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An - LittleGameStar [OsuMania]

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Ichigaki
1,767 posts
Joined February 2013
Topic Starter
Ichigaki
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 26 Desember 2014 at 15:49:15

Artist: An
Title: LittleGameStar
Source: SOUND VOLTEX II -infinite infection-
Tags: SDVX II Konami Arcade Championship 2013 KAC2013 Original Song Contest ichia7x
BPM: 215
Filesize: 2493kb
Play Time: 01:56
Difficulties Available:
  1. ADVANCED Lv.11 - 4Key (2,85 stars, 973 notes)
  2. BASIC Lv.5 - 4Key (1,49 stars, 417 notes)
  3. EXHAUST Lv.14 - 4Key (4,14 stars, 1316 notes)
  4. NOVICE Lv.8 - 4Key (2,11 stars, 598 notes)
Download: An - LittleGameStar
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Watchout from the LittleGameStar

 
Big thanks to arcwinolivirus for bubbled this mapset and Rumia- for qualified this mapset.
Thanks to all modder and testplay who want to help me :oops:
 
 
 
Difficulty Spread:
  1. EXHAUST Lv. 14 : Little Star is already above you (Insane diff, contains mini jack, 3-notes, and 2-notes with stairs)
  2. ADVANCED Lv. 11 : Little Star is entering the Earth (Hard diff, contains more stairs and 2-notes and more LN too)
  3. NOVICE Lv. 8 : Little Star is entering the Milky Way (Normal diff, physically same as Basic with 2-notes added and some LN)
  4. BASIC Lv. 5 : Little Star is still on Andromeda (Easy diff, mostly contains single note and little LN)
Last edited by Ichigaki , edited 49 times in total.
Rinzler
766 posts
Joined November 2012
Rinzler
Hi master ichiiiiiii owo)/, mod requested by PM


Column Format
| 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 |


Iseng Tes ah ~
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2060892 [Basic Lv.5]
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2060896 [Novice Lv.7]
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2060903 [Advance Lv.11]
------------------------------------- [Exhaust Lv.15]

[General]
SPOILER
Coba cek AIMod, masih ada error

[Basic Lv.5]
SPOILER
00:38:398 - sampe 00:44:817 - mungkin bisa diganti sama 1-2-1-2 atau 2-3-2-3 atau yang lain, biar ga bosen
01:53:747 - add LN ?, end here 01:54:305 -
01:54:305 (114305|0) - ini delete kalo misalnya mau pake LN yang barusan

[Novice Lv.7]
SPOILER
00:13:003 (13003|2,13003|0) - delete satu, suaranya sama kaya ini 00:11:887 (11887|0) -
00:19:840 (19840|2) - move ke kolom 4, mungkin akan lebih gampang
00:23:468 (23468|2) - move ke kolom 4, nadanya lebih tinggi dari LN yang di depan
00:38:398 - sampe 00:44:817 - , sama kaya basic, well terserah juga sih hehe
00:57:933 (57933|0,58073|0) - ngejack sendirian `3`, pindah ini 00:58:073 (58073|0) - ke kolom 3
01:14:119 - sampe 01:16:352 - , hmmmm, mungkin akan susah buat novice player, dan ini 215 Bpm

[Advance Lv.11]
SPOILER
00:09:654 (9654|3) - walaupun suaranya emang berhenti disana, dikasih jarak 1 line lagi, bikin kaget soalnya
00:18:864 (18864|3) - ^
01:00:166 (60166|3) - delete, ga ada suara disana
01:16:352 - add note
01:53:050 (113050|3,113747|2) - kasih jarak biar ga kaget

[Exhaust Lv.15]
SPOILER
ga kuat mod diff ini @@

Enjoy my Noob mod, Good luck ya owo)
Ichigaki
1,767 posts
Joined February 2013
Topic Starter
Ichigaki

[-Rinzler-] wrote:

Hi master ichiiiiiii owo)/, mod requested by PM


Column Format
| 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 |


Iseng Tes ah ~
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2060892 [Basic Lv.5]
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2060896 [Novice Lv.7]
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2060903 [Advance Lv.11]
------------------------------------- [Exhaust Lv.15]

[General]
SPOILER
Coba cek AIMod, masih ada error

[Basic Lv.5]
SPOILER
00:38:398 - sampe 00:44:817 - mungkin bisa diganti sama 1-2-1-2 atau 2-3-2-3 atau yang lain, biar ga bosen Fixed
01:53:747 - add LN ?, end here 01:54:305 - Fixed
01:54:305 (114305|0) - ini delete kalo misalnya mau pake LN yang barusan for what? it's okay to not delete it, imo

[Novice Lv.7]
SPOILER
00:13:003 (13003|2,13003|0) - delete satu, suaranya sama kaya ini 00:11:887 (11887|0) - Fixed
00:19:840 (19840|2) - move ke kolom 4, mungkin akan lebih gampang Fixed
00:23:468 (23468|2) - move ke kolom 4, nadanya lebih tinggi dari LN yang di depan Fixed
00:38:398 - sampe 00:44:817 - , sama kaya basic, well terserah juga sih hehe Fixed
00:57:933 (57933|0,58073|0) - ngejack sendirian `3`, pindah ini 00:58:073 (58073|0) - ke kolom 3 Fixed
01:14:119 - sampe 01:16:352 - , hmmmm, mungkin akan susah buat novice player, dan ini 215 Bpm Fixed

[Advance Lv.11]
SPOILER
00:09:654 (9654|3) - walaupun suaranya emang berhenti disana, dikasih jarak 1 line lagi, bikin kaget soalnya Actually, if you play the song with 50% playback rate, you'll know the reason why i put that little gap on there, but fixed
00:18:864 (18864|3) - ^ Same situation as above
01:00:166 (60166|3) - delete, ga ada suara disana Nope, there's one
01:16:352 - add note Added
01:53:050 (113050|3,113747|2) - kasih jarak biar ga kaget I'd like to leave it like that.

[Exhaust Lv.15]
SPOILER
ga kuat mod diff ini @@ Why? D:

Enjoy my Noob mod, Good luck ya owo)
Makasih modnya, nak :3
Ginshu
1,046 posts
Joined May 2014
Ginshu
Mod requested via PM

Hi Ichinyan~

My Column :
1|2|3|4


EXHAUST Lv.15
> 00:05:329 - ~ 00:05:887 - lebih fun kalo begini

> 00:09:375 - ~ 00:09:515 -

> 00:13:003 - ~ 00:14:119 -

> 00:14:258 (14258|1) - pindah ke 3
> 00:14:957 (14957|3) - pindah ke 3
> 00:15:095 (15095|2) - pindah ke 2
> 01:08:677 - tambah note di 2
> 01:13:143 - tambah note di 1
> 01:38:259 - tambah note di 2 , ada suara hihat
> 01:40:491 - tambah note
> 01:40:631 - ^
> 01:41:608 - ^
> 01:41:747 - ^
> 01:42:724 - ^
> 01:43:840 - ^
> 01:46:073 - ^
> 01:46:212 - ^
> 01:50:538 - ^
> 01:50:677 - ^

ADVANCED Lv.11
> 00:19:980 - ~ 00:20:538 - 215 bpm , cocoknya stairs aja buat advanced

> 00:20:817 (20817|1,20957|2,20957|0) - ctrl+J
> 00:38:817 - tambah note di 4
> 01:18:864 (78864|1,79004|2,79004|0) - ctrl+J
> 01:38:538 (98538|1) - pindah ke 3
> 01:43:003 (103003|0) - pindah ke 2
> 01:47:468 (107468|0) - pindah ke 2
> 01:51:933 (111933|0) - pindah ke 2
> 01:53:050 (113050|3) - LN berhenti di 01:53:747 - kemudian 01:53:747 (113747|2) - end at here 01:54:305 -

NOVICE Lv.7
> 00:45:933 (45933|3) - ganti LN dan berhenti di 00:46:771 -

BASIC Lv.5
OK

Nice Song :D
dan Lv.16 nya mana ? kayaknya udh cukup Lv.15

Good Luck ! ;)
shionelove
1,522 posts
Joined September 2010
shionelove
hi~ from queue
column 1234

[BASIC]
01:06:026 (66026|0,68259|3,70491|1,72724|2) - add?
01:39:236 (99236|0,99654|3) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2069291
01:43:701 (103701|3,104119|1) - ^
01:48:166 (108166|1,108584|0) - ^
01:52:631 (112631|0,113050|2) - ^
[NOVICE]
nothing
[ADVANCED]
nothing
[EXHAUST]
00:20:328 (20328|1) - move to 4
01:23:746 (83746|1) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2069317 ?
01:32:956 (92956|2) - until 01:33:236
01:38:956 (98956|2) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2069322

Good Luck~
Ichigaki
1,767 posts
Joined February 2013
Topic Starter
Ichigaki

hutunohito wrote:

hi~ from queue
column 1234

[BASIC]
01:06:026 (66026|0,68259|3,70491|1,72724|2) - add?
01:39:236 (99236|0,99654|3) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2069291
01:43:701 (103701|3,104119|1) - ^
01:48:166 (108166|1,108584|0) - ^
01:52:631 (112631|0,113050|2) - ^
[NOVICE]
nothing
[ADVANCED]
nothing
[EXHAUST]
00:20:328 (20328|1) - move to 4
01:23:746 (83746|1) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2069317 ?
01:32:956 (92956|2) - until 01:33:236
01:38:956 (98956|2) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2069322

Good Luck~
Applied all mod, thanks~ :oops:
Lirai
1,516 posts
Joined December 2013
Lirai
Hi here's Mod for your chart ichi ~

[EXHAUST Lv. 15]
00:11:608 (11608|0) - Delete, inb4 cuman pake 3chord

00:13:281 (13281|2,13281|1,13281|0,13421|2,13421|3,13560|1,13700|3,13700|2,13839|1,13839|0,13979|2) - Ctrl+H Cuman buat menghindari useless jack

00:17:746 (17746|1,17886|0) - Ctrl+J, kan terlihat rapi

00:20:258 (20258|2,20328|1,20397|2,20467|1) - Stair 1234 Looks fit here

00:26:676 (26676|0) - Move to 3
00:26:957 (26957|2) - Move to 2
00:27:095 (27095|1) - Move to 3

00:56:118 (56118|1) - Move to 1

01:00:444 (60444|2) - Move to 4, same beat

01:18:165 (78165|1) - Delete, double is enough
[ADVANCED Lv. 11]
00:11:608 (11608|1) - Delete, Double udh cukup kok

00:17:468 (17468|2,17608|3) - Ctrl+J, karena berbeda dari yg sebelumnya

00:37:980 (37980|3) - Kayaknya gk butuh LN, seperti saat 00:29:050

00:40:491 - Add to 3
00:40:771 - Add to 4

00:41:608 (41608|2) - Move to 2
00:41:887 (41887|1) - Move to 1
[NOVICE Lv. 7]
00:10:631 (10631|0,10910|0) - Move to 3 2, Stairs

00:19:282 (19282|2,19282|0) - Pantesnya sih LN aj

00:21:794 (21794|1) - Move to 4, beat sama

01:05:608 (65608|3,65608|1,66026|0,66026|2) - Ctrl H, Terus 01:06:026 (66026|1) - Move to 1

01:07:422 (67422|2,67422|0) - Ctrl H, Terus 01:08:259 (68259|2) - Move to 4
[BASIC Lv. 5]
00:55:980 (55980|1) - Move to 4

01:06:026 (66026|0) - Change to Double |3|4|
01:08:259 (68259|3) - Change to Double |1|2|
01:10:491 (70491|1) - Change to Double |3|4|
01:12:724 (72724|2) - Change to Double |1|2|
^ Tetep masih Gampang kok

01:36:445 (96445|0) - Pendekin jadi setengah 01:36:724

01:39:654 (99654|3) - Starts here 01:39:515
01:44:119 (104119|1) - Starts here 01:43:980
01:48:584 (108584|0) - Starts here 01:48:445
01:53:050 (113050|2) - Starts here 01:52:910
^ Kalo ngikuti suara shynth

Good Luck ~ Nice song

And Thank's for M4M <3
puxtu
2,926 posts
Joined August 2013
puxtu
Here's my mod as requested. pls don't kill me because this :v

[General]
perbaiki tag di EXHAUST Lv. 15

column: /1/2/3/4/

[BASIC Lv. 5]
HP-1 OD -2 because 8 is too high for a basic diff

00:00:724 (724|0) - hapus LN ini? karena disini 00:09:654 - dan disini 00:19:422 - kamu ga ngikutin suara itu, dan tambah 1 note di 00:02:678 - col 1
00:16:073 (16073|2) - sperti pattern sblumnya, move to 4
00:20:538 - cymbals sound, tambah 1 note
00:20:538 (20538|3,21236|0,21515|2,21794|3,22073|0,22771|3) - gw ga ngerti Ln-Ln ini ngapain? it feels weird to play
disini 00:20:817 (20817|1) - ada, disini 00:22:491 - ngga ada. same sound, imo
....dan bgitu strusnya sampe ujung kiai
00:59:468 (59468|3) - nadanya lebih rendah, pindah ke col 1?
01:03:933 (63933|2) - konsisten pls, kalo ngikutin suara "itu" berarti harus diikutin semuanya, kalo ngga ngikutin ngga diikutin semuanya
01:05:189 (65189|0,65608|0) - has a different sound with this 01:06:026 (66026|0) - Knp kamu hammer? saran sy pindah ke col 4 atau add note col 4 since it's a strong beat
....same case with next pattern
01:14:119 (74119|0,74259|1,74398|2,74538|3,74817|0,75096|2,75654|3,75794|1,76073|0) - ga ngerti ini kamu ngikutin apa dan sy lebih ga ngerti lg knp ini 01:15:236 - ~ 01:15:654 (75654|3) - di kosongin padahal disini 01:15:654 (75654|3,75794|1,76073|0) - kamu isi note?
01:18:166 - sekali lg, pls konsisten.. ini knp kosong? punya suara yg mirip sama notes ini 01:16:491 (76491|0,76701|3,76910|0,77119|3,77329|0,77538|3,77747|0) -
01:21:654 (81654|2,81794|1) - punya nada yg beda jauh, ganti jadi 1 4
01:23:050 (83050|3) - for what? suara drumnya udh di wakilin sama LN, beda sama yg ini 01:27:096 (87096|1,87515|3) -
01:31:980 (91980|3) - ^ same case
01:36:445 (96445|0) - pendekin sampe next white line
01:39:236 (99236|0) - orz ini jg... pendekin sampe white line, 01:39:654 (99654|3) - turunin sampe white line (ujungnya ttp sama)
01:43:701 (103701|3,104119|1) - ^ same case
01:48:166 (108166|1,108584|0) - ^

