Muu-chan wrote:
Hello!
M4M here.
Note that these are only suggestions. You can decline them, if you want.
4K = |0|1|2|3|
LN means Long Note.
Sorry for my bad english its fine :3 not bad at all~General* Add [ S o r a ] kun's name in the tags since he made a GD (in all diff) ^^done
* BPM OK! But i don't get it why so many BPM changes :<
* AiMod OK!EZ+* Once again this is only suggestion^^
* I suggest to make OD and HP to 7 (since there's '+' sign too. Don't make it so EZ ^^) it already is
* 00:08:583 - i suggest to add a note here for the piano and cut this LN 00:08:083 (8083|3) - until that point too. Beside that, the distance of this 00:08:083 (8083|3,8916|2) - (1/2 beat) i think is too short (but it's okay if you're following the vocal^^)
* 00:09:249 - i suggest to add a LN for the vocal^^ in 2 or 3 until 00:09:749 - done this :3
* 00:13:416 - ^ until 00:13:916 -
* 00:14:583 - ^ until 00:15:083 -
* 00:16:083 - ^ until 00:16:583 -
* 00:17:249 - ^ until 00:17:749 -
* 00:26:749 - ^ until 00:27:249 i think its fine everywhere else ;w; the vocals aren't what i highlight anymore in these parts.
The rest is OK!NM* 00:22:083 (22083|1) - i suggest to delete this^^ theres a scary clunk sound, so keeping ;-;
* 00:24:416 - i suggest to add note (i feel something is missing here^^ beside that, following pattern in here 00:22:249 (22249|2,22416|3,22583|2)) added/rearranged
* 00:34:083 (34083|3,34083|0) - i think both LN should stop at 00:34:416 - (following vocal^^ but it's OK!) done
* 00:34:416 - add note here~ no need ;w;
The rest is OK! ^^HD* 00:16:083 (16083|3) - longer this LN until 00:16:583 (since the sounds of the LN isn't over yet) gets higher pitch, so i change ln ;w;
* 00:22:583 - i suggest to add LN here until 00:23:083 (i think you've to delete 00:22:583 (22583|0) - if you add a LN^^) i think fine without
* 00:33:999 (33999|1) - i thin this is unnecessary, i suggest to delete it^^ the hipitch piano sound
* 00:40:583 - i suggest to add a LN on 3 until 00:41:249 (for the vocal^^)
* 00:41:083 (41083|3) - move to 1 (if you do ^^^^^ ) rearranged all
* 00:44:749 (44749|1,44749|0) - i suggest both of them change into single LN until 00:44:916 thus add whistle sound^^
LOL i love to see the pattern with the Short LN after this. Look so cute <3 but i don't think i can't play it since i'm nub :< thanks xD abnd soon! O:Sora's MXYay i think that's all for me. Overall your map is amazing^^ I hope it can be bubble soon~ Well good luck~ thanks so much <3This is great already~ i just have a suggestion here :>
* 00:10:416 - maybe add a LN here until 00:10:749 (for the vocal^^) i think sora was only following the bass here, so i shall keep it
victorica_db wrote:
...as your request...MXgood luck.. thank you, helpful <300:11:083 (11083|2) - i'd like to extend to 00:11:416 - ok
00:39:833 - add a note
00:44:083 - add a note
00:46:749 - ^ done all~
00:57:082 - 1/4 start here and end at 00:57:415 -
00:59:998 - miss 1/4
01:01:248 (61248|0) - move to 01:01:081 -
01:01:831 (61831|2) - no sound
01:03:415 (63415|2) - delete
01:03:998 - miss 1/4
01:05:665 - add a note
01:08:331 - add a note.. done everything
i suggest to listen to music carefully...and check this part again..