1. Easy (0,53 stars, 142 notes)
2. Hard (4,04 stars, 303 notes)
3. Insane (4,66 stars, 473 notes)
4. Normal (2,8 stars, 228 notes)

orioncomet wrote:

BPM: 130
Offset: 49

If you want to use BPM as 65, I think you should change silder speed to 0.5x better then use Red timing selection ;w;
but w/e you like, and If you don't mind a few offset, though..

Matma Rex wrote:

About the timing - it's fine. Technically BPMs 65 and 130 with 0.5x are the same, but the first part of song is very different than the other in terms of speed and mood. The second red section is to make the white lines align well

However, if you want to do it anyway, just place a green 0.5x section over the first red one (on the same time).

These are mostly suggestions, not commands. You don't have to agree with them all.

[Normal]
01:13:434 (4,1) - you should use the same spacing as before, currently it can give an impression that these are 1/4 apart. It is "using" same distance snap... Its just the change of bpm . Anyways, changed

01:19:896 (4,1) - I have a weird feeling that these should be spaced as if they were 2/1 apart. It just looks bad now :/
01:27:281 (1,1) - and again, as earlier, use the same spacing as before.
Along with the changes from above, i did some changes and forgot how this part was...

01:47:588 (1,1,1) - spacing looks bad, even if it's technically correct. Think about spacing sliders as a whole, not only about their beginnings and ends - the note in the middle should IMO be a bit lower and to the left (2 grids?). Hmm... Actually, i cant go further than that unless i break distance snap... And... i dont know how to think that way... D:

02:12:511 (4,5) - spacing (dist. snap messes up due to BPM change) Why the hell i have a 2x section here?. Anyways, fixed

02:26:357 (4,1) - again, that thing about spacing as in the previous section. Or maybe just stack them? But... it looks ugly... D:
03:05:127 (1,2) - make them not touch? It looks bad (IMO, I'm a nazi about that ) Lol...

[Hard]
00:24:511 (4) - new combo?
02:00:281 (3,4) - make them not touch?
Done them all

[Insane]
00:51:278 (4) - why isn't it lined up with the previous 3 notes? Me being a jerk



The map is IMO almost p-bubble'able now, but you need at least 8 stars first. Once you get them, you can post in my queue again and I'll do it (disregard the rule about no more than 5 at once). I think ill take more time hitsounding than gettting those 8 stars...

Oh also, you could delete the .osb from the folder, but it's probably gonna reappear later anyway, so I wouldn't bother with full upload.


PS. Sorry, I suck at hitsounding stuff myself, can't help you D:

i cant go further than that unless i break distance snap

Senbon wrote:

Feel free to take or leave any suggestions.

[General]

Delete unused .osb and full submit.
I gotta say I like all the songs you map.
Timing is fine. o_0

[Normal]

00:00:049 (1,1,1,1) - I'd remove the new combos... Done
01:21:281 (1) - Cut down two repeats and fill in with notes on white ticks? Not really understanding what you mean...
01:37:203 (2) - Whistle on end?
01:39:049 (2) - ^
01:44:819 (2) - Whistle?
01:46:665 (2) - ^
01:47:588 (1) - Whistle on first repeat?
01:50:819 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:52:204 (2) - Whistle?
01:54:050 (2) - ^
01:54:973 (1) - Whistle on all?
01:56:819 (1) - ^
Done them all, i like them
02:02:358 (1) - Remove new combo.
02:03:281 (6) - New combo.
I prefer to leave them as they are.
02:13:665 (1) - Finish?Done

[Hard]

01:21:281 (1) - Cut down two repeats and fill in with notes on white ticks?
01:37:434 (3) - Whistle?
01:39:280 (3) - ^
01:44:819 (2) - ^
01:46:665 (2) - ^
01:47:588 (3) - Whistle on first repeat and end?
01:52:204 (2) - Whistle on start?
01:55:896 (2) - Whistle?
01:57:742 (2) - ^
02:13:665 (1) - Finish?
Done most of them. Changed some to keep consistency with easy

[Insane]