[NOVICE Lv. 7]
try visit AiMod, it has a present for you ;)
lel, diff normal OD nya 7, easy malah 8

00:02:678 (2678|3) - add finish
orz pattern awal udah bikin sy bingung... dari sini 00:02:678 - sampe sini 00:09:096 - kamu ngikutin suara apa? kalo ngikutin suara background piano yg 1/2 berarti disini 00:04:352 - , 00:04:771 - , 00:07:143 - , 00:08:817 - , 00:09:236 - ngga seharusnya kamu kosongin, semua white and red line harus di isi. Kalo ngikutin suara piano biasa (sperti yg kamu pakein clap) berarti kamu harus hapus semua notes yg ngikutin suara piano background1/2. Dan kalo kamu ngikutin 2 suara itu, berarti disini harus ada 2 note karena ada 2 suara yaitu yg sy sebutkan yg td. Tapi, kamu ngga bisa ngikutin 2 2 nya karena nanti jatuhnya akan jadi hard diff, dan ini diff normal bukan? jadi kamu harus konsisten ngikutin 1 suara.
00:08:677 (8677|2,9096|0) - missing clap?
00:09:375 (9375|3) - yakin dr sini mulai LN nya?
00:09:375 - well, dr sini kamu ngikutin suara piano yg biasa, tp 00:09:515 (9515|0,9794|2) - ini ngikutin suara background piano. so, remove it?
00:11:189 (11189|0) - punya suara yg lebih tinggi dr 2 note sblumnya, move to 3
00:11:608 - sampe kiai time. knp ngikutin beat? ngga ngikutin suara bg piano? :v
00:19:282 - add LN for suara angin yg kamu jg ikutin disini 00:00:724 (724|0) - dan disini 00:09:375 (9375|3) - .Kalo kamu sengaja kosongin, berarti kosongin jg 2 long note seblumnya. be consistent please.
Kiai time section punya problem yg mirip sama kiai time diff basic, ada bbrapa beat yg note nya ga ada. contohnya: ini ada 00:23:050 (23050|1) - ini ngga ada 00:24:166 (24166|1) - padahal punya suara/beat yg sama. dan masih banyak lg, males sbutin satu satu. kamu cari sndiri gih
00:40:910 (40910|0,41468|0) - move to 2. punya suara yg sama dgn 2 note sbulumnya, feel free to hammer it.
.....sama sperti 4 note selanjutnya
00:46:073 - ~ 01:03:933 - dari sini, lagunya di loop ulang. berarti apapun masalah yg ada mulai dr sini, punya masalah yg sama dgn yg udh sy sbutkan di atas^
01:03:933 (63933|3) - naikin ke next white line
01:05:189 - ~ 01:12:724 - nah gini dong, konsisten sama 1 suara
01:17:957 (77957|1,77957|3) - not enough sound, dan ga punya suara yg sama sama note note sblumnya. 01:17:957 (77957|3) - hapus 01:17:957 (77957|1) - naikin ke white line
01:36:445 - ~ end. nah disini kamu ngikutin 2 suara, syn + drumbeat. 01:53:747 (113747|0) - plus suara angin jadi 3 lol, trserah deh, I don't wanna ruin your pattern

[ADVANCED Lv. 11]
OD+1
looks nice
00:11:608 - ~ 00:19:980 - jgn biarin ada white and red line yg kosong, setidaknya isi dgn 1 note for suara background piano
00:29:050 (29050|3) - move to 3 and 00:29:119 (29119|0) - remove it. don't have any sound, checked with 25% playback rate
00:37:980 (37980|0) - ^
01:05:189 - ~ 01:13:840 - oh no you broke your consistency again. add every white and red line with a note and it will cover it up
01:17:957 (77957|2,78026|0) - move to 1 3, ikutin pattern yg di atas

[EXHAUST Lv. 15]
banyak pattern yg ga konsisten, check sndiri gih. sy capek jelasin orz :v
Gravey-
1,491 posts
Joined July 2013
Gravey-
Hi MOD here as requested in my Queue~ (~*w*)~
[4K MOD]

Remove tag:
Little Game Star (Since it's the title already)
Check:
Song setup > Design > Widescreen support
|1|2|3|4|
BASIC Lv. 5
00:20:538 (20538|3) - Remove not necessary because of your future patterns
00:42:864 (42864|0) - Move to 3 (Pattern)
NOVICE Lv. 7
01:00:724 (60724|0) - Remove not necessary because of the same sound like this 01:01:422 (61422|1) -
ADVANCED Lv. 11
Starting here 01:14:259 to 01:16:073 (The end of the stackings) I suggest to change this pattern not necessary to be stackings because of the song rhythm/flow.
EXHAUST Lv. 15
OD = 8.5
01:23:887 Add note to 3
01:25:561 Add note to 4
01:28:491 Add note to 3
01:32:259 Add note to 4
01:34:491 Add note to 1
01:41:468 Add note to 4
01:45:933 Add note to 2
01:50:398 Add note to 2
01:52:631 Add note to 1
Follow your pattern, Sounds like this on your pattern have 3 single notes and a long note~

Nice & well mapped!~
Good luck!~ =w=)b
Ichigaki
1,767 posts
Joined February 2013
Topic Starter
Ichigaki

DE-CADE wrote:

Hi here's Mod for your chart ichi ~

[EXHAUST Lv. 15]
00:11:608 (11608|0) - Delete, inb4 cuman pake 3chord

00:13:281 (13281|2,13281|1,13281|0,13421|2,13421|3,13560|1,13700|3,13700|2,13839|1,13839|0,13979|2) - Ctrl+H Cuman buat menghindari useless jack

00:17:746 (17746|1,17886|0) - Ctrl+J, kan terlihat rapi

00:20:258 (20258|2,20328|1,20397|2,20467|1) - Stair 1234 Looks fit here

00:26:676 (26676|0) - Move to 3
00:26:957 (26957|2) - Move to 2
00:27:095 (27095|1) - Move to 3

00:56:118 (56118|1) - Move to 1

01:00:444 (60444|2) - Move to 4, same beat

01:18:165 (78165|1) - Delete, double is enough
[ADVANCED Lv. 11]
00:11:608 (11608|1) - Delete, Double udh cukup kok

00:17:468 (17468|2,17608|3) - Ctrl+J, karena berbeda dari yg sebelumnya

00:37:980 (37980|3) - Kayaknya gk butuh LN, seperti saat 00:29:050

00:40:491 - Add to 3
00:40:771 - Add to 4

00:41:608 (41608|2) - Move to 2
00:41:887 (41887|1) - Move to 1
[NOVICE Lv. 7]
00:10:631 (10631|0,10910|0) - Move to 3 2, Stairs

00:19:282 (19282|2,19282|0) - Pantesnya sih LN aj

00:21:794 (21794|1) - Move to 4, beat sama

01:05:608 (65608|3,65608|1,66026|0,66026|2) - Ctrl H, Terus 01:06:026 (66026|1) - Move to 1

01:07:422 (67422|2,67422|0) - Ctrl H, Terus 01:08:259 (68259|2) - Move to 4
[BASIC Lv. 5]
00:55:980 (55980|1) - Move to 4

01:06:026 (66026|0) - Change to Double |3|4|
01:08:259 (68259|3) - Change to Double |1|2|
01:10:491 (70491|1) - Change to Double |3|4|
01:12:724 (72724|2) - Change to Double |1|2|
^ Tetep masih Gampang kok

01:36:445 (96445|0) - Pendekin jadi setengah 01:36:724

01:39:654 (99654|3) - Starts here 01:39:515
01:44:119 (104119|1) - Starts here 01:43:980
01:48:584 (108584|0) - Starts here 01:48:445
01:53:050 (113050|2) - Starts here 01:52:910
^ Kalo ngikuti suara shynth

Good Luck ~ Nice song

And Thank's for M4M <3
Setauku sih ini semuanya di apply, sorry aku lupa :x , btw Thanks for mod~ :oops:
Last edited by Ichigaki , edited 1 time in total.
Ichigaki
1,767 posts
Joined February 2013
Topic Starter
Ichigaki

puxtu wrote:

Here's my mod as requested. pls don't kill me because this :v

[General]
perbaiki tag di EXHAUST Lv. 15

column: /1/2/3/4/

[BASIC Lv. 5]
HP-1 OD -2 because 8 is too high for a basic diff

00:00:724 (724|0) - hapus LN ini? karena disini 00:09:654 - dan disini 00:19:422 - kamu ga ngikutin suara itu, dan tambah 1 note di 00:02:678 - col 1
00:16:073 (16073|2) - sperti pattern sblumnya, move to 4
00:20:538 - cymbals sound, tambah 1 note
00:20:538 (20538|3,21236|0,21515|2,21794|3,22073|0,22771|3) - gw ga ngerti Ln-Ln ini ngapain? it feels weird to play
disini 00:20:817 (20817|1) - ada, disini 00:22:491 - ngga ada. same sound, imo
....dan bgitu strusnya sampe ujung kiai
00:59:468 (59468|3) - nadanya lebih rendah, pindah ke col 1?
01:03:933 (63933|2) - konsisten pls, kalo ngikutin suara "itu" berarti harus diikutin semuanya, kalo ngga ngikutin ngga diikutin semuanya
01:05:189 (65189|0,65608|0) - has a different sound with this 01:06:026 (66026|0) - Knp kamu hammer? saran sy pindah ke col 4 atau add note col 4 since it's a strong beat
....same case with next pattern
01:14:119 (74119|0,74259|1,74398|2,74538|3,74817|0,75096|2,75654|3,75794|1,76073|0) - ga ngerti ini kamu ngikutin apa dan sy lebih ga ngerti lg knp ini 01:15:236 - ~ 01:15:654 (75654|3) - di kosongin padahal disini 01:15:654 (75654|3,75794|1,76073|0) - kamu isi note?
01:18:166 - sekali lg, pls konsisten.. ini knp kosong? punya suara yg mirip sama notes ini 01:16:491 (76491|0,76701|3,76910|0,77119|3,77329|0,77538|3,77747|0) -
01:21:654 (81654|2,81794|1) - punya nada yg beda jauh, ganti jadi 1 4
01:23:050 (83050|3) - for what? suara drumnya udh di wakilin sama LN, beda sama yg ini 01:27:096 (87096|1,87515|3) -
01:31:980 (91980|3) - ^ same case
01:36:445 (96445|0) - pendekin sampe next white line
01:39:236 (99236|0) - orz ini jg... pendekin sampe white line, 01:39:654 (99654|3) - turunin sampe white line (ujungnya ttp sama)
01:43:701 (103701|3,104119|1) - ^ same case
01:48:166 (108166|1,108584|0) - ^

[NOVICE Lv. 7]
try visit AiMod, it has a present for you ;)
lel, diff normal OD nya 7, easy malah 8

00:02:678 (2678|3) - add finish
orz pattern awal udah bikin sy bingung... dari sini 00:02:678 - sampe sini 00:09:096 - kamu ngikutin suara apa? kalo ngikutin suara background piano yg 1/2 berarti disini 00:04:352 - , 00:04:771 - , 00:07:143 - , 00:08:817 - , 00:09:236 - ngga seharusnya kamu kosongin, semua white and red line harus di isi. Kalo ngikutin suara piano biasa (sperti yg kamu pakein clap) berarti kamu harus hapus semua notes yg ngikutin suara piano background1/2. Dan kalo kamu ngikutin 2 suara itu, berarti disini harus ada 2 note karena ada 2 suara yaitu yg sy sebutkan yg td. Tapi, kamu ngga bisa ngikutin 2 2 nya karena nanti jatuhnya akan jadi hard diff, dan ini diff normal bukan? jadi kamu harus konsisten ngikutin 1 suara.
00:08:677 (8677|2,9096|0) - missing clap?
00:09:375 (9375|3) - yakin dr sini mulai LN nya?
00:09:375 - well, dr sini kamu ngikutin suara piano yg biasa, tp 00:09:515 (9515|0,9794|2) - ini ngikutin suara background piano. so, remove it?
00:11:189 (11189|0) - punya suara yg lebih tinggi dr 2 note sblumnya, move to 3
00:11:608 - sampe kiai time. knp ngikutin beat? ngga ngikutin suara bg piano? :v
00:19:282 - add LN for suara angin yg kamu jg ikutin disini 00:00:724 (724|0) - dan disini 00:09:375 (9375|3) - .Kalo kamu sengaja kosongin, berarti kosongin jg 2 long note seblumnya. be consistent please.
Kiai time section punya problem yg mirip sama kiai time diff basic, ada bbrapa beat yg note nya ga ada. contohnya: ini ada 00:23:050 (23050|1) - ini ngga ada 00:24:166 (24166|1) - padahal punya suara/beat yg sama. dan masih banyak lg, males sbutin satu satu. kamu cari sndiri gih
00:40:910 (40910|0,41468|0) - move to 2. punya suara yg sama dgn 2 note sbulumnya, feel free to hammer it.
.....sama sperti 4 note selanjutnya
00:46:073 - ~ 01:03:933 - dari sini, lagunya di loop ulang. berarti apapun masalah yg ada mulai dr sini, punya masalah yg sama dgn yg udh sy sbutkan di atas^
01:03:933 (63933|3) - naikin ke next white line
01:05:189 - ~ 01:12:724 - nah gini dong, konsisten sama 1 suara
01:17:957 (77957|1,77957|3) - not enough sound, dan ga punya suara yg sama sama note note sblumnya. 01:17:957 (77957|3) - hapus 01:17:957 (77957|1) - naikin ke white line
01:36:445 - ~ end. nah disini kamu ngikutin 2 suara, syn + drumbeat. 01:53:747 (113747|0) - plus suara angin jadi 3 lol, trserah deh, I don't wanna ruin your pattern

[ADVANCED Lv. 11]
OD+1
looks nice
00:11:608 - ~ 00:19:980 - jgn biarin ada white and red line yg kosong, setidaknya isi dgn 1 note for suara background piano
00:29:050 (29050|3) - move to 3 and 00:29:119 (29119|0) - remove it. don't have any sound, checked with 25% playback rate
00:37:980 (37980|0) - ^
01:05:189 - ~ 01:13:840 - oh no you broke your consistency again. add every white and red line with a note and it will cover it up
01:17:957 (77957|2,78026|0) - move to 1 3, ikutin pattern yg di atas

