1. DJPop's Insane (5 stars, 409 notes)
2. Easy (2,22 stars, 97 notes)
3. Nerv's Hard (4,94 stars, 229 notes)
4. Normal (3,26 stars, 119 notes)
5. Shy tieff (4,97 stars, 298 notes)

DJPop wrote:

BPM: 190
Offset: 300

Do it.

Fixed~

bmin11 wrote:

*Cough Cough* Ok.... I recently figured out that there are too much BGs with their ass up

[Hard]
I suggest using grid level 3
00:27:300 (7) - spacing
00:30:615 (1) - spacing
00:52:721 (3) - spacing
01:12:931 (2,3) - spacing
01:17:036 (1) - spacing

[Normal]
00:51:457 (4) - spacing
00:53:352 (2) - ^
00:55:247 (2) - ^
Now I'm really confused which spacing I have to based on @_@. Just go through with your distance snaping from here. Sorry
01:15:773 (3) - I can see this clearly though. Spacing

[Easy]
00:34:615 (3) - Check this note again plz. It looks unsnapped to me
00:35:668 (1) - Unsnapped
00:49:563 (1) - I don't really suggest speed ups for [Easy]
00:54:615 (1) - spacing

Hitsound seems ok to me, but you should equalize your spacing (of course you can leave your jumps)

All Fixed

1. 00:30:630 (1,2) - Spacing, (2) is too far away from (1).
2. 00:49:262 (4,1) - Spacing, no BIG jumps in normal difficulty's please.
3. 00:50:841 (3,4) - Spacing, (4) is too close to (3).
4. 01:00:315 (2,3) - Spacing, (3) is too far away from (2).
5. 01:04:736 (1,1) - Spacing, (1) is too close to (1).
6. 01:05:367 (1) - Remove new combo.
7. 01:08:367 (1) - Increase spinner length by 1/1

Dusty wrote:

Curved sliders are good. Different shapes are good.

[Easy]
Don't box map. Use more curves and triangles and symmetries and stuff.

I don't think the notes on the 1/4 beat are good for an Easy.

[Normal]
See Easy, although I do see some triangles, maybe use more of those.
Also, this feels about as hard as Easy...

[Hard]
argh, same complaints as Easy and Normal, sometimes the spacing is weird, I don't like it.

Fixed

Shulin wrote:

General:

-- Offset: 320
-- You seem to be randomly placing hitsounds try to make a consistent pattern.
-- Where did the Hard go?
-- View > Grid Level > 2 or 3 ~ this will let you place beats better.
-- Soft hitsounds sound better on this song.
-- Kill the claps.

Normal:

-- Your silder velocity might be too high for a normal.
-- Hm, maybe try to follow either the beat or the vocals, you keep on moving between the two too rapidly making the rhythm hard to catch.
-- A lot of your spacing problems come from a low grid level use grid level 2 or 3.

00:26:036 (2,3,4,5,6) - Spacing.
00:50:826 (3,4) - Spacing.
00:55:878 (3) - ^
01:04:721 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:16:405 (4) - Spacing.

Easy:

The same problems as normal really... A useful guide might be AI Mod activate by Ctrl + Shift + A

Not much else I can suggest at present, make sure to use a bigger grid snap it will help

Fixed

VanMoNky wrote:

As your request. Sorry for the delay.

Read this first for the icon explanation.
- [?] Asking for the second thought.
- [!] Fatal error. You have to fix this for sure.
- [No icon] Only a suggestion.

[General]
1. Set the preview position properly. Don't set it to almost-end section.
2. Always use distance snapping!
3. The placements of some notes are really bad.

