Hello, I came here to mod by request. (Column:1,2,3,4)
---> Type:GM, Language:[General]-Passed-[EZ+]Did you set some objects to the vocal line since the point of 00:40:083 - ?
If so, 00:41:916 (41916|2) - is really weird point. I would think it has an uncomfortable something.
I was able to clearly hear the word of [kakae...(抱え...)] in the phrase, while pushing this LN.
Then I suggest you add notes to 00:42:083 - for 4, and 00:42:249 - for 1 in the first.
But you may think 00:41:916 (41916|2,41916|1,42083|3,42249|0) - are a bit difficult as the EZ+?
If thinking that matter, you might want to change the start point of this LN to 00:42:249 - ,
however please remember the pronunciation that are most emphasized is the first of "ka".
01:07:248 - to 01:09:581 - it is a humdrum pattern, isn't it?
01:07:915 (67915|3,68248|1) - remove them, and arrange objects like
(e.g.1)01:08:081 (68081|1,68248|2,68415|3) - express the voice's pitch, moreover
01:09:081 (69081|0,69581|0) - are associated the sound with the continuous drums.
01:14:248 (74248|3,74581|2,74915|1,75248|0) - feel like a monotonous, suggest rearrange objects like
(e.g.2)01:13:915 (73915|2,74415|2) - are also, associated with the drumbass,
flavor them with 01:13:581 (73581|0,74248|0,74915|0) - as a preliminary drum step additionally.
[NM]00:33:916 (33916|3,33916|0) - I really feel that something is missed, the cause is maybe
00:34:583 (34583|1,34749|2) - have no relevance for any other objects.
00:33:916 (33916|3,33916|0) - the first recommend you try to move both LNs for 00:34:083 -
and fix the ends point to 00:34:749 - , the next add a note to 00:33:916 - for column 2
00:57:748 - weaken a push compare with the other tones, especially 00:58:582 - and 00:58:915 -
but I didn't mention about 00:56:915 -, it has already relevance to 00:56:582 -
00:57:748 - add a note to 3, you might be able to find a different feeling for tones.
01:16:581 - Didn't you set a note to this point intentionally? I feel notes lacking here.
[HD]Almost perfect. but I wonder why the difficulty is really appropriate as HD?
You might want to rename this one to HD+, please consider them.[MX]00:09:749 (9749|2) - /00:12:416 (12416|2) - / 00:15:083 (15083|2) - remove them.
It might be very instinctive suggestion, good to kinda express pure silence by deleting end notes.
00:26:749 - to 00:27:416 -
The common things through the all diffs, really doubtful about the way of setting to irregular snares,
I didn't mention it about the others, because difficulty problem for EZ+, NM, and prior to simple handling.
The one solution is to use the other beat snap interval, but be a complicated anyway.
So, I'm gonna indicate the next way to move both LNs for piano line like
(e.g.3), how is it?
00:32:833 - add a note to 1 to express the slipping electro sound,
00:32:749 (32749|0) - and move to 3, to take a pitch relevance since 00:32:083 -
00:40:833 - the same reason as the above, add a note to 3
but the case that you thought the voice as the main point, shall not apply them.00:53:583 (53583|1,53583|0) - you might want to remove them, feel a bit uncomfortable.
00:56:582 -
nice Kiai Time.Good Luck, Love your charts.