[EXHAUST Lv. 15]
banyak pattern yg ga konsisten, check sndiri gih. sy capek jelasin orz :v
Mostly applied. Your pattern check is great, thanks puxtu, sorry that i forget to answer all of your mod here :(

[GraveChaos] wrote:

Hi MOD here as requested in my Queue~ (~*w*)~
[4K MOD]

Remove tag:
Little Game Star (Since it's the title already)
Check:
Song setup > Design > Widescreen support
|1|2|3|4|
BASIC Lv. 5
00:20:538 (20538|3) - Remove not necessary because of your future patterns
00:42:864 (42864|0) - Move to 3 (Pattern)
NOVICE Lv. 7
01:00:724 (60724|0) - Remove not necessary because of the same sound like this 01:01:422 (61422|1) -
ADVANCED Lv. 11
Starting here 01:14:259 to 01:16:073 (The end of the stackings) I suggest to change this pattern not necessary to be stackings because of the song rhythm/flow.
EXHAUST Lv. 15
OD = 8.5
01:23:887 Add note to 3
01:25:561 Add note to 4
01:28:491 Add note to 3
01:32:259 Add note to 4
01:34:491 Add note to 1
01:41:468 Add note to 4
01:45:933 Add note to 2
01:50:398 Add note to 2
01:52:631 Add note to 1
Follow your pattern, Sounds like this on your pattern have 3 single notes and a long note~

Nice & well mapped!~
Good luck!~ =w=)b
Applied all, even its just minor things. Thanks~
Ichigaki
1,767 posts
Joined February 2013
Topic Starter
Ichigaki
Dopost overload... `-`)
Elementaires
658 posts
Joined January 2013
Elementaires
[EXHAUST Lv. 15]

You should delete all notes and replace them at the same place where they were (if that make a sense). Everything is unsnapped :(
Kawawa
Kawawa
HI ! how do u do XD

i think, so suggest u

Basic Lv. 5
00:33:933 - note1add
01:06:026 - Longnote change! ~01:06:864
01:08:259 - same ↑ ~01:09:096
01:10:491 - same ↑ ~01:11:329
01:12:724 - same ↑ ~01:13:561
01:23:050 - note1add
01:31:980 - note1add
01:38:119 - note1add
01:42:587 - note1add
01:47:050 - note1add
01:51:515 - note1add

NOVICE Lv 7 (many modify need..)
for example :)
00:12:166 - note1add
00:13:282 - note2add
00:14:398 - 1add
00:15:515 - 2add
00:16:631 - 1add
00:17:747 - 2add
00:18:864 - 1add
00:20:817 - 1add
00:21:375 - 1add
00:21:515 - 1add
00:22:491 - 1add
00:22:980 - 1add
00:23:608 - 2add
00:24:166 - 2add
00:25:003 - 2add
00:25:282 - 2add
00:25:840 - 1add
00:26:398 - 1add
00:26:957 - 1add
00:27:515 - 1add
00:28:073 - 1add
00:28:631 - 1add
00:29:468 - 1add
00:29:747 - 1add
00:30:445 - 1add
00:31:422 - 1add
00:31:980 - 1add
00:32:538 - 1add
00:33:133 - 1add
00:33:933 - 1add
00:34:214 - 1add
00:34:771 - 1add
00:35:329 - 1add
00:35:887 - 1add
00:36:447 - 1add
00:37:003 - 1add
00:37:561 - 1add
01:38:119 - 2add
01:39:236 - 1add
01:40:352 - 1add
01:42:584 - 2add
01:47:050 - 2add
01:51:527 - 2add
i think normal is too many take care :)

advanced LV 11
00:46:143 - 1add
00:46:212 - 1add
00:46:282 - 1add
00:46:352 - 1add
00:46:422 - 1add
00:46:491 - 1add
00:46:561 - 1add
00:46:631 - 1add
00:46:840 - delete

EXHAUST LV 15
FIRST PART(00:02:680 ~ 00:11:538)
-> so many whistle sound.. some reduce.. XD

u r beat map good luck :)
Ichigaki
1,767 posts
Joined February 2013
Topic Starter
Ichigaki

KawaEE wrote:

HI ! how do u do XD

i think, so suggest u

Basic Lv. 5
00:33:933 - note1add Added
01:06:026 - Longnote change! ~01:06:864
01:08:259 - same ↑ ~01:09:096
01:10:491 - same ↑ ~01:11:329
01:12:724 - same ↑ ~01:13:561
Reject all mod above this
01:23:050 - note1add Fixed
01:31:980 - note1add Fixed
01:38:119 - note1add
01:42:587 - note1add
01:47:050 - note1add
01:51:515 - note1add
Reject all mod above this

NOVICE Lv 7 (many modify need..)
for example :)
00:12:166 - note1add
00:13:282 - note2add
00:14:398 - 1add
00:15:515 - 2add
00:16:631 - 1add
00:17:747 - 2add
00:18:864 - 1add
00:20:817 - 1add
00:21:375 - 1add
00:21:515 - 1add
00:22:491 - 1add
00:22:980 - 1add
00:23:608 - 2add
00:24:166 - 2add
00:25:003 - 2add
00:25:282 - 2add
00:25:840 - 1add
00:26:398 - 1add
00:26:957 - 1add
00:27:515 - 1add
00:28:073 - 1add
00:28:631 - 1add
00:29:468 - 1add
00:29:747 - 1add
00:30:445 - 1add
00:31:422 - 1add
00:31:980 - 1add
00:32:538 - 1add
00:33:133 - 1add
00:33:933 - 1add
00:34:214 - 1add
00:34:771 - 1add
00:35:329 - 1add
00:35:887 - 1add
00:36:447 - 1add
00:37:003 - 1add
00:37:561 - 1add
01:38:119 - 2add
01:39:236 - 1add
01:40:352 - 1add
01:42:584 - 2add
01:47:050 - 2add
01:51:527 - 2add
i think normal is too many take care :)
Reject all, sorry. In here, i've to following the piano, not the drum instead.

advanced LV 11
00:46:143 - 1add
00:46:212 - 1add
00:46:282 - 1add
00:46:352 - 1add
00:46:422 - 1add
00:46:491 - 1add
00:46:561 - 1add
00:46:631 - 1add
00:46:840 - delete
Reject all again, sorry.

EXHAUST LV 15
FIRST PART(00:02:680 ~ 00:11:538)
-> so many whistle sound.. some reduce.. XD Reduced as well

u r beat map good luck :)
Thanks for mod my map ;)
Last edited by Ichigaki , edited 1 time in total.
Un-known_old
Un-known_old
Here is my mod...

MX
format kolom : |1|2|3|4|



00:14:816 (14816|1) - pindah ke kolom 3
00:15:235 (15235|3) - pindah ke kolom 2
00:15:096 (15096|1,15374|1) - pindah ke kolom 3
00:15:514 (15514|2) - pindah ke kolom 2
00:15:653 (15653|1) - pindah ke kolom 3
00:17:049 (17049|0) - pindah ke kolom 2
00:17:049 (17049|3) - pindah ke kolom 3
00:16:909 (16909|2) - pindah ke kolom 1
00:17:188 (17188|2) - pindah ke kolom 4
00:17:328 (17328|1) - pindah ke kolom 1
00:17:467 (17467|0) - pindah ke kolom 2
00:17:608 (17608|1) - pindah ke kolom 1
00:17:746 (17746|0) - pindah ke kolom 2
00:26:957 (26957|1) - pindah ke kolom 3
00:27:514 (27514|2) - pindah ke kolom 2
00:29:467 (29467|3) - apus
00:33:933 (33933|1) - pindah ke kolom 1
00:38:398 (38398|0) - apus
01:18:583 (78583|2) - apus
01:23:049 (83049|2) - pindah ke kolom 2
01:27:445 (87445|1) - apus
01:27:515 (87515|3) - apus
01:31:980 (91980|3) - pindah ke kolom 3


Advanced, Novice and Basic are good for rank.

Good luck~ 8-) 8-) 8-)
Ichigaki
1,767 posts
Joined February 2013
Topic Starter
Ichigaki

Un-known wrote:

Here is my mod...

MX
format kolom : |1|2|3|4|



00:14:816 (14816|1) - pindah ke kolom 3
00:15:235 (15235|3) - pindah ke kolom 2
00:15:096 (15096|1,15374|1) - pindah ke kolom 3
00:15:514 (15514|2) - pindah ke kolom 2
00:15:653 (15653|1) - pindah ke kolom 3
00:17:049 (17049|0) - pindah ke kolom 2
00:17:049 (17049|3) - pindah ke kolom 3
00:16:909 (16909|2) - pindah ke kolom 1
00:17:188 (17188|2) - pindah ke kolom 4
00:17:328 (17328|1) - pindah ke kolom 1
00:17:467 (17467|0) - pindah ke kolom 2
00:17:608 (17608|1) - pindah ke kolom 1
00:17:746 (17746|0) - pindah ke kolom 2
00:26:957 (26957|1) - pindah ke kolom 3
00:27:514 (27514|2) - pindah ke kolom 2
00:29:467 (29467|3) - apus no
00:33:933 (33933|1) - pindah ke kolom 1
00:38:398 (38398|0) - apus no
01:18:583 (78583|2) - apus no
01:23:049 (83049|2) - pindah ke kolom 2
01:27:445 (87445|1) - apus no
01:27:515 (87515|3) - apus
01:31:980 (91980|3) - pindah ke kolom 3
Not replied mean apply :oops:

Advanced, Novice and Basic are good for rank.

Good luck~ 8-) 8-) 8-)
Thanks~
ArcherLove
1,434 posts
Joined March 2013
ArcherLove
I will try to do m4m anyway ;w;
sekalian belajar mod 4K :U

mod
collumn = 1~4

[4K Basic]

00:21:375 (21375|2) - move to 4 ? then 00:21:515 (21515|3) - move to 2 ? then 00:21:794 (21794|1) - move to 1 ?
00:22:212 (22212|0) - move to 3 ? 00:22:352 (22352|1) - move to 1 ?
00:23:468 (23468|2,23608|3) - Ctrl J, then 00:23:747 (23747|1) - move to 1 ?
00:24:166 - add note here :T, then clap/finish ?
00:25:701 ~ 00:37:561 - kok agak sama ya .. patternnya ? try to Ctrl J / Ctrl H, supaya jadi agak beda gitu :D ? di Kiai yang ke 2 juga sama ..

[4K Novice]

00:13:282 - add note on 1 ?
00:15:515 - add note on 4 ?

sorry can't do more than this ;w; 4K so hard ;;

goooood luck~
Ichigaki
1,767 posts
Joined February 2013
Topic Starter
Ichigaki

ArcherLove wrote:

I will try to do m4m anyway ;w;
sekalian belajar mod 4K :U

mod
collumn = 1~4

[4K Basic]

00:21:375 (21375|2) - move to 4 ? then 00:21:515 (21515|3) - move to 2 ? then 00:21:794 (21794|1) - move to 1 ?
00:22:212 (22212|0) - move to 3 ? 00:22:352 (22352|1) - move to 1 ?
00:23:468 (23468|2,23608|3) - Ctrl J, then 00:23:747 (23747|1) - move to 1 ? no change here
00:24:166 - add note here :T, then clap/finish ? Nope, i didn't want to make the harder
00:25:701 ~ 00:37:561 - kok agak sama ya .. patternnya ? try to Ctrl J / Ctrl H, supaya jadi agak beda gitu :D ? di Kiai yang ke 2 juga sama .. Yup, emang sama. Pengen aja naruh yang beatnya gede di 4 terus

[4K Novice]

00:13:282 - add note on 1 ?
00:15:515 - add note on 4 ?
No change
sorry can't do more than this ;w; 4K so hard ;;

goooood luck~
Thanks~ :oops:
Harbyter
Beatmap Nominator
1,372 posts
Joined October 2011
Harbyter
Hello :D

here my little mod from the request

Column -1-2-3-4-


BASIC Lv. 5
i know it's a Easy difficult but here the sound is really high for only 1 note i think and the sequence is slow,so you can add some notes there

00:12:166 - add note 1?
00:13:282 - here too
00:14:398 - ~
00:15:515 - ~
00:16:631 - ~
00:17:747 - ~
00:18:864 - ~
----

00:24:584 (24584|0) - start this LN here 00:24:375 -
00:25:003 - add note 2
00:29:050 (29050|0) - start this LN here 00:28:771 -
00:33:515 (33515|2) - start this LN here 00:33:236 -
00:33:933 - add note 1
00:37:701 - add LN in col 3 and end here 00:37:980 -
00:37:980 (37980|2) - move this LN in col 2
01:22:631 (82631|0) - start this LN here 01:22:352 -
01:23:050 - add note 2
01:26:817 - add LN in col 1 and end here 01:27:096 -
01:31:561 (91561|2) - start this LN here 01:31:282 -
01:31:980 - add note 1
01:35:747 - add LN in col 3 and end here 01:36:026 -
01:36:724 - add note 2
01:38:119 - missing something?
01:42:584 - ~
01:47:050 - ~
01:51:515 - ~

NOVICE Lv. 7
01:38:119 - some problem like in the BASIC Lv. 5

EXHAUST Lv. 15
00:47:050 - add note 1
00:47:189 - add note 1
00:47:189 (47189|2) - move note 3 in col 2
----

from here 00:47:468 - to here 01:03:375 - i think if you put just 1 note in the red line it will be more enjoyable to play

that's all, nice song and good luck for the rank :) hope my mod will be helpfull.
Ichigaki
1,767 posts
Joined February 2013
Topic Starter
Ichigaki

Harbyter wrote:

Hello :D

here my little mod from the request

Column -1-2-3-4-


BASIC Lv. 5
i know it's a Easy difficult but here the sound is really high for only 1 note i think and the sequence is slow,so you can add some notes there

00:12:166 - add note 1?
00:13:282 - here too
00:14:398 - ~
00:15:515 - ~
00:16:631 - ~
00:17:747 - ~
00:18:864 - ~
----

00:24:584 (24584|0) - start this LN here 00:24:375 -
00:25:003 - add note 2
00:29:050 (29050|0) - start this LN here 00:28:771 -
00:33:515 (33515|2) - start this LN here 00:33:236 -
00:33:933 - add note 1
00:37:701 - add LN in col 3 and end here 00:37:980 -
00:37:980 (37980|2) - move this LN in col 2
01:22:631 (82631|0) - start this LN here 01:22:352 -
01:23:050 - add note 2
01:26:817 - add LN in col 1 and end here 01:27:096 -
01:31:561 (91561|2) - start this LN here 01:31:282 -
01:31:980 - add note 1
01:35:747 - add LN in col 3 and end here 01:36:026 -
01:36:724 - add note 2
01:38:119 - missing something?
01:42:584 - ~
01:47:050 - ~
01:51:515 - ~

NOVICE Lv. 7
01:38:119 - some problem like in the BASIC Lv. 5

EXHAUST Lv. 15
00:47:050 - add note 1
00:47:189 - add note 1
00:47:189 (47189|2) - move note 3 in col 2
----

from here 00:47:468 - to here 01:03:375 - i think if you put just 1 note in the red line it will be more enjoyable to play

that's all, nice song and good luck for the rank :) hope my mod will be helpfull.
Applied all, except BASIC :(
Thanks for your mod ;)
[ Acorn ]
37 posts
Joined October 2014
[ Acorn ]
Hi ~

from 'http://osu.ppy.sh/forum/p/3443759/'



Column Format
| 0 | 1 | 2 | 3 |


MOD
BASIC Lv5
00:05:050 (5050|3) - move note 2
00:07:282 (7282|2) - move note 3
00:40:631 ~ 00:43:143 - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2145862
00:43:422 ~ 00:45:933 - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2145858

01:53:747 (113747|3) - move note 1
01:54:305 (114305|0) - move LN 3
i think..
01:54:305 (114305|0) sound is higher than 01:53:747 (113747|3) sound.
thus 01:54:305 (114305|0) is to be in the right than 01:53:747 (113747|3)
(i have to know..the more high notes should be in the right. cause it is better hit feeling)


this map is so hard to Beginner ;)



NOVICE Lv8

00:04:491 (4491|2) - move note 3
00:04:631 (4631|3) - move note 2
00:04:491 (4491|2)'s sound is highest than others

00:08:538 ~ 00:09:375 - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2145910
00:08:957 (8957|3) sound is also highest ;)

00:11:608 ~ 00:19:980
idea ! - if more using drum sound, it is better !

