DE-CADE wrote:

hi here's mod as requested via PM, sorry for late, busy in real life ;w; Me too ;w;

Here i'm focusing on your hardest difficulty

[HD]

00:02:876 (2876|2,3082|1) - Ctrl+H ,here the pitch are reversed ,but if you want to make the pattern variety you can ignore it - Fix

00:13:767 (13767|1) - Move to 1, to make stronger high pitch note- Fix


00:13:972 - here add to 4, i hear a piano sound- Fix

00:25:479 (25479|2) - Move to 2, to make stronger high pitch note

00:26:712 (26712|2) - Move to 1
00:26:917 (26917|0) - Move to 3- Fix
^ follow the pitch should be good, since this is segment only have piano sound

00:27:123 - Add Note- Fix

00:33:082 - Add to 1- Fix
00:33:493 - Add to 1- Fix

01:27:534 (87534|1,87534|3,88356|0,88356|2,89178|1,89178|0) -01:29:178) - Delete, This should be avoided on mapping, dont use double on non cymbal sound- Awesome!

01:30:821 (90821|2,91232|1,91643|1,92054|2) - Delete, one note is enough for this beat- Fix

01:33:698 - Add to 4

01:35:958 - Add to 1- Fix

01:36:780 (96780|2) - Move to 4- Fix

01:37:191 (97191|2) - Move to white line below- Fix

01:49:315 (109315|3) - Move to 2, make it stair, dont worry about the LN below- Fix

02:02:260 (122260|2) - Move to 1- Fix

02:08:219 (128219|1,128219|2) - Well Normal note looks good, better than these LN Er..i'll think again, delete one LN

You can add hitsound after several mods

Good Luck ~ Nice song owo

-Kamikaze- wrote:

THOSE WHO REQUEST SHALL GET THEIR SALVATION

General outline of what my mods contain:
>My thoughts about mapset
>Some advices
>Harsh opinions about map if I feel like it needs more work
>Complaining about mapstyle (sometimes even shouting)
>Commenting on 90% of things I mention
>Funny maymay arrows
>w33d
>Random images
>All the bad shit you may not expect
Keep in mind that all harsh things I say, not because I hate stuff, but because I care about every single map I mod and want to help you get it ranked. I'm voicing all of my opinions without restraint. Please don't rage at me because of this, I don't mean to offend you in any way. Also do note that I'm still learning, so I might misunderstand some things. and I'm terrible at naming instruments orz

Unfortunately I can't help you with hitsounding since I suck at it lel

Columns are: |1|2|3|4|

[NM]

- LOL
AT LEAST 7 should be there ffs - 6 ;w;

00:30:205 - Normal stair here, pitch'n' stuff - fix
00:36:780 - ^ - fix
00:43:767 - Add note here, rearrange patterns - er...
00:44:178 - Delete one - fix
00:52:602 - Delete one - fix
00:56:917 (56917|3) - Delete - Nope ;w;
01:04:931 - Delete one (you put doubles on loud plates and this one is quiet) - fix
01:12:328 (72328|2) - Delete - fix
01:16:438 - & 01:16:849 - Why are those doubles? Delete one each - let me think again
01:20:547 - Again delete one - fix
01:23:013 (83013|2,83013|3,83424|3,83424|2) - Those also sound like singles and you put doubles here - fix
01:23:835 - 01:26:712 - Either follow violin with longer LN's or follow piano with normal notes, 1/1 LN's are unfitting to piano
01:26:506 - You can make a 1/4 triplet stair for drums here //Add on 01:26:609 - and move 01:26:712 (86712|2) - to create a stair - Fix
01:26:712 (86712|2) - Sound is exactly the same on all beats and you map first one as double and rest as singles, decide on one thing I don't quite understand ...
01:32:260 - Add note - fix
01:34:931 (94931|3) - Delete - I think i'll keep it...
01:35:136 - Add on 4th - sry...nope
01:38:630 (98630|3,98630|2,98630|1,98938|0,99246|3,99452|1,99452|2,99452|0) - Why are there triples and why there are singles when the sound is the almost same as on triples? - All change to double
01:46:849 - 01:51:780 - Map 1/1 sound alongside those LN's
02:08:219 (128219|1) - If you were to be technically accurate, this LN should end on 02:14:794 - , but it's optional
Also delete that last slowdown, it's really weird and very likely to be a missing point for beginners. You don't want that on the last note, don't you?
You r right, this LN is difficult for me to decide where should end. I'll ask some of the mapper and reply this when i make any decition

