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PNGN6 - Renai Jiyuu Shoujo (Short Ver.)

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Vicho
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Vicho
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on sábado, 01 de mayo de 2010 at 21:00:53

Artist: PNGN6
Title: Renai Jiyuu Shoujo (Short Ver.)
Source: Penguin Musume Heart
Tags: Kataoka Azusa Ise Mariya Nanjou Yoshino Nogawa Sakura Kadowaki Mai Hidaka Rina Nico Nico Douga Kytoxid Dangaard IOSYS
BPM: 166
Filesize: 9135kb
Play Time: 01:26
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy Dan (1,23 stars, 68 notes)
  2. Hard (4,85 stars, 201 notes)
  3. Kytoxid's Insane (5 stars, 265 notes)
  4. Normal (4,07 stars, 132 notes)
Download: PNGN6 - Renai Jiyuu Shoujo (Short Ver.)
Download: PNGN6 - Renai Jiyuu Shoujo (Short Ver.) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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3 April 2010 - Re-Download Please (Skin Deleted)

Penguin Musume Heart OP :D

I'll map the ED1 & ED2 in the future

Easy by Dangaard
Normal by Me
Hard by Me
Insane by Kytoxid

Thanks Dangaard and Kytoxid ^^
Last edited by Vicho , edited 36 times in total.
Kotomi-chan
139 posts
Joined April 2009
Kotomi-chan
Me gusto la song x) aunque el video es raro LOL ¿Puedo intentar hacer una dif? :D
Star! x3
Vicho
887 posts
Joined May 2009
Topic Starter
Vicho

Kotomi-chan wrote:

Me gusto la song x) aunque el video es raro LOL ¿Puedo intentar hacer una dif? :D
Star! x3
intentar hacer una diff? Sii xD
Gracias :3
Kytoxid
osu! Alumni
1,369 posts
Joined April 2009
Kytoxid
My apologies for the delay.

Download: PNGN6 - Renai Jiyuu Shoujo (Short Ver.) (Vicho-kun) [Kytoxid's Insane].osu
Fenya
1,655 posts
Joined September 2009
Fenya
Ame el mpa *-----*
y estrella ^^
eso es todo lo que puedo dar xD
Ignacio_old
378 posts
Joined August 2009
Ignacio_old
:D
orioncomet
osu! Alumni
2,684 posts
Joined May 2009
orioncomet
IRC modded offset -6ms and some spacing error on [Hard] and [Normal] diff

Starrr ~
Kenezz
osu! Alumni
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Joined September 2009
Kenezz
Bueno aqui te dejo los archivos del skin
Agregalos si te gustan :B
http://www.megaupload.com/?d=X2KSFX8W

Staar
Jesss
814 posts
Joined November 2008
Jesss
Hola! bueno no me voy a complicar la vida hablando inglés xDD...a lo que voy...a Moddear! xD

[General]
Timing: Correcto
le veo correcto los detalles técnicos...

Bueno, ahora a checar las diffs.

[Normal]
SPOILER
00:33:456 (8) - Alínealo con el final del slider...es un poco incómodo hacer ese pequeño movimiento.
00:46:468 (1) - Moverlo un cuadrito (nivel 3) a la izquierda
00:53:697 (2) - ^ pero hacia arriba
01:02:553 (3,4) - Alínealo con el final del anterior slider y distribuye un poco más equitativamente el espacio que hay entre el slider y los siguientes 2 combo.
01:06:167 (4) - Sube un cuadro (nivel 3)

Conclusión: Buena composición, pero fíjate en la simetría de los items...en eso los modders molestan más en las diff. más fáciles.

[Hard]
SPOILER
-00:10:324 (7,8,9) - Duda dudosa ♪♫...pondrás esos circles de esa forma intencionadamente? es que vi unos sliders ligeramente torcidos en los siguientes combo. Alínealos**
-00:14:480 (7) - cambia la posición de ese slider...pinta a ser muy random.
-00:33:276 (2) - Alinear con slider 1
-Conclusión: Discute con un MAT/BAT acerca de los errores que arroja el AImod...estéticamente el map es fácil de entender, pero hay usuarios que toman demasiado en serio lo del AImod

**Recomendación

[Insane]
SPOILER
-00:55:505 (1) - correr 2 grids (nivel 3) a la derecha
-01:26:950 (1) - este spinner debe finalizar en un beat blanco.
-01:26:950 (1) - bajale el volumen a cero al final**

**Recomendación

Qué buen map! Suerte!! ya te dí estrellita
Vicho
887 posts
Joined May 2009
Topic Starter
Vicho
Todo está fixeado. muchas gracias j35u5891221 :3
TTTTTTTTTTTT
1,116 posts
Joined August 2009
TTTTTTTTTTTT
First of all
need make a easy diff?