01:15:236 ~ 01:16:352 - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2145939
01:36:026 ~ 01:56:468 that's PERFECT ! dat LN pattern..! i love it xD

i think..
sense using LN is good!



ADVANCED Lv11
00:05:050 (5050|0,5050|2) - move note 1, 3
00:05:189 (5189|1) - move note 0
00:07:003 (7003|2) - move note 3
00:07:143 (7143|3,7143|1) - move note 0, 2
00:09:654 ~ 00:11:189 - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2145999

01:06:026 - add note 3
01:08:119 (68119|3) - move note 1
01:08:259 - add note 3
01:10:352 (70352|2) - move note 1
01:10:491 - add note 2
01:12:724 - add note 2
if add note, it will be more IMPACT ! ;)

01:14:119 ~ 01:16:212 - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2146064
just my idea ;)

01:18:584 ~ END - GOOOOOOOOOOD JOB



EXHAUST Lv15

00:00:724 (724|2) - end 00:02:678
00:03:933 ~ 00:04:910 - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2146104
00:08:259 ~ 00:09:375 - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2146092

00:48:305 (48305|0) - remove
00:49:422 (49422|3) - ^
00:49:980 (49980|0) - ^
00:52:212 (52212|3) - ^
00:52:771 (52771|3) - ^
00:53:329 (53329|2) - ^
00:53:887 (53887|0) - ^
00:54:445 (54445|3) - ^
00:55:561 (55561|2) - ^
00:56:398 (56398|0,56677|3,57236|0,57794|0,58352|2,58910|3,61143|2,61701|2,62259|3,62817|0,63375|0) - remove
this notes are almost no hit feeling..thus need not (just my idea ;))

01:16:212 ~ 01:18:584 NICE !

very hard map lol



this song vey cooooooooool !

i have a good time~

plz M4M xD

http://osu.ppy.sh/s/222894


Good Luck for the Rank ! :)
Ichigaki
1,767 posts
Joined February 2013
Topic Starter
Ichigaki

[ Acorn ] wrote:

Hi ~

from 'http://osu.ppy.sh/forum/p/3443759/'



Column Format
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MOD
BASIC Lv5
00:05:050 (5050|3) - move note 2 Applied and change some pattern above it
00:07:282 (7282|2) - move note 3 Rejected, jack is must be avoided here
00:40:631 ~ 00:43:143 - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2145862 Same reason with above, my pattern there is to make the player not boring, though
00:43:422 ~ 00:45:933 - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2145858 ^

01:53:747 (113747|3) - move note 1
01:54:305 (114305|0) - move LN 3
i think..
01:54:305 (114305|0) sound is higher than 01:53:747 (113747|3) sound.
thus 01:54:305 (114305|0) is to be in the right than 01:53:747 (113747|3)
(i have to know..the more high notes should be in the right. cause it is better hit feeling)
Well, the LN is have low sound, different with 01:54:305 (114305|3) - . That's why i put the note to the right, and LN to the left. I think it's better to make it more playable.

this map is so hard to Beginner ;) OAO

NOVICE Lv8

00:04:491 (4491|2) - move note 3
00:04:631 (4631|3) - move note 2
00:04:491 (4491|2)'s sound is highest than others

00:08:538 ~ 00:09:375 - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2145910
00:08:957 (8957|3) sound is also highest ;)

00:11:608 ~ 00:19:980
idea ! - if more using drum sound, it is better !

01:15:236 ~ 01:16:352 - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2145939
01:36:026 ~ 01:56:468 that's PERFECT ! dat LN pattern..! i love it xD

i think..
sense using LN is good!



ADVANCED Lv11
00:05:050 (5050|0,5050|2) - move note 1, 3
00:05:189 (5189|1) - move note 0
00:07:003 (7003|2) - move note 3
00:07:143 (7143|3,7143|1) - move note 0, 2
00:09:654 ~ 00:11:189 - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2145999

01:06:026 - add note 3
01:08:119 (68119|3) - move note 1
01:08:259 - add note 3
01:10:352 (70352|2) - move note 1
01:10:491 - add note 2
01:12:724 - add note 2
if add note, it will be more IMPACT ! ;)

01:14:119 ~ 01:16:212 - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2146064
just my idea ;)

01:18:584 ~ END - GOOOOOOOOOOD JOB



EXHAUST Lv15

00:00:724 (724|2) - end 00:02:678
00:03:933 ~ 00:04:910 - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2146104
00:08:259 ~ 00:09:375 - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2146092

00:48:305 (48305|0) - remove
00:49:422 (49422|3) - ^
00:49:980 (49980|0) - ^
00:52:212 (52212|3) - ^
00:52:771 (52771|3) - ^
00:53:329 (53329|2) - ^
00:53:887 (53887|0) - ^
00:54:445 (54445|3) - ^
00:55:561 (55561|2) - ^
00:56:398 (56398|0,56677|3,57236|0,57794|0,58352|2,58910|3,61143|2,61701|2,62259|3,62817|0,63375|0) - remove
this notes are almost no hit feeling..thus need not (just my idea ;))

01:16:212 ~ 01:18:584 NICE !

very hard map lol

Some mods applied, thanks :)


this song vey cooooooooool !

i have a good time~

plz M4M xD

http://osu.ppy.sh/s/222894


Good Luck for the Rank ! :)
arcwinolivirus
1,588 posts
Joined October 2012
arcwinolivirus
"Arcwinolivirus BAT checking/modding"

Take note that I am focusing on note patterns, comfortability, placements and consistency.
Also, do not be afraid to reject some parts of my mod but reason them out with sense.


[General]
Audio: OK!
BG: OK!
BPM: OK!
Offset: OK!
Preview Time: OK!
AiMod:
• Not indicated in AiMod but.. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2153550
Some notes are not snapped especially at EXHAUST difficulty. I suggest you to re-snap all notes to avoid this issue (Because I already encountered this issue in my Megitsune map resulting delay ranking). To be sure, Re-snap all notes in each difficulty. But before you do that, apply the mod below first!

Column:
      _ _ _ _
4K - |1|2|3|4|

[BASIC Lv. 5]
SPOILER
00:02:678 (2678|1) - move to 1 better to start both middle finger and also not the same pitch/instru as 00:02:957 (2957|1) -

00:10:352 - add note to 4. Same sound as 00:10:631 (10631|2,10910|1) -

00:46:212 - I suggest to add LN for the raising sound and to fill the empty feeling on this part.

01:04:073 - ^

01:04:631 - ^

01:23:050 - add note. beatsound and also melody sound. consistent here.

01:31:980 - ^
[NOVICE Lv. 8]
SPOILER
00:00:724 (724|0) - should start at 00:00:584 since the raising sound starts there. listen at 25% playback rate also full volume.

00:25:003 - add note to 1 synth here.

00:31:980 (31980|3) - move to 3 for pitch.

00:46:212 - add LN for the rising sound.

01:04:073 (64073|3) - move this to 01:03:933 since the raising sound started there. also extend the LN length if applied.

01:07:422 (67422|2,67422|0,67840|0,67840|2,68259|0,68259|3) - ctrl h this since it has different pitch than previous.

01:11:887 (71887|0,71887|2,72305|0,72305|2,72724|0,72724|3) - ^

01:16:212 (76212|1) - What is this LN for? I suggest to make it single note and..

01:16:352 - add note. consistent beatsound.

01:36:026 (96026|3) - remove. since you dont add other LNs like this 01:31:561 (91561|2) -
[ADVANCED Lv. 11]
SPOILER
00:00:724 (724|1) - should start at 00:00:584 like previous.

00:09:933 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2153510
• Single notes there are following the melodic piano
• Last 2-noter selected is for the strong high piano.

00:11:468 - add 2-noters here. same sound as 00:11:189 (11189|2,11189|1) -

00:38:538 , 00:39:096 , 00:39:375 - why no notes here like 00:39:654 (39654|0,39933|0,40212|0) . Suggesting to add.

00:45:096 (45096|2) - remove to avoid 3-noter press since no strong sound happened here compared to 01:54:305 (114305|0,114305|3,114305|2) - which has strong cymbals.

00:46:212 - suggest to add LN for the other raising sound effect.

until chorus - looking good so far :3/
[EXHAUST Lv. 15]
SPOILER
00:00:724 (724|2) - just like before. start 00:00:584

00:46:771 (46771|0,46840|3,46910|0,46980|3) - remove these notes. The sound here is not that strong to be 2-noters. It is rather a hithat-like sound. After applying..

00:47:189 - add note to 3. snare-like sound like 00:47:049 (47049|1,47050|0) -

01:04:073 - add note. synth sound here.
01:04:631 - ^
01:04:910 - ^
01:04:980 - ^
01:05:050 - ^

01:15:236 (75236|1,75375|1,75514|1,75653|0) - remove. the very strong volume for snare started at 01:15:794
[Overall]
Cool song but too complicated to map for @.@ I think your 4k mapset for it is also cool~ Good luck :)
Ichigaki
1,767 posts
Joined February 2013
Topic Starter
Ichigaki
Thanks arcwin >,<)b I'll post it here tomorrow :)

arcwinolivirus wrote:

"Arcwinolivirus BAT checking/modding"

Take note that I am focusing on note patterns, comfortability, placements and consistency.
Also, do not be afraid to reject some parts of my mod but reason them out with sense.


[General]
Audio: OK!
BG: OK!
BPM: OK!
Offset: OK!
Preview Time: OK!
AiMod:
• Not indicated in AiMod but.. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2153550
Some notes are not snapped especially at EXHAUST difficulty. I suggest you to re-snap all notes to avoid this issue (Because I already encountered this issue in my Megitsune map resulting delay ranking). To be sure, Re-snap all notes in each difficulty. But before you do that, apply the mod below first! Fixed

Column:
      _ _ _ _
4K - |1|2|3|4|

[BASIC Lv. 5]
SPOILER
00:02:678 (2678|1) - move to 1 better to start both middle finger and also not the same pitch/instru as 00:02:957 (2957|1) - Fixed

00:10:352 - add note to 4. Same sound as 00:10:631 (10631|2,10910|1) - Fixed

00:46:212 - I suggest to add LN for the raising sound and to fill the empty feeling on this part. Fixed

01:04:073 - ^ Fixed

01:04:631 - ^ Fixed

01:23:050 - add note. beatsound and also melody sound. consistent here. Fixed

01:31:980 - ^ Fixed

[NOVICE Lv. 8]
SPOILER
00:00:724 (724|0) - should start at 00:00:584 since the raising sound starts there. listen at 25% playback rate also full volume. Fixed

00:25:003 - add note to 1 synth here. Fixed

00:31:980 (31980|3) - move to 3 for pitch. Fixed

00:46:212 - add LN for the rising sound. Fixed

01:04:073 (64073|3) - move this to 01:03:933 since the raising sound started there. also extend the LN length if applied. Fixed

01:07:422 (67422|2,67422|0,67840|0,67840|2,68259|0,68259|3) - ctrl h this since it has different pitch than previous. Fixed

01:11:887 (71887|0,71887|2,72305|0,72305|2,72724|0,72724|3) - ^ Fixed

01:16:212 (76212|1) - What is this LN for? I suggest to make it single note and.. Fixed

01:16:352 - add note. consistent beatsound. Added to 4th

01:36:026 (96026|3) - remove. since you dont add other LNs like this 01:31:561 (91561|2) - Fixed

[ADVANCED Lv. 11]
SPOILER
00:00:724 (724|1) - should start at 00:00:584 like previous. Fixed

00:09:933 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2153510 Fixed
• Single notes there are following the melodic piano
• Last 2-noter selected is for the strong high piano.

