Didn't find many issues with this map, except those weird streams and hyperdashes on lower diffs that I assume are part of your new style. They left me with a lot of doubts (I'm not sure whether they're rankable/acceptable) or not, so this is a ask-the-QAT bad mod.
MOD INFO
[ Cup]
[ Salad]
[ Platter]
[ Rain]
MOD INFO
Plain text - Suggested
Bolded text - Highly suggested
Red bolded text - Unrankable issue (must fix)
Bolded text - Highly suggested
Red bolded text - Unrankable issue (must fix)
[ Cup]
Timeline and Patterns
- 00:07:910 (1,2,3) - Reduce distance a bit, moving them horizontally until x1,34 distance is better
- 00:08:738 (4,5,6) - ^Same idea, but with a x1,44 distance.
- 00:13:703 (4,5,6) - Move (5) closer to (4,6)
- 00:14:531 (7,1,2) - Move it closer to the previous triangle. Also, move (1) closer to (7,2). I know it can be done without dashing, but I would leave this kind of distances for the Kiai.
- 00:15:358 (3,4,5) - ^Same
- 00:16:186 (1,2,3) - ^
- 00:20:324 (11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19) - I think I can accept the previous 1/4 stream, but using a 1/8 stream on a Cup is a no-no for me. Also, take that hyperdash out, even if it's easy. Don't forget this is a Cup
- 00:26:117 (4,5) - Remove this hyperdash
- 00:33:979 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - Reduce distance on this part. You use the same pattern on the Kiai Time, so I think it would be good to use an "easier" version for a non-Kiai part.
- 01:10:807 (1,1) - You must increase distance before the spinner, 1/4 is too short.
New Combo
SPOILER
- 00:14:531 (7) - Add NC
- 00:14:738 (1) - Remove NC
- 00:20:324 (11) - Whatever you change this stream to, add a NC here.
- 00:26:117 (4) - Add NC
- 00:50:945 (5) - Add NC
- 00:51:358 (1) - Remove NC
- 00:52:600 (5) - Add NC
- 00:54:255 (8) - Add NC
- 00:54:462 (1) - Remove NC
- 01:04:186 (6) - Add NC
- 01:04:600 (1) - Remove NC
- 01:05:841 (4) - Add NC
- 01:15:772 (4) - Add NC
- 01:19:083 (5) - Add NC
- 01:27:565 (6) - Add NC
[ Salad]
Timeline and Patterns
- 00:07:841 (8,1) - Remove the hyperdash
- 00:20:686 (21,22) - Remove the hyperdash
- 00:26:117 (3,4) - Remove the hyperdash
- 00:30:255 (3) - Move to x:288 for an easier movement.
- 00:47:221 (5) - Move to x:16 for a slightly shorter jump
- 01:14:065 (21,22) - Remove hyperdash
New Combo
SPOILER
- 00:14:531 (7) - Add NC
- 00:14:738 (1) - Remove NC
- 00:20:014 (8) - Add NC
- 00:52:600 (5) - Add NC
- 01:13:393 (8) - Add NC
[ Platter]
Timeline and Patterns
- 00:07:290 (5,6,7,8,1) - It's better to ask a QAT if this is acceptable, currently 1/4 and above hyperdashes are a bit controversial (some think they are acceptable under certain BPM conditions and so on).
- 00:19:910 (7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22) - It can be done without dashing at all, but BATs won't allow 1/8 hyperdashes on a Platter, so remove them. I would keep the last one (00:20:686 (21,22) - ) though.
- 00:26:117 (3,4) - [b]Again, it's better to ask a QAT if this 1/6 hyperdash is acceptable or not.
- 00:50:945 (6,1,2,3,4,5) - This part could have a bit more movement, since it's the Kiai Time. You can try this positions: (1) x:304, (2) x:144, (3) x:272, (4) x:64, (5) x:352.
- 00:57:152 (1,2,3) - You can add a jump to (3) since it's on the downbeat. For that, move (3) to x:0 (it will create a x1,53 jump)
- 00:58:807 (1,2,3) - Ctrl + H this and move (3) to x:360. It will create a jump similar to 00:57:152 (1,2,3) - .
- 01:04:187 (6,1,2,3,4,5) - This part can also have more movement, using the same idea as 00:50:945 (6,1,2,3,4,5)
- 01:12:875 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26) - Again, 1/8 hyperdashes aren't allowed, specially patterns like 01:13:444 (13,14,15,16) - and 01:13:962 (23,24,25,26) -, so create a different stream. I think you can keep the last hyperdash as a finishing one.