Normal
reduce volume?

Hard
reduce volume?
00:45:565(3) - add a note?

Insane
00:05:987~00:23:336 reduce volume?

star~
Beuchi
osu! Alumni
2,288 posts
Joined February 2009
Beuchi
Hi hi!! :)

Here are some suggestions for your map, you don't have to change them if you don't agree with me :P
Let's go!!

~All Diffs~
- I really think you need an Easy. Normal is 4.00 stars so it will appear as Hard :/
- The spinnercircle needs to be 666x666. Also it doesn't look nice being totally transparent >.<
- Delete the .osb file :3

~Normal~
- Decrease HP Drain Rate and Overall Difficulty a bit?

00:26:589 (5) - New Combo. Try to not make combos of 9-10 circles for easiest diffs.
00:32:733 (7) - ^
00:38:155 (7) - ^
00:46:468 (1) - Delete New Combo?
01:05:264 (3) - The reverse arrow of the slider is almost hidden here, invert the slider to fix it :3
01:09:601 (8,1) - New Combo on (8) and delete New Combo on (1).
01:22:613 (1) - Delete New Combo.

~Hard~
00:10:324 (7) - New Combo.
00:15:023 (8) - ^
00:37:974 (7) - ^?
00:46:468 (1) - Delete New Combo.
01:04:902 (2) - Fix spacing here.
01:14:661 (8) - New Combo.

~Kytoxid's Insane~
00:21:529 (9,10) - Fix spacing. Compare this with (4,5) spacing :P
00:24:782 (7) - New Combo.
00:41:589 (7) - ^
00:53:697 (9) - ^

Nice map and song, good luck!! *star*
xierbaliti
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xierbaliti
Wow I love this song
Very good map. :3 So just some suggestions:

-Normal-
HP-1 or HP-2
01:21:167 (1) - add whistle at this slider's end
01:22:613 (1) - ^
01:24:059 (1) - add whistle at this slider's start&end
01:25:505 (3) - ^


-Hard-
00:15:746 (11) - move it 1 grid up
01:08:697 (1) - I don't like this jump.a bit hard to read for me.
01:09:240 - add a circle here? like this:
SPOILER

-Kytoxid-
00:46:468 (1) - add finish?
01:03:276 (1,2) - use soft-finish? Soft-finish is seems better than normal's. :)
01:15:384 (1) - remove clap
01:15:746 (2) - add clap
01:16:107 (3) - remove clap
01:16:468 (4) - add clap

*star*
Sallad4ever
2,917 posts
Joined October 2009
Sallad4ever
Halo Vicho kun

Here's my gift for you :)
The hitsound by all means are suggestion only :D

Normal
I'm afraid there will be any MAT/BAT complain about the 4 star rating :o
Maybe decrease OD and HP by 3 or can I make an easy diff for you?
01:21:167 (1,1) - use finish on goth the slider end


Hard
00:20:806 (8) - new combo
00:29:480 (1,2,3) - nice one :D I got careless and hit 3 first :o
00:43:035 (3) - new combo
01:00:203 (6,7) - whistle ?
01:11:770 (4) - ^


Kytoxyd's insane
00:13:215 (1,2,3,4) - my favorite pattern :oops:
00:31:830 (1) - remove new combo ?
00:32:733 (13) - new combo


00:57:312 this part of the song cant leave my head
What ? Muranai ??

Very catchy song, you have my STAR :)
Vicho
887 posts
Joined May 2009
Topic Starter
Vicho

H-boy wrote:

First of all
need make a easy diff? wait for that :D

Normal
reduce volume? No

Hard
reduce volume? No
00:45:565(3) - add a note? Ok

Insane
00:05:987~00:23:336 reduce volume? No ._.

star~

Beuchi-chan wrote:

Hi hi!! :)

Here are some suggestions for your map, you don't have to change them if you don't agree with me :P
Let's go!!

