HikaruR wrote:

00:00:249 (1,2,3) - maybe replace each slider here with two sliders.its not mapped on the melody, it should represent the background noise
00:43:105 (3,4,5) - place the last two notes in a line with the slider to make it look nicer.nope xD
00:44:819 (2,3,4) - this reads a bit awkward in my opinion, maybe don't stack the first two notes for more clarity.changed completely
00:54:248 (1,2,3) - this triple doesn't look right. maybe start the triple on the upper right side of the slider.nah, cant agree
01:01:619 (7) - snap this note between the previous and the next note to hold the flow.i didnt feel any difference but thanks anyways you discovered a mistake
01:10:533 (2,3,4) - you could snap this triple just a bit further away from eachother.fixed, there was also another mitsake :p
01:18:419 (1) - this slider is just outside of the play field... Speak for itself i guess...fixd
01:19:791 (1) - same with this one.^^[color]
01:25:276 (1) - ending kiai time here would be a good idea, but that's just my opinion i guess... (Having kiai time again is no problem.)[color=#00bb00]i thought about this the same, but i was like "yeah kiai-lighting on streams is really cool" so i didnt
01:27:676 (3) - also just outside of the playfield fixed
01:28:362 (2,3,4) - would be nice if this was in a straight line.nope xD
01:33:505 (1) - uhm, that's not the playfield b-baka!fixed
01:36:762 (3) - one more time and i swear...fixed
01:41:391 (4) - did you forget a clap here?thanks
01:42:933 (7) - i think you messed up the hitsound here.haha yea
I think this is about everything i noticed, great map overall. Love it!

Arooma wrote:

From #modreqs :3

Insane

1. 00:26:133 (5) sorry, i do not understand what you mean >.<
   
   this place is (1)slider

   
2. 00:34:362 (5) - ctrl+g it would be different from 00:23:391 (5,6,7,8,1,2)
   
   
3. 00:39:505 (4) - ^? okay
   
4. 00:40:876 (4) - ^ okay

Heavy

1. 00:46:362 (1,2,3,1) - How about that distance as before? (1.1) done
   
2. 01:14:305 - 1. add circle?
   
   2. rhythm change

   
3. 01:14:476 (4,5,1,2) - I think in a strange rhythm
   
   Propose

   
4. 01:36:419 (1,2,3,4) - ^

added circle but did not change rhythm

Moderate

1. 00:28:019 (2,3) - distance is different (1.21 {1.2}, 1.27 {1.3}) fixed
   
2. 01:14:133 (4) - delete not sure~
   
   Propose

   
3. 01:43:790 (2,3,1) - distance is different (1.0 {1.0}, 1.18 {1.2}) nah, the sliderheads are really close so the actual distance when playing is lower than it is shown in the editor
   
4. 01:47:219 (1) - ^

fixed

Sorry, Low quality mod .. thanks anyway :>
Map is very good! :3
but 'Moderate' (Normal?) is 2.07 star
The easiest diff is Star<2.0 let's see what i can do about this
easy is needed or normal is easier
Good luck~ C:

Tshemmp wrote:

I haven't done this modding thing in over 2 years, so yeah, my advice probably sucks but you asked for it so deal with it.

[General]

1. fine

[Insane]

1. check auto mod, there are several unsnapped objects at the beginning ( 00:27:834 and 00:29:205 and 00:31:434 ) fixd
2. 00:43:105 (3,4,5) - why suddenly the difference in triplet spacing? Just stack it like before. now that convinced me
3. 00:47:391 - I feel like there is a very strong beat here, remove the repeat and add a slider instead like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3457975 . changed pattern
4. 00:55:963 (4,5) - ctrl+g so it is a continuation of the slider movement before. nice la
5. 01:01:619 (7) - NC here since it doesn't really belong to the two circles before.changed somehow~
6. 01:16:704 (1) - what. RNC pls oops. Maybe one here 01:16:019 (6) - instead.nope
7. 01:19:791 (1) - make the combo consistent with 01:08:819 (4) yes
8. 01:29:048 (6) - ctrl+g here maybe? Idk, with the slider this direction the flow feels way better although the triplet afterwards doesn't really fit THAT much.
9. 01:34:533 (6) - if you did ^ you should it also do it here but also rotate it a bit so it goes more into the opposite direction of 01:34:876 (1) .nah, i kept the pattern consistent with similiar parts
10. 01:38:648 (10) - yeah look, here you didn't do this weird NC you did at 01:16:704 (1), way better!
11. 01:51:162 (4) - double the length of the slider, it feels so empty.
12. 01:56:648 (4) - ^no. the sliders in the last part end on white ticks just because i didnt want to map the weaker beats afterwards.filling the gap makes playing 01:52:191 (6,7) super weird. id have to remove all red-ticks-slider... blah blah blah cant explain