[HD]
HP/OD 7,5

00:14:794 - Add, 2 instruments - √
00:28:356 (28356|0,28356|1,28767|2,28767|3) - Delete one each, single instrument - √
00:32:876 (32876|3) - Delete - √
00:34:109 - Add on 2nd - √
00:34:520 (34520|0) - Remove, same sound as 00:34:109
00:36:164 - Add, 2 instruments
00:41:095 - This section sound like it needs some minijacks (example: 00:41:301 - sounds like minijack; 00:41:712 - doesn't sound like minijack, pitch releveancy) and/or retake on note density, recheck everything and MAKE SURE you add only 1 note on each instrument unless it's very loud
00:46:849 (46849|3) - You should split it into two, or shorten it , inconsistencies with earlier LN's - √
01:00:308 - Note missing - √
01:06:986 - 01:07:397 - I feel like those should be doubles, because of drums/percussion/whatever
01:11:917 - Why triple? - fix
01:15:924 - Missing note for drum - √
01:18:082 (78082|3) - Sounds is so low that I don't think it's worth mapping it
01:20:547 - And now you suddenly stop mapping violin when it's still very clearly hearable, idk why
- i totally didnt follow the violin,01:17:260 (77260|0,78082|3,78904|1,79726|0) - this three LN is the cello
01:23:835 - It'd be more appropriate to use LN's for violin and change those LN's into normal notes or just rearrange them and add some LN's for violin // Just a suggestion tho - √
01:32:876 - Why'd you use double LN now? Remove one - √
01:31:027 - Missed drum - √
01:31:849 - Missed triplet drum - √
01:33:082 - Missed drum
01:36:986 - Delete one
01:43:150 - Add one for piano or whatever that is - √
01:43:561 vs 01:45:205 - lel?
01:46:849 - Delete one, you already have 2 LN's and note, no need to make it 4 - √[/color]
01:53:424 - Delete one, you've got enough notes there - √
Your SV is very strange too, but I can't playtest it now sadly :/
Anyway, good luck o/

Spy wrote:

等覺得mod找夠了，發我PM我再來看吧，我還是不摸了，到時候泡

SanadaYukimura wrote:

Spy wrote:

等覺得mod找夠了，發我PM我再來看吧，我還是不摸了，到時候泡

好的，大概再找个一两个吧
不来水摸一发？

Kruzon wrote:

hello, this map of yours are splendidly done, and i like this instrumetal song very much. however, this is merely my opinion (please dont take this offensively),
perhaps this instrumetal map would sound a lot nicer if you replace its hitsound. try to look for hitsound which blend/fit well with the songs. perhaps, you can mix along piano keysound, or any 'soft' sounded keys. also, the hitsound volume should be a lot higher for more impact- i personally found your current hitsound unfitting but then again everyone's preference is different, so do anything you think right

good map, good luck

Sky_Demon wrote:

Hello

Mod應要求從對列中(炒飯)

key:|1|2|3|4|

NM

00:34:931 (34931|1,35342|2) - CTRL + J 較為好看的排列
00:37:808 (37808|1) - move to 1
01:02:671 (62671|2) - move to 2
01:09:657 (69657|0,69760|1,69863|2) - 這3個音的跟這裡的是一樣的01:11:301 (71301|3,71506|2,71506|1) - 建議一致下
02:06:575 (126575|3,126575|0) - 結束應該是在這裡 02:08:013 -
02:08:219 (128219|1) - 同樣的 結束在02:14:897 -
↑纠结这个LN很久了，决定还是拉长吧↑

HD

00:17:260 - http://puu.sh/d0yFg/813b55c612.png 建議這樣擺
00:25:273 (25273|2,25479|3,25479|2) - 怎麼突然出現這種連點 建議改掉 或是其他地方都一致
01:40:273 - 重音加一個
01:46:438 - ^
02:06:575 (126575|3,126575|0) - 結束應該是在這裡02:08:013 -
02:08:219 (128219|2) - 同樣的 結束在這裡02:14:897 -

Mod end good luck

- Sky Demon -

[GraveChaos] wrote:

Hi MOD here as requested in my Queue~ (~*w*)~ WOW! so quick(~*w*)~
[4K MOD]

