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Starry-

Harbyter wrote:

hi~ :) here my mod from the request

[MOD]

Column -1-2-3-4-

Sora's MX
00:26:416 - add note 3 ,the sound here is pretty lound for end it with only the LN the LN still fits thou, put a note at 1 instead

well you already put LN in the previous pattern like this so turn this note in LN 00:26:916 (26916|0) - and ends here 00:27:083 -
00:27:083 - add LN in col 2 and end it here 00:27:249 -
00:27:083 - add note 3
00:27:249 (27249|2) - delete
00:27:416 - add note 4 made some rearrangements so it flows nicer
00:27:583 (27583|2) - turn in LN till here 00:27:749 -
00:27:749 (27749|1) - turn in LN till here 00:27:916 - done both

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00:29:583 (29583|2) - delete it no sound there ok
00:30:166 - missing note added to 1
00:40:249 (40249|1) - here too no sound,delete done
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from here i don't understand what are you following,felt a lot of notes missing when played it ,you mixed everything but is incompleted so if you want to fill >


00:56:748 (56748|1) - delete done
00:57:415 (57415|1) - move this note here 00:57:498 - sure
00:57:832 - add note 2 i dont think there is sound here
00:57:915 (57915|1) - move note 2 in col 4 but done this anyways
00:59:582 (59582|2) - move this note here 00:59:498 - ok
00:59:832 - add note 1 done
01:00:331 - add note 4 ^
01:00:498 - here too ^
01:00:581 (60581|3) - delete ^
01:00:831 - add note 4 no real noise here + awkward to play
01:01:248 (61248|0) - move note 1 in col 3 ^
01:01:331 - add note 1 ^
01:02:498 - add note 1 done
01:02:665 - here too ^
01:02:748 (62748|0) - move in col 2 ^
01:02:998 - add note 2 no noise
01:03:998 - add note 3 ^
01:04:081 (64081|2) - move note 3 in col 2 ^
01:04:498 - add note 3
01:04:581 (64581|2) - move in col 4 rearranged
---

ok now, those SV are for? 00:39:583 - you know that it was really random?xD better take off
00:55:082 - here too lol

if you want to give a slow effect and a nice speed up i suggest to do this

00:54:916 - sv 0.90
00:55:249 - sv 0.80
00:55:582 - sv 0.70
00:56:582 - turn this sv in 1.50 without Kiai
00:56:832 - sv 0.75
00:56:915 - sv 1.00 with kiai done all timing as suggested, plays nicely! thanks<3

haven't found nothing unusual in other,they are enjoyable

hope my little mod will be helpfull :)
replying to this for the time being, thanks for big mod <3
Evening
Mod from queue

[MX]

00:18:416 (18416|2,18583|2) - I'm pretty sure there's a low pitched synth on 00:18:083 - , might want to copy and paste this pattern to the 2nd column from the left on 00:18:083 -
00:48:083 - The normal-hitnormal is distractingly loud
01:07:165 (67165|0,67248|0) - There's only one hammer in the entire chart, i highly suggest to just not hammer at all, it kills the FC of many innocent human beings
00:56:665 - in the kiai, i don't get what the LNs mostly represent, it feels like they are there to make things more complicated
01:17:915 (77915|0) - I really don't think this LN is needed, just remove it and spread the 1/4 pattern out, it's more comfortable

[HD]

00:54:916 (54916|1) - This LN is very unnecessary, consider removing it | This is due to the sound not even significant enough to be mapped ( the players might not even hear it also )
00:55:749 (55749|3,55916|2,56082|0,56249|1,56416|2) - Change to soft-hitwhistle, it's more appropriate
01:26:248 (86248|0,86581|3,87081|2,87415|1,87581|0) - Same here

Probably don't know what's soft-hitwhistle or soft-hitnormal or whatever
will explain

http://puu.sh/cE1Pq/3cd0c23edf.jpg This is the sample set/addition thing ( it's hard to explain what's the difference but just focus on sampleset )

soft-hitnormal = Soft Sampleset + No hitsounds
drum-hitwhistle = Drum Sampleset + Whistle hitsound

Looks pretty darn good

[NM]

Might want to normalize the volume of hitsounds here, some feel too damn loud, you can play with the volumes of notes by opening the "thing" ( idk what to call it )
Just hold alt and click the mapping area

00:09:249 (9249|0) - Might want to end this 1/2 earlier
00:21:916 (21916|0) - End this 1/2 later, it's more comfortable that way
00:51:083 (51083|2,51083|3,51249|0,51249|1) - Should probably hammer this and this 00:52:583 (52583|2,52583|1,52749|3,52749|0) - for consistency with 00:51:583 (51583|3,51583|0,51749|0,51749|3,52083|1,52083|2,52249|1,52249|2) -
01:26:248 (86248|2,86581|3,87081|2,87415|1,87581|0) - Same as HD

[EZ]
00:09:083 - Might want to add a note here for stair, it plays better imo | Listed mods are due to instruments in the music that are more significant that should be mapped
00:12:416 - ^
00:11:083 - ^
00:15:083 - ^
00:17:083 (17083|2) - Move this 1/2 later
00:17:749 -
00:25:083 (25083|1) - Move this 1/2 later
00:37:749 - Why did you omit this? | You have a pattern that is 1/2 stream here, having a 1/2 stream there shouldn't hurt
01:02:415 - you should probably map on 1/2 for the vocals here
01:05:081 - ^
01:13:081 - And here
01:15:748 - ^
01:26:248 (86248|2,86581|3,87081|2,87415|1,87581|0) - Same as HD

Mapping vocals aren't wrong, there's no such rule
I myself prefer to map to the significant sounds due to the players hearing them clearly
Topic Starter
Starry-

lZenxl wrote:

Mod from queue

[MX]

00:18:416 (18416|2,18583|2) - I'm pretty sure there's a low pitched synth on 00:18:083 - , might want to copy and paste this pattern to the 2nd column from the left on 00:18:083 - rearranged it a bit, synth starts at 00:17:916 -
00:48:083 - The normal-hitnormal is distractingly loud true, changed to soft 30
01:07:165 (67165|0,67248|0) - There's only one hammer in the entire chart, i highly suggest to just not hammer at all, it kills the FC of many innocent human beings removed and changed lol
00:56:665 - in the kiai, i don't get what the LNs mostly represent, it feels like they are there to make things more complicated if you listen you can hear a sort of string sound
01:17:915 (77915|0) - I really don't think this LN is needed, just remove it and spread the 1/4 pattern out, it's more comfortable might do, keeping for now

[HD]

00:54:916 (54916|1) - This LN is very unnecessary, consider removing it | This is due to the sound not even significant enough to be mapped ( the players might not even hear it also ) i just added it though ;w; removed
00:55:749 (55749|3,55916|2,56082|0,56249|1,56416|2) - Change to soft-hitwhistle, it's more appropriate
01:26:248 (86248|0,86581|3,87081|2,87415|1,87581|0) - Same here done both :3

Probably don't know what's soft-hitwhistle or soft-hitnormal or whatever
will explain

http://puu.sh/cE1Pq/3cd0c23edf.jpg This is the sample set/addition thing ( it's hard to explain what's the difference but just focus on sampleset )

soft-hitnormal = Soft Sampleset + No hitsounds
drum-hitwhistle = Drum Sampleset + Whistle hitsound

Looks pretty darn good thanks!!

[NM]

Might want to normalize the volume of hitsounds here, some feel too damn loud, you can play with the volumes of notes by opening the "thing" ( idk what to call it )
Just hold alt and click the mapping area

00:09:249 (9249|0) - Might want to end this 1/2 earlier alright
00:21:916 (21916|0) - End this 1/2 later, it's more comfortable that way done
00:51:083 (51083|2,51083|3,51249|0,51249|1) - Should probably hammer this and this 00:52:583 (52583|2,52583|1,52749|3,52749|0) - for consistency with 00:51:583 (51583|3,51583|0,51749|0,51749|3,52083|1,52083|2,52249|1,52249|2) - umm alright!
01:26:248 (86248|2,86581|3,87081|2,87415|1,87581|0) - Same as HD changed

[EZ]
00:09:083 - Might want to add a note here for stair, it plays better imo | Listed mods are due to instruments in the music that are more significant that should be mapped
00:12:416 - ^
00:11:083 - ^
00:15:083 - ^ done all
00:17:083 (17083|2) - Move this 1/2 later eh why?
00:17:749 -
00:25:083 (25083|1) - Move this 1/2 later feels uncomfortable
00:37:749 - Why did you omit this? | You have a pattern that is 1/2 stream here, having a 1/2 stream there shouldn't hurt added
01:02:415 - you should probably map on 1/2 for the vocals here
01:05:081 - ^
01:13:081 - And here
01:15:748 - ^ done all
01:26:248 (86248|2,86581|3,87081|2,87415|1,87581|0) - Same as HD changed

Mapping vocals aren't wrong, there's no such rule
I myself prefer to map to the significant sounds due to the players hearing them clearly
thanks for mod ~ <3
Gravey-
Hi MOD here as requested in my Queue~ (~*w*)~
[4K MOD]

Remove tag:
seventh heaven (Since it's on the metadata already)
Sora's MX - OD = 8.5
Uncheck:
Song setup > Design > Widescreen support
|1|2|3|4|
EZ+
Nuthin' here XD
NM
00:45:749 (45749|1,45916|2) - Move to |3| - |4| (Better pattern)
HD
00:55:916 (55916|2) - Move to |2| (Pattern & Hand balance)
Sora's MX
00:48:249 (48249|2,48249|3,48416|2,48416|1) - Ctrl + H (Pattern)
01:19:915 Add note to |2| (Pattern)
01:21:248 Add note to |2| ^
01:27:581 (87581|0) - End it here 01:28:581 (End of pitch)

Nice map!~
Good luck!~ =w=)b
Topic Starter
Starry-

[GraveChaos] wrote:

Hi MOD here as requested in my Queue~ (~*w*)~
[4K MOD]

Remove tag:
seventh heaven (Since it's on the metadata already)
Sora's MX - OD = 8.5
Uncheck:
Song setup > Design > Widescreen support done all o: ty
|1|2|3|4|
EZ+
Nuthin' here XD
NM
00:45:749 (45749|1,45916|2) - Move to |3| - |4| (Better pattern) done:3
HD
00:55:916 (55916|2) - Move to |2| (Pattern & Hand balance) fine for now i think, coming off the ln doesn't matter that much and contributes to the overall pattern
Sora's MX
00:48:249 (48249|2,48249|3,48416|2,48416|1) - Ctrl + H (Pattern) um sure!
01:19:915 Add note to |2| (Pattern)
01:21:248 Add note to |2| ^ done both, but may completely redo this section.
01:27:581 (87581|0) - End it here 01:28:581 (End of pitch) ok

Nice map!~
Good luck!~ =w=)b
thanks for the mod~ :3
Ayachi-
Hello~ request from queue
1 2 3 4
[EZ+]
00:21:416 - LN till 00:22:083 - and add a note because of 00:20:083 (20083|0) -
00:21:916 (21916|1) - delete
00:29:416 (29416|2,30749|0,32083|3,33416|1,34749|3,36083|0) - not LN please
00:56:582 (56582|0) - normal note

[NM]
00:26:583 (26583|1) - no sound
00:27:249 (27249|1) - remove
00:46:916 (46916|0) - remove

[HD]
00:11:583 (11583|0,11749|1) - normal note
00:18:249 (18249|1) - remove
00:26:583 (26583|2) - ^
01:15:081 - add
01:15:248 - remove 1

[MX]
00:32:416 - why 3 notes
00:33:749 - ^
something like ^ won't point out, it is not that strong.
01:18:248 - from here there are different sounds with same amount of notes like 01:19:581 - and 01:19:915 - , suggest to change it

good luck
Topic Starter
Starry-

[ S a k u r a ] wrote:

Hello~ request from queue
1 2 3 4
[EZ+]
00:21:416 - LN till 00:22:083 - and add a note because of 00:20:083 (20083|0) - didn't turn into ln but added note anyways
00:21:916 (21916|1) - delete kept previous, so no
00:29:416 (29416|2,30749|0,32083|3,33416|1,34749|3,36083|0) - not LN please why not?
00:56:582 (56582|0) - normal note done

[NM]
00:26:583 (26583|1) - no sound there is
00:27:249 (27249|1) - remove done and rearranged
00:46:916 (46916|0) - remove fits with the one before

[HD]
00:11:583 (11583|0,11749|1) - normal note done
00:18:249 (18249|1) - remove mapped to bass
00:26:583 (26583|2) - ^ there is sound there
01:15:081 - add ok
01:15:248 - remove 1 done

[MX]
00:32:416 - why 3 notes
00:33:749 - ^
something like ^ won't point out, it is not that strong.
01:18:248 - from here there are different sounds with same amount of notes like 01:19:581 - and 01:19:915 - , suggest to change it i will probably change this section to exclude the ln

good luck thank you :3
Kruzon
hi, from my queue

first of all, as far as i can see, most of the difficulties are well-made and fine tuned already, thus there are no errors detected. My modding will be mainly about pattern, also you may change them accordingly, depend on your preferences.


4K Easy+ (Key Column Format: 1l2l3l4)
SPOILER
Consider,
Moving 00:29:416 (29416|2) - to 2, and get rid of these obstacles 00:29:416 (29416|1) - and 00:30:416 (30416|1) - .
Add note on 00:30:083 (30083|3) - to 4, and 00:30:416 (30416|0) - to 1 as well
Move this long note 00:30:749 (30749|0) - to 4, and move 00:31:083 (31083|3) - to 1
Add note on 00:31:416 (31416|1) - to 1, add note on 00:31:749 (31749|2) - to 3
Move 00:32:083 (32083|3) - to 1,
Move 00:32:416 (32416|1) - to 4,
Add note on 00:32:749 (32749|2) - to 3,
Move 00:33:083 (33083|2) - to 4,
Delete this long note 00:33:416 (33416|1) -
Add note on 00:33:416 (33416|2) - to 3
Move 00:33:749 (33749|3) - to 2
Perhaps a long note is suitable here, 00:34:083 (34083|2) - on 3, until 00:34:749 ,
Delete 00:34:416 (34416|0) -
Add note on 00:35:416 (35416|0) - to 1
00:35:749 (35749|1) - to 3
Add note on 00:36:749 (36749|1) - to 2
00:37:083 (37083|1) - to 4
Change this to long note instead? 00:38:416 (38416|3) - end on 00:39:750
00:39:416 (39416|1) - to 3
00:39:749 (39749|2) - to 1
00:40:083 (40083|3,40083|0) - to 2l3
00:42:749 (42749|0) - to 4
00:42:916 (42916|3) - to 1
00:43:916 (43916|2) - to 2
00:44:249 (44249|1) - to 1
01:27:581 (87581|1) - to 1

4K Normal
SPOILER
00:10:749 (10749|2) - to 1
00:21:749 (21749|1) - to 4
00:23:083 (23083|1) - to 4
00:31:583 (31583|3) - to 3, delete 00:31:583 (31583|2) -
00:32:083 (32083|1) - to 4
00:32:916 (32916|1) - to 3
00:33:583 (33583|2) - to 2
00:53:416 (53416|3) - add note to 4
00:53:749 (53749|3,53749|1) - move these long notes to 1l3 and move 00:55:749 (55749|2) - to 4
00:55:916 (55916|3) - to 3
00:56:082 (56082|2) - to 4
01:05:748 (65748|3,65748|2) - to 2l3
01:06:081 (66081|2,66081|1) - to 3l4
01:17:915 (77915|2) - Well, how about a very long note here? It ends at 01:24:269 (This is optional) If you were to add it, make sure to move 01:20:581 (80581|2) - to 1, 01:21:581 (81581|2) - to 1, 01:22:248 (82248|0) - to 4,01:23:081 (83081|2) - to 1, 01:24:248 (84248|2) - delete, and add note on 01:24:248 (84248|0) - to 1
01:27:581 (87581|0) - make this a long note instead, ending on 01:28:581
..

moving along,

4K Hard
SPOILER
Add note on 00:09:583 (9583|2) - to 3
Add note on 00:12:249 (12249|0) - to 1
Add note on 00:19:083 (19083|1) - to 2
00:20:916 (20916|0) - delete
00:21:083 (21083|1) - to 1
00:40:916 (40916|2) - make this a long note, ending on 00:41:249
Add note on 00:41:416 (41416|2) - to 3
Delete 00:42:249 (42249|3) - and add long note on 00:42:249 (42249|3) - to 2, ending on 00:42:583
This long note 00:42:749 (42749|0) - may look nice on 3, 00:42:916 (42916|1) - to 1, 00:43:416 (43416|1) - to 4, 00:43:416 (43416|3) - delete, and add
note on 00:43:083 (43083|3) - to 4
------------
- I will leave 4k insane unmod due to my lack of experience in modding, i am sorry about that..
- It appears that there are slightly missing notes, but don't get me wrong; it does not mean you have to plot every section with swarm of notes. But what can I say is listen deeply through the rhythm and plot through meaningful notes along the road. There are places you can left empty but it has to be suitable.
- Finally, this is merely my suggestion, it's in your hands to change any notes which seem fitting :)
- Overall, it's a very good try, and i wish you good luck :)
Topic Starter
Starry-

Kruzon wrote:

hi, from my queue

first of all, as far as i can see, most of the difficulties are well-made and fine tuned already, thus there are no errors detected. My modding will be mainly about pattern, also you may change them accordingly, depend on your preferences.


4K Easy+ (Key Column Format: 1l2l3l4)
SPOILER
Consider,
Moving 00:29:416 (29416|2) - to 2, and get rid of these obstacles 00:29:416 (29416|1) - and 00:30:416 (30416|1) - .
Add note on 00:30:083 (30083|3) - to 4, and 00:30:416 (30416|0) - to 1 as well
Move this long note 00:30:749 (30749|0) - to 4, and move 00:31:083 (31083|3) - to 1
Add note on 00:31:416 (31416|1) - to 1, add note on 00:31:749 (31749|2) - to 3
Move 00:32:083 (32083|3) - to 1,
Move 00:32:416 (32416|1) - to 4,
Add note on 00:32:749 (32749|2) - to 3,
Move 00:33:083 (33083|2) - to 4,
Delete this long note 00:33:416 (33416|1) -
Add note on 00:33:416 (33416|2) - to 3
Move 00:33:749 (33749|3) - to 2
Perhaps a long note is suitable here, 00:34:083 (34083|2) - on 3, until 00:34:749 ,
Delete 00:34:416 (34416|0) -
Add note on 00:35:416 (35416|0) - to 1
00:35:749 (35749|1) - to 3
Add note on 00:36:749 (36749|1) - to 2
00:37:083 (37083|1) - to 4 This whole section I prefer to keep. Adding in notes every 1/1 with sliders will make it too hard for an EZ
Change this to long note instead? 00:38:416 (38416|3) - end on 00:39:750 ok we'll see how this goes
00:39:416 (39416|1) - to 3 ok
00:39:749 (39749|2) - to 1
00:40:083 (40083|3,40083|0) - to 2l3 rearranged whole section
00:42:749 (42749|0) - to 4
00:42:916 (42916|3) - to 1
00:43:916 (43916|2) - to 2
00:44:249 (44249|1) - to 1 rearranged whole section
01:27:581 (87581|1) - to 1 i dont really want this jump

