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AKINO from bless4 - MIIRO

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No_Gu
update.pending now
Modem
Hi~~! For M4M (^ w ^)

Fine here~~!
AR 3
OD 3
Disable Widescreen Support since there are no storyboards ;)
00:51:230 (2) Add whistle at the reverse part for consistency
00:57:383 (3) Umm.... Change to clap in drum sampleset?
00:56:153 (2) Add whistle for consistency
01:05:845 (1) Remove NC
Ummm..... That's all. I couldn't find anything wrong anymore here
Disable Widescreen Support since there are no storyboards ;)
00:28:460 -> I think the right break is from 00:28:614
00:51:230 (1) Add whistle at the reverse part for consistency
00:56:153 (1) ^
00:57:383 (2) Change it to clap in the drum sampleset
01:02:460 (4,5) How about make it into the same rhytm as 00:59:999 (4,5)? Shorten this slider -> 01:02:460 (4) from here to 01:02:614 (red tick) then delete a note at 01:02:922 (5). After that, make 1/4 slider again from 01:02:768 (big white tick) to 01:02:922 (the next red tick) Then add clap at 01:02:614 and 01:02:922. But it's just suggestion ;)
01:27:691 (1) Ummm..... Change this spinner into some slider and circle instead? There are so many mapable part here :oops:
01:39:230 (4) Add whistle hitsound at this slider's head for consistency
01:05:537 (1) Remove combo colour
Disable Widescreen Support since there are no storyboards ;)
Slider's tail at 00:37:651 (1) isn't snapped (Please check AiMod)
Slider's tail at 00:38:266 (2) isn't snapped (Please check AiMod)
Slider's tail at 01:26:305 94) isn't snapped (Please check AiMod)
00:18:614 (1) Stack this slider's head with the end of this slider -> 00:17:691 (4)
The tail at 00:59:228 (4) isn't snapped (Please check AiMod0
00:57:383 (2) Add clap in drum sampleset

For suggestion how about crop the mp3 file to reduce the file size??
Sorry if my mod doesn't help you :(
Good Luck for rank!!! :)
byfar
from M4M >> p/3635329

my map >> https://osu.ppy.sh/s/228745


[General]

  1. wtf so good

    also im assuming ur going to crop this mp3 file? because theres unmapped sections <o>


[Easy]

  1. 00:18:768 - note missing here? or even just end spinner there

    01:05:076 (3) - why dont u move to white tick.. :c why start on red tick.
    01:05:845 (1) - this slider head is in the long vocal hold
    why not just put a single note here 01:04:922 and start another slider here 01:05:383?
    [Normal]

    1. 00:12:614 (1) - i suggest starting with around 50% vol here just cuz the loud sound is a bit distracting

      01:05:537 (1) - same as in easy diff.. i dont like this slider to begin on the white tick simply because it interferes with pure vocal
      01:04:153 (2) - begin and end on white tick? ^

    [Kanto's Hard]

    1. Object's end is not snapped! 00:37:651
      Object's end is not snapped! 00:38:266
      Object's end is not snapped! 01:26:305
      from ai mod

    [Insane]

    1. Object's end is not snapped! 00:59:228 from ai mod

      00:35:999 (1,2,3) - i dont think there should be sliders with ends that end on red tick here. because the vocals land on the red tick and slider ends feel a bit off in that section. especially your transition into 00:37:230 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - is a bit awkward. i get 100's here very often on the star pattern
      00:48:307 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - this area is slightly difficult to read for me
      00:56:153 could use a note here.. vocal quite strong here

      good map

overall very nice, however there are some sections with patterns that i do not really like. I'm not going to name any of them because it's probably due to mapper preference.. however to name one for instance, 00:53:230 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - in the insane:: this area looks messy
Aerous
From your M4M Queue !

Insane
00:12:460 (1,2,3) Stack these? Since you did it in hard
00:20:768 (5) Stack this ontop of 00:19:999(1)?
00:35:076(2) CTRL + G?
00:44:614 (1) Make this have the same y as 00:44:460(4) ? y:242
00:50:153(3) Clone the previous slider and place it here?
00:55:999 Suggestion : Add a note here?
01:04:922 (5) Clap here?
01:07:076 Repeat slider? http://puu.sh/dXqqR/4c11848e84.jpg
01:11:845 (2,3) Why such a huge jump?
01:27:230 (4,5,6) Move this higher?
01:30:922 (6,8) These two notes , 6 and 8 have a huge gap between them compared to 01:30:307 (2,4). Should have the same spacing http://puu.sh/dXqEh/69a8c658ba.jpg
01:35:383(2) Stack this on top of 01:34:307 (3) ?

Hard :
00:23:537 (1) Move this slider higher , I think it should have a better flow if you moved it higher.
00:27:999 (3,4) Switch the position . 3 should be where 4 is right now and move 4 somewhere else
00:37:230 (1,2) This is fine , but why not curve them a bit?
00:48:922 Add a note here and 00:49:230 too?
01:09:230 (1,2,1,2) Change it to like this? http://puu.sh/dXrkP/9631720e77.jpg
01:15:230 (1) Move this under the previous repeat slider? http://puu.sh/dXrpf/d7e4075b97.jpg
hitsounds are missing? Because I don't hear any,

Normal :
00:24:922(4) Overlap the end to the next slider? Or atleast make it like this? http://puu.sh/dXrCj/71c6702a1b.jpg
00:26:769 (3,4,5,6) Change it to this? http://puu.sh/dXrF1/cf21227a2e.jpg
01:03:999 I think you should add something here or move the slider because this sounds empty. Suggestion : http://puu.sh/dXrOV/e2a828000c.jpg
01:39:845 (1) Move this lower? http://puu.sh/dXrXJ/4692b2114a.jpg