00:11:468 - add 2-noters here. same sound as 00:11:189 (11189|2,11189|1) - Fixed

00:38:538 - , 00:39:096 - , 00:39:375 - why no notes here like 00:39:654 (39654|0,39933|0,40212|0) . Suggesting to add. Nope, please hear it in 25%. I'm pretty sure that the little sound is only appear in 00:38:817 - in my first pattern

00:45:096 (45096|2) - remove to avoid 3-noter press since no strong sound happened here compared to 01:54:305 (114305|0,114305|3,114305|2) - which has strong cymbals. Fixed

00:46:212 - suggest to add LN for the other raising sound effect. Fixed

until chorus - looking good so far :3/ >,<)
[EXHAUST Lv. 15]
SPOILER
00:00:724 (724|2) - just like before. start 00:00:584 Fixed

00:46:771 (46771|0,46840|3,46910|0,46980|3) - remove these notes. The sound here is not that strong to be 2-noters. It is rather a hithat-like sound. After applying.. Removed

00:47:189 - add note to 3. snare-like sound like 00:47:049 (47049|1,47050|0) - Added

01:04:073 - add note. synth sound here.
01:04:631 - ^
01:04:910 - ^
01:04:980 - ^
01:05:050 - ^ Added all

01:15:236 (75236|1,75375|1,75514|1,75653|0) - remove. the very strong volume for snare started at 01:15:794 but i think it's started from 01:15:654 - , so only note before that timing removed
[Overall]
Cool song but too complicated to map for @.@ I think your 4k mapset for it is also cool~ Good luck :) Thanks :)
Ayachi-
2,261 posts
Joined November 2013
Ayachi-
Hello~ from queue
1 2 3 4
[Advanced]
00:42:724 (42724|0) - normal note
00:44:957 (44957|1) - ^
01:04:631 (64631|2,64910|2) - ^
01:47:050 - Add a LN, same as other LN
01:51:515 - ^
Red was in the first 2 diffs
I may miss something similar like that

[Exhaust]
00:42:724 (42724|1) - normal note or add LN for every of this sound
00:44:957 (44957|2) - ^
01:16:212 (76212|0) - normal note and add a note at 01:16:352 - or remove a note at 01:16:491 -
01:38:119 - LN till 01:38:398 -
01:47:050 - add LN , this is actually like this one 01:46:771 (106771|1) - ,just different pitch

Nice map, nice song
good luck
Ichigaki
1,767 posts
Joined February 2013
Topic Starter
Ichigaki

[ S a k u r a ] wrote:

Hello~ from queue
1 2 3 4
[Advanced]
00:42:724 (42724|0) - normal note Well, i'd like to keep it. It's the effect imo
00:44:957 (44957|1) - ^ Same reason with above
01:04:631 (64631|2,64910|2) - ^ Fixed
01:47:050 - Add a LN, same as other LN // What diff? There's no LN here...
01:51:515 - ^ // Same reason with above
Red was in the first 2 diffs
I may miss something similar like that

[Exhaust]
00:42:724 (42724|1) - normal note or add LN for every of this sound I'd like to keep it
00:44:957 (44957|2) - ^ Same with above
01:16:212 (76212|0) - normal note and add a note at 01:16:352 - or remove a note at 01:16:491 - Same with above
01:38:119 - LN till 01:38:398 - No change.
01:47:050 - add LN , this is actually like this one 01:46:771 (106771|1) - ,just different pitch No change.

Nice map, nice song
good luck
Sorry for rejecting all your mods in Exhaust. I'd like to keep it. Yeah, you know why :)
Thanks a lot Sakura, I'd like to appreciate you with kudos~ :3
Deep Sea
1,947 posts
Joined June 2013
Deep Sea
Hello ichi
mod ready

[BASIC Lv. 5]
00:12:166 - add note
00:13:282 - ^
00:14:398 - ^
00:15:515 - ^
00:16:631 - ^
00:17:747 - ^
00:18:864 - ^
01:05:608 (65608|3) - move to 3
01:07:840 (67840|0) - move to 2

[NOVICE Lv.8]
00:23:747 - add note to 1
00:25:980 - add note
01:06:026 (66026|0,66026|3) - maybe LN?
01:08:259 (68259|0,68259|3) - ^
01:10:491 (70491|3,70491|0) - ^
01:12:724 (72724|0,72724|3) - ^
01:37:003 - add note
01:38:119 - ^
01:39:236 - ^
01:40:352 - ^
01:41:468 - ^
01:42:584 - ^
01:44:817 - ^
01:47:050 - ^
01:48:166 - ^
01:49:282 - ^
01:50:398 - ^
01:51:515 - ^
01:52:631 - ^

Good luck!
Ichigaki
1,767 posts
Joined February 2013
Topic Starter
Ichigaki

[Shana Lesus] wrote:

Hello ichi
mod ready

[BASIC Lv. 5]
00:12:166 - add note
00:13:282 - ^
00:14:398 - ^
00:15:515 - ^
00:16:631 - ^
00:17:747 - ^
00:18:864 - ^
01:05:608 (65608|3) - move to 3
01:07:840 (67840|0) - move to 2

All applied I thought your 'add note' mod will make the stars went up, but it didn't have affect, lol
[NOVICE Lv.8]
00:23:747 - add note to 1 Rejected, i don't follow anything except the LN sound one
00:25:980 - add note Same with above
01:06:026 (66026|0,66026|3) - maybe LN?
01:08:259 (68259|0,68259|3) - ^
01:10:491 (70491|3,70491|0) - ^
01:12:724 (72724|0,72724|3) - ^
01:37:003 - add note
01:38:119 - ^
01:39:236 - ^
01:40:352 - ^
01:41:468 - ^
01:42:584 - ^
01:44:817 - ^
01:47:050 - ^
01:48:166 - ^
01:49:282 - ^
01:50:398 - ^
01:51:515 - ^
01:52:631 - ^

Reject the part which already have end of LN there, but mostly applied
Good luck!
Thanks a lot, Shana :)
Danielslz9
222 posts
Joined April 2014
Danielslz9
Hi Mod because I love this map
Column Fornat |1|2|3|4|
[NOVICE Lv. 8]
01:38:538 Move to 3

[ADVANCED Lv. 11]
00:12:166 Add note
00:13:282 -^
00:14:398 - ^
00:15:515 -^
00:16:631 -^
00:17:747 -^
The sound is more strong and I think that the player will enjoy it
-----------------------------------------------------
00:46:980 Move to 4
00:47:050 Move to 3
This I strongly recommended
--------------------------------------

[EXHAUST Lv. 15]
00:25:003 Move the notes to ( 1 2)
00:25:282 (25282|1) Move to 3
00:29:468 Delete 1 note?
3 little Stars
Ichigaki
1,767 posts
Joined February 2013
Topic Starter
Ichigaki

Danielslz9 wrote:

Hi Mod because I love this map
Column Fornat |1|2|3|4|
[NOVICE Lv. 8]
01:38:538 Move to 3

[ADVANCED Lv. 11]
00:12:166 Add note
00:13:282 -^
00:14:398 - ^
00:15:515 -^
00:16:631 -^
00:17:747 -^
The sound is more strong and I think that the player will enjoy it // All rejected
-----------------------------------------------------
00:46:980 Move to 4
00:47:050 Move to 3
This I strongly recommended
--------------------------------------

[EXHAUST Lv. 15]
00:25:003 Move the notes to ( 1 2)
00:25:282 (25282|1) Move to 3
00:29:468 Delete 1 note? // Rejected, the sound is louder here
3 little Stars
Anyway, thanks :)
Starry-
osu! Alumni
1,074 posts
Joined December 2012
Starry-
Hi! From Starry's MANIA Modding Queue~

[General]

Timing: ☑
Audio: ☑
BG: ☑
Metadata: ☒
A few things I'd like to point out:
  1. There is a '4K EXHAUST LV.14' difficulty, unsubmitted, in the folder. Delete this.
  2. There is also two copies of the BG, both 'bg' and 'girl' jpegs, delete one.
  3. The background is not applied to Novice Lv. 8 and Exhaust Lv. 15
  4. I suggest you rename each difficulty to not have the space inbetween 'Lv.' and '##'. For example, Lv. 15 -> Lv.15. This is because most other ranked maps have this layout, and if someone was to search 'Lv.15' they would not get your map in the search.
Preview Point: ☑
AiMod: ☑

I see you use Finishes for a lot of the basic hitsounds in the map. This usually isn't recommended, as anyone who disables hitsounds will have a really hard time playing. You are best off making the finish sound 'hit-normal' instead.
 ___ ___ ___ ___
| 0 | 1 | 2 | 3 |		(4K)

[BASIC Lv. 5]
SPOILER
To be honest, I'd prefer OD7 HP7, and make NOVICE Lv. 8 OD7.5 HP7.5. Especially since there isn't many LNs in this diff until the end.
Also, throughout the diff, most patterns seem to be going only one way. Eg. Column 1 -> 2 -> 3, barely ever the other way around. Just a pointer, it may make the player get a bit bored of playing the same patterns. (Only my opinion.)

00:04:631 (4631|1) - Sort of faded piano sound is higher pitch, move to 2.
00:04:910 (4910|2) - Then move this to 3 for playability.
00:19:282 (19282|0,19980|0) - Feels kinda empty inbetween here. Maybe make 00:19:282 (19282|0) - an LN at 3?
00:19:980 (19980|0) - From hear until 00:37:980 (37980|2) - the patterns, albeit nice, only move one way. Maybe try rearranging some?
01:01:980 (61980|2,62119|0) - CTRL H this, then move 01:02:677 (62677|0) - to 3. Feels better and isn't the same things repeated.
01:09:654 (69654|0,70073|3) - CTRL H for pitch relevancy.
01:11:887 (71887|3,72305|0) - ^
01:18:584 (78584|3) - Again, from here to 01:36:026 (96026|3) - , all patterns all going one way.

Overall a solid Basic~ May feel quite hard though for newer players.

[ADVANCED Lv. 11]
SPOILER
Everything looks good so far~ Again, the hitnormal sounds get really annoying, so consider making your custom hitfinish the hitnormal.

00:14:119 (14119|2) - This slight pattern can be rearranged to be played better according to pitch. Consider:
00:14:119 (14119|2) - to 0
00:14:259 (14259|2) - to 2
00:14:398 (14398|2) - to 1
00:14:538 (14538|1) - to 2

00:49:282 (49282|3) - You always have the snares a space apart, so move this to 2. (feels better)
00:58:771 (58771|3) - ^
01:08:259 (68259|2) - Feels better at column3.
01:52:631 (112631|0) - Move to 3, feels better to play.

Very nice diff~

[EXHAUST Lv. 15]
SPOILER
Apply BG~

00:11:608 (11608|0) - This might catch a lot of people out in a sightread.
00:18:166 (18166|3,18445|3,18584|3,18864|3,19003|3,19282|3) - I feel like way too many notes in column 3 here. Maybe try and rearrange, add some more notes to 1.
00:29:050 (29050|0,29050|3,29119|1,29189|2,29259|3,29329|2,29329|0,29398|3,29398|1,29468|2,29468|3,29468|0) - Asking for spam ;w; col3 looks cluttered again.
01:16:212 (76212|3) - Only SV in the whole mapset; lots of people will miss. ;w; Maybe tone it down a bit, or remove completely.

Can't find much else, the patterns seem consistent. Nice. :3

Overall a nice mapset - most of the issues come from metadata and hitsounding. Sorry I couldn't mod Novice, it looks good but I'm running out of time~ have a star instead. Goodluck!! <3
Ichigaki
1,767 posts
Joined February 2013
Topic Starter
Ichigaki
Thanks for your mod, Starry. All mod accepted :)
REDYUMiKA
485 posts
Joined August 2013
REDYUMiKA
Yumi's 4K Chart Check (Column:1,2,3,4)
---> Type:GM, Language:

[BASIC Lv.5]
00:24:584 (24584|0) - I guess you probably chose the way of putting LN along the drum though, a little strange LN be alone here.
as the one of easy diff, basically we would have to make a relaxing atmosphere and more good streams to hit them.
I recommend you add notes to 00:24:445 - to 3 / 00:24:724 - for 4, how's it? ...(*1)

00:28:771 - The relevance is gone as the above. add a note to 3 ...(*2)

00:33:375 - ^ add a note to 1 //(*1)
00:33:654 - ^ add a note to 2 //(*1)

00:37:701 - ^ add a note to 2 //(*2)

00:51:375 (51375|1,51515|0,51654|1) - The stair notes which was set to both the points of start/end-drum are mixed.
00:51:515 (51515|0) - move to 4, 00:51:654 (51654|1) - move to 1, divide them clearly to settle the conflicting notes.

01:22:491 - ^ add a note to 3 //(*1)
01:22:771 - ^ add a note to 4 //(*1)

01:26:817 - ^ add a note to 1 //(*2)

01:31:422 - ^ add a note to 1 //(*1)
01:31:701 - ^ add a note to 2 //(*1)

01:35:747 - ^ add a note to 3 //(*2)

01:37:840 (97840|1) - This usage isn't good to express the electric's holding, I suggest you change to normal notes.
01:37:840 - add a note to 4, 01:38:119 - add a note to 3 ...(*3)

01:46:771 (106771|0) - ^ 01:46:771 - add a note to 1, 01:47:050 - add a note to 4 //(*3)
01:51:236 (111236|0) - ^ 01:51:236 - add a note to 4, 01:51:515 - add a note to 1 //(*3)

[NOVICE Lv.8]
00:07:143 (7143|2,7282|2) - I'm not 100% sure but if really thinking to place this soft-jack as expressing the piano's,
00:07:003 (7003|3) - / 00:07:422 (7422|1) - / 00:07:701 (7701|1) - / 00:07:980 (7980|1) - remove them to take a balance.

00:18:305 - ~ 00:20:538 - Nice usage

00:23:468 (23468|2) - move to 2 for the pitches.

01:22:491 - & 01:22:771 - Just the same reason as (*1) please consider to fix referring the above solutions.
01:26:817 - ^ (*2)
01:31:422 - & 01:31:701 - ^ (*1)
01:35:747 - ^ (*2)

[ADVANCED Lv.11]
Placement is very nice, I ensure your win and also hope your style will be kept so forever.

00:29:468 (29468|1) - move to 3

00:47:189 (47189|1,47329|0) - Ctrl+J is well because of..
00:47:050 (47050|2,47189|0) - one is add a drum pitch for these notes,
00:47:329 (47329|1,47329|2,47329|3) - furthermore you could regard them as some solidary sounds.

01:04:073 (64073|1) - really nukes, remove it.

01:08:677 (68677|2,68817|1) - I wonder why didn't you apply the pitch of electric's to that?
It's a just small care but a significant thing for players leaving out one's style. (e.g.1)

01:13:003 (73003|2,73073|3,73143|2) - ^

01:17:957 (77957|0) - remove it, there is no reason to emphasize.

01:39:236 - ~ 01:40:352 - short-LN is a little strange, please arrange your placement referring to (e.g.2)
01:47:887 - ~ 01:49:282 - almost the same reason as the above. (e.g.3)
I haven't mentioned about the similar of 01:43:980 (103980|1) - & 01:52:910 (112910|0) - but they works good.

[EXHAUST Lv.14]
00:38:817 (38817|1) - That can be said in the ADVANCED also, this note might make no sense even you gonna season it.

00:47:468 (47468|0,47747|3) - It seems like a bit monotonous, and placement is not good as well. (e.g.4)

00:52:212 (52212|3) - move to 2, associate 00:51:794 (51794|1,51933|1) - with it as the end of 2-snare's rhythm.

