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AKINO with bless4 - EXTRA MAGIC HOUR

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wcx19911123
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2014年11月2日 at 16:05:15

Artist: AKINO with bless4
Title: EXTRA MAGIC HOUR
Source: Amagi Brilliant Park
Tags: 甘城ブリリアントパーク TV Size opening Fycho xxdeathx
BPM: 180
Filesize: 21651kb
Play Time: 01:28
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1.42 stars, 88 notes)
  2. EXTRA MAGIC (4.95 stars, 423 notes)
  3. Fycho's Hard (3.66 stars, 239 notes)
  4. Normal (2.05 stars, 169 notes)
  5. xxdeathx's Insane (4.28 stars, 324 notes)
Download: AKINO with bless4 - EXTRA MAGIC HOUR
Download: AKINO with bless4 - EXTRA MAGIC HOUR (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Kira~~♥
anime「甘城ブリリアントパーク」OP「エクストラ・マジック・アワー」no changes except .osu files, you can only update .osu files without a redownloading and enjoy it again
sammy711
:D
Kibbleru
ill assume u don't take gds?
xxdeathx
i like this one :D
Chloe
a lot of mods is comming soon
[Emiria]
;w; if you change the mP3 plz tell me >:(
Owntrolf
o3o I wanna GD too
Topic Starter
wcx19911123
sorry.. the gd slots already full days ago..
Koiyuki
Rtyzen
Hey there~ for M4M
these are just suggestions, feel free to skip some of them

>Fall 2014 OP. Inb4 speedrank lol

[Easy]
  1. No Hitsounds yet? :P
  2. 00:07:138 (1) - 1 red tick forrward?
  3. 00:20:471 (2,1) - Way too close. Especially since 1 appears before 2 disappears, so newer players will definitely be confused
  4. 00:52:471 (2,1) - ^

[Normal]
  1. 00:00:472 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - Cool idea, but probably too confusing for normal. Should not overlap them
  2. 00:35:805 (3) - Change to a reverse 1/2 ?
  3. 00:42:471 (5) - Rotate by 45 degrees
  4. 00:47:638 - Note here?
  5. 01:10:805 (3,4) - DS too far

[Fycho's Hard]
  1. Wow that AR. Kinda pushing it IMO
  2. 00:15:055 - Note here?
  3. 00:24:971 (2) - use note and 1/1 slider instead of 3/2 slider?
  4. 00:30:305 (2) - ^
  5. 00:36:805 (2,3) - Use a 1/1 slider and a note instead?
  6. 00:51:971 - Note here?
  7. 01:05:638 (1) - Ctrl-H? IMO flows better
  8. 01:23:805 (4,1) - Distance too far compared to the previous notes. May be confusing IMO

[Extra Magic]
  1. 00:02:471 (1,2,1,2) - What's with this pattern? what does it follow o_O
  2. 00:04:763 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - The spacing makes it look like 1/2 because of the previous part. Might be confusing
  3. 00:10:305 (5,1) - Dat jump O_O
  4. 00:25:805 (1,2) - One 1/1 slider? fits with the previous part
  5. 00:44:471 (1,2) - Move them closer? around the same DS as 00:44:305 (4,1) but that is accentuated in the music
  6. 00:46:471 (4,5) - ^

That's all I could find, Good luck with your map!

My map https://osu.ppy.sh/s/177981
Sellenite
m4m
这个:https://osu.ppy.sh/s/175150

[Easy]
音效美丽
  1. 01:18:805 (1,2) - 交换NC,反正01:21:138 (4) - 也隔了那么久不如统一大白线NC
[Normal]
  1. 01:21:805 (1,2,3) - 建议吧,感觉短滑条放错重音,01:21:971需要有音,01:22:471这里没什么音变成滑条头怪怪的,空着吧,试试这个,1的滑条头是在01:21:805
  2. 01:23:638 (3) - 这个也是很诡异啊。。带一次打根本听不出来这个节奏,那个也是没什么音的,放在滑条尾吧,直接变成一个1/2滑条放在01:23:471试试
[Fycho's Hard]
  1. 00:08:805 (2) - 275,210,圆点与滑条的垂线距离相等
  2. 00:08:888 (1,1) - 现在hard是要空一拍吧好像,停在00:10:805吧
  3. 00:30:305 (2) - 哎还是跟一下吧,00:30:305这里放个circle,00:30:471这里滑条开始,比较自然
  4. 00:31:305 (2) - 这个不要跳啊,ctrl+g,要跳的话考虑下移动00:31:138 (1) - 代替
  5. 00:51:471 (2) - 虽然这个有音,但我玩的时候感觉不自然,因为00:51:971这里是空的,所以我建议这里也空,全跟重音比较易懂
  6. 01:24:471 (1) - 我建议你不要放那么大啊,前面已经有了一个1/3折返了。。。难读
[Extra Magic]
magic girl
  1. 00:05:013 (4,5,6,7) - 这几个好像是对不上的音的啊,前面几个对得上
  2. 00:21:138 (4) - NC?音乐另一段
  3. 01:21:138 (4) - NC吧,1/3的开始了
ex太激霸了好像摸不出什么。。
xxdeathx
My insane done—4.24 stars version: http://puu.sh/c9mcx/0e17f3184b.osu

orz it was originally 4.02 stars but I saw fycho's diff is 3.66 stars so i am trying to increase star rating on mine to make it more even diff spread