Easy :
00:18:614 Why not map this part?
00:23:230 (4) Move this to x:55 y:306
00:24:922 (3,1) Suggestion : http://puu.sh/dXs9r/e76996c7ea.jpg
00:38:460 (1) Make this slider repeat?
00:39:383 (2) Make this a 1/1 slider?
00:43:383 (1) Repeat this slider so it ends on white tick
00:44:922 (3) Move this to 00:44:614 and add a note here : 00:44:922 (3)
00:48:922 Add a 1/1 slider here? http://puu.sh/dXsqb/2dfa7f5d24.jpg
00:53:537 Add a 1/1 slider and repeat it http://puu.sh/dXstF/8b59f9cac9.jpg
01:04:153 (2) Move this here 01:03:999 and extend it here 01:04:614. Same thing for 01:05:076
01:05:845 (1) Extend it to here? 01:06:768
01:07:999 (1) Repeat this slider
01:08:992 1/1 slider here
01:15:383 Add a note here
01:15:691 (1) Repeat this slider
01:16:614 (2)
01:25:230 1/1 slider?
01:39:845 (1) This sounds weird to me

Overall a nice song , and hope you can finish this.
Momochikun
yo no no no_gu xDD
m4m ~

[General]
Uncheck widescreen support on Normal and Easy to be consistent with other diffs
Maybe you could add tag like opening or tv size to make it easier to find this map

[Insane]
00:59:076 (4) - unsnapped object
00:15:076 (1) - This way too loud ya know, maybe you could lower the general volume or just using whistle at the start zz something like that
00:49:537 (1,2,3) - Why dont ya make this rhythm just like 00:54:460 (1,2) - ? i think those work better according to vocal
00:55:691 (1) - whistle fit perfectly here
01:01:845 (1,3,5,7) - is this missing drum sampleset were did on purpose or.. ? cmiiw
01:09:383 (2) - this way too close with hp bar, i'd move it downward a bit
01:41:076 (5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - pretty same for hitsound missing, anyway why dont you start Nc at 01:41:076 (5) - instead ? i know its downbeat but those combo-ing looks pretty bad imo ><
00:52:460 (3) - minor stuffs, but this slider could look aesthetically better iif you add more curve on it.
01:30:768 (5) - add NC ? it would be helpful for hp drain system also could make this pattern easier to read
01:39:230 (3) - add whistle ? it technically same sound just like 01:36:768 (3) - which has one
01:29:691 (3) - missing drum sampleset on start

[Hard]
00:37:230 (1,2) - 01:26:152 (4) - usnapped object
00:37:230 - Lower the volume here a bit so the normal sampleset would match the guitar better ?
00:44:614 (1) - the drum sampleset here should be replaced on 00:44:307 (4) - 's end instead according to the music
00:48:922 - add note here to catch the vocal ? similiar stuff like you did at 00:53:230 (1,2) -
00:56:922 (1,2,3) - would be easier to catch if they're on the same DS, since most players won't expect pattern like this on Hard diff
00:58:153 (1,2) - how you arrenge this may be confusing due to small DS after 00:57:845 (3) - then such a high jump next when they're no musical different between them, switching their position like the SS below should work better, since you still keep the symmetrical stuffs but also make sense on DS
01:15:999 (3,1) - Maybe it could be confusing if they're got overlapped perfectly when it just separated by 1/1 beats. but that's just imo
01:32:307 (1,2) - the momentum could give better transition if this was ctrl g'ed to follow the previous slider

[Normal]
wew that such a big gap of SV with Hard diff o.o
00:25:383 (5) - move down a bit so it won't be too near with hp bar ?
00:28:614 - maybe you could move the break to start at downbeat just like kanto's did on his diff and you easy. that played nice
01:23:383 (2,3) - fix this blanket pls, looks really off ><
01:27:230 - i recommend adding note or 1/2 slider here to catch the vocal, it plays weird without it..

[Easy]
00:15:076 (1) - end the spinner at 00:18:614 - ? >_> it could emphasize the finish, also the recovery time would be still rankable
00:50:768 (2) - missing whistle at reverse ?
01:24:614 (4) - why dont ya extend this slider so it'll ended at 01:25:076 - covering the cymbal ?
01:34:153 (4,1) - i'd like to see this slightly overlap being avoided or just overlap more if possible.. this looks untidy if u ask me

good luck ~
KantoKun

Modem wrote:

Hi~~! For M4M (^ w ^)

Disable Widescreen Support since there are no storyboards ;)
Slider's tail at 00:37:651 (1) isn't snapped (Please check AiMod) k
Slider's tail at 00:38:266 (2) isn't snapped (Please check AiMod) ^
Slider's tail at 01:26:305 94) isn't snapped (Please check AiMod) ^
00:18:614 (1) Stack this slider's head with the end of this slider -> 00:17:691 (4) ^

For suggestion how about crop the mp3 file to reduce the file size??
Sorry if my mod doesn't help you :(
Good Luck for rank!!! :)

Aerous wrote:

From your M4M Queue !

Hard :
00:23:537 (1) Move this slider higher , I think it should have a better flow if you moved it higher. no , i want to make triangle with 00:22:768 (2,3,1) -
00:27:999 (3,4) Switch the position . 3 should be where 4 is right now and move 4 somewhere else i make a jump with 0:27:999 (3,4) -
00:37:230 (1,2) This is fine , but why not curve them a bit? straight slider is great than curve for this pattern , for my style
00:48:922 Add a note here and 00:49:230 too? OK
01:09:230 (1,2,1,2) Change it to like this? http://puu.sh/dXrkP/9631720e77.jpg Great idea , so change
01:15:230 (1) Move this under the previous repeat slider? http://puu.sh/dXrpf/d7e4075b97.jpg no , i think is OK 0.0
hitsounds are missing? Because I don't hear any, yeah :x

Overall a nice song , and hope you can finish this.

