THOSE WHO REQUEST SHALL GET THEIR SALVATIONGeneral outline of what my mods contain:>My thoughts about mapset
>Some advices
>Harsh opinions about map if I feel like it needs more work
>Complaining about mapstyle (sometimes even shouting)
>Commenting on 90% of things I mention
>Funny maymay arrows
>w33d
>Random images
>All the bad shit you may not expect
Keep in mind that all harsh things I say, not because I hate stuff, but because I care about every single map I mod and want to help you get it ranked. I'm voicing all of my opinions without restraint. Please don't rage at me because of this, I don't mean to offend you in any way. Also do note that I'm still learning, so I might misunderstand some things. and I'm terrible at naming instruments orz
Unfortunately I can't help you with hitsounding since I suck at it lel
Columns are: |1|2|3|4|
[NM]
AT LEAST 7 should be there ffs
00:30:205 - Normal stair here, pitch'n' stuff
00:36:780 - ^
00:43:767 - Add note here, rearrange patterns
00:44:178 - Delete one
00:52:602 - Delete one
00:56:917 (56917|3) - Delete
01:04:931 - Delete one (you put doubles on loud plates and this one is quiet)
01:12:328 (72328|2) - Delete
01:16:438 - & 01:16:849 - Why are those doubles? Delete one each
01:20:547 - Again delete one
01:23:013 (83013|2,83013|3,83424|3,83424|2) - Those also sound like singles and you put doubles here
01:23:835 - 01:26:712 - Either follow violin with longer LN's or follow piano with normal notes, 1/1 LN's are unfitting to piano
01:26:506 - You can make a 1/4 triplet stair for drums here //Add on 01:26:609 - and move 01:26:712 (86712|2) - to create a stair
01:26:712 (86712|2) - Sound is exactly the same on all beats and you map first one as double and rest as singles, decide on one thing
01:32:260 - Add note
01:34:931 (94931|3) - Delete
01:35:136 - Add on 4th
01:38:630 (98630|3,98630|2,98630|1,98938|0,99246|3,99452|1,99452|2,99452|0) - Why are there triples and why there are singles when the sound is the almost same as on triples?
01:46:849 - 01:51:780 - Map 1/1 sound alongside those LN's
02:08:219 (128219|1) - If you were to be technically accurate, this LN should end on 02:14:794 - , but it's optional
Also delete that last slowdown, it's really weird and very likely to be a missing point for beginners. You don't want that on the last note, don't you?
[HD]
HP/OD 7,5
00:14:794 - Add, 2 instruments
00:28:356 (28356|0,28356|1,28767|2,28767|3) - Delete one each, single instrument
00:32:876 (32876|3) - Delete
00:34:109 - Add on 2nd
00:34:520 (34520|0) - Remove, same sound as 00:34:109
00:36:164 - Add, 2 instruments
00:41:095 - This section sound like it needs some minijacks (example: 00:41:301 - sounds like minijack; 00:41:712 - doesn't sound like minijack, pitch releveancy) and/or retake on note density, recheck everything and MAKE SURE you add only 1 note on each instrument unless it's very loud
00:46:849 (46849|3) - You should split it into two, or shorten it , inconsistencies with earlier LN's
01:00:308 - Note missing
01:06:986 - 01:07:397 - I feel like those should be doubles, because of drums/percussion/whatever
01:11:917 - Why triple?
01:15:924 - Missing note for drum
01:18:082 (78082|3) - Sounds is so low that I don't think it's worth mapping it
01:20:547 - And now you suddenly stop mapping violin when it's still very clearly hearable, idk why
01:23:835 - It'd be more appropriate to use LN's for violin and change those LN's into normal notes or just rearrange them and add some LN's for violin // Just a suggestion tho
01:32:876 - Why'd you use double LN now? Remove one
01:31:027 - Missed drum
01:31:849 - Missed triplet drum
01:33:082 - Missed drum
01:36:986 - Delete one
01:43:150 - Add one for piano or whatever that is
01:43:561 vs 01:45:205 - lel?
01:46:849 - Delete one, you already have 2 LN's and note, no need to make it 4
01:53:424 - Delete one, you've got enough notes there
Your SV is very strange too, but I can't playtest it now sadly :/
Anyway, good luck o/