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General]
Title:
DARAKENA (TV Size) DARAKENA (TV-size) (or only DARAKENA)
Sources:
http://vgmdb.net/album/45012 |
http://vgmdb.net/album/44447[
Nardo's Oni]
00:19:222 (31,32,33,34) - I think a k d d D pattern would make a nice play along with the other d d d K patterns, as they'd be very similar
00:26:680 (64) - You're basing this part mostly on vocals so removing this one would help to emphasize them better :p
00:37:527 (120) - ^
00:48:713 (178) - I'd suggest it to make this a kat to make it consistent with the other patterns like this.
01:00:239 - It'd make more sense to begin the spinner here so the player begins to play it along with vocals.
01:11:764 (69,70) - Maybe remove (70) and make (69) a don, I think this would follow vocals better (which I think you're basing on)
01:15:747 (96) - You could remove this to let 01:15:662 (95) emphasize vocals better.
01:17:103 (108) - ^Something similar
01:27:696 (181,182,183,184,185,186,187,188,189,190,191,192,193) - You could try
kdddkdddkkkkd here, I think it follows better the drums here.
[
Oni]
dem kiai fla..*shot*
The sudden speed ups in 01:03:628 and 01:14:136 feels very awkward, it'd be better to remove them imo.
00:00:917 - I'd suggest to increase a bit the volume here
00:10:408 - The whooshy sound begins here so it's better to begin this spinner here.
00:13:289 (5,6,7) - This may be just personal taste but I feel a simple d k would help the previous ddk to feel more emphasized, which would fit better as the song is stronger in the first ddk than in the second.
00:14:645 (13,14,15) - ^
00:17:865 - 00:21:933 - This part is somehow ignoring the song, we have this strong beats for the guitar and drums but we don't have anything in the map that reflects that intensity x.x I'd suggest something like this, where the highlighted notes are big notes. You could make some changes depending of your style.
00:23:035 - Add a note here, a ddddd would emphasize better this part imo.
00:39:560 (149) - Making this a don would help to keep your patterns consistent and I also think this way the drums would be followed better
01:00:239 - It'd make more sense to begin the spinner here so the player begins to play it along with vocals.
01:09:560 (49) - You could remove this note to make a tiny break here, as this pattern is a bit long.
01:11:933 (63,64,65,66) - I'd keep using a kkd k here as in the previous pattern.
01:14:475 (2) - This would compliment better the song being a K, so you have K to emphasize the vocals and d for the drums. If you do, make 01:14:644 (3) a small note.
01:15:831 (5,6,7,8) - This pattern breaks how you use kats on the red ticks, which is a bit bad as the player would be already used with that, I'd suggest something like this.
01:17:187 (16,17,18,19,20) - dk dk k -> d kd dk for the same reason as above.
01:18:543 (26,27,28,29) - As in 01:15:831 (5,6,7,8) -
01:27:611 (91) - This note feels a bit weird to begin the stream, maybe remove it?
01:27:695 (92,93,94,95,96,97,98,99,100,101,102) - I'd suggest you to try a
kdddkdddkkk for this stream, it'd fit better the drums imo.
[
Muzukashii]
Yes, there are some flaws in the Muzu, but I guess this can be easily fixed
The speed ups really feel awkward while playing, better keeping the same speed here.
00:10:239 (1) - Same as Oni.
00:12:442 (1,2,3,4,5) - This is the pattern that represents the music better here, you should base on this one for the rest of this section. Possibliy adding a don in 00:13:628 would play nicer (the result would be a d k kdkdd).
00:17:526 (23,24,25,26) - Here you could use kkk d, so the new don will be consistent with later patterns here.
00:18:713 - I'd suggest to add a note here to make a nice syncopation, which would be interesting to play. Also add a note in 00:20:069.
00:20:238 (34) - Shouldn't this be a kat?
00:49:390 - A note (preferably a don) would fit nicely here with the 3/4 signature, same in 00:50:407.
01:00:238 - As in Oni.
For the kiai, it would need a few more 1/4 triples, as Oni is heavy in 1/4 patterns, this is an idea I have and that would play nicely without altering the map too much, this is for 01:04:306 - 01:07:017, this song benefits better with kkk triples than with ddd as you have later due how the drums sounds (I'm really bad explaining technical stuff here so I'll just say that), so you may try some kkk in similar spots there too.
01:12:611 (56,59) - Here you could use kat instead, they'd fit better with vocals.
01:16:848 - 01:19:221 - This is certainly a long pattern for this Muzu, but I guess you could cut it nicely with the ideas I gave you above.
Will continue with Futsuu and Kantan later (or tomorrow) = =