Here as requested from modding queue. Pretty catchy song and that SB
[Normal]
00:01:788 (2) - If you are using .8 DS then this note isn't DS correctly
00:21:788 (1) - Distance Snap
00:33:588 (2) - The start of this slider can use a clap because it continues the rhythm otherwise those 4 notes would be bland
00:36:788 (2) - Distance Snap same with this 00:46:388 (5)
01:44:788 (6) - DS because it says for in AIMod
02:07:388 (4) - Same here but instead have a clap at the end
02:29:188 (5) - DS
03:05:788 (2) - Try lifting slider up a little more so the previous slider can be parallel with each other
04:16:788 (3) - Move slider end down 1 click so it looks more of a natural blanket
[Hard]
00:01:788 (2,3,4) - Make sure these 3 notes are equally spaced out with DS
00:06:588 (3) - I feel a smoother spine looks more appealing and it's a lot nicer http://puu.sh/dr3kK/520ba826c5.jpg
00:09:588 (2) - Move down and a little left for a better blanket x:96 y:100
00:53:788 (1,2,3,4) - Try a sequence likes this it's more balanced and isn't formatted with angles but instead smooth straight sliders. Improvisation from what you already initially had http://puu.sh/dr3yj/86cfa04d59.jpg
01:47:988 (4) - DS same here 02:09:788 (3)
02:10:588 (1) - Arc slider end up a little more for better blanket
[Storyboard]
Not sure how well I'll do this but SB mod if you want to change things.
00:05:788 - That foreground transition is too fast. I believe what's best would be to fade it gradually rather than the immediate response to the symbols, smoother transitioning
00:42:988 - The white background cuts off way to dramatically. It was gradually increasing and then all of a sudden the next image shows up. So you can adjust by making the fade a little bit faster then gradually die down. To have it cut off midway just seems awkward
02:02:988 - Same idea as above
That's about it. Hope you have a wonderful time getting this ranked. I hope to see it does one day
[Normal]
00:01:788 (2) - If you are using .8 DS then this note isn't DS correctly
00:21:788 (1) - Distance Snap
00:33:588 (2) - The start of this slider can use a clap because it continues the rhythm otherwise those 4 notes would be bland
00:36:788 (2) - Distance Snap same with this 00:46:388 (5)
01:44:788 (6) - DS because it says for in AIMod
02:07:388 (4) - Same here but instead have a clap at the end
02:29:188 (5) - DS
03:05:788 (2) - Try lifting slider up a little more so the previous slider can be parallel with each other
04:16:788 (3) - Move slider end down 1 click so it looks more of a natural blanket
[Hard]
00:01:788 (2,3,4) - Make sure these 3 notes are equally spaced out with DS
00:06:588 (3) - I feel a smoother spine looks more appealing and it's a lot nicer http://puu.sh/dr3kK/520ba826c5.jpg
00:09:588 (2) - Move down and a little left for a better blanket x:96 y:100
00:53:788 (1,2,3,4) - Try a sequence likes this it's more balanced and isn't formatted with angles but instead smooth straight sliders. Improvisation from what you already initially had http://puu.sh/dr3yj/86cfa04d59.jpg
01:47:988 (4) - DS same here 02:09:788 (3)
02:10:588 (1) - Arc slider end up a little more for better blanket
[Storyboard]
Not sure how well I'll do this but SB mod if you want to change things.
00:05:788 - That foreground transition is too fast. I believe what's best would be to fade it gradually rather than the immediate response to the symbols, smoother transitioning
00:42:988 - The white background cuts off way to dramatically. It was gradually increasing and then all of a sudden the next image shows up. So you can adjust by making the fade a little bit faster then gradually die down. To have it cut off midway just seems awkward
02:02:988 - Same idea as above
That's about it. Hope you have a wonderful time getting this ranked. I hope to see it does one day