4.02 stars version: http://puu.sh/c9me4/19e68dcc34.osu
AIR
[Easy]
  1. 00:13:138 (4,3) - 听起来适合一拍加circle
  2. 00:31:138 (2) - 红线circle
  3. 00:53:805 - 没凑够休息时间,ds得拉开
  4. 01:14:805 (4) - 左边红线1/2好点
[Normal]
  1. ar+1
  2. 00:31:638 (5,6) - ctrl+g以及整理
  3. 00:59:138 (1) - drum whistle
  4. 01:14:138 - 白线可以空出来摆好看些
[Fycho's Hard]
  1. 00:00:472 (1) - ctrl+g
  2. 00:04:763 - 音效挺好听,绿线后移
  3. 00:27:138 (1) - 看了下前后,这里拆开好些
  4. 00:36:305 (1,4,5) - overlap
  5. 00:40:471 (1) - ctrl+g
  6. 00:42:305 (3,4) - 对调下4用在红线上?
  7. 00:59:138 (1) - same as Hard
  8. 01:22:805 (3,1) - ^
[Extra Magic]
  1. 00:06:471 (13) - NC
  2. 00:07:805 (3) - drum whistle
  3. 00:07:388 (2) - del
  4. 00:14:138 (3,1,2,3,5) - 有点乱
  5. 00:20:638 (2) - 空出来比较好,没啥特点
  6. 00:23:305 (2,2) - overlap
  7. 00:35:471 (3,3) - ^
  8. 00:49:138 (3,1) - ^
  9. 00:59:471 (2) - same as Hard
  10. 01:12:138 (6,2) - ^
  11. 01:22:638 (5,2) - ^
看不出东西相思
https://osu.ppy.sh/s/217982
Aeonian Sonder
M4M

[General]
Might wanna add "drum" hitsound samples, I'm probably hearing different from what you intend the beatmap to be...
Might wanna add colors for the combos. For a backgrounds, maybe Zerochan, I dunno, that's where I get some of my backgrounds...
Why call "Extra Magic" extra if there's no "Insane" difficulty to begin with?

[Extra Magic]
00:20:471 (1) - Maybe add to stack?
00:26:305 (3) - Why not have the whistle for the top of the slider?
00:53:471 (2,1) - Distance might be a little questionable here? Can you make the jump yourself?
01:03:305 (2,3) - Not sure if you can put the object under the slider
01:17:471 (1,2,3,4,5) - Is the spacing on purpose?

[Fycho's Hard]
00:36:305 (1,2) - Is this in distance snap?
00:37:805 (1,2) - ^
01:00:305 (1,2) - ^
01:07:471 (2,3) - ^
01:11:638 (3,4) - ^
01:13:638 (1,2) - ^
01:17:805 - Get rid of timing point if obsolete
When people scold you for distance, it kinda grows on 'ya, 'ya'know...

Nothing really for normal, but I'd try to limit usage of stacking. Maybe, I unno, I'm bad with words, ugh.

Not really gonna bother 'ya with the Easy; it's not "finished" yet.

I'm SOO gonna die, so here's the map:
https://osu.ppy.sh/s/191618

Good luck with the map. It's fun to play~
[ Setsuna ]
From my modding queue...... Sorry if it's a bad mod.... ;w;
(All, and everything, I say are merely SUGGESTIONS.)

General
all diffs are missing kiai time?? except for insane

Easy
01:01:138 (3) - maybe blanket this to 00:59:805 (2)?
not much for me to mod.....
Normal
IMO you don't need 00:11:138 (1) here, you can just make 00:10:638 (2) longer.
00:53:805 (1) - This hitsound doesn't fit here
Fycho's Hard
00:00:472 (1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - This whole beginning part should have a slower SV IMO.
Could blanket 00:56:971 (2) to 00:56:471 (1).
xxdeathx's Insane
00:53:138 (1) - Make this single slider a slow slider?
thats about it...
Topic Starter
wcx19911123
thanks for your modding
but I kept all stuffs in my diffs(for reasons, welcome to pm me), except kiai time, combo color, video and bg. I won't choose a bg till the set is going to be bubbled cuz I always like better bgs and maybe there would be a better one tomorrow, hope you can understand
waiting for guests
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MOD:

Easy
00:31:971 (3) - Please balances.
00:38:805 - 00:38:971 - So hard :(


Fycho's Hard
SC 4 -> 3.5 Please !
00:59:138 (1) - Please Balances.


xxdeathx's Insane
00:38:305 (3) - Please fix it.