New Combo
SPOILER
- 00:14:531 (7) - Add NC
- 00:14:738 (1) - Remove NC
- 00:20:014 (8) - Add NC
- 00:32:738 (4) - Add NC
- 00:34:393 (6) - Add NC
- 00:35:014 (1) - Remove NC
- 00:35:221 (2) - Add NC
- 00:35:841 (1) - Remove NC
- 00:36:048 (2) - Add NC
- 00:36:669 (1) - Remove NC
- 00:36:876 (2) - Add NC
- 00:37:496 (1) - Remove NC
- 00:37:703 (2) - Add NC
- 00:40:807 (1) - Remove NC
- 00:41:014 (2) - Add NC
- 00:41:635 (1) - Remove NC
- 00:41:841 (2) - Add NC
- 00:42:462 (1) - Remove NC
- 00:42:669 (2) - Add NC
- 00:43:290 (1) - Remove NC
- 00:43:497 (2) - Add NC
- 00:44:117 (1) - Remove NC
- 00:44:324 (2) - Add NC
- 00:50:945 (6) - Add NC
- 00:51:358 (1) - Remove NC
- 00:52:600 (4) - Add NC
- 00:54:255 (8) - Add NC
- 00:54:462 (1) - Remove NC
- 01:00:876 (4) - Add NC
- 01:01:083 (1) - Remove NC
- 01:04:187 (6) - Add NC
- 01:04:600 (1) - Remove NC
- 01:05:842 (4) - Add NC
- 01:17:427 (5) - Add NC
- 01:18:255 (1) - Remove NC
- 01:20:738 (5) - Remove NC
- 01:24:048 (5) - Add NC
- 01:24:255 (1) - Remove NC
[ Rain]
Timeline and Patterns
- 00:07:290 (5,6,7,8,1) - Although not so hard, this pattern isn't recommended to be used on a Rain, so try to think of something else (maybe the same patterns but without hyperdashes
- 00:09:979 (4) - Woops, an hyperdash droplet? Make the slider more inclined to remove it or change the SV multiplier
- 00:13:290 (4) - ^Same
- 00:19:290 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26,27,28) - I'm really not sure about this. Actually, it's not hard, but I don't think it's really acceptable, so ask a QAT. Also, there are better ways to map this IMO.
- 00:51:358 (1,2,3,4) - Same suggestion as previous diffs
- 01:03:358 (4) - You can Ctrl+G this to create more movement, current one is too boring because it's a really small distance
- 01:12:669 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26,27,28,29) - Again, I'm not sure if this is acceptable. It's better to ask a QAT. Not suggesting anything for now because this is what you probably meant with "your new style" and I respect mapping styles.
- 01:27:152 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - You've been using this pattern since the Cup diff, add more distance between the triplets to add some variety and make a noticeable difference between diffs
New Combo
SPOILER
- 00:09:358 (1) - Remove NC
- 00:09:565 (2) - Add NC
- 00:12:669 (1) - Remove NC
- 00:12:876 (2) - Add NC
- 00:14:531 (7) - Add NC
- 00:15:979 (1) - Remove NC
- 00:16:186 (2) - Add NC
- 00:19:910 (13) - Add NC
- 00:20:324 (21) - Add NC
- 00:22:807 (5) - Add NC
- 00:23:220 (1) - Remove NC
- 00:25:703 (1) - Remove NC
- 00:26:117 (3) - Add NC
- 00:32:738 (4) - Add NC
- 00:33:979 (1) - Remove NC
- 00:34:393 (2) - Add NC
- 00:35:014 (1) - Remove NC
- 00:35:221 (2) - Add NC
- 00:35:841 (1) - Remove NC
- 00:36:048 (2) - Add NC
- 00:36:669 (1) - Remove NC
- 00:36:876 (2) - Add NC
- 00:37:496 (1) - Remove NC
- 00:37:703 (2) - Add NC
- 00:39:152 (1) - Remove NC
- 00:39:358 (2) - Add NC
- 00:40:807 (1) - Remove NC
- 00:41:014 (2) - Add NC
- 00:41:635 (1) - Remove NC
- 00:41:842 (2) - Add NC
- 00:42:462 (1) - Remove NC
- 00:42:669 (2) - Add NC
- 00:43:290 (1) - Remove NC
- 00:43:496 (2) - Add NC
- 00:44:117 (1) - Remove NC
- 00:44:324 (2) - Add NC
- 00:50:945 (6) - Add NC
- 00:51:358 (1) - Remove NC
- 00:52:600 (4) - Add NC
- 00:54:255 (8) - Add NC
- 00:54:462 (1) - Remove NC
- 01:00:876 (4) - Add NC
- 01:01:083 (1) - Remove NC
- 01:04:187 (6) - Add NC
- 01:04:600 (1) - Remove NC
- 01:05:842 (4) - Add NC
- 01:07:290 (1) - Remove NC
- 01:07:496 (2) - Add NC
- 01:13:289 (13) - Add NC
- 01:13:703 (21) - Add NC
- 01:17:427 (5) - Add NC
- 01:17:634 (1) - Remove NC
- 01:20:738 (6) - Add NC
- 01:20:945 (1) - Remove NC
- 01:24:048 (5) - Add NC
- 01:24:255 (1) - Remove NC