00:51:278 (4) - Move next to (3)? Intentional... Might consider putting them like that if more people suggests it.
01:44:819 (4) - Whistle?
01:46:665 (4) - ^
01:47:586 (1) - Whistle on first repeat and end?
01:52:202 (2) - Whistle on start?
01:55:894 (2) - Whistle?
01:57:740 (2) - ^
02:13:894 (1) - Finish?

wmfchris wrote:

[general]
2:15:509 End kiai here? Done

[normal]
3:00:050 (4,5) will it be too near to the margin?
3:12:511 (1) ^ It doesnt really goes offmap when is being played. But changed anyways
This overall spacing is really nice. However how come most of the accents are on small slider ticks? @@ Umm.. if you were to give examples, i think i would understand it more, or be more specific...

[hard]
2:13:665 (x) there should be a drum sound in the song. Add a note here? Umm... No?

[insane]
0:48:509 (1,2,3,4) Even the spacing among these four circles? Will be taken into consideration.
1:06:971 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) uneven spacing How so? i believe all those notes have 1.6x distance spacing
3:25:202 (2) This jump is nearly "TAG jump" O_O, maybe too far?
3:28:894 (2) ^
3:29:817 (3) ^
3:32:586 (2) ^ (<- this is just suggestion) Intentional, but ill consider making them closer if more people suggests it.

star~

Umm.. if you were to give examples, i think i would understand it more, or be more specific...

How so? i believe all those notes have 1.6x distance spacing

• • Delete the osb file, then "Full submission"

xxheroxx wrote:

• Delete the osb file, then "Full submission"

James2250 wrote:

seeing as you sb'ed some lyrics deleting the osb file would be a bad idea..its fine there
Im still not quite sure if lyrics is correct yet, theres like 2 or 3 verses that i would like to hear confirmation from other people...

Normal:
03:22:434 (4) - add whistle to repeat
03:25:204 (3) - add whistle to the end
03:26:127 (4) - ^
03:29:819 (4) - add whistle to repeat
03:32:588 (3) - add whistle to the end
03:33:511 (4) - ^
I knew there was something missing... >_>

Hard:
02:12:511 (4,5) - spacing
03:31:204 (5,6,7) - ^
Done... i think? Didnt really notice the spacing problem.

Insane:
make stack leniency the same as the other 2 difficulties
hp drain is too high, lower it by 2 ticks
Done
some of these spacing things might be intentional but will just mention them
00:47:355 (3,4) - spacing Nobody had noticed it >_>, but done Lol
00:51:279 (4) - align with othersOkay... too much people already, so done.
00:53:125 (3,4) - spacing I think its done too?
00:57:971 (2,3) - ^ Intentional, so no.
I could point out other spacing things but im sure they are jumps so yeah..

PM me after fixes and I will pubble

Beuchi-chan wrote:

Hi hi!!

Here are some suggestions for your map, you don't have to change them if you don't agree with me
Let's go!!

~Normal~
01:42:050 (1) - Delete New Combo. Done
02:28:896 (1,1) - ^
02:31:665 (1,1) - ^ Kinda done... They were weird suggestions

~Hard~
01:50:819 (1) - Delete New Combo.
02:28:896 (1,1) - ^
02:31:665 (1,1) - ^ Same as normal...
03:10:434 (8) - New Combo. Did new combo at 03:10:665 - instead of where you suggested
03:18:050 (9) - ^ Done

~Insane~
- Decrease HP Drain Rate a bit, the HPbar goes down to the red part on slowdowns even when you have full combo D: I have seen maps worse ;D, But, i think it was okay at 10, it used to be at 10, and i was able to pass it perfectly

00:48:048 (4) - Fix spacing.
00:53:817 (4) - New Combo. Try to not make jumps on the same combo, please.
00:58:663 (3) - ^ I think ill keep them like they are for now...

00:59:586 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Looks so messy >.<
01:03:279 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^ (You can clearly see the pattern form on editor, but in play mode it looks really messy because of the high OD) Intentional... its not like i cared that people could see i made a pattern.