4K Normal
SPOILER
00:10:749 (10749|2) - to 1 doesn't flow well
00:21:749 (21749|1) - to 4
00:23:083 (23083|1) - to 4 done both
00:31:583 (31583|3) - to 3, delete 00:31:583 (31583|2) -
00:32:083 (32083|1) - to 4
00:32:916 (32916|1) - to 3
00:33:583 (33583|2) - to 2 pref to keep all
00:53:416 (53416|3) - add note to 4
00:53:749 (53749|3,53749|1) - move these long notes to 1l3 and move 00:55:749 (55749|2) - to 4 done
00:55:916 (55916|3) - to 3 done
00:56:082 (56082|2) - to 4 keeping for smoother pattern
01:05:748 (65748|3,65748|2) - to 2l3
01:06:081 (66081|2,66081|1) - to 3l4 done both
01:17:915 (77915|2) - Well, how about a very long note here? It ends at 01:24:269 (This is optional) If you were to add it, make sure to move 01:20:581 (80581|2) - to 1, 01:21:581 (81581|2) - to 1, 01:22:248 (82248|0) - to 4,01:23:081 (83081|2) - to 1, 01:24:248 (84248|2) - delete, and add note on 01:24:248 (84248|0) - to 1 i would but i wouldn't want to be limited to using pr in only 3 columns, so not adding ln for now
01:27:581 (87581|0) - make this a long note instead, ending on 01:28:581 mmsure
..

moving along,

4K Hard
SPOILER
Add note on 00:09:583 (9583|2) - to 3 no noise
Add note on 00:12:249 (12249|0) - to 1 ^
Add note on 00:19:083 (19083|1) - to 2 noise not big enough
00:20:916 (20916|0) - delete this flows from the bass, so keeping
00:21:083 (21083|1) - to 1 ^ so no need
00:40:916 (40916|2) - make this a long note, ending on 00:41:249 doesn't look/play well at all
Add note on 00:41:416 (41416|2) - to 3 sure
Delete 00:42:249 (42249|3) - and add long note on 00:42:249 (42249|3) - to 2, ending on 00:42:583 put the LN on 4 instead for pr/flow
This long note 00:42:749 (42749|0) - may look nice on 3, 00:42:916 (42916|1) - to 1, 00:43:416 (43416|1) - to 4, 00:43:416 (43416|3) - delete, and add
note on 00:43:083 (43083|3) - to 4
already kept LN to be on 4 from before, so now it wouldn't flow well
------------
- I will leave 4k insane unmod due to my lack of experience in modding, i am sorry about that..
- It appears that there are slightly missing notes, but don't get me wrong; it does not mean you have to plot every section with swarm of notes. But what can I say is listen deeply through the rhythm and plot through meaningful notes along the road. There are places you can left empty but it has to be suitable.
- Finally, this is merely my suggestion, it's in your hands to change any notes which seem fitting :)
- Overall, it's a very good try, and i wish you good luck :)
hi thanks a lot for the mod~ ! <3
REDYUMiKA
Hello, I came here to mod by request. (Column:1,2,3,4)
---> Type:GM, Language:


[General]
-Passed-

[EZ+]
Did you set some objects to the vocal line since the point of 00:40:083 - ?
If so, 00:41:916 (41916|2) - is really weird point. I would think it has an uncomfortable something.
I was able to clearly hear the word of [kakae...(抱え...)] in the phrase, while pushing this LN.
Then I suggest you add notes to 00:42:083 - for 4, and 00:42:249 - for 1 in the first.

But you may think 00:41:916 (41916|2,41916|1,42083|3,42249|0) - are a bit difficult as the EZ+?
If thinking that matter, you might want to change the start point of this LN to 00:42:249 - ,
however please remember the pronunciation that are most emphasized is the first of "ka".

01:07:248 - to 01:09:581 - it is a humdrum pattern, isn't it?
01:07:915 (67915|3,68248|1) - remove them, and arrange objects like (e.g.1)
01:08:081 (68081|1,68248|2,68415|3) - express the voice's pitch, moreover
01:09:081 (69081|0,69581|0) - are associated the sound with the continuous drums.

01:14:248 (74248|3,74581|2,74915|1,75248|0) - feel like a monotonous, suggest rearrange objects like (e.g.2)
01:13:915 (73915|2,74415|2) - are also, associated with the drumbass,
flavor them with 01:13:581 (73581|0,74248|0,74915|0) - as a preliminary drum step additionally.

[NM]
00:33:916 (33916|3,33916|0) - I really feel that something is missed, the cause is maybe
00:34:583 (34583|1,34749|2) - have no relevance for any other objects.
00:33:916 (33916|3,33916|0) - the first recommend you try to move both LNs for 00:34:083 -
and fix the ends point to 00:34:749 - , the next add a note to 00:33:916 - for column 2

00:57:748 - weaken a push compare with the other tones, especially 00:58:582 - and 00:58:915 -
but I didn't mention about 00:56:915 -, it has already relevance to 00:56:582 -
00:57:748 - add a note to 3, you might be able to find a different feeling for tones.

01:16:581 - Didn't you set a note to this point intentionally? I feel notes lacking here.

[HD]
Almost perfect. but I wonder why the difficulty is really appropriate as HD?
You might want to rename this one to HD+, please consider them.

[MX]
00:09:749 (9749|2) - /00:12:416 (12416|2) - / 00:15:083 (15083|2) - remove them.
It might be very instinctive suggestion, good to kinda express pure silence by deleting end notes.

00:26:749 - to 00:27:416 -
The common things through the all diffs, really doubtful about the way of setting to irregular snares,
I didn't mention it about the others, because difficulty problem for EZ+, NM, and prior to simple handling.
The one solution is to use the other beat snap interval, but be a complicated anyway.
So, I'm gonna indicate the next way to move both LNs for piano line like (e.g.3), how is it?

00:32:833 - add a note to 1 to express the slipping electro sound,
00:32:749 (32749|0) - and move to 3, to take a pitch relevance since 00:32:083 -

00:40:833 - the same reason as the above, add a note to 3
but the case that you thought the voice as the main point, shall not apply them.

00:53:583 (53583|1,53583|0) - you might want to remove them, feel a bit uncomfortable.

00:56:582 - nice Kiai Time.

Good Luck, Love your charts. :oops:
Lunatic Raccoon
Hi Starry here's my mod *and really sorry for delaying*
Modding NM -> MX
General
  1. Remove "2020" in the tags, because it's already mentioned in "Source". Maybe you should also remove "Seventh"
  2. Try adding tags like the Romaji version of the source
  3. Creative pattern <3
NM
  1. 00:10:749 (10749|2) - LN?
  2. 00:23:749 (23749|3) - The LN should start at 00:24:083
  3. 00:53:416 (53416|3) - Unsnap then add one at 00:53:583
  4. 01:04:415 - Maybe single is better
  5. 01:05:081 - If you agree with the above then double this
  6. 01:06:081 - Then, single this
  7. 01:06:748 - Finally, add a note at this
  8. 01:12:415 to 01:16:415 - Quite similar to the above, fix this too if you fix the one the above
  9. 01:19:081 and 01:23:081 - You should change them to single
  10. 01:24:581 (84581|0) - Unsnap
  11. 01:26:581 (86581|2) - Ends at 01:26:915
HD
  1. 00:27:749 - Single?
  2. 00:37:749 - Single and 00:37:916 - Double
  3. 00:38:083 - Single
  4. 00:32:249 and 00:30:249 - These should be normal too. Make doubles on sounds which have both vocal and "that electronic sound" or a light kick
  5. Follow the above tips please, because i won't be modding on singles/doubles next
  6. 00:53:583 - Should add
  7. 01:26:248 to 01:27:581 - Really think you should swap this pattern with one in NM (This should be in NM and the one in NM should be in here)
Sora's MX
  1. Sora's kind of inactive these days, so tell me if you or he/she's gonna apply the mod. If it's Sora, i'll go IRC with him/her. If it's you, i'll just finish the mod :3
Good luck!
Topic Starter
Starry-

REDYUMiKA wrote:

Hello, I came here to mod by request. (Column:1,2,3,4)
---> Type:GM, Language:


[General]
-Passed-

[EZ+]
Did you set some objects to the vocal line since the point of 00:40:083 - ?
If so, 00:41:916 (41916|2) - is really weird point. I would think it has an uncomfortable something.
I was able to clearly hear the word of [kakae...(抱え...)] in the phrase, while pushing this LN.
Then I suggest you add notes to 00:42:083 - for 4, and 00:42:249 - for 1 in the first.

But you may think 00:41:916 (41916|2,41916|1,42083|3,42249|0) - are a bit difficult as the EZ+?
If thinking that matter, you might want to change the start point of this LN to 00:42:249 - ,
however please remember the pronunciation that are most emphasized is the first of "ka". Alright! Started LN at 00:42:249 - and emphasised the two 1/2s before that.

