neonat's mod
thanks your mod ><neonat wrote:
Normal
00:22:988 (2,3) - you can make the curve of the slider smoother to blanket better OK
00:31:388 (3) - add some sort of hitsound to go with the soft cymbals in the song? This should also be the NC, not at 00:30:588 (1) - according to the pattern of combo you were using before this. Subsequent one will be at 00:34:388 (4) - remove the NC at 00:35:988 (1) and 00:33:188 (1) nice of the pattern of combo!!!
00:55:388 (3,4) - blanket can be improved, Ctrl + G 00:55:388 (3) temporarily to help you use the approach ring to help guide you make it better fix
00:59:588 (6,1) - blanket can be improved too fix too
01:06:588 (1) - shift the node after the red node, the one in the middle of the 2nd curve, it's too close to the red node, and it causes the curve to be quite sharp and it makes slider ball's path to be awkward, and the shape would look nicer if shifted like this: OK
01:09:788 (1) - you should place it above the end of 01:09:188 (5) to ensure that the path from the end of the previous slider to this one would be more fluid, at least somewhere along this height: sure
01:16:188 (1,2) - unstack? You never stacked anything before this, and it would be better if unstacked, given it's the easiest difficulty in this set OK
01:36:788 (3,4) - shift it more to the left, it would be more natural next to 01:35:788 (2) as the flow throughout this part would be continuous. Shift 01:36:788 (3) to somewhere around x: 352 y: 204 OK,but i try it myself here@@01:56:988 (5,1) - it would be better if they looked nicer next to each other, looking more like a pattern with each other, they just don't seem to look like the same shape or mirror-image of each other, which makes it look awkward I try make other shape.
02:15:388 (7,8) - blanket can be better, just like 00:55:388 (3,4) fix
02:25:788 (5,1) - blanket can be improved fix too
02:29:788 (1) - finish on the end of the slider as well could fit, with the cymbals in the music at that point in time I don't add may better here,because i feel orderless ><
02:29:788 (1,4) - stack the ends together? Just shift 02:30:988 (3) lower to allow the proper spacing required, you could then try to blanket 02:30:588 (2,4) as well fix
02:34:188 (3,4) - blanket can be improved fix too
02:42:588 (1) - you could add a finish on the end of the slider as well same of 02:29:788 (1) -
03:23:388 (5) - add a finish on the start of the slider, and clap on the repeating end of the slider, as well as at the end of the slider add
03:56:188 (1,2) - blanket can be improved fix
04:14:788 (6) - add clap at the start of the slider as well add
Hard
00:11:788 (7,1) - could improve the blanket fix
00:17:388 (6) - add clap add
00:24:388 (4) - clap in the middle of the slider. like all the other similar parts here? Unless you changed the custom hitsound to use the finish, but right now, there is no hitsound here add of the clap
00:31:188 (6) - NC here instead of 00:31:788 (1) - it follows what you do for objects that start before the white tick but go over it OK@@
00:32:788 (3) - NC to be consistent with combo OK
00:35:988 (4) - ^ OK
00:37:788 (3) - NC here instead of 00:37:388 (1) good
00:41:288 - unnecessary inheriting line delete
00:41:488 - ^ ^
00:54:188 (2,2) - stack them? You can shift the whole pattern of 00:55:388 (1,2,3) sure
00:54:988 (4,4) - stack? ^
00:57:788 (3,4) - why is there a triplet here when there is no music here at all? I don't think these triplets should be here for made up rhythm when there is nothing in the song, especially when it is Hard, at least try to follow more to the point for the song fix
01:00:988 (3,4) - ^ fix
01:03:188 - it's places like this that actually has music that you can map to for triplets, not the ones above. You can add notes here and at 01:03:288 OK
01:10:588 (3,4,5) - again there is no music at 01:10:588 and 01:10:688 OK
01:23:788 (4) - finish at end of slider add
01:51:788 (3) - I honestly think a normal soft finish would suit here better OK:D
01:55:788 (4) - clap add
02:01:288 - unnecessary inheriting line delete
02:01:488 - ^ ^
02:17:788 (3,4) - as mentioned about the triplets for similar parts in the chorus, there is really nothing it is mapped to fix
02:20:988 (3,4) - ^ fix too
02:23:188 - add notes here and 02:23:288 to follow the music sure
02:30:588 (3,4) - same thing about putting triplets when there is no sound for triplets fix
02:33:788 (3,4) - ^ ^
02:35:988 and 02:36:088 - it's more apparent and obvious if you added triplets for places like this, it shows in the music as well add
02:36:188 (1) - finish at the end of slider fits more than whistle it is fit as well,but I would change the value 65%>40%
02:39:388 (1) - ^ ^
02:42:988 (2) - finish at the start of the slider fits more than whistle ^
02:43:788 (4) - finish at the end of slider fits more than whistle fix
03:19:388 (1,2,3,4) - curve the pattern instead of a rather straight line, it would be smoother, 03:19:388 (1,2) don't blanket anyway OK
03:29:788 (5) - finish at the end of slider add
03:53:788 (3) - same thing in regards to this part of the chorus OK
03:56:988 (3) - ^ ^
03:59:188 - same thing, but just a reminder that a triplet here would be more appropriate then where you are having triplets right now I don't add triplet here.Because i think two circle are enough there.