~All Diffs~
- I really think you need an Easy. Normal is 4.00 stars so it will appear as Hard :/ Wait for the easy
- The spinnercircle needs to be 666x666. Also it doesn't look nice being totally transparent >.< spinnercircle deleted
- Delete the .osb file :3 ok

~Normal~
- Decrease HP Drain Rate and Overall Difficulty a bit? ok

00:26:589 (5) - New Combo. Try to not make combos of 9-10 circles for easiest diffs. yup
00:32:733 (7) - ^ ^
00:38:155 (7) - ^ ^
00:46:468 (1) - Delete New Combo? yes :3
01:05:264 (3) - The reverse arrow of the slider is almost hidden here, invert the slider to fix it :3 ok
01:09:601 (8,1) - New Combo on (8) and delete New Combo on (1). ok
01:22:613 (1) - Delete New Combo. yup :3

~Hard~
00:10:324 (7) - New Combo. ok
00:15:023 (8) - ^ ^
00:37:974 (7) - ^? ^
00:46:468 (1) - Delete New Combo. ok
01:04:902 (2) - Fix spacing here. fixed
01:14:661 (8) - New Combo. ok

~Kytoxid's Insane~
00:21:529 (9,10) - Fix spacing. Compare this with (4,5) spacing :P fixed
00:24:782 (7) - New Combo. ok
00:41:589 (7) - ^ ^
00:53:697 (9) - ^ ^

Nice map and song, good luck!! *star* thank you!

xierbaliti wrote:

Wow I love this song me too *-*
Very good map. :3 So just some suggestions:

-Normal-
HP-1 or HP-2 fixed
01:21:167 (1) - add whistle at this slider's end yup
01:22:613 (1) - ^ ^
01:24:059 (1) - add whistle at this slider's start&end ^
01:25:505 (3) - ^ ^


-Hard-
00:15:746 (11) - move it 1 grid up ok
01:08:697 (1) - I don't like this jump.a bit hard to read for me. ok
01:09:240 - add a circle here? like this: ok
SPOILER
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-Kytoxid-
00:46:468 (1) - add finish? ok
01:03:276 (1,2) - use soft-finish? Soft-finish is seems better than normal's. :) ok
01:15:384 (1) - remove clap ok
01:15:746 (2) - add clap ok
01:16:107 (3) - remove clap ok
01:16:468 (4) - add clap ok

*star* thank you!!

Sallad4ever wrote:

Halo Vicho kun

Here's my gift for you :)
The hitsound by all means are suggestion only :D

Normal
I'm afraid there will be any MAT/BAT complain about the 4 star rating :o
Maybe decrease OD and HP by 3 or can I make an easy diff for you? fixed and... no, thanks ^^U
01:21:167 (1,1) - use finish on goth the slider end ok


Hard
00:20:806 (8) - new combo ok
00:29:480 (1,2,3) - nice one :D I got careless and hit 3 first :o xD
00:43:035 (3) - new combo ok
01:00:203 (6,7) - whistle ? ok
01:11:770 (4) - ^ ^


Kytoxyd's insane
00:13:215 (1,2,3,4) - my favorite pattern :oops:
00:31:830 (1) - remove new combo ? ok
00:32:733 (13) - new combo ok


00:57:312 this part of the song cant leave my head
What ? Muranai ?? Soko da, MARANAI! >.<

Very catchy song, you have my STAR :) thank you >.<
Dangaard
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Dangaard
Easy Dan go!

Download: PNGN6 - Renai Jiyuu Shoujo (Short Ver.) (Vicho-kun) [Easy Dan].osu
DeadAlready
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Joined August 2008
DeadAlready
Star~ >w</
DJPop
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Here since the beginning
DJPop
Add "IOSYS" to tags.


~Easy Dan~
00:05:987 (1) - add hitfinish at start
00:36:709 (3) - add clap at middle, remove clap at end

~Normal~
01:02:733 (4) - remove hitfinish
01:08:697 (7) - ^
01:09:601 (1) - add hitfinish at start
01:22:613 (2) - remove hitfinish

~Hard~
00:25:324 (5) - stack it
00:54:420 (1) - curve down
00:55:505 (4) - add clap at end
00:58:035 (1) - add hitfinish at start
01:08:517 (4,1) - NO D:
01:20:806 (9) - remove hitfinish
01:21:167 (1) - add hitfinish at start

~Kytoxid's Insane~
00:30:565 (6) - new combo
00:41:227 (6) - add whistle
01:14:300 (8) - add clap


+Star
Vicho
887 posts
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Topic Starter
Vicho
All Fixed... except that...