Momochikun wrote:

yo no no no_gu xDD
m4m ~

[Hard]
00:37:230 (1,2) - 01:26:152 (4) - usnapped object yeah
00:37:230 - Lower the volume here a bit so the normal sampleset would match the guitar better ? OK
00:44:614 (1) - the drum sampleset here should be replaced on 00:44:307 (4) - 's end instead according to the music OK , my miss
00:48:922 - add note here to catch the vocal ? similiar stuff like you did at 00:53:230 (1,2) - fix on other mod
00:56:922 (1,2,3) - would be easier to catch if they're on the same DS, since most players won't expect pattern like this on Hard diff ^
00:58:153 (1,2) - how you arrenge this may be confusing due to small DS after 00:57:845 (3) - then such a high jump next when they're no musical different between them, switching their position like the SS below should work better, since you still keep the symmetrical stuffs but also make sense on DS OK
01:15:999 (3,1) - Maybe it could be confusing if they're got overlapped perfectly when it just separated by 1/1 beats. but that's just imo OK fix
01:32:307 (1,2) - the momentum could give better transition if this was ctrl g'ed to follow the previous slider fix

good luck ~
thanks you all <3 @Gu : i mapped 00:28:614 - 00:36:614 - part that you have tell me on PM 0.0

osu file format v13

[General]
AudioFilename: Miiro.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 67076
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.3
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 12614,101999
DistanceSpacing: 1.5
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 32
TimelineZoom: 1

[Metadata]
Title:Miiro
TitleUnicode:海色
Artist:AKINO from bless4
ArtistUnicode:AKINO from bless4
Creator:No_Gu
Version:Kanto's Hard
Source:Kantai Collection -KanColle-
Tags:艦隊これくしょん -艦これ- KantoKun
BeatmapID:580615
BeatmapSetID:251251

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:7
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:7
ApproachRate:8
SliderMultiplier:1.5
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"Kancolle.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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Combo2 : 255,255,128
Combo3 : 255,128,128
Combo4 : 128,255,255

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Topic Starter
No_Gu

Momochikun wrote:

yo no no no_gu xDD
m4m ~

[General]
Uncheck widescreen support on Normal and Easy to be consistent with other diffs
Maybe you could add tag like opening or tv size to make it easier to find this maplazy

[Insane]
00:59:076 (4) - unsnapped objectk
00:15:076 (1) - This way too loud ya know, maybe you could lower the general volume or just using whistle at the start zz something like thatah,k
00:49:537 (1,2,3) - Why dont ya make this rhythm just like 00:54:460 (1,2) - ? i think those work better according to vocal[/color]
00:55:691 (1) - whistle fit perfectly here^
01:01:845 (1,3,5,7) - is this missing drum sampleset were did on purpose or.. ? cmiiwwaiting a better MP3.levae it for now
01:09:383 (2) - this way too close with hp bar, i'd move it downward a bita little change
01:41:076 (5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - pretty same for hitsound missing, anyway why dont you start Nc at 01:41:076 (5) - instead ? i know its downbeat but those combo-ing looks pretty bad imo ><same
00:52:460 (3) - minor stuffs, but this slider could look aesthetically better iif you add more curve on it.nonno
01:30:768 (5) - add NC ? it would be helpful for hp drain system also could make this pattern easier to readnonono
01:39:230 (3) - add whistle ? it technically same sound just like 01:36:768 (3) - which has onek
01:29:691 (3) - missing drum sampleset on startnice

[Normal]
wew that such a big gap of SV with Hard diff o.owon't be a problem..maybe
00:25:383 (5) - move down a bit so it won't be too near with hp bar ?k
00:28:614 - maybe you could move the break to start at downbeat just like kanto's did on his diff and you easy. that played nicemy mistake
01:23:383 (2,3) - fix this blanket pls, looks really off ><not a blanket here
01:27:230 - i recommend adding note or 1/2 slider here to catch the vocal, it plays weird without it..k

[Easy]
00:15:076 (1) - end the spinner at 00:18:614 - ? >_> it could emphasize the finish, also the recovery time would be still rankablebut the spinner will cover the silent part..
00:50:768 (2) - missing whistle at reverse ?no
01:24:614 (4) - why dont ya extend this slider so it'll ended at 01:25:076 - covering the cymbal ?don't want to lose clap in this part
01:34:153 (4,1) - i'd like to see this slightly overlap being avoided or just overlap more if possible.. this looks untidy if u ask mek

good luck ~

Aerous wrote:

From your M4M Queue !

Insane
00:12:460 (1,2,3) Stack these? Since you did it in hardno stack,and hard is not by me
00:20:768 (5) Stack this ontop of 00:19:999(1)?no stack
00:35:076(2) CTRL + G?no
00:44:614 (1) Make this have the same y as 00:44:460(4) ? y:242no stack
00:50:153(3) Clone the previous slider and place it here?the present flow is better
00:55:999 Suggestion : Add a note here?no inst here
01:04:922 (5) Clap here?no snare drum here
01:07:076 Repeat slider? http://puu.sh/dXqqR/4c11848e84.jpgnnn
01:11:845 (2,3) Why such a huge jump?1,2 and 3,4 are each one group.
01:27:230 (4,5,6) Move this higher?...why?
01:30:922 (6,8) These two notes , 6 and 8 have a huge gap between them compared to 01:30:307 (2,4). Should have the same spacing http://puu.sh/dXqEh/69a8c658ba.jpgno,it isn't same smapcing itself
01:35:383(2) Stack this on top of 01:34:307 (3) ?no stack

Normal :
00:24:922(4) Overlap the end to the next slider? Or atleast make it like this? http://puu.sh/dXrCj/71c6702a1b.jpgorz I can't find where 4 belongs to
00:26:769 (3,4,5,6) Change it to this? http://puu.sh/dXrF1/cf21227a2e.jpgno need
01:03:999 I think you should add something here or move the slider because this sounds empty. Suggestion : http://puu.sh/dXrOV/e2a828000c.jpgno
01:39:845 (1) Move this lower? http://puu.sh/dXrXJ/4692b2114a.jpgnot better than mine imo..

Easy :
00:18:614 Why not map this part? the spinner limit
00:23:230 (4) Move this to x:55 y:306
00:24:922 (3,1) Suggestion : http://puu.sh/dXs9r/e76996c7ea.jpg
00:38:460 (1) Make this slider repeat?
00:39:383 (2) Make this a 1/1 slider?
00:43:383 (1) Repeat this slider so it ends on white tick
00:44:922 (3) Move this to 00:44:614 and add a note here : 00:44:922 (3)
00:48:922 Add a 1/1 slider here? http://puu.sh/dXsqb/2dfa7f5d24.jpg
00:53:537 Add a 1/1 slider and repeat it http://puu.sh/dXstF/8b59f9cac9.jpg
01:04:153 (2) Move this here 01:03:999 and extend it here 01:04:614. Same thing for 01:05:076
01:05:845 (1) Extend it to here? 01:06:768
01:07:999 (1) Repeat this slider
01:08:992 1/1 slider here
01:15:383 Add a note here
01:15:691 (1) Repeat this slider
01:16:614 (2)
01:25:230 1/1 slider?
01:39:845 (1) This sounds weird to me
sorry but I don't want to cuz I need to control the difficulty of easy
Overall a nice song , and hope you can finish this.
Topic Starter
No_Gu

byfar wrote:

[Easy]

  1. 00:18:768 - note missing here? or even just end spinner therespinner limit

    01:05:076 (3) - why dont u move to white tick.. :c why start on red tick.hmm did a little change
    01:05:845 (1) - this slider head is in the long vocal hold^
    why not just put a single note here 01:04:922 and start another slider here 01:05:383?mainly for the drums
    [Normal]

    1. 00:12:614 (1) - i suggest starting with around 50% vol here just cuz the loud sound is a bit distracting

      01:05:537 (1) - same as in easy diff.. i dont like this slider to begin on the white tick simply because it interferes with pure vocal
      01:04:153 (2) - begin and end on white tick? ^ ^^^for snare drums,don't want to stack at white


    [Insane]

    1. Object's end is not snapped! 00:59:228 from ai modk

      00:35:999 (1,2,3) - i dont think there should be sliders with ends that end on red tick here. because the vocals land on the red tick nonono for vocal,I follows the instand slider ends feel a bit off in that section. especially your transition into 00:37:230 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - is a bit awkward. i get 100's here very often on the star patterncuz it's 1/3 I think
      00:48:307 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - this area is slightly difficult to read for me1/1 stack is one of my mapping style
      00:56:153 could use a note here.. vocal quite strong herewill consider

      good map

overall very nice, however there are some sections with patterns that i do not really like. I'm not going to name any of them because it's probably due to mapper preference.. however to name one for instance, 00:53:230 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - in the insane:: this area looks messya good shape,isn't it?

Modem wrote:

Hi~~! For M4M (^ w ^)


@Kanto:updated,thanks
Monstrata
Hi! I really like this song, so here is a m4m mod! I hope it helps you and best of luck getting it ranked, the Insane was fun to play!

[Insane]
00:12:460 (1,2,1) - Make this one combo
00:13:691 (2) - ^Same reason since this note leads well into to the sliders,
00:15:076 (1) - Ctrl G and reduce repeat 1x. Also shouldn't this be snapped to 1/8? It's snapped to 1/6.
00:17:230 (5) - Suggestion: try Ctrl+G this slider since there is a direction change in the sliders before it (00:16:307 (1,2,3,4) - ). currently (up, right, up, up)
00:19:691 (4,2) - Could make this a blanket
00:38:460 (1,2,3) - Make 00:38:460 (1) - shorter since the vocals begin at 00:38:768 -
00:44:614 (1,2) - Suggestion: try making this 3 circles, something like this Screen (doesn't have to be that pattern)
00:56:922 - Consider making these two sliders longer and no repeat. visual cue that there is a switch to 1/3 spacing. The sliders before are fine, but because they begin on white ticks and aren't followed by 1/3 note streams they are easier to catch. Screen
00:59:076 (4,5,1) - This stack-jump doesn't seem necessary, consider moving 00:59:307 (5) - to the back to the midpoint of 00:59:076 (4,1) -
01:35:999 (4,5,1,2) - Move 01:36:460 (2) - a bit so it's a triangle pattern with 01:35:999 (4) - as the centerpoint, it's currently a bit off.
01:41:076 (5,6,1) - Keep this one combo, or alternatively, you could move 01:41:076 (5,6) - to 01:40:999 - Something like this.

[Kanto's Hard]

00:32:307 (1) - Start the slider at 00:32:460 - and try Something like this?
00:59:691 (2,3) - Make 00:59:691 (2) - shorter and start second slider at 00:59:999 - . Also add circle at 01:00:460 -
01:02:153 (1,2) - Same idea^
01:32:307 (1,2) - They don't follow anything. Try making 01:31:845 (2) - repeat 2x more

[Normal]
00:46:768 (3,4) - your previous sliders all follow the vocals except this part. try something like this and have it start 00:46:922 - Like this.
01:04:153 (2) - have the slider start at 01:03:999 - you'll have to increase the length a bit to conpensate
01:26:768 (4,5,6) - make 01:26:768 (4) - shorter and start 01:27:230 (5,6) - on 01:27:076 - like this: Something like this.

[Easy]
00:18:768 - you could map this part, it feels weird to start at 00:19:999 -
00:39:076 - just suggest but try making the slider at 00:38:460 (1) - longer so it ends at 00:39:076 - and the same with 00:39:999 (3) - Something like this. the repeat slider plays better this way imo.
00:43:383 (1,2,3) - same as above.
01:04:153 (2) - move to 01:03:999 - and make slider longer to compensate

edit: forgot to include Kanto's Hard
Fortune_old_1
Hi from your queue.

Easy

  1. 00:12:614 (1) - I think the circle here is not easy to catch for newbies. I prefer a slider 00:12:922 ~ 00:13:537
  2. 00:51:999 (1) - you didn't NC at similar rythm 00:56:922 (3). Consider ot plz
  3. 01:01:230 (2) - bend a little could be nice.
  4. 01:05:076 (3) - I think the slider should be start at 01:04:922. Isn't this rythm is more fitting?
  5. 01:14:153 (3,4) - blank perfectly
  6. 01:21:845 (4) - move the last point of slider up 1grid (328||40)

Normal

  1. 00:15:076 (1) - dunno, isn't spinner should be finish at 00:18:153 ?
  2. 00:25:999 (1) - it doesn't need a rythm at 00:25:999 because the drum sound is quite small. How about this rythm?
  3. 01:05:383 (1) - extend the slider to start at 01:05:383 -
  4. 01:23:999 (3) - 457||156
  5. 01:27:230 (5,6,1) - I think that removing circle 6 and make the spinner start at 01:27:537 is better

Hard

  1. 00:25:999 (5) - why don't you make the slider in same line with 00:25:845 (4)
  2. 00:43:999 (3,4) - distance 2.90x is quite far. Stack at 00:43:845 (2) or 00:43:383 (1) please
  3. 01:28:768 - need a note here instead of 01:29:076 (1). use this rythm?
  4. 00:12:614 (3) - oh, here is a NC at insane diff. but never mnd~

Insane

  1. 00:15:076 (1) - ctrl + g for up flow.
  2. 00:37:435 (2,3,4,5,6) - it changes to 1/3rythm so surprisingly. NC please
  3. 00:57:537 (1) - NC
  4. 01:41:999 (10) - 352||80 can be highlighted and playable as i played several times.

