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sasakure.UK feat. Hatsune Miku - SeventH-HeaveN [OsuMania]

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Starry-

[ C r a c k ] wrote:

Hi!
Here for mod request in 炒飯 Chao Fan

Columns: |1|2|3|4|

EZ+

SPOILER
  1. 00:08:916 (8916|0,9083|1,9249|2) - ctrl + g ? sure~
  2. 01:07:248 - add a note here (like here 00:56:582 - ) hmm ok
  3. 01:17:915 (77915|0) - LN end at 01:23:581 - alright

NM

SPOILER
  1. 00:21:916 (21916|0) - LN end at 00:22:916 - ok
  2. 00:31:583 (31583|3) - LN end at 00:31:916 - sure
  3. 00:34:083 - Here if you are following vocal, LNs end at 00:34:416 - keeping for playability, it looks bland otherwise
  4. 00:37:416 (37416|3) - LN end at 00:37:749 - ? This sound from piano is different to 00:37:916 (37916|0) - its more to emphasise the higher pitches in the vocals. keeping.
  5. 01:17:248 (77248|2,77331|1,77415|0,77498|1,77581|2,77665|3,77748|0) - ctrl + g & 01:17:915 (77915|2) - to 1 col. plays quite hard, keeping.

HD

SPOILER
  1. Really good, but LN at 01:27:581 (87581|0) - doesn't end to 01:30:915 - ? thanks! i always had a thing against long sliders near the end of notes, and it ends on a big white tick so i think its fine.

Sora's MX

SPOILER
  1. 00:40:083 (40083|2) - remove ? (similar to 00:40:083 (40083|2) - ) done
  2. 00:51:249 - remove one note^
  3. 00:52:249 - , 00:52:749 - remove one note^ done both~
  4. 00:53:749 (53749|2,53749|1,54916|3,54916|0) - LNs end to 00:55:666 - ? feeling a bit weird about this, but done
  5. 01:07:915 (67915|1) - incorrect position! I have no idea if is just a my problem o.o (screen)
  6. from here 01:08:414 (68414|0,68414|2) - to 01:17:415 - there are a lot of notes in incorrect position. this is very weird o.o
  7. 01:27:581 (87581|0) - LN end at 01:30:915 - same as hd ;w;
Really pretty song ^^
Good luck! :)
thanks~ <3
Pow-
hello~
here's m4m from your mod :3
feel free to ignore my mod if u didn't like it :D

|1|2|3|4|

MOD


NM
00:35:249 (35249|3,35249|2) - move to 1&3
00:35:583 (35583|2,35583|0) - move to 3&4
00:41:583 (41583|2) - move to 1
01:12:081 (72081|1) - move to 1
01:12:415 (72415|0) - move to 2
01:12:581 (72581|1) - move to 1

HD
00:30:916 (30916|2) - move to 4
00:31:083 - add to 3
00:57:082 - add to 1 [?]
well everything is good for me :D

Sora's MX
00:42:416 - add LN ?? if u adding it delete 00:42:583 (42583|2,42583|1) - and change it into LN
01:13:748 - add to 2
nice pattern <3 song good luck hope it gonna ranked as fast as possible :oops:
DJPop
normal-whistle doesn't sound good for this map, please change them into soft-whistle or others.

~EZ+~
00:38:416 (38416|3) - add whistle
00:44:583 (44583|2) - ^
00:48:083 (48083|0,48416|2,48749|1,49083|3,49416|2,49749|0,50083|1,50416|3,50749|2) - use this pattern
00:53:749 (53749|1) - add hitfinish
01:26:248 (86248|3) - move to lane 3
01:26:581 (86581|0) - move to lane 4
01:27:081 (87081|3) - move to lane 2
01:27:415 (87415|2,87581|1) - move to lane 1

~NM~
00:53:749 (53749|0,53749|2) - add hitfinish on one of these
01:05:415 - add 1 more note
01:07:581 (67581|2) - add clap
01:07:915 (67915|1) - remove clap
01:09:248 (69248|1) - ^
01:09:581 (69581|2) - add clap
01:10:581 (70581|2) - remove clap
01:10:915 (70915|2) - add clap
01:11:581 (71581|0) - ^
01:16:581 - add note on lane 1
01:27:415 (87415|1) - move to lane 1

~HD~
00:28:749 (28749|0) - remove hitfinish
00:38:999 (38999|2) - remove note
00:39:833 - add note
00:51:583 (51583|0) - remove hitfinish
00:52:249 (52249|3) - add hitfinish
00:52:749 (52749|0) - ^
00:53:749 (53749|1) - ^
00:57:498 (57498|1) - remove note
00:57:832 - add note
01:09:915 (69915|2,70081|1,70081|3,70248|0,70248|2,70415|1) - use tap notes
01:12:248 (72248|3,72415|2) - ^
01:13:498 (73498|0) - remove note
01:13:831 - add note
01:16:165 (76165|1) - remove note
01:16:498 - add note
01:16:665 (76665|1) - remove note
01:17:165 (77165|2) - ^
01:25:748 (85748|1) - remove hitfinish, it was mixed with previous one and it's loud
01:27:415 (87415|1) - move to lane 1
01:27:581 (87581|0) - end at 01:29:915 ?

