From my Queue~
[Easy]
No Problem.
[Normal]
00:17:232 (4) - Why don't you use a circle+1/1 slider?? I think that is better
01:28:141 (5) - ^
00:35:812 - I think don't forget this sound, like 00:38:027 (2,3) -
00:46:891 (3) - rotate centre -3
01:16:721 (2,3) - change like this→ 00:14:334 (3,4) -
[Hard]
00:06:493 (1) - red line end
00:06:834 (2) - ^
00:07:175 (3) - ^
00:17:743 (8,9,10,11) - I think it's too far for Hard here
00:22:857 (5) - Ctrl+G, same reason ^
I think 00:24:221 - to 00:29:164 - no any jump objects better for you Hard diff
00:26:437 (8) - ^
00:27:630 (3) - ^
00:28:993 (7) - ^
00:36:493 (6,7) - I have no idea, just feel very strange here
00:38:027 (2,3) - No jump better because 00:38:539 (3,4) - have a big jump
00:45:357 (9) - why don't you follow 3 drum hits??
00:50:982 (9) - del it better, just follow your pause point
00:56:607 - to 01:01:891 - I have same suggestion as I think 00:24:221 - to 00:29:164
01:03:425 (7) - NC??
01:04:448 (11) - 3 jump hits...
01:06:493 (5) - NC
01:09:902 (7,8) - make a better triangle with slider's head
01:11:096 (4,5) - combine a slider??
01:13:652 (3,4) - here is no jump, why 01:12:800 (9,1) - is a big jump. No idea
01:16:721 (4,5) - no jump, no sense
01:19:277 (4,5) - I know what you think, but Ctrl+G is better
01:20:982 (9) - stack on 01:21:493 (2) 's head??
01:26:266 (8) - I think a better set is "(7)" here
01:27:289 (5,6) - why it is not same as 01:05:471 (3,4) - ??
01:28:141 (7) - NC
[Insane]
You know, I am a strange mapper. My map not just follow a normal rule, I follow lyric and music. The most important, I follow feeling in the song. So about a Insane diff, I will catch all your no-sense point an tell you why.
00:06:493 (1,2) - same as Hard. Next slider for Insane, I think it is fine
00:08:368 (4,5) - combine a slider, it have a no-sense jump here
00:11:096 (6,7) - ^
00:14:505 (2) - Jump too far, I think more close better. because this is the start for jump, the first jump is too far. If I play this, I'll close the game.
00:15:868 (2,3) - ^, be closer please
00:24:221 - to 00:33:255 - Same as Hard. For Insane, this period no many big jump is better for you diff
00:30:698 (1,2,3,4) - I give you a better set for you, try it↓
00:32:914 (3,4,5) - no jump too far
00:39:391 (3) - move to 112|264, symmetry with 00:39:562 (4,5,6) -
00:41:948 (2,3) - For me, combine a slider better
00:47:573 (3,4,5) - make bending like 00:40:584 (2,3,4) -
00:52:175 (6,1) - too far, really too far
00:53:027 (3,4,5) - make bending??
00:56:607 - to 01:01:550 - same as 00:24:221 - to 00:33:255
01:15:527 (8,1) - too far
01:16:721 (6,7) - ^, and I think it is no sense
01:26:777 (2,3) - get closer, reason is^
Are you really kajiyatta?? Because kajiyatta's map
Hana - Eden's Song is a very nice map.
But for your Insane this song, it is not well.
Make a nice map for Osu! , please.
Sorry I can't give you more.
good luck