01:07:248 - to 01:09:581 - it is a humdrum pattern, isn't it?
01:07:915 (67915|3,68248|1) - remove them, and arrange objects like (e.g.1)
01:08:081 (68081|1,68248|2,68415|3) - express the voice's pitch, moreover
01:09:081 (69081|0,69581|0) - are associated the sound with the continuous drums. done all :3 may look confusing for an EZ+ though, we'll see

01:14:248 (74248|3,74581|2,74915|1,75248|0) - feel like a monotonous, suggest rearrange objects like (e.g.2)
01:13:915 (73915|2,74415|2) - are also, associated with the drumbass,
flavor them with 01:13:581 (73581|0,74248|0,74915|0) - as a preliminary drum step additionally. done all of this, but changed 01:14:248 (74248|1) - to column 2 since i think there are too many notes at 1

[NM]
00:33:916 (33916|3,33916|0) - I really feel that something is missed, the cause is maybe
00:34:583 (34583|1,34749|2) - have no relevance for any other objects.
00:33:916 (33916|3,33916|0) - the first recommend you try to move both LNs for 00:34:083 -
and fix the ends point to 00:34:749 - , the next add a note to 00:33:916 - for column 2 illl try this for now, but i feel a bit off about the two LNs being at 34:083

00:57:748 - weaken a push compare with the other tones, especially 00:58:582 - and 00:58:915 -
but I didn't mention about 00:56:915 -, it has already relevance to 00:56:582 -
00:57:748 - add a note to 3, you might be able to find a different feeling for tones. added

01:16:581 - Didn't you set a note to this point intentionally? I feel notes lacking here. a small break for the only 1/4s in the map, and there is no other sounds really to suggest a note :3

[HD]
Almost perfect. but I wonder why the difficulty is really appropriate as HD?
You might want to rename this one to HD+, please consider them.hmm maybe, it was HD+ before but I was told to change it to HD

[MX]
00:09:749 (9749|2) - /00:12:416 (12416|2) - / 00:15:083 (15083|2) - remove them.
It might be very instinctive suggestion, good to kinda express pure silence by deleting end notes. hmm i think i will keep for now, the notes signify the small electro sound

00:26:749 - to 00:27:416 -
The common things through the all diffs, really doubtful about the way of setting to irregular snares,
I didn't mention it about the others, because difficulty problem for EZ+, NM, and prior to simple handling.
The one solution is to use the other beat snap interval, but be a complicated anyway.
So, I'm gonna indicate the next way to move both LNs for piano line like (e.g.3), how is it? a lot more playable, added!

00:32:833 - add a note to 1 to express the slipping electro sound,
00:32:749 (32749|0) - and move to 3, to take a pitch relevance since 00:32:083 - done!

00:40:833 - the same reason as the above, add a note to 3 done~
but the case that you thought the voice as the main point, shall not apply them.

00:53:583 (53583|1,53583|0) - you might want to remove them, feel a bit uncomfortable. done and rearranged others

00:56:582 - nice Kiai Time. done~

Good Luck, Love your charts. :oops:

thank you so much, nice mod :3
Topic Starter
Starry-

Lunatic Raccoon wrote:

Hi Starry here's my mod *and really sorry for delaying* hihi its fine xD
Modding NM -> MX
General
  1. Remove "2020" in the tags, because it's already mentioned in "Source". Maybe you should also remove "Seventh" maybe, i just included tags that are in already ranked versions of this song
  2. Try adding tags like the Romaji version of the source they are already :P
  3. Creative pattern <3
NM
  1. 00:10:749 (10749|2) - LN? 00:10:416 (10416|3) - if anything, LN here
  2. 00:23:749 (23749|3) - The LN should start at 00:24:083 maybe, i followed vocals with this though
  3. 00:53:416 (53416|3) - Unsnap then add one at 00:53:583 no noise ;w;
  4. 01:04:415 - Maybe single is better
  5. 01:05:081 - If you agree with the above then double this
  6. 01:06:081 - Then, single this
  7. 01:06:748 - Finally, add a note at this rearranged whole section,. adding doubles appropriately
  8. 01:12:415 to 01:16:415 - Quite similar to the above, fix this too if you fix the one the above ok~
  9. 01:19:081 and 01:23:081 - You should change them to single keeping for now, simply for playability
  10. 01:24:581 (84581|0) - Unsnap fixed
  11. 01:26:581 (86581|2) - Ends at 01:26:915 ok
HD
  1. 00:27:749 - Single? done
  2. 00:37:749 - Single and 00:37:916 - Double done
  3. 00:38:083 - Single may remove, plays nicer as double though
  4. 00:32:249 and 00:30:249 - These should be normal too. Make doubles on sounds which have both vocal and "that electronic sound" or a light kick
  5. Follow the above tips please, because i won't be modding on singles/doubles next ok
  6. 00:53:583 - Should add again no real sound to add to
  7. 01:26:248 to 01:27:581 - Really think you should swap this pattern with one in NM (This should be in NM and the one in NM should be in here) swapped~
Sora's MX
  1. Sora's kind of inactive these days, so tell me if you or he/she's gonna apply the mod. If it's Sora, i'll go IRC with him/her. If it's you, i'll just finish the mod :3 i basically am applying the mods for the map now, but its fine :3
Good luck!
thanks <3
REDYUMiKA

Starry- wrote:

Almost perfect. but I wonder why the difficulty is really appropriate as HD?
You might want to rename this one to HD+, please consider them.
 :hmm maybe, it was HD+ before but I was told to change it to HD
Oops, I forgot to see the past article about that thing.

Ok I understand the way of your decision, however even now,
I really feel HD is difficult from the middle to final stage especially the objects which are combined with some LNs,
; whenever you think that matter, there is the choice to raise each of the diff's difficulty as HD is MX, MX is SC.
Topic Starter
Starry-

REDYUMiKA wrote:

Ok I understand the way of your decision, however even now,
I really feel HD is difficult from the middle to final stage especially the objects which are combined with some LNs,
; whenever you think that matter, there is the choice to raise each of the diff's difficulty as HD is MX, MX is SC.
Hmm maybe. But if anything I prefer to rename back to HD+. We will see other people's / BAT responses to this. :3
Zan-
from my queue

coloumn: | 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 |

click
[EZ+]
00:08:083 (8083|3) - as you are following vocal make this Hold until 00:08:749 -
01:01:081 (61081|1) - change to Hold until 01:01:415 -
01:11:748 (71748|1) - ^ until 01:12:081 -
01:18:248 (78248|1) - it's too noisy imo with normal-whistle in these notes, maybe try to change to soft-whistle?

[NM]
00:26:083 - add note to 1, missing note
01:26:248 (86248|3) - same like EZ+ about changing hitsound

[HD]
00:35:916 (35916|3) - remove, not necessary since here has same sound but lower pitch than 00:35:583 -
00:37:583 (37583|1,37749|2) - move to right by 1 coloumn (3,4)
00:40:083 - add note, for cymbal

i can say, fun LN from 01:07:248 - :)

[Sora's MX]
inb4 rip Sora lol

shied. น่ากลัว

gl~
juankristal
Hi, from Team Menem Modding Queue :P

Sora's MX
00:25:583 (25583|3,25583|2,25666|1,25749|0,25749|2,25916|1,25916|0,26083|1,26083|3,26249|2,26416|3) - I think Ctrl + H here is better to follow the pitch of the notes

00:26:583 (26583|3) - I think here is something strange because i hear the note and then i hear the sound of the music. Dont know how to fix it but i noticed it

00:28:749 (28749|0,28833|1,28916|2,28999|1,29083|2,29166|3,29249|2,29333|1,29416|3,29416|0,29416|2) - Ctrl + H here too? Same thing than the first one

00:35:416 (35416|2) - Here you can add something like the other times, like a mini 3 notes stream but it is fine.

00:30:916 (30916|3) - Maybe add a note?
00:31:749 (31749|2) - Same thing here
00:36:249 (36249|2) - ^
00:37:082 (37082|1) - ^ And in all the "click" sounds xD. Some times you use it and sometime you not, i think i see the pattern that you are trying but i just mention this only if you want to change it.


00:37:666 (37666|2) - There is no sound there, you can change it if you want


HD
00:24:749 (24749|3,24749|0,24916|1,25083|3) - I think that you are following the bass sound (that bsss lol). So you have to repossition it to 00:24:916 (24916|0,24916|3,25083|1,25250|3) -

With that, you can delete the Ln in 00:25:249 (25249|2) - or think about how to fix it.

00:44:583 (44583|3,44583|0,44666|1,44749|2,44749|3) - Ctrl + H this for pitch and move 00:44:583 (44583|3) - to slot 2.

I have problems modding this because sometimes i got problems thinking if you are following the vocals or the instruments.


NM
00:25:583 (25583|0,25749|1,25916|2) - Ctrl + H and move to enter in the space.
00:26:083 (26083|1) - Add a note in slot 1
00:26:249 (26249|2) - Move to slot 0

This is for pitch. You can also extend the 00:24:083 (24083|3) - LN to the last note of that pattern

If you are following vocals, you have to add a note 00:57:582 (57582|2) - here

If you keep 01:17:415 (77415|0,77498|1,77581|2,77665|3) - stream i think you have to add notes in 01:17:331 (77331|1,77831|1) -

EZ+
I only can say: If you are following the vocals in 01:02:581 (62581|0) - you are starting to put notes i slot ahead. For example this one: 01:05:581 (65581|3) - This should be in 01:05:415 (65415|3) - i think.

I dont get what instrument of vocal are you following (same thing that the HD one). I cant help with this too much either

Good luck with the map and sorry for the delay of the mod but i was really sick (and i am still not at my best xD) in both of my ears(and i think it was shorter because of that too). If this still not help you i can try it again other day.

Cya !
Topic Starter
Starry-

Zan - wrote:

from my queue

coloumn: | 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 |

click
[EZ+]
00:08:083 (8083|3) - as you are following vocal make this Hold until 00:08:749 - done
01:01:081 (61081|1) - change to Hold until 01:01:415 - noise ends at the red tick before this, so i dont think an LN is appropriate at all
01:11:748 (71748|1) - ^ until 01:12:081 -
01:18:248 (78248|1) - it's too noisy imo with normal-whistle in these notes, maybe try to change to soft-whistle? done

[NM]
00:26:083 - add note to 1, missing note rearranged
01:26:248 (86248|3) - same like EZ+ about changing hitsound done

[HD]
00:35:916 (35916|3) - remove, not necessary since here has same sound but lower pitch than 00:35:583 -
00:37:583 (37583|1,37749|2) - move to right by 1 coloumn (3,4) done both
00:40:083 - add note, for cymbal ok

i can say, fun LN from 01:07:248 - :) thanks :3

[Sora's MX]
inb4 rip Sora lol

shied. น่ากลัว

gl~
thanks <3
Topic Starter
Starry-

juankristal wrote:

Hi, from Team Menem Modding Queue :P

Sora's MX
00:25:583 (25583|3,25583|2,25666|1,25749|0,25749|2,25916|1,25916|0,26083|1,26083|3,26249|2,26416|3) - I think Ctrl + H here is better to follow the pitch of the notes done o;

00:26:583 (26583|3) - I think here is something strange because i hear the note and then i hear the sound of the music. Dont know how to fix it but i noticed it hmm its a delayed drum. not sure either but each beatsnap divisor cant cover it correctly. definitely not a timing issue. will keep as it is for playability, nice catch though!