Check:
Song setup > Design > Widescreen support

|1|2|3|4|

NM

00:11:917 (11917|1,12123|3) - Ctrl + G (Pattern) - Awesome!
00:25:068 (25068|3,25273|1) - ^ - Awesome!
00:39:452 Add note to |2| (Snare | Impact)
00:45:616 Add note to |4| (Cymbal - Piano - Drumbeat | Impact)
01:46:438 Add note t |4| (Cymbal - Impact)
02:08:219 (128219|1) - End it here 02:09:863 (End of pitch)

HD

OD = 8
00:39:452 Add note to |3| (Snare Impact)
00:41:095 Add note to |2| (Cymbal | Impact)
00:55:684 Add note to |3| ^
01:00:821 Add note to |2| ^
01:05:753 Add note to |2| ^
01:06:575 Add note to |1| ^
01:06:712 (66712|0) - Move to |2| (Hand balance | Pattern)
01:07:397 Add note to |2| (Cymbal | Impact)
01:32:260 Add note to |3| (Cymbal)
01:33:698 Add note to |4| (Cymbal | Impact)
01:35:958 Add note to |4| ^
01:36:986 Add note to |1| ^
02:08:219 (128219|2) - End it here 02:09:863 (End of pitch)
↑this LN is quite annoying. As you see, there are some other modder have different idea with this, i'll leave it for now↑

Nice map!~
Good luck!~ =w=)b

ichia7x wrote:

NM diff should have 1,5+ stars. Please consider it.

Spy wrote:

Check request by PM.

[General]
嘛，我覺得用soft就好了，其實用那個聲音在這種曲子上略吵。。。
還有怎麼hitnormal跟clap都一樣。。。這樣還是一樣unrankable的
KIAI的點怪怪的00:54:246開始吧 - 好的

[NM]
00:02:465 - 00:02:876 - 00:03:287 - 00:05:753 - 00:06:164 - 00:06:369 - 00:06:575 - 00:07:808 - 00:08:013 - 00:09:041 - 00:09:452 - 00:09:657 - 00:09:863 - 00:11:095 - 00:11:301 - 00:12:328 - 00:12:739 - 00:12:945 - 00:13:150 - 00:13:561 - 00:13:972 - 00:14:383 - 00:15:616 - 00:16:027 - 00:16:232 - 00:16:438 - 00:17:876 - 00:18:904 - 00:19:315 - 00:19:520 - 00:19:726 - 00:21:164 - 00:22:191 - 00:22:602 - 00:22:808 - 00:23:013 - 00:24:452 - 00:25:479 - 00:25:890 - 00:26:095 - 00:26:301 - 全部都是漏音
00:36:575 - 加一個吧
00:46:027 (46027|0,46027|2) - 為何2個 ?如果是因為那個crash聲的話，那個聲音在00:46:284
00:49:315 (49315|0,49315|2) - 這個也是一樣。。00:49:160 - 还是不抓crash的音了吧，改成单Note
00:55:376 - 加一個吧
00:58:047 - 加
00:58:869 - 同上
01:01:952 - ↑
01:15:616 (75616|3,75616|0,76438|2,76438|0,76849|0,76849|2) - 給我一個用雙note的理由。。 - fix
02:08:219 (128219|1) - 沒這麼長啦，到02:09:863就行了

[HD]
變速有點匪夷所思，這種0.9的變速我不建議放，很容易影響到玩家抓彩或者噴200，當然，影響到了就是很容易討一分
我是建議那種想要表達強烈的節奏對比再放變速就行了 - 删了一些0.9
00:49:212 - Add a note
01:23:630 - 漏音
01:23:835 到 01:26:712 - 開50%聽可以聽出漏了很多琴聲
01:26:815 - 01:26:917 - 01:27:020 - 漏音
01:55:273 - 01:55:479 - 漏音
01:56:712 - 01:56:917 - 01:57:123 - 漏音
01:58:561 - 漏音
01:58:972 - 漏音
01:59:589 (119589|0) - 這個跟你抓的琴不同部分。。如果要抓的話其他地方也要跟著抓
02:08:219 (128219|2) - 同Normal

還有一些些新手會犯的毛病呢，我建議你先找找victorica_db來幫你摸一次之後我應該就可以泡了 - 嗯，等我先把你和rumia的mod彻底处理好吧
其實我不喜歡這個音效，mania要的是貼近歌曲的音效，不是像Standard的下音方式，多留意一下，把這音效換了吧，這歌光靠soft跟某些地方放finish其實就夠了- 嗯，这歌的音效肯定会重做的

順便一提你忘記給Rumia kudosu了

arviejhay wrote:

Update for SB

https://www.dropbox.com/s/0bmqll8o9lhon ... 9.rar?dl=0

Changelog
- Crop some images
- Make White images scale bigger

Rumia- wrote:

mark

Fable
General
the default soft hitsound is more fittin than the current one you are using , since its a piano song it dont fit the song at all
i also have a suggested sampleset to be use in your hitsound to make your map better
http://puu.sh/d9G6d.rar
the side tick you can apply manually on which sound applies to it and pls delete your soft-hitnormal :c its really iritating to hear it with this song

[NM]
01:12:534 (72534|3,72739|0,72945|3,73150|1,73356|3,73561|2) - how about http://puu.sh/d9G8E.jpg ?more fit to the piano and mood
01:13:767 - add a note for piano
01:38:938 (98938|3) - this should be at 01:38:904 -
01:39:246 (99246|1) - this is at 01:39:212 -
01:39:760 (99760|0) - this is at 01:39:726 -
01:40:068 (100068|2) - this one is at 01:40:000 -
02:05:136 - add a note here for piano
02:08:219 (128219|1) - this is actually louder than 02:06:575 (126575|0,126575|3) - so how about adding another hold on 3rd collumn?
How about this, delete one from 02:06:575 (126575|0,126575|3) - and add another on 4rd collum since 02:08:219 -



[HD]
00:33:287 - add a note on 2nd collumn
00:53:630 - add a note for violin , it is nice to catch here
01:00:821 - to 01:01:438 - would be better if you catch the 1/2 piano notes
01:08:527 (68527|2) - move to 1 ?
01:09:246 - add a note
01:10:068 - to 01:10:684 - would be nice if you make it a 1/4 stream
01:11:815 - add a note here , seems like you miss a bassdrum here
01:12:226 - ^
01:16:438 (76438|3,76438|1,76849|1,76849|3) - here you note it as 2 note and 01:23:013 (83013|0,83424|3) - just 1 ? why not making it consistent ?
01:35:239 - add a note
01:35:650 - ^
01:36:575 (96575|2,96575|1) - move to left and add a note at 01:36:472 -
01:36:883 - add a note here too
01:38:527 - add a note
01:38:630 - to 01:40:273 - refer NM's mod for the placement reference

Spy wrote:

搭著看吧

victorica_db wrote:

Spy大哥叫小弟我来看图。。
我这过关了的话间谍会直接来泡的

general
音效重新下一下啊，现在的太难听了。。完全没有曲子的风格。。 - 嗯，HS等把这个Mod弄完立马改

NM

00:01:643 - 00:27:945 - 这一部分开始重新做 。我觉的只需要抓主钢琴就OK。。 - 主抓钢琴是指像HD那样么，暂时没改，游戏里问你下
这里的重钢琴可以用双note。当然条子也行 看你自己的选择
00:41:095 - 这边开始的吧。抓提琴啊（是提琴吧） 你现在的这个完全是在闭着眼睛做呀。。和这段的节奏不符
01:05:753 - 我建议https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2297946
01:20:547 - 01:23:835 - 这段钢琴有错 重新听一下
01:37:191 - 加一个note
01:38:013 - ^

01:43:356 (103356|0,103356|3) - 这里不要抓鼓点
01:43:356 (103356|3,103356|0,106849|3,108493|0,110136|3) - 条子删了。这部分要么鼓点 要么钢琴。。不要都取
01:53:835 - 01:54:246 - 加note

HD

前面的0.8变速建议去掉..坑人
01:10:787 - 漏鼓
01:11:198 - ^
01:16:643 - 加个note
01:17:054 - ^
01:23:219 - ^
01:26:815 (86815|0) - 没音?
01:26:815 (86815|0,90410|1,90821|3,91232|2,91643|0) - 提琴红线结束 然后这部分主写提琴吧 和前面区分开. - 改了，但不知道改的对不对
01:51:164 - 家一个note
01:55:273 (115273|2,115479|0) - 不觉的很怪吗..你这里的轻钢琴完全可以不写
01:58:767 - 01:59:178 - 家一个note

其他差不多了 就这样吧

Spy wrote:

好了叫我

SanadaYukimura wrote:

UPDATE the NM diff hitsound
HD WIP

性药我爱你

liaoxingyao wrote:

SanadaYukimura wrote:

UPDATE the NM diff hitsound
HD WIP

性药我爱你

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SanadaYukimura wrote:

就等HD了啊，酷爱

Spy wrote:

Here we go.

Rumia- wrote:

nice map

Sky_Demon wrote:

good