[Heavy]

1. 01:18:762 (7) - NC here, otherwise it just gets too long. Also to make it consistent with 01:07:791 (1)
2. 01:28:705 (2,3,4) - instead of circle-circle-slider I suggest slider-circle-circle because the accentuation on (3) atm doesn't feel right imo. You will obviously need a circle at 01:29:216 then, too.
3. 01:39:676 (2,3,4) - same as ^
4. 01:44:473 (7) - NC?
   fixed all nc issues in the kiai time

sexy

[Moderate]

1. 00:30:591 (1,2,3) - hm, maybe turn them into slider instead so the beginner player doesn't have to have such a good rhythm to keep accuracy. Syncopations too hard. fine imo
2. 00:52:534 (1,2,3) - ^ ^
3. 01:08:819 (5) - NC, otherwise it gets soooo long.
4. 01:14:476 (1,2,3) - HERE YOU DID IT (yeah it's not quite the same part but similar in map rhythm).
5. 01:19:791 (5) - NC -> the combo colours would become different at this repeat so it decreases the structure if i NC, but ill still do it
6. 01:29:391 (3,4) - don't really like this. Try this instead http://puu.sh/jhpvE.jpg .dunno~
7. 01:32:133 (1) - sometimes you don't use a new NC in 10 seconds and then you spam them every second, lol. Remove it here?oops
8. 01:40:362 (3,4) - like 01:29:391 (3,4) .^
9. 01:43:105 (1,2) - yeah, your NCing isn't consistent, check 01:32:133. fixed

Woho, I did it.

Also, nice map, starrr. thanks :>

Cancel wrote:

General

1. The easiest diff for this mapset is a Normal, which is normally okay, but since it's 2,07*, you should map an Easy, since the ranking criteria states so.
2. You should add more tags. I'd suggest to add liquid drum and bass edm liquicity.everything but edm
3. Remove (Cut Ver.) from the title, as it isn't posted as it anywhere else but here. Also, the Ranking Criteria says not to do this. (2) i personally dont approve that "rule" >.<
4. The current hitsound give me a headache lol. Consider changing them, as most players who play with Custom hitsounds on will probably also think so. (I mean... normal-hitnormals on normal-hitnormals is migraine fuel.)i changed the clap for the first kiai now dunno if there are other issues with the hitsounding. pm me if you thought of something especially or if it is "just" a general problem

Normal

1. 00:24:762 (4,5) - This stack may confuse players new to the game. Use DS to fix the issue. Also, 00:24:933 (5) - should have a NC.made from own expierence + advise/testplays from 5 newer players. NC would confuse rather more than imo and its not that nessecary here :p
2. 00:28:876 (3,4) - Same as mentioned before.^
3. 00:31:619 (4) - Move to why ? explain, and again, the stacking issue with 00:32:819 (5) - .^
4. 00:35:733 (3,4) - Stacking + NC on 00:35:905 (4) - .^
5. 00:46:276 (5) - Starting on a red tick may be confusing to some players, but I can't say for sure you have to change it. I'd suggest you do it, anyway. goes 100% with the music so i dont think it is hard
6. 00:47:219 (6) - NC okay ~
7. 00:51:848 (5) - Same as before. The following beats can stay on the red ticks.^
8. 01:08:819 (5) - NC done
9. 01:12:248 (2) - Turn this in just a straight slider:meh? more generic? why? it doesnt even look sea water like
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Synpoo wrote:

hi, from my q

Moderate

Check AIMod for unsnapped objects
This diff needs to be below 2.0 stars in order for this map to be rankable

The difficulties in the mapset must be in a consecutive order. Easy or Normal can be skipped if the gap in the star rating spread allows it. The order can be seen in the chart below. If your mapset has two difficulties, one of them cannot be an Insane or Expert. The lowest difficulty must be below 2.0 stars.

gonna do it somehow... how are people getting so picky about this? although current difficulty rating system is really good, its not like you can possibly feel those 0.07 "too high difficulty" to make it reasonable to say that this is definitely too hard...orz
Also, changes in slider velocity aren't rankable in normal because they'll just confused players, so this diff will probably need a major overhaul so I guess I'll just point out things to keep in mind instead of specific issues apparently they dont get confused by just everything, they are not dumb after all. this kind of guideline comes from long ago to prevent completely unreasonable sv-changes