Extra Magic
01:17:471 - 01:17:805 - Please fix it.


Please note, my advice is not perfect

I can't speak english well. but I can help you !

Concentrate on map design like circle/slider palcing more than map difficulty!
eleb
Overall i really like the map, especially hard difficulty which is the most fun to me even though it's not the difficulty i usually play.

Easy
00:38:888 might be quite confusing to a new player since the two long notes overlap

Medium
i would increase the degree the first few long notes "turn" a little bit so the clockwork theme is better depicted (only if that was what you were going for of course)

Extra Magic
00:08:805 single note is a bit too far away imo
00:31:305 make the 3 single notes go from right to left - feels like a more natural movement when playing
00:35:138 maybe move the long note there a little closer to the one before, seems somewhat confusing
00:38:638 the 3 single notes should be attached to the end of the long note before so one can see that they immediately follow up without a pause in between
01:10:138 same thing with the 5 single notes
01:13:305 same thing - maybe it's just me though :3

death's Insane
00:19:138 wouldnt stack the 3 single notes, maybe but them right beside each other
00:51:138 same thing

that's pretty much it i'd say :3
and sorry if my english is a little.... meh :§
tewbs
Unexperienced modder gonna give all diff a try. I never mapped/modded difficulty lower than insane so dont expect much from me for those diff :D

Easy
00:37:471 (3,1,2) - i suggest putting those as a NC
00:40:138 (3,1,2) - same with this
00:42:471 (3,1,2) - ^ Altough i dont know if in easy diff you shouldnt go over 3 combos, if that is the case i guess i couldnt find anything wrong in that diff.
Kiai time?

Normal
00:48:138 (6) - I think this could be a single note instead of a slider.
00:50:471 (5) - Maybe make this a reverse slider?
Couldnt find much else, i feel like the small 1/4 slider make a big jump in difficulty from easy. I never mapped normal tho maybe this is just fine :D.

Fycho's Hard
00:49:805 (1) - I am not sure but i think this slider goes out too far off the grid?
Kiai time?

xxdeathx's Insane
00:11:138 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - I suggest making all this 1 combo.
00:32:305 (7) - Make new combo here.
00:32:971 (3) - This slider feels weird i suggest making rythm like that http://puu.sh/caAFc.jpg instead.
01:03:471 (2,3) - Maybe (2) is a bit too far off the grid ? I would just make those 2 notes a bit closer to each other IMO.

Extra Magic
00:02:471 (1,2,1,2) - Why not keep mapping this section like the beginning ? I think this just feels weird.
00:04:763 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - This fits with the song i guess but its evil haha :cry:
00:26:305 (3) - I dont think this mini slider fits. A single note sounds better IMO.
00:35:805 (4,5,6) - I think you could make those bigger jump :) the voice is strong there. They are still fine like that but it would be more fun with a little bit bigger jump.
Also where the kiai at ?

This is all i could find. Hopefully some of these were helpful :) I still have much to learn, me young padawan. GL for the rest!
Your Good Self
random bad mod passing by~
(actually not so random, Chloe was requesting)

[Easy]
00:28:471 (2) - Any chance of a blanket happening here?
00:37:805 (1,2) - 1/2 a beat of time between them? Might be a bit hard. Maybe remove the repeat on (1). But still up to you.
00:53:138 - Add note
00:58:805 (3) - Move back 1/2 beat, make it 1/2 slider. Before here there's already 1/2 beat sliders and red tick notes, so shouldn't be a problem.
01:06:138 (4) - ^

[Normal]
01:07:805 (2,3) - Join them up with 1/1 slider. Don't need the red ticks here.

[Fycho's Hard]
00:14:471 (3) - Think it's better to put it further down instead of up.
00:56:138 (4) - +90 degrees clockwise, place somewhere around 00:54:638 (3)
00:58:721 (4) - Remove note
00:58:805 (5) - Same direction as 00:58:138 (2)
01:25:055 (1) - End on white tick.

[xxdeathx's Insane]
00:58:138 (2) - Improve blanket a bit. Move uppermost node 1 grid down, 1 grid left. (please don't kill me for this D:)
01:25:971 (1) - Same as hard, end on white tick.

[Extra Magic]
00:02:888 - Add magic (note).
01:23:471 (2) - Shift to position of 01:22:638 (5)
01:25:888 (1) - End on white tick



Nice song, hope to see it getting ranked. Good luck!
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