I like this map. Guuuuud luck!
scanter
General
  1. I can catch your all about normal, soft, drum slider-slide isn't not perfect muted. I can catch some noised sound. so I recommend change yours to this file. http://puu.sh/e0owD/d6be212841.wav
  2. recommend change the BG size 16:9 for better play.
  3. I can catch only Kanto's Hard hasn't Kiai section.


Easy
  1. AR -1? AR seems to not easy, but a little bit normal
  2. 01:27:691 (1) - I recommend highly fill up more rhythm this interval. it makes think this is an forced rhythm by this spinner. check plz what I've done on it


Normal
  1. 00:13:691 (2,3,4) - it is more nice if you change this vague vocal rhythm to just following piano rhythm.
  2. 00:51:230 - whistle seems to sunken
  3. 00:56:153 - ^ same
  4. 00:56:922 (2) - this blanket can improve more
  5. 01:20:153 (6,1) - a little bad flow, so a little comportable to play. what about this?
  6. 01:27:691 (1) - same opinion as Easy. what about this?


Kanto's Hard
  1. 00:34:614 - whistle?
  2. 00:35:999 (4) - NC for consistency?
  3. 00:47:999 (5) - I'd rather reduce one repeat and add 1 circle 00:48:307 here if I were you. it is match up well about all your pattern.
  4. 01:04:922 (3) - I assure you want to emphasize this. add NC?
  5. 01:07:999 (2) - ^?
  6. 01:26:460 (1) - ehh. stack?
  7. 01:31:383 (1) - SV changing interval is really big. in hard, it is really uncomportable for play imao.


Insane
  1. 00:41:383 (3) - I assure you want to NC here, before you did same thing at 00:32:460 (2)
  2. 00:15:076 (1) - reduce 1 repeat? in OD8, it is easy prone to 100 or else bad thing.
  3. 00:29:999 (2,3) - swap rhythm much better for play. now is a little awkward to play.
  4. 00:39:845 (2) - HP bar little touched
  5. 00:47:999 - somehow, drum sample-set clap is more good to hear
  6. 01:05:537 (1) - eh. it is easy lead to 100 due to spacing imao.
  7. 01:31:845 (3,5) - NC?
  8. 01:41:076 (5) - maybe you forgot put hitsound. where is the hitsound since here? :O


mapset is really neat and tidy. GL anyway ;)
Sylith
awesome song meets awesome mappers wow

best luck on your ranking process!
KantoKun

monstrata wrote:

Hi! I really like this song, so here is a m4m mod! I hope it helps you and best of luck getting it ranked, the Insane was fun to play!

[Kanto's Hard]

00:32:307 (1) - Start the slider at 00:32:460 - and try Something like this? no , want to make easy rhythm
00:59:691 (2,3) - Make 00:59:691 (2) - shorter and start second slider at 00:59:999 - . Also add circle at 01:00:460 - so hard working x.x
01:02:153 (1,2) - Same idea^ ^
01:32:307 (1,2) - They don't follow anything. Try making 01:31:845 (2) - repeat 2x more 01:31:845 (2) - has end at 01:32:153 - , shouldn't to add more repeat slider

edit: forgot to include Kanto's Hard

Fortune wrote:

Hi from your queue.

Hard

  1. 00:25:999 (5) - why don't you make the slider in same line with 00:25:845 (4) i make triangle with this >w< 00:25:383 (3,4,5) -
  2. 00:43:999 (3,4) - distance 2.90x is quite far. Stack at 00:43:845 (2) or 00:43:383 (1) please when play 00:43:999 (3) - don't need to move your mouse at end of slider. so , it not far :3
  3. 01:28:768 - need a note here instead of 01:29:076 (1). use this rythm? fix
  4. 00:12:614 (3) - oh, here is a NC at insane diff. but never mnd~ yeah :3

I like this map. Guuuuud luck!

scanter wrote:

Kanto's Hard
  1. 00:34:614 - whistle? OK
  2. 00:35:999 (4) - NC for consistency? ^
  3. 00:47:999 (5) - I'd rather reduce one repeat and add 1 circle 00:48:307 here if I were you. it is match up well about all your pattern. ^
  4. 01:04:922 (3) - I assure you want to emphasize this. add NC? ^
  5. 01:07:999 (2) - ^? ^
  6. 01:26:460 (1) - ehh. stack? yeah , my mistake
  7. 01:31:383 (1) - SV changing interval is really big. in hard, it is really uncomportable for play imao. i think it's OK 0.0