01:51:278 (1) - Delete New Combo.
01:52:202 (2) - New Combo.
Ill keep it for now... And also... i wonder why you didnt suggested the same for hard.

02:15:048 (10) - ^
02:51:048 (5) - ^
Done

Not bad, but there are some crazy jumps on Insane (those at the end of the song) that worry me a bit, not a big deal, though, I've seen that kind of jumps on other maps so keep going!! Good luck with this ^^ *star*
My intention too, i wanted to make the last part of the map much harder than the rest. Although i may change them a bit, the designs kinda bug me a bit, so they may end up closer when its done. Also, i was able to fc this part several times, so... Lol

Gens wrote:

Just one thing that bothers me is the unnecessary transparency in almost every lyric image... it isn't that much, but still, i'd appreciate if you cut it down a bit. Arghh i already knew that these was a problem... but was too lazy too cut them... Oh well, when i feel like it ill do it. Just not now.

[All Difficulties]

02:22:204 (1,2,3,4) - Huh, the change from (4) to the next combo is a bit awkward. Maybe edit these so it looks more like 02:27:973 (1,2)?
Umm... These two parts follows a different part of the song... so... they shouldnt... >_> ANyways, they looks good to me

[Hard & Insane]

00:45:050 (4,5,1) - There's something weird with combos here. Maybe switch (4) to new combo? You are right.

~ ~ ~

There, there. This made me feel useless :3

sonnyc wrote:

Hi

General
- The place where 65 bpm turns to 130 bpm has 2ms difference in [Normal] and [Hard] Oh my god, big thanks.
- I prefer you to check "Display storyboard in front of combo fire" Ops? I never play with that combo fire thing so i never know

Normal
00:06:972 (1) - None I prefer a whistle
02:54:050 (1) - De New combo De = ?, In any case, if you mean to kill it, i i guess i prefer a new combo here... >_>

Hard
02:38:357 (3) - Clap in the end, instead whistle I prefer whistle...
02:56:357 (5) - Whistle Dont remember if i did this or not... Lol

Insane
01:40:202 (Stream) - I prefer to make a slider stream until 01:41:932, and then start the stream
02:41:240 (Stream) - ^ I dont really like those streams of sliders... so.. no
02:56:355 (5) - Whistle Oh remember now, i didnt put it in hard neither... so same for insane.
03:34:432 (x) - Add note No thanks

Star~

Matma Rex wrote:

I'll crop these lyrcs for you.

There:

ErufenRito wrote:

I havent done them before because i thought that if i were to do it, i would have to give different starting points for every single of them >_>

Derekku Chan wrote:

[General]
*(nazi) Have the first kiai section end at 01:14:125 on all diffs. Right now it ends in the middle of sliders on two of the diffs. Oops... Done
*AiMod comes up with snapping issues, so please resnap all notes on all diffs. (make sure 1/4th snap is on, though) Ops again... I could swear i snapped them all after a slight offset change... Bleh screw me
*Offsets feel spot-on. => I hope so... all my maps always had a timing issue :3

[Normal]
*Expected this diff to have the long sliders at the start like the other diffs. The single notes are a bit ambiguous (with regard to time) with the slow bpm and soft music. Umm...
*Add a finish to the two spinners, please. Done

01:06:048 (4,5,1) - Could you space these a bit closer together?
01:10:663 (1,2,3,4,1) - ^ Done both of them...
01:27:278 (1) - Perhaps remove a repeat from this so that the next slider is a bit easier to hit?
01:40:202 (1) - ^
01:42:048 (2) - ^ Umm... i think i will keep them
02:05:125 (4,5,1) - Could you space these a bit closer together?
02:09:740 (1,2,3,4) - ^
02:26:355 (4,1) - ^ Done
02:33:509 (1,2, and pretty much everything after this) - ^
02:33:740 (2,3,1,2) - Perhaps remove a repeat from this so that the next slider is a bit easier to hit?
*More spacing/repeats after this...
*I really think that this difficulty is too hard to be the easiest. Could you please add an Easy to the set? This could be toned down to make it easier, but that would require changing all of your repeating sliders, deleting some 1/2 note streams, etc. that I think are fine as a _normal_ difficulty. It's up to you, I suppose.
I guess ill do an easier difficulty...