~Sora's MX~
• Hitsounds must be added
00:54:916 - slowing down will just confuse players
00:55:249 - ^
00:55:582 - ^
00:55:749 - if you want slow part, place x0.5 one here
00:55:582 - add kiai on red timing and remove speed changes (not a good place to use bouncing) then change note lane 2 into LN
01:25:748 - move this timing to 01:25:915 and use soft hitsounds
Muu-chan
Hello! :)
M4M here.

Note that these are only suggestions. You can decline them, if you want. ;)

4K = |0|1|2|3|

LN means Long Note.

Sorry for my bad english :(
General
* Add [ S o r a ] kun's name in the tags since he made a GD (in all diff) ^^
* BPM OK! But i don't get it why so many BPM changes :<
* AiMod OK!
EZ+
* Once again this is only suggestion^^
* I suggest to make OD and HP to 7 (since there's '+' sign too. Don't make it so EZ ^^)
* 00:08:583 - i suggest to add a note here for the piano and cut this LN 00:08:083 (8083|3) - until that point too. Beside that, the distance of this 00:08:083 (8083|3,8916|2) - (1/2 beat) i think is too short (but it's okay if you're following the vocal^^)
* 00:09:249 - i suggest to add a LN for the vocal^^ in 2 or 3 until 00:09:749 -
* 00:13:416 - ^ until 00:13:916 -
* 00:14:583 - ^ until 00:15:083 -
* 00:16:083 - ^ until 00:16:583 -
* 00:17:249 - ^ until 00:17:749 -
* 00:26:749 - ^ until 00:27:249
The rest is OK!
NM
* 00:22:083 (22083|1) - i suggest to delete this^^
* 00:24:416 - i suggest to add note (i feel something is missing here^^ beside that, following pattern in here 00:22:249 (22249|2,22416|3,22583|2))
* 00:34:083 (34083|3,34083|0) - i think both LN should stop at 00:34:416 - (following vocal^^ but it's OK!)
* 00:34:416 - add note here~
The rest is OK! ^^
HD
* 00:16:083 (16083|3) - longer this LN until 00:16:583 (since the sounds of the LN isn't over yet)
* 00:22:583 - i suggest to add LN here until 00:23:083 (i think you've to delete 00:22:583 (22583|0) - if you add a LN^^)
* 00:33:999 (33999|1) - i thin this is unnecessary, i suggest to delete it^^
* 00:40:583 - i suggest to add a LN on 3 until 00:41:249 (for the vocal^^)
* 00:41:083 (41083|3) - move to 1 (if you do ^^^^^ ) ;)
* 00:44:749 (44749|1,44749|0) - i suggest both of them change into single LN until 00:44:916 thus add whistle sound^^
LOL i love to see the pattern with the Short LN after this. Look so cute <3 but i don't think i can't play it since i'm nub :<
Sora's MX
This is great already~ i just have a suggestion here :>
* 00:10:416 - maybe add a LN here until 00:10:749 (for the vocal^^)
Yay i think that's all for me. Overall your map is amazing^^ I hope it can be bubble soon~ Well good luck~
[Emiria]
...as your request...
MX
00:11:083 (11083|2) - i'd like to extend to 00:11:416 -
00:39:833 - add a note
00:44:083 - add a note
00:46:749 - ^
00:57:082 - 1/4 start here and end at 00:57:415 -
00:59:998 - miss 1/4
01:01:248 (61248|0) - move to 01:01:081 -
01:01:831 (61831|2) - no sound
01:03:415 (63415|2) - delete
01:03:998 - miss 1/4
01:05:665 - add a note
01:08:331 - add a note..
i suggest to listen to music carefully...and check this part again..
good luck..
Topic Starter
Starry-

-[BURGERKILL]- wrote:

hello~
here's m4m from your mod :3
feel free to ignore my mod if u didn't like it :D

|1|2|3|4|

MOD


NM
00:35:249 (35249|3,35249|2) - move to 1&3
00:35:583 (35583|2,35583|0) - move to 3&4 hmm i feel like it repeats the previous pattern too much, keeping
00:41:583 (41583|2) - move to 1 ok
01:12:081 (72081|1) - move to 1
01:12:415 (72415|0) - move to 2
01:12:581 (72581|1) - move to 1i like how this whole section kinda follows PR, so keeping. plays better like this too