00:56:398 (56398|0,56677|3) - the same point of view as (e.g.4)

01:13:282 - ~ 01:13:561 - ^ (e.g.1) ---> (e.g.5)

01:15:305 (75305|2) - remove, it would interfere the drum's running.

01:36:445 - ~ (END) // You could basically use the other diff's suggestion as a reference with regard to the placement.

Good Luck. :oops:
Akasha-
Nomination Assessment Team
4,418 posts
Joined April 2013
Akasha-


An - LittleGameStar [Osu!Mania Modding]

===

From Kuo Kyoka's osu!mania Modding Queue

Mod Requested by Ichigaki


[Generals]
- BPM: Okay
- Offset: Okay
- AiMod: No Problem
- Tags: Okay
- BG: Okay
- Kiai: Okay

Column
| 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 |


[BASIC Lv.5]

SPOILER
  1. 00:20:538 - add a note cause of strong beat
  2. 00:29:468 - same
  3. 00:38:398 - same
  4. 00:47:329 - same
  5. 01:18:584 - add a note in 1
  6. 01:27:515 - add a note in 3
    I really love this diff, nice charts, I don't want to have a lot change in it ~ Nice works

[NOVICE Lv.8]

SPOILER
  1. 00:02:678 - add a note
  2. 00:04:631 (4631|2) - move to 1 and change to LN, end at the next note would be better
  3. 00:09:096 (9096|1) - ^
  4. 00:11:608 - strong beat, add a note
  5. 00:20:538 - strong beat
  6. 00:23:608 - add a note in here, if you following the sound like of 00:23:050 (23050|0,23189|3) -
  7. 00:29:468 - add a note in 3
  8. 00:32:538 - miss a note
  9. 00:38:398 (38398|3) - actually, the sound is end at 00:40:631 - use 25% to hear it
  10. 01:27:515 - strong beat

[ADVANCED Lv.11]

SPOILER
  1. Remove hitsound on 00:02:678 (2678|0) - , in here not only have bass
  2. 00:10:352 (10352|2) - add hitsound-finish is better
  3. 00:11:608 - add a note
  4. 00:19:980 - I think in here have the sound better have this pattern: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2318526
  5. 00:29:050 - try this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2318529
  6. 00:31:701 (31701|0) - add finish in here
  7. 00:33:375 (33375|2) - add finish and 00:33:654 (33654|3) - add clap
  8. 00:34:352 (34352|2) - add finish
  9. 00:37:980 - try this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2318534
  10. 00:46:771 - try this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2318535
  11. 01:14:119 - to 01:15:236 - you used single note, 01:15:236 - to 01:16:352 - should add double notes in every 1/1 and 1/2 beat, pitch high up
  12. 01:17:957 - to 01:18:584 - try this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2318550
  13. 01:27:096 - try this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2318555
  14. 01:36:026 - try this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2318557
  15. 01:36:724 (96724|1) - 01:37:422 (97422|1) - 01:38:398 (98398|0,98538|3,98677|3) - 01:40:073 (100073|2) - 01:40:771 (100771|0) - 01:41:189 (101189|1) - 01:41:887 (101887|3) - 01:43:003 (103003|0,103143|0) - 01:44:538 (104538|0) - 01:45:236 (105236|3) - 01:45:654 (105654|0) - 01:46:352 (106352|0) - 01:47:468 (107468|2,107608|2) - 01:49:003 (109003|2) - 01:49:701 (109701|1) - 01:50:119 (110119|3) - 01:50:817 (110817|2) - 01:51:933 (111933|0,112073|0) - 01:53:468 (113468|1) - add hitsound for those, really anoise, because in here not much have the sound uncomfortable with this hitsounds

[EXHAUST Lv.14]

SPOILER
  1. 00:10:631 - 00:10:910 - 00:11:189 - add a note in those time
  2. 00:19:980 - try this: fun for play http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2318576
  3. 00:29:050 - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2318579
  4. 00:37:980 - try this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2318583
  5. 00:46:212 - and a long note in 1 and end with the LN in the 4th column
  6. 00:47:538 - add a note in here
  7. 01:17:957 - try this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2318587
  8. 01:27:099 - in here should do like hte before, beside from 01:27:099 - to 01:27:375 - the sound smaller than from 01:27:375 - to 01:27:515 - so can't double notes in here, try this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2318592
    After that, all thing are cool but about the hitsound from 01:18:584 - should find the notes not yet added hitsound and add it, like ADVANCED's diff
[Comment]

Nice map, I can't say much but it's really cool :3 ~
I love this song with your nice charts ~
Good luck ~ Here's my LittleStar
Mike Ace
287 posts
Joined August 2013
Mike Ace
Nice Map , Star (ﾉ◕ヮ◕)ﾉ

Ichigaki
1,767 posts
Joined February 2013
Topic Starter
Ichigaki
REDYUMiKA
Yumi's 4K Chart Check (Column:1,2,3,4)
---> Type:GM, Language:

[BASIC Lv.5]
00:24:584 (24584|0) - I guess you probably chose the way of putting LN along the drum though, a little strange LN be alone here.
as the one of easy diff, basically we would have to make a relaxing atmosphere and more good streams to hit them.
I recommend you add notes to 00:24:445 - to 3 / 00:24:724 - for 4, how's it? ...(*1)

00:28:771 - The relevance is gone as the above. add a note to 3 ...(*2)

00:33:375 - ^ add a note to 1 //(*1)
00:33:654 - ^ add a note to 2 //(*1)

00:37:701 - ^ add a note to 2 //(*2)

00:51:375 (51375|1,51515|0,51654|1) - The stair notes which was set to both the points of start/end-drum are mixed.
00:51:515 (51515|0) - move to 4, 00:51:654 (51654|1) - move to 1, divide them clearly to settle the conflicting notes.

01:22:491 - ^ add a note to 3 //(*1)
01:22:771 - ^ add a note to 4 //(*1)

01:26:817 - ^ add a note to 1 //(*2)

01:31:422 - ^ add a note to 1 //(*1)
01:31:701 - ^ add a note to 2 //(*1)

01:35:747 - ^ add a note to 3 //(*2)

01:37:840 (97840|1) - This usage isn't good to express the electric's holding, I suggest you change to normal notes.
01:37:840 - add a note to 4, 01:38:119 - add a note to 3 ...(*3)

01:46:771 (106771|0) - ^ 01:46:771 - add a note to 1, 01:47:050 - add a note to 4 //(*3)
01:51:236 (111236|0) - ^ 01:51:236 - add a note to 4, 01:51:515 - add a note to 1 //(*3)

[NOVICE Lv.8]
00:07:143 (7143|2,7282|2) - I'm not 100% sure but if really thinking to place this soft-jack as expressing the piano's,
00:07:003 (7003|3) - / 00:07:422 (7422|1) - / 00:07:701 (7701|1) - / 00:07:980 (7980|1) - remove them to take a balance.

00:18:305 - ~ 00:20:538 - Nice usage

00:23:468 (23468|2) - move to 2 for the pitches.

01:22:491 - & 01:22:771 - Just the same reason as (*1) please consider to fix referring the above solutions.
01:26:817 - ^ (*2)
01:31:422 - & 01:31:701 - ^ (*1)
01:35:747 - ^ (*2)

[ADVANCED Lv.11]
Placement is very nice, I ensure your win and also hope your style will be kept so forever.

00:29:468 (29468|1) - move to 3

00:47:189 (47189|1,47329|0) - Ctrl+J is well because of..
00:47:050 (47050|2,47189|0) - one is add a drum pitch for these notes,
00:47:329 (47329|1,47329|2,47329|3) - furthermore you could regard them as some solidary sounds.

01:04:073 (64073|1) - really nukes, remove it.

01:08:677 (68677|2,68817|1) - I wonder why didn't you apply the pitch of electric's to that?
It's a just small care but a significant thing for players leaving out one's style. (e.g.1)

01:13:003 (73003|2,73073|3,73143|2) - ^

01:17:957 (77957|0) - remove it, there is no reason to emphasize.

01:39:236 - ~ 01:40:352 - short-LN is a little strange, please arrange your placement referring to (e.g.2)
01:47:887 - ~ 01:49:282 - almost the same reason as the above. (e.g.3)
I haven't mentioned about the similar of 01:43:980 (103980|1) - & 01:52:910 (112910|0) - but they works good.

[EXHAUST Lv.14]
00:38:817 (38817|1) - That can be said in the ADVANCED also, this note might make no sense even you gonna season it.

00:47:468 (47468|0,47747|3) - It seems like a bit monotonous, and placement is not good as well. (e.g.4)

00:52:212 (52212|3) - move to 2, associate 00:51:794 (51794|1,51933|1) - with it as the end of 2-snare's rhythm.

00:56:398 (56398|0,56677|3) - the same point of view as (e.g.4)

01:13:282 - ~ 01:13:561 - ^ (e.g.1) ---> (e.g.5)

01:15:305 (75305|2) - remove, it would interfere the drum's running.

01:36:445 - ~ (END) // You could basically use the other diff's suggestion as a reference with regard to the placement.

Good Luck. :oops:

Yumika, all fixed <3

KK


An - LittleGameStar [Osu!Mania Modding]

===

From Kuo Kyoka's osu!mania Modding Queue

Mod Requested by Ichigaki Am i requested to you? I totally forgot orz


[Generals]
- BPM: Okay
- Offset: Okay
- AiMod: No Problem
- Tags: Okay
- BG: Okay
- Kiai: Okay

Column
| 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 |


[BASIC Lv.5]

SPOILER
  1. 00:20:538 - add a note cause of strong beat
  2. 00:29:468 - same
  3. 00:38:398 - same
  4. 00:47:329 - same
  5. 01:18:584 - add a note in 1
  6. 01:27:515 - add a note in 3
    I really love this diff, nice charts, I don't want to have a lot change in it ~ Nice works

All fixed

[NOVICE Lv.8]

SPOILER
  1. 00:02:678 - add a note
  2. 00:04:631 (4631|2) - move to 1 and change to LN, end at the next note would be better
  3. 00:09:096 (9096|1) - ^
  4. 00:11:608 - strong beat, add a note
  5. 00:20:538 - strong beat
  6. 00:23:608 - add a note in here, if you following the sound like of 00:23:050 (23050|0,23189|3) -
  7. 00:29:468 - add a note in 3
  8. 00:32:538 - miss a note
  9. 00:38:398 (38398|3) - actually, the sound is end at 00:40:631 - use 25% to hear it
  10. 01:27:515 - strong beat

All fixed (maybe i forgot something to reject here orz)

[ADVANCED Lv.11]

SPOILER
  1. Remove hitsound on 00:02:678 (2678|0) - , in here not only have bass
  2. 00:10:352 (10352|2) - add hitsound-finish is better
  3. 00:11:608 - add a note
  4. 00:19:980 - I think in here have the sound better have this pattern: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2318526
  5. 00:29:050 - try this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2318529
  6. 00:31:701 (31701|0) - add finish in here
  7. 00:33:375 (33375|2) - add finish and 00:33:654 (33654|3) - add clap
  8. 00:34:352 (34352|2) - add finish
  9. 00:37:980 - try this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2318534
  10. 00:46:771 - try this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2318535
  11. 01:14:119 - to 01:15:236 - you used single note, 01:15:236 - to 01:16:352 - should add double notes in every 1/1 and 1/2 beat, pitch high up
  12. 01:17:957 - to 01:18:584 - try this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2318550
  13. 01:27:096 - try this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2318555
  14. 01:36:026 - try this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2318557
  15. 01:36:724 (96724|1) - 01:37:422 (97422|1) - 01:38:398 (98398|0,98538|3,98677|3) - 01:40:073 (100073|2) - 01:40:771 (100771|0) - 01:41:189 (101189|1) - 01:41:887 (101887|3) - 01:43:003 (103003|0,103143|0) - 01:44:538 (104538|0) - 01:45:236 (105236|3) - 01:45:654 (105654|0) - 01:46:352 (106352|0) - 01:47:468 (107468|2,107608|2) - 01:49:003 (109003|2) - 01:49:701 (109701|1) - 01:50:119 (110119|3) - 01:50:817 (110817|2) - 01:51:933 (111933|0,112073|0) - 01:53:468 (113468|1) - add hitsound for those, really anoise, because in here not much have the sound uncomfortable with this hitsounds

I don't follow any 'try this', but rest is fixed

[EXHAUST Lv.14]

SPOILER
  1. 00:10:631 - 00:10:910 - 00:11:189 - add a note in those time
  2. 00:19:980 - try this: fun for play http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2318576
  3. 00:29:050 - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2318579
  4. 00:37:980 - try this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2318583
  5. 00:46:212 - and a long note in 1 and end with the LN in the 4th column
  6. 00:47:538 - add a note in here
  7. 01:17:957 - try this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2318587
  8. 01:27:099 - in here should do like hte before, beside from 01:27:099 - to 01:27:375 - the sound smaller than from 01:27:375 - to 01:27:515 - so can't double notes in here, try this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2318592
    After that, all thing are cool but about the hitsound from 01:18:584 - should find the notes not yet added hitsound and add it, like ADVANCED's diff

Same reason with ADV

[Comment]

Nice map, I can't say much but it's really cool :3 ~
I love this song with your nice charts ~
Good luck ~ Here's my LittleStar

Thanks for it, KK

Mike Ace
Nice Map , Star (ﾉ◕ヮ◕)ﾉ



Thanks >w<)/
Ryu Sei
2,898 posts
Joined October 2013
Ryu Sei
Semoga map ini cepat dirank!~
1234
[ADVANCED]
00:40:631 (40631|1,40910|1,41189|1,41468|1) - geser ke 3 untuk menghindari jack
00:43:980 (43980|0) - ke 2, lalu 00:44:538 (44538|3,44677|2) - geser 1 ke kiri
01:07:003 (67003|1) - pitch rel, ke 4
01:08:538 (68538|2,68608|3) - pitch rel, ke kiri 2
01:11:468 (71468|1) - 4 buat pitch rel
01:13:003 (73003|2,73073|3,73143|2) - ubah formasinya ke 234 untuk pitch rel
01:20:259 (80259|3) - geser ke 3, lalu
01:20:398 (80398|2,80538|3) - tukar lane (kompensasi buat pitch rel)
01:22:771 (82771|3) - pecah jadi 2 LN (kalau tidak memungkinkan abaikan)
01:25:003 (85003|2) - nggak ada suara yang mengikuti, hapus, lalu pindah semua hitsound ke 01:25:003 (85003|0) -
01:25:143 (85143|1,85282|3) - tukar lane
01:25:422 (85422|0,85561|2) - ubah formasi jadi 34
01:25:561 (85561|3) - pindah ke 1
01:26:538 (86538|1) - pindah ke 4, dan hapus 01:26:677 (86677|3) - lalu pindah hitsoundnya ke 01:26:677 (86677|0) -
01:33:933 (93933|2) - hapus karena nggak ada suara yang diikuti, pindah hitsound ke tap note
01:35:608 (95608|0,95747|2) - ubah susunan jadi 21 lalu
01:35:608 (95608|3) - hapus karena nggak ada suara yang diikuti, pindah hitsound ke tap note