DJPop wrote:

01:08:517 (4,1) - NO D:
what are you talking about? :O
H1ko
367 posts
Joined December 2008
H1ko
Muy bueno!!!! buena suerteeeeeeee :oops:
Shulin
1,189 posts
Joined August 2009
Shulin
General:

-- Remove the countdown on all difficulties (Dan's Easy doesn't have the countdown enabled and it sounds better).
-- The colors don't contrast very well.

Hard:

01:08:517 (4,1) - Jump is weird, doesn't play very well.

Kytoxid's Insane:

-- Lots of triples ~

00:13:938 (3) - Slider end is covered but it's kinda intuitive I guess.
00:15:746 (6) - Note is completely hidden. New combo makes it more visible though it would be better to reposition imo.
00:37:252 (7) - New combo.
00:39:962 (1) - Remove new combo. (Seems kinda pointless)
00:43:035 (7) - New combo.
00:43:577 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:03:276 (1) - ^

Good overall.
~ Star
Vicho
887 posts
Joined May 2009
Topic Starter
Vicho

Shulin wrote:

General:

-- Remove the countdown on all difficulties (Dan's Easy doesn't have the countdown enabled and it sounds better).
-- The colors don't contrast very well.

Hard:

01:08:517 (4,1) - Jump is weird, doesn't play very well.

Kytoxid's Insane:

-- Lots of triples ~

00:13:938 (3) - Slider end is covered but it's kinda intuitive I guess.
00:15:746 (6) - Note is completely hidden. New combo makes it more visible though it would be better to reposition imo.
00:37:252 (7) - New combo.
00:39:962 (1) - Remove new combo. (Seems kinda pointless)
00:43:035 (7) - New combo.
00:43:577 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:03:276 (1) - ^

Good overall.
~ Star
All Fixed, Thanks Shulin~ >w<
Mashley
2,042 posts
Joined September 2008
Mashley
Shouldn't that be (TV Size), not (Short Ver.)?
Use offset 5,973

Easy Dan
Fine

Normal
Is there any need for that massive break? Map it!

Hard
Fine

Kytoxid's Insane
00:15:746 (1) - This new combo seems pointless... remove it
Vicho
887 posts
Joined May 2009
Topic Starter
Vicho

Agent Spin Here wrote:

Shouldn't that be (TV Size), not (Short Ver.)? is (Short Ver.) because online broadcast: Nico Nico Douga, not TV
Use offset 5,973 ok

Easy Dan
Fine

Normal
Is there any need for that massive break? Map it! Mapped

Hard
Fine

Kytoxid's Insane
00:15:746 (1) - This new combo seems pointless... remove it ok
Thanks ^^
Shulin
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Joined August 2009
Shulin
Proto Bubble
Derekku
COOL DUDE
7,270 posts
Joined March 2009
Derekku
Sorry it took me so long to get to this. I hate to pop, but...

[General]
Offset feels a bit early. Try 5,980 and resnap.

[Easy]
00:47:719 (2) - This is the only single-red-tick note in the entire map (it's a bit of an offbeat). I recommend turning it into a slider and ending somewhere in the space before (3).

[Normal]
Looks good.

[Hard]
Nice.

[Kytoxid's Insane]
Cool~

Call me back and I'll gladly repubble.
Derekku
COOL DUDE
7,270 posts
Joined March 2009
Derekku
Penguins~

Repubbled!
Doomsday
Featured Artist
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Joined July 2008
Doomsday
Yo

  1. Timing looks good
[EASY DAN]

Looks good

[NORMAL]

Nice (the difficulty gap between this and easy is pretty big though)

[HARD]

Great

[KYTOXID'S INSANE]

Fine

Well, I can't complain. Everything looks good. Nice job :D

Starred
Cyril Scarlet
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Cyril Scarlet
Do re mi ~
Lissette
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Lissette
Normal
00:50:076 (1,2,3) - dale otra repeticion al slider, y el 2 muevelo medio beat hacia adelante (recuerda arreglar el espacio si decides hacer ese cambio ^^)

Easy Dan
01:26:943 (1) - i like how sound the end of this spinner with a hit normal finish, like in vicho-kun and kytoxid's diff ^^

Star! + kudos star!!
ztrot
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ztrot
:)
Andrea
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Andrea
Nice ^_^

Ranked~
Cyclone
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Cyclone
Can you please refrain from adding *completely* unrelated things to the tags please? No need to change this, but keep it in mind for the next time.
DJPop
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DJPop
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