00:28:749 (28749|0,28833|1,28916|2,28999|1,29083|2,29166|3,29249|2,29333|1,29416|3,29416|0,29416|2) - Ctrl + H here too? Same thing than the first one done ;o

00:35:416 (35416|2) - Here you can add something like the other times, like a mini 3 notes stream but it is fine. ooh yeah sure!

00:30:916 (30916|3) - Maybe add a note?
00:31:749 (31749|2) - Same thing here
00:36:249 (36249|2) - ^
00:37:082 (37082|1) - ^ And in all the "click" sounds xD. Some times you use it and sometime you not, i think i see the pattern that you are trying but i just mention this only if you want to change it. filled :3


00:37:666 (37666|2) - There is no sound there, you can change it if you want fixed, nice catches!


HD
00:24:749 (24749|3,24749|0,24916|1,25083|3) - I think that you are following the bass sound (that bsss lol). So you have to repossition it to 00:24:916 (24916|0,24916|3,25083|1,25250|3) - rearranged~

With that, you can delete the Ln in 00:25:249 (25249|2) - or think about how to fix it.

00:44:583 (44583|3,44583|0,44666|1,44749|2,44749|3) - Ctrl + H this for pitch and move 00:44:583 (44583|3) - to slot 2. leaving for now, plays a lot better as it is

I have problems modding this because sometimes i got problems thinking if you are following the vocals or the instruments.


NM
00:25:583 (25583|0,25749|1,25916|2) - Ctrl + H and move to enter in the space.
00:26:083 (26083|1) - Add a note in slot 1
00:26:249 (26249|2) - Move to slot 0 done all

This is for pitch. You can also extend the 00:24:083 (24083|3) - LN to the last note of that pattern done, we'll see, since its meant to end red tick before, but plays better here.

If you are following vocals, you have to add a note 00:57:582 (57582|2) - here no vocal here

If you keep 01:17:415 (77415|0,77498|1,77581|2,77665|3) - stream i think you have to add notes in 01:17:331 (77331|1,77831|1) - ok, but second note i left out because the 1/4 isn't emphasised enough.

EZ+
I only can say: If you are following the vocals in 01:02:581 (62581|0) - you are starting to put notes i slot ahead. For example this one: 01:05:581 (65581|3) - This should be in 01:05:415 (65415|3) - i think. vocals are too complex here for an EZ, so i have a few notes on red ticks but main beat on all white ticks. (playability)

I dont get what instrument of vocal are you following (same thing that the HD one). I cant help with this too much either

Good luck with the map and sorry for the delay of the mod but i was really sick (and i am still not at my best xD) in both of my ears(and i think it was shorter because of that too). If this still not help you i can try it again other day. hope you make a full recovery soon! and thanks for the mod, it was great~ <3

Cya !
[ C r a c k ]
Hi!
Here for mod request in 炒飯 Chao Fan

Columns: |1|2|3|4|

EZ+

SPOILER
  1. 00:08:916 (8916|0,9083|1,9249|2) - ctrl + g ?
  2. 01:07:248 - add a note here (like here 00:56:582 - )
  3. 01:17:915 (77915|0) - LN end at 01:23:581 -

NM

SPOILER
  1. 00:21:916 (21916|0) - LN end at 00:22:916 -
  2. 00:31:583 (31583|3) - LN end at 00:31:916 -
  3. 00:34:083 - Here if you are following vocal, LNs end at 00:34:416 -
  4. 00:37:416 (37416|3) - LN end at 00:37:749 - ? This sound from piano is different to 00:37:916 (37916|0) -
  5. 01:17:248 (77248|2,77331|1,77415|0,77498|1,77581|2,77665|3,77748|0) - ctrl + g & 01:17:915 (77915|2) - to 1 col.

HD

SPOILER
  1. Really good, but LN at 01:27:581 (87581|0) - doesn't end to 01:30:915 - ?

Sora's MX

SPOILER
  1. 00:40:083 (40083|2) - remove ? (similar to 00:40:083 (40083|2) - )
  2. 00:51:249 - remove one note^
  3. 00:52:249 - , 00:52:749 - remove one note^
  4. 00:53:749 (53749|2,53749|1,54916|3,54916|0) - LNs end to 00:55:666 - ?
  5. 01:07:915 (67915|1) - incorrect position! I have no idea if is just a my problem o.o (screen)
  6. from here 01:08:414 (68414|0,68414|2) - to 01:17:415 - there are a lot of notes in incorrect position.
  7. 01:27:581 (87581|0) - LN end at 01:30:915 -
Really pretty song ^^
Good luck! :)
Topic Starter
Starry-

[ C r a c k ] wrote:

Hi!
Here for mod request in 炒飯 Chao Fan

Columns: |1|2|3|4|

EZ+

SPOILER
  1. 00:08:916 (8916|0,9083|1,9249|2) - ctrl + g ? sure~
  2. 01:07:248 - add a note here (like here 00:56:582 - ) hmm ok
  3. 01:17:915 (77915|0) - LN end at 01:23:581 - alright

NM

SPOILER
  1. 00:21:916 (21916|0) - LN end at 00:22:916 - ok
  2. 00:31:583 (31583|3) - LN end at 00:31:916 - sure
  3. 00:34:083 - Here if you are following vocal, LNs end at 00:34:416 - keeping for playability, it looks bland otherwise
  4. 00:37:416 (37416|3) - LN end at 00:37:749 - ? This sound from piano is different to 00:37:916 (37916|0) - its more to emphasise the higher pitches in the vocals. keeping.
  5. 01:17:248 (77248|2,77331|1,77415|0,77498|1,77581|2,77665|3,77748|0) - ctrl + g & 01:17:915 (77915|2) - to 1 col. plays quite hard, keeping.

HD

SPOILER
  1. Really good, but LN at 01:27:581 (87581|0) - doesn't end to 01:30:915 - ? thanks! i always had a thing against long sliders near the end of notes, and it ends on a big white tick so i think its fine.

Sora's MX

SPOILER
  1. 00:40:083 (40083|2) - remove ? (similar to 00:40:083 (40083|2) - ) done
  2. 00:51:249 - remove one note^
  3. 00:52:249 - , 00:52:749 - remove one note^ done both~
  4. 00:53:749 (53749|2,53749|1,54916|3,54916|0) - LNs end to 00:55:666 - ? feeling a bit weird about this, but done
  5. 01:07:915 (67915|1) - incorrect position! I have no idea if is just a my problem o.o (screen)
  6. from here 01:08:414 (68414|0,68414|2) - to 01:17:415 - there are a lot of notes in incorrect position. this is very weird o.o
  7. 01:27:581 (87581|0) - LN end at 01:30:915 - same as hd ;w;
Really pretty song ^^
Good luck! :)
thanks~ <3
Pow-
hello~
here's m4m from your mod :3
feel free to ignore my mod if u didn't like it :D

|1|2|3|4|

MOD


NM
00:35:249 (35249|3,35249|2) - move to 1&3
00:35:583 (35583|2,35583|0) - move to 3&4
00:41:583 (41583|2) - move to 1
01:12:081 (72081|1) - move to 1
01:12:415 (72415|0) - move to 2
01:12:581 (72581|1) - move to 1

HD
00:30:916 (30916|2) - move to 4
00:31:083 - add to 3
00:57:082 - add to 1 [?]
well everything is good for me :D

Sora's MX
00:42:416 - add LN ?? if u adding it delete 00:42:583 (42583|2,42583|1) - and change it into LN
01:13:748 - add to 2
nice pattern <3 song good luck hope it gonna ranked as fast as possible :oops:
DJPop
normal-whistle doesn't sound good for this map, please change them into soft-whistle or others.

~EZ+~
00:38:416 (38416|3) - add whistle
00:44:583 (44583|2) - ^
00:48:083 (48083|0,48416|2,48749|1,49083|3,49416|2,49749|0,50083|1,50416|3,50749|2) - use this pattern
00:53:749 (53749|1) - add hitfinish
01:26:248 (86248|3) - move to lane 3
01:26:581 (86581|0) - move to lane 4
01:27:081 (87081|3) - move to lane 2
01:27:415 (87415|2,87581|1) - move to lane 1

~NM~
00:53:749 (53749|0,53749|2) - add hitfinish on one of these
01:05:415 - add 1 more note
01:07:581 (67581|2) - add clap
01:07:915 (67915|1) - remove clap
01:09:248 (69248|1) - ^
01:09:581 (69581|2) - add clap
01:10:581 (70581|2) - remove clap
01:10:915 (70915|2) - add clap
01:11:581 (71581|0) - ^
01:16:581 - add note on lane 1
01:27:415 (87415|1) - move to lane 1

~HD~
00:28:749 (28749|0) - remove hitfinish
00:38:999 (38999|2) - remove note
00:39:833 - add note
00:51:583 (51583|0) - remove hitfinish
00:52:249 (52249|3) - add hitfinish
00:52:749 (52749|0) - ^
00:53:749 (53749|1) - ^
00:57:498 (57498|1) - remove note
00:57:832 - add note
01:09:915 (69915|2,70081|1,70081|3,70248|0,70248|2,70415|1) - use tap notes
01:12:248 (72248|3,72415|2) - ^
01:13:498 (73498|0) - remove note
01:13:831 - add note
01:16:165 (76165|1) - remove note
01:16:498 - add note
01:16:665 (76665|1) - remove note
01:17:165 (77165|2) - ^
01:25:748 (85748|1) - remove hitfinish, it was mixed with previous one and it's loud
01:27:415 (87415|1) - move to lane 1
01:27:581 (87581|0) - end at 01:29:915 ?