[Hard]
*Finish the spinners please
02:41:240 (1) - Having this one with less repeats than the others could be a bit confusing.. Thats what i think too... was waiting to get a feedback about this to change... and so... its changed.

[Insane]
00:58:663 (3) - The 'pop' on the end of this sounds weird. If you were trying to silence it, then use the soft sampleset instead. ;x Done
03:35:125 (1) - starts on the red tick in the other diffs... (and finish this please) Ops again...
*I love the patterns and such on this diff. They're so... perfect *__*; Thanks!

Nice job, overall, but the main issue that I have with the map is the lack of an easier diff. D:

Shulin wrote:

General:

-- Find a better BG. Why? Umm... It was hard to pick a bg for this... and i finally decided to just put the album's cover, so if you have a better image, i will check it and consider it, but im sure you dont.

Easy:

00:00:049 (1,2,3,4) - Use slider! Easy players will be confused when to click here imo. Done i guess...
00:07:433 (2,3,4) - ^
00:16:202 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Compared to the rest of the map this is pretty boring XD Hope its better now?
01:14:355 to 01:28:663 -- Is this x0.5 really necessary? The slider velocity is already pretty low =/ Well the other difficulties had this x0.5 sldier speed... so... i guess they are okay... >_> or not...

Normal:

00:47:586 (5,1) - Spacing. Done
01:06:048 (4,5,1) - Too close? Actually, i think its fine like this.
01:29:125 (1) - Move this further away so it's less clustered. Done
02:05:125 (4,5,1) - Feels too close again.

Hard:

01:25:432 (2) - New combo? Done

Insane

Looks good.

~ Star.

RandomJibberish wrote:

General:
BG?
If you use it, turn of Letterbox udring breaks because it looks weird.
I guess ill use it, It looks much better than the one i had. Although i must say that in insane i drew some circles based on the old bg circles... so they may look awkward now lol

Only problems I could find:
Hard
01:26:817 (2,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - This stack is really long and broke the flow for me. Make it go somewhere~ Aww i actually liked this stack, ill wait for more opinions then.

Insane
01:21:278 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - These close spaced runs feel odd with the High OD, but I guess you don't need to change it But giving it some large spacing wouldnt fit much either..

01:40:202 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,1) - This stream is pretty awkward, completely reversing the more jumpy feel of the map. Same goes for the other streams Completely intentional... x:

Nice map, I like the spacing fluctuations (particularly in Insane) and the speed changes work slightly better than in most maps
Star'd

TheVileOne wrote:

Easy

02:45:278 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - Maybe turn these into strings of 3. Spread 3 out and add a stacked note on the previous white tick before each 3. Care to explain a bit more? Although i currently have changed to make them non stacked... I wasnt sure about them at first neither... But id like to hear your idea.

The reason for this suggestion. It’s an abnormally long time to wait to hit a stacked note. It’s really awkward to me.

Normal

00:42:971 (1,2) – Is there any reason why you can’t distance snap these? Why do the ends have to be together? You have a lot of these through this mode. They aren’t wrong. They are just a tad harder to hit than if they were snapped. And because theres nothing exactly wrong with this, they are staying. Anyways, its a good way to make players learn about stacked objects... Lol

Insane

03:06:971 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Confusing spacing. (Probably will be alright) You should check other maps too, this is not the only one that uses this kind of... "squares"

03:24:509 (1) – Might interfere with some skins In what way? Made it more on screen anyways...



The maps are good enough for a star. I hope this gets ranked.

ErufenRito wrote:

TheVileOne wrote:

Easy

02:45:278 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - Maybe turn these into strings of 3. Spread 3 out and add a stacked note on the previous white tick before each 3. Care to explain a bit more? Although i currently have changed to make them non stacked... I wasnt sure about them at first neither... But id like to hear your idea.

The reason for this suggestion. It’s an abnormally long time to wait to hit a stacked note. It’s really awkward to me.


And thanks