Single diff mod karena yang lain nggak bisa dan dirasa cukup~
Ichigaki
1,767 posts
Joined February 2013
Topic Starter
Ichigaki

Ryu Sei wrote:

Semoga map ini cepat dirank!~
1234
[ADVANCED]
00:40:631 (40631|1,40910|1,41189|1,41468|1) - geser ke 3 untuk menghindari jack
00:43:980 (43980|0) - ke 2, lalu 00:44:538 (44538|3,44677|2) - geser 1 ke kiri
01:07:003 (67003|1) - pitch rel, ke 4
01:08:538 (68538|2,68608|3) - pitch rel, ke kiri 2
01:11:468 (71468|1) - 4 buat pitch rel
01:13:003 (73003|2,73073|3,73143|2) - ubah formasinya ke 234 untuk pitch rel
01:20:259 (80259|3) - geser ke 3, lalu
01:20:398 (80398|2,80538|3) - tukar lane (kompensasi buat pitch rel)
01:22:771 (82771|3) - pecah jadi 2 LN (kalau tidak memungkinkan abaikan)
01:25:003 (85003|2) - nggak ada suara yang mengikuti, hapus, lalu pindah semua hitsound ke 01:25:003 (85003|0) -
01:25:143 (85143|1,85282|3) - tukar lane
01:25:422 (85422|0,85561|2) - ubah formasi jadi 34
01:25:561 (85561|3) - pindah ke 1
01:26:538 (86538|1) - pindah ke 4, dan hapus 01:26:677 (86677|3) - lalu pindah hitsoundnya ke 01:26:677 (86677|0) -
01:33:933 (93933|2) - hapus karena nggak ada suara yang diikuti, pindah hitsound ke tap note
01:35:608 (95608|0,95747|2) - ubah susunan jadi 21 lalu
01:35:608 (95608|3) - hapus karena nggak ada suara yang diikuti, pindah hitsound ke tap note

Single diff mod karena yang lain nggak bisa dan dirasa cukup~
arcwinolivirus
1,588 posts
Joined October 2012
arcwinolivirus
Here's my recheck before I bubble~

Hitsound:
• Reduce volume: 50% to 40%
• personal opinion: I find the soft-hitsound normal sampleset sounds annoying and does not fit with the song. I would like to suggest to change it. Also it is louder than the soft-hitfinish. My suggestions is either to change that or to reduce the volume of the domino-sound like sound.

AiMod:
ADVANCED Lv.11 - http://puu.sh/dENf5/8a0e8be21a.png
• Unsnapped 1ms must Fix

[BASIC Lv.5]
SPOILER
01:37:840 (97840|3,98119|2) - move 1 column to left to havea right-left tap hand balance. In this way it will be comfortable.

01:42:305 (102305|3) - I recommend you to remove this LN and do the same what you did on other similar parts such as 01:46:771 , 01:51:236 or you can even do a mirrored version of 01:37:840 which is better.

Good diff~!


[NOVICE Lv.8]
SPOILER
Good to me~


[ADVANCED Lv.11]
SPOILER
Seems good to me~! just fix the unsnapped notes indicated at AiMod


[EXHAUST Lv.14]
SPOILER
• SV - looks good to me~

00:00:584 (584|2) - extend this LN until the white line like you did at ADVANCE.

00:09:654 (9654|0) - ^ same but be sure to move 00:11:608 (11608|0) to 2

00:18:305 (18305|0) - ^ then move the 00:19:980 (19980|0) to 3

01:37:561 (97561|0) - you might want to add another note for the beat. So it can be 2-noter for beat+synth sound.

01:46:491 (106491|2) - ^


Call me via forum if all done~
Ichigaki
1,767 posts
Joined February 2013
Topic Starter
Ichigaki

arcwinolivirus wrote:

Here's my recheck before I bubble~

Hitsound:
• Reduce volume: 50% to 40% Fixed to 40%
• personal opinion: I find the soft-hitsound normal sampleset sounds annoying and does not fit with the song. I would like to suggest to change it. Also it is louder than the soft-hitfinish. My suggestions is either to change that or to reduce the volume of the domino-sound like sound. I decided to remove soft-hitnormal from this mapset

AiMod:
ADVANCED Lv.11 - http://puu.sh/dENf5/8a0e8be21a.png Fixed
• Unsnapped 1ms must Fix

[BASIC Lv.5]
SPOILER
01:37:840 (97840|3,98119|2) - move 1 column to left to havea right-left tap hand balance. In this way it will be comfortable. I remove this.

01:42:305 (102305|3) - I recommend you to remove this LN and do the same what you did on other similar parts such as 01:46:771 , 01:51:236 or you can even do a mirrored version of 01:37:840 which is better. Re-arrange that part and reject this

Good diff~!


[NOVICE Lv.8]
SPOILER
Good to me~ Thanks


[ADVANCED Lv.11]
SPOILER
Seems good to me~! just fix the unsnapped notes indicated at AiMod Fixed >w<


[EXHAUST Lv.14]
SPOILER
• SV - looks good to me~ Thanks

00:00:584 (584|2) - extend this LN until the white line like you did at ADVANCE. Nope, i just apply here because the synth really really stopped there

00:09:654 (9654|0) - ^ same but be sure to move 00:11:608 (11608|0) to 2 ^

00:18:305 (18305|0) - ^ then move the 00:19:980 (19980|0) to 3 ^

01:37:561 (97561|0) - you might want to add another note for the beat. So it can be 2-noter for beat+synth sound. Sounds good, added

01:46:491 (106491|2) - ^ ^


Call me via forum if all done~
Go go~
arcwinolivirus
1,588 posts
Joined October 2012
arcwinolivirus
Re-checked AiMod, Hitsound update and re-note parts. Seems all good to me~! Bubbled!
Ichigaki
1,767 posts
Joined February 2013
Topic Starter
Ichigaki
Re-check hitsound and re-arrange some pattern in all diff, re-map some part in ADV, fix SV in EXH. Sorry for pop your bubble, arcwin ;-;)

EDIT 1 : AncuL suggestions
10:38 Ichigaki: yo
10:38 Ichigaki: bisa testplay?
10:38 AncuL: tergantung
10:39 AncuL: susah apa enggak .3.
10:39 *Ichigaki is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/492866 An - LittleGameStar [NOVICE Lv.8]]
10:39 AncuL: tapi testplay balik ya .3.
10:39 AncuL: jk
10:40 Ichigaki: udah dl?
10:40 Ichigaki: mainin yang ADV aja
10:41 *AncuL is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/492866 An - LittleGameStar]
10:41 AncuL: ok
10:43 AncuL: levelnya diganti jadi 12 orz
10:43 Ichigaki: ngapain
10:43 Ichigaki: 11 di sdvx udah susah
10:44 AncuL: 00:09:654 (9654|3) - berhentinya di 00:11:546 -  imo
10:45 Ichigaki: iyup
10:45 Ichigaki: udah tau
10:45 Ichigaki: tapi gw terusin soalnya ini adv
10:45 Ichigaki: coba cek exh
10:45 AncuL: takut sisah ya
10:45 AncuL: *susah
10:45 Ichigaki: ga juga sih
10:45 Ichigaki: ga enak aja diliat 
10:45 AncuL: lel
10:45 Ichigaki: kalau mau coba tuh testplay yang exh juga
10:46 AncuL: sip
10:46 *AncuL is playing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/492841 An - LittleGameStar [EXHAUST Lv.14]] <osu!mania> |4K|
10:48 AncuL: seriously SVbnya
10:48 AncuL: *sv
10:48 Ichigaki: jelek?
10:48 AncuL: unsightreadable
10:49 AncuL: nih
10:50 AncuL: sv 0.40 pertama di 1.16.666
10:50 AncuL: 0,40 kedua di 1.16.875
10:51 AncuL: 0.40 ketiga di 1.17.084
10:51 Ichigaki: ya udah tau pola
10:51 Ichigaki: nya
10:51 AncuL: keempat di 01:17:294 -
10:51 AncuL: begitulah
10:52 AncuL: hue gagal
10:52 AncuL: kayaknya enggak
10:53 AncuL: pattern yang itu salah
10:54 Ichigaki: trus?
10:54 Ichigaki: btw sv mod mu kutolak
10:54 AncuL: entah
10:54 AncuL: susah ngeadjustnya
10:54 Ichigaki: aku nemu yang lebih enak
10:54 AncuL: emang gagal orz
10:54 Ichigaki: pattern mana yang salah?
10:55 AncuL: sebentar
10:55 *AncuL is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/492852 An - LittleGameStar [ADVANCED Lv.11]]
10:55 AncuL: di drill
10:55 AncuL: (1212)
10:55 AncuL: 00:33:864 (33864|0) - 1 pindah ke 3
10:56 AncuL: 00:24:933 (24933|3) -  4 pindah ke 2
10:56 Ichigaki: lebih enak gitu kah?
10:56 AncuL: soalnya kalo di awal awal belom siap imo
10:56 AncuL: di awal awalnya doang
10:56 AncuL: kalo di kiai terakhir gapapa
10:59 AncuL: 01:16:352 - 01:17:957 volume kurangin jadi 20%, semua note disitu clap
10:59 AncuL: orz
10:59 AncuL: 01:16:352 - 01:17:957- volume kurangin jadi 20%, semua note disitu clap
10:59 AncuL: 01:16:352 - 01:17:957 -
10:59 AncuL: mod kacau hue
11:00 AncuL: overall bagus sul
11:00 AncuL: *sih
11:00 AncuL: oiya itu ADV
11:01 AncuL: no kudos
11:01 Ichigaki: ye, gimana gw ngasih kudosunya
11:01 Ichigaki: ngepost aja kaga lu
11:01 AncuL: lel
11:03 Ichigaki: lu bermasalah sama LNnya ga?
11:03 AncuL: yaudah gw gabakan ngepost
11:03 AncuL: kagak sekarang
11:03 AncuL: maksudnya kagak
Akasha-
Nomination Assessment Team
4,418 posts
Joined April 2013
Akasha-


An - LittleGameStar [Osu!Mania Modding]

===

From Kuo Kyoka's osu!mania Modding Queue

Mod Requested by Ichigaki


[Generals]
- BPM: Okay
- Offset: Okay
- AiMod: No Problem
- Tags: Okay
- BG: Okay
- Kiai: Okay

Column
| 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 |


“Here come of some suggest for your map, I always check fullmap, if I’m too tried I will come back soon, or only check that keys by the request! And remember to reply the mod when you’re accepcted it or not! And forget my kud if my suggest is useful ~ Thanks for requested me ~

[BASIC Lv.5]

SPOILER
  1. 01:39:515 (99515|1) - sure is this should be start at 01:39:654 - end is the same as old
  2. 01:43:980 (103980|0) - move to 01:44:119 - , end is the same as old
  3. 01:48:445 (108445|2) - move to 01:48:584 - end is the same as old
  4. 01:52:910 (112910|1) - move to 01:53:050 - end is the same as old
  5. 01:54:305 (114305|1) - move to 3
    Nice

[NOVICE Lv.8]

SPOILER
  1. Not much to do here, perfect ~ but 01:39:515 (99515|3) - 01:43:980 (103980|1) - 01:48:445 (108445|1) - 01:52:910 (112910|2) - same as basic

[ADVANCED Lv.11]

SPOILER
  1. The last part doesnt have the problem like in basic and novice, example: 01:48:445 - to 01:48:584 - have another sound with 01:48:584 - to 01:49:282 - do not incorporate it into one

[EXHAUST Lv.14]

SPOILER
  1. Here is my suggestion for the timing changes: 
    [TimingPoints]
    2678,279.06976744186,4,2,1,40,1,0
    20538,-100,4,2,1,40,0,1
    38398,-100,4,2,1,40,0,0
    76491,-50,4,2,1,23,0,0
    76561,-200,4,2,1,23,0,0
    76701,-50,4,2,1,23,0,0
    76771,-200,4,2,1,23,0,0
    76910,-50,4,2,1,23,0,0
    76980,-200,4,2,1,23,0,0
    77119,-50,4,2,1,23,0,0
    77189,-200,4,2,1,23,0,0
    77329,-50,4,2,1,23,0,0
    77398,-200,4,2,1,23,0,0
    77538,-50,4,2,1,23,0,0
    77608,-200,4,2,1,23,0,0
    77747,-50,4,2,1,23,0,0
    77817,-200,4,2,1,23,0,0
    77957,-100,4,2,1,23,0,0
    78584,-100,4,2,1,40,0,1
    96445,-100,4,2,1,40,0,0
    More Challenging but still playable, tested and successed
    And the charts seems cool for ranked now

[Comment]

Hi, came again for the requested :) See you have bubbled before but popped but I think the SVs change was fine before but you can follow my suggestion
Anyway, good luck on rebubble and ranked it :3 I love the song with your charts
Ichigaki
1,767 posts
Joined February 2013
Topic Starter
Ichigaki

Kuo Kyoka wrote:



An - LittleGameStar [Osu!Mania Modding]

===

From Kuo Kyoka's osu!mania Modding Queue

Mod Requested by Ichigaki


[Generals]
- BPM: Okay
- Offset: Okay
- AiMod: No Problem
- Tags: Okay
- BG: Okay
- Kiai: Okay

Column
| 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 |


“Here come of some suggest for your map, I always check fullmap, if I’m too tried I will come back soon, or only check that keys by the request! And remember to reply the mod when you’re accepcted it or not! And forget my kud if my suggest is useful ~ Thanks for requested me ~

[BASIC Lv.5]

SPOILER
  1. 01:39:515 (99515|1) - sure is this should be start at 01:39:654 - end is the same as old
  2. 01:43:980 (103980|0) - move to 01:44:119 - , end is the same as old
  3. 01:48:445 (108445|2) - move to 01:48:584 - end is the same as old
  4. 01:52:910 (112910|1) - move to 01:53:050 - end is the same as old
  5. 01:54:305 (114305|1) - move to 3 Except this, all rejected.
    Nice

[NOVICE Lv.8]