mapset is really neat and tidy. GL anyway ;)
thanks for modding <3

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Creator:No_Gu
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Tags:艦隊これくしょん -艦これ- KantoKun
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87,70,48307,5,4,0:0:0:0:
121,211,48922,5,0,0:0:0:0:
121,211,49230,1,0,0:0:0:0:
121,211,49537,6,0,P|119:262|115:336,2,112.5,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
172,138,50768,6,0,P|170:87|166:13,2,112.5,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
243,193,51999,6,0,P|295:210|362:188,2,112.5,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
172,138,53230,5,2,0:0:0:0:
96,250,53845,1,0,0:0:0:0:
173,353,54460,6,0,P|213:355|303:360,1,112.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
314,360,55076,2,0,P|321:319|319:282,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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163,206,57383,2,0,P|158:259|156:292,1,75,8|0,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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316,136,58153,6,0,L|373:132,1,56.2500021457673,4|0,3:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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166,325,60922,2,0,B|204:322|232:320,1,56.2500021457673,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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451,282,63383,1,8,0:0:0:0:
370,298,63537,6,0,P|334:293|288:299,1,75,0|8,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
234,350,63844,1,0,0:0:0:0:
217,270,63999,6,0,P|222:234|216:188,1,75,0|8,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
165,134,64306,1,0,0:0:0:0:
246,118,64460,6,0,P|282:123|328:117,1,75,0|8,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
382,66,64767,1,0,0:0:0:0:
399,146,64922,5,0,3:0:0:0:
462,91,65076,2,0,P|462:52|460:13,2,75,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
399,146,65537,6,0,P|398:212|396:302,1,150,12|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
329,351,65999,2,0,P|291:344|245:348,1,75,0|8,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,314,66307,2,0,L|137:320,3,37.5,8|8|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
110,324,66614,1,4,0:0:0:0:
133,236,67691,6,0,L|94:242,3,37.5,2|2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
67,246,67999,6,0,P|72:179|79:86,1,150,4|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
130,24,68460,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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362,61,68922,2,0,P|397:50|434:52,1,75,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
448,135,69230,6,0,P|453:172|457:209,1,75,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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284,134,69845,6,0,L|279:171|274:208,1,75,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
185,232,70153,2,0,P|189:194|194:157,1,75,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,137,70383,1,8,0:0:0:0:
172,118,70460,6,0,B|150:86|150:86|106:129|42:107,1,150,0|8,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
87,32,70922,2,0,P|129:7|220:41,1,150,0|0,3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
288,83,71383,2,0,P|331:98|374:92,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
440,76,71691,6,0,P|444:138|449:228,1,150,0|8,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
504,289,72153,1,0,0:0:0:0:
421,306,72307,2,0,P|379:300|345:296,1,75,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
266,283,72614,2,0,P|228:288|191:292,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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176,210,73230,1,8,0:0:0:0:
97,180,73383,1,0,0:0:0:0:
163,125,73537,2,0,P|175:81|165:40,1,75,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
255,77,73845,2,0,P|295:75|336:73,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
468,135,74153,6,0,P|428:133|387:131,1,75,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
261,201,74460,2,0,P|301:199|342:197,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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127,276,75691,2,0,P|118:234|123:195,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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166,132,76614,6,0,P|208:130|245:128,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,218,76922,2,0,P|174:220|137:222,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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472,230,78307,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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435,8,78768,2,0,P|439:45|434:82,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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251,114,79383,2,0,B|207:111|165:109,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
143,34,79691,1,0,3:0:0:0:
94,104,79845,1,0,0:0:0:0:
125,182,79999,2,0,P|130:221|123:264,1,75,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
115,281,80230,1,8,0:0:0:0:
103,305,80307,6,0,B|86:327|64:336|64:336|111:362|168:340,1,150,4|8,3:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
243,320,80768,1,0,0:0:0:0:
243,320,80922,2,0,P|286:310|322:315,1,75,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
394,341,81230,2,0,P|430:350|467:347,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
441,265,81537,6,0,P|419:213|435:145,1,112.5,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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375,82,82153,1,0,3:0:0:0:
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491,141,84845,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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101,290,86153,2,0,P|140:285|171:263,1,75,0|0,3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
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388,346,87383,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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173,133,88460,1,0,0:0:0:0:
173,133,88614,2,0,P|135:131|92:128,2,75,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|3:0,3:0:0:0:
221,209,89076,5,0,0:0:0:0:
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298,325,89537,2,0,P|303:288|300:247,1,75,0|0,3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
301,167,89845,1,8,0:0:0:0:
376,210,89999,1,0,3:0:0:0:
376,210,90076,1,0,3:0:0:0:
376,210,90153,6,0,P|416:222|502:168,1,150,4|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
500,85,90614,1,8,0:0:0:0:
417,63,90768,2,0,P|418:100|421:137,1,75,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,210,91076,2,0,P|374:247|371:284,1,75,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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298,325,92307,5,0,0:0:0:0:
371,284,92460,1,4,1:0:0:0:
256,192,92614,12,4,97383,1:0:0:0:
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488,231,98307,1,0,3:0:0:0:
439,161,98460,2,0,B|426:101|448:52|448:52|422:12,1,150,8|0,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
359,70,98922,6,0,P|313:78|268:70,1,75,0|8,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
206,49,99230,2,0,P|157:33|75:88,1,150,0|0,3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
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182,133,99922,1,0,3:0:0:0:
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254,222,100307,2,0,P|295:218|339:214,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
411,205,100614,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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478,271,101153,1,0,3:0:0:0:
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317,300,102460,5,4,3:2:0:0:
Kibbleru
I assume you're planning to cut the mp3, when you do that, you can consider cutting a bit off at the beginning too since there's quite alot of silence there

[General]
  1. not sure if its just me but offset sound a bit early?


[Insane]
  1. 00:32:768 - whistle? nvm idk what your pattern is
  2. 00:53:845 (5) - consider nc? i think it fits the pattern and will make it seem less crowded
    01:02:460 (5) - ^


[Hard]
  1. 00:12:460 (1,2,3) - i suggest maybe use a 1/4 repeat instead, a slider is alot easier to lead in with rather than a triplet
  2. 00:29:845 (1) - maybe remove nc lol, i dont think 1 combo is really needed
    00:32:307 (1) - ^
  3. 00:45:845 - sounds like it needs a finish here?
  4. 01:16:307 - this sounded so weird without the nomal clap :C
    01:26:153 - ^
    actually, did you use hitsound copier for this? if so ill only check the hitsounds for insane
  5. 01:41:230 (1,2,1) - i really recommend against this x.x 1/4 jumps are just a bit too much


[Normal]
  1. why does it seem to get slightly easier at the kiai lol..
  2. well... nothing really wrong with this but.. why lol?


[Easy]
  1. 00:26:768 (2,3) - nazi blanket thing
  2. 01:24:614 (4) - how bout extend this slider to 01:25:076 - for cymbal?


just a very fast mod, ill take a better look at it when i recheck.

for now just get your sp above 12 and apply mods, also dont forget to cut that mp3 lol.
ts8zs
话说一般tv size不是1:30么你确定。。。好吧前面空太长了 ╮(╯-╰)╭
[Insane]
00:37:230 - I pefer short slider
00:41:999 (1) - Ctrl+G
01:25:537 (2) - blanket

01:30:153 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 这里有盒子的鬼畜范er
[Kanto's Hard]
well
[Normal]
00:20:922 (5) - del
00:58:153 (1) - overlap with 00:54:460 (3) - ?
01:23:383 (2) - blanket
[Easy]
nothing found._.