~Sora's MX~
• Hitsounds must be added
00:54:916 - slowing down will just confuse players
00:55:249 - ^
00:55:582 - ^
00:55:749 - if you want slow part, place x0.5 one here
00:55:582 - add kiai on red timing and remove speed changes (not a good place to use bouncing) then change note lane 2 into LN
01:25:748 - move this timing to 01:25:915 and use soft hitsounds
Muu-chan
Hello! :)
M4M here.

Note that these are only suggestions. You can decline them, if you want. ;)

4K = |0|1|2|3|

LN means Long Note.

Sorry for my bad english :(
General
* Add [ S o r a ] kun's name in the tags since he made a GD (in all diff) ^^
* BPM OK! But i don't get it why so many BPM changes :<
* AiMod OK!
EZ+
* Once again this is only suggestion^^
* I suggest to make OD and HP to 7 (since there's '+' sign too. Don't make it so EZ ^^)
* 00:08:583 - i suggest to add a note here for the piano and cut this LN 00:08:083 (8083|3) - until that point too. Beside that, the distance of this 00:08:083 (8083|3,8916|2) - (1/2 beat) i think is too short (but it's okay if you're following the vocal^^)
* 00:09:249 - i suggest to add a LN for the vocal^^ in 2 or 3 until 00:09:749 -
* 00:13:416 - ^ until 00:13:916 -
* 00:14:583 - ^ until 00:15:083 -
* 00:16:083 - ^ until 00:16:583 -
* 00:17:249 - ^ until 00:17:749 -
* 00:26:749 - ^ until 00:27:249
The rest is OK!
NM
* 00:22:083 (22083|1) - i suggest to delete this^^
* 00:24:416 - i suggest to add note (i feel something is missing here^^ beside that, following pattern in here 00:22:249 (22249|2,22416|3,22583|2))
* 00:34:083 (34083|3,34083|0) - i think both LN should stop at 00:34:416 - (following vocal^^ but it's OK!)
* 00:34:416 - add note here~
The rest is OK! ^^
HD
* 00:16:083 (16083|3) - longer this LN until 00:16:583 (since the sounds of the LN isn't over yet)
* 00:22:583 - i suggest to add LN here until 00:23:083 (i think you've to delete 00:22:583 (22583|0) - if you add a LN^^)
* 00:33:999 (33999|1) - i thin this is unnecessary, i suggest to delete it^^
* 00:40:583 - i suggest to add a LN on 3 until 00:41:249 (for the vocal^^)
* 00:41:083 (41083|3) - move to 1 (if you do ^^^^^ ) ;)
* 00:44:749 (44749|1,44749|0) - i suggest both of them change into single LN until 00:44:916 thus add whistle sound^^
LOL i love to see the pattern with the Short LN after this. Look so cute <3 but i don't think i can't play it since i'm nub :<
Sora's MX
This is great already~ i just have a suggestion here :>
* 00:10:416 - maybe add a LN here until 00:10:749 (for the vocal^^)
Yay i think that's all for me. Overall your map is amazing^^ I hope it can be bubble soon~ Well good luck~
[Emiria]
...as your request...
MX
00:11:083 (11083|2) - i'd like to extend to 00:11:416 -
00:39:833 - add a note
00:44:083 - add a note
00:46:749 - ^
00:57:082 - 1/4 start here and end at 00:57:415 -
00:59:998 - miss 1/4
01:01:248 (61248|0) - move to 01:01:081 -
01:01:831 (61831|2) - no sound
01:03:415 (63415|2) - delete
01:03:998 - miss 1/4
01:05:665 - add a note
01:08:331 - add a note..
i suggest to listen to music carefully...and check this part again..
good luck..
Topic Starter
Starry-

-[BURGERKILL]- wrote:

hello~
here's m4m from your mod :3
feel free to ignore my mod if u didn't like it :D

|1|2|3|4|

MOD


NM
00:35:249 (35249|3,35249|2) - move to 1&3
00:35:583 (35583|2,35583|0) - move to 3&4 hmm i feel like it repeats the previous pattern too much, keeping
00:41:583 (41583|2) - move to 1 ok
01:12:081 (72081|1) - move to 1
01:12:415 (72415|0) - move to 2
01:12:581 (72581|1) - move to 1i like how this whole section kinda follows PR, so keeping. plays better like this too

HD
00:30:916 (30916|2) - move to 4
00:31:083 - add to 3 this section mainly follows the highlights from vocals, and pitch accordingly, keeping same
00:57:082 - add to 1 [?] hmm maybe :3
well everything is good for me :D thank you xD

Sora's MX
00:42:416 - add LN ?? if u adding it delete 00:42:583 (42583|2,42583|1) - and change it into LN don't really follow the bass sound here so keeping
01:13:748 - add to 2 hmm ok
nice pattern <3 song good luck hope it gonna ranked as fast as possible :oops: thanks<3
2

DJPop wrote:

normal-whistle doesn't sound good for this map, please change them into soft-whistle or others. hmm alright

~EZ+~
00:38:416 (38416|3) - add whistle ok
00:44:583 (44583|2) - ^ x.x my bad lolol done
00:48:083 (48083|0,48416|2,48749|1,49083|3,49416|2,49749|0,50083|1,50416|3,50749|2) - use this pattern ok i guess it makes more sense
00:53:749 (53749|1) - add hitfinish done
01:26:248 (86248|3) - move to lane 3
01:26:581 (86581|0) - move to lane 4
01:27:081 (87081|3) - move to lane 2 done all except:
01:27:415 (87415|2,87581|1) - move to lane 1 this, since i dont like the idea of it being the only 1/2 singletap in the entire map

~NM~
00:53:749 (53749|0,53749|2) - add hitfinish on one of these
01:05:415 - add 1 more note
01:07:581 (67581|2) - add clap
01:07:915 (67915|1) - remove clap
01:09:248 (69248|1) - ^
01:09:581 (69581|2) - add clap
01:10:581 (70581|2) - remove clap
01:10:915 (70915|2) - add clap
01:11:581 (71581|0) - ^
01:16:581 - add note on lane 1
01:27:415 (87415|1) - move to lane 1 done all, im bad with hitsounds >:

~HD~
00:28:749 (28749|0) - remove hitfinish i dont have a clue why this is here lol
00:38:999 (38999|2) - remove note
00:39:833 - add note very hard to rearrange this section. done something that may suffice.
00:51:583 (51583|0) - remove hitfinish
00:52:249 (52249|3) - add hitfinish
00:52:749 (52749|0) - ^
00:53:749 (53749|1) - ^ done all
00:57:498 (57498|1) - remove note
00:57:832 - add note ok
01:09:915 (69915|2,70081|1,70081|3,70248|0,70248|2,70415|1) - use tap notes mmmm ok
01:12:248 (72248|3,72415|2) - ^
01:13:498 (73498|0) - remove note
01:13:831 - add note ok all
01:16:165 (76165|1) - remove note
01:16:498 - add note
01:16:665 (76665|1) - remove note
01:17:165 (77165|2) - ^ done all, may need rearranging
01:25:748 (85748|1) - remove hitfinish, it was mixed with previous one and it's loud
01:27:415 (87415|1) - move to lane 1 done all
01:27:581 (87581|0) - end at 01:29:915 ? so many suggestions to do this, might as well

~Sora's MX~
• Hitsounds must be added
00:54:916 - slowing down will just confuse players
00:55:249 - ^
00:55:582 - ^
00:55:749 - if you want slow part, place x0.5 one here done this, but made it more gradual instead.
00:55:582 - add kiai on red timing and remove speed changes (not a good place to use bouncing) then change note lane 2 into LN mm i think its fine how it is. readable enough.
01:25:748 - move this timing to 01:25:915 and use soft hitsounds ok thanks very helpful mod <3
Topic Starter
Starry-

Muu-chan wrote:

Hello! :)
M4M here.

Note that these are only suggestions. You can decline them, if you want. ;)

4K = |0|1|2|3|

LN means Long Note.

Sorry for my bad english :( its fine :3 not bad at all~
General
* Add [ S o r a ] kun's name in the tags since he made a GD (in all diff) ^^done
* BPM OK! But i don't get it why so many BPM changes :<
* AiMod OK!
EZ+
* Once again this is only suggestion^^
* I suggest to make OD and HP to 7 (since there's '+' sign too. Don't make it so EZ ^^) it already is :o
* 00:08:583 - i suggest to add a note here for the piano and cut this LN 00:08:083 (8083|3) - until that point too. Beside that, the distance of this 00:08:083 (8083|3,8916|2) - (1/2 beat) i think is too short (but it's okay if you're following the vocal^^)
* 00:09:249 - i suggest to add a LN for the vocal^^ in 2 or 3 until 00:09:749 - done this :3
* 00:13:416 - ^ until 00:13:916 -
* 00:14:583 - ^ until 00:15:083 -
* 00:16:083 - ^ until 00:16:583 -
* 00:17:249 - ^ until 00:17:749 -
* 00:26:749 - ^ until 00:27:249 i think its fine everywhere else ;w; the vocals aren't what i highlight anymore in these parts.
The rest is OK!
NM
* 00:22:083 (22083|1) - i suggest to delete this^^ theres a scary clunk sound, so keeping ;-;
* 00:24:416 - i suggest to add note (i feel something is missing here^^ beside that, following pattern in here 00:22:249 (22249|2,22416|3,22583|2)) added/rearranged
* 00:34:083 (34083|3,34083|0) - i think both LN should stop at 00:34:416 - (following vocal^^ but it's OK!) done
* 00:34:416 - add note here~ no need ;w;
The rest is OK! ^^
HD
* 00:16:083 (16083|3) - longer this LN until 00:16:583 (since the sounds of the LN isn't over yet) gets higher pitch, so i change ln ;w;
* 00:22:583 - i suggest to add LN here until 00:23:083 (i think you've to delete 00:22:583 (22583|0) - if you add a LN^^) i think fine without
* 00:33:999 (33999|1) - i thin this is unnecessary, i suggest to delete it^^ the hipitch piano sound
* 00:40:583 - i suggest to add a LN on 3 until 00:41:249 (for the vocal^^)
* 00:41:083 (41083|3) - move to 1 (if you do ^^^^^ ) ;) rearranged all
* 00:44:749 (44749|1,44749|0) - i suggest both of them change into single LN until 00:44:916 thus add whistle sound^^
LOL i love to see the pattern with the Short LN after this. Look so cute <3 but i don't think i can't play it since i'm nub :< thanks xD abnd soon! O:
Sora's MX
This is great already~ i just have a suggestion here :>
* 00:10:416 - maybe add a LN here until 00:10:749 (for the vocal^^) i think sora was only following the bass here, so i shall keep it
Yay i think that's all for me. Overall your map is amazing^^ I hope it can be bubble soon~ Well good luck~ thanks so much <3

victorica_db wrote:

...as your request...
MX
00:11:083 (11083|2) - i'd like to extend to 00:11:416 - ok
00:39:833 - add a note
00:44:083 - add a note
00:46:749 - ^ done all~
00:57:082 - 1/4 start here and end at 00:57:415 -
00:59:998 - miss 1/4
01:01:248 (61248|0) - move to 01:01:081 -
01:01:831 (61831|2) - no sound
01:03:415 (63415|2) - delete
01:03:998 - miss 1/4
01:05:665 - add a note
01:08:331 - add a note.. done everything
i suggest to listen to music carefully...and check this part again..
good luck.. thank you, helpful <3
Aphrodena
[Aphrodena's Modding Queue]

|0|1|2|3|


[General]
Lots of vocal mapping, but good map overall.

Um, uh... sorry for the delay? ;_;

Mod
[4K EZ]
00:16:083 (16083|3,16583|0) - Ctrl+H for PR (first little tinkle noise is lower pitched)
01:17:915 (77915|2) - Add because strong sound with cymbal

[4K NM]
Looks fine to me~

[4K HD]
00:26:083 (26083|0) - Move to |1|
00:26:249 (26249|1) - Move to |0| -> These 2 suggestions match the synth that decreases in pitch
00:29:416 (29416|1) - Add one because strong sound
00:43:083 - Not sure if you missed this or you intentionally ignored it, but there's a rim shot here
00:47:083 - ^

[4K MX]
No complaints here, probably because I can't play the map well enough to give it a good mod. (I mean, 650k reallllllly)

Good luck! (No kudosu if you didn't find my mod helpful ^^)
Topic Starter
Starry-

Aphrodena wrote:

[Aphrodena's Modding Queue]

|0|1|2|3|


[General]
Lots of vocal mapping, but good map overall.

Um, uh... sorry for the delay? ;_;

Mod
[4K EZ]
00:16:083 (16083|3,16583|0) - Ctrl+H for PR (first little tinkle noise is lower pitched) done~
01:17:915 (77915|2) - Add because strong sound with cymbal instead just moved this to 3, i dont like the idea of it being the first 3 chord in the whole map

[4K NM]
Looks fine to me~

[4K HD]
00:26:083 (26083|0) - Move to |1|
00:26:249 (26249|1) - Move to |0| -> These 2 suggestions match the synth that decreases in pitch oki done ~
00:29:416 (29416|1) - Add one because strong sound done~
00:43:083 - Not sure if you missed this or you intentionally ignored it, but there's a rim shot here
00:47:083 - ^ done both

[4K MX]
No complaints here, probably because I can't play the map well enough to give it a good mod. (I mean, 650k reallllllly)

Good luck! (No kudosu if you didn't find my mod helpful ^^)
thank you :P
Topic Starter
Starry-
Fixed a snapping error on one of the diffs~
Akasha-


sasakure.UK feat. Hatsune Miku - SeventH-HeaveN [Osu!Mania Modding]

===

From Kuo Kyoka's osu!mania Modding Queue

Mod Requested by Starry-


[Generals]
- BPM: Okay
- Offset: Okay
- AiMod: No Problem
- Tags: Okay
- BG: Better to change one, in this background have the text: Solosail (sm16151555) Use google and like: http://www.tudou.com/programs/view/bdkZi3Uaeqk/ !Not SeventH-HeaveN so suggest to change one
- Kiai: Okay

Column
| 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 |


“Here come of some suggest for your map, I always check fullmap, if I’m too tried I will come back soon, or only check that keys by the request! And remember to reply the mod when you’re accepcted it or not! And forget my kud if my suggest is useful ~ Thanks for requested me ~

[EZ+]

SPOILER
  1. Suggest 00:21:416 - to 00:24:083 - make like 00:18:749 - to 00:20:083 -
  2. 00:25:583 - change the pattern like: cause in 00:25:916 (25916|0,26249|0) - seems repeating http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2393496
  3. 00:37:416 - here, change pattern like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2393504 (The pitch not always the same so change the pattern)
  4. Here also: 00:55:749 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2393506
  5. 00:59:248 - to 01:01:081 - :| suggest: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2393510
  6. Here 01:09:915 - same, try this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2393515
  7. 01:17:915 - to 01:25:915 - the song doesnt have only voice? try to have some are beat, not following voice is better
    This diff need more works

[NM]

SPOILER
  1. 00:53:416 (53416|0) - move to 00:53:577 -
    Nice in my options but need works on the zig-zag patterns

[HD]

SPOILER
  1. Only in 00:26:583 (26583|2,26749|3,26916|2,27249|2) - have those strong beat, suggest 00:27:416 - move one
    Nice diff

[Sora's MX]

SPOILER
  1. 00:23:749 - add a note in 4, have a drum sound in here
  2. 00:26:583 - and 00:26:916 - add a note, same beat with 00:26:749 -
    Im not good much at 4K, seems good but seems too much notes too

[Comment]

Eh~ Hatsune Miku >w< This song so good ~ But patterns on EZ and NM need more works actually! Anyway, the map is good, so I wont mod too much!
Suggest to change the bg (it's unrankable because of the text) and pls go rank this map ~ :)
Good luck ~
Topic Starter
Starry-

Kuo Kyoka wrote:



sasakure.UK feat. Hatsune Miku - SeventH-HeaveN [Osu!Mania Modding]

===

From Kuo Kyoka's osu!mania Modding Queue

Mod Requested by Starry-


[Generals]
- BPM: Okay
- Offset: Okay
- AiMod: No Problem
- Tags: Okay
- BG: Better to change one, in this background have the text: Solosail (sm16151555) Use google and like: http://www.tudou.com/programs/view/bdkZi3Uaeqk/ !Not SeventH-HeaveN so suggest to change one ah yes. changed it entirely.
- Kiai: Okay

Column
| 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 |


“Here come of some suggest for your map, I always check fullmap, if I’m too tried I will come back soon, or only check that keys by the request! And remember to reply the mod when you’re accepcted it or not! And forget my kud if my suggest is useful ~ Thanks for requested me ~

[EZ+]

SPOILER
  1. Suggest 00:21:416 - to 00:24:083 - make like 00:18:749 - to 00:20:083 - its irregular because the vocal starts on a red tick. however i added notes to compensate the lack in consistency with hitsounds.
  2. 00:25:583 - change the pattern like: cause in 00:25:916 (25916|0,26249|0) - seems repeating http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2393496 no change, ii think its fine. goes with pitch and easier to play like this.
  3. 00:37:416 - here, change pattern like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2393504 (The pitch not always the same so change the pattern) ^, i can ignore minor pitch relevancies if it's a lot more playable for the player. i dont want it too hard.
  4. Here also: 00:55:749 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2393506 ^
  5. 00:59:248 - to 01:01:081 - :| suggest: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2393510 changed because in kiai
  6. Here 01:09:915 - same, try this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2393515 done
  7. 01:17:915 - to 01:25:915 - the song doesnt have only voice? try to have some are beat, not following voice is better for this part specifically the beat is a little bit more mellow. i wanted to map the highlights in the song >< again first mapset lol..
    This diff need more works

[NM]

SPOILER
  1. 00:53:416 (53416|0) - move to 00:53:577 - no real noise apart from synth, no change
    Nice in my options but need works on the zig-zag patterns

[HD]

SPOILER
  1. Only in 00:26:583 (26583|2,26749|3,26916|2,27249|2) - have those strong beat, suggest 00:27:416 - move one no change, dont feel need for it
    Nice diff

[Sora's MX]

SPOILER
  1. 00:23:749 - add a note in 4, have a drum sound in here added note in 2 instead
  2. 00:26:583 - and 00:26:916 - add a note, same beat with 00:26:749 - rearranged
    Im not good much at 4K, seems good but seems too much notes too

[Comment]

Eh~ Hatsune Miku >w< This song so good ~ But patterns on EZ and NM need more works actually! Anyway, the map is good, so I wont mod too much!
Suggest to change the bg (it's unrankable because of the text) and pls go rank this map ~ :) thank you! changed a few EZ patterns around, NM didn't seem that bad. changed bg. sorry if i declined a lot :(
Good luck ~
<3
HOST_old
hi starryberry-
mod from queue~~


colum 1 / 2 / 3 / 4


[]
[EZ+]

00:09:249 (9249|0) - end 00:10:083

01:17:915 (77915|0) - end 01:23:248


[]
[NM]

00:13:416 ~ 00:28:416 - i think long notes are better to following low tone of synthesizer. if u dont wanna it, just ignore these suggestions.