HD
00:30:916 (30916|2) - move to 4
00:31:083 - add to 3 this section mainly follows the highlights from vocals, and pitch accordingly, keeping same
00:57:082 - add to 1 [?] hmm maybe :3
well everything is good for me :D thank you xD

Sora's MX
00:42:416 - add LN ?? if u adding it delete 00:42:583 (42583|2,42583|1) - and change it into LN don't really follow the bass sound here so keeping
01:13:748 - add to 2 hmm ok
nice pattern <3 song good luck hope it gonna ranked as fast as possible :oops: thanks<3
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DJPop wrote:

normal-whistle doesn't sound good for this map, please change them into soft-whistle or others. hmm alright

~EZ+~
00:38:416 (38416|3) - add whistle ok
00:44:583 (44583|2) - ^ x.x my bad lolol done
00:48:083 (48083|0,48416|2,48749|1,49083|3,49416|2,49749|0,50083|1,50416|3,50749|2) - use this pattern ok i guess it makes more sense
00:53:749 (53749|1) - add hitfinish done
01:26:248 (86248|3) - move to lane 3
01:26:581 (86581|0) - move to lane 4
01:27:081 (87081|3) - move to lane 2 done all except:
01:27:415 (87415|2,87581|1) - move to lane 1 this, since i dont like the idea of it being the only 1/2 singletap in the entire map

~NM~
00:53:749 (53749|0,53749|2) - add hitfinish on one of these
01:05:415 - add 1 more note
01:07:581 (67581|2) - add clap
01:07:915 (67915|1) - remove clap
01:09:248 (69248|1) - ^
01:09:581 (69581|2) - add clap
01:10:581 (70581|2) - remove clap
01:10:915 (70915|2) - add clap
01:11:581 (71581|0) - ^
01:16:581 - add note on lane 1
01:27:415 (87415|1) - move to lane 1 done all, im bad with hitsounds >:

~HD~
00:28:749 (28749|0) - remove hitfinish i dont have a clue why this is here lol
00:38:999 (38999|2) - remove note
00:39:833 - add note very hard to rearrange this section. done something that may suffice.
00:51:583 (51583|0) - remove hitfinish
00:52:249 (52249|3) - add hitfinish
00:52:749 (52749|0) - ^
00:53:749 (53749|1) - ^ done all
00:57:498 (57498|1) - remove note
00:57:832 - add note ok
01:09:915 (69915|2,70081|1,70081|3,70248|0,70248|2,70415|1) - use tap notes mmmm ok
01:12:248 (72248|3,72415|2) - ^
01:13:498 (73498|0) - remove note
01:13:831 - add note ok all
01:16:165 (76165|1) - remove note
01:16:498 - add note
01:16:665 (76665|1) - remove note
01:17:165 (77165|2) - ^ done all, may need rearranging
01:25:748 (85748|1) - remove hitfinish, it was mixed with previous one and it's loud
01:27:415 (87415|1) - move to lane 1 done all
01:27:581 (87581|0) - end at 01:29:915 ? so many suggestions to do this, might as well

~Sora's MX~
• Hitsounds must be added
00:54:916 - slowing down will just confuse players
00:55:249 - ^
00:55:582 - ^
00:55:749 - if you want slow part, place x0.5 one here done this, but made it more gradual instead.
00:55:582 - add kiai on red timing and remove speed changes (not a good place to use bouncing) then change note lane 2 into LN mm i think its fine how it is. readable enough.
01:25:748 - move this timing to 01:25:915 and use soft hitsounds ok thanks very helpful mod <3
Topic Starter
Starry-

Muu-chan wrote:

Hello! :)
M4M here.

Note that these are only suggestions. You can decline them, if you want. ;)

4K = |0|1|2|3|

LN means Long Note.