1. 00:00:000 - Remove all these unused green lines i propably do later >.<
2. 00:24:762 (4,5) - Changes in spacing are not rankable in normal difficulties, stack this or give it proper spacing ill need a hell lot of opinions about these i guess before i decide what to do with them
3. 00:28:876 (3,4) - Same thing about this and all other instances, fix all of them ^
4. 00:32:819 (5) - Plays pretty bad to end on the downbeat, make it a 1/2-circle instead not a really strong beat at all, even though its on a white tick. map would become harder to read too..
5. 00:42:762 (2) - Same thing here, strong beats aren't good to end a slider on, they should have something clickable on it [color=#000Bb00]agree[/color]
6. 00:44:476 (1,2,3,4) - This rhythm represents the music more accurately like this i actually know, but having 1/2 circles combined with 1/2 sliders will make it more difficult to play/read it. i think currently the rhythm get represented well enough this way
   
   SPOILER

   
7. 00:49:962 (1,2,3,4) - Same ^ ^
8. 00:54:248 - Probably shouldn't skip this insanely strong beat hmm nah~
9. 01:01:276 (2,3,4) - You should just follow the buildup of the drums here cuz that's definitely the focus of this part, right now this rhythm plays really awkwardlyc gonna get some testplays for that, on hold
10. 01:16:019 (2) - Touching the hp bar srsly.. D: fixed
11. 01:25:276 (1) - Unrankable, see this: t/241019 fixed it
12. 01:40:362 (3,1) - This overlap looks really bad looks cool

But yea this diff is has lots of issues making it unrankable such as: inconsistent spacing, SV changes, spinner, etc

Insane

Why is this not just ar9? because ar9 feels different from 9.1 actually :v
Also, the hp is incredibly high, lower it to 7 done
I disagree with the way you use combos in the kiai, you should just keep NC to the big white ticks instead of random NC like these 01:20:991 (1) - 01:21:848 (1) - 01:24:762 (1) - time to create yet another 4/4-NC map.. :s didnt changed all

1. 00:25:962 (6) - Stack this on 7 instead as it's clearly a different sound from 5 and white ticks like this should get the jump, not the red tick since i mapped along the melody 5,6 sound the same and 6,7 sound differently. when i play it and get that (i guess my hitsounding is propably irritating then) it seems to be the most logical solution the way it is. it didnt feel different to play at all anyway so..
2. 00:36:933 (6) - ^^
3. 00:39:505 (5,6,1) - Why is the jump from 5->6 so big but 6->1 is smaller even though 1 is a stronger beat? oops, wasnt even intended
4. 01:01:619 (1) - Delete NC? well ok, i change it back :p
5. 01:08:133 (6,1,2) - Emphasis here is a bit wrong too, 1->2 should have more (or at least equal) spacing than 6->1
6. 01:12:248 (4,5,6) - Here too
7. 01:13:619 (6,1,2) - ^^ Hmm this happens in a lot places actually, look through the rest and fix them yourselffixed 3 out of 4 (i just like one pattern too much) ;w;

Gl~ thanks for modding :3

KASUM1 wrote:

[General]

You should check your aimod
fixed, but that last point didnt occur o.o
[Insane]
00:00:249 (1,2,3,1,1) - I think you wasted alot of white ticks , your sliders Is a good idea too hm nah~
00:45:333 (4,5) - why these 2 sliders cross each other? i like the pattern ;w;
00:47:562 (3,5) - ^^
00:48:076 (5,7) - stack for a good pattern done
00:50:819 (3,4) - again o.o maybe they are good. I'm not a professional modder ^
01:12:419 (5,2) - stack done
01:31:962 (7,3) - ^ 01:31:448 (4,7,1) - and 01:31:448 (4,7,2) - are tirangles. they have another angle than the pentagon 01:32:133 (1,2,3,4,5) - so they are unstackable

Since you have 1 insane I'm going to mod your normal and hard but I'm not a professional in easy~hard

[Heavy]

00:48:762 (2,1) - overlap maybe? dont think this will be confusing. the time difference is pretty high imo
00:55:791 (2,2) - how about stacking these? not so sure, i dont like that 00:56:476 (1) - would have to be moved more to the upper left, which makes playing 00:55:962 (3,1) - feel "a lot" different. it isnt noticalbe (for me) while playing anyways~
01:14:305 (1,3) - ^ done
Well , that's all

[Moderate]

00:23:391 (3) - move this too 00:23:562 - i didnt map on the drum or sth else, its on the melody. i think those syncopes are very easy to play, since they dont go against a somewhat stronger beat
00:30:076 (4) - remove this and move 00:28:876 (3) - to 00:29:048 - ^
00:30:762 (1,2,3) - move this to the white tick on the right or on the left ^
01:05:048 - 01:05:391 - missing notes o.o this is an easier difficulty which means players must be granted recovery time after a spinner~

That's all , I hope my mod helps you ♥ [color=#0000b]green = prove <3[/color]