[Easy]
Set the kiai time section such as the [Normal] diff.
00:02:878 (3) - Should be on 00:02:826.
00:05:405 (6) - Should be on 00:05:352.
00:07:931 (8) - Should be on 00:07:878.
00:08:299 (1) - The spinner is too short. It's hard for an easy diff. Should be on 00:08:194.
00:26:089 (2) - Should be on 00:26:194.
00:26:721 (3) - Should be on 00:26:826.
00:27:300 (4) - Should be on 00:27:457.
00:29:721 (2) - Should be on 00:29:668.
00:30:352 (3) - Should be on 00:30:300.
00:31:089 (1) - Should be on 00:30:931.
00:31:773 (2) - Should be on 00:31:563.
00:32:405 (3) - Should be on 00:32:194.
00:32:826 - Add note here.
00:34:615 (3) - Should be on 00:34:721.
00:35:615 (1) - Should be on 00:35:668. Add finish.
00:36:826 (3) - Should be on 00:36:931.
00:37:247 (4) - Should be on 00:37:563.
00:38:878 (2) - Should be on 00:38:826.
00:43:089 (1) - Should end on 00:44:510.
00:50:563 (2) - Should be on 00:50:510.
00:51:194 (3) - Should be on 00:51:142.
00:51:826 (4) - Should be on 00:51:773.
00:52:142 (1) - Should be on 00:52:089.
00:52:773 (2) - Should be on 00:52:721.
00:53:405 (3) - Should be on 00:53:352.
00:54:036 (4) - Should be on 00:53:984.
00:56:247 (3) - Should be on 00:56:194.
00:58:773 (3) - Should be on 00:58:721.
01:09:826 (1) - Should be on 01:09:773.
01:11:036 - Add note here.
01:17:247 (1) - Should be on 01:17:352. Should end on 01:18:615.

[Normal]
00:02:878 (1) - Should be on 00:02:826.
00:25:615 (1) - Should be on 00:25:563.
00:27:352 (6) - Should be on 00:27:300.
00:29:405 (3) - Should be on 00:29:352.
00:31:773 (3) - Should be on 00:31:721.
00:32:405 (4) - Should be on 00:32:352.
00:33:036 (1) - Should be on 00:33:142. Should end on 00:35:036.
01:08:352 (1) - Should end on 01:09:773.
01:23:194 (1) - Should be on 01:23:036. Should end on 01:24:773.

Star.

Fixed, thank you very much, thanks 4 star ;D

Gladi wrote:

[General]

That background is almost porn, please change it >_<
Offset 315.
Don't put in same source as artist name, please fix.

[Normal]

1. 00:30:630 (1,2) - Spacing, (2) is too far away from (1).
2. 00:49:262 (4,1) - Spacing, no BIG jumps in normal difficulty's please.
3. 00:50:841 (3,4) - Spacing, (4) is too close to (3).
4. 01:00:315 (2,3) - Spacing, (3) is too far away from (2).
5. 01:04:736 (1,1) - Spacing, (1) is too close to (1).
6. 01:05:367 (1) - Remove new combo.
7. 01:08:367 (1) - Increase spinner length by 1/1

[Easy]

Decrease drain rate and overall difficulty by 2.
Normal and Easy have same slider velocity of 1.40, you should change this by making it in easy slower. (Say 1.00 ?)
A lot of notes are not snapped, but when you put in the right offset you should resnap all notes. Then run through the song if all notes are correctly snapped.

Fixed

tieff wrote:

Shy tieff~

Wow, thanks

DJPop wrote:

AudioLeadIn: 2685
PreviewTime: 315
Countdown: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0

Fixed!


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Thanks

Teara wrote:

[General]

Not bad, all diffs are decent, but two really easy diffs, then two really insanes, no balance, this song requires a proper hard IMO.

[Easy]

00:05:367 (6) - Place on white tick
00:07:893 (8) - Place on white tick
00:26:170 (2) - Place on white tick
00:26:801 (3) - Place on white tick
00:29:683 (2) - Place on white tick
00:30:275 (3) - Place on white tick
00:30:907 (1,2,3) - Place on white tick
00:34:736 (3) - Place on white tick
00:35:683 (1) - ^
00:36:946 (3,4) - ^
00:50:486 (2,3,4) - ^
00:52:696 (2,3,4) - ^
00:56:170 (3) - ^
01:09:788 (2) - ^
01:17:367 (1) - Start/end white tick?

Please run AIMod and make sure all notes are distanced snapped properly =p Easy diffs should always be snapped perfectly IMO
All fixed

[Normal]

Normal's Offset is different from the rest?

00:32:352 (4) - Red tick? ( 1/4 beat selector )
Fixed

[Shy Tieff]

Hmm To many unexpected jumps, easy/hard/easy/hard =p this diff isnt constant :<

[DJPop's insane]

Rename to DJPop's Streams
No