Sorry for my bad english :( its fine :3 not bad at all~
General
* Add [ S o r a ] kun's name in the tags since he made a GD (in all diff) ^^done
* BPM OK! But i don't get it why so many BPM changes :<
* AiMod OK!
EZ+
* Once again this is only suggestion^^
* I suggest to make OD and HP to 7 (since there's '+' sign too. Don't make it so EZ ^^) it already is :o
* 00:08:583 - i suggest to add a note here for the piano and cut this LN 00:08:083 (8083|3) - until that point too. Beside that, the distance of this 00:08:083 (8083|3,8916|2) - (1/2 beat) i think is too short (but it's okay if you're following the vocal^^)
* 00:09:249 - i suggest to add a LN for the vocal^^ in 2 or 3 until 00:09:749 - done this :3
* 00:13:416 - ^ until 00:13:916 -
* 00:14:583 - ^ until 00:15:083 -
* 00:16:083 - ^ until 00:16:583 -
* 00:17:249 - ^ until 00:17:749 -
* 00:26:749 - ^ until 00:27:249 i think its fine everywhere else ;w; the vocals aren't what i highlight anymore in these parts.
The rest is OK!
NM
* 00:22:083 (22083|1) - i suggest to delete this^^ theres a scary clunk sound, so keeping ;-;
* 00:24:416 - i suggest to add note (i feel something is missing here^^ beside that, following pattern in here 00:22:249 (22249|2,22416|3,22583|2)) added/rearranged
* 00:34:083 (34083|3,34083|0) - i think both LN should stop at 00:34:416 - (following vocal^^ but it's OK!) done
* 00:34:416 - add note here~ no need ;w;
The rest is OK! ^^
HD
* 00:16:083 (16083|3) - longer this LN until 00:16:583 (since the sounds of the LN isn't over yet) gets higher pitch, so i change ln ;w;
* 00:22:583 - i suggest to add LN here until 00:23:083 (i think you've to delete 00:22:583 (22583|0) - if you add a LN^^) i think fine without
* 00:33:999 (33999|1) - i thin this is unnecessary, i suggest to delete it^^ the hipitch piano sound
* 00:40:583 - i suggest to add a LN on 3 until 00:41:249 (for the vocal^^)
* 00:41:083 (41083|3) - move to 1 (if you do ^^^^^ ) ;) rearranged all
* 00:44:749 (44749|1,44749|0) - i suggest both of them change into single LN until 00:44:916 thus add whistle sound^^
LOL i love to see the pattern with the Short LN after this. Look so cute <3 but i don't think i can't play it since i'm nub :< thanks xD abnd soon! O:
Sora's MX
This is great already~ i just have a suggestion here :>
* 00:10:416 - maybe add a LN here until 00:10:749 (for the vocal^^) i think sora was only following the bass here, so i shall keep it
Yay i think that's all for me. Overall your map is amazing^^ I hope it can be bubble soon~ Well good luck~ thanks so much <3

victorica_db wrote:

...as your request...
MX
00:11:083 (11083|2) - i'd like to extend to 00:11:416 - ok
00:39:833 - add a note
00:44:083 - add a note
00:46:749 - ^ done all~
00:57:082 - 1/4 start here and end at 00:57:415 -
00:59:998 - miss 1/4
01:01:248 (61248|0) - move to 01:01:081 -
01:01:831 (61831|2) - no sound
01:03:415 (63415|2) - delete
01:03:998 - miss 1/4
01:05:665 - add a note
01:08:331 - add a note.. done everything
i suggest to listen to music carefully...and check this part again..
good luck.. thank you, helpful <3
Aphrodena
[Aphrodena's Modding Queue]

|0|1|2|3|


[General]
Lots of vocal mapping, but good map overall.

Um, uh... sorry for the delay? ;_;

Mod
[4K EZ]
00:16:083 (16083|3,16583|0) - Ctrl+H for PR (first little tinkle noise is lower pitched)
01:17:915 (77915|2) - Add because strong sound with cymbal

[4K NM]
Looks fine to me~

[4K HD]
00:26:083 (26083|0) - Move to |1|
00:26:249 (26249|1) - Move to |0| -> These 2 suggestions match the synth that decreases in pitch
00:29:416 (29416|1) - Add one because strong sound
00:43:083 - Not sure if you missed this or you intentionally ignored it, but there's a rim shot here
00:47:083 - ^

[4K MX]
No complaints here, probably because I can't play the map well enough to give it a good mod. (I mean, 650k reallllllly)

Good luck! (No kudosu if you didn't find my mod helpful ^^)
Topic Starter
Starry-

Aphrodena wrote:

[Aphrodena's Modding Queue]

|0|1|2|3|


[General]
Lots of vocal mapping, but good map overall.

Um, uh... sorry for the delay? ;_;

Mod
[4K EZ]
00:16:083 (16083|3,16583|0) - Ctrl+H for PR (first little tinkle noise is lower pitched) done~
01:17:915 (77915|2) - Add because strong sound with cymbal instead just moved this to 3, i dont like the idea of it being the first 3 chord in the whole map

[4K NM]
Looks fine to me~

[4K HD]
00:26:083 (26083|0) - Move to |1|
00:26:249 (26249|1) - Move to |0| -> These 2 suggestions match the synth that decreases in pitch oki done ~
00:29:416 (29416|1) - Add one because strong sound done~
00:43:083 - Not sure if you missed this or you intentionally ignored it, but there's a rim shot here
00:47:083 - ^ done both