I wanna ask m4m first...looks short then nope...
Topic Starter
No_Gu

monstrata wrote:

Hi! I really like this song, so here is a m4m mod! I hope it helps you and best of luck getting it ranked, the Insane was fun to play!

[Insane]
00:12:460 (1,2,1) - Make this one combono
00:13:691 (2) - ^Same reason since this note leads well into to the sliders, no
00:15:076 (1) - Ctrl G and reduce repeat 1x. Also shouldn't this be snapped to 1/8? It's snapped to 1/6. hmm I think it's 1/6
00:17:230 (5) - Suggestion: try Ctrl+G this slider since there is a direction change in the sliders before it (00:16:307 (1,2,3,4) - ). currently (up, right, up, up)no
00:19:691 (4,2) - Could make this a blanketk
00:38:460 (1,2,3) - Make 00:38:460 (1) - shorter since the vocals begin at 00:38:768 - not for vocal
00:44:614 (1,2) - Suggestion: try making this 3 circles, something like this Screen (doesn't have to be that pattern)following the jumping piano here
00:56:922 - Consider making these two sliders longer and no repeat. visual cue that there is a switch to 1/3 spacing. The sliders before are fine, but because they begin on white ticks and aren't followed by 1/3 note streams they are easier to catch. pianoScreen
00:59:076 (4,5,1) - This stack-jump doesn't seem necessary, consider moving 00:59:307 (5) - to the back to the midpoint of 00:59:076 (4,1) - no
01:35:999 (4,5,1,2) - Move 01:36:460 (2) - a bit so it's a triangle pattern with 01:35:999 (4) - as the centerpoint, it's currently a bit off.seems so
01:41:076 (5,6,1) - Keep this one combo, or alternatively, you could move 01:41:076 (5,6) - to 01:40:999 - it changed downbeatSomething like this.

[Normal]
00:46:768 (3,4) - your previous sliders all follow the vocals except this part. try something like this and have it start 00:46:922 - I don't miss any vocal hereLike this.
01:04:153 (2) - have the slider start at 01:03:999 - you'll have to increase the length a bit to conpensate
01:26:768 (4,5,6) - make 01:26:768 (4) - shorter and start 01:27:230 (5,6) - on 01:27:076 - like this: did a little changeSomething like this.

[Easy]
00:18:768 - you could map this part, it feels weird to start at 00:19:999 - for the spinner limit
00:39:076 - just suggest but try making the slider at 00:38:460 (1) - longer so it ends at 00:39:076 - and the same with 00:39:999 (3) - Something like this. the repeat slider plays better this way imo.follow the drum
00:43:383 (1,2,3) - same as above.^
01:04:153 (2) - move to 01:03:999 - and make slider longer to compensate^

edit: forgot to include Kanto's Hard

Fortune wrote:

Hi from your queue.

Easy

  1. 00:12:614 (1) - I think the circle here is not easy to catch for newbies. I prefer a slider 00:12:922 ~ 00:13:537 I like piano better
  2. 00:51:999 (1) - you didn't NC at similar rythm 00:56:922 (3). Consider ot plzmy falut
  3. 01:01:230 (2) - bend a little could be nice. no
  4. 01:05:076 (3) - I think the slider should be start at 01:04:922. Isn't this rythm is more fitting?no
  5. 01:14:153 (3,4) - blank perfectlyk
  6. 01:21:845 (4) - move the last point of slider up 1grid (328||40)k

Normal

  1. 00:15:076 (1) - dunno, isn't spinner should be finish at 00:18:153 ?no
  2. 00:25:999 (1) - it doesn't need a rythm at 00:25:999 because the drum sound is quite small. How about this rythm? seems so
  3. 01:05:383 (1) - extend the slider to start at 01:05:383 - no
  4. 01:23:999 (3) - 457||156no
  5. 01:27:230 (5,6,1) - I think that removing circle 6 and make the spinner start at 01:27:537 is betterchanged to slider

Insane

  1. 00:15:076 (1) - ctrl + g for up flow.flow is good imo
  2. 00:37:435 (2,3,4,5,6) - it changes to 1/3rythm so surprisingly. NC pleasek
  3. 00:57:537 (1) - NCk
  4. 01:41:999 (10) - 352||80 can be highlighted and playable as i played several times.will consider

I like this map. Guuuuud luck!

scanter wrote:

General
  1. I can catch your all about normal, soft, drum slider-slide isn't not perfect muted. I can catch some noised sound. so I recommend change yours to this file. http://puu.sh/e0owD/d6be212841.wavis it really necessary?..
  2. recommend change the BG size 16:9 for better play.will
  3. I can catch only Kanto's Hard hasn't Kiai section.k


Easy
  1. AR -1? AR seems to not easy, but a little bit normalk
  2. 01:27:691 (1) - I recommend highly fill up more rhythm this interval. it makes think this is an forced rhythm by this spinner. check plz what I've done on itmainly I do this to follow the long symphony sound,and to make the diff easier


Normal
  1. 00:13:691 (2,3,4) - it is more nice if you change this vague vocal rhythm to just following piano rhythm.just for piano,no vocal
  2. 00:51:230 - whistle seems to sunken
  3. 00:56:153 - ^ samethe tune here is not the same as the last one..
  4. 00:56:922 (2) - this blanket can improve morek
  5. 01:20:153 (6,1) - a little bad flow, so a little comportable to play. what about this?fine for me
  6. 01:27:691 (1) - same opinion as Easy. what about this?same


Insane
  1. 00:41:383 (3) - I assure you want to NC here, before you did same thing at 00:32:460 (2)no
  2. 00:15:076 (1) - reduce 1 repeat? in OD8, it is easy prone to 100 or else bad thing.fine for me,will look what others say
  3. 00:29:999 (2,3) - swap rhythm much better for play. now is a little awkward to play.no
  4. 00:39:845 (2) - HP bar little touchedk
  5. 00:47:999 - somehow, drum sample-set clap is more good to hearthe present is fine for me
  6. 01:05:537 (1) - eh. it is easy lead to 100 due to spacing imao.will consider
  7. 01:31:845 (3,5) - NC?no
  8. 01:41:076 (5) - maybe you forgot put hitsound. where is the hitsound since here? :Owaiting for new MP3


mapset is really neat and tidy. GL anyway ;)

will change when I have time..
update Kanto's
Topic Starter
No_Gu

Kibbleru wrote:

I assume you're planning to cut the mp3, when you do that, you can consider cutting a bit off at the beginning too since there's quite alot of silence there

[General]
  1. not sure if its just me but offset sound a bit early?a new mp3 will release next week


[Insane]
  1. 00:32:768 - whistle? nvm idk what your pattern isif you hear clearly,I follows the strong beat this part,and there is no such a sound here
  2. 00:53:845 (5) - consider nc? i think it fits the pattern and will make it seem less crowdedk
    01:02:460 (5) - ^k


[Normal]
  1. why does it seem to get slightly easier at the kiai lol..following both vocal and drum will make this a little harder as my previous diff..but anyway added some notes
  2. well... nothing really wrong with this but.. why lol?0.16 is a base for grid 3..it's very common since long time ago


[Easy]
  1. 00:26:768 (2,3) - nazi blanket thing
  2. 01:24:614 (4) - how bout extend this slider to 01:25:076 - for cymbal?don't want to lose snare in kiai time and in fact a 3/2 is not as easy to catch as 2/1


just a very fast mod, ill take a better look at it when i recheck.

for now just get your sp above 12 and apply mods, also dont forget to cut that mp3 lol.

ts8zs wrote:

话说一般tv size不是1:30么你确定。。。好吧前面空太长了 ╮(╯-╰)╭
[Insane]
00:37:230 - I pefer short slider不够爽
00:41:999 (1) - Ctrl+G不太好吧
01:25:537 (2) - blanketk

01:30:153 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 这里有盒子的鬼畜范er这梗我一直很常用。。
[Kanto's Hard]
well
[Normal]
00:20:922 (5) - delno
00:58:153 (1) - overlap with 00:54:460 (3) - ?时间隔很久了吧。。
01:23:383 (2) - blanketk
[Easy]
nothing found._.

I wanna ask m4m first...looks short then nope...
Topic Starter
No_Gu

Kibbleru wrote:

I assume you're planning to cut the mp3, when you do that, you can consider cutting a bit off at the beginning too since there's quite alot of silence there

[General]
  1. not sure if its just me but offset sound a bit early?a new mp3 will release next week


[Insane]
  1. 00:32:768 - whistle? nvm idk what your pattern isif you hear clearly,I follows the strong beat this part,and there is no such a sound here
  2. 00:53:845 (5) - consider nc? i think it fits the pattern and will make it seem less crowdedk
    01:02:460 (5) - ^k


[Normal]
  1. why does it seem to get slightly easier at the kiai lol..following both vocal and drum will make this a little harder as my previous diff..but anyway added some notes
  2. well... nothing really wrong with this but.. why lol?0.16 is a base for grid 3..it's very common since long time ago


[Easy]
  1. 00:26:768 (2,3) - nazi blanket thing
  2. 01:24:614 (4) - how bout extend this slider to 01:25:076 - for cymbal?don't want to lose snare in kiai time and in fact a 3/2 is not as easy to catch as 2/1


just a very fast mod, ill take a better look at it when i recheck.

for now just get your sp above 12 and apply mods, also dont forget to cut that mp3 lol.

ts8zs wrote:

话说一般tv size不是1:30么你确定。。。好吧前面空太长了 ╮(╯-╰)╭
[Insane]
00:37:230 - I pefer short slider不够爽
00:41:999 (1) - Ctrl+G不太好吧
01:25:537 (2) - blanketk

01:30:153 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 这里有盒子的鬼畜范er这梗我一直很常用。。
[Kanto's Hard]
well
[Normal]
00:20:922 (5) - delno
00:58:153 (1) - overlap with 00:54:460 (3) - ?时间隔很久了吧。。
01:23:383 (2) - blanketk
[Easy]
nothing found._.

I wanna ask m4m first...looks short then nope...
http://puu.sh/ehq8R/31306850cf.jpg
will change MP3/VIDEO next week cuz ep1 doesn't have a good one..
and change title to MIIRO cuz of the cd cover above
KantoKun

Kibbleru wrote:

I assume you're planning to cut the mp3, when you do that, you can consider cutting a bit off at the beginning too since there's quite alot of silence there

[Hard]
  1. 00:12:460 (1,2,3) - i suggest maybe use a 1/4 repeat instead, a slider is alot easier to lead in with rather than a triplet fix
  2. 00:29:845 (1) - maybe remove nc lol, i dont think 1 combo is really needed ^
    00:32:307 (1) - ^ ^
  3. 00:45:845 - sounds like it needs a finish here? yeah mistake...
  4. 01:16:307 - this sounded so weird without the nomal clap :C haha OK
    01:26:153 - ^ ^
    actually, did you use hitsound copier for this? if so ill only check the hitsounds for insane
  5. 01:41:230 (1,2,1) - i really recommend against this x.x 1/4 jumps are just a bit too much


just a very fast mod, ill take a better look at it when i recheck.

for now just get your sp above 12 and apply mods, also dont forget to cut that mp3 lol.
osu file format v13

[General]
AudioFilename: Miiro.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 67076
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.3
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 12614,101999
DistanceSpacing: 1.5
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 32
TimelineZoom: 1

[Metadata]
Title:MIIRO
TitleUnicode:海色
Artist:AKINO from bless4
ArtistUnicode:AKINO from bless4
Creator:No_Gu
Version:Kanto's Hard
Source:Kantai Collection -KanColle-
Tags:艦隊これくしょん -艦これ- KantoKun
BeatmapID:580615
BeatmapSetID:251251

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CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:7
ApproachRate:8
SliderMultiplier:1.5
SliderTickRate:1

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143,34,79691,1,0,3:0:0:0:
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125,182,79999,2,0,P|130:221|123:264,1,75,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
115,281,80230,1,8,0:0:0:0:
103,305,80307,6,0,B|86:327|64:336|64:336|111:362|168:340,1,150,4|8,3:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
243,320,80768,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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121,136,85537,2,0,P|106:180|111:213,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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101,290,86153,2,0,P|140:285|171:263,1,75,0|0,1:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
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173,133,88460,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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376,210,90076,1,0,3:0:0:0:
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500,85,90614,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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