Normal00:22:988 (2,3) - you can make the curve of the slider smoother to blanket better
00:31:388 (3) - add some sort of hitsound to go with the soft cymbals in the song? This should also be the NC, not at 00:30:588 (1) - according to the pattern of combo you were using before this. Subsequent one will be at 00:34:388 (4) - remove the NC at 00:35:988 (1) and 00:33:188 (1)
00:55:388 (3,4) - blanket can be improved, Ctrl + G 00:55:388 (3) temporarily to help you use the approach ring to help guide you make it better
00:59:588 (6,1) - blanket can be improved too
01:06:588 (1) - shift the node after the red node, the one in the middle of the 2nd curve, it's too close to the red node, and it causes the curve to be quite sharp and it makes slider ball's path to be awkward, and the shape would look nicer if shifted like this:
01:09:788 (1) - you should place it above the end of 01:09:188 (5) to ensure that the path from the end of the previous slider to this one would be more fluid, at least somewhere along this height:
01:16:188 (1,2) - unstack? You never stacked anything before this, and it would be better if unstacked, given it's the easiest difficulty in this set
01:36:788 (3,4) - shift it more to the left, it would be more natural next to 01:35:788 (2) as the flow throughout this part would be continuous. Shift 01:36:788 (3) to somewhere around x: 352 y: 204
01:56:988 (5,1) - it would be better if they looked nicer next to each other, looking more like a pattern with each other, they just don't seem to look like the same shape or mirror-image of each other, which makes it look awkward
02:15:388 (7,8) - blanket can be better, just like 00:55:388 (3,4)
02:25:788 (5,1) - blanket can be improved
02:29:788 (1) - finish on the end of the slider as well could fit, with the cymbals in the music at that point in time
02:29:788 (1,4) - stack the ends together? Just shift 02:30:988 (3) lower to allow the proper spacing required, you could then try to blanket 02:30:588 (2,4) as well
02:34:188 (3,4) - blanket can be improved
02:42:588 (1) - you could add a finish on the end of the slider as well
03:23:388 (5) - add a finish on the start of the slider, and clap on the repeating end of the slider, as well as at the end of the slider
03:56:188 (1,2) - blanket can be improved
04:14:788 (6) - add clap at the start of the slider as well
Hard00:11:788 (7,1) - could improve the blanket
00:17:388 (6) - add clap
00:24:388 (4) - clap in the middle of the slider. like all the other similar parts here? Unless you changed the custom hitsound to use the finish, but right now, there is no hitsound here
00:31:188 (6) - NC here instead of 00:31:788 (1) - it follows what you do for objects that start before the white tick but go over it
00:32:788 (3) - NC to be consistent with combo
00:35:988 (4) - ^
00:37:788 (3) - NC here instead of 00:37:388 (1)
00:41:288 - unnecessary inheriting line
00:41:488 - ^
00:54:188 (2,2) - stack them? You can shift the whole pattern of 00:55:388 (1,2,3)
00:54:988 (4,4) - stack?
00:57:788 (3,4) - why is there a triplet here when there is no music here at all? I don't think these triplets should be here for made up rhythm when there is nothing in the song, especially when it is Hard, at least try to follow more to the point for the song
01:00:988 (3,4) - ^
01:03:188 - it's places like this that actually has music that you can map to for triplets, not the ones above. You can add notes here and at 01:03:288
01:10:588 (3,4,5) - again there is no music at 01:10:588 and 01:10:688
01:23:788 (4) - finish at end of slider
01:51:788 (3) - I honestly think a normal soft finish would suit here better
01:55:788 (4) - clap
02:01:288 - unnecessary inheriting line
02:01:488 - ^
02:17:788 (3,4) - as mentioned about the triplets for similar parts in the chorus, there is really nothing it is mapped to
02:20:988 (3,4) - ^
02:23:188 - add notes here and 02:23:288 to follow the music
02:30:588 (3,4) - same thing about putting triplets when there is no sound for triplets
02:33:788 (3,4) - ^
02:35:988 and 02:36:088 - it's more apparent and obvious if you added triplets for places like this, it shows in the music as well
02:36:188 (1) - finish at the end of slider fits more than whistle
02:39:388 (1) - ^
02:42:988 (2) - finish at the start of the slider fits more than whistle
02:43:788 (4) - finish at the end of slider fits more than whistle
03:19:388 (1,2,3,4) - curve the pattern instead of a rather straight line, it would be smoother, 03:19:388 (1,2) don't blanket anyway
03:29:788 (5) - finish at the end of slider
03:53:788 (3) - same thing in regards to this part of the chorus
03:56:988 (3) - ^
03:59:188 - same thing, but just a reminder that a triplet here would be more appropriate then where you are having triplets right now
03:59:788 (3) - finish at start of slider fits better than whistle
04:06:188 (2) - ^
04:07:188 (5) - finish instead of whistle
04:14:788 (4) - clap at the start of the slider
04:18:188 (3) - finish instead of whistle
04:21:388 (5) - finish at the end of the slider
Insane00:29:788 (1) - the curve section doesn't really look nice
00:31:388 (1) - finish
00:43:388 (3,7,8,9,10) - add claps on these for greater effect
00:55:988 - add a note here and shift 00:56:288 (5) to 00:56:088 and keep 00:56:288 empty without anything. Also then place a jump between 00:56:188 and 00:56:388 (6) for emphasis of the stop in the music just before the chorus
01:03:788 (2) - finish instead of whistle
01:06:188 (4) - ^
01:06:988 (2) - ^
01:08:588 (3) - ^
01:10:188 (2) - finish at the start of slider instead of whistle
01:23:988 (6) - finish instead of whistle
01:51:788 (1) - a normal soft finish would suit the start of the slider better
02:03:388 (3,7) - add claps
02:15:988 - same as 00:55:988
02:36:588 (2) - finish instead of whistle
02:39:788 (2) - ^
02:42:988 (2) - ^
02:43:988 (6) - ^
03:19:388 (1,2,3,4) - this pattern just seems odd, it feels like 03:19:788 (2) doesn't match up in terms of shape, maybe make it less curvy
03:23:588 (5) - add clap
03:24:188 (1,2) - blanket can be improved
03:28:188 (3) - custom clap on the start of slider??
04:06:988 (4) - finish at the end of the slider instead of whistle
04:08:788 (4) - I don't think it should be spaced so close to 04:08:188 (3) - either stack or space them out farther
04:14:788 (4) - clap
04:18:188 (5) - finish instead of whistle
Good Luck