00:13:416 (13416|3) - end 00:14:749

00:18:749 (18749|3) - end 00:20:083

00:19:916 (19916|0) - change to single note

00:21:916 (21916|0) - start 00:21:416. end 00:22:749

00:22:083 (22083|1,22249|2,22416|3,22583|2,22916|3) - remove

00:21:916 - add LN 3, end 00:22:749

00:24:083 (24083|3) - end 00:25:416

00:33:916 (33916|1) - remove
00:34:083 (34083|0) - start 00:33:916
00:34:083 (34083|3) - start 00:34:249
two LNs end 00:34:416

00:51:249 (51249|2) - move 1
00:51:583 (51583|1) - move 4
00:52:083 (52083|0,52083|3) - move 2, 3
00:52:583 (52583|1,52583|2) - move 1, 4


[]
[Sora's MX]

00:54:916 (54916|0,54916|3) - start 00:54:749


[]

<3
good luck
Topic Starter
Starry-

HOST wrote:

hi starryberry- toastHOST :3
mod from queue~~


colum 1 / 2 / 3 / 4


[]
[EZ+]

00:09:249 (9249|0) - end 00:10:083 ended at red tick instead, rearranged a bunch

01:17:915 (77915|0) - end 01:23:248 okai


[]
[NM]

00:13:416 ~ 00:28:416 - i think long notes are better to following low tone of synthesizer. if u dont wanna it, just ignore these suggestions.

00:13:416 (13416|3) - end 00:14:749

00:18:749 (18749|3) - end 00:20:083

00:19:916 (19916|0) - change to single note

00:21:916 (21916|0) - start 00:21:416. end 00:22:749 done all

00:22:083 (22083|1,22249|2,22416|3,22583|2,22916|3) - remove rearranged hugely

00:21:916 - add LN 3, end 00:22:749 i start not to follow vocals here

00:24:083 (24083|3) - end 00:25:416 ok

00:33:916 (33916|1) - remove
00:34:083 (34083|0) - start 00:33:916
00:34:083 (34083|3) - start 00:34:249
two LNs end 00:34:416 ok all

00:51:249 (51249|2) - move 1
00:51:583 (51583|1) - move 4
00:52:083 (52083|0,52083|3) - move 2, 3
00:52:583 (52583|1,52583|2) - move 1, 4 done all

made quite a few rearrangements in this diff, needs a bit more work

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[Sora's MX]

00:54:916 (54916|0,54916|3) - start 00:54:749 ok


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<3
good luck
thanks :)
Aste-
Hi Ho Hell...... Whaa.... What a beautiful Song... Great (^.^)b

OK Ahem... Hi Ho Hello

M4M from (See Signature) Here

Sorry for the delay..

OK since this song are my fav. so I''ll Going All out For this and Mod all diff that i can take....

OK

General's are fine so i'll skip it

The MOD

Colom 1.2.3.4

EZ+
00:09:749 (9749|1) - Move to 4 (more comfortable)

00:25:583 (25583|2) - Move to 2

00:26:749 (26749|3) - Change to LN till 00:27:249 (27249|0) -

00:42:749 (42749|1) - Move to 3 ( More comfortable )

00:53:249 addl note at 2 and then 00:53:416 (53416|3) - Move to 3

00:53:749 (53749|1) - Move to 4 and then make this


00:59:415 (59415|0,59582|3,59748|1,59915|0,60082|2,60248|3) - Make this

01:08:581 (68581|1,68915|2,69081|0) - I suggest you should avoid using this . i think this are too hard for EZ
So
01:08:581 (68581|1) - Move to 3
01:08:915 (68915|2) - Move to 2

01:09:248 (69248|3) - move to 3
01:09:581 (69581|0) - Move to 4

01:10:415 (70415|3,70581|1,70748|2,70915|0,71081|2,71248|1) - I think this are too hard.. Try this

01:11:748 (71748|2) - for this and the other that similiar with this.. i suggest you change it to LN till 01:12:081 (72081|3) -

01:13:248 (73248|1) - Delete

NM
00:18:749 (18749|3) - End it here > 00:19:583 (19583|2) -

00:37:583 (37583|1) - Move to 1

01:17:081 (77081|3) - Delete

HD
HP or OD = 7 or 7.5 (have mercy please TT_TT)

00:25:249 (25249|0) - Delete.. pattern

The rest are clean~


Give me Kudo now so i can convert it to star... I really love the song and the Mapset >.<

GL And Get Ranked soon ^.^
17VA
[MX]

00:30:083 (30083|1,30166|0,30249|1) - looks uncomfortable. 1,2,1 column might be better.

00:47:916 - ^ http://puu.sh/et1QJ/1b317fb72b.png

00:52:083 (52083|2,52083|1,52249|1,52249|0,52249|3) - ctrl + h. same pattern has been used, but different tone.

01:02:915 - how about this way ? http://puu.sh/et22n/946f4b425c.jpg

[HD]

00:40:583 (40583|2) - 2nd column?

00:45:416 - add. strong beat

00:53:416 (53416|1,53416|2) - 3,4 column is better imo

00:53:749 (53749|2,53749|1,53749|0) - use symmetric hold here. looks uncomfortable.

00:56:416 (56416|2) - 4th column

01:06:415 - http://puu.sh/et2zf/243bea35dc.jpg little uncomfortable lol
Topic Starter
Starry-
Applying this after college, thanks guys <3
Topic Starter
Starry-

17VA wrote:

[MX]

00:30:083 (30083|1,30166|0,30249|1) - looks uncomfortable. 1,2,1 column might be better. done

00:47:916 - ^ http://puu.sh/et1QJ/1b317fb72b.png ok

00:52:083 (52083|2,52083|1,52249|1,52249|0,52249|3) - ctrl + h. same pattern has been used, but different tone. ok

01:02:915 - how about this way ? http://puu.sh/et22n/946f4b425c.jpg ok

[HD]

00:40:583 (40583|2) - 2nd column? ok

00:45:416 - add. strong beat ok

00:53:416 (53416|1,53416|2) - 3,4 column is better imo rearranged

00:53:749 (53749|2,53749|1,53749|0) - use symmetric hold here. looks uncomfortable. rearranged

00:56:416 (56416|2) - 4th column rearranged

01:06:415 - http://puu.sh/et2zf/243bea35dc.jpg little uncomfortable lol changed
thanks for mod, will apply pharos' soon
Topic Starter
Starry-

Pharos21 wrote:

Hi Ho Hell...... Whaa.... What a beautiful Song... Great (^.^)b

OK Ahem... Hi Ho Hello

M4M from (See Signature) Here

Sorry for the delay..

OK since this song are my fav. so I''ll Going All out For this and Mod all diff that i can take....

OK

General's are fine so i'll skip it

The MOD

Colom 1.2.3.4

EZ+
00:09:749 (9749|1) - Move to 4 (more comfortable) keeping for balance ;w;

00:25:583 (25583|2) - Move to 2 it fits nicely here

00:26:749 (26749|3) - Change to LN till 00:27:249 (27249|0) - oonly really focused on the synth to make LN here

00:42:749 (42749|1) - Move to 3 ( More comfortable ) keeping for balance

00:53:249 addl note at 2 and then 00:53:416 (53416|3) - Move to 3 i think is fine, adding note will make it inconsistent with rest of pattern ;w;

00:53:749 (53749|1) - Move to 4 and then make this


00:59:415 (59415|0,59582|3,59748|1,59915|0,60082|2,60248|3) - Make this ok rearranged

01:08:581 (68581|1,68915|2,69081|0) - I suggest you should avoid using this . i think this are too hard for EZ
So
01:08:581 (68581|1) - Move to 3
01:08:915 (68915|2) - Move to 2

01:09:248 (69248|3) - move to 3
01:09:581 (69581|0) - Move to 4 rearranged all a bit

01:10:415 (70415|3,70581|1,70748|2,70915|0,71081|2,71248|1) - I think this are too hard.. Try this

01:11:748 (71748|2) - for this and the other that similiar with this.. i suggest you change it to LN till 01:12:081 (72081|3) - okayo

01:13:248 (73248|1) - Delete no but rearranged instead

NM
00:18:749 (18749|3) - End it here > 00:19:583 (19583|2) - ended at synth

00:37:583 (37583|1) - Move to 1 ok

01:17:081 (77081|3) - Delete fits keep ;)

HD
HP or OD = 7 or 7.5 (have mercy please TT_TT)

00:25:249 (25249|0) - Delete.. pattern ok

The rest are clean~


Give me Kudo now so i can convert it to star... I really love the song and the Mapset >.<

GL And Get Ranked soon ^.^
thanks <3

ALSO damn i made a triple post oops ;w;
Kruzon


4K Column Format: 1 l 2 l 3 l 4

4K Easy+

SPOILER
00:09:249 (9249|0) - i thought it ends here instead 00:10:083 (10083|0) -
00:57:915 (57915|0) - what is this note following? imo, these need notes instead 00:57:748 (57748|1) - and 00:58:082 (58082|1) - following vocal here is better

01:17:915 (77915|0) - perhaps it's more proper and balance if you end it on the same line as 01:23:081 (83081|3) -

4K NM

SPOILER
00:20:083 (20083|2) - i hear a chime here, and
00:18:749 (18749|3) - end this long note on same line as this 00:19:916 (19916|0) - , consistent presentation of long notes

00:29:916 (29916|3,29916|2,30249|0,30249|3) - feels off.. 00:29:916 (29916|2,29916|3) - feels like it's the one should be widened and 00:30:249 (30249|3,30249|0) - narrowed, pitch-wise

00:38:416 (38416|3) - = 00:39:916 (39916|0) - ?

00:40:083 (40083|2,40083|3) - move to 2 and 3
00:57:415 (57415|1) - what is this following? i suggest move 2/4 beat forward since the vocal and instrument starts there

good luck ^^
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