[4K MX]
No complaints here, probably because I can't play the map well enough to give it a good mod. (I mean, 650k reallllllly)

Good luck! (No kudosu if you didn't find my mod helpful ^^)
thank you :P
Topic Starter
Starry-
Fixed a snapping error on one of the diffs~
Akasha-


sasakure.UK feat. Hatsune Miku - SeventH-HeaveN [Osu!Mania Modding]

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From Kuo Kyoka's osu!mania Modding Queue

Mod Requested by Starry-


[Generals]
- BPM: Okay
- Offset: Okay
- AiMod: No Problem
- Tags: Okay
- BG: Better to change one, in this background have the text: Solosail (sm16151555) Use google and like: http://www.tudou.com/programs/view/bdkZi3Uaeqk/ !Not SeventH-HeaveN so suggest to change one
- Kiai: Okay

Column
| 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 |


“Here come of some suggest for your map, I always check fullmap, if I’m too tried I will come back soon, or only check that keys by the request! And remember to reply the mod when you’re accepcted it or not! And forget my kud if my suggest is useful ~ Thanks for requested me ~

[EZ+]

SPOILER
  1. Suggest 00:21:416 - to 00:24:083 - make like 00:18:749 - to 00:20:083 -
  2. 00:25:583 - change the pattern like: cause in 00:25:916 (25916|0,26249|0) - seems repeating http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2393496
  3. 00:37:416 - here, change pattern like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2393504 (The pitch not always the same so change the pattern)
  4. Here also: 00:55:749 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2393506
  5. 00:59:248 - to 01:01:081 - :| suggest: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2393510
  6. Here 01:09:915 - same, try this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2393515
  7. 01:17:915 - to 01:25:915 - the song doesnt have only voice? try to have some are beat, not following voice is better
    This diff need more works

[NM]

SPOILER
  1. 00:53:416 (53416|0) - move to 00:53:577 -
    Nice in my options but need works on the zig-zag patterns

[HD]

SPOILER
  1. Only in 00:26:583 (26583|2,26749|3,26916|2,27249|2) - have those strong beat, suggest 00:27:416 - move one
    Nice diff

[Sora's MX]

SPOILER
  1. 00:23:749 - add a note in 4, have a drum sound in here
  2. 00:26:583 - and 00:26:916 - add a note, same beat with 00:26:749 -
    Im not good much at 4K, seems good but seems too much notes too

[Comment]

Eh~ Hatsune Miku >w< This song so good ~ But patterns on EZ and NM need more works actually! Anyway, the map is good, so I wont mod too much!
Suggest to change the bg (it's unrankable because of the text) and pls go rank this map ~ :)
Good luck ~
Topic Starter
Starry-

Kuo Kyoka wrote:



sasakure.UK feat. Hatsune Miku - SeventH-HeaveN [Osu!Mania Modding]

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From Kuo Kyoka's osu!mania Modding Queue

Mod Requested by Starry-


[Generals]
- BPM: Okay
- Offset: Okay
- AiMod: No Problem
- Tags: Okay
- BG: Better to change one, in this background have the text: Solosail (sm16151555) Use google and like: http://www.tudou.com/programs/view/bdkZi3Uaeqk/ !Not SeventH-HeaveN so suggest to change one ah yes. changed it entirely.
- Kiai: Okay

Column
| 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 |


“Here come of some suggest for your map, I always check fullmap, if I’m too tried I will come back soon, or only check that keys by the request! And remember to reply the mod when you’re accepcted it or not! And forget my kud if my suggest is useful ~ Thanks for requested me ~

[EZ+]

SPOILER
  1. Suggest 00:21:416 - to 00:24:083 - make like 00:18:749 - to 00:20:083 - its irregular because the vocal starts on a red tick. however i added notes to compensate the lack in consistency with hitsounds.
  2. 00:25:583 - change the pattern like: cause in 00:25:916 (25916|0,26249|0) - seems repeating http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2393496 no change, ii think its fine. goes with pitch and easier to play like this.
  3. 00:37:416 - here, change pattern like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2393504 (The pitch not always the same so change the pattern) ^, i can ignore minor pitch relevancies if it's a lot more playable for the player. i dont want it too hard.
  4. Here also: 00:55:749 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2393506 ^
  5. 00:59:248 - to 01:01:081 - :| suggest: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2393510 changed because in kiai
  6. Here 01:09:915 - same, try this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2393515 done
  7. 01:17:915 - to 01:25:915 - the song doesnt have only voice? try to have some are beat, not following voice is better for this part specifically the beat is a little bit more mellow. i wanted to map the highlights in the song >< again first mapset lol..
    This diff need more works

[NM]

