normal-whistle doesn't sound good for this map, please change them into soft-whistle or others.
~EZ+~00:38:416 (38416|3) - add whistle
00:44:583 (44583|2) - ^
00:48:083 (48083|0,48416|2,48749|1,49083|3,49416|2,49749|0,50083|1,50416|3,50749|2) - use this pattern
00:53:749 (53749|1) - add hitfinish
01:26:248 (86248|3) - move to lane 3
01:26:581 (86581|0) - move to lane 4
01:27:081 (87081|3) - move to lane 2
01:27:415 (87415|2,87581|1) - move to lane 1
~NM~00:53:749 (53749|0,53749|2) - add hitfinish on one of these
01:05:415 - add 1 more note
01:07:581 (67581|2) - add clap
01:07:915 (67915|1) - remove clap
01:09:248 (69248|1) - ^
01:09:581 (69581|2) - add clap
01:10:581 (70581|2) - remove clap
01:10:915 (70915|2) - add clap
01:11:581 (71581|0) - ^
01:16:581 - add note on lane 1
01:27:415 (87415|1) - move to lane 1
~HD~00:28:749 (28749|0) - remove hitfinish
00:38:999 (38999|2) - remove note
00:39:833 - add note
00:51:583 (51583|0) - remove hitfinish
00:52:249 (52249|3) - add hitfinish
00:52:749 (52749|0) - ^
00:53:749 (53749|1) - ^
00:57:498 (57498|1) - remove note
00:57:832 - add note
01:09:915 (69915|2,70081|1,70081|3,70248|0,70248|2,70415|1) - use tap notes
01:12:248 (72248|3,72415|2) - ^
01:13:498 (73498|0) - remove note
01:13:831 - add note
01:16:165 (76165|1) - remove note
01:16:498 - add note
01:16:665 (76665|1) - remove note
01:17:165 (77165|2) - ^
01:25:748 (85748|1) - remove hitfinish, it was mixed with previous one and it's loud
01:27:415 (87415|1) - move to lane 1
01:27:581 (87581|0) - end at 01:29:915 ?
~Sora's MX~• Hitsounds must be added
00:54:916 - slowing down will just confuse players
00:55:249 - ^
00:55:582 - ^
00:55:749 - if you want slow part, place x0.5 one here
00:55:582 - add kiai on red timing and remove speed changes (not a good place to use bouncing) then change note lane 2 into LN
01:25:748 - move this timing to 01:25:915 and use soft hitsounds