03:59:788 (3) - finish at start of slider fits better than whistle same ^ 65%>40%
04:06:188 (2) - ^ ^
04:07:188 (5) - finish instead of whistle ^
04:14:788 (4) - clap at the start of the slider add
04:18:188 (3) - finish instead of whistle OK
04:21:388 (5) - finish at the end of the slider OK
Insane
00:29:788 (1) - the curve section doesn't really look nice Try more good now
00:31:388 (1) - finish add
00:43:388 (3,7,8,9,10) - add claps on these for greater effect nice@@
00:55:988 - add a note here and shift 00:56:288 (5) to 00:56:088 and keep 00:56:288 empty without anything. Also then place a jump between 00:56:188 and 00:56:388 (6) for emphasis of the stop in the music just before the chorus wonderful of the rhythm
01:03:788 (2) - finish instead of whistle change
01:06:188 (4) - ^ ^
01:06:988 (2) - ^ ^
01:08:588 (3) - ^ ^
01:10:188 (2) - finish at the start of slider instead of whistle OK
01:23:988 (6) - finish instead of whistle ^
01:51:788 (1) - a normal soft finish would suit the start of the slider better sure
02:03:388 (3,7) - add claps add
02:15:988 - same as 00:55:988 OK
02:36:588 (2) - finish instead of whistle OK
02:39:788 (2) - ^ ^
02:42:988 (2) - ^ ^
02:43:988 (6) - ^ ^
03:19:388 (1,2,3,4) - this pattern just seems odd, it feels like 03:19:788 (2) doesn't match up in terms of shape, maybe make it less curvy I think it is fine
03:23:588 (5) - add clap add
03:24:188 (1,2) - blanket can be improved fix
03:28:188 (3) - custom clap on the start of slider?? fix
04:06:988 (4) - finish at the end of the slider instead of whistle OK
04:08:788 (4) - I don't think it should be spaced so close to 04:08:188 (3) - either stack or space them out farther fix the DS
04:14:788 (4) - clap add
04:18:188 (5) - finish instead of whistle OK
Good Luck
Milhofo's mod
thanks your modMilhofo wrote:
Hi, from my modding queue
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[General][Normal]
- Pretty good map, and the storyboard is great too, so all my points will be solely an opinion ^^
[Hard]
- 00:43:988 - maybe add another slider tick here? if you rotate the slider clockwise it would fit in there I think it is too hard
- 01:06:588 (1) - this slider isn't perfect, it can be made better (not symmetrical), it can also be rotated a bit clockwise (~6º) !! OK
- 02:11:788 (1) - move to x:96 y:320 and 02:12:588 (2) - to x:164 y:227 I change other place of (2)
- 02:44:388 (4) - NC? sure
- 03:24:188 (1,2) - beautiful ; ; thanks
- 03:28:988 (2,3) - those don't fit together,maybe rotate/change one? It is fine and fit the song.(I feel)
- 03:36:588 (6) - move to ~ x:100 y:139 good idea
- 04:07:588 (3) - same thing, NC? sure
- 04:16:188 (2,3) - why the overlap? because I use the DS is 0.8,so I really overlap this.
[Insane]
- 00:13:588 (4) - I think this note is unecessary and the slider should start here (to follow guitar) I think (4) is important to contact the rhythm.
- 00:29:588 (1) - move to x:80 y:348 to make this slider parallel with 00:30:188 (2) I try it
- 00:39:988 - add note here? I would like try other rhythm here.
- 01:08:988 - ^ It is fine@@.
- make either 01:14:988 (1,2) or 01:15:588 (3,4) - not stack not need
- 02:19:588 (3,4) - NC? since 3 stacks with 2 ^
- 02:32:388 (3,4) - ^ ^
Sorry for the short mod but I'm running low on time, hope it will help, gl!
- overall a great map, didn't find anything bad, so just some opinions:
- 00:28:588 (2) - rotate by ~11º anticlockwise then move down to y:104 OK
- 01:24:688 (2) - move a bit to the left? around x:440 OK,i try X:457
- 01:35:188 - maybe add a small slider here? to fit with the guitar part I hope all diff should play on 01:35:388 -
- 01:40:188 (1) - seems a bit tilted, move slider start to x:164 y:108 OK
- 01:40:188 (1) - this jump is a bit too big and the slider changes the direction you're playing too fast (you're moving cursor down and suddenly you have to go left) I will see other mod what they are say and change it.
- 02:10:588 (1,2) - I'm not so sure about this overlap, but I guess it's intended ^^ It is OK ^^
- 02:28:188 (1,2) - kind of unnecessary overlap ^
- 02:39:188 - the song plays a triple here, and you have a slider !! fix
thanks of mod very much