SPOILER
  1. 00:53:416 (53416|0) - move to 00:53:577 - no real noise apart from synth, no change
    Nice in my options but need works on the zig-zag patterns

[HD]

SPOILER
  1. Only in 00:26:583 (26583|2,26749|3,26916|2,27249|2) - have those strong beat, suggest 00:27:416 - move one no change, dont feel need for it
    Nice diff

[Sora's MX]

SPOILER
  1. 00:23:749 - add a note in 4, have a drum sound in here added note in 2 instead
  2. 00:26:583 - and 00:26:916 - add a note, same beat with 00:26:749 - rearranged
    Im not good much at 4K, seems good but seems too much notes too

[Comment]

Eh~ Hatsune Miku >w< This song so good ~ But patterns on EZ and NM need more works actually! Anyway, the map is good, so I wont mod too much!
Suggest to change the bg (it's unrankable because of the text) and pls go rank this map ~ :) thank you! changed a few EZ patterns around, NM didn't seem that bad. changed bg. sorry if i declined a lot :(
Good luck ~
<3
HOST_old
hi starryberry-
mod from queue~~


colum 1 / 2 / 3 / 4


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[EZ+]

00:09:249 (9249|0) - end 00:10:083

01:17:915 (77915|0) - end 01:23:248


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[NM]

00:13:416 ~ 00:28:416 - i think long notes are better to following low tone of synthesizer. if u dont wanna it, just ignore these suggestions.

00:13:416 (13416|3) - end 00:14:749

00:18:749 (18749|3) - end 00:20:083

00:19:916 (19916|0) - change to single note

00:21:916 (21916|0) - start 00:21:416. end 00:22:749

00:22:083 (22083|1,22249|2,22416|3,22583|2,22916|3) - remove

00:21:916 - add LN 3, end 00:22:749

00:24:083 (24083|3) - end 00:25:416

00:33:916 (33916|1) - remove
00:34:083 (34083|0) - start 00:33:916
00:34:083 (34083|3) - start 00:34:249
two LNs end 00:34:416

00:51:249 (51249|2) - move 1
00:51:583 (51583|1) - move 4
00:52:083 (52083|0,52083|3) - move 2, 3
00:52:583 (52583|1,52583|2) - move 1, 4


[]
[Sora's MX]

00:54:916 (54916|0,54916|3) - start 00:54:749


[]

<3
good luck
Topic Starter
Starry-

HOST wrote:

hi starryberry- toastHOST :3
mod from queue~~


colum 1 / 2 / 3 / 4


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[EZ+]

00:09:249 (9249|0) - end 00:10:083 ended at red tick instead, rearranged a bunch

01:17:915 (77915|0) - end 01:23:248 okai


[]
[NM]

00:13:416 ~ 00:28:416 - i think long notes are better to following low tone of synthesizer. if u dont wanna it, just ignore these suggestions.

00:13:416 (13416|3) - end 00:14:749

00:18:749 (18749|3) - end 00:20:083

00:19:916 (19916|0) - change to single note

00:21:916 (21916|0) - start 00:21:416. end 00:22:749 done all

00:22:083 (22083|1,22249|2,22416|3,22583|2,22916|3) - remove rearranged hugely

00:21:916 - add LN 3, end 00:22:749 i start not to follow vocals here

00:24:083 (24083|3) - end 00:25:416 ok

00:33:916 (33916|1) - remove
00:34:083 (34083|0) - start 00:33:916
00:34:083 (34083|3) - start 00:34:249
two LNs end 00:34:416 ok all

00:51:249 (51249|2) - move 1
00:51:583 (51583|1) - move 4
00:52:083 (52083|0,52083|3) - move 2, 3
00:52:583 (52583|1,52583|2) - move 1, 4 done all

made quite a few rearrangements in this diff, needs a bit more work

[]
[Sora's MX]

00:54:916 (54916|0,54916|3) - start 00:54:749 ok


[]

<3
good luck
thanks :)
Aste-
Hi Ho Hell...... Whaa.... What a beautiful Song... Great (^.^)b

OK Ahem... Hi Ho Hello

M4M from (See Signature) Here

Sorry for the delay..

OK since this song are my fav. so I''ll Going All out For this and Mod all diff that i can take....

