Ok... ha sido MUCHO tiempo desde que modeo. No se que cosas habrán cambiado por acá, pero bueno. Si quieres rankear tu mapa, tarde o temprano tendrás que pedirle ayuda a modders que hablan inglés, no se como será tu manejo en este idioma pero haré el mod en inglés para que te acostumbres, cualquier cosa puedes preguntar
[General]
- Some Combos, specially on Relaxing, are way too long. I'll suggest lots of new ones, I'll point at them on Relaxing but IMO they should be appiled to all difficulties.
- Hitsound is odd at the chorus. It might be just be so I'm not going to suggest anything on this part.
[Relaxing]
It's pretty good, some shapes are just weird to me. Note placement could be a little better.OD -1. There's just about a 0.1 stars difference between Relaxing and Average! D:
00:10:709 This one should be a little down closer to the previous slider's end, and the next one a little up so you make a more smooth transition to the next circles.
SPOILER[iimg]http://puu.sh/pX7eq/fb720a7ea4.jpg[/img]
00:11:161 NC
00:24:542 NC
00:31:449 I get you're being consistent with the previous shape, but sliders like these are pretty confusing for lower difficulties. I would just use a plain curved one but you can disregard this, it's just a personal opinion.
00:34:039 NC
00:38:031 Two timing points at the same time. Remove one.
00:41:377 Combos are inconsistent between difficulties since a new one starts with the Kiai at 00:41:808 in both Average and Shine. I strongly suggest splitting that slider into two circles, then putting the NC at 00:41:808 so it matches your other difficulties.
00:38:765 Two timing points at the same time. Remove one.
00:38:981 Three timing points at the same time. Remove two.
00:50:873 This one is kinda problematic. A NC should go here, as you're starting a new combo on Average, but you're not doing it on Shine... Ugh, probably ignore this one as it would involve doing something completly different with all the sliders.
01:05:118 NC
01:09:886 IMO you're doing a pretty sharp turn from the slider to the next circle for new players. Next circle should be closer to the slider's direction.
01:13:319 NC
01:23:247 NC Also what is this shape? D: I reaaaally don't understand it.
01:24:924 Remove NC
01:30:154 NC
01:36:736 You're only using this kind of hitsounding on Relaxing and Shine. Average has a slider. Difficulties should be somewhat consistent with this.
01:43:103 NC
01:44:398 Remove NC
01:51:305 NC
01:52:168 Remove NC
02:07:276 NC
02:42:672 NC
02:43:967 Remove NC
02:50:010 NC
02:50:873 Remove NC
02:56:916 NC
03:03:391 NC
03:09:434 NC
...really good! Most of the stuff I suggested are because of the long combos. I would have suggested more stuff about note placement but I didn't want to ruin those well done patterns.
[Average]
- I didn't feel anything different in difficulty from Relaxing to this one. That's not really good, there's no point on having two difficulties that play basically the same.
- Since this is the middle difficulty, you could add more circles on 1/2 beat so the song becomes more interesting and a bit different in rhythm to Relaxing. I'll suggest a few.
- Same thing about long combos. Refer to Relaxing for some suggestions.
AR +2
OD +1
00:12:240 Add a circle? (If you do, make sure you add others somewhere else in the song so is consistent in rhythm)
00:21:521 NC here. You did this on Relaxing I think.
00:25:190 Add a circle? (If you do, make sure you add others somewhere else in the song so is consistent in rhythm)
00:33:607 This spinner is way too short IMO, and you're not using it on either Relaxing or Shine. I suggest to replace it with a slider or some circles.
00:41:161 Add a circle? (If you do, make sure you add others somewhere else in the song so is consistent in rhythm)
01:36:305 Same thing with the spinner at 00:33:607. Too short, not consistent with other difficulties. I suggest making this one a slider with similar hitsounding like the one at Relaxing.
I just feel like I'm playing Relaxing again with some stacked notes and some repeating sliders. You should do something to make this one feel... different.
[Shine]
- Hi Gero!... Forgive me ;_;
- As I suspected, the change between Relaxing and Average was almost nothing, but it's brutal when moving from Average to Shine. So yeah, Average must be reworked a bit so it feels like a middle point between Relaxing and Shine.
- Really fun to play. Some sliders are just a bit unexpected.
- Combos are mostly okay here.
AR -1 So its atleast not that big of a jump after Average!
00:17:852 I really like the symmetry of this part! Very well done!
00:22:816 This circle should be a bit down so it's on the direction of the end of the previous slider.
00:27:780 Remove this circle, it doesn't go along with the vocals.
00:47:636 I don't really like this one since you can't really read how long it's going to be. I suggest to make it the same ammount of beats long than the next one, and using circles or other stuff to fill the other beats.
00:52:168 These jumps are really good.
00:54:542 Same than the other one. It goes along with the rhythm but it's not easy to read.
01:50:010 The approach to this stream is kinda messy. Maybe re-shape the slider at 01:48:715 so you can approach the stream from above instead of below.
02:45:260 Unsnapped
02:46:260 Unsnapped
Rest seems pretty good. It's just that issue with the two consecutive sliders that bothers me, then again, it could be just me so feel free to disregard it if you think that way.
Good map keep up the good work!
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Rayos. No pensé que escribiría tanto.
Relaxing By -Ziam- Done!
Shine By -Ziam- & Gero Done! 
