat i think they should learn XD
01:45:080 (4) - the beat here kinda asking for a slider ( because of the high sound in the music), maybe swap 4 with 5 ? make volume lower.

[Tortinita]
01:26:223 (2) - extend this to next white tick? no.

[Phorni]
The slider speed is too fast for this kind of song, but so far only me complaining about this.

Nice and calming song
Good Map
Star~

Thunderstorm wrote:

Hey
[Easy]
00:20:652 (3) - i think it can confuse newbies why?

[Normal]
00:38:438 (7,1) - swap new combo? no. new combo on the long white line.
00:52:152 (9,1) - ^ ^
02:18:080 (1,2,3) - spacing a small jump here.

[Hard]
00:08:652 (4,5) - don't change spacing mid-combo. I suggest space it normally, or, if you don't agree, new combo it it's fine. sorry.
00:45:294 (11,1) - swap new combo? no. new combo on the long white line.
00:52:151 - ^ ^

Sekuyi wrote:

Offset should be 956. Don't forget to resnap all notes and recalculate slider lengths

[Liselsia]
- everything fine

[Tortinita]
- 01:04:170 ~ (3) maybe one more beat to 01:05:670 ? no.
- 02:26:670 ~ (6) and (7): maybe place both sliders a little bit different ? the crossing doesn't look nice :s no.
- 02:42:098 ~ spinner should end at 02:45:527 ...why? i just want a short break= =

[Phorni]
- 00:04:813 ~ spinner beginning should be at 00:04:598. spinner end is ok! fixed.
- 00:08:670 ~ (4) and (5): spacing not spacing. it's fine.
- 00:20:456 ~ should be like this:
what's this.
- 00:24:509 ~ hm..... maybe a spinner here? or a very long "snaky" slider?^^ samipale is considering about it.

Nice maps and song, have a star~

Sekuyi wrote:

- 00:20:456 ~ should be like this:

Sekuyi wrote:

- 00:24:509 ~ hm..... maybe a spinner here? or a very long "snaky" slider?^^

Xero_HT wrote:

Hello again, NatsumeRin = )

[General]
Kiai Time should be the same on all diffs~ fixed. my fault= =

[Easy]
02:35:223 - Add a spinner here (too many breaks IMO) ? add one here.
02:42:080 - ^ this time no. i still need a break here= =

That's all.
Good map, but please map something english again soon = ). I really like your Nightwish map. thanks~

Shinxyn wrote:

xD xD so many rejected mods, good~good, my turn to try~!

Liselsia-
plays fair, kinda Easy+
01:06:080 (1) - remove the whistle (from start)...? or add whistle to 01:02:652 (slider start), doesn't seem to fit here added whistle to 01:02:652
01:41:223 (2) - missed a clap here? yay... my fault
02:30:938 (5) - D: remove whistle from the whistle+clap start please fixed.

Tortinita-
00:36:723 (2,4) - add whistles? to get rid of the whistle gap from 00:33:938... or just get rid of whistles on that slider good.
00:59:652 (2,3,4) - nazi spacing! xD orz. fixed.
02:06:080 (1) - this note just seems.. too extra imo, maybe remove? no. want it there to fit the music
Good

Phorni-
A bit too much whistles imo, but no biggie (though I don't like the whistle+claps.. its how this map's paced ><;) i'm a whistle fan XD
00:58:901 (6) - down a tick~ make the curve a bit better :3 fixed.
02:05:222 (3) - hmm following the rapid whistle pace, add whistles to the repeat and end of this slider? Pretty good lol
Pretty good

I felt you coulda used a lot of quieter finish hitsounds to match the music a bit, but a bit of extra work, its fine try to use some, but i don't like soft-finish much.
Not a fan of slider tick sounds, oh well me too, but this song... well, i can't find a better way.

dksslqj wrote:

[Phorni]
01:22:794 (7) - add new combo fixed.
02:47:222 (7) - △ fixed.

just.

I like this song very much!
+star~

Colin Hou wrote:

触手铃攒星这么快的 泪流满面...

fartownik wrote:

[Liselsia]

01:41:223 (2,3) - Stacking notes like this in an Easy is confusing. Please unstack it. kinds of Easy+. i think it's fine.
02:52:366 (5) - Place at the vanishing (1)'s place? also good, but i prefer to put it in the middle= =

[Torinita]

Add the spinner at the end? (The same as in [Phorni]) no.

[Phorni]

Nothing.

Nice. +star