OK

General's are fine so i'll skip it

The MOD

Colom 1.2.3.4

EZ+
00:09:749 (9749|1) - Move to 4 (more comfortable)

00:25:583 (25583|2) - Move to 2

00:26:749 (26749|3) - Change to LN till 00:27:249 (27249|0) -

00:42:749 (42749|1) - Move to 3 ( More comfortable )

00:53:249 addl note at 2 and then 00:53:416 (53416|3) - Move to 3

00:53:749 (53749|1) - Move to 4 and then make this


00:59:415 (59415|0,59582|3,59748|1,59915|0,60082|2,60248|3) - Make this

01:08:581 (68581|1,68915|2,69081|0) - I suggest you should avoid using this . i think this are too hard for EZ
So
01:08:581 (68581|1) - Move to 3
01:08:915 (68915|2) - Move to 2

01:09:248 (69248|3) - move to 3
01:09:581 (69581|0) - Move to 4

01:10:415 (70415|3,70581|1,70748|2,70915|0,71081|2,71248|1) - I think this are too hard.. Try this

01:11:748 (71748|2) - for this and the other that similiar with this.. i suggest you change it to LN till 01:12:081 (72081|3) -

01:13:248 (73248|1) - Delete

NM
00:18:749 (18749|3) - End it here > 00:19:583 (19583|2) -

00:37:583 (37583|1) - Move to 1

01:17:081 (77081|3) - Delete

HD
HP or OD = 7 or 7.5 (have mercy please TT_TT)

00:25:249 (25249|0) - Delete.. pattern

The rest are clean~


Give me Kudo now so i can convert it to star... I really love the song and the Mapset >.<

GL And Get Ranked soon ^.^
17VA
[MX]

00:30:083 (30083|1,30166|0,30249|1) - looks uncomfortable. 1,2,1 column might be better.

00:47:916 - ^ http://puu.sh/et1QJ/1b317fb72b.png

00:52:083 (52083|2,52083|1,52249|1,52249|0,52249|3) - ctrl + h. same pattern has been used, but different tone.

01:02:915 - how about this way ? http://puu.sh/et22n/946f4b425c.jpg

[HD]

00:40:583 (40583|2) - 2nd column?

00:45:416 - add. strong beat

00:53:416 (53416|1,53416|2) - 3,4 column is better imo

00:53:749 (53749|2,53749|1,53749|0) - use symmetric hold here. looks uncomfortable.

00:56:416 (56416|2) - 4th column

01:06:415 - http://puu.sh/et2zf/243bea35dc.jpg little uncomfortable lol
Topic Starter
Starry-
Applying this after college, thanks guys <3
Topic Starter
Starry-

17VA wrote:

[MX]

00:30:083 (30083|1,30166|0,30249|1) - looks uncomfortable. 1,2,1 column might be better. done

00:47:916 - ^ http://puu.sh/et1QJ/1b317fb72b.png ok

00:52:083 (52083|2,52083|1,52249|1,52249|0,52249|3) - ctrl + h. same pattern has been used, but different tone. ok

01:02:915 - how about this way ? http://puu.sh/et22n/946f4b425c.jpg ok

[HD]

00:40:583 (40583|2) - 2nd column? ok

00:45:416 - add. strong beat ok

00:53:416 (53416|1,53416|2) - 3,4 column is better imo rearranged

00:53:749 (53749|2,53749|1,53749|0) - use symmetric hold here. looks uncomfortable. rearranged

00:56:416 (56416|2) - 4th column rearranged

01:06:415 - http://puu.sh/et2zf/243bea35dc.jpg little uncomfortable lol changed
thanks for mod, will apply pharos' soon
Topic Starter
Starry-

Pharos21 wrote:

Hi Ho Hell...... Whaa.... What a beautiful Song... Great (^.^)b

OK Ahem... Hi Ho Hello

M4M from (See Signature) Here

Sorry for the delay..

OK since this song are my fav. so I''ll Going All out For this and Mod all diff that i can take....

OK

General's are fine so i'll skip it

The MOD

Colom 1.2.3.4

EZ+
00:09:749 (9749|1) - Move to 4 (more comfortable) keeping for balance ;w;

00:25:583 (25583|2) - Move to 2 it fits nicely here

00:26:749 (26749|3) - Change to LN till 00:27:249 (27249|0) - oonly really focused on the synth to make LN here

00:42:749 (42749|1) - Move to 3 ( More comfortable ) keeping for balance

00:53:249 addl note at 2 and then 00:53:416 (53416|3) - Move to 3 i think is fine, adding note will make it inconsistent with rest of pattern ;w;

00:53:749 (53749|1) - Move to 4 and then make this


00:59:415 (59415|0,59582|3,59748|1,59915|0,60082|2,60248|3) - Make this ok rearranged

01:08:581 (68581|1,68915|2,69081|0) - I suggest you should avoid using this . i think this are too hard for EZ
So
01:08:581 (68581|1) - Move to 3
01:08:915 (68915|2) - Move to 2

01:09:248 (69248|3) - move to 3
01:09:581 (69581|0) - Move to 4 rearranged all a bit

01:10:415 (70415|3,70581|1,70748|2,70915|0,71081|2,71248|1) - I think this are too hard.. Try this

01:11:748 (71748|2) - for this and the other that similiar with this.. i suggest you change it to LN till 01:12:081 (72081|3) - okayo

01:13:248 (73248|1) - Delete no but rearranged instead

NM
00:18:749 (18749|3) - End it here > 00:19:583 (19583|2) - ended at synth

00:37:583 (37583|1) - Move to 1 ok

01:17:081 (77081|3) - Delete fits keep ;)

HD
HP or OD = 7 or 7.5 (have mercy please TT_TT)

00:25:249 (25249|0) - Delete.. pattern ok

The rest are clean~


Give me Kudo now so i can convert it to star... I really love the song and the Mapset >.<

GL And Get Ranked soon ^.^
thanks <3

ALSO damn i made a triple post oops ;w;
Kruzon


4K Column Format: 1 l 2 l 3 l 4

4K Easy+

SPOILER
00:09:249 (9249|0) - i thought it ends here instead 00:10:083 (10083|0) -
00:57:915 (57915|0) - what is this note following? imo, these need notes instead 00:57:748 (57748|1) - and 00:58:082 (58082|1) - following vocal here is better

01:17:915 (77915|0) - perhaps it's more proper and balance if you end it on the same line as 01:23:081 (83081|3) -

4K NM

SPOILER
00:20:083 (20083|2) - i hear a chime here, and
00:18:749 (18749|3) - end this long note on same line as this 00:19:916 (19916|0) - , consistent presentation of long notes

00:29:916 (29916|3,29916|2,30249|0,30249|3) - feels off.. 00:29:916 (29916|2,29916|3) - feels like it's the one should be widened and 00:30:249 (30249|3,30249|0) - narrowed, pitch-wise

00:38:416 (38416|3) - = 00:39:916 (39916|0) - ?

00:40:083 (40083|2,40083|3) - move to 2 and 3
00:57:415 (57415|1) - what is this following? i suggest move 2/4 beat forward since the vocal and instrument starts there

good luck ^^
Topic Starter
Starry-

Kruzon wrote:



4K Column Format: 1 l 2 l 3 l 4

4K Easy+

SPOILER
00:09:249 (9249|0) - i thought it ends here instead 00:10:083 (10083|0) - vocal ends there, keep
00:57:915 (57915|0) - what is this note following? imo, these need notes instead 00:57:748 (57748|1) - and 00:58:082 (58082|1) - following vocal here is better hmm yes, but then itl'l be inconsistent with pattern :c

01:17:915 (77915|0) - perhaps it's more proper and balance if you end it on the same line as 01:23:081 (83081|3) - hmm still think it ends here, keep >.<

4K NM

SPOILER
00:20:083 (20083|2) - i hear a chime here, and add
00:18:749 (18749|3) - end this long note on same line as this 00:19:916 (19916|0) - , consistent presentation of long notes long notes here aren't really following this vocal

00:29:916 (29916|3,29916|2,30249|0,30249|3) - feels off.. 00:29:916 (29916|2,29916|3) - feels like it's the one should be widened and 00:30:249 (30249|3,30249|0) - narrowed, pitch-wise done

00:38:416 (38416|3) - = 00:39:916 (39916|0) - ? dont quite understand ;w;

00:40:083 (40083|2,40083|3) - move to 2 and 3 kinda more balanced like this
00:57:415 (57415|1) - what is this following? i suggest move 2/4 beat forward since the vocal and instrument starts there rearrange

good luck ^^
thanks :)
Aste-
Go For Ranked
Go For Ranked
YEaaah

*fanboyscream
Arzenvald
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hmm.. i found better mp3 for this mapset.. : http://puu.sh/fRc8d.mp3 better quality, for better approval process.. :^)
closest offset is 7387, and i will eventually update the storyboard if you changed the mp3...
Akasha-
I will take the bubble w/ recall me after you done ~

seems you are re-map it, good luck then ~ I will wait you ~ and help youn until it get qualified then ~
Arzenvald
http://puu.sh/g4XFf.osb osb update since the offset moved.. =~=
it's now synced with the new mp3.. enjoy.. :D
Blocko
Sup.
Here's a little timing check as requested by Starry-.



[Timing Check]
With the new mp3, it seems that the offset for the whole mapset is just a tiny bit late from what I'm hearing. I'd recommend this offset: 7381.

To make things easier in snapping all timing points, apply -6 ms on all timing points in all difficulties.

Be sure to resnap everything after applying the offset suggestion!



One of my shortest mods, but I hope I can help!
Good luck on rank!
Topic Starter
Starry-
Wow, that works really well. Thanks Blocko! <3
Will update with other big changes soon.
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