SPOILER
  1. Not much to do here, perfect ~ but 01:39:515 (99515|3) - 01:43:980 (103980|1) - 01:48:445 (108445|1) - 01:52:910 (112910|2) - same as basic Rejected

[ADVANCED Lv.11]

SPOILER
  1. The last part doesnt have the problem like in basic and novice, example: 01:48:445 - to 01:48:584 - have another sound with 01:48:584 - to 01:49:282 - do not incorporate it into one Change it like Basic

[EXHAUST Lv.14]

SPOILER
  1. Here is my suggestion for the timing changes: 
    [TimingPoints]
    2678,279.06976744186,4,2,1,40,1,0
    20538,-100,4,2,1,40,0,1
    38398,-100,4,2,1,40,0,0
    76491,-50,4,2,1,23,0,0
    76561,-200,4,2,1,23,0,0
    76701,-50,4,2,1,23,0,0
    76771,-200,4,2,1,23,0,0
    76910,-50,4,2,1,23,0,0
    76980,-200,4,2,1,23,0,0
    77119,-50,4,2,1,23,0,0
    77189,-200,4,2,1,23,0,0
    77329,-50,4,2,1,23,0,0
    77398,-200,4,2,1,23,0,0
    77538,-50,4,2,1,23,0,0
    77608,-200,4,2,1,23,0,0
    77747,-50,4,2,1,23,0,0
    77817,-200,4,2,1,23,0,0
    77957,-100,4,2,1,23,0,0
    78584,-100,4,2,1,40,0,1
    96445,-100,4,2,1,40,0,0
    Applied SV
    More Challenging but still playable, tested and successed
    And the charts seems cool for ranked now

[Comment]

Hi, came again for the requested :) See you have bubbled before but popped but I think the SVs change was fine before but you can follow my suggestion
Anyway, good luck on rebubble and ranked it :3 I love the song with your charts
Thanks~ :3
Ayachi-
2,261 posts
Joined November 2013
Ayachi-
  1. Testplay
Advanced:
SPOILER
http://puu.sh/dGGUw/8c87218586.osr
Rumia-
2,531 posts
Joined July 2012
Rumia-
hehe irc a little with ichi on overall diff should be good now .
checked unsnapped files , replaced clap
log
2014-12-26 15:32 Rumia-: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/496243 An - LittleGameStar [BASIC Lv.5]]
2014-12-26 15:32 Rumia-: we go through easier diff 1st ww
2014-12-26 15:33 Ichigaki: okie
2014-12-26 15:33 Ichigaki: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/496243 An - LittleGameStar [BASIC Lv.5]]
2014-12-26 15:34 Rumia-: 00:24:584 (24584|0) -
2014-12-26 15:34 Rumia-: i think better follow the synth on white tich ( 1/2 earlier )
2014-12-26 15:34 Rumia-: cuz it might be confusing , cuz its quite catchy imo
2014-12-26 15:35 Ichigaki: not good
2014-12-26 15:35 Ichigaki: i should add note in 00:24:584 -
2014-12-26 15:35 Rumia-: eh
2014-12-26 15:35 Rumia-: why should
2014-12-26 15:35 Ichigaki: drum
2014-12-26 15:36 Rumia-: http://puu.sh/dJPd6.jpg
2014-12-26 15:36 Rumia-: i mean like this would be nice imo
2014-12-26 15:36 Rumia-: the first one is for synth , 2nd one to replace drum stream
2014-12-26 15:37 Rumia-: btw the clap u are using arent so fit with the song ;-;
2014-12-26 15:37 Ichigaki: ;-;
2014-12-26 15:37 Ichigaki: anyway that pattern nice, i'll apply it to another part
2014-12-26 15:38 Ichigaki: any suggest for new clap?
2014-12-26 15:38 Rumia-: wait im browsing my drum library
2014-12-26 15:38 Rumia-: xD
2014-12-26 15:39 Ichigaki: xD
2014-12-26 15:40 Rumia-: http://puu.sh/dJPod.jpg
2014-12-26 15:40 Rumia-: too much keysound folder ;-;
2014-12-26 15:41 Ichigaki: ;;
2014-12-26 15:42 Ichigaki: brb, lunch >w<)v
2014-12-26 15:42 Rumia-: ;;
2014-12-26 15:42 Rumia-: dun leave me
2014-12-26 15:43 Ichigaki: okay back
2014-12-26 15:43 Ichigaki: ww
2014-12-26 15:43 Rumia-: http://puu.sh/dJPuk.wav
2014-12-26 15:43 Rumia-: i guess this woud work
2014-12-26 15:44 Ichigaki: lol LR
2014-12-26 15:44 Rumia-: 00:37:561 (37561|0) - i guess this better follow main instrument since u were following previously and next
2014-12-26 15:44 Ichigaki: how can he remember all of it
2014-12-26 15:44 Rumia-: i mean at 00:37:701 -
2014-12-26 15:44 Ichigaki: add LN?
2014-12-26 15:44 Rumia-: lol
2014-12-26 15:45 Rumia-: just do as 00:37:143 (37143|1,37422|2) - would be fine
2014-12-26 15:45 Rumia-: maybe repattern this one 00:36:724 (36724|0,36864|2,37003|3) -
2014-12-26 15:45 Rumia-: http://puu.sh/dJPAL.jpg
2014-12-26 15:45 Rumia-: something like this can work too :D
2014-12-26 15:47 Ichigaki: 00:37:561 - so ignore drum here?
2014-12-26 15:47 Rumia-: ya
2014-12-26 15:48 Rumia-: wouldnt it look better
2014-12-26 15:48 Rumia-: also organised with following instrument :D
2014-12-26 15:49 Rumia-: 00:55:282 (55282|1,55422|3,55840|0) - as for this note , i think its better to emphasize the game tone sound
2014-12-26 15:49 Rumia-: since drum is a bit yknow , boring
2014-12-26 15:49 Ichigaki: the last is applied
2014-12-26 15:51 Ichigaki: about emphasize, is it like http://puu.sh/dJPOi/9d7a91bd31.png ?
2014-12-26 15:52 Rumia-: yep
2014-12-26 15:53 Rumia-: oh shit brb change skin
2014-12-26 15:53 Rumia-: i forgot im using std skin xD
2014-12-26 15:53 Rumia-: its too hard to mod sound
2014-12-26 15:54 Ichigaki: okay
2014-12-26 15:55 Rumia-: 01:26:817 - add a note / LN ?
2014-12-26 15:57 Ichigaki: add LN
2014-12-26 15:57 Rumia-: kk
2014-12-26 15:57 Rumia-: o wait
2014-12-26 15:57 Rumia-: 01:21:375 (81375|3) - i think this note is better at 01:21:236 -
2014-12-26 15:58 Ichigaki: okay
2014-12-26 15:58 Rumia-: :D
2014-12-26 15:58 Rumia-: 01:32:957 (92957|3) - move to 1 or 2 would be better imo
2014-12-26 15:59 Ichigaki: okay
2014-12-26 15:59 Rumia-: 01:54:305 (114305|3) -
2014-12-26 15:59 Rumia-: why end at blue line lol
2014-12-26 16:00 Ichigaki: because it end on blue line
2014-12-26 16:00 Rumia-: ending of song better just end it at white line
2014-12-26 16:00 Rumia-: i mean u dont have to end it so strictly tho
2014-12-26 16:00 Ichigaki: okay
2014-12-26 16:01 Ichigaki: changed to white line
2014-12-26 16:01 Rumia-: ok good
2014-12-26 16:01 Rumia-: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/492866 An - LittleGameStar [NOVICE Lv.8]]
2014-12-26 16:01 Rumia-: go to this diff now
2014-12-26 16:02 Ichigaki: wait
2014-12-26 16:02 Ichigaki: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/492866 An - LittleGameStar [NOVICE Lv.8]]
2014-12-26 16:02 Rumia-: 00:00:584 (584|0) -
2014-12-26 16:02 Rumia-: lower this volume plz
2014-12-26 16:02 Rumia-: sound so weird
2014-12-26 16:02 Rumia-: cuz its before redline , the note is on 100% volume
2014-12-26 16:03 Ichigaki: changed to 20?
2014-12-26 16:03 Rumia-: 8
2014-12-26 16:03 Rumia-: lol
2014-12-26 16:03 Ichigaki: is it okay?
2014-12-26 16:03 Rumia-: alt+click the note
2014-12-26 16:03 Rumia-: its ok
2014-12-26 16:03 Ichigaki: okay then
2014-12-26 16:04 Rumia-: 00:27:375 - add a note would be better
2014-12-26 16:05 Ichigaki: on 2?
2014-12-26 16:05 Rumia-: would be nice
2014-12-26 16:05 Ichigaki: umm, okay, added to 1
2014-12-26 16:05 Rumia-: ya 1 is nice
2014-12-26 16:06 Ichigaki: 00:36:305 - i also add here
2014-12-26 16:06 Rumia-: ninja'd
2014-12-26 16:06 Ichigaki: >,>
2014-12-26 16:07 Rumia-: 00:52:352 - y ignore the bass drum >,>
2014-12-26 16:07 Rumia-: i mean , 00:53:468 - i add the note here
2014-12-26 16:07 Ichigaki: eh sebentar, lagi adzan >.>
2014-12-26 16:07 Rumia-: k
2014-12-26 16:11 Ichigaki: okay
2014-12-26 16:11 Ichigaki: 00:52:352 - add here right?
2014-12-26 16:12 Rumia-: ya
2014-12-26 16:12 Ichigaki: done
2014-12-26 16:12 Rumia-: 00:55:701 - here too
2014-12-26 16:12 Rumia-: lol spec at #indo
2014-12-26 16:12 Rumia-: 01:01:282 - ahh here too
2014-12-26 16:13 Ichigaki: lol #indo
2014-12-26 16:14 Ichigaki: done
2014-12-26 16:14 Rumia-: 01:22:491 - this part is weird orz
2014-12-26 16:15 Rumia-: follow 1/1 sound instead ?
2014-12-26 16:18 Ichigaki: okay
2014-12-26 16:18 Ichigaki: same as basic, so 1/2?
2014-12-26 16:19 Rumia-: ya
2014-12-26 16:19 Ichigaki: done
2014-12-26 16:21 Rumia-: 01:35:747 - add a hold ?
2014-12-26 16:22 Rumia-: or maybe normal note is ok too
2014-12-26 16:22 Ichigaki: already added >,<
2014-12-26 16:22 Rumia-: 01:54:305 (114305|0) - and ending hold just fix all to the double line lol ><
2014-12-26 16:23 Ichigaki: double line?
2014-12-26 16:23 Rumia-: ya
2014-12-26 16:23 Rumia-: 01:56:538 -
2014-12-26 16:23 Ichigaki: oh >w<)v
2014-12-26 16:24 Rumia-: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/492852 An - LittleGameStar [ADVANCED Lv.11]]
2014-12-26 16:25 Ichigaki: done? >w<)b
2014-12-26 16:25 Ichigaki: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/492852 An - LittleGameStar [ADVANCED Lv.11]]
2014-12-26 16:26 Rumia-: 00:00:584 (584|1) -
2014-12-26 16:26 Rumia-: again ww 8% vol
2014-12-26 16:26 Ichigaki: ww
2014-12-26 16:26 Ichigaki: okay
2014-12-26 16:26 Rumia-: 00:02:678 - hmm i guess change this redline to 20% volume would be better
2014-12-26 16:26 Ichigaki: i ninja'd the exh too
2014-12-26 16:27 Rumia-: lv, 8 too
2014-12-26 16:27 Rumia-: xd
2014-12-26 16:27 Ichigaki: okay
2014-12-26 16:30 Rumia-: 00:32:119 - add
2014-12-26 16:31 Ichigaki: added
2014-12-26 16:31 Rumia-: 00:33:933 - i think u can map the 1/2 on this part for this diff
2014-12-26 16:31 Rumia-: feels kind of empty suddenly
2014-12-26 16:31 Ichigaki: okay
2014-12-26 16:32 Ichigaki: so same as the other?
2014-12-26 16:32 Ichigaki: i mean 00:24:724 -
2014-12-26 16:32 Rumia-: 01:23:189 add
2014-12-26 16:32 01:23:189 - *
2014-12-26 16:33 Ichigaki: added
2014-12-26 16:33 Rumia-: ok thats all for this diff
2014-12-26 16:34 Rumia-: did u change the LN on last note
2014-12-26 16:34 Rumia-: lol
2014-12-26 16:34 Rumia-: cuz u said u only ninja'd exh
2014-12-26 16:34 Ichigaki: nope
2014-12-26 16:34 Ichigaki: ahahaha
2014-12-26 16:34 Rumia-: ok change it :v
2014-12-26 16:34 Ichigaki: i just ninja'd the 8% volume
2014-12-26 16:34 Ichigaki: ACTION slapped
2014-12-26 16:35 Ichigaki: change volume of the red line to 20%
2014-12-26 16:35 Rumia-: ww
2014-12-26 16:36 Rumia-: 00:11:608 (11608|0) - why not move this to 2 and end the ln at the double line :v
2014-12-26 16:36 Ichigaki: just because the LN stopped on blue
2014-12-26 16:36 Ichigaki: so i kept it
2014-12-26 16:39 Rumia-: 00:38:817 (38817|1) - i guess this one is not necessary tbh..
2014-12-26 16:40 Rumia-: better to remove , more schematic
2014-12-26 16:40 Ichigaki: umm, the other diff use this
2014-12-26 16:40 Rumia-: its ok lol
2014-12-26 16:40 Ichigaki: lol
2014-12-26 16:40 Rumia-: u dont have to follow the exact same instrument for every diff
2014-12-26 16:40 Rumia-: =a=
2014-12-26 16:40 Ichigaki: =3=
2014-12-26 16:43 Rumia-: 01:38:398 - add a note for bassdrum
2014-12-26 16:43 Ichigaki: 01:47:329 - added here too
2014-12-26 16:44 Rumia-: ok update
2014-12-26 16:44 Ichigaki: lol
2014-12-26 16:50 Rumia-: udah update ?
2014-12-26 16:50 Ichigaki: distributing
2014-12-26 16:51 Rumia-: lol
2014-12-26 16:51 Ichigaki: done
2014-12-26 16:51 Ichigaki: untung ga ada unsnapped
2014-12-26 16:51 Ichigaki: >,<)
2014-12-26 16:56 Rumia-: >.<
Len
Beatmap Nominator
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Len
congratz!
PatZar
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PatZar

Fast wrote:

congratz!
Ichigaki
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Ichigaki

Genocide wrote:

Fast wrote:

congratz!
